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Naina

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Thank you naina ji :hug: :bow:
Puri planning karke aye hain. Tabhi to jo chahie vo pura hoga ...
Bhugatte nahi hai ye.. :D apna kaam karte hain bas....
Abhi to bacha hua hai... ;)

Vo gayab hai, kya pata andar unse hi mila hua ho :D
joh bhi ho chintu222 ke comments kaafi joshile hote hai. ek jaan daal deta hai pure thread mein aur points pakadne mein ustad.. doubts bhi clear kar deta hain... :D
 
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Naina

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Big-Bang se pehle bhraman mein na to koi dunia thi aur na hi us dunia ki sabse jaruri element maujud thi yani ' Time ' Samay apne aap mein ek sishu hai jiska janam bhraman mein hue visfot ke baad maujud hua. Yakeenan usne apne janam ke baad hume apne bare mein, dusron ke bare mein aur is bhraman ke janam ke bare mein bataya. Lekin kya ' Time ' ek illusion hai ya fir vo ek reality hai? Agar mein time se uski teen mehatav-purn cheez hata dun yani ki uska atit, vartaman aur bhavishye to kya vo ek chota sa andhkar ban kar nahi reh jayega jo big-bang se pehle hua karta tha. Kya samay kuch aur nahi balki ek andhkar hai?
waise first story se hatke hogi sayad ye second part... hai na :hmm:
 
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Pagali waali ek bàad second story Bahoot hi achchi lag rahi hai
 
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joh bhi ho chintu222 ke comments kaafi joshile hote hai. ek jaan daal deta hai pure thread mein aur points pakadne mein ustad.. doubts bhi clear kar deta hain... :D
Han vo banda pura chaan bin karke update mein se sawal aur jawab dono karta tha. Ab shayad bsy hi hai..
waise first story se hatke hogi sayad ye second part... hai na :hmm:
Hatke nahi hogi... Normal hi hogi.... Baki dekhte hain jab likhi jayegi to kaisi hogi
 
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" tumhe lag raha hai jo tum chahte ho vo le jaoge, jo tum vo soch rahe ho vo impossible hai " security chief apni jagah se khada ho chuka tha aur usne apni gun samne ki aaur tan rakhi thi. Samne khade 20 devdoot mein se koi kuch nahi bola, sabhi civilans ke chehre par dar saaf jhalak raha tha. Tabhi unme thodi jagah bani aur piche se ek devdoot civilian ka hath pakde aage chalne laga. Civilan ke hath mein gun thi aur uska point samne ki aaur tha. Security chief ke mathe se pasina nikal raha tha.

" wahi ruk jao " vo chillaya par devdoot nahi ruka " hold, koi fire nahi karega " usne apne sathi se kaha. Sabhi ke dhadkan tez thi, devdoot aage aya aur security chief se thodi dur aakar khada ho gaya. Civilan ek ladki thi jiski ankhon mein ansu the, " apni apni gun niche fenk do " kehte hue uske honth kamp rahe the.

" tumhara dimag kharab to nahi ho gaya " usne civilan ki taraf dekhte hue kaha par jawab uska devdoot ko tha. Civilian phir ghabrate hue boli. " de do warna iske aage jo anjam hoga uske jimewar tum hoge kishan. Kishan ko apna naam sun kar thoda aschasrya hua lekin vo is vishay mein kuch nahi bola.

" agar mei tumhe apni gun de dunga to hum tum par kaise vishwas kare ki tum kisi ko kuch nahi karoge "

" itne sawal tum.. " vo civillian bol kar ek pal ke liye ruki aur phir ankhein michti hui boli " muth marte hue bhi karte ho? "

" tum par bahut bhari badega devdoot tum nahi jante ki " kishan bhauklate hue bola, uskiungli trigger par jaa chuki thi. Par use phir bich mein rok diya gaya.

" tumne kaise muth marte hue apne na janme bachon ko mara hai, janta hun har raat ko khud ke hathon ka istemal karke pados wali bhabhi ko kapde change karte hue dekhne ka shauk rakhta tha na tu " sawal kishan devdoot se kar raha tha aur jawab civillian de rahi thi. Kishan puri tarah se hairan ho gaya, trigger se ungli hatti aur usne gun niche rakh di.

" everyone put down thier weapons " uske kehte hi sabhi ne wesa hi kiya.

" jo piche rakhi hai vo bhi " civillian ke kehte hi kishan ne ek pal uske chehre ki taraf dekha jo behad dara hua tha. Usne dusri gun bhi nikali aur wahan rakh di.

