Adultery Veer ki Kahani......... (AGNIVEER)

[rahultheruler]

DOSTON main ish forum pe naya hun .....
Main ek nayi story start karne jaa raha hun.... Umeed karta hun aapko pasand aayegi.
"Veer ki kahani ..... (AgniVeer)"

Ish kahani ke sab partr kalpanik hain, Yeh kahani keval manoranjan ke liye ish forum pe likhi gayi hai, jiska kisi jeevit ya mrat insaan se koyi lena dena nahi hai. Aap sab mera sehayog v saath de ish kahani purn kar sakun..... Dhanyawad.

Update - 24-(1) ........ posted today

 

[Abhi32]

Happy Dussehera doston aur mitron
Next update friday ko aayega.

Ok bro

 

[rahultheruler]

Rubi thakur

 

[Mahendra Baranwal]

Update 2

(Birthday Boy )

Veer jab chota tha tabse bahot jigyasu balak tha, uski maa aksar usko chand, tare, grah aur brahmand ki kahani sunati thi jise woh bade chav aur tasli se sunta tha ....... das saal ke hote huye woh apni maa se jid karne laga ki usko ek doorabeen (Telescope) dila de, kuch mahine baad Rani uski baat maan gayi aur uske pitaji se kehkar 1500rs ka chota sa doorabeen dila diya...... uski dono badi bheno ne uske intrest ko dekhkar usko Khagol-vigyan (astronomy) ki basic books gift karne lagi har saal uske janamdin par..... Veer ke gyan me ijafa hone laga photo waali books usko grah aur taron ke baare me aakash me raaton ko apne sawal khojne laga..... telescope ki bhi limit hoti hai , dusri duniya ke baare me jaane laga tha ki usko high resolution ka telescope chahiye......

Jab solah saal ka huya toh mobile khreed ne ki jagah apni pocket money se 11 hazar ka new telescope khareed liya...... uski maa uska pakash li ki jiska interest ho woh hi toh khreed liya isme kya burai hai jab uske baap ne kaha ki yeh fijul kharcha kar diya..... badi bheno ne Veer ke intrest ko defend kiya.

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apne naye makkan ke chubare waale room ke side me fit kar diya, saaf raat ko jab badaal na ho ghanto bhar saare aasman me naye grah, tare, galaxy khojta rehta...... uski knowledge net ki wajah se bahot jaada bhad gayi thi...... Veer ek baar Ladakh jaana chahta tha, jis samay mausam aur aakash jaada saaf ho, Ladakh ucchi jagha hai aur vatavaran bhi saaf hai toh image high zoom telescope se dekh sakunga...... lekin maa jaane ki ijajat ne degi.


Ab aage.......

Veer ne blub ka switch band karke night lamp jal diya tha, kamre me halki roshni ho gayi thi ...... Rani ab palang ke bister pe sidhi let gayi thi, sar ke niche takiya laga ke apna patticot sahi ki joh uski janghon tak chad gaya tha......

Veer palang pe beth kar apni maa ke blouse ka uper wala huk kholne laga.....

Rani - Aaj tu 18 saal ka ho gaya hai agar koyi dekh lega ki tu abhi bhi mera doodh peeta hai toh kya jawab dungi main kisko ?

Woh ushe rokne ki jaara si khosis bhi nahi kar rahi thi jaise yeh dono ka roj waala routine kaam ho aur vaise hi aaram se bister pe leti rahi aur Veer apna kaam karta huya akhiri huk bhi khol diya..... uske muh me paani aa gaya yeh najara dekhkar jab blouse se Rani ki badi badi choochiyan pinjra phaad ke khuli hawa me saans lene lagi..... uski aankhon me gajab si chamak aa gayi jaise bachda apni maa gaaye ke than dekhkar ponch hilta huya khush hota hai aur saare bandhan tod kar daud ke jab gaaye ke thano me muh lag deta hai...... yehi sthiti ab Veer ki thi bas woh apni maa Rani ki aagya ka intzaar karte huye bola.....

Veer - Kisi ko nahi pata chalega, na aap batogi aur na main..... kiwad bhi band kar diya hai aur light bhi off hai ab kyon dekh lega...... apni maa ka doodh peena saubhagya ki baat hoti hai, aap punya ka kaam kar rahi ho na ki koi paap.

Apne logic deta huya Rani ki baju me uski taraf muh karke takiye ke niche bister pe let gaya...... woh bhi muskara rahi thi ki kaise aap-aap kar raha hai varna woh Rani ko tu hi kehkar sambodhit karta tha par laad karna ho ya doodh pina ho woh bahot meetha bolne lagta..... Rani uske muh ki taraf karvat leke let gayi aur blouse ka front hata ke apni malai jaisi sundar poora gola aakar 36d size ki left choochi aage karke Veer ke sar pe haath rakh li aur woh apna muh khol kar choochi ke nipple pe kiss karne ke baad chusne laga.....

Rani ek haath ki ungliyon se apne bete ke sar ke baalon ko sehla rahi thi aur doosre se usko apne kareeb kar li taaki uska ling ki chuban uske ghutne aur janghon se touch karti rahe..... Veer ht. me itna lamba tha ki apni maa ki choochi se doodh peete huye palang se uske pair dedh ft bahar nikle the par usko kisi ki parwa na thi bas maa ka meetha doodh peene ka sukh le raha tha aankhein bandh karke..... maa ki choochiyon me usko swargh jaisa ahsaas milta, Rani ko doodh kam utarta tha ish umer me par 2-3 din me woh apne laal ko stanpan kar hi deti thi isliye woh ushe apne se alag kahin jaane nahi deti thi......

Yeh khaas din tha aur uski maa sabse khaas banna chahti thi..... kuch toh Rani ke dimagh me locha chal raha tha uski uhapoh waali sthiti thi.... ek baar ko Veer ne jorse nipple chus diya uske daant bhi lag gaye toh uski maa mouh se tez siski nikali ahhhhhh maaaaa.... aur usne wahi haath se sar pe chapat laga di.....

Rani - Kutton waali harkat karega toh main bich me chali jaungi..... siiiiiii.....ahhhhh..... mujhe dard dene me tujhe maja aata hai...... ahhhhhh aise hi chaat mere laal...... dard tu ne diya hai chaat ke marham bhi lag de mere Veeree..... hmmmmm..... aiseeeee hiiiiii......

Veer josh me apni maa ka nipple kaat liya tha jab woh uske kacche me lund ke bade se ubhar ko jor se apne ghutne se daba di thi...... woh nipple ko muh se nikal ke chaatne laga uske uroj ko pakad ke..... uski maa ne yeh jaanbuj ke kiya tha par woh apni galti hi maan raha tha..... iska yeh nitaja nikla ki Veer ushi choochi ko daba raha tha jisko woh pyaar se chaat raha tha..... Rani ne uska khali haath apni doosri choochi pe rakh diya aur boli....

Rani - Ahhhhh sabash mere sher, meri doosri choochi me bhi thodi kharish si ho rahi hai usko bhi sehla de par dheere se..... ufffff tu mera raja beta hai, maa ko tang mat kar uski choochi kaat ke bas inki seva kar tujhe meva ke roop me mera doodh milega..... hmmmm aise hi mere bacche.....

Veer bhi apni maa ki chalaki samajh raha tha par usne yeda banke peda khaane ki soch li thi, maa bete unhi lage huye the.....

Udhar Veer ki daadi ji Ramadevi aaj bhi subha 4:30 baje uth gayi thi aur naha ke puja kar rahi thi..... Ramadevi aur Dharamveer ka kamra saath me aage piche tha aur angan paar karke Veer ka kamra tha par usne upar ki mamjil pe dono didi ke kamre ke baad ka apna kamra bana tha...... Veer ki dulhaniya ka kamra ground floor wala sab usko chidate the..... Rani jab subha Veer ke room ko jaane ke liye jeene pe chadi toh usne apni saas ka kamra paar kiya tha aur Rama ne usko jaate dekh liya tha par kuch na boli yeh toh uska roj ka kaam tha Veer ko jaaghna har doosre teesre din woh kuch dair se wapas aati thi...... uski saas bhi samajh jaati thi yeh nahi sudhergi par 1 saal se tokna bandh kar di thi.

Aaj bhi petticot aur blouse me Rani jeene ki siddiyan chad rahi thi Rama puja karti usko dekh li thi aur mann hi mann muskura rahi thi," ish bewkuf aurat ko kab akal aayegi jab iska beta khule saand ki tarah ishpe chad jayega tab roti rahegi meri bhosdi phaad di mere sage bete ke musal lund ne"..... hey ram ram ram ..... main yeh kya soch rahi hun subha subha..... woh apne kaan pakad ke bhagwaan se maafi mangi.....

(Isse do baat toh clear thi, daadiji ko pata hai ki Veer ka lund bahot bada hai par usne dekha kab aur doosri baat hai ki woh yehi samajh rahi thi ki Veer ka lund Rani nahi sambhal payegi yani daadi bahot experiance waali hai usne pehle bhi aise lund sambhale hai yani dada ka ya kis or ka ? yeh baat toh teh hai ki achanak unko aache diamagh me itni gandgi kahan se aaye ? yeh daadi ki mann ki baat kise pata hogi.)

Ramadevi jaanti thi ki uska pota mardon me asli mard bade lund-dhari hai usne do baar usko nanga dekha hai yehi picchle mahine galti se, kacche me ubhar toh pehle se bada hi lagta tha par asli me kala bhusnd mota ajgar hai Veer ka ling..... pehli baar woh bhi dar gayi thi par doosri baar woh bhi apni budhi choot khujne se na rok payi. Asli baat yeh thi ki Rani aur Veer pe Ramadevi ko poora vishwas tha par kisi ka mann bhakne ke liye ek chingari kafi hai...... aaj Veer ka janamdin hai aaj rehne deti hun, aaj akhri baar doodh pilane deti hun, phir dono ke kaan mujhe hi anthne hoge. Uska mann aaj puja me nahi lag raha tha 5:45 ho gaye the itni diar kyun lag rahi hai dono ko .......

Dharamveer bhi uth gaya tha, uska sar dard kar raha tha ...... raat me jaada hi pee li thi, woh sar pakad ke apne kamre se kitchen me gaya nimbu paani bana ke piya tab thodi rahat mili aur subha ke 6 baj gaye hai maa ke kamre se ghanti bajne ki awaaj aa rahi thi..... apna toliya lekar latrine me ghus gaya.......

Upar Veer ki kamre me woh bade maje se apni maa Rani ki dono choochiyan thoda daba ke sehla bhi raha tha aur nipple badal-2 ke choochiyon ka doodh choos chaat ke khali kar diya tha...... Rani halki halki aahein bhar kar uska sar ke baal ko kheech rahi thi aur doosre haath se baar baar Veer ke khade laude ke ubar ko sparsh karne ki chestha kar rahi thi..... kabhi kabhi kacche me bane bade se ubhar ko dono ghutno ke bich daba bhi deti.... Veer ko maja bhi aata par yeh soch ke reh jaata ki maa aaj kya karke manegi? dono aaj se pehle itne utejit kabhi nahi huye jaise unpar koyi vashikaran ka mantr kiya ho...... dekhna hoga ki pehal kon karta hai iska jawab bhi jaldi mil gaya....

Rani ne himmat karke poora haath ka panja aage badha ke kacche ke tambu ko jakad liya yaani Veer ke laude ko..... uski aankein badi badi ho gayi aur Veer bhi ek baar ko chaunk gaya, usne right side ki choochi ke nipple chusna chhodkar pucha- Maa yeh tu kya kar rahi hai mere usko kyon pakad rahi hai?

Rani toh thagi si reh gayi ashcharye se soch kar - Hey ram, yeh kya bala pakad li mere haath ne...... itna mota..... itna sakhat...... mere dono haath me bhi na aaye.... uski vichar bich me reh gayi jab Veer ke sawal karne se hosh me aayi aur lund ke ubhar ki garamhat feel karti huyi usko hi ghudki de di - Tujhe doodh nahi peena kya ? phir main jaati hun.

Thoda sa sidhi huyi aur doosri choochi ubhar di ..... Veer apna thuk gatak ke jhat se bola - peena hai,.... aap abhi mat jaao meri pyaari maa.... aur ubhri choochi ke nipple chusne laga..... mmmmmmm .....mmmmmmm....

Rani ke chehre pe vijayai muskan thi..... apne bete kar sar sehla rahi thi pyaar se aur sidhe haath me pakde mote khunte jaise lund ko Veer ke kacche ke upar se lambai, motai acche se tatolne ke baad boli - hayeeeee tera hathiyar toh fauldi ban gaya hai aur mujhse chupa raha hai, mujhe isko dekhna hai abhi dikha aur ubhar chhodkar Veer ke kacche ka nada khol di.....

Veer phir se muh hata raha tha choochi se toh uska muh choochi me daba di sar ke piche haath rakh kar- Tu apna kaam karta reh mujhe isko nanga dekhna hai toh dekhne de, itna bada tere kaise ho gaya 3 saal pehle tak tujhe main hi nehlati thi..... dono maa-bete jaante the yeh galat ho raha hai par halat aise ban gaye the Veer apni maa ko rok na saka ya phir woh bhi yehi chahta tha..... ek baat toh saaf thi ki Rani yeh chahti thi aur Veer aisa hi karega joh uski maa chahti ho..... itne utsuk ban gaye the jaise dono ek doosre ki maun swikarti mann liye ho..... ishi baat ka dar tha Ramadevi ko.

