Update 6
( Rang pyaar ka )
Preeti ka yun ro dena Veer ko bahot bura lag raha tha aur jis jagah woh the goan waale aasani se udher aate toh dekh lete...... Veer ek dam se Preeti se alag huya aur bola - Yeh sahi jagha nahi hai, aise humko koyi dekh lega toh faaltu ki baat banega, tu ab yeh rona bandh kar mujhe accha nahi lag raha hai jab tu ro deti hai......
Preeti jhala ke boli - Haan ab main roun bhi tujhse pucch kar, duffer itna bhi nahi samajhta ki jab koi ladki dil se ro rahi ho usko kaise chup karwaon...... tujhe kya padi hai mujhe chup karwane ki aur mud ke khadi hokar jorse rone lagi.....
Veer ko laga iske tape recorder ka volume toh aur bhi badh gaya hai, koi humko dekhe isse pehle iska bhanpoo chup karwana hoga...... aur usko palat ke ek haath pakad kar gaane ke kheton ki tarah le jaane laga, Preeti kuch samajh hi na paayi ki mujhe kahan lekar jaa raha hai bus unhi hi saath chalne lagi ...... subak toh abhi bhi rahi thi jab 400 metre dur aa gayi aur mandir bhi dur reh gaya tha Veer bola - sambhal ke aana yahan kaate honge......Dhoop poori tarah se tej ho gayi thi aur ab woh dono bade bade gaane ki ooat me the.....
Veer - Ab bata ki tu itni dukhi kun hai, sach me dubli ho gayi hai..... gharwaale tujhe roti nahi dete kya? mujhe milne bhi nahi aayi aur maa ko din me 3 baar call karti hai.
Preeti charon taraf dekhke yeh gaane ka khet tha aadhi phasal 'L' letter ki shape me kaati gayi thi, usko dar lagne laga ...... " Muhje dar lag raha hai"
Veer uski aisi halat dekh ke muskara - Main tujhe kha nahi jaunga, bas jungi suar aur neel gaaye ke sivye koyi hinsak jaanvar nahi hote yahan khashkar jab woh nar ho.
Preeti ab bilkul normal ho gayi thi, Veer ne uske aasun phouche joh uske goore gaal ko geela karke nishan bana diye the ...... " Tujhe se nahi, Mein khud hi se dar rahi hun kahin main bhekh na jaun tu itna sona dikh raha hai ki tere lips ko chum lu "...... uske honthon pe smile thi ......
Veer haskar - Irade nek nahi lag rahe tere..... chal ab chalte hain maa bhi wait kar rahi hogi.....
( usko apni maa, Rani, ke honthon ki narmi yaad aa gayi kitne gulabi aur rasbhar lips hai maa ke jisko chusne me usko kitna maja aa raha tha...... aur woh Preeti ki honthon se apni maa ke honthon ko compere karne laga, Preeti ke lips jaada pink the aur juicy bhi )...... bas uske lips ko hi ek tak dekh raha tha aur woh usse kuch keh rahi thi par uska dhayan sirf lips hilte bandh hote me hi tha....... uska dil keh raha tha 'chuse le' lekin mann rokne ko kaha...... Preeti ke lips invitation de rahe the kiske jaada meethe hain.....
Preeti veer ko hila ke kuch keh rahi thi par achanak Veer ko kya huya ki woh peeti ka sar apne dono haathon me pakada aur uske lips ko phele chuma aur ab chusne laga, gaane ke khet me Veer aise Preeti ke lips chus raha tha jaise yeh koi aam rojana ka juroori kaam ho uska...... pehle niche ke lips choosa aur phir uper ke ........ muhhhhhhhh....... uhmmmmm...... mmmmmmm........
Preeti toh hakibaki reh gayi...... usne itni jaldi ki umeed ki nahi thi, jaisa Veer ka character hai...... 10 sec lage usko realise karne me aur woh bhi usko saath dene lagi usko hug kar li ........umhhhhhhhh ...... mmmmmmm ....... ab toh dono ke lips me compitetion lag gaya...... muhhhhhhhh ...... mmmmmmmm ....... uhmmmmmmm .......
dono ko romantics pasand thi, films me dekhe the par Veer ka 2nd chance tha aur Preeti ka pehla par expert nahi the 1 min me hi Preeti ne kiss tod di ...... dono ek doosre se matha tika ke saans dursat karte huye jab dono ki nazar mili pehle preeti hasne lagi aur phir veer..... hihihi...... hahaha..... dono apni naak se naak, apas me chonch ki tarah lad rahe the jaise bachpan me ladate the......
