Sci-FI Treasure ~~ " Time Is Dark "

[harshit1890]

Sc fi istory ... Horror se sci-fi tak ... Waise sci-fi bahut boaring subject hota hai ... Hariya unkil kuch masala dalte huye chaliyega ..

Aaj raat ku padh kar .. ye big bang theory par bang bang karta hun ..

Waise jo aap ne samay ka mulyankan likha hai ... Usme chhoti si truti hai... Samay to prithwi ke apne aksh par ghumne ki nischit awadhi ko darshata hai... Usi awadhi ka gyan lekar hum din aur Raat ka aakalan karte hain .. bhoot.. bhawishya aur vartman ye nawa concept hai..

Once again and ummid hai ki hafte dus din me ekadh update aa jaye

Sci-fi to bahut pehle se likhta hua aya hun
Apne agar iska pehla part pada hota to aap masale ko samajh jatte
Nahi padh paoge kyun ki iska pehla part padna mandate hai
Par han is baar time ko lekar bahut si batein hai.... Aap nahi padh paoge sirji, samay dena padta hai bahut padne ke liye bhi humse pucho nahi de patte
Phir bhi yahan darshan dene ke liye shukriya

 

[harshit1890]

Chota hi sahi par de diya, regular rahenge ab hum kosish

 

[Naina]

pata toh pehle hi lag jaye ki yeh ek pre-planned bank robbery hai... par iske piche ye devdoot hoga... yeh latest news hai...
...... lagta hai paiso ki tangi chal rahi hai upor se ye alsipan ... isliye mehnat ki kamayi ke wajaye short-cut maar ke paisa lootne ka upay dhund nikala hai
bad.. Bhery bad..
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill harshit ji

 

[Naina]

Chota hi sahi par de diya, regular rahenge ab hum kosish

Koi na...
are haan ho sake toh haweli 2pe bhi update dijiye

 

[Naina]

Is kahani ki prefix fantasy kar dijiye
(samajhdaar ko ishara hi kaafi hai )

 

[Yug Purush]

Sirji aap to bsy rehte ho waise bhi iske liye ise pehle wala part padna padega

Ye web series dekhne wale aise hee karte hai, simple story likhte hee nahi.... : D pahle wale ka link do
Btw

 

[pawankamdev123]

Nice update bhai...
Devdut ee saala yahan bhi hai..

 

[harshit1890]

pata toh pehle hi lag jaye ki yeh ek pre-planned bank robbery hai... par iske piche ye devdoot hoga... yeh latest news hai...
...... lagta hai paiso ki tangi chal rahi hai upor se ye alsipan ... isliye mehnat ki kamayi ke wajaye short-cut maar ke paisa lootne ka upay dhund nikala hai
bad.. Bhery bad..
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill harshit ji

Hahaha paison ki tangi ya phir koi aur khel hai iska to pata aage hi chalega...
Thanks naina ji

Koi na...
are haan ho sake toh haweli 2pe bhi update dijiye

Wahi ayega ab...
Finally

Is kahani ki prefix fantasy kar dijiye
(samajhdaar ko ishara hi kaafi hai )

I know aap kidhar ishara kar rahe ho, lekin aap log hi kafi ho.. Vaise bhi 1st Part padna jaruri hai

 

[harshit1890]

Ye web series dekhne wale aise hee karte hai, simple story likhte hee nahi.... : D pahle wale ka link do
Btw

Hahaha.... Hum bhi ab bhai.. ek time akar web serieska plot de sakte hain yani aap aur ek do writer mil jaye to likh hi lenge parkache udane ke liye kafi hoga

https://xforum.live/threads/treasure-the-invisible-hunt-completed.12378/

Link ye hai sirji

Thanks gyani bhai

 

[harshit1890]

Nice update bhai...
Devdut ee saala yahan bhi hai..

Thanks pawan bhai
Are abhi dekho kaun kahan kahan hai