Jab Veer ke kacche ke andar haath daal ke Rani uska vishal ajgar jaisa ling bahar apni muthi me pakad ke nikali - Itna garam hai yeh toh.... kitna sakhat pathar jaisa ..... meri ek muthi me bhi nahi aa raha hai..... ahhhhhhh..... siiiiiiiii...... dono ke muh se siskiyan nikli ...... jab Veer ki nazar apni maa se mili dono ke chehre pe khumari ke bhav the aur Rani ke petticot me uski yoni geeli hone lagi..... Veer ka supada geela tha jab uski maa ne tope ko sehla ke ush ke upar angutha phera..... Veer phir se right choochi ke nipple josh me choosne laga dono apni maa ki choochiyon ko dabte huye......

Rani - ahhhhhh..... siiiiiiiiii ...... aaram se pee na ...... tera toh geela ho gaya hai bacchu..... haa haa haa .....

Veer muh se choochi hata ke - Tu ne direct nanga aise kaske pakda hai..... tere haath ka jaadu hai toh geela hona swabhavik hai..... Maa hum kahin galat toh nahi kar rahein hain ? ..... usne apni maa ka mann tatola.

Rani uska sar apni choochi ki taraf dabai taaki uska muh busy reh - Tu bas choochi pee, jab galat lagega main tujhe rok dungi..... Veer bhi nischit hokar maa ki choochi peene laga, maa sab sahi hi karegi aisa soch liya ..... akhir tha toh apni maa ka bhakat, uske hisabh se uski maa joh karegi woh hi sahi hai. Veer apni maa ki har baat manta tha, ab 18 saal ka ho gaya hai yani baligh par iska hathiyar itna bada ho gaya hai iske baap se dugna bada hai, woh soch soch ke bas uske lund ko sehlti rahi aur kuch toh uske dimagh me chal raha tha jisse Veer anbhig tha.

Veer ko bister pe sidha kar di, ache se dekhi aur dheere-2 uske kaale ajgar ko muthiyan lagi, pata nahi kyu usko itne bade lund se dar nahi lag raha tha shayad woh uski taraf jaada aakarshit thi...... lamba hi nahi mota bhi had se jaada hai, meri chut ko toh cheer-faad hi dega..... yeh main kya soch rahi hun chiiii..... tabhi achanak kisi ne kiwad pe thak thak ki ' Rani Veer ko utha dena ' ..... yeh awaaj Ramadevi ki thi....

Rani uthke bistar pe beth gayi - "Aati hun maa ji " ...... par usne Veer ka lund nahi chhoda lekin Veer thoda dar gaya tha uske maathe pe pasine aa gaya.... jab laga uski saas chali gayi toh Veer ki taraf badh ke uske honthon ko chumne lagi aur 20 sec tak baari baari apne bete ke niche v upar ke honthon ko chusti reh jab tak Veer ko ashwat na kar di. " chitna mat kar jab tak main hun tujhpe koyi ungli nahi utha sakta, ab main chalti hun, tu bhi jaldi se aa jaana. ( aankh maar ke) Tera lund vakai shandar aur jandar hai main isko kaise sambhal paungi "..... haa haa haa .....

Veer ek toh apni daadi ke aise aane se parshan aur dar gaya tha lekin jab uski maa ne aisi baat kahai ki woh soch me pad gaya ki maa kya chahti hai?

Rani - Mujhe kyon kiss karega ? jab birthday boy itna dar gaya hai ..... hi hi hi hi

Veer ko laga uski maa uske maje le rahi hai..... woh baaz ki furti se apni maa ko bistar pe lita ke uske upar chad gaya - Mere maa hai main hi kiss karunga (woh josh se bhare lahje me bola)....

Rani uske majak udati hui uske honth pe haath rakh di - Kyu tera baap bhi toh hai, uska hak inh honthon pe jaada hai.... Veer ka chehra murjha gaya tab woh boli - Udhas na ho mere honthon pe aur jism pe sirf tera hak hoga, mera saara pyaar mere bete ki liye hai ab se.....

Veer itna khush huya ki 2 min tak apni maa ko lips kiss karta raha - Maa tum ish sansar ki sabse acchi maa ho..... muhhhh.... umhhhhhh..... mmmmmm .....

Yeh pheli martab tha ki Veer apni maa ke honthon ko poore dil laga ke chus raha tha, varna uski maa hi usko lipkiss karti thi..... blouse khula huya sirf petticot me Rani apne bete ke ling ka sprash apni yoni pe ahsaas karti usko kiss karne ka poora mauka di rahi thi, uski yoni geeli hokar petticot ko geela karne lagi..... uske itna maja aa raha tha jaise hawa me udh rahi ho, bas dil kar raha tha ki Veer unhi usko pyaar karta rahe.....

Veer inh 18 saalo me kaafi lamba ho gaya tha 6ft se jaada..... shayad apni maa ka doodh peeya itne saalo tak ek wajah yeh bhi ho sakti hai..... lakhon auraton me 1 ya 2 auratein aisi hoti hai joh lagtar apne bacchon ko apna doodh pilati rehti hai toh unke stan me lagatar lactating hormones active rehta hai, joh bacche ke doodh na peelane par swamev kam ho jaata hai..... Rani wahi special maa thi joh lagtar apne bete Veer ko 18 saal tak apna doodh peelati aa rahi thi aur aaj apne bete ko usne special gift bhi diya, usko kissing aur smooching seekhane ki kosish ki..... maa-beta ka pyaar ab maryada langhein ko tyaar tha par uski dor abhi bhi Rani ke haath me thi ya tod de ya pakde reh iska faisla ushi ko karna tha.

Poora tagdha hatakata pehlawan jaisa tha uska bete, uski body gaon ke akhade me ghanto pasina baha ke bani thi...... uske jaisa jawan londa uski umer ka aaspass ke gaon me dhoondna muskil tha..... Dharamveer dhup aur miti me kheton me kheti karne se kaale rang ka tha par Veer thode halke saaf sawla tha lekin uski badi badi naseli aankhein me koyi jaadu tha jisko dekhkar auraton aur ladkiyon uski aankhon v body dekhkar kho jaati thi jaise uski sagi maa bhi apne ko rok na saki..... uske niche padi bistar pe apne honth chuswate huyi apne dono maamon ko masalne di...... Rani yeh soch rahi thi ki itni acchi tarah se Veer kiss kaise karna seekh gaya..... koi aur hai kya jiske saath veer ne kissing seekhi ? baad me puch lungi.....

Rani - Ab toh hat jaa mere uper se..... kitna wajan hai tujhme itna bhari kaise ho gaya tu.....

Veer samajh gaya ki ab maa usko rokna chahti hai, woh bhi uski aayga ka palan kiya aur last baar apni maa ke lips pe kiss kiya..... THANK U maa for giving me everything..... you are the greatest Mother..... Rani ke upar se hat ke uski side me let gaya.

Rani seedhi bethkar apna blouse thik karne lagi, uski moti moti choochiyan blouse me sama nahi rahi thi - Tu poora jawan ho gaya hai (uske khade vishal hathiyar ko dekhke boli) aur main budhiya ho gayi hun..... ab bhi main "The Greatest" hun kya...... ?

Veer uske honthon pe apna sidha haath rakhke usko chup karwaya - Aap sabse jaada jawan aur khubsurat ho..... meri maa jaisi koyi dusri ladki nahi ish barhmand me - I LOVE YOU maa, mere liye aap sabse acchi maa ho..... apna kaccha upar kiya aur apne ajgar ko tipare me bandh kiya aur nada baandhne laga.....

Rani apne blouse ke huk lagte huye boli - Hunnn main aur Ladki ....... chaploosi bandh kar, DON aa gayi toh hum dono ki khat khadi kar degi..... tu niche jaa mere kapde almaari se lekar aa, main uper ke bathroom me naha leti hun.

* Don = Daadiji ke liye code word tha, maa, bete aur dono betiyon ka.

Veer apna kaccha adjust karta huye kiwad khol ke niche chala gaya aur Rani bistar se khade hokar apne petticot ke sookhe nichle hisse se apni yoni poochi aur bister ki chadar bhi utha li thi joh uske yoni ras se petticot ke saath niche se geeli ho gayi thi..... woh apni badi beti ke kamre me jaakar attached bathroom me nahne lagi..... woh VEER ki kissing karne se ek baar jhad gayi thi aur khud ko halki mehsoos kar rahi thi.
Veer ne bathroom ka door knock kiya - " Maa tere kapde yahan Saloni didi ke bed pe rakhein hain..... Main niche jaakar fresh hokar naha leta hun, phir mandir bhi jaana hai.

Rani bathroom se - Haan thik hai, tu jaa ready ho jaa .....

Veer niche chala gaya, Rani khuli aankhon se sapna dekh rahi ki baar baar usko nanga veer ka musal lund hi dikh raha tha ......

THE END

Shaandar

 

[Abhi32]

Aj update ayega

 

[rahultheruler]

Shaandar

Thanks bhai

 

[Mahendra Baranwal]

Update 3

Veer ka naya makan gaon me uttar pishim disha me akhiri kinare pe sthit tha joh lagbhag 2 bigha me 2 saal pehle naya banya tha.... makan se lagh kar unke khete shur ho jaate the joh lagbagh 50 ekad me ek hi chak me phaila the.....

Purana makkan gaon me aaj bhi tha joh gaon ki ghani abadi me chota aur kamzor pad raha tha. Dharamveer akela ladka tha aur uski 1 sagi bhen bhi thi joh sehar me rahti thi, uska naam Mala tha..... pati pwd me JE tha unka naam Harish tha, uske 2 bacche the, ladki Veer se 6 mahine badi naam tha Komal aur ladka 10 saal ka, naam Aditya tha.

Gaon ki jameen pe naya makan ka sujhav bade thakur ji ne diya tha aur paise se madad bhi ki thi...... makan ke do hisse the 1-1 bigha ka joh bich deewar aur bade lohe ki gate se bate the, aage ka hissa 2 manjil poora pakki kothi ki tarah tha aur picche ka hissa pasuon ke liye bana gaya tha, ek taraf lamba tin shed tha aur doosri taraf 2 bade bade kamre the joh shardi me pasu ko rakhne ke liye, ek kamra bhusa ke liye tha..... Dharamveer ne 5 bhains aur 2 gaaye pal rakhi thi jinka doodh unke parivar ke liye aur bade Thakur ji ki haveli jaata tha, baki bacha doodh dairy pe jaata tha.

1 doberman kutta bhi paal rakha tha joh dono hisse ki rakhwali karta, raat ko usko khula chhod diya jaata. Veer aur uski daadi se yeh doberman bhi darta tha jiska naam sheru tha shayad dono phelwan lagte the, dono uska khaana, pina, dhona sab care karte the...... Rani usse dur hi rehti thi usko kutte pasand nahi the iski wajah bhi thi ki usko bachpan me gali ke kutte ke kaat liya tha, 7 injection lagwane pade the.

Makan ka front hisa jisko gaon waale kothi kehte the, uski front diwar 5 ft ki thi jispar 7 ft uncha bhari lohe ka gate laga tha, deewar ke uper 1 ft katili lohe ki fencing lagi huyi thi, gate ke dono side fancy night lamp lage the.....
left side me sundar sa bagicha tha jisme nana prakar ke phool aur phal ke podhe lage the aur right side me cemented parking space sa tha joh bagiche jitni badi jagha thi...... usme ek mahidra 4 clinder tactor khada tha aur ek Scorpio gadi cover se dhaki huyi thi..... 2 badi bheno ki scooty bhi cover se dhaki thi, Veer padal ya cycle se bahar jaata tha aur roadways ki bus se college, usne kabhi sawari lene ki nahi sochi par har vahan chal leta tha, yahan tak ki tactor aur scorpio bhi bas uska liscene abhi nahi bana tha bas uske pitaji saath hote the jab bhar gaon jaana ho..... kothi ke bagiche aur parking ki jagha ke bich 7 ft ki chaudai ka rasta gate se main building tak tiles se bana huya tha.

Tiles ke baad 3 seedhi chad ke double gate ka wooden darwaja tha, ander enter kare ek gallery thi jiske left side badi si bethak thi uske 2 door the, ek parking side khulta tha...... right side badi si kitchen thi uske side me lantered gallery thi joh bigche se back portion me khulti thi gallery pe chota lohe ka gate laga huya tha joh sirf raat ko bandh hota...... kitchen ke baad bathroom tha aur daadi ka room usse sata Dharamveer ka room uske baad ek common toilet thi..... bethak ke baad verandah tha jisme dinning table aur kursiyan lagi huyi thi..... uske baad jeena tha joh upar 1st floor pe jaane ke liye tha..... jeene ke saath Veer ka room tha , jisko sab veer ki dulhaniya ka room kehte the, woh sabse bada room tha aur ushme attached bathroom toilet bhi the...... phir storeroom aur 10 ft ka covered area tha aur picche 20 ft chauda open area tha jisme ek taraf handpump aur boring jet pump laga tha, jisse kapde dhone aur choti 5 ft ki diwar olat ki tarah khula gusakhana thi jisme veer ki daadi ji subha nahati thi.

