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Thriller Kahani

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Raj142

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Superb update bhai

Bhai chotu ka roll khtm Mt kro
XP pe aapne use direct gayb he kr diya tha
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Shivay chauhan

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Update 11

Sham ke 6 baj rahe the sabhi log is waqt hospital me hi thi shiva ko neend ka ek high doz injection diya gya tha taki wo so sake chhote ko commissioner krishmurti ne police guesthouse bhijwa diya apne kuch adamiyon ke saath commissioner krishmurti kisi se phone pe baat kar rahe the kuch der baat karne ke baad wo deva ke paas aate hai aur usse kahte .

Commissioner krishmurti – deva mujhe ek urgent meeting ke liye out of station jana pad raha hai toh tum log yaha khyal rakhna kyu ki mujhe shak hai ki underworld me ye khabar phail chuki hai ki shiva yaha hai wo log kuch bhi kar sakte hai .

Deva – aap fikr mat kijiye hum sab sambhal lenge .

Phir wo nisha aur bakiyon ke paas jate hai .

Commissioner krishmurti – tum log bhi ab ghar jao tumhre parents chinta kar honge .

Commissioner krishmurti ne adeshatmak laheje me kaha aur waha se chale gye .

Nidhi ne nisha ko ishara kiya chalne ke liye magar nisha ka jane ka man bilkul bhi nahi wo ek bar shiva se milna chahti thi wo icu ki taraf bhadti hai toh deva usse kahta hai .

Deva – abhi wo so raha hoga abhi usse koi bhi baat karna theek nahi kal subah aa jana .

Nisha bechari kuch kah na saki aur apne armano ko dil me sahej ke wapas chali gai .

Wahi rahman is waqt apne cabin me baitha hua tha uske kali ke jaisa hi balishth shareer ka wyakti baitha bas fark sirf ye tha ki uska rang kuch sawla tha uski shakl bhi kali se kafi milti jhulti thi ye aur koi nahi balki shera tha jo ki kali ka bada bhai tha aur usse jyada khatarnak shooter tha .

Rahman – shera maine ye kam kali ko saunpa tha magar wo kar na saka aur mara gya magar ab tumhe mere liye ye kam karna hoga keemat jo tum chaho.

Shera – rahman tum jante ho ki shiva ke samne jana aur apni maut ko dawat dena dono ek hi baat hai mai use kafi pahle se janta hu aur agar mai kali ki jagah hota toh ye kaam kabhi hath me nahi leta kisi bhi keemat pe magar ab baat personal ho gai hai agar maine kali ki maut ka badla nahi liya toh underworld me meri izzat mitti me mil jayegi .

Rahman – toh tum ye kaam karoge .

Shera – han bilkul .

Rahman use hospital ka address aur paison se bhara ek bag deta hai shera use leke waha se chala jata hai .

Raat ke 2.30 baj rahe deva aur baki sabhi log abhi bhi jaag rage the tabhi deva ke phone pe kisi ka call ata hai deva call receive karta hai.

Deva – hello han bolo kya kitni der me ok theek hai .

Deva phone kat deta hai wo kuch pareshan lag raha tha use dekh kar aslam bolta hai .

Aslam – kya hua kya baat itna pareshan kyu hai.

Deva – shera yaha aa raha hai apne 20 25 adamiyon ke saath shiva ko marne ke liye .

Aslam – tujhe kaise pata .

Deva – mere ek informer ka phone call aya tha abhi .

Surya – kitni der me aa jayega .

Deva – yahi koi 15 20 mon me .

Tamanna – tab toh waqt kam hai hai hum jald hi kuch karna hoga .

Charu – kyu ja commissioner sahab ko phone karke madad mangwa le.

Deva – nahi wo is waqt shahar me nahi hai aur tum bhool jati ho ki police bhi humara saath nahi deti hai aur waise bhi jab tak madad aayegi tab tak bahut der ho chuki hogi .

