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Werewolf

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itne character hai story mein easily toh end nahi ho payegi

Ab character ka jo jamawada faila woh toh sametna padega
Ju Mrx ko kam time easily nipata dete lekin jo female characters hai unka dekhna padega .
Aisi rachna kar di hai, jo ab peechhe pad gayi hai. Poora time yahi le jaati hai. Par ek baat toh hai... Kahani ka climax itna badhiya hai bc ki soch ke hi kabhi kabhi khud ko goosebumps aa jaate hai. Mujhe nahi lagta iss tarah ka mein kuchh dobaara create kar paunga. Wo itna peak rahega ki shayad uske baad mujhe kuchh likhna hi nahi chahiye.

Ab bade projects se darr lagta hai thoda. Kyunki, ek fantasy genre par bhi soch rakha hai thoda plot. Woh bhi ultimate peak hai. Lekin, use bahut time dena hoga. Uska plot abhi adhoora hai. Kuchh kuchh parts soch rakhe hai bas. Par jitna socha hai... Wo ultimate hai. Lekin, use yaha nahi utaarunga.

Dekhunga usko lekar... English me likh paaya toh officially publish kar dunga ek book ke roop me. But wo sab baad ki baatein hai...! Abhi ke liye toh bas iske khatam hone ka intezar karo.
 
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Aisi rachna kar di hai, jo ab peechhe pad gayi hai. Poora time yahi le jaati hai. Par ek baat toh hai... Kahani ka climax itna badhiya hai bc ki soch ke hi kabhi kabhi khud ko goosebumps aa jaate hai. Mujhe nahi lagta iss tarah ka mein kuchh dobaara create kar paunga. Wo itna peak rahega ki shayad uske baad mujhe kuchh likhna hi nahi chahiye.

Ab bade projects se darr lagta hai thoda. Kyunki, ek fantasy genre par bhi soch rakha hai thoda plot. Woh bhi ultimate peak hai. Lekin, use bahut time dena hoga. Uska plot abhi adhoora hai. Kuchh kuchh parts soch rakhe hai bas. Par jitna socha hai... Wo ultimate hai. Lekin, use yaha nahi utaarunga.

Dekhunga usko lekar... English me likh paaya toh officially publish kar dunga ek book ke roop me. But wo sab baad ki baatein hai...! Abhi ke liye toh bas iske khatam hone ka intezar karo.
It's amazing for authors who can earn with your work...India mein market hi nhi hai☹️
Aisi rachna kar di hai, jo ab peechhe pad gayi hai. Poora time yahi le jaati hai. Par ek baat toh hai... Kahani ka climax itna badhiya hai bc ki soch ke hi kabhi kabhi khud ko goosebumps aa jaate hai. Mujhe nahi lagta iss tarah ka mein kuchh dobaara create kar paunga. Wo itna peak rahega ki shayad uske baad mujhe kuchh likhna hi nahi chahiye.

Ab bade projects se darr lagta hai thoda. Kyunki, ek fantasy genre par bhi soch rakha hai thoda plot. Woh bhi ultimate peak hai. Lekin, use bahut time dena hoga. Uska plot abhi adhoora hai. Kuchh kuchh parts soch rakhe hai bas. Par jitna socha hai... Wo ultimate hai. Lekin, use yaha nahi utaarunga.

Dekhunga usko lekar... English me likh paaya toh officially publish kar dunga ek book ke roop me. But wo sab baad ki baatein hai...! Abhi ke liye toh bas iske khatam hone ka intezar karo.
Even jo bhi fanatsy wale hai vo sab purane texts ko likhte rhete hai...aur shi bhi hai...kyuki ab hamare dad ke Umar ke log toh whi padhenge...aage dekhte hai kya hota hai. But I do think there's a scope for Indian fantasy market in future, rate at which indians are getting influenced by West just look at movies these days they are trying hard to do the CGI and all and move from trad drama.
 
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Aisi rachna kar di hai, jo ab peechhe pad gayi hai. Poora time yahi le jaati hai. Par ek baat toh hai... Kahani ka climax itna badhiya hai bc ki soch ke hi kabhi kabhi khud ko goosebumps aa jaate hai.
Ye story once in generation hai
First toh plot ki ek uniqueness hai
Sath hi incest aur complex relationship ka tadaka.
Itna sab kuch ek hi story mein toh
Wo story ko special feel deta hai .

Then ju ki writing se jo imagination feel deti hai woh sabse alag .

Chhoti chooti details ka jo Touch up
Hai woh aur shandaar hai .

Mujhe nahi lagta iss tarah ka mein kuchh dobaara create kar paunga. Wo itna peak rahega ki shayad uske baad mujhe kuchh likhna hi nahi chahiye.
abhi ju ki aur golden period aayega
Badshah the tale toh sirf shurwaat hai .

