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Thriller Kahani

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Raj142

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Jabrdust update bhai
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Guffy

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Waiting bhai next maza aa gaya padh kar bass ek shikayat hai thoda sa action scean vistar mein do bhai
 
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Prince surya

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Shaandaar jandaar story he bhai... Lekin agar aap action scenes Ko thoda mirchi masala dete to aur achha hota...
 

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Update 10


Doctor hairan pareshan kabhi shiva ko toh kabhi ECG machine ko dekhta kuch der baad jab doctor bahar toh uske chahre pe hairani barkarar the use dekh kar sabhi log ghabra jate hai commissioner krishmurti usse puchte hai.

Commissioner krishmurti – kya hua doctor kya shiva theek hai .

Doctor kuch nahi bolta shayad abhi bhi wo apni hairani se bahar nahi aa paye the commissioner krishmurti use hila dete hai toh wo chaunk jata hai .

Doctor – han.. .. .h an apne kuch kaha .

Commissioner krishmurti – kya hua shiva theek toh hai na.

Doctor – yes he is perfectly alright.

Doctor ne kuch is tarah ae kaha ki jaise wo kisi ki maut ki khabar suna raha ho .

Deva – toh aap itne pareshan kyu hai .

Doctor – I m in shock apne 15 saal ki practice me maine aisa insan kabhi nahi dekha .

Surya – matlb .

Doctor – matlab ye ki abhi kuch der pahle uski heart itni down thi ki aisa lag raha tha ki wo bas marne hi wala ho aur toh aur uski pulse bhi bilkul dheemi thi maine life saving drug bhi diya magar kuch nahi hua phir achanak sab kuch normal ho gaya aur itna hi nahi usne apni ankhe tak khol di I’m totally shocked .

Shiva ki salamati ki khabar sunke sabhi log chain ki sans lete hai nidhi daudte hue nisha ke paas jati hai aur use batati hai ki shiva theek hai wahi tammana bhi aslam ke paas jake shiva ki salamati ki khabar deti hai dono aslam aur nisha bhagte hue icu ke bahar pahuchte hai aslam are hi commissioner krishmurti se puchta hai .

Aslam – kaisa hai shiva .

Commissioner krishmurti – theek hai .

Nisha – kya hum mil sakte hai usse .

Deva – nahi abhi behosh hai .

Wahi dusri taraf rahman kisi se phone pe baat kar raha tha.

Rahman – kya shiva bach gya aur 20 ke 20 mare gye .

Dusri taraf se kuch kaha gya.

Rahman – theek hai mai abhi shera ko phone karke hospital bhejne ko kahta hu .

Dusri taraf se phir kuch kaha gya.

Rahman – han sahi kaha hume commissioner ko waha se nikalne ka intzam karna hoga .

Kah kar wo phone kat deta hai aur phir kisi ko phone milata hai .

Rahman – shera ek kam hai waqt aur jagah mai tumhe baad me bata dunga tum taiyar rahna .

Kah kar wo phone kat deta hai rahaman ke chahre pe pareshani saaf dikh rahi thi aur hulka hulka dar bhi tha .

Wahi hospital me shiva ko theek hue 6 ghante ho gye the is waqt wo hosh me tha doctor uska chek up karke bahar nikalte hai toh commissioner krishmurti unse kahte hai .

Commissioner krishmurti – kya ab shiva se mil sakte hai .

Doctor – han bilkul .

Doctor ki baat sunke surya kahta .

Surya – chalo sab log .

Doctor – tum patient se milne ja rahe ya jung karne ek bar me sirf ek hi aur yaad rahe use kii mentally daw mat dena .

Kah kar doctor waha se chala jata hai uske jate hi commissioner krishmurti icu me dakhil hote hai Shiva is waqt ankhen band kiye hue leta hua tha commissioner krishmurti kuch sochne je baad kahte hai .

Commissioner krishmurti – kaise ho shiva .

Is jani pahchani awaz ko sun ke shiva apni ankhe khol deta hai .

Shiva – aap ne mujhe dhonda kaise .

Shiva ne apane chit parichit rookhe aur sakht laheje me kaha uski is baat commissioner krishmurti muskura deta hai aur ek akhbar uske samne rakh dete hai .