Aslam – toh ab hume hi kuch karna hoga .

Deva – surya tu jake gadi ke mese bag le aa.

Surya daud kar jata hai aur ek bag le ata hai aur use jameen le rakh deta hai deva wo bag kholta hai toh usme 2 ak 56 2 sniper 6 pistol aur ek assault rifle thi deva charu aur tamanna ko sniper dete hue kahta hai .

Deva – jo bhi hospital se 20 kadam ki doori pe ho use shoot kar dena .

Phir wo ak 56 aur 2 2 pistols aslam aur surya ko dete hue kahta hai .

Deva – surya tum right side cover karoge aur aslam tum left .

Aur assault rifle aur 2 pistol leke kahta hai .

Deva – mai main gate pe rahunga koi bhi hospital ke andar dakhil nahi hona chahiye .

Charu aur tamanna hospital ki chhat pe jake apni apni po position le leti hai deva aslam aur surya bhi apni apni position le lete hai hospital charon taraf se ek 8 feet ki deewar se ghira hua tha aur bahar ek lohe kafi majboot gate bhi tha us gate se hospital ke main gate ki doori karee 20 se 25 feet hogi sabhi logo ka main aim tha ki shera aur uske adamiyon ko hospital ka main gate cross na karne dena kuch der intjar karne ke us lohe ke gate ko todti hui ek black color ki xuv andar dakhil hoti uske peeche kareeb 8 gadiyan aur hoti hai gadiyan hospital se 15 feet ki doori pe rukti hai aur un gadiyon mese underworld ke sabse khatarnak history sheeter bahar nikalte hai aur saath hi bahar nikalta hai shera wo deva aslam aur surya ko dekh kar kahta .

Shera – bas teen hi log maine toh socha tha ki ek fauj se nipatana padega .

Shayad shera ka dhyan hospital ki chhat pe nahi gya tha .

Deva – tujh jaison ke liye hum teen hi kafi hai .

Shera – kyu apni maut ko dawat deta hai deva hat ja warna mara jayega .

Deva koi jawab nahi deta aur firing shuru kar deta hai achanak hue is humle se un logo kafi afratafri mach jati hai wo turant gadiyon ke peeche chhip jate hai is sab me shera ke kuch log mare bhi jate hai shera ye dekh kar baukhla jata hai aur counter firing karne lagta hai deva aslam aur surya bhi jawani firing kar the taydat me bhale hi sher aur uske admi jyada the magar phir bhi deva aslam surya unhe kadi takkar de rahe the idhar tammana aur charu bhi sniper se ek dum sateek nishana laga kaiyon ko mar chuki thi ab shera aur uske adamiyon ki sankhya sirf 10 hi rah gai thi Shera baji paltti dekh aur jyada gusse me aa jata hai wo chhat ki taraf dekhta toh use charu aur tamanna dikhai de jate hai wo apne ek admi se use cover dene ke liye kahta hai shera apni gadi me se ek sniper nikalta hai aur charu aur tamanna pe fire kar deta hai ddono is humle bhap na saki aur ghayal ho gai shera goli hi itni firti se chalai thi ki charu ka daya aur tamanna ka baya hath zakhmi ho jata hai shera aur uske adamiyon ke liye itna kafi tha wo log aage bharne lagte hai idhar deva aslam aur surya ki goliyan khatm ho jati hai aur yahi haal shera aur uske adamiyon ka bhi tha unki bhi goliyan khatm ho chuki thi wo hanthon me talware leke aage bhad rage the deva aslam aur surya teeno hospital ke gate ke samne khde hojate hai unka bas yahi uddeshya tha ki koi bhi kisi bhi halat me hospital ke andar na ghus paye shera aur uske admi gate se sirf 5 kadam ki doori pe hi ruk jate unke kadam mano jameen me hi phas gaye ho deva aslam aur surya jab peeche mud ke dekhte hai toh shiva khada hua tha uska chahra abhi bhi waisa hi sakht tha jaisa hamesha hua karta hai uski ankhon me khoon utar aya tha wo dheere dheere hospital ke gate ke samne ki Seedhiyan utarne lagta hai jaise jaise wo neeche utarta hai waise waise shera aur uske admi peeche hone lagte hai shiva abhi hospital ke hi kapde pahne hue tha wo deva aur apne sathiyon aur shera aur uske adamiyon ke beech ja ke khada ho jata hai wo shera ki taraf dekhta hai toh shera usse kahta .