" sabhi apni-apni jagah par baith kar hath piche ki taraf kar lo, jaldi " is baar usi civiilian ke piche khade devdoot ne kaha. Sabhi ne wesa hi kiya aur usi waqt 3-4 devdoot wahan aye aur unse bandhe civiilians ne security ke hath bandhne shuru kar diye aur sath hi farsh par padi sari gun utha kar ek bag mein dal di. Har kaam un civillians ne kiya aur vo bhi behad tarike se.

Gaddi se Bahar nikalte hi vo apni team ke pass pahuncha jisne ek chota camp laga liya tha. Andar ghusne se pehle usne apne officers ki taraf dekha jinpar cover dal diya gaya tha aur phir us bhid ko jo us fence ke piche khadi thi jise local police handle kar rahi thi.

" team, hume kuch der mein ek helicopter mil jayega. Mujhe usme apni team ke best do sniper chahie " vo andar ghuste hi bola. Andar camp mein chota base ban chuka tha jisme har tarah ka saman maujud tha. " now i want eyes.."

" sir we are getting into it, camera building ke bas entry aur exit par hai baki sabhi andar install hai "

" sabhi camera ka access mil jayega "

" yes sir, bas do minute aur " chasma lagaye laptop par tezi se ungli chalate hue camera ke access ko retrieve karne ki kosish karne lagi.

Vo apne tv par Bank ke hall ki video dekh raha tha tabhi use notification aya jisme likha aa raha tha ' Unknown Source ' usne do pal intezar kiya aur phir use accept karke, apni feed share kar di.

" we have eyes sir " uske bolne sath hi sabhi screen par dekhne lage. Jahan security officers ke hath bandh kar unhe ek kone mein baithaya jaa raha tha.

" what the fuck.. " uske muh se yahi nikla jab usne devdoot ke aage bandhe hue civiilians ko dekha to. " mujhe inki entry feed dikhao, i want to know ki inke alawa aur kaun kaun hai wahan "

" got it sir "

" and i want every inside eye on one screen damn it, choti choti si chiz par nazar rakhni hai jab tak koi madad na aa jaye "

" sir, bomb squad wapis aa gaya " camp ke bahar se ek officer bola tab use yaad aya ki usne bomb squad ko bheja tha building ke charon taraf check karne ki koi aur bomb to implant nahi kiya gaya.

" sir kya soch rahe hain aap " kishan ke bagal mein baithe officer ne kaha jo usi ki tarah samne dekh rahe the jahan sabhi devdoot civillians ki madad se apna kaam kar rahe the.

" inki study mahesh, tumne notice nahi kiya ki har civiilian kitni safai se har kaam ko kar rahe the. Mujhse puche gaye sawalon ka jawab us civillian ne kis tarah diya jaise use sab kuch pehle se hi bataya gaya tha itna hi nahi balki mujhe ise badi baat jo khatak rahi hai vo ye hai ki akhir kaun tha vo jisne emergency wala button dabaya " kishan ne sabhi ki taraf dekhte hue camera ki taraf dekhne laga vo janta tha ki bahar se unhe dekha jaa sakta hai.

" nothing? koi bomb nahi mila? " usne bomb squad ke member se pucha.

" nahi sir puri building ke radius mein koi bomb nahi tha aur jo bomb visfot hua vo bhi koi bomb nahi tha sir. Diwali ka pathaka tha jise is sound device ke zariye itna loud kiya jise sabko laga ki bomb dhamaka hua hai. Sab chiz remote control thi, building ke kisi bhi part ko koi damage nahi hua hai " bomb squad ki baat sun kar vo hakka bakka reh gaya. Uske hath mein wo device tha jo bomb squad ke officer ne use diya tha. Vo abhi soch raha tha ki uska phone bajne laga

" Rajendra speaking "

" rajendra tumne kya kiya hai ? "

" kya kiya hai sir ? mei kuch samjha nahi "

" puri building ke bahar media khadi hai, bank ke andar ki feed tv par live aa rahi hai "

" what ? "

" kya tumhe nahi malum? " samne se awaz atte hi rajendra vapis camp ke andar ghusa.

" sir ek problem ho gayi hai, someone broadcast our feed, har tv channel par sivai news channel ke bank ki feed chal rahi hai aur " vo ruki " aur jab humne trace kiya ki feed kahan se live ho rahi hai to wo hamari taraf se hi broadcast ki gayi hai "

" what the fuck " vo gurayaa aur phir chup hua " find who did this " usne phone ke speaker ko hath se chupaya aur apna gussa control karte hue chillaya.

" helo rajendra ? "

" yes sir "

" are you aware of this? kya status hai tum mujhe bataoge "

" devdoot fucked us sir "
 
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