Upar ke portion me aage aadhe me khuli chhat thi jiski boudry 3 ft ki thi aur aadhe portion me 3 kamre the, do badi bheno ka jiska common attached toilet bathroom tha aur ek veer ki buaji ka room tha jeene ki side jisko Veer ne apna room banya tha.

Mala buaji se keh kar veer ko permission de di thi unka room use karne ki jab tak tere shaadi nahi ho jaati main tere room me rukti rahungi, ish room me ac bhi laga huya tha jab buaji aati toh bahot ronak rehti thi. Fufaji bagar AC ke nahi rehte the, they toh sarkari officer harmkhori aur rishwat ki aadat jaada lag gayi thi...... isliye tondh jaada nikal aayi thi.

Ek seedhi lohe ki 1st floor ki chhat pe jaati thi jahan, 3 ft ki munder bani thi...... ek badi paani ki tanki aur ek chaubara ( room ) bhi bana tha jahan veer raat ko kisi grah aur taare ki khoj me ghanton waqt bitata..... woh aksar sochta tha ki ek din woh aisa grah khojega jisme jeevan ke chinha ho.....

Ab aage......

Jab maa-bete nahene me busy the, Ramadevi aur Dharamveer nukar ke saath maveshiyon ko chara daal rahe the..... uski aurat gaaye aur bhains ka baari baari se doodh nikak rahi thi..... Thakurji ka aadmi 25 liter doodh ke diba liye Dharamveer se baat bhi kar raha tha, usko aaj jaldi haveli mein doodh phauchana tha. Sheru bhi kun kun kar raha tha usko subha hote hi bandh dete the.

Dharanveer - maa tum jab tak sheru ko uska khaana nahi dogi yeh saala aise hi rota rehega...... chup ho jaa nalaak.....

Rama aaj nayi badami colour ki saree pheni thi ushi colour ke matching ka blouse, waise woh jaadatar safed saree hi pehnti thi par kabhi kabhi khushi ke mouke pe colourful saree bhi pehan leti thi..... sach main woh sundar lag rahi thi, bhagwan ne usko lamba chouda bhari sarir diya tha usse sab darte the sirf veer chhodkar...... saandnai jaisi aurat jiska wajah lagbhag 100 kg tha badi badi phaad jaisi uski choochiyaan aur mote mote trabuj ke size ke 2 chuttad bhar nikle huye, kamar compare me palti thi , sabse pehle kisi bhi aadmi ki nazar uski heavy choochiyon pe jaati joh had se jaada extra badi thi, agar palat jaye toh uska pichwada jaada hahakari tha. Usko veer hi takkar de sakta tha joh aksar usko utha leta badi asaani se.... usko apne pote pe grav tha.

RAMADEVI

Rama boli - Haan maine iski rootiyan doodh me bhingo di hai bas 5 min de mujhe sheru, woh gaaye ki gardan pe haath pherti boli.... sheru ko pukari woh isko green signal ki tarah samajha aur bhokne laga jaise bol raha ho jaldi khaana do..... phir uske Rama bhi apne haath dhokar sheru ko khol di aur woh picche picche apni kati dum hilata aage picche bhag raha tha..... sab log sehme se usko dekh rahe the jab zanjeer se khul gaya tha..... Dharamveer jaanta tha ki sheru maa se darta bhi hai aur pyaar bhi sabse jaada karta hai..... bachpan se usse paala tha Rama ne, jab bade thakur ji ne unke parivar ko gift ke roop me diya tha.

Rama ke ek hi ishare ki dair hai saamne waale ko kitni jagah se phaad dega kuch second me yeh doberman kutta.... Dharamveer bhi usse darta tha ek baar ko toh usko hi gira liya tha par Veer ush samay saath tha ek hi chalangh me uske pas jaa kar sheru ko aisi laat mara saala 4 baar palti maar ke 10 ft dur gira football ki tarah..... koon....koon..... karte huye sheru se seedhe bhi nahi huya jaa raha..... Veer ne apne pitaji ko seedha khada kiya aur bola - aap ko kahin lagi toh nahi tab Dharamveer ne saas li main ek dam theek hun..... sheru ko dekhkar bola yeh theek toh hai. Veer ko bhi chinta huyi, saala maine jorse toh nahi maar diya isko varna daadi mera khoon kar degi, accha tha ki Ramadevi apne mayeke gayi thi. Kick itni jaberdast thi ki 4-5 pet ki maspesiyon me sojan aa gayi thi jab doctor ke paas le gaye lekin Veer ne 5 din uski lagatar seva ki apne bister pe saath sulata, uski seva karta...... ush din ke baad sheru usse bahot darta hai aur Veer bhi usko jaada pyaar karne laga hai. Ramadevi 15 din baad louti tab tak sheru ne apna naya malik bana liya tha maalkin ke saath, yeh ghatna kisi ne bhi Rama ko nahi batai warna woh bahot gussa karti.....

Sheru

Rama - Chal rahi hun baba tujhe bhi chain nahi hai 1 min ka....... ooye Dharam saam ko mehman aayenge, saara intjaam apni dekh rekh me kiyo, aaj tu ne sharab ko haath lagaya na toh sabke saamne peet kar ghar se bahar nikal dungi.

Dharam bhi khisya ke jawab diya - Maa main kahan peeta hun, bas shauk me kabhi kabhar chalta hai, (baaki 3no naukar bhi sar jhuka ke hasne lage).... Maine saara intjaam kar diya hai, halwai aate hi honge.....

Rama - Sudhar jaa, bacche baap se hi sikhte hain..... aaj tu ne pee na toh mujse bura koyi nahi hoga..... chal sheru ......aur makan ke ander chali gayi sheru ke saath aur kitchen me jaakar 1.5 litre doodh me bhingi 4 moti rootiyan chote tukde ki huyi ek bade se steel ka katora me lekar bahar bagiche ki aage rakh di, sheru do baar bhoka phir apna khana khaane laga ...... Rama bhi usko pyaar se dekh rahi thi tabhi koyi uske picche aakar uski dono aankhon ko apne haath se dhak diya......

Rama shikatai lehje me boli - Mil gayi fursat apni maa se, abhi time hi kya hua hai ......

Ji haan woh veer hi tha joh apni daadi ki aankhon ko dhak diya tha aur keha - Pehle mera pura naam bolo daadi warna haath nahi hathunga .....

Rama haste huye boli - Jug Jug jiyo mere sher ..... mere beta KARAMVEER SINGH ...... Janam din ki dheron subhkamnaye.

Veer ne haath hata liya aur Rama palat ke dekhi...... naye safed kurte pajame me Veer ek Rajkumar sa dikh raha tha, uske chehre pe chirparchit pyaari si muskan thi - DHAYNWAAD DAADI JI aur Rama ke dono charan jhuk ke apne mathe se lagya baari baari aur khade hote huye uske pair chuh ke ashirwad liya......

Itna samaan dekhkar woh apni bahu ke gungaan karne lagi, Baccho ko acche sanskaar di meri RANI bahu ...... aasun aane se phele usne kajal ek ungli pe nikal liya tha aur boli " Iswar tujhe saari duniya ki khushiyan de.....tere lambi aayu ki main hamesh prathana karti hu Shankar bhagwan se...... pehle mere gale lag jaa mere jighar ke tukde, apni daadi ko bhi nihal kar de"...... aage bhad kar Veer ke left kaan ke picche kajal ka tika lagai taaki buri nazaron se bachaye aur uske maathe ko chum ke dono gaal pe kiss ki " mera veera ...... mera laal " ...... usko gale lagakar rone lagi...... uski pith pe haath pherti uski kolhi bahar li, Veer janta tha ki maa se pehle mila isliye daadi kuch dukhi hai..... uski daadi kabhi Veer se naraaj nahi hoti thi bas usko daant deti jab woh shetani karta.

Udhar sheru dono ki taraf pith karke jaldi jaldi apna khana khaa raha tha, kab Veer ka mood badal jaaye usko khaane se rok kar dog waali exercise karwa de...... woh kuch jaada jaldi me khaane laga tha lekin Veer bhi usko aaj dantne ke mood me nahi tha.....

Veer bhi apni daadi ko kaske dono haath ke gher me lekar apne badan ki takat dikhata huya thoda halke se apni agosh me bhich liya..... "ahhhhhh...... moriiiii mayiaaaa ..... itni jorseeeee na bhichhhhh mujheeeee "...... uski pith pe ek dhol jaama di..... Rama ki hahakari choochiyan Veer ke chaud aur majbut seene me jaise kuchal si gayi go...... veer se yeh ajane me huya tha isliye baat badal diya.....

Veer - daadi aap ro kyon rahi ho, ab main bada ho gaya hun ..... aapke saare sapne poora karunga. Please chup ho jaao nahi toh apni godi me utha ke ghuma dunga...... Aap roti hui acchi nahi lagti bas gussa karti sab pe rob jaamti huyi acchi lagti ho..... haa haa haa ..... aur apni daadi ko aise utha liya kamar pakad ke jaise woh kitni halki ho ..... Rama ka wt 100 ke aas pass tha aur haskar usko gol gol ghume laga ..... haa haa haa .....

Rama - Mujhe niche utar de..... mujhe chakar aa raha hai..... maan jaa beta ......

Veer ruk gaya aur daadi ke dono pair niche tika diya tiles pe, woh uski pith pe 2 gutoo maari - Itna bada ho gaya hai tujhe main hi milti hun majak karne ke liye..... dono apni saans niyantrit karte ek doosre se chipke khade hua the jaise do phelwana ek doosre se satt ke khade ho..... waise bhi Veer hi tha joh itni moti bhari apni daadi ko yun aasni se utha leta tha..... uski mardangi ko Ramadevi acchi tarah se jaan gayi thi bas bister me kitni dair tikta hai yeh belagam saand yeh toh janchne ka visye tha. Uske dada joh na kar paaye woh pota kar raha tha, Rama ko Rani se jalan bhi hoti thi asli mard paida ki hai woh joh main na kar saki...... " subha subha majak udhta hai, main kab tere pe gussa karti hun, mere anjar panjar sab dheele kar diya hai tu...... aaj tujhe gaali bhi nahi de sakti, kal milo tujhe main theek karti hun bahot bigad gaya hai"...... Veer hasta raha aapni daadi ki baat sunte huye....

Udhar Dharam bhi sab naukaron ko unka kaam samjha ke bagiche ke paas aa gaya jahan daadi pote hasi majak kar rahe the ek doosre ki bahon me bahein daal kar, sehru itni jaldi me tha 3 min me hi saara khaana chatt kar gaya, woh sust leta tha....

Dharam- Aare Veer apni daadi ko kyun rula raha hai apne janamdin pe? ..... Beta Janamdin ki bahot badhai ho..... woh english me kya kehte hain ..... HAPPY WALA BIRTHDAY hai tera..... woh apni english par itra raha tha .....

Apne baap ki awaaj sunkar Veer apni daadi se alag hokar Dharam ke kareeb aaya - Pitaji english me bole te hain Happy Birthday to you.....

Dharam - hain main wahi bolana chahta tha, ek hi baat hai .....

Veer muskara ke aage badha aur unke pair chuhkar arhirwad liye.....

Dharam apne bete ko kandhe se pakad ke Veer ko seedha kiya - Kyon maa apne Veer ki nazar nahi utaregi, kitna bada ho gaya hai aur lambha bhi mujhse aur maa se bhi..... Beta bhagwan tumhe saari khushiyon se navaje ..... aur uska maatha chum liya....

Rama bhi Veer se sat ke uska haath pakad li - Maine apna kaam ( nazar utarna) kar diya hai, ab teri joru kahan hai joh Veer ko mandir le jaane waali thi ..... ya abhi bhi so rahi hai kya maharani ? .... last dailoge Rama ne Veer ki taraf aankhein nacha ke kaha, jaise keh rahi ho mujhe sab pata hai bacchu tu subhu apni maa ki choochiyan choos ke aaya hai.....

Veer sanat swar me kaha - Maa tyaar ho rahi hai aur baat palat ke kaha - pitaji mera gift kahan hai.

Dharam - Arre main toh bhool hi gaya aur kurte ki jeb se 2100rs Veer ko diya, usne muskara ke khushi khushi paise le liye..... uski yehi acchi aadat thi joh mil raha hai ushi me khush raho varna joh mil raha hai woh phir kabhi nahi milega, yeh gunn uska unique bante the.....

(***Aur bhi khubiyan thi Veer ki, jaise jaise story aage badhti jayegi sab khubiyan bhar aa jayegi..... waise aap log readers Like ka button dabane me kanjusi na kare jam ke har update enjoy karte huye padhein)

Rama bhadak gayi - Kanjush kahin ka..... arre itne paise me ek accha sa mobile bhi nahi aayega..... Veer tu mere saath chal yeh tera baap ke hathon se paise nikalwana aasan nahi hai ..... bas isko sharab peekar randiyon ka dance dekhna hi aata hai..... Rama apne bete Dharam pe gussa nikal rahi thi asliyat me woh Rani se naraaj thi.