Veer usko iske liye sorry bolne waala tha par Preeti usse pehle bol di " I Love You ...... bolna chahta hai par bol nahi pa raha hai..... main samajh gayi, baad me bol dena main kahan bhage jaa rahi hun bas ab kuch mat bol mujhe apne first kiss ke ahsaas ko mehsoos karne de....... i can"t belive it ki tum itna accha kiss kar sakte ho...... (ghum ke uski taraf pith kar di) ...... chalna nahi hai kya" ?
Veer yeh soch raha tha ki preeti ko bura lagega, main kaise usko kiss kar sakta hun main toh uska boyfriend bhi hun par woh kuch bhi bole jaa rahi thi aur jaane lagi...... Veer - Mere baat toh sunle......
Preeti itna kush thi ki joh woh chah rahi thi woh usko mil gaya, Preeti jaanti thi Veer ki aadat thi ki ek retro-inspection jaroor karta aur ab woh usko mauka nahi dena chahti thi tez kadmon se woh aage badhne lagi mandir ki taraf, iska ek aur bhi karan tha ki woh sharama gayi thi...... Veer usko pukarta raha par woh ab kahan sunne waali thi ...... Veer daud ke uske paas paucha.....
Veer - Arre yaar, main sorry bolna chahta hun..... tujhe bura laga hoga......
Preeti najar niche karke - Bura toh laga par hum best friend hain na toh itna chalta hai, vaise bhi tera brithday gift main nahi layi aur tu ne khud hi le kiya...... par har samay mujhse haggi-chapi mat expect kariyo...... pehle mujhe purpose kariyo phir main sochungi ki tera offer accept ya reject karun"..... yeh sab woh chalte chalte bol rahi thi.
Veer - Tujhe sach me bura nahi laga, main apni galti maanta hun pata nahi yeh kaise ho gaya i m sorry.
Preet thoda ruki phir aage bhad gai - Ainda mujhse permission lena kiss karne se pehle...... aur apna effil tower sahi kar le maa dekhegi toh kya sochegi..... ( Woh lund ki baat kar rahi thi aur sharama bhi ishi wajah se thi)
Veer ish kiss ke chakar me yeh bhi bhul gaya ki uska lund hard hokar khada tent bana huya hai uske pajme-kurte me jisse preeti ne dekh liya aur sar ghum ke jaane lagi par Veer to veer tha woh khada lund kiye aise hi bhaga jab Preeti se reh nahi gaya to batana hi tha usko...... Veer sakpaka ke dono niche dekha aur haathon se apne tent chupya aur right side me chal diya...... Preeti hasti hi jaa rahi thi, mere kiss se mera veer itna excite ho gaya, kuch aur kar dungi toh kya haal hoga......
5 min baad Veer louta toh bargad ke niche white colour ki Fortuner gadi khadi thi woh samajh gaya ki Rubi Thakur ki gadi hai, piche left side ka door khol ke Preeti boli, ander ki side beth ...... Usko dikha ki Rubi black goggels pehn ke driving seat pe bethi hai, uski daadi front seat pe pasri hai..... Piche ki seat pe right side uski maa bethi hai, voh bola tu bich me beth ......
Preeti - main hamesha aage ya side ki seat per bethti hun, jaldi beth varna late hoga.
Rubi - Jaldi karo mujhe office bhi jaana hai ......
( Rubi consturction site ke office ki baat kar rahi thi, bhikampur ke outskirt me highway ke paas, bade thakur ji ki jameen pe 200 indvidual plot ki colony develap ho rahi thi jiska consturction Rubi ke chachaji Karan thakur ki company kar rahi thi...... Rubi ka 35% share tha ish colony me, yeh uska 1st project tha )......
Bade thakur ji ne isko kam-dhande pe lag diya tha varna sabko prashan karti, Rubi bahot mehant kar rahi thi ish project pe ....... uski nigha apne chacha ke construction company pe thi.
Veer haar maankar apni maa ke bagal me betha aur phir preeti beth gayi...... " Itni dair kun huyi " uski maa ne pucha.....
Veer - Bas aise hi preeti se baat karne me time ka pata nahi chala..... woh Preeti ke aage apne ko sharmida mana raha tha...... driver sabse piche ki seat pe betha tha.
Ramadevi - Chal ab toh sab aa gaye...... veer tu aise muh ltka ke kyun betha hai jaise kisi ne teri ijjat lut li ho, mard ki tarah beth na sedha satar..... dono ladkiyan aur daadi hasne lagi..... par had toh jab ho gayi driver bhi hasne laga jor jor se......
