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Thriller Kahani

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Ng_TheViper

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Wah re musibat... Is elake m aadamkhir bhediya aata ni tha but aaj aagyaa shayad insano ki khusbhu s pata chal gaya hoga usse b ki dinner m insan h .

Shiva ka rudeness apne jagah thek h but wo parwah savki karta h.. pehle to camping p Jane a Mana kia tha but ab khud hi usne intzam kiye safety k..aur shyaad abhi Nisha ko b wahi bachaega ..

Nisha Shiva k liye feel Kar rai h but ye jaldbazi b hogi kyuki is camping k baad najane kb mulaqat ho dono ki.. ab ye mat krna ki commissioner narayanmurty ki beti nikle Nisha ( just kidding )

Let's see Kya hota h...
 
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Shivay chauhan

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Update 7


kuch door jate hi uske pair thithak jate hai use ek awaz sunai deti hai jab wo awaz ki disha me dekhti hai toh uski sans upar ki upar aur neeche ki neeche hi rah jati aur ho bhi kyu na usse theek 10 feet ki doori pe ek surkh lal ankhon wala bhediya khada tha nisha jad si khadi rahti hai wo bhagna chahti thi magar uske pair uska nahi de rage the mano zameen se jam gye ho bhediya dheere dheer uske paas aane lagta kuch aane ke baad wo upse chhalang laga deta …
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Jaise hi bhediya us pe chhalang laga deta hai waise hi nisha apni ankhe band kar deti hai jab use kuch der tak kuch bhi mahsoos nahi hota toh wo apni ankhe ke dekhti hai aur jo wo dekhti hai use uspe yakeen nahi hota shiva air bhediye ke beech guttham guttham ho raha thi hua yu tha ki jaise hi bhediya nisha pe chhalang lagata hai waise hi shiva waha pahuch jata hai aur bhediye pe chhalang laga deta isse bhediya nisha tak nahi pahuch pata aur dono ghamasan ladai shuru ho jati hai bhediya is waqt shiva ke upar tha aur shiva ne uska muh pakad rakha tha bhediya poori taqat laga tha ki wo shiva ki gardan pe apne nukile dant gada de magar shiva use kamyab nahi hone de raha tha bhediya kisi tarah se apne panje se shiva ki chhati pe waar karya hai hai jisse kafi gahra ghaw ho jata shiva turant use door phek deta hai bhediya shiva se kuch Doori pe girta hai magar turant khada bhi hi jata hai shiva bhi khada ho jata hai bhediya shiva ko dekhta hai aur shiva bhediye ko dekhta hai agar koi aur hota toh shayad wo ghabra jata acche acche shikari bhi Adamkhor bhediye ke samne bima hathiyar ke nahi jate aisa kaha jata hai ki jab bhediya Adamkhor ho jata hai toh sher jitna hi khatarnak ho jata hai magar shiva ke chahre pe dar naam ki koi cheez nahi thi wo bilkul waisa hi tha jaisa wo hamesha rahta hai bahar se aarahi awaz ko sunke baki sab bhi apne apane tent se bahar aa jate hai aur jo wo log dekhte usse unki bhi halat kharab ho jati hai magar shiva darne wajaye muskura raha tha bhediya uski taraf daudta hai aur shuva bhediye ki taraf bhediya jaise hi shiva ke kareeb pahuchta hai Shiva uske ke jordar punch jad deta hai uske baad ek aur fir teesra punch shiva uske muh pe jadta hai bhediya kuch Doori pe girta hai ye sab bas kuch hi seconds me hua tha is baar bhediye ko uthne me kuch waqt lag jata hai jisse Shiva ko waqt mil jata hai wo turant daud kar apne bag me se ek semi rifle nikal leta hai bhediya shiva pe chhalang laga deta hai aur tabhi shiva uspe goli chala deta hai jab shiva ne bhediye pe goli chalai toh bhediya hawa me hi tha magar shiva ka nishan bilkul uske sar pe laga wo bejan zameen pe gir gaya nidhi turant nisha ke daudakar aati hai aur use seene se laga leti hai nisha abhi bhi waise hi khadi thi jaise khadi thi chhote toh dar ke mare rone hi lagta hai magar log hairani se kabhi shiva ko toh kabhi bhediye ki laash ko dekh rahe the shiva nidhi ke paas jata hai aur kahta hai .

Shiva – ye bilkul theek hai bas thoda sa sadma laga hai subah tak normal ho jayegi .

Chhote shiva ke paas daudte hue aata hai aur uske pairon se lipat hai aur rone lagta hai shiva use alag karta hai aur apne ghutno pe baith ke kahta hai.

Shiva – mai theek hu chhote rona band karo .

Shuva ne ye baat bilkul bhi narmi se nahi kahi thi uska laheja utna hi shakht tha jitna hamesha rahta hai aur uske pe dard ke bhi koi bhaw nahi the chhote se itna kah kar shiva usi jagah wapas jata hai jaha wo pahle baitha hua tha wahi baith kar wo apni sharaab ki botal ko muh se lagata hai aur char panch ghoot me hi use khali kar deta hai aur phir se chand ko dekhne lagta use dekh kar koi nahi kah sakta tha ki abhi abhi usne ek Adamkhor bhediye ko khud mara hai wo bilkul normal tha jaise ye uska roz ka kaam ho .

Agli subah sabhi log suraj nikalte hi waha se nikal padte hai shiva driving kar raha tha sabhi utne hi khamosh the jitna ki shiva kareeb 9 baje tak shiva aur baki sabhi log garage pahuch gye the shiva aate hi garage ke andar ghus jata hai garage ke akhiri chhor pe ek darwaza tha jo ki shivtha jo ki shiva kamre me khulta tha jisme shiva rahta tha shiva usi darwaze me ghus jata hai 12 baje tak ye khabar poore ilake phail gai thi ki kisine Adamkhor bhediye ko mar diya hai shiva is waqt apne garage ke do tyres pe bai tha hua apne chhati ke zakhm ko pani se saaf kar raha nisha ab normal ho chuki aur shiva ko ek tak dekh rahi thi kuch der baad shiva ek black color ki shirt pahn leta hai kagar uske buttons nahi lagata wo chalta hua nisha ke kareeb pahuchta hai nisha toh apne hi khyalon me khoi hui thi shiva uske paas aaje chuki bajata hai jisse nisha hosh me aati hai phir shiva chhote ko awaz deta hai chhote turant daud kar uske paas ata hai .

Chhote – han guru bolo .

Shiva – inki gadi theek ho gai .

Chhote – han guru battery toh charge ho gai hai aur chhoti moti kamiya thi wo bhi apne theek kar di thi .

Shiva – toh inse kaho ki mere paise de aur yaha se chalte bane .

Chhote – magar guru ye log jayenge kaise rasta toh band hai .

Shiva – rasta band hai magar kaise .

Chhote – aaj sahab hi pahad khisak pe sadak pe aa gye hai wo kya kahte hai .

Nisha – land slide .

Shiva – toh tum ye kahoge ki inhe taha rahne du kyu .

Chhote kuch nahin bolta bas muskura deta hai jis pe shiva kahta .

Shiva – theek hai ye dant andar kar ye log yaha sakte hai magar inhe samjha dena ki mujhe disturb na kare .

Chhote – are guru tum chinta mat karo mai hu na .

Shiva – isi baat ka toh dar hai .

Kaj kar shiva waha se chala jata hai aur apne kaam me lag jata hai nisha ki khushi ka toh koi thikana hi nahi rahta wo turant chhote gale laga leti hai aur uske gaal pe ek kiss kar deti .

Chhote – maine bola tha .

Nisha – han pata hai pata hai tumhri already ek girlfriend hai .

Kah kar wo use phir se gale se laga leti hai .

Wahi dusri taraf rahman kisi se phone pe baat kar raha tha .

Rahman – kya pata chal gya very good .

Kah kar wo phone kat deta hai aur kisi ko phone milata hai .

Rahman – tum abhi ke abhi mere bar me aao .

Kah kar wo phone kat deta hai uske chahre pe ek sukoon tha kareeb 1 ghante baad ek 6 feet 9 inch ka tarde shareer wala wyakti kamre me baitha hua tha uske chahra bada ki khaufnak tha uske chahre pe byi or ki ankh se leke dayi or ki hoth pe ek kafi bada cut laga tha rahaman usse kahta hai .

Rahman – kali tum jante ho na kya karna hai .

Kali – bilkul isi kam me toh mahir hu .

Rahman uske samne ek lifafa rakh deta hai .

Rahman – isme uska address hai tumhe ye kasm jald hi karna hoga keemat jo tum chaho .

Kali – therk hai kam ho jayega meri keemat hai 1 core rupaye adhe abhi adhe kam hone ke baad .

Rahman – theek hai sham tak tumhe paise mil jayenge .

Kali rahman ko salam karta hai aur wahe se chala jata hai .

Kali underworld ka sabse bada contract killer tha na jane kitne politicians aur industrialists uski goli ke shikar hue the kisi ko jan se karna uske liye khana khane jaisa tha uske jane ke rahman ek cigrate nikalta hai peene lagta hai .

Wahi commissioner krishmurti kisi se phone pe baat kar rahe the the .

Commissioner krishmurti – what that’s a good news oh no tab toh hum jaldi hi kuch karna hoga .

Kya hoga aage kya kali ka shikar is bar bhi usse bachne me na kamyab rahega ya kali khud shikar ban jayega aur sabse badi baat kaun hai kali ka shikar kya hoga aage kya mod legi ye kahani janne ke liye saath bane rahe.
 

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Nice update :superb:
 

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