Dharam sar jhuka ke apni maa ki kadvi lekin sach baatein sunta raha, Rama veer ko apne kamre me le gayi aur veer mann hi mann muskara raha tha ki maa kaise ish aadmi ke saath soti hai usko badbu bhi nahi aati sharab ki, kaise usko lips pe kiss de sakti hai ? Ab main maa ki lips ka ekmatar hakdaar ban gaya hun..... maa keh toh yehi rahi thi, ab se main maa ko ish sharabi ke saath nahi sone dunga..... maa sirf meri hai sirf meri.....

uske mann me dusri baat aayi - tu kaise rok sakta hai maa ko pitaji ke saath sone se..... woh unki biwi hai na ki teri.....

Dil se awaaj uthi aur dab bhi gayi - main nahi rok sakta maa ko unke saath sone se lekin request toh kar hi sakta hun maa se.....

Mann - arre murkh ladke maa ne tere pitaji se shaadi ki hai aur tum teeno bheno aur bhai ko paida ki hai, 7 phere liye hain, jindgi bhar ek saath jeene marne ki kasam khai hain aur woh tere liye apne pati ko chhod degi aur tujhse shaadi toh nahi kar sakti..... duniya tum dono pe thukegi.

Dil - ush sharabi ko mita de, kahin dur le ja apni maa ko sabse durr ..... chiiiiii main yeh nahin kar sakta ......

Veer jab hosh me aaya jab daadi uske haath pe 100 ki noton ki poori gaddi rakhi - koyi accha sa mobile le lena aur paise lage toh mujhse maang lena.

Tabhi Rama ke kamre me Rani khule baal me zamni rang ki saree v blouse pehne aankhein aur sar jukha ke ander aayi, apne saar pe palu karke apni saas ke pair chuhi..... Rama ushe dekhar bahot gusse me aa gayi thi uska bas chale toh ek ulte haath ka Rani ke munh pe raseed kar deti par pehle Veer ki taraf dekhi toh woh bhi apne daadi ke haav bhaav dekhkar dukhi sa ho gaya...... Rani ko bhi bahot sharam aayi thi ki itna late ho gayi hun maaji bahot gussa karegi, isliye bichari si bankar saas ke kamre me aayi aur veer bhi tha andar kamre me mana hi loongi.....

Na chahte huye bhi gusse ko kabu ki, Rani ke sar pe haath rakhi - Tera beta saare jamane me humare khandan ka naam rosan kare...... aur Veer ki taraf dekhi ki woh uske haath jod ke isara kiya maa ko maaf kar de daadi, tab poora ashriwad di - Jeeti reh bahurani, tujhe aur veer ki baghwan lambi umar kare.

Veer ki taraf jab woh phir dekhi toh woh khush hote huye apni daadi ke gale lag gaya aur jab uski maa khadi ho gayi toh usko bhi doosri side se gale laga liya..... " Daadi aur Maa main aap dono se bahot pyaar karta hun bas aapko ladte huye nahi dekh sakta"..... done ke maathe pe kiss kar diya baari baari.....

Rani - agar aap mujhse naraj ho toh apni beti maan ke maaf kar dena maaji.....

Ramadevi, Veer ke left kaan khichte huye boli - Yeh toh chahta hai hum lade mare, humari narajgi, raaji aapas me chalti rehti hai, tu bich me kyon roti sake raha hai...... dono hasne lagi.....

Veer - Ahhhhh daadi mera kaan ko ukhad hi dogi kya, aaj mera birthday hai....

Rani ne Veer ka doosra kaan pakad liya - tere itni umar ho gayi kya hum dono ko ladwayega, birthday huya toh kya.... haath jod ke mafi maang.

Veer toh dono ke bich me fas gaya, ladies kya na karwa de..... usne haath jodkar bola- maaton tumhari Jai ho, mujhe maaf kar do.....

Dono ne kaan chhod diya aur dono apni side ke veer ke gaal pe chummiyan lene lagi.....

Tabhi Dharam ki awaaj aayi woh bethak me doodh ka hisab dairy me note kar raha tha - Veer beta apni maa ke saath mandir nahi jaana kya?

Veer - jaate hain pitaji 5 min me......

Rani - Maaji hum aapke bina nahi jayege..... Veer ne mana liya tha apni daadi ko saath jaane ke liye......

10 min me teeno poori tyaar huye aur puja ka saman lekar mandir ke raste pe chal pade paidal nange paon, mandir gaon ke bilkul oppsite direction me 2 km dur nadi ke pass sthit tha.

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Majedar update

 

[Mahendra Baranwal]

Update 4

( Pyaar, dosti aur dushmani)

Veer jabse hosh sambhala hai uska inh kuch shabdon se khaas lagav hai..... kushti, akhada, barhmand, army, politics,pyaar ....etc.... etc..... jaise kuch khaas nata jud gaya tha..... 7 saal ki umer me woh apni umer se bade bacchon ko kushti me hara deta tha, shayad apne dada ki tarah kusti uske khoon me thi. Bade thakur ji ne Ramadevi ko kaha tha ish bacche me apne dada se jaada gunn hai poora phelwan banne ke, dekhna kusti me Sohanveer ka naam roshan karega..... Rama, thakur ji ki baat hasi me uda di , isko main neta banungi.
Jab veer 14 saal ka ho gaya tab bhi thakur ji ne Rama aur Dharam ko sujaav diya, yeh ladka 18 saal ke goan ke phelwano ko dhul chata deta hai, veer ko peshawar kusti ladni chahiye yeh ladka bahot aage jayega..... isko ek accha sa trainer chahiye jitne paisa lagenge main kharcha uthunga bas isko phelwani karne do.... phir wohi baat aayi ki veer ko uski maa apne se alag nahi karna chahti joh akhade me seekhta hai wohi kafi hai, isliye toh veer ko rani gaon ke school me daali hai aur 12vi tak woh school me hi padhega waise bhi woh apni class me aaj tak 1 aata raha hai, yeh Ramadevi ka tarak tha jabki woh apne mayeke waalon ki tarah veer ko neta banana chahti thi, kusti me kya rakha hai, veer ka dimagh bhi tez hai jab 21 saal ka ho jayega main usko apne bhatije ke paas lagwa dungi, woh minister hai aur rahega chahe govt kisi ki bhi ish party ki ya vipakshi party ki.

Wahin Dharam ka yeh kehna tha mera toh ek hi beta hai, dono ladkiyan ish kabil banayi hain woh dosre ghar jakar apni gharshti acche se sambhal le- ek vakil hai aur doosri doctor hai..... kaash mere do bete hote ek ko sirf phelwan banta, veer hamri budhepe ki lathi banega..... itni zameen hai aaram se kheti karke kaam khaage..... uski maa rani uske bin ek din bhi nahi reh sakti woh khatiya pakad legi ya apni jaan de degi agar kisi ne uske bete ko usse dur kiya, uski dono bheno ke pran usme baste haim woh kaise uske bina jeeyegi..... na na thakur shabh main haath jodta hun humko veer se alag mat karo hum sab uske bina mar jayege..... aur rote huye wahan se apne khet pe chala gaya apni maa aur bade thakur ji ko chhodkar.

Rani apne bete ko pilot banna chahti thi jab gradution ho jaaye, uska ek hi sapna tha ki ek din veer aur main aeroplane me udh rahein ho.... Saloni didi usko apni tarah lawyer banna chahti aur Reena didi doctor hai woh, dentist ka course join ki thi unko aaj bhi malal tha woh mbbs nahi kar pai bas 2 number kam rah gaye unke. Waise toh sab chahte the ki veer unhi muskurta, khush rahe aur kamyab insan banye..... aaj bhi veer apni jindgi me khush tha aur apne parivaar ko bahot pyaar aur care karta tha lekin uski zindgi badalne waali thi inhi kuchi mahino me.....

Ab aage.....

Veer apni maa aur daadi ke saath nange pairon paidal gaon paar karte huye shiv mandir ke paas phauchga ..... mandir aur gaonon ki tarah jaise aam mandir the, na itna bada na itna chota, haan paas me dhaksin disha se ek choti nadi bheti thi aur mandir ki purvi disha me ek ghana, mota v vishal bargad ka prachin ped tha jiski jataayen dur tak phaili thi kuch gaon ke log kehte hain 200 saal se yeh ped yahan hai aur shivling ki raksha kar raha hai..... mandir bade thakur ki pitaji ne banwaya tha..... isliye sab thakutji ka mandir bhi kehte the bolchal me, haan pandit jaroo thakur ji ka pandit hota tha, kabhi kisi ko rok tok nahi thi mandir jaane ke liye, sab jati aur dharam ke log shubh kaam se pehle shankar bhagwaan ka naam lete the..... ish gaon me shanti aur miljul ke log rahte the.....

Lekin padosi gaon joh 5 km dur tha woh bhi bade thakur ji ka gaon tha yani Thakur ji ke 2 gaon me unka hi raaj chalta tha, ek Bhikampur aur dosra Sherpur joh veer ka gaon tha. Bhikampur size me 5 guna jaada tha ek bada gaon tha jiski abadi karib 12 hazar thi aur sherpur ki abadi keval 2500 thi. Politics aur varchasv ki ladai har din kheli jaati thi, maar pitai, chori daketi loot maar yeh aam si baat thi Bhikampur me aur dosri taraf sherpur tha koyi chori bhi karta pakda gaya itni maar lagti thi ki seedha chala bhi na jaye ush chor se. 5 km ka fasla zameen aasman ka sa tha mahoul me..... wajah sharab ke theke. Bhikampur me 5 sharab ke theke the aur Sherpur me ek bhi nahi...... India ke gaonon me jis gaon me sharab ka theka khul gaya woh gaon jarur barbad ho gaya ya ho jaata hai dheere-2.

वैधानिक चेतावनी = Sharab peena hanikarak hai, sharab peene se liver aur cancer ho sakta hai.

Joh gaon waale raste me Veer ko milte woh usko janamdin ki badhai dete aur Ramadevi se ramram karte..... kuch 3-4 auratein bhi joh umer Rani se choti thi unhone Rani ko namaste ki Rama ko ramram aur Veer ko badhai di..... karan Rani ne ghoonghat kiya huya tha.

Jab woh log mandir ke kareeb phauch gaye, Veer ne apni daadi se pucha - Kya mera janamdin sab ko yaad hai yeh baat toh mujhe pata hi nahi thi, dono auratein hasne lagi. Woh bhi Veer ko chane ke jhaad pe chada di.....

Rama - Mera ek hi sundar aur honhar pota hai, log uska janamdin kaise bhul sakte hain.

Rani apna ghoonghat thoda uper ki - Ab toh internet ka jaman hai, har ek ke pas smart mobile hai sivay tere, sabko pata chal jaata hai ki kiska birthday hai screen par message apne aap aa jata hai.

Veer - Theek hai main smart phone le lunga, daadi ne paise bhi de diye hain, ab toh khush ho na Mata.

Rani jhat se - Reena ne mehanga mobile tere liye gift me khareed liya hai, chahe toh maaji waale paise Reena ko de dena bichari bahot mehanga mobile gift kar rahi teri birthday pe.

Veer ke paas key-pad wala mobile tha, didi ke used laptop pe dongal se internet use karta tha, usne 18th birthday par bol diya tha tab smart phone lunga......

Rama - Reena ko main aur paise de dungi tu paise apne pas rakh.

Veer - main itne rupee ka kya karunga, pitaji ne bhi toh diye hain mujhe.

Rani - Main rakh lungi bas ab kuch mat bol, baap ki tarah tu bhi jaada kanjoos banta jaa raha hai.

Veer aur Rama hasne the Rani ki baat sunkar, mandir ki seedhiyon ke paas phauch gaye the...... 3-4 mangne waale bhikari bhi mandir ki niche ki seedhiyon pe bethe unko dekhar ramram kar rahe the..... Veer ke haath me badi si plastic bag me 5 dibbe the meethai ke.... Rama ke haath me mala aur phoolon ki tokri thi. Rani ke haath me puja ki thali ka saaman tha kayi cheez ek bag me thi.

Teeno mandir ki niche ki seedhi par matha take aur karib 18 seedhiyan upar chad ke prangan me aa gaye..... 10-12 bakhat log ke alawa do sundar jawan ladkiyan bhi mandir ke andar dikhi jihnone suit salwar phena tha..... woh pujari ji se baat kar rahi thi, Veer ne dono ko dekhe bhi liya tha aur aachi tarah se phechan bhi liya tha, usne itni jorse mandir ka ghanta bajaya tannnnnn ki awaaj dur sunai di aur sab dekhne lage uski taraf..... itni jaan toh Veer ke haathon me hi ho sakti hai ...... pujariji haath jod ke unke sawagt me aaye jaise unhi ka intzaar kar rahe the sab ne unko namasty ki aur veer ne pair chuhe..... Rani ne ghoonghat mandir ki seedhi chadte huye sar pe le liya tha..... uski hasi nahi ruk rahi thi dono ladkiyon ko mandir me dekhkar..... wahin Ramadevi bhi Veer ko dekhkar muskara rahi thi..... wahin Veer aisa dikhne ki kosis kar raha tha ki woh kitna bada bhakat ho shivji ka..... woh wakai me bholenath ka bhakat tha.

Dono ladkiyon ke chehre pe smile rukne ka naam nahi le rahi thi...... dono kitni khush thi Veer ko yahan mandir me dekhkar woh main bhi nahi bata sakta par ek baat hai dono ka close connection hai Veer se..... panditji ne saara saaman le liya unke haathon se aur mandir ke ander chale gaye.....