Veer pichli seat ki tarah dekhkar bola - Tu kyun itni batteesi phad raha hai, agar main piche ki seat pe aaga tab teri ijjat rehagi ya lut jaagi agar mera ek thappad khake tu gaadi se nahi gir gaya tab batna......
Ek toh Rubi ka driver dubla patla tha aur dussra woh Veer pe hase hi jaa raha tha......
Driver - Maaf kar dijye maalik mere 2 chote chote bacche hain, aur haath jodne laga......
Sab gussa huye jab veer pe driver hasa...... sab ne dekha ki veer ki ek hi damki se driver ki hawa nikal gayi. Veer - Chal kaan pakad aur daadi se maafi maang
Marta kya na karta kaan bhi pakde aur Ramadevi se maafi bhi maangi, usko veer ki takat ka pata tha, ek jhappad bhi nahi jhel sakta tha. Rubi abhi chup thi usko pata tha ki kya saja deni hai...... par Preeti se na ruka gaya pichi ki seat se thodi khadi si huyi aur uska sidha gaal suja diya chakkkkkkk ...... Veer ne usko pakad liya aur bola - Ishne maafi toh maang li thi phir kun maari .....
Preeti - Isko yaad rakhne ke liye ki ishne kya galti ki hai......
Veer - Arre meri amma main iski kinch raha tha aur tu isko ek chipka bhi di...... shant maate shant ....... uske sar ko pyaar se thap thap ne laga ...... woh veer ki side ki baju pakad li aur uske kandhe pe sar tika di.
Veer ne jab apni ma ki taraf dekha toh woh bhi dono ko dekh rahi thi, usne apna doosra hath apni maa Rani ke khande pe rakha...... Rani uska haath apne haath me pakad li aur dusre kandhe pe apna sar tika di...... Rubi ek ungli se daadi ko piche ki seat ka nazara dekhne ka isara ki , jab daadi thodi tedhi hokar picche ki seat pe dekhi toh muskara di aur veer bhi smile karne laga. Yeh rasta gaon ke bahar-2 sidha Veer ke naye makan pe jata tha, thoda lambha jaroor tha lekin pakki sadak thi.......
Fortuner ruki Veer ke makan ke saamne, jahan kayi log tent lag rahe the saamne ki khali jagha pe...... Dharamveer unko hidayat de raha tha...... Veer uski maa aur daadi niche utre, Preeti bhi uteri......
Dharamveer unke paas aakar - Arre tum log aa gaye itni dair kyun lagi.
Preeti ne unke pair chuhe woh bola - Jeet raho beti..... main tum se kitni baar kaha hai betiyan pair nahi chuhti par tum manti hi nahi......
Preeti unko kandhe pe haath rakh ke boli - Papa betiyan jisko apna bada samajhti hain unke pair chuhti hain. ( dharam ko papa hi bolti thi kyonki veer bhi bolta tha, ab jawan ho gayi par usne apni aadat shimla se aane ke baad toh woh apna hak hi samajti thi veer aur uske family pe..... akhir usko veer ke ghar hi aana hai.)
Dharam hasne laga - Tu dubli ho gayi hai, 2 hafte yahin ruk jaa acchi sudh kurak khaana tu bhi Veer ki tarah tagdi ho jayegi ...... haahaahaa
Rubi ne horn bajya tab uski taraf dekh Dharamveer woh dono haath jod di uska namste ka yehi style tha aur Preeti ko chalne ko kahi..... Sabse vida lekar dono behne chali gayi apni kothi ki taraf.
Sab garhwaale makan me jaane ke liye aage bhade tabhi ek taxi horn maarti unke makan pe ruki...... sab jaante the ki taxi ka horn bajane ka matlab hai dhamal chokdi ki 2 sadas gayi aur 2 aur taxi me aa gayi...... nahi samjhe main samjhata hun.....
Taxi ke dono gate khol kar Saloni aur Reena hooting karti hurreeeee ..... Veer ki taraf lapki woh bhi dar ke bhaagne ko tyaar tha...... Saloni jeans top me thi aur Reena ne shorts aur shirt pehni thi, Veer ki dono didi bahot khubsurat thi apni maa Rani ki tarah aur bade seharon me padhne se unko fashion ki samajh bhi thi...... dono kafi modern aur smart thi.......
Saloni
Reena
Dono ka haath pakad ke Ramadevi ne unko roka aur boli - Khabardar aaj Veer ko tum dono ne haath lagya toh tumari tangein tod dungi..... aaj uska janamdin hai koi shararat nahi woh tumhara chota saga bhai hai.
