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Thriller Kahani

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Ng_TheViper

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Aisa laga jaise Shiva apni maut ka intzarkar Raha ho but ek sawal uske Mann m b h ki aakhir sabko pata kaise Chala Shiva ki location k bare m ..

Aur location b shayad Nisha n gang k aane k baad hi pata chali hogi to maybe galti s in logo ki wajah s kch leak hogaya ho ...

Well kali to khathm but wo yahan police commissioner s pehle pahucha tha to ab police b aati hi hogi Shiva k liye...


Let's see .. ab shayad Shiva k past m bare m janne ko milega..
 

Raj142

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Superb update bhai

Bhai chotu ka roll khtm Mt kro
XP pe aapne use direct gayb he kr diya tha
Yha vaise Mt krna
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Casinar

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Kali andheri raat me charo taraf maut ka sannata goonj raha aisa lag raha tha jaise sara alam koi matam sa mana raha ho rah rah kar kutton ke bhaukne aur ulluon ke chillane ki awaz aa rahi thi sadak kisi vidhwa ki mang ki tarah sooni padi thi magar ek qile jaisi haweli me maut ka tandav ho raha tha ek 25 saal ka balishth naujawan ek haath ne pistol air dusre haath me khanjar liye aage bhada ja raha aur peeche chhod raha sirf lashe jo bhi uske samne aata wo uski jan le leta wo bhi badi berahmi se kisi ki himmat aur taqat uske kaam nahi aa rahi is samay aisa lag raha tha ye ki pauranik katha me varnit veerbhadra ka charitra sakhkshat dharti pe utar aya ho aur mahadev ke diye gye vinash ke adesh ko poora kar raha sar se lekar khoon se sana hua jaise khoon me nahaya ho shareer bilkul lohe ke saman tha aur ankho me surkhi use aur jyada bhayanak bana rahi agar koi kamjoor dil ka insan use dekh le toh shayad uska dil dhadakna hi band kar de wo marta katta hua aage bhadhta ja raha aur ek darwaje ke samne ruk jata hai wo laat mar ke us darwaje ko kholta hai aur …..
good going. keep it up :dancing2:
 

Shivay chauhan

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Is waqt shahar ke sabse bade hospital me afratafri machi hui shahar ke mane hue doctor aur surgeon apni team ke saath operation theatre me apni zindgi ka sabse complicated operation kar rahe the operation theatre ke bahar nidhi nisha rahul rohan aur chhote ke saath commissioner krishmurti aur unke 5 log aur bhi the commissioner krishmurti aaj bahut jyada pareshan the jab wo shiva ko yaha leke aye the toh unhone doctor ye tak kah diya ki agar shiva ko kuch ho gaya toh wo use zinda nahi chhodenge nidhi aur uske saath baki sabhi log hairan the ki commissioner leve ka wyakti ek chhote se kasbe ke mechanic ke liye itna pareshan kyu ho raha tha wahi commissioner krishmurti ke saath jo log the wo itne jyada pareshan nahi the shayad unhe yakeen tha ki shiva ko kuch nahi hoga magar nisha ka ro ro ke bula haal hal tha shiva ke operation ko shuru hue 2 ghante se upar ho gya tha magar abhi tak doctors kuch nahi kah paye the tabhi operation theatre ka darwaza khulta hai aur nurse bahar nikalti hai uske bahar ate hi commissioner krishmurti usse puchte hai.

Commissioner krishmurti – ab kaisi halat hai

Nurse – operation jari hai abhi kuch kaha nahi ja sakta .

Wo bas itna hi kah kar waha se chali gayi (ab aate hai un 5 logo pe jo is waqt commissioner krishmurti ke saath the toh unke nam hai deva alsam tamanna surya aur charu in logo ke bare me apko baad me pata chalega ki ye log kaun hai aur shiva ko kaise jante hai ) uske jate hi deva bolta hai .

Deva – kuch nahi hoga use commissioner sahab wo itni asani se hume chhod ke nahi ja sakta .

Deva ki awaz me vishwas ke saath saath hukka sa dar bhi mahsoos ho raha tha jo ki swabhavik bhi tha .

Aslam – bilkul theek kaha wo pahle bhi kai bar maut ko maat de chuka hai use kuch nahi ho sakta.

Unki bate sun ke nisha aur baki sabhi ki hairani bhadti ja rahi thi ki akhir ye shiva hai kaun kisi ke kuch samjh me nahi aa raha tha chhote bhi buri tarah ae ro raha tha tabhi operation theatre ka darwaza khulta hai aur doctor bahar aate hai unke aate hi sabhi unhe gher lete hai commissioner krishmurti unse puchte hai .

Commissioner krishmurti – doctor ab kaisi halat hai shiva ki.

Doctor – operation successful raha magar …
Commissioner krishmurti – magar kya doctor .

Doctor – agar shiva ko subah tak hosh nahi toh shayad use bacha pana mushkil ho kyu ki uska khoon kafi nikal chuka hai toh ho sakta hai ki wo coma me bhi chaka jaye .