Ek ladki joh doosri se 2 inch choti thi Rama aur Rani ke gale mili aur aur joh lambi thi usne pair chuhye dono ke, dono ne usko gale laga ke kaan me kuch kaha toh uske gaal jaada laal ho gaye.....

Ab suspence bahot ho gaya aap logon ko bata hi deta hun, jish ladki ne pair nahi chuhe woh Veer ke paas aayi aur boli - Happy Birthday Veer..... iska naam Rubi Thakur tha aur joh malai jaisi goori, ht 5ft 9 inch, kathai badi badi aankhon waali aur model jaisi patli kamar uska naam Peeti tha Rubi ki choti sagi bhen. Ji haan doston heroine aa gayi hai joh chahe karo..... matlab tareefan.

Preeti dekh toh veer ko rahi thi aur baat Rani se kar rahi thi, Rama panditji ke saath chali gayi thi...... sab jaante the ki yeh dono Bade Thakur ji ki potiyan hai joh sirf Veer ke liye aayi thi, Rani ne Preeti ko phone pe bata diya tha Veer ke saath main mandir jaungi kal subha..... par yeh nahi kaha tha tum bhi tapak jaana jaise apni saas ko formalty dekhane ke liye bulai thi woh mere veer ke picche mandir tak aa gayi aur inh dono ko sharam nahi aati mere bete pe dore daalein aa gayi. ( yeh rani dil hi dil me soch rahi thi)

Veer - Thanks Rubi, mandir me dekhkar tumko accha laga. ( veer rubi ko tu ya tum hi kehta tha jabki woh 3 saal badi thi)

Rubi - (haskar) Yeh maharani ji layi hai mujhe, warna tum toh mere nature jante ho aur aankh maar di.... hi hi hi..... Preeti tujhe veer ko wish nahi karna kya?

Preeti pyaar se sweet tone boli - Janamdin ki dharon shubhkamnaye Karam.
( Preeti veer ko karam hi bulati thi bachpan se )

Veer - Bahot bahot dhanyawad, maa chalo pujari ji kya sochenge...... aur mandir ke ander chala gaya.....

Rani - Cold war abhi bhi jaari hai, kyun Rubi ?

Rubi majak me boli - Aunty lad kar hi toh pyaar pakka hota hai.... haa haa haa....

Preeti thoda sakpaka si gayi yeh sunkar apne mann me sochi main didi ko kyun leke aayi yeh kitni muhfat hain main yeh bhul gayi thi..... Rani bhi Rubi ko ghoor ke dekhi tab Rubi me jawab diya - Itna shock mat hoye auntyji main toh apni baat kar rahi thi, maine aapko bataya tha ki main veer se pyaar karti hoon aap meri baaton pe vishwas nahi kari thi, waise bhi aapka ladka kis ko ghas nahi dalta ..... haa haa haa..... samjahne waale samajh gaye the ki rubi kiski baat kar rahi hai.

Rani - Aaj hi toh 18 saal ka huya hai mere veer, 3 saal aur tujhe rukna hoga phir sochungi tu mere bete ke layak hai ki nahi agar naa kar du toh dil pe na lagna. ( yeh baat rani ne preeti ko dekhkar kahi thi ) Usko paata tha puch kon raha hai aur jawab kisko dena hai.....

Rubi - Main wait kar lungi, bas aap mujhe veer ke liye pasand kar lo main aapke charan dho dho ke piyongi, aapke saare din pair dabaungi ......

Preeti jhat se Rubi ke muh pe haath raki - Maa yeh didi majak kar rahi hai, aap ko maaji bula rahi hain...... ( Preeti bhi rani ko maa bulati thi veer ki tarah)

Rubi, preeti ka haath hat kar boli - Aunty main serious hun.....

Rani haskar - Jaanti hun kyon serious hai aur kyon nahi..... aur mandir me jaane lagi phir palat ke boli Preeti tum log bhi puja me saamil ho sakti ho koyi manahi nahi hai, bhagwan sabki sunte hai..... yeh kehkar muskara di.....

Dono khush hokar puja me veer, uski maa aur daadi ke saath samlit huyi, ek taraf veer ke rani bethi doosri taraf preeti, panditji saamne bathe aur pandit ji ke right-left Daadi aur Rubi...... yeh intzaam riswat dekar rubi ne karwa tha pandit ko chetawni dekar poore 2,000 rs ..... agar kisi ke saamne juban kholi toh tu zinda toh rahega par mouh nahi khol payega kunki main teri jaban kaat dungi, samajha kuch...... main kiski poti hun yeh mat bhulna....

Bheema Thakur jinko sab bade thakur ji ke naam se sambhodit karte the unka rutba kayi zilon me tha.

(***Bade Thakur ji ka poora details next kuch update me aayega, abhi story pe focus karte hain varna story ka flow kuch aur direction me chal jayega )

Rubi se sab darte the woh hamesha pistol lekar ghumti thi, kafi muhfat thi....... pandit toh kaapne laga jab uski dhamki suni...... Law college me 3rd year ki student thi..... Veer ki badi bhen Saloni University college me thi, Rubi apne district ke law college me padhti thi, padhti toh khaak thi bas gunda gardi karti thi law college me..... dada aur baap ka naam kafi tha, aache aache badmasho ladkon ki halat kharb kar di thi ish akeli ladki ne, isse koyi panga nahi leta tha, seedha rape aur murder attemped ka charge lagati thi akhir law ki knowlege isko kafi jaada thi..... hamesha jeens shirt pehanti thi, Preeti ne bahot request ki suit salwar me mandir jaana hai didi warna kya impression padega mera.

Preeti chor nazar se veer ko dekhti puja karte huye uska lagta tha koyi nahi dekh raha hai par sab ki preeti pe nazar thi yahan tak ki panditji ki bhi, ek toh thakur ki dushmani bahot bhari padegi aur dosra Rubi ka dar tha woh joh kehti hai woh kar bhi deti hai. Teeno jaanti thi ki Preeti Veer se bahot pyaar karti hai par Veer ko samjha nahi paayi hai aur Veer bhi jaanta tha ki Preeti uski acchi dost hai uski woh bahot care aur help bhi karta tha par pyaar sirf apni maa Rani se karta hai, uski zindgi me uski maa sab kuch thi.... Maa jisse kahegi usi ladki se shaadi karega.

Rubi madam ke dar se panditji ne jaldi hi puja ki saari vidhi se purn ki aur Rani ne 500 rupee dakshina di, aur Veer ne panditji ke pair chuhye phir apni daadi aur maa ka ashriwad liya pair chuhkar.....

Rubi uske kaan me boli - mere pair bhi chu le itni aachi ladki ne tujhe pasand kiya hai.

Veer uske kaan me - ish sadu ladki ko kyun laayi tu, mujhe phir paka degi aur ek hi baat bol kar..... rubi veer ko khoni maari - sudhar jaa.....

Huya yeh ki Veer aur Preeti ki acchi jamti thi bachpan se dono dost the lekin dusri ladki ne entry maar di inki dosti me, uska naam Prachi Thakur tha woh bhi 18 saal 4 mahine ki thi yaani teeno humumer the lekin preeti aur prachi ki nahi jamti thi balki dono ke khandan me goliyan chal chuki hai kayi aadmi aur auraten maare jaa chuke hain dono ek hi haveli se belong karti hain aur ek hi ladke se pyaar karti hain. Veer ki dosti sabse thi kya ladki ya ladka par agar koyi ladki direct bol de uske mouh pe I love you toh patli gali se nikal leta aur palat ke uski taraf nahi dekhta tha..... chahe sab uska yeh attitude kehlo ya apne pe ghamad usko ghanta farak nahi padta tha par yeh baat sach thi jiski maa, dono badi bhen, uski daadi, uski bua ji saari thakurian itna pyaar karti ho toh koyi sarfira hoga ek ladki ke pyaar me sab ka pyaar thukara de..... sabki choice se direct shaadi karunga, mujhe pyaar vaar me nahi padna abhi toh 18 saal ka hi hun bahot padhai kareni hai, pyaar karne ke liye sirf meri maa hi kaafi hai.

Rubi Thakur aur Preeti Thakur

Lekin preeti uski bachpan ki dost thi 12 saal ki umer me woh shimla chali gayi boarding school me, wahan se 12th paas kiya aur corona mahabimari ki wajah se aur uski iccha se 1 saal pehle veer ke college me admission li Veer usko aur uski dosti ko nahi bhula tha phir se dosti ho gayi par veer ne uska pyaar accept nahi kiya 93 days se koyi baat nahi ki par acchank aaj subha apni badi gundi bhen ko lekar mandir tak aagayi thi aur veer ko wish bhi ki, shayad sudhar gayi ho..... par veer ko laga ki woh kuch nahi bhuli uski aankhein bahot kuch keh gayi thi.

Prachi Thakur kuch aisi si dikhti hai......


Prachi Thakur uski life me 11th class me aayi, dono ki jaldi dosti ho gayi, Veer class ka topper tha, handsome aur caring tha..... dono best friend ban gaye the...... tabse dosti hai. Woh doosre collage me yani sehar me chali gayi par chuttion me Veer ke saath time bitati usne abhi tak I love you nahi bola lekin aaj woh bhi usko bolna chahti hai shayad veer usko samajhe aur haan kar de...... Woh subha 7 baje veer ke ghar phauch gayi usko Dharamveer mila usne bola aadhe gante me aa jayege beta tum tv dekh lo tab tak...... Sheru bhi prachi ko jaanta tha isliye shaant betha tha.

Yudh ki ghani sambhavna hai jab Prachi aur Preeti ka aamna-saamna hoga....... tab veer kya karega yeh dekhne layak hoga....

The end.

Pleasant update

 

[HAARRY POTTER]

Update 11


Veer jab apne kanbe ke ek Tauji Rajveer ke ghar se aa raha tha, usse pehle apne tauji ko bola tha ki baaki sab privaar waalo ko uske ghar bhej dena taki sab ka dhayan subha ki ghatna se hat jaye..... raat tak wahin rehna baaki kaam Balraam raat ko kar dega...... Veer ka sujhav unko bhi pasand aaya aur unko function me bhejne ko raaji ho gaye..... Lekin sabse badi galti Rajveer se ho gayi thi jab parivaar ko bhej kar usne Lakhan thakur ko sab bata diya call karke, woh bhi Rajbeer ke ghar gaya aur unh gundon ke main aadmi ko goli maar diya......

Rajveer ne Lakhan se pucha usne yeh kya kiya woh bola yeh mujhe jaanta hai pakka mere baap ko mera sach bata dega aur usko juthi kahani bana ke bata diya yeh hum ko randiyan supply karta tha yahan tak ki tera naam bhi aata...... Balraam bhi wahan nahi tha par Lakhan ne usko phone kar diya ek ko goli maar diya hun tu apna muh band rakhega bade thakur ke saamne.....

Rajveer ka accha dost tha Lakhan Thakur usne kafi karja bhi liya huya tha dosti ke naam pe woh bhi chup raha.....
dono ne Rajveer ke ghar pe sharab pi aur dono Veer ki maa ke baare me baat karne lage ish umer me saali bilkul jawan lagti hai......
Rajveer - ab toh ushe bhool jaa yaar humare bhi bache bade ho gaye hai aur Veer ne aisa kaam kiya hai hum sab uska yeh ahsaan kabhi nahi chuka sakte.....
Lakhan kuch kehne waala tha par chup reh gaya aur baat badal ke bola - Veer tere ghar kya karne aaya tha ?
Tab usne aisi Veer puran sunai ki Lakhan Thakur ki jhaante jhulas gayi woh apne mann me socha pehle ish Veer ko raste se hatunga tab Rani ko apni jaangh pe betha ke chodunga.....

Lakhan bhi acche se jaanta tha ki Veer ko uski choti beti Preeti pasand karti hai woh acchi bhali Shimla me padh rahi thi par nahi 1 saal pehle yahan gaon me aa gayi aur Veer ki college me admission karwa li...... uske baap (bade thakur ji) ne uski ek na suni, Preeti ko Delhi bhejna chahta tha taki veer se dur rehe varna woh sapola meri beti ko phaisa lega...... had toh tab ho gayi ki uski biwi aur badi beti bhi Preeti ka saath di......
Usko dimagh me khichdi pakne lagi kaise Veer ko phaise aaj uska janamdin bhi hai jhute iljaam me...... woh apne dimagh le ghode chalta raha sharab ki chuskiyan lete huye......

Udher veer ke makan pe......

Veer aur Adi niche chale gaye pehle Bua ke room me gaye wahan sab ladies thi, Veer apni maa ke room me chala gaya woh uske pitaji se kuch baat kar rahi thi...... Veer apni maa ki godi me sar rakhkar bed pe let gaya...... aur apne maa baap ki baat sunne laga.
Dharam - Harish aaj raat jaane ko keh raha hai par maine usko raat bhar ke liye rok liya hai...... 1 saal baad aaya hai uski milai bhi jaada ki karni padegi kam se kam 2100rs ki, Mala ke kapde aur bacchon ke kapde bhi dene honge tum aisa karna Veer ke saath uski motercycle par chali jaana davat ke baad aur sabke liye kapde kharid lena kamse kam 40-50 hazar ki chapat lagegi unko saste kapde pasand aate kahan hain.....
Veer motorcycle ka naam sunkar - Kiski motorcycle pita ji
Dharam ko apni galti ka ahsaas huya - Haan kisi ki bhi le jaana.....
Rani ,Veer ke baalon me haath pherti huyi - Ab toh bata do sach kab tak chhupaoge varna main batun.
Dharam - Tu hi bata de
Rani - Pakka bata dun
Veer - Ek min ..... ek min..... kya batna hai mujhe bhi baato
Dono hasne lage aur Veer dono ki taraf ullu ki tarah dekhta raha
Rani apne bete ke gaal ko chum ke uske kaan me boli - Tere pitaji tujhe fatfatiya dilna chahte hai.....