Commissioner krishmurti – jaise kali ne tumhe dhoonda .

Shiva wo akhbar deta hai toh usme Adamkhor bhediye ki maut ki khabar thi shiva us akhbar ko ek khelte hue kahta .

Shiva – bloody media .
Commissioner krishmurti – dekho shiva shahar me ….

Shiva – shahar ke crime fir se bhad gya hai aur police use rokne me naqamyab hai .

Shiva commissioner krishmurti ki baat ko katte hue kaha .

Commissioner krishmurti – han mai chahta hu…..

Shiva – aap chahte hai ki mai use roku phir se .

Commissioner krishmurti – han .

Shiva – mera jawab hai na Mai phir se wo sab nahi dohra sakta phir se wahi sab hoga meri wajah se phir kisi masoom ki jan jaye mujhe ye manjoor nahi har bar ki tarh is nar bhi mujhe hi phir se sab kuch khona padega bahut mushkilon se sameta hai khud kohai khud ko ab aur nahi apke proposal ke jawab me mera jawab hai na aur ab aao ja sakte hai .

Commissioner krishmurti se kuch kahte nahi banta wo chup chap icu se bahar nikal jate hai unke bahar aate hi deva aur uske sathi unhe gher lete hai aur aslam puchta hai .

Aslam – kya kaha usne .

Commissioner krishmurti – unse wapas ane se mana jar diya .

Charu unki baat sunte hi icu ke ghus jati hai commissioner krishmurti ne use rokne ki koshish bhi magar deva ne use rok diya sur kaha .

Deva – aaj sirf charu hi hai jo shiva ko wapas la sakti hai .

Charu icu me dakhil hoti hai shiva abhi bhi apni ankhe band kiye hue leta hua tha charu ke aate hi wo kahta hai .

Shiva – ab tu kya lene aai hai .

Shiva ne apane chit parichit rookhe aur sakht laheje me kaha uska laheje jara bhi narm nahi tha .

Charu – tujhe .

Charu ne bhi usi tarah se jawab diya ek wahi thi jo shiva se is tarah se baat kar sakti thi shayad pata nahi kyu shiva ka uske koi bas nahi chalta tha wo uski koi baat nahi rakta tha ek anjana sa rishta tha dono ke beech .

Shiva – bhool ja .

Charu – shave kabse nahi ki .

Usne kaha jaise usne shiva ki suni hi nahi ho .

Shiva – yaad nahi .

Charu – dekh shiva tujhe wapas ana padega hume teri jarurat hai .

Shiva – dekh charu …..

Charu – tu dekh shiva tu apne farz se muh nahi mod sakta jo jung tune shuru ki thi wo tujhe khatm karni hi hogi shiva mai ye nahi kahti ki jo kuch bhi hua wo sahi hua magar jo bhi hua usme tera koi kasoor nahi tha aur agar tujhe uski saja mili bhi hai toh wo saja hum sab ko mili hai ek tu hi nahi hai jisne kuch khoya hai hum sabhi ne khoya magar iska matlb ye toh nahi ki galt ke khilaf awaz uthana chhod de dekh shiva mai tujhse akhiri baar bol rahi hu agar tu wapas nahi aya toh mai kabhi muskuraungi nahi .

Kah kar charu waha se chali jati hai wo bahar aati hai toh uski ankhe nam thi deva usse puchhta hai .

Deva – kya hua .

Charu – wo wapas ayega maine uski ankhon me dekha hai .

Wahi charu ke jane ke baad shiva kisi gahri soch me doob jata hai yadon ki kai bejan tasveere uske ankhon ke samne zinda ho chali thi ek toofan ek yudh sa chal raha tha uske dimag me usko kuch samjh ke nahi aa raha tha ki ab kya kiya jaye sochte sochte wo apni ankhe band kar leta hai .


Kya hoga aage kya shiva phir se us duniya hissa banega jiska wo ansh tha kya shera shiva ko marne me kamyab ho payega kya nisha ka pyar shiva ko kabool hoga janne ke liye saath bane rahiye
 

Guffy

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Jabar jast ab hogi wapsi shiva ki dekho charu ne lolipop diya usko emotional blackmail kar ke
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