Itna kah doctor waha se chale jate hai sabhi log aur jyada pareshan ho gye the kisi ki kuch samj me nahi aa raha tha ki kya kiya jaye tabhi nisha apni jagah se uthati hai aur aur waha se chali jati hai nidhi bhi uske peeche peeche chal deti hai hospital me ganesh ji ka ek chhota sa mandir bana hua tha nisha usi mandir ke samne haath jod jar baith jati hai air bhagwan se prathna karne lagti hai .

Nisha – hey prabhu agar shiva ke liye mera pyar saccha hai toh use kuch kat hone dijiyega mai uske bina jee nahi paungi .

Wahi aslam apni jagah se uth kar hospital ke ek kone me janamaz pe baith kar dua karne lagta hai .

Aslam – ae mere mauka mai janta hu ki mai qabil nahi ki tera sajda bhi kar saku magar mai khud ke liye nahi us zindagi ke liye tujhse dua kar raha jo is waqt maut se apni jung lad rahi hai ae mere khuda agar zindagi me maine koi bhi nek kaam kiya toh iske sabab ke badle me mujhe mere yar ki zindagi lauta de .

kisi bilkul sahi kaha hai jab hume koi bhi rasta nahi dikhta tab hum bhagwan ko hi yaad karte hai yahi aaj aslam aur nisha ke saath bhi wahi ho raha tha .

Shiva ko operation theatre se nikal kar icu me shift kar diya gya tha .
wahi dusri taraf shiva ek nadi ke kinare bench pe baitha hua tha uske bagal me safed kapdo me ek shaks tha 6 feet lumba clean shaved uske chahre pe ek ajeeb sa tej tha kuch der baad shiva usse kahta hai .


Shiva – toh mera waqt aa gya .

Shaks – nahi abhi wo waqt nahi aya hai shiva abhi tumhe bahut kuch karna hai .

Shiva – meri kuch karne koi bhi khwahish nahi hai .

Shaks – ye tumhri galatfahmi hai ki tum kuch karte ho har koi is duniya me ek maqsad se ata hai aur tumhra maqsad abhi tak poora nahi hua hai aur usse pahle tum wapas nahi aa sakte waqt ke garbh me tumhare liye kya hai ye tum bhi nahi jante .
Us shaks ne shiva ki taraf dekh kar muskurate hue kaha

Shiva – dard taqleef zakhm Anson is ke alawa aur kya ho sakta hai waqt ke garbh me mere liye is zindagi ne mujse sirf chheena hai jo bhi mujhe azeez tha .

Shaks – aisa tumhe lagta hai shiva hum aksar yahi soch kar dukhi ho jate hai ki humre kya nahi kagar kabhi ye nahi sochte ki humre paas kya hai shiva tumse bahut logo ki ummeed aur zindgi judi hai ye tumhra farz hai aur tum isse bhag nahi sakte.

Commissioner krishmurti is waqt doctor ke cabin me baithe hue the aur kafi jyada pareshan the.

Commissioner krishmurti – doctor shiva ka bachna bahut jaruri hai mere liye aur is shahar ke liye bhi .

Doctor – mai janta hu commissioner sahab warna aap kisi mamuli insan ke liye itna pareshan nahi honge Shiva apka sabse achook hathiyar hai .

Commissioner krishmurti – nahi doctor baat wo nahi hai han uske na hone se mera mission kabhi poora nahi hoga magar mission se jyada mujhe uski jan ki fikar hai doctor wo un logo me se jo sabko sab kuch de dete hai aur badle me kuch nahi mangte wo bilkul apne nam shiva ki hi tarah hai jo vish pee kar amrit bant dete hai .

Dono log bate kar hi rahe the ki tabhi cabin me ek ghabrai hui dusre dakhil hoti hai .

Nurse – doctor jaldi chaliye patient ki halat bahut bigad rahi hai .

Doctor aur commissioner krishmurti dono hi cabin se bhagte hue bahar nikalte hai doctor icu me dakhil hota hai toh jo wo dekhta hai use dekh kar ek pal Wo bhi ghabra jate hai shiva ki pulse rate achanak down ho rahi thi use sans lene me bhi dikkat ho rahi thi doctor turant use life saving drug ka ek injection deta hai magar usse bhi koi fayada nahi hua shiva ki nabz ek dum dheemi ho gai thi .

Wahi dusri taraf shiva aur us shaks ki baat cheet ab khatm hone ko thi shiva usse kahta hai .

Shiva – toh phir mai kab wapas aa sakunga koi andaza hai .

Wo shaks muskurate hue kahta hai .

Shaks – abhi bahut waqt phir kabhi is vishay me charcha karenge .

Wo shaks apni jagah se uthta hai aur wapas jane lagta hai shiva use jate hue dekh raha tha kuch door jake wo shaks gayab ho jata hai jaisi wo shaks gayab hota hai waise hi shiva icu me ankhe khol deta


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