Shera – accha hua jo tu bahar aa gya warna mujhe andar ana padta .

Shiva – tere bhai ne jo galti ki thi wahi tune bhi ki .

Shiva ki baat sunke shera apne admi ko ishara karta hai wo shiva ki taraf daudta hua aata hai uske haath me ek talwar thi shiva bilkul shant khada hua tha jaise hi wo admi shiva pe war karta hai waise hi shiva 2 inch neeche jhuke ke uske pet me ghoonsa de marta hai wo dard se dohra ho jata hai uske haath se talwar chhot jati hai shiva badi furti se wo talwar hath me leta hai aur uska jhuka hua sar dhad se alag kar deta hai rahaman aur uske admi ye dekh kar kanp uthte hai is baar do admi shiva ki taraf aate hai shiva abhi bilkul shant khada tha jaise kuch hua hi nahi jaise hi daye taraf ka admI uspe talwar se war karta hai waise hi shiva thoda peeche hat jata hai aur uska haath jisme talwar thi use kaat deta hai air badi hi furti se baye wala ka bhi sar dhad se alag kar deta hai se sab itna jaldi hua ki unhe kuch samjh me hi nahi aata phir shiva daye wale ka bhi sar dhad se alag kar deta hai ab shera ke saton admi uspe toot padte hai magar shiva bhi badi furti un sab ka bhi wahi haal karta hai jo usne bakiyon ka kiya tha ab sirsirf shera bacha shiva aur shera dono amne samne the khauf shera ke chahre pe saaf nazar aa raha tha magar phir bhi wo shiva pe war karta hai shiva usse bachne lagta hai jaise wo kOi khel khel raha ho shera ke saath shera gusse me aake shiva gardan pe war karne ki koshish karta hai magar shiva uska war apni talwar se rok leta hai air bijli ki tezi ke saath uska talwar wala haath kat deta dard bhari cheekh poore mahaul me goonj uthti hai phir shiva shera ka dusra haath bhi kat deta hai ek bar phir uski dard bhari cheekh poore mahaul me goonj uthti shera apne ghutno pe baith ke tadap raha tha shiva uske paas ata aur usse puchta hai .

Shiva – kisne bheja tha tujhe .

Shiva ne bade hi thande swar me kaha .

Shera – rahman ne.

Shera dard bhari awaz me kaha .

Shiva – usse kahna mai wapas aa gya hu.

Phir kuch door jake shiva wapas shera ke paass ata hai aur kahta .

Shiva – magar tu batayega kaise tu toh marne wala hai .

Kahte hi usne shera ki gardan dhad se alag kar di .

Phir shiva mud ke deva aur apne sathiyon ke paas jata hai uske saathi use gale laga lete hai phir wo charu ki taraf dekhta hai aur kahta hai .

Shiva – teri muskan toh bhawan bhi nahi chheen sakta toh mai kya cheez hu .


Kya hoga aage shiva ki wapsi se underworld me kaunsa toofan ayega ya shiva ek bar phir apna sabkuch kho dega kya nisha shiva se waqt rahte shiva se apne dil ki baat kah payegi kya shiva uska pyar kabool karega janne ke liye saath bane rahe.
 

Guffy

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Good going bhai fight scean acha dikhaya lekin shera ko thoda kamjor dikha diya kuch hath uske hote toh jayada acha hota overall update is awesome
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