Veer uthkar bola - Sach pitaji ?
Dharam - Aisi vaisi nahi bilkul nayi naveli Bullet motorcycle khreedi hai.
Veer harani se - Par uspe toh 1 mahine ki advance booking hai
Rani - Tere pitaji ne 1 mahine pehle hi booking kar di thi aaj delivery milne waali hai
Veer - (khusi se behosh hote huye bacha) Maa tu mujhe chunti kaat main vishwas nahi kar paa raha hun, pitaji itna kharcha nahi kar sakte.....
Rani ne veer ke haath pe chunti kati aur Dharam hasne laga - aadhe ghante me aa jayegi tab vishwas karna aur apni maa ko bhi sair karna sabse pehle.....
Saloni aur Reena bhi wahan aa gayi tab Veer bola - Didi mere liye pitaji ne motorcyle khareedi hai
Saloni - Maine hi toh pitaji se sifarish ki thi
Reena - Aur maine permission di thi dono ko
Veer - Ab maja aayega meri nayi motorcycle dhukdhukdhuk karti chalegi ...... haahaahaa ......Pitaji aapke charan kahan hai .....
Dharam - Main yahan hun toh mere charan kya sar pe lage hai wahin hain jahan pehle lage the.....
Veer khush hokar pehle apni maa ke charan chuha phir pitaji ke aur dono badi bheno ke bhi sabne usko ashirwad diya...... main sabke pair chuhne jaata hun..... woh chala gaya sabse pehle daadi se milne.......

Reena - Aap ne dekha pitaji yeh humko maska laga raha hai kahin deal cancel na ho jaaye isko dar hai.....
Saloni - Ab iska license bhi banwana padega kal hi
Dharam - Woh maska nahi laga raha hai sach me woh humra kitna maan samaan karta hai..... aisa beta lakhon me ek hi hota hai.
Rani - Maaji ko aap bolna uski motorcycle ki pooja karene, mera beta lakhon me nahi caroron me ek hai.
Dharam - Chalo sab tyaar ho jaayo davat me kuch log jaldi lifafa lekar aa jaate hain davat khaane..... main davat me rahunga.....
Unke jaane ke baad Reena boli - Veer ke 15ve janamdin pe pitaji ko 1.1 lakh ka nagad mila tha ab toh unki calcultion ke hisab se 2.5 laakh to milege hi isliye veer ko bullet dila rahein hain..... haahaahaa.....
Saloni - Acha kisan wahi hota hai joh mutthi binch ke kharch kaare, hamre pitaji kanjus jaroor hai par kharcha sab pe karte hain.
Rani - Inka bas chale toh veer ko bhi apni tarah bana de mahakanjus..... chalo chalo tum bhi tyaar ho jayo.....

Adi se Veer ne pucha daadi kahan hain toh usne bola apne kamre me tyaar hone gayi hai main bulaun.....
Veer kuch soch ke bola - Main khud bula lunga tu sabko bol de sab ready ho jaayen aur tu bhi ready ho jaa.
Veer Adi ko kaam pe laga ke apni daadi ke kamre me ghus gaya, darwaja mila hua tha..... Rama saree pehnene jaa rahi thi itne me Veer ne satkani laga di.....
Rama - Yeh kundi kun lagai tu ne, khol kundi .....
Veer kutil muskan liye Rama ki taraf badha uski halat patli ho gayi woh sirf peele blouse aur petticoat me thi ander bra aur kacchi bhi pehni thi...... uske dil ki dhadkan badhne lagi..... woh piche hat ke bed ke kinre aa gayi aur achanak bed pe beth gayi ..... Veer aage aakar uske pair chuha - Daadi ji ashirwad do aapne mere liye motorcycle khareedi .....
Rama ne uske sar pe haath rakha - jeeta rahe mera balak ,teri motorcycle me kabhi petrol na khatam ho..... tu ne mujhe dara hi diya tha......

Veer apni daadi ke saath bister pe beth gaya - Aapko mujhse kya dar hai, kahin main phir se chuma maang lunga woh toh main apna hak samajhta hun.... hehehehe

Rama uske seedhe gaal ko thoda daba ke boli - Main tere baaton me nahi aaungi bachu, tu bahot chota hai meine 50 basant dekhen hain inhi apni do aankhon se har ritu mujhe yaad hai kab kya hua tha jab main 12 saal ki ho gayi thi..... sabke saamne meri pichwadi pe haath kyun phera aur itni himmat ki daba bhi diya...... aise mere saath nahi chalega bacche main tere baap ki maa hun samajha.

Veer - Accha baba nahi karunga agar aapko bura laga toh apna baccha samajh ke maaf kar dena aur utha kar bola..... dhanyawad nayi motorcycle ke liye.

Woh uthkar kiwad kholne ke liye aage badha toh Rama jhat se uthkar Veer ki piche se kolhi bahar li - Itni jaldi naraaj ho gaya apni budhi daadi se.

Veer pahalvan tha usko apni daadi ki grip bahot jaada lagi jaise woh usse chhut jayega agar na pakedi lekin do bhaari-2 vishal choochiyan uski sakhat pith me dab si gayi jaise dunlap ka badi-2 gend ho...... ek ek haath uske seene aur pet pe kaske pakadi thi aur pyaar se ungliyon se sehla bhi rahi thi...... yeh baat toh dono me ek samaany thi ki dono daadi pote me jaan bahot thi unke dekhkar yeh anumaan laga jaa sakta hai ki dono ek hi takkar ke hain.
Veer apni daadi ki wajah se itna dumdar ho saka acchi khurak aur ghar ka doodh uspe apni daadi ki bachpan me malish jaise uski haddiyon me asli lava pighla ke bhari ho..... Rani ka kaam apni mamta ki chaav me Veer ko palna aur daadi ki malish v khurak ki dose usko barabar milti rahi jab tak veer 6 ft na paar kar liye tabhi chain ki saans li Rama ne...... bahot mehanat aur pasina bahaya hai daadi ne apne ladle pote pe...... aaj woh sahara kaise jaane de apne kalje ke tukde ko.

Rama uske fauladi seene ko sehlati huyi boli - Main tujhe rok nahi rahi hun bas agha kar rahi hun, ek toh akele me hi haath lagna aur doosra ish kamre me nahi yeh puja ka kamra hai, main bhagwan ko kya mouh dikhaungi bas yeh meri shartein hain...... tujhe main bahot pasand hun na, apne front bumper Veer ki pith pe jaada dabati hui boli......
Veer - Aahhhh daadi tu mujhe aise bhinchti rahi hai toh mera phir se khada ho jayega...... mat kar tu aisa main bhi control kho dunga......
Rama itni lambhi thi Veer ka ulte kaan pe kiss kar di aur dheere se boli - davat khatam hone de isko main kabu kar lungi...... ab jaa aur mujhse naraaj mat hona kabhi bhi mere laal......

Veer bhi palat ke apni daadi ka maatha chuma - Itni sundar hai mujhe aaj hi pata chala aur khabardaar agar aage se apne aapko budhi bola, meri daadi ka aaj hi naya janam huya hai joh apsara ki tarah meri zindgi me rang bharne aayi hai..... bas hamesha mera saath rehna.....
Rama itni romachit huyi apne pote ki baat sunkar...... jab uske kampte honth ko chuma toh uski bahon me apna astitva talashne lagi, jab Veer ne uske bhaari nitambko apne haath me thama petticoat ke uper se toh sisak ke uske ko chumne lagi..... siiiiiiii ...... ahhhhh..... mat kar Veer main apna aapa kho dungi....

Veer - Main kuch nahi kar raha hun bas inko thame ki koshish me thaam liya...... daadi itne bade-2 hai mere dono haath bhi kam pad jaate hain inko thamne me..... dono ki umer me jameen asaman ka farak tha par pyaar apne humdum ko talash hi leta hai...... Rama uski baaton se garam jaada ho rahi thi baje sakoon ke - chal muhje jaane de baad me thaam lena jitna jee chahe, koyi aa jayega......

Veer ka ling ek baar phir sakaht hone laga isse pehle woh apni daadi ko chhod diya aur bola "acche se sajna mere liye"...... mudkar kiwad khol ke bahar chal gaya..... Ramadevi ke dil ki hazaron ghantiyan jorse baja ke jaise elaan kar raha ho daadi ab se tu meri hai...... 10 min tak woh bed pe bethi naye naye sapne bunne lagi thi jab Adi aaya - Naaniji tyaar ho jao hum ko davat me jaane hai......

Veer apni daadi ke kamre se bahar nikal ke buaji ki room me chala gaya jahan uske fufaji, Mala bua aur Komal bed pe bethe the aur Komal uski tareef kar rahi thi....
Komal - Papa Veer kitna handsome aur tall ho gaya haina, woh mera bhai nahi hota toh main usko boyfriend bana leti...... hiheehihee.....

Harish - Beta maine kitni baar samjhaya hai ki teenage me bacchon ko apne carrier pe focus karna chahiye baad me koi suitable match mila toh shaadi karne se pehle usko boyfriend bana lo..... magar pehle degree lo phir 2 saal mnc me job karo phir boyfriend ki socho..... ok..... Veer acha ladka hai aur woh inh sab ke pachde me nahi padta bas pahalvani, study aur sab ka khayal rakta hai.

Veer bhi ek baar ko socha ki yeh sab main kya kar raha hun ? par komal ukli hi taraf dekhe rahi thi uski smile aur jaada bhad gayi veer ko dekhkar....
Mala bua - Yeh ladki Ruchi ( komal ki best friend) ki sangat me bigad gayi hai accha hua woh bba karne chali gayi varna isko bas boyfriend ke sapne dikhti rehti..... Veer tera chota bhai hai pehle usse acche se dosti kar le...... bhai bhi to best friend ho sakta hai aur bf ka bhoot apne sar se nikal de..... samjhi.....

Komal muh bana ke - Theek hai main Veer ki acchi friend banne ki koshis karungi par usko meri har baat manni padegi kun Veer ?
Uske dono parents bed pe aise bethe the ki dono ki pith thi Veer ki taraf, unhone palat ke dekha tab Komal ne usko aankh maar di jaise keh rahi ho maine sab set kar diya hai......

Mala - Arre !!! veer darwaje pe kyun ruk gaya, ander aa.....
Harish - Lagta hai isko gift nahi pasand nahi aaya..... aur hasne lage.....
uske fufaji ne apne kapede change karke ek mahanga kurta pajma pehna liya tha davat me jaane ke liye.....

Veer smile dekar - Aap aur buaji ki choice kabhi kharab ho sakti hai kya, aapka gift sabse aacha laga mujhe fufaji..... baari baari se unke pair chuha.
Dono ne ashriwad diya aur puccha yeh kis liye?
Veer - Daadi ji ne mujhe ek bullet motorcycle dillai hai joh abhi delivery hogi isliye aap dono ka ashirwad lene aaya hun.....
Teeno ne usko congratulation kaha......

Komal - Mere pair chuhne ki jarurat nahi mera ashirawad tumhare saath hai balak...... bas mujhe bike ki ride chahiye..... hihihihi.....
Komal ke ek haath pe marti huyi Mala bua boli - Sirf 6 mahine badi hai aur ashirwad aise de rahi hai jaise daadi amaa ho.....
Veer usko chidate huye - Main to apni pyaari bua ji ko sabse pehle bike ki ride karwanga..... hahaha ..... aur Mala ke gale lag gaya.....
Komal - Aane di teri bike pehle toh main hi bethungi......
Harish - Chalo bhai tum bhi ready ho jayo main bhi apne saale sahab ko dekhta hun kya kar raha hai.....

Komal veer ko alag karne lagi apni mummy se - Chhod mustande meri mummy ko ab se tujhe gale lagna ho toh mujhe laga sakta par meri mummy ko nahi......
Veer aur mala hasne lage aur woh bola - Aaja meri bhenaa tujhe bhi jhappi paa lun...... hahahaha....
Veer ne Komal ko utha ke apne gale laga liya - My sweet sister...... i love you..... uske mathe ko chum liya.....
Mala bua - Kisi ki nazar na lage mere dono baccho ko, sukar hai ki tum dono ko kuch akal aayi..... ek min tum dono aise hi rehna main tumhari ek pics leti hun...... bua ji ne apne mobile ke camre pe unki pics nikali jisme Komal Veer ke doosre se chipke huye the aur Komal usko gaal pe kiss kar rahi thi dono ki smile waali pics Bua ne whatsup pe bhi daali...... Bua jab dekhe nahi rahi thi toh veer ne komal ko lips pe bhi kiss kar diya..... dono apna pyaar ko logon ki nazar se bachna chahte the lekin aage pata chalega ki pyaar kabhi chhupta nahi......
Mala bua ne dono ko ready hone ko kaha davat ke liye.....