Aage aage ju wine ki tarah aur tasty hote jaoge .
Ab bade projects se darr lagta hai thoda. Kyunki, ek fantasy genre par bhi soch rakha hai thoda plot. Woh bhi ultimate peak hai. Lekin, use bahut time dena hoga. Uska plot abhi adhoora hai. Kuchh kuchh parts soch rakhe hai bas. Par jitna socha hai... Wo ultimate hai. Lekin, use yaha nahi utaarunga.
If usme agar adult contain nahi hoga toh yaha shayad woh apne true potential nahi hasil kar payegi .
Yaha adult contain ko jyada response milta hai .

Dekhunga usko lekar... English me likh paaya toh officially publish kar dunga ek book ke roop me. But wo sab baad ki baatein hai...! Abhi ke liye toh bas iske khatam hone ka intezar karo.
Book might be Better option

ju shayad iss story ko end kar ek badhiya break loge shayad
Then usee start karoge .

Abhi toh present ka sochte hai .
 
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Ye story once in generation hai
First toh plot ki ek uniqueness hai
Sath hi incest aur complex relationship ka tadaka.
Itna sab kuch ek hi story mein toh
Wo story ko special feel deta hai .

Then ju ki writing se jo imagination feel deti hai woh sabse alag .

Chhoti chooti details ka jo Touch up
Hai woh aur shandaar hai .


abhi ju ki aur golden period aayega
Badshah the tale toh sirf shurwaat hai .

Aage aage ju wine ki tarah aur tasty hote jaoge .

If usme agar adult contain nahi hoga toh yaha shayad woh apne true potential nahi hasil kar payegi .
Yaha adult contain ko jyada response milta hai .


Book might be Better option

ju shayad iss story ko end kar ek badhiya break loge shayad
Then usee start karoge .

Abhi toh present ka sochte hai .
Bhai Ye index kese bnegi uska link send karna
 
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Werewolf

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Werewolf at the end of each day:
Ab toh ghutne bhi jawab dene lage hai... :laugh:
While other stories even don't get half the likes here 🙄
Ghutne nahi. Himmat jawab dene lagi hai. :sigh2: Rahi baat likes ki toh... I know mein kya deliver karta hu. Aur, ye uska hi nateeja hai.

I would still say ki jitni yaha janta aati hai story padhne, uske comparison me 300 likes are still very less. :dontknow:
 
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It's amazing for authors who can earn with your work...India mein market hi nhi hai☹️
Yes. India me fiction ka utna craze nahi hai. But... Baahar bahut craze hai. Aaj bhi fiction novels bahut bikti hai. Log padhte hai. India ke log bhi buy karte hai, padhte hai. Dikkat hai Indian authors ki jo koi trong fictional world provide nahi kara paa rahe.
Even jo bhi fanatsy wale hai vo sab purane texts ko likhte rhete hai...aur shi bhi hai...kyuki ab hamare dad ke Umar ke log toh whi padhenge...aage dekhte hai kya hota hai. But I do think there's a scope for Indian fantasy market in future, rate at which indians are getting influenced by West just look at movies these days they are trying hard to do the CGI and all and move from trad drama.
Mahabharata wagarah se inspire hona achhi baat hai but aap wahj refrences har baar nahi ghused sakte. Ek proper world chaahiye, ek proper plotline chaahiye. Tab jaake Indian fiction kuchh kamaal kar sakti hai.

Mujhe pata hai indian authors kya gadbadi karte hai. Wo fully Indian culture me ghus ke puraane asuras aur rakshas ka refrence leke aate hai, uspe stories banaate hai. (Like bhramastra and all) but ye sirf indian audience tak hi reach kar sakta hai.

Kitne foreign ke book reviewers honge jo bhramastra ki original book ko padh ke uski waah waahi kar rahe honge YT pe?

Less than 1%? Or maybe none?

That's the problem. Story aisi honi chahiye jo globally tehelka macha de. Farq nahi padna chahiye ki kaun se religion ke log use padh rahe hai, unhe samajh aayega ya nahi. World building aur plot aisa hona chahiye jo hila ke rakh de.

Jo mostly Indian authors karne me fail ho jaate hai. They fail at both. World building me bhi aur storyline me bhi.

Na hi wo himmat kar paate hai long projects pe ab. They need to understand ki jitna aap history me jaa ke references ka use kar ke jitna rakshas and asuras ye sab laoge, jitna ye dikhaane ki koshish karoge ki ye Indian work hai utna hi ye fail hoga.

Solution ye hai ki you have to blend it within the world building. Kuchh mat batao ki kahani me Indian refrences hai ya characters ke naam Indian waale hai. Kuchh mat batao.

Global scale rakho. Alag alag religions ka istemal karo aur blend karo. Tab beech me kahi Indian refrences ko ghusedo plot me taaki aisa na lage ki wo work heavily Indian inspired hai. Only that way it can work. (Of course, world building aur main plot pe hi sab kuchh nirbhar karega afterwards.)

Ye mera maanana hai jitna maine book world ko abhi tak dekha aur observe kiya hai.
 
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:cool1: No need to stress out cause of it, take a break if you want to, recharge the batteries and complete your masterpiece
Kehna asaan hai man, karna kathin :sigh2:
Ek baar break lene ke baad dobaara likhne ka mann nahi karta :sigh2:
 
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