May be isko end karke aur nahi theme par story likho..Thank you so much!Yeh ending nahi hai, kahani abhi baki hai.
Lekin aage story ko kaise badhaun, main thoda confuse hoon. Isliye aap sabhi readers se request hai ki apne ideas aur suggestions zaroor share karein takki mujhe aage likhne ki nayi direction mile! Aap sab aage kya dekhna chahte hain? Please comments me batayein
Isme ab ya toh aur character add karne padenge .jaisa mausi ya bua par usse son or mom ke beech difference AA sakte hain...
Ya phir
ya phir thoda kinky karna padega.jo at least mujhe pasand nahi hai