Veer apni maa ke kamre me aakar pucha - Maa mere naye kapde nikal diye kya ?
Rani joh chota sa dressing area tha kamre me uspe ek parda laga tha usse jhank ke boli - Teri aankhein hain ya button bister pe tere naye kapde pade hain aur jutiyan bhi bed ke niche rakhi hai.....
Veer ne kiwad band kiya aur bola - Hain..... han...... mene dekhe liya hain aur tu kya kar rahi hai parde ke picche ?
Rani jhala ke boli - Main kapde bhi na pehun kya ishi saree me rehun.....

Veer haskar apni maa ki taraf jaakar thoda sa parda hata diya aur kuch bolne waala tha par uska muh khula ka khula reh gaya ......
Rani ek black bra aur penty me thi aur kaale petticoat apni jaangho ke uper kar rahi thi...... uske aadhe gore gore chuttad penty ke bahar dikhe aur petticoat me chhip gaye...... veer ish nazare ko thuk gatak ke dekh raha tha.....
uski maa petticoat ka nada bandh kar palti to Veer ko dekhkar boli - kya muh phade dek raha hai muh me makkhi gus jayegi..... hahahaha......

RANI kuch aisi dikh rahi thi.....

Apni maa ko dekhkar Veer bhi thoda sharamte huye bola - Aap ish getup me urvarsi apsara jaisi lag rahi ho..... aapke badan pe har colour kitna khilta hai......
Rani apne bete ki halat dekh kar puchi - Kundi toh lagi hai na kamre ke kivad ki ?
Veer - haan aate huye laga di thi kyun puch rahi hai ?
Rani - tere fufaji bhi hain ghar me.
Veer - Haan haan woh bahar chale gaye sirf main hi hun joh aapke roop ke darshan kar sakta hun aur apni maa ko gale laga liya......
(Veer ki yehi aadat thi jab usko kuch chahiye hota tab Rani ko aap-2 bolta aur normal tone me tu ya tum keh kar sambhodit karta).....

Rani - mujhe poore kapde toh pehn ne de dair ho rahi hai......
( par woh usse alag hone ki chestha bilkul nahi kar rahi thi bas uski pith pe haath se dheere-2 sehla rahi thi uske seene se lagi huyi )
Veer apni maa ki khusbu lete huye bola - Kuch min. ki baat hai aap ko aise gale laga ke mere dil ko bahot sukun milta hai......
Rani bhi majak me puchi - Preeti ya Prachi ya Komal ya teri daadi ko bhi toh aise gale lagta hai tab tera dil murmure bechne lagta hai kya? Baat banana seekh gaya hai mera londa, kitni ko jhansa de raha hai sach-2 boliyon ?

Maa aasi hi hoti hai joh apne bete pe nigha to rakhti hi hai aur kab bete ke kaan kheenchne hain woh bhi jaanti hai.....
Veer kisi alag hi mitti ka ban tha woh apni maa se kuch nahi chipta tha aur na abhi chipaya woh totte ki tarah sab bak diya par short me 5 min me...... bas ush durghanta ko raat me batne waala tha varna maa pareshan hogi...... usko vishwas tha ki thakur ji sab sambhal lenge tab bata dunga......

Rani ki yeh khaisat thi woh jaldi se kisi nishkarsh pe nahi phauchti thi sab baatein dhayan me rakhkar aur sochkar nirnye leti thi - Toh Komal ko girlfriend bana raha hai accha hai woh jaada hi sunder hai sabse. Main Preeti ke liye ab jaada fikarmand hun usko kiss karne ki jarurat kya thi, tu ne bhuse ke dher me aaga laga di hai aur Preeti ab nahi rukegi woh tujhse hak leke rehgi...... yahan tak ki usko apni shaadi ki shaniaiyan bhi sunne lagi hogi..... tu gaya mere bacche..... hahahaha ......
lekin usko koyi farak nahi pada apni maa ki baatien sunkar......

Rani abhi tak Veer ke gale lagi thi aur uska ling uski nabhi pe pajama ke uper se hi thokar maar raha tha sabse jaada jab apni dadi aur Komal ka naam liya...... woh bhi jaanti thi ki Veer ab jawan ho gaya hai usko rokna nahi tha bas sahi disha me dhakel dena tha takki woh apni majil paa sake.....

Rani - Chal tu bhi tyaar ho jaa aur mujhe bhi tyaar hone de kabse nangi khadi hun.....
Veer smile dekar- 3 kapde pehne hain aur ab kya burkha pehnaogi ...... haahaahaa.....

Rani uski naak pakad ke hilayi - Tu kya chahata hai ki main aise hi sab ke saame jaun ?
Veer apni maa ke labo ko chumte huya bola - Bas mere saamne hi aise raha karo baaki samay normal kapadon me, main hi aise aapko dekh sakta hun......
Rani tanj kaste huye - Baaki sab ka krishan kanhiya bankar, main teri baat pe vishwas nahi karti..... jaa abhi teri gopiyan kahan puri hui hain, list bana le naamo ki...... haahaahaa .....
Veer - Naam to tera hi sabse uper hoga meri list me yeh tu bhi jaanti hai...... jaldi se mera muh meetha karwa tabhi jaane dunga.....
Rani - Kyon Komal ne karwaya ?

Veer - Kya maa tu bhi na ....... uski baat bich me reh gayi aur Rani uchjak ke Veer ke honthon se apne honth se jod di...... Tu bolta bahot hai...... chmmmmm...... muhhhhhh...... hak se mang sab milega...... umhhhhh...... umhhhhh...... mmmmmm...... mmmmmm......
(Veer ki himmat dekh rahi thi ki kaise usne uski saas ko pata liya aur yahan Komal ko bhi...... jaanti hun yeh galat hai par meri raha asaan ho jayegi aur Don (Ramadevi) ke muh pe tala bhi lag jayega......

Veer uske pichwade ke niche ulta haath daal ke utha liya aur apni maa ko kamre ke farsh se 1 ft uncha uthake kiss karne laga......
Rani uska poora saath dete huye josh se uski jibh ko chusne lagi ...... umhhhhhh..... mmmmmm......
Veer apni maa ka poora bhaar ke haath se thame jaise apni premika ko chum raha ho aise mehsoos kar raha tha...... dono 5 min tak kissing aur smooching karte rahe jab kiss toot gaya tab dono ek saath I love you bolkar hasne lage......

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( doston update chota hai so please mind mat karna )

Mast update h bro...

 

[Mahendra Baranwal]

Update 5

(Thakur ka parivar)

Rajasthan aur Uttar Pardesh ke border pe ek sehar tha Bharatpur jahan ke jaat Raja Maharaja Surajmal ne Delhi ka shighasan jeeta tha joh akhiri hindu raja the jihone delhi jiti thi, kuch chote rajput raja unke saath lade the ish vijay me......
Dharamveer ke purkhe joh unh rajput raja ke vanshaj the karib 150 saal pehle aaj ke U.P. state ke area me tarai ke ilake me shift kar gaye aur kheti-badi karne lage aur kayi logon ne apne naam se rajput sirname hata diya...... taki unko koi thakur jaati, joh kafi dabang thi UP me, na samjhe par they toh thakur bhi rajput hi akhir...... rajasthan me ek bahot bada area bhi tha jisko rajputana kehte the jahan unko aaj 2022 chal raha hai Ranasa ya Ranisa hi kahe jaata hai joh royal family ke hain.

Veer ke dadaji, Sohanveer, ki dosti Bheema Thakur se bachpan se thi dono langotiya yaar the, ek saath kushti karte, ek saath jawan huye aur 1 mahine ke antar me dono ki shaadi ho gayi thi..... shaadi ke baad inki dosti me koi pharak nahi pada balki dosti aur jaada majboot huyi..... iska ek bada aur gupt karan tha jisko sabse chipaya gaya tha joh Veer aur Rubi ne milkar pata laga hi liye kuch dino baad.....

VIJAY SINGH THAKUR (Bheema Thakur ki pita ji) ki 3 shaadi huyi thi sabse badi biwi se Bheema paida huya aur woh janam dete hi mar gayi.... 6 mahine baad dusri shaadi kiye usse biwi se Kuwar Singh paida huya joh bheema se 3 saal chota tha...... teesri shaadi jab kiye tab bheema 10 saal ka tha, ush biwi ko kuwar singh ki maa ne 2 saal baad jehar de diya jiski mirtu ho gayi usko Vijay Thakur ne goli maar di aur dono biwiyon ka antimsanskar ek saath kiya, police ka muh band kar diya paise se, bol diya gaya ki haiza se mari dono, Phir kabhi na shaadi karne ki bhishma pratigya khaa li thi.
Ab do hi ladke rahe gaye the Vijay Thakur ke, dono sautele bhaiyon me bachpan se nahi bani..... Vijay Thakur yeh sab dekh rahe the ki bhai bhai ka vivad hai jab jawan huye tab aur bhadta jaa raha tha...... tab unhone faisala kiye ki unki saari jaayedaad 3 hison me baant di jaaye...... Sherpur ka hissa Bheema thakur ko mila, Bhikampur ka aadha hissa Kuwar Singh ko mila aur Vijay Thakur ne Haveli aur bhikampur ka aadha hissa apne paas rakha..... dono ladko ki shaadi dhoom dhaam se ho gayi phir unke bacche bhi ho the.

Sab shaanti se chal raha tha ab Vijay Thakur bohat budhe ho gaye the aur sherpur gaon me rehne lage, haveli chhodkar apne bade bete bheema thakur ke sath...... ab yehin se ladai ki shuruvat huyi..... dono bhaiyon ko baap se jaada pyaar unke 3re hisse se tha joh unke marne ki baad milega aur yehi galti ish khandaan ki dusmani ki wajah bani..... bade bete ke moh aur unke aakhir samay bheema ki doosri patni ki sewa sasur ko unka dil jeet li aur haveli ke saath aadhi jameen bhikampur ki Vijay thakur ne Bheema ki dusri patni ke naam kar di....
Unke marouprant ab Haveli kya thi khooni madan ban gayi thi..... kayi log dono side ke maare jaa chuke the, ladkiyon aur auraton ka balatkaar huye...... goverment ne dono party ke log girftar kiye aur jail me thus diye Haveli seal kar di..... chote mote katal aaj bhi ho rahe the lekin thakuron ki family ne ek baat ka dhayan rakha ki bhai-bhai ki dusmani thi, dono ke parivar ko koyi haath na lagaya aur laga bhi nahi aaj tak..... 2 saal pehle Kuwar singh bhi heart attack se mar gaya par dushmani abhi bhi barakar thi......

1) Bheema Thakur - age 67 saal, ht 6ft 2 inch, Phelwani inka sabse bada saukh hai, kheti aur baghwani karna, kayi kaarobar hai inke..... 2 cheeni ki factory, 1 jutte ki factory aur constrution ka business bhi hai...... log inki bahot izzat karte hain, sab inko Bade Thakur ji bulate hain. Inhone 2 shaadi ki .....
Badi patni - Vimala devi, inka dehant ho gaya kuch saal, vimala se thakur ke 2 ladke hain .....

2) Lakhan Thakur - bada beta, age 44 yrs, ht 5ft 9 inch bahot kayian aur dhurt kism ka insaan hai, shur se hi iski buri nazar Dharamveer ki zameen aur joru Rani pe kharab hai lekin apne baap ki karan kabhi himmat nahi kar saka aur Ramadevi ke bhai, minister bhatije wajah se yeh usse darta hai. Isko shak hai Ramadevi aur iske baap ka anatik sambhand hai par kabhi proof nahi mila. Saari kheti aur paidavaar ishi ke haath me de rakhi bade thakur ji ne, sharab peena aur peekar majduron ki biwiyan chodna joh iske kheton me kaam karte hain. Veer iska sabse bada dushman hai iski chugli iski biwi Reema se kar deta hai.

Reema Thakur - Lakhan ki biwi, age 41 yrs, fig 38-30-38, bahot bindass aurat hai, hamesha masti majak ke mood me rehti hai, Rani jaisi sundar hai tabhi itni khubsurat betiyan paida ki hain, Rani se acchi dosti hai..... iski dono betiyaan hai.....

Rubi Thakur - age 21 yrs, ht 5ft 7 inch, 34-26-34, law ki student hai 3rd yrs me, Nidar, muhphat aur bindass hai, veer ki acchi dost hai, isko bhi veer pasand hai par apni choti bhen ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai. Bahot sundar aur sexy hai.

Preeti Thakur - age18 saal, ht 5ft 9 inch , fig 32-24-32 , pari jaisi sundar hai, Veer se bahot pyaar karti hai uske liye kisi ka khoon bhi kar sakti hai specially Prachi Thakur ka.

3) Karan Thakur - chota beta, age 40 saal, ht 6 ft, sehar ke saare business yehi sambhalta hai, Videsh me padhke aaya hai shaadi late ki hai isne, iski biwi 10 saal choti hai isse.

Ruchi Thakur - age 30 saal, ht 5ft 6 inch, fig 36-28-36, Modern aur highfi society ki aurat hai, poori fashionable hai chote chote sexy kapde pehneti hai...... veer ki favourite chachi hai, ruchi ko veer bahot pasand hai, usse har baar nayi tarah ka cake banke khilati jab bhi gaon aati hai par ek no ki chalu aurat hai, mardon ko apni ungli pe nachna ish khub aata hai. Bade thakur ji isko pasand nahi karte lekin apne pote ko pyaar karne se dur nahi reh sakte..... Ruchi ka ek beta hai, 3 saal ka naam hai - Rohtash.

