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Kafi time baad aana hua aapke thread per. Zabardast update. Rayavaan n Dev aamne samne hai shayad koi ek hi bache aaj.UPDATE 23
Raat Ki Jung
Raat apni gehraiyon me aur zyada doob chuki thi. Hideout ke andar ek ajeeb sa sukoon tha, magar Dev ke mann me ek ajnabee si bechaini thi. Woh achanak uth baitha, jaise kisi ne uske andar ek signal bheja ho.
Ananya bhi turant uth gayi.
Ananya – (Halki pareshaani ke saath) "Kya huaa?"
Dev – (Dhyan se kaan lagakar) "Kuch movement feel ho rahi hai… yaha se thodi door par jaise koi cars wagera aayi ho… lagta hai koi loading ho rahi hai."
Ananya ne thoda muskurakar dekha.
Ananya – "Lagta hai aapki six sense ab aur bhi tez ho gayi hai…"
Dev bhi halka sa muskura diya, lekin uski muskurahat me ek teasing touch tha.
Dev – (Halki si hasi ke saath) "Abhi toh aap bhaav me aayi thi… toh lagta hai saare senses bhi wapas thik ho gaye hain!"
Ananya ne ek dum se sharma kar aankhein chhupa li. Uske gaal laal ho gaye the. Dev ka yeh teasing andaz uske dil ki dhadkan tez kar raha tha.
Ananya – (Aankhein chhupate hue) "Mujhe toh lagta tha ki aap bohot seedhe aur shant insaan hain… par aap toh chalu number ek nikle!"
Dev has pada, ek dum se relaxed tarike se.
Dev – "Bas bas Anu… ab baaton me mat lagao warna yeh Viper ka base kharab ho jaayega, usko acha nahi lagega."
Tayari - Dev Ka Roop Badal Raha Tha
Dev fir se serious mode me aa gaya. Uske chehre se mazak aur hassi gayab ho gayi, ab sirf ek soldier baitha tha—ek killer jo apni shikaar ki tayyari kar raha tha.
Usne apni tactical suit uthai. Yeh ek khas suit tha, ekdum battle gear jaisa—kala, tight fit, aur har jagah chhupi pockets jismein chhoti chhoti weapons rakhe ja sakte the. Suit ka fabric special tha, jo na sirf protection deta tha, balki movement bhi smooth rakhta tha.
Ananya bas usse dekh rahi thi. Jab Dev ne apni shirt utaari, toh uski aankhein ek dum wahin atak gayi. Dev ki body ekdum toned thi, har ek muscle ek soldier ki tarah bana hua. Uske chaati pe kuch purane zakham the, jo uske guzre hue waqt ki kahani keh rahe the.
Ananya – (Halki si awaaz me) "Yeh sab zakham… aapko kab mile?"
Dev ne uski taraf dekha, phir bina kuch kahe apni suit pehni shuru kar di.
Ananya ab bhi uske kareebi movement ko notice kar rahi thi. Jab usne apna suit pehna, toh woh aur bhi powerful lag raha tha. Ek dum shikari jaisa, jo bas apne dushmano ka intezaar kar raha ho.
Ananya ki saansein halki si tez ho gayi. Uske gaal laal ho gaye, uske mann me ajeeb si kasak jagne lagi.
Ananya – (Halki sharmati awaaz me) "Aapko suit me dekh kar toh lagta hai ki sirf guns se nahi… aap sirf apni body se bhi logo ka kaam tamaam kar sakte hain…"
Dev ek dum se muskuraya, ek teasing si smile ke saath uski taraf dekha.
Dev – "Toh bas dekhti jaao, aaj raat sirf guns nahi chalengi… kuch aur bhi hone wala hai."
Ananya ki aankhein badhti hui garmi ko mehsoos kar rahi thi. Ab tak jo rishta sirf ek bhai aur behen ka tha, woh kuch aur ban raha tha.
Lekin Dev apni tayari me busy ho gaya. Usne apni belt tight ki, knives aur chhoti grenades apni jagah rakhi, aur ek chhoti si gun apni thigh holster me fix ki. Ab woh ek complete warrior lag raha tha.
Ananya ab bhi usse dekh rahi thi, lekin Dev ko mehsoos ho raha tha. Usne dheere se uska haath pakda, uske gaal par ungliyon se halka sa sparsh kiya.
Dev – (Halki si madad bhari muskurahat ke saath) "Itna blush mat karo, Anu… nahi toh main sach me late ho jaunga."
Ananya – (Masti bhari sharm ke saath) "Phir bhi… jaane se pehle ek aur baar dekhne dijiye… shayad agli baar itna kareeb na dekh paun."
Dev thoda ruka, uski aankhon me kuch pal ke liye ek narmi aayi, phir usne apni gloves pehni aur gun uthai.
Dev – (Thandi si muskurahat ke saath) "Wapas aayunga, Ananya… bas intezaar karna."
Dev ne apni suit ki last strap tight ki aur ek gehri saans bhari. Uski aankhein ab ekdum shikari ki tarah chalak aur focused ho chuki thi.
Jaane se pehle usne hideout ke security locks activate kiye. Ek high-tech biometric lock system activate ho gaya, jo sirf uski ya Ananya ki identity scan karne ke baad khulta. Yeh sirf ek simple lock nahi tha—koi bhi unauthorized movement detect hoti, toh automatic counter-defense mode activate ho jata.
Ananya – (Thoda pareshaan hokar) "Akele jaa rahe hain…?"
Dev – (Ek confident smile ke saath) "Akele nahi… main aur mera saaya."
Ananya ne ek gehri nazar us par daali, jaise jaane se pehle usse ek baar aur yaad me basa lena chahti ho. Lekin Dev bas ek halki si teasing smile deke, bina kuch aur kahe bahar nikal gaya.
Raat ekdum sannate me doobi thi, lekin hawa me ek ajeeb si tension thi. Dev ne apni movements slow aur calculated rakhi. Woh ek bade pathar ke peeche chhup gaya, ekdum third-person shooter style me, jahaan se usko aas-paas ki activity clearly dikhti thi.
Usne apni digital watch activate ki, jo ek encrypted satellite network se connected thi. Yeh koi aam smartwatch nahi thi—yeh ek tactical interface tha jo real-time enemy movements track kar sakta tha. Screen par ek thermal mapping mode activate hua, jisme red dots dikh rahe the—yeh Cobra ke snipers aur soldiers the, jo uske hideout ke aas-paas position le chuke the.
Dev – (Halki si muskuraahat ke saath) "Shikari banne aaye ho… magar ek asli shikari ke shikaar ka hissa ban rahe ho."
Usne apni left earbud me ek chhota sa button press kiya, jo uske earpiece aur wrist-watch ko sync karta tha. Ab uske paas Cobra ke aadmiyon ka exact location map tha.
Total: 6 snipers, 10 ground soldiers, aur 2 vehicles me aur log.
Dev ne ek halka sa stretch kiya, jaise koi predator apne muscles warm-up kar raha ho attack se pehle. Fir usne apni silenced pistol nikaali aur ek slow, steady breath li.
👁🗨 TARGET LOCKED.
Sabse pehla sniper ek tree stand par tha, 20 meters door aur uske night vision scope me poora hideout dikhta tha. Lekin ek cheez jo usse nahi pata thi—Dev already uska number likh chuka tha.
PISHH! (Silencer ki awaaz)
Ek single suppressed shot, aur sniper neeche gira—bilkul bina kisi extra noise ke.
Dev – (Dheere se) "Ek gaya… ab baaki."
Usne apni tactical knife nikaali, jo specially coated thi taaki kisi bhi skin penetration pe blood zyada spill na ho—silent kill ke liye perfect weapon.
Agla target—ek ground soldier jo thodi door apne radio pe report de raha tha. Dev lightning speed me aage bada, ek dum ghost ki tarah bina kisi awaaz ke. Usne ek second me uske munh pe haath rakha, aur doosre haath se knife uske gale me… ek clean kill.
Usne body ko quietly side me rakha aur apni watch pe wapas scan kiya. Ab bas 8 log aur bache the jo uske aage ka obstacle bane hue the.
UPDATE 24: Cobra Ka Antim Khel
Raat aur gehri ho chuki thi. Ek ke baad ek Cobra ke aadmi bina awaaz mare ja rahe the, lekin ab tak kisi ko shaq tak nahi hua. Dev ek dum ghosts ki tarah move kar raha tha, ek shikari jo sirf apni maut ka farmaan likhne aaya tha.
Usne ek aur ground soldier ko slow motion me apni silenced pistol se shoot kiya—seedha skull penetration, bina kisi extra blood loss ke.
Dev – (Aasman ki taraf dekhte hue halki si muskuraahat ke saath) "Aaj raat ka chand sirf mere shikaar ka gawaah banega."
Uski digital watch ka thermal scan update hua. Bas 5 log aur bache the.
Lekin tabhi, ek sniper jo thodi door ek watch tower pe tha, usne neeche kisi ki movement detect kar li.
Sniper – (Radio par) "Command, I think we have a movement…"
Lekin uske kehne se pehle hi, ek dagger seedha uske gale me chala gaya. Uski aankhein phail gayi, lekin awaaz nikalne ka ek mauka tak nahi mila. Uska body neeche gira, bina kisi shor ke.
Dev – (Knife ko clean karte hue) "Shhh… jo chup chap marte hain, unki maut bhi hamesha yaad rehti hai."
Hideout Ke Andar
Ananya andar tension me idhar-udhar chal rahi thi. Uska dil tez dhadak raha tha, lekin woh jaanti thi ki Dev hamesha apna kaam pura karke hi lautta hai.
Ananya – (Dil me) "Yeh aadmi… samajhte kyun nahi ki ab woh akela nahi hai… main hoon unke saath."
Woh ek baar hideout ke surveillance screen ki taraf dekhne lagi, jo Dev ki set ki gayi security cameras ka live feed dikhati thi. Har jagah sirf andhera aur laashen dikh rahi thi.
Lekin uska mann ab bhi thoda ajeeb sa lag raha tha. Woh jaanti thi ki ab uska aur Dev ka rishta sirf bhai-behen ka nahi raha, ab woh uske jeene ki wajah thi.
Ananya – (Apne aap se) "Agar aapko kuch ho gaya toh…?"
Tabhi hideout ka security lock beep karne laga.
Beep… Beep… Beep…
Ananya ekdum alert ho gayi. Usne ek side me rakhi shotgun uthai aur dheere se entrance ke pass chhup gayi.
Darwaza dheere se khula… Aur ek chehra jo ab tak dost tha, ab dushman ban chuka tha.
Ravyaan – (Ek dark smile ke saath) "Kya socha tha, sirf Dev hi target hai?"
Ananya – (Shock aur gusse me) "Ravyaan?! Yeh kya mazaak hai?"
Ravyaan – (Aage badhte hue) "Yeh mazaak nahi hai, jaaneman… Tum dono ne jo socha tha, usse kahin bada plan hai mera. Dev sirf ek rukhawat hai… asal trophy toh tum ho."
Ananya ne bina kisi hesitation ke uspar fire kar diya. Lekin Ravyaan ek agility ke saath side ho gaya.
Ravyaan – (Haste hue) "Oh wow, ab tum bhi ladna seekh gayi ho?"
Ananya – (Gusse se) "Tum Dev ke dushman ho?"
Ravyaan – (Halki si hasi) "Nahi… main Dev ka ant hoon dev ki anu ."
Tabhi peeche se ek awaaz aayi… ek goli ki tezi se.
Dev – (Cold aur intense) "Aur main tera maut ka farmaan hoon, Ravyaan."
Ravyaan mudte hi ek bullet unke haath ke paas se nikal gayi.
Ravyaan –
(Darte hue) "Shit… yeh kab aaya?"
Ananya – (Relief se) "Aap theek hain?!"
Dev – (Ek thandi muskurahat) "Main toh theek hoon, magar yeh nahi rahega."
Yah kaisay hua. Kaun hai jo is laash ko gayab kar gaya?UPDATE 24
( Raat Ki Jung End )
Raat ka andhera aur bhi gehra ho chuka tha. Viper ka hideout ek battlefield ban gaya tha. Khoon ki boo hawa me ghul chuki thi, aur zameen par sirf laashon ka dher tha. Dev ke haathon se maut ka tamasha abhi bhi jaari tha. Cobra gang ka ek bhi aadmi zinda nahi bacha tha… sirf ek ko chhod kar—Ravyaan.
Ravyaan – (Haste hue, