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Thriller Kahani

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Shivay chauhan

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Achanak uski aankh khul jati uska shareer paseene me latpat tha sanse itni tez chal rahi thi jaise meelon daud kar aya ho kuch der wo yu hi hi baitha rahta hai phir jald hi khud pe kaabo pake wo apne bistar se hi jarjar ho chuke us kamre ko ek nazar dekhta wo uth kar kamre ki us tooti hui khidki ki taraf bhadta jisse kamre roshni ke kuch tukde aa rahe the us khidki pe jake wo khada ho jata hai uske baal uske kandhe tak aa rahe the aur chahre pe bhadi dadhi is baat ko saaf kar rahi thi mahino se usne shave nahi kiya uski ankhe mano salon banjar padi hui jameen ki tarah thi jispe khwabon ki kheti me kante ugte ho magar aaj ye kuch pareshan si thi us sapne ki wajah se wajah se jo usne dekha tha ye sapna use roz nahi aata magar jab aata hai toh beete dino ke zakhm hare ho jate hai kafi der wo yu hi khada rahta hai phir wapas kamre beech o beech aake push ups lagane lgta hai kareeb ek ghante tak push ups lagane ke baad wo utha hai aur apne takiye ke neeche apna Cuban cigar nikal kar jala leta hai kuch der cigar ka kash leke wo use bhuja kar wapas rakh deta hai aur kamre se daudta hua bahar nikal jata hai ye uska roz ka niyam tha kareeb 10 kilomitar daudne ke baad wo ek jadi je paas pahuchta hai us nadi ka bahaw bahut tez tha wo apne kapde utarta uska shareer bilkul lohe ke saman tha jism ka ek ek cut saaf dikh raha tha apne kapde utar kar wo nadi me kood padta aur bahaw ke vipreet tairane lagta hai kareeb 1 ghante tairane ke baad wo bahar nikalta hai aur apne us kamre ki taraf chal padta hai uske chahre pe koi bhaw nahi the ankhen bilkul veeran thi agar koi bhi uski un hari ankhon me dekh le toh toh shayad ek pal ke sans lena hi bhool jaye chahra is tarah se kathor tha jaise pattharon ko kaat ke abhi rakha gya ho wo chalte chalte apne kamre ke paas pahuch jata hai kuch der sochne ke baad wo andar chala jata


Wahi doosri taraf usi waqt commissioner office me sabhi ala adhikari ikattha hue ek urgent meeting bulai gai magar reason kisi ko pata nahi sab bas andaza laga rahe koi kah raha tha shayad koi intelligence ki report aai hai air koi kah raha tha ki shayad secrete services se koi information aai hai sabhi log andaza laga hi rahe the ki tabhi kamre me ek shaks dakhil hota hai uska kad 5 feet 10 inch tha tagda sudaul shareer saleeke se kati hui patli mooche uske kandhe pe page sitare saaf bata rahe the ki wo commissioner hai uski nameplate pe naam likha hua krishmurti jaise wo dakhil hota sabhi log khade ho jate wo sabko baithne ka ishara karta hai aur bolna shuru karta hai .

Commissioner krishmurti – thanks to all of you ki itne short notice pe aap sabhi yaha ikattha hue aap sabhi soch rahe honge ki ye meeting itni achanak kyu bulai gai hai .

Kah kar wo sabhi ke chahron ko bari bari dekhte hai aur phir bolna shuru karte .

Commissioner krishmurti – theek hai toh mai aap sabhi ko meeting ka karan batata hu hum sabhi logo ne mil kar is shahar se crime ko lagbhag khtm kar diya is mukam ko hasil karne me humne bahut badi keemat chukai hai apne bahut se keemti sathi khoye hai aur ……


Kahte hue unke chahre pe dard ki ek parchhai si aa ke chali gai unhone phir se kahna shuru kiya
Commissioner krishmurti - magar abhi do aise crime hai jinpe lagam lagane me abhi tak kamyab nahi ho paye hai aur wo hai drugs aur human trafficking jiska srgna hai ye

Kah kar unhone ek projector pe ek tasveer lagai .

Commissioner krishmurti – ye rahman hai ise toh aap sabhi jante hi honge ye is shahar ka sab se bada drug dealer aur human trafficking king hai ye sab jante hue bhi hum log iska kuch bhi nahi bigad paa rahe kyu ki isne apne sare kale dhando ko bahut hi chalanki se legal kar rakha iske kai sare casinos bhi jo ki legall hai toh mai aap sabhi se ab mera sawal hai ki ise kaise roka jaye.

Sawal karke unhone sabhi ki taraf dekha ek inspector kahta hai.

Inspector – sir kyu na hum se arrest kar le magar record na kare matlb ki kidnap jaisa aur phir hum isse sari information nikalwa le

Commissioner krishmurti – great idea magar ye bahut shatir hai aur apne thikane badalta rahta hai aur sabse badi baat humre department me bhi kuch log aise hai jo isse mile hue hai aur humre har movement ki khabar is tak pahuchate rahte hai any other idea

Kamre khamoshi chha jati hai

Commissioner krishmurti – well mai janta tha ki aisa hi hoga isiliye maine aaj homeminister sahab apni meeting rakhi hai mai abhi wahi ja raha hu thanks for coming gentlemen .

Kahkar wo kamre se bahar chale jate aur office se nikal kar apni jeep me baith ke home minister ke office ki nikal padte hai unke chahre pareshani aur ummeed ke bhaw saaf dikhai de rahe the.


Kya hoga aage kya homeminister se meeting commissioner ki pareshaniyon ko hal kar payegi kya commissioner krishmurti shahar se rahman ke illegal dhande khatam kar payege janne ke liye saath bane rahiye
 

Shivay chauhan

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Apne office se nikal kar commissioner krishmurti seedhe homeminister sahab ke office ki taraf bhad rahe waha pahuch kar wo seedhe homeminister sahab ke cabin ke samne pahuchte aur baha baithe hue capsari se puchte hai .

Commissioner krishmurti – homeminister sahab hai.

Chaprasi adab se khada hokar unhe salam karta hai aur kahta hai .

Chaprasi – han hai aap hi ka wait kar rahe hai .

Commissioner krishmurti uski baat sunke seedhe cabin me ghus jate hai .

Commissioner krishmurti – gudmorning sir .

Homeminister sahab ek file padh rahe the commissioner krishmurti ke andar aate hi wo file side me rakh dete hai aur kahte hai .

Homeminister sahab – abe good morning ko mar goli pahle gale mil .

Itna kah kar wo commissioner krishmurti ko age bhad kar gale laga lete hai .

( Aap sabhi soch rahe honge ki ye sab kya hai toh mai apko bata du ki homeminister sahab aur commissioner krishmurti college time ke dost hai aur wo bhi jigri magar jab bhi baat profession pe aati hai toh dono hi apni dosti bhool jate hai commissioner krishmurti jab bhi chahate higher rank ke liye promote ho sakte the magar nahi unhone aisa kabhi nahi chaha wo apni kabiliyat aur mahnat se wo muqam hasil karna chahte the toh ab aaate hai kahani pe.)

Homeminister sahab – aa baith kya lega chaye ya coffee

Unhone abadi apniyata se kaha .

Commissioner krishmurti – nahi kuch nahi sir mai ek jaruri kaam se aya hu .

Commissioner krishmurti ne bade hi thande sur me kaha .

Homeminister sahab – toh matlab aaj mera dost nahi shahar ka commissioner milne aya hai ok batao commissioner krishmurti kya baat hai .

Homeminister sahab ne jhoothi mayoosi se kaha jispe commissioner krishmurti koi pratikriya nahi di aur apni pareshani bata dete hai jise sunne ke baad homeminister sahab kahte hai .

Homeminister sahab – hmm magar baat sirf itni si nahi kuch hai jo tumne mujhe nahi bataya .

Commissioner krishmurti – sir mujhe lagta hai rahman sirf ek mohara hai iske peeche ka khiladi koi aur hai .

Homeminister sahab – toh kya socha .

Commissioner krishmurti – legally toh hum inka kuch nahi bigad sakte .

Kah kar unhone ek ghari homeminister sahab ke chahre toh dekha .

Homeminister sahab – toh kya karoge koi plan hai .

Commissioner krishmurti – SHIVA .

Shiva ka naam sunte hi homeminister sahab ke chahre ke rang ud jate hai wo kahte hai .

Homeminister sahab – kya shiva jinda hai mujhe toh laga tha ki jail me use kisi ne mar diya tha .

Commissioner krishmurti – nahi wo zinda hai magar kaha hai ye nahi pata.
Homeminister sahab – ok let me make it clear tum shiva ko dhond ke wapas lana chahte ho taki wo shahar se crime maralb rahaman ko khtm kar de yahi na .

Commissioner krishmurti han me sar hila dete hai .

Homeminister sahab – soch lo pichli baar usne khoon ki nadiya baha di aur darindagi ka koi jawab nahi .

Commissioner krishmurti – we don’t have any other choice .

Homeminister sahab – ok I’m with you go ahead.

Commissioner krishmurti – thank you sir .

Homeminister sahab – magar socha hai ki use dhondoge kaise aur wapas kaise laoge .

Commissioner krishmurti – nahi .

Homeminister sahab – ok do whatever you want to do I’m with you .

Commissioner krishmurti uth ke cabin se bahar nikal jate magar abhi bhi pareshani thi ki shiva dhonda kaise jaye aur sabse badi pareshani ki use wapas kaise laya jaye .

Wahi dosri taraf ek chhote se garage me ek shaks gadi ke neeche leta hua tha .

Shaks – chhote 10 number pana de .

Chhote – abhi laya guru .

Ek 11 saal ladka use pana de deta hai wo abhi bhi gadi ke neeche hi leta hua tabhi garage me ek Scorpio jhatke khate hue andar aati usme 2 ladke aur 2 ladkiya bahar nikalte hai un mese ek aage bhadta aur chhote se kahta hai .

Ladka – ye ladke yaha machenic kaha hai .

Usne kuch rudely kaha

Chhote – guru busy aur mai bhi abhi time lagega .

Chhote ne bhi usi laheje me jawab diya .

Tabhi dusra ladka kahta hai .

Dusra ladka – kaha hai tumharguru mai usse baat kar lunga .

Chhote – tumhe jan pyari nahi hai kya guru ko kaam ke beech disturbance pasand nahi .

Toh un mese ek ladki kahti

Ladki – chalo dusre garage chalte hai .

Chhote – yaha koi dusra garage nahi hai .

Whattt

Charon ne ek saath kaha .

Tabhi un mese ek ladki kahti hai .

Ladki – ab kya karenge rohan .

Rohan – ruk jara mujhe sochne de .

Kuch der sochne ke baad wo kahta

Rohan – dekho beta hume kafi door jana please apne guru se kah do na .

Chhote – tum khud hi kah do mai toh nahi jane wala .

Toh un mese ek ladki kahti .

Ladki – rahul tum jao aur request karo yar warna hum camping ke liye nahi ja payenge .

Toh ek ladka aage bhadta hai aur us gadi ke neeche lete gue wyakti se kahta hai .

Rahul – sir wo humri gadi kharab ho gai please humari help kar dijiye .

Shaks – tumhe dikhta nahi ki mai busy hu .

Usne lete hue hi kaha .

Rahul – sir hum camping ke liye ja rahe hai aur raat bhi hone wali aur humre saath ladkiyan bhi please pahle aap humei help kar dijiye .

Wo shaks gadi ke neeche se bahar nikalta hai aur rahul ki taraf dekhta rahul ki toh halat kharab ho jati hai ye koi aur nahi balki wahi tha jise raat me sapna aya tha wo use yu hi kuch der ghoorta rahta hai aur fir unki gadi ki taraf bhad chalta hai use dekhakar rohan bhi kuch ghnta jata hai wo shaks khamoshi se gadi ka bonat kholta hai aur check karne lagta .

Shaks – tum log koi crime karke aur ho kya .

Rohan – nahi toh .

Shaks – toh itne dare hue kyu ho .

Chhote – are guru tum kisi ko ek baar dekh lo toh wo toh waise hi dar in ki kya aukat .

Kahkar hasne lagta magar wo log use ghoor ke dekhte wo shaks gadi check karta rahta hai use kisi se koi matlb nahi tha kareeb 15 min ke baad wo bonat band karta hai aur kahta hai.

Shaks – battery bilkul discharge aur pani bhi nahi aur bhi chhoti moti kamiya hai theek karne kam se kam 6 ghante lagenge .

Ek ladki bolti hai .

Ladki – oh shit di ab kya karenge .

Nidhi – ruk nisha tension kyu leti hai yaha koi na koi lauge ya hotel toh hoga hi .

Chhote – yaha ye sab kuch nahi hai ye ek chhota sa kasba hai pahadiyon ke beech o beech yaha koi rukne nahi aur jo aate bhi hai unke ya toh ghar hote hai ya fir rishtedar .

Rohan – yar ye toh badi mushkil ho gai .

Rahul – ek kam karte hai na gadi yahi chhode dete hai aur jungal ki taraf paidal hi nikal padte kyu chhote yaha se jungal kitni door hai .

Chhote – 20 km .

Nisha – ab kya karenge .


Kya hoga aage kaun se shiva aur kyu commissioner krishmurti ise wapas lana chahte hai . Kya ye log jungal pahuch payenge aur agar pahuche bhi toh kaise kya hoga aage janne ke liye saath bane rahiye.
 
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