4) Kamani Thakur - Bheema ki doosri biwi hai, age 49 saal, unse 18 saal choti hai, bahut kamuk aur garam aurat hai, Ramadevi se darti hai iske saare raaj woh jaanti hai. Veer ko apna beta manti hai aur woh bhi inka bahot samman karta hai..... ht 5ft 6 inch, Fig 38-30-40, inki ek hi beti hai

Padmani Thakur - kamami ki beti, age 27 saal, ht 5ft 10 inch, fig 36- 28-38 , apne pati ko divorce de di hai..... apni maa ke gun hai isme aur ht apne pita ji gayi hai ,Modern ladki hai, kapdo ka showroom hai iska sehar ne, Veer se inki aachi patti hai, usko bahot pasand karti hai.

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Thakur Kuwar Singh - Bheema thakur ka soutela chota bhai ,age 62 yrs , 2 saal pehle death huyi hai ..... bas ek hi beta hai inka , ladki bachpan me mar gayi thi.

Madhu Thakur - Kuwar singh ki patni, yrs 58 saal, bimar rehti hain...... veer ko bolti hain ki tu ish dusmani ko mita sakta hai, veer bas has deta hai , main sabse chota hun meri baat kyon sunga.

Raghav Thakur - age 43 yrs, ht 6 ft 4 inch, Bahot bada criminal aadmi hai, abhi jail me hai 7 saal se , kisi bhi ladki aur aurat ka rape karna, din dhade kisko bhi jaan se maar dena, bahot khunkhaar hai yeh thakur joh kisi ki nahi sunta bas Bade Thakur hi isko takkar dete aaye hain, jail me bhi isko inhone hi dalwa hai warna koyi bhi surakaisht nahi hota..... yeh aadmi nahi raksash hai, veer isse sabse jaada nafrat karta hai uska bas chale toh goli maar de ish aadmi ko par nahi maar sakta..... Iska khof aaj bhi dono gaon ke logon ke dil me tha.....

Ragni Thakur - raghav ki biwi, age 40 saal, ht5ft 8inch , fig 38-30-40, aache nature ki aurat hai, bahot sundar aur simple hai, veer ko apna beta hi maanti hai.
Apni pati se nafrat karti hai, woh pehle aisa aadami nahi tha jab Vijay singh Thakur ne haveli aur zameen Bheema thakur ki doosri biwi Kamani ke naam kar di thi..... woh khunkarabe pe utar aaya, Bheema Thakur ke khete me kaam karne waale majdur ke parivar ki 3 auraton ka samuhik balatkar kiye apne sathiyon ke saath aur 18 saal ki beti ko bhi nahi chhoda, usne aatamhata kar li, 10 majdooron ke sir me sidhi goli maar diya.

Sachin Thakur - age 23 saal, ht 6 ft 2 inch, 12th fail hai, baap ki tarah awaara hai, saare aaeb ish me hain, bas Bade thakur ji se darta hai jab tak woh jinda hai Veer aur uski maa bheno se badla nahi le sakta...... bade thakur ji ke aadami saare privaar ki suraksha karte the...... khaas kar Sherpur gaon ki bhi.....

Prachi Thakur - age 18 saal, ht 5ft 11 inch, ji haan yeh preeti se bhi 2 inch lambi thi, fig 34- 26- 34, veer se 4 mahine badi hai, poori apni maa pe gayi thi, veer akela ladka tha jisse woh baat karti thi..... dheere-2 jab veer ko janne lagi uska sacchi waala pyaar ho gaya..... ab woh din aa gaya tha ki ushe purpose kar de jaada se jaada woh mana dega toh main piche hat jaungi.....

Preeti aur Prachai dono bahot sunder thi, dono ka nature bhi same tha aur dono ki like & dislike bhi same thi agar dushmani na ho inke parivaar me toh dono acchi sisters ban sakti hai even sisters hi hain bas misunderstanding hai ..... aisa Veer maanta tha.

Komal daadi sahi kehti thi unhone ish ladke ko aache se phenchan liya tha, sab auratein aur lagbhag saare mard Veer ko pasand karte the, auratein tareef karti na thakti thi jab uska naam aaye wahin ladkiyan uske upar shahad ki tarah mandrati rehti, bacche aur budhe sab usko pasand karte the..... Veer ek matar aisa ladka tha jiski sab ke ghar me entry thi, sab usse haskar baat karte aur uske aane pe jaise khusiyaan aa gayi ho jahan woh jaata tha..... Ishliye woh aage chal kar key role nibhana sakta tha.


Ab aage......

Puja jaldi hi nipat gayi, mandir me baaki gaon waale bhi panditji ka intzaar kar rahe the ...... Rani me ek mithai ka dibba panditji ko diya unke parivaar waalon ke liye aur khud ek dibba lekar motichoor ke ladoo mandir me logo ko baantne lagi.

Ek dibba lekar aur 10 rupee ki note ki gaddi Ramadevi veer ko di aur boli ki bhikaarion me meethai aur rupee baant de apne haathon se...... veer daadi ke adhesh ka palan karne chala gaya tab Rubi ne Preeti ke ulte haath ki chunti kaati aur ishara ki tu bhi jaa veer ke picche-2.....

Preeti daadi se boli - Main bhi jaao daadi ji veer ki help karne wahan.

Rama bhi samajh gayi aur pyaar se boli - Jaldi mana le usko varna list kafai badi hai, 3 mahine se baat nahi ki pyaar se baat karna woh bhola bhandari hai kisi se jaada dair tak rusht nahi rehta..... aur pyaar se uske sar pe haath pher di..... Preeti hirni si kulache maar ke bhaghne lagi veer ki taraf .....

Rubi majakiya lehje me boli - Daadi ji main bhi jaao veer ki help karne..... jaise tone me preeti boli thi uski nakal karke..... Dono hasne lage..... haa hihi haa hihi......

Rama - Uska majak bahot ho gaya, chaal bhench pe bethte hain, Rani ko time lagega ladoo bantne me..... dono mandir ke bhaar me cement ki bench pe beth gayi.

Rama - Yeh dono me kya chal raha hai, tere baap ko pata chal toh Preeti ki gardan kaat ke jameen me gaad dega.

Rubi hasne lagi - 4 din se isko training de rahi thi tabhi to aaj result nikla, papa kuch nahi karenge bas sar patak patak ke veer ko kosege itna toh chalta hai daadi, waise aap sexy lag rahi ho ish saree me ...... aur aankh maar ke hasne lagi.....

RUBI Thakur

Rama idhar udhar dekhi koyi sun na raha ho aur Rubi ke kandhe pe maari - Jagha toh dekh leti hum kahan bethe hai, log sacch bolte hai tu bahot muhfat hai......

Udhar Veer seedhiyan utarne laga aur preeti 2-2 seedhi utarte huye Veer ko catch karni ki kosish me apna balance khone lagi..... usne Karamaaaaa pukara jorse toh Veer jhat se palta...... usko girte hute Preeti dekhi pat se ush seedhi pe kood gaya aur girti huyi Preeti ka ulta haath khich kar apne upar land karwa aur Veer usko liye ush seedhi pe gira joh sabse chaudi thi yaani 10th seedhi joh 2.5 ft ki...... Veer usko apne seene se aisa lita rakha tha ki dono seedhiyon pe soo rahe hain..... bhikaari aur bhakatgan unki taraf bhaghe, Veer ne mithai ka dibba uper ki seedhi par rakha aur bola - Tum theek ho ...... Preeti abhi bhi shock me thi Veer jhat se preeti ko apne bahon me laker sidha beth gaya aur ghum ke niche ki seedhi pe sidha khada hokar preeti ko bhi sidha khada karke ek baar aur pucha tum theek ho..... toh woh sir hila di .....

Kya huya ???? kya huya ???? chot toh nahi lagi ..... sab ekhte ho gaye ......

"Arre bhai kuch nahi huya hum dono theek hai ...... aap sab ka sukriya humko saans toh lene..... sab dur hat jaayo ..... ek dam dur " ..... ab Veer chillakar bola..... sab dur hat gaye..... woh jaanta tha ki kuch sararati tatv ish phirak me rehte hai ki ladki ki care dikhne ke liye uske private aang to dabane ka maja lete hai..... school aur college me jaane se kya farak pada tha Veer pe yeh saaf dikh raha tha..... Preeti ko kuch samajh hi nahi aaya ki Veer logon kyon daant raha hai ?

Ladoo ka dibba utha ke aur Preeti ka seedha haath pakad ke bola - Main ladoo bantata hun tu 10 ka note dena samajhi ..... aur baaki ki seedhi utar ke haathon me haath thame maangne waalo ke paas aakar unko ladoo dene lage..... Joh kaam Preeti na kar saki, Veer ki narajgi dur karna, woh uska seedhi se girana karwa diya..... "Ab toh main tere haath kabhi nahi chhodungi bas aakhir baar maaf kar dena shiv shambhu" ..... Preeti yehi prathna kar rahi thi bhagwan se.

Kuch aur log bhi the joh mandir ki upar waali seedhi se Naazara dekh rahi thi, unhone bas Preeti ko Veer ki bahon me dekha tha na ki girte woh bhi niche aane lagi hi thi ki Veer ko sab ke liye dur hatna ka adesh dete suna tha aur Preeti ko safely Veer ke haathon me haath daal ke niche jaana dekha tha..... **main teeno ki baat kar raha tha joh veer ke saath puja me samil huyi thi...... ek aurat joh mandir ki seedhi pe khadi thi usne sab detail me bata diya jab teeno ke paas aayi thi aur yeh bhi jod gayi ki Veer jaisa beta bhagwan sab ko de..... teeno ki aankhon me alag se garv ki chamak si aa gayi thi ..... jisko Rama ne apne dono haath ki muthi kaan pe laga ke apne pote ki balaiyen na bhuli.....

Rubi dheere se daadi se boli - Maan gaye Veer ko, apne gharon ki auraton ko protection kaise dena hain woh bakhubi jaanta hai asli mard hai aap ka pota bas ek ladki pata le tab poora mard man lungi..... haa haa haa .....

Rama - Tu nahi sudhergi..... aacha yeh bata gadi layi hai kya mere pair mandir ki seedhi chadte huye hi dukh rahe hain ab niche kaisa utrungi ?

Rani pandit ji ke paas chali gayi ki dhopher ka bhojan haamre ghar sabse pehle aap hi karna.... baaki ladoo bantne lagi kuch naye log dikh gaye the usko.....

Rubi - Abhi driver ko call lagti hun aur aapka Veer kab kaam aayega din bhar toh apni daadi ko goad me utha liye ghumta hai..... kaash hum ko bhi aise gubru phelwan ki goad naseeb hoti.....

Rama - Jaade baat mat mila driver ko phone kar, teri shaadi kisi naukar se karwani padegi joh tera hukum bajta rahe..... daadi ne jaise usko ched diya ho.

Rubi khud ko defend ki - Main kitni baar bata chuki hun mujhe Veer se hi shaadi karni hai par aap log mujhe serious nahi le rahe ho, 3 saal ka time hai aapke paas agar raaji nahi hua toh kidnap karwa lungi aap bas haath malti reh jaaogi.

Udhar ladoo aur rupee baant kar bhikaron me Preeti Veer ka haath pakad ke Nadi ke kinare le gayi, Veer - Main kitni baar puchun ki tum mujhe yahan kun laayi ?

Preeti - Thanks mera itna khaal rakhne ki liye, tum na hote toh mera kya haal hota seedhiyon se girte huye shayad meri.....

Veer uske muh par haath rakh diya - Aisa sochna bhi mat, shubh shubh socho, main wahin paas me mila yeh bhagwan ki kripa hai hum pe..... vaise tum bhari bahot ho dikhne me toh nahi lagti.

Preeti apne attitude me vapas aayi aur boli - 3 kg wt loose kiya hai 93 days me tujhe main bhari lagti hun, saari dress loose ho gayi hai tujhe main bhari lagti hun.... aur muh ghum ke nadi dekhne lagi.....

Veer usko dekhkar uske saamne aa gaya , woh side me dekhne lagi.....

Veer - Aaj nahi bolegi Happy Birthday..... na hi kiss karogi..... aise hi ruthi rahogi..... chal main hi maafi maangta hun, tum mujhe maaf kar do.....

"puchhhhhh ..... "

achanak preeti ne rote huye Veer seedhe gaal pe kiss kar diya...... woh sacch me ro rahi thi, Veer itna nirdai nahi tha joh Kisi ladki ko rula de specially preeti ko woh uski best friend thi bachpan se..... saath khelna, masti karna, dono ka ladna, roothna aur maan na sabne yehi dekha hai.....

"Happy Birthday Karamveer, I am still ur best friend na..... main tumhari haan aur maa ki haan ka wait zindgi bhar karungi..... "

Aur uske gale lag gayi..... Veer bhi shock me tha aur koi yahan aa na jaaye yeh bhi dar tha ...... ladki ke aansun apna kaam kar gaye the..... preeti shimla me padhi thi kafi modern ho gayi thi, gaon me yeh sab alowed nahi hota, chori chipe, logon ki nazar bacha ke.....

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[rahultheruler]

Mast update h bro...

thanks bhai