Reena apni daadi ka gal thapa thapti huyi boli - oh hoo...... ish baar nahi marenge bas thodi iski seva karenge......
Saloni - Arre daadi ji hamra chotu hum dono ka bhi toh kuch lagta hai......
Veer darke garden ke pas tiles pe khada tha, dono didi log jitna lad karti apne bhai se utna usko discipline me bhi rakhti, Reena toh uski galti pe hath ya dande ka bhi istemal kar deti thi...... Saloni jaada samajhdar thi woh Veer ko jaldi se koyi saaja nahi deti thi par kadak mijaj woh bhi thi...... Veer ki ek nahi 3-3 maa thi, dono didi bachpan se hi usko apna beta maanti thi...... ab unka chotu itna bhi nahi chota reh gaya tha woh poora gubru phelwan ban gaya tha 6 ft se jaada ht ka aur handsome bhi..... uski trimed shave uski mardangi ko jaada nikharti thi......
Dono rowdy chaal me chalke uski taraf kareeb aane lagi...... sheru dono ki dekhkar bhokne laga ( jaise keh raha ho ab dikha ki tu sher hai mein kutta hun, dono ko dekh kar tu billi kun ban gaya.... bhuuuu ....... bhuuuuu).....
Veer - didi aaj mera birthday hai..... pls aaj mat marna..... woh ek ek kadam picche hatne laga..... dono usko pakadne ke liye bhaagi woh bhi bhaag ke tactor pe chad gaya...... baar baar unko yaad dila raha tha ki mera birthday hai......
Saloni - Itna kyun ro raha hai, sharfat se niche aa jaa varna ......
Veer tactor ke bonet pe chad gaya tha ......
Reena - Humko bhi mouka de wish karne ka..... pucccccch..... aaj beta pyaar se aa jaa varna .......
dono uske pair pakdi toh bola - accha..... accha....... me niche aata hun bas marna mat.....
Yeh nazara Prachi bhi dekh rahi thi chhat se, Veer jab tactor se niche utra toh dono didion uska left-right kaan pakad liya.....ahhhhhhh didiiiii mat karoo
"Bhag ke dikha ab..... hum tujhe kaha nahi jaanege aur uske gaalon ko chumne lagi - Happy birthday chotu ..... Many happy returns of the day...... mera sona bhai ...... mera janu bhai...... usko galon ko chumte huye baari baari se dono usko maakan ki bethak me le gayi ...... aur usko gulguli karne lagi ek bade takht pe lita ke aur dono uske side me let gayi...... uske ek ek baju ka takiya bana ke.......
Ramadevi - itni badi ho gayi hain inki shararat abhi bhi chalu hai...... kapde dekho jaise tameej nahi hai inko, sehar me toh nangi ghumti hongi..... ab se inka padhna likhna band...... Dharam tu hasa raha hai...... shaadi kar de dono ki jaldi varna kahin haath se nikal gayi toh main kiso ko muh dikhaungi...... main tujhse keh rahin hun maharani shaiba......
Rani muh bichke jawab di - Aap hi bol do inko maaji...... ya veer ke pitaji bolen..... mujhe bahot kaam hai veer ke liye nasta bhi banna hai.....
Rani kitchen me chali gayi aur Rama apni bahu ko kosti rahi, Dharam bhi kishak liya apni betiyon ka saaman utarwane ke liye taxi ke pass. Aisa nahi tha ki Dharamveer unko veer se jaada pyaar karta tha bas usne saari jimedaari betiyon ki Rani pe saunp di thi...... waise bhi dono honhaar thi ab toh doctor aur vakil banne waali thi..... ushse jaada kush kon baap hoga.....
Gaon waale sahi kehte the ki Bhene ho toh Veer jaisi joh khud padhai ki aur top karti aayi hain, apne bhai ko padha ke kabhi second nahi aane di ...... ek vakil hai doosri doctor...... aur kya chahye Dekhna Veer bohat bada aadmi banega...... baat toh unki bhi sahi thi ek baar ko bas career shuru karna baaki tha.
Driver aur Dharam dono ladkiyon ka saman le aaye aur Rani ek noukrani ke sath bacchon ke liye desi ghee ke aloo ke prathe, dhai aur aam ka acchar...... Veer ka favorite nasta tha aur meete me badam ka halwa ban rahi thi...... Driver apna payment aur ek glass doodh peekar chala gaya..... 3 bhai bhen gappe marne lage, Dharamveer ke alwa kisi ko pata nahi tha ki Pracchi aayi huyi hai aur woh bhi dusre kam me laga huya tha toh bhul hi gaya tha.....
Kuch dair Rani aur uski betiyon ko kos ke Rama bhi sheru ko lekar bethak me aa gayi thi......
Rama teeno ko thakt pe lete dekhi - Thoda tamijh se betho dono, Reena ki bacchi itni choti choti nikar pehn ke aayi hai sharam nahi tujhe......
Reena thodi tedi kheer thi woh bister pe beth gayi aur boli - Itna kun jal rahi hai budhiya...... meri marji hai main chahe nangi ghumo ya kapde me mujhe mat sikha...... chal apna kaam kar sheru ki landi saaf kar.
Ramadevi ki jhant jhulas gayi - hayeee rammmmm .......hayeee ........ main toh barbad ho gayi aisi karjali betiyan paida ki hain ish kulta ne..... main ish ghar me nahi rahugi apne peehar chali jaungi...... mera yahan kon hai joh ish budhape me saath de......
yeh nazara kuch naya nahi tha dono veer ki badi bhene Ramadevi ko ched deti thi aur woh itni kadvi baat karki unko sirf kosti rehti thi, ab woh Rani ya uski betiyon pe haath nahi utha sakti thi...... waise usne teeno ko bahot baar maara bhi tha aur 2-2 tak khana bhi nahi diya tha , yeh purani baat hai...... usko lagta tha ki teeno maa betiyan usse badla le rahi hai...... par sach yeh tha teeno ne maaf kar diya tha Ramadevi ko par tanne marne me 4on kam nahi thi.......
Saloni ne veer ke muh pe haath rakh diya tha usko bhi kayi maheene ho gaye the apni daadi ki gaaliyan sune..... woh bhi maje le rahi thi..... Sirf ek veer hi tha joh apni daadi ke support me aata tha par saloni didi ne uska muh bandh kar diya tha......
Reena - (khadi hokar) jaada tarr...... tarr...... karne ki jaroorat nahi hai, bhaag ja yahan se yeh mere bhai chotu ka ghar hai aur tijori ki chabi meri maa ko saup dena......
Tijoori ki baat sunkar Rama bhadak gayi aur boli - Yeh sab mere pote ka hai aur chabi de meri juti...... main yahin rahugi apne pote ke saath, tum teeno maa beti kahin bhi jaa ke muh kala larwa lo...... aur gusse me apne kamre me piar patak ke chali gayi.....
Prachi veer ke kamre me laptop pe timepas karne lagi thi, usko tab pata chal jab kisi ne horn bajaya gaadi ka woh dekhne ke liye veer ke kamre se chhat pe chali gayi aur apni dushman Preeti ko apni badi bhen Rubi ke saath gadi me bethte dekhi...... uski Preeti se kabhi aama saamna nahi huyu par veer ki muh se kafi tareef sun chuki thi...... woh wapas jaane lagi thi tab veer ki badi bheno ko dekhke ruk gayi aur saara damra dekha...... veer ke room me ek chitthi likhi aur uske laptop ke niche rakh di woh thodi sad thi...... veer ke liye usne gift aur card liya tha joh subha dene aayi thi apni scooty pe..... veer ki daadi shor mach rahi thi aur Prachi jeena utar ke 6th seedhi pe ruk kar sab sun rahi thi.....
Prachi
Sheru ko Reena didi ne awaaj di woh uske paas chal gaya jab jhuk ke usko pyaat dikhne lagi tab koyi saya usne dekha joh kuch upar ki seedhi pe khada tha aur jaakar dekhi - Oye tu hai main sochi chor hoga ....... sheru bhi seedhi chadke Prachi ko sungha, prachi bhi pyaar se uski garden ko sehlane lagi.....
Reena majak me veer ko boli - Chotu tu yahan hai aur tere dil ka chor, chori karne aaya hai ......
Prachi seedhi utar ke niche saamne aa gayi - Di (reena ko) main koyi chor nahi hun, main sirf veer ko wish karne aayi thi...... aur reena ke gale mili.
saloni aur veer bhi takht se utar ke uske paas aa gaye...... sach me kisi pari jaisi sundar lag rahi thi ish suit sakwar me...... salone ke gale mili aur veer se shake hand kiya aur boli - Happy Birthday Karamveer , my best wishes for you..... Veer ne usko thanks kaha..... dono bheno ne prachi ke haath se gift aur card ke liya......
Saloni didi- Tum dono jab tak gale milo hum maa ko card aur gift dikha ke aate hai......
Reena jaate jaate - Kiss bhi kar sakti ho ...... hihihi .......
Dono sharama gaye aur dono bhene apni maa ke paas kitchen me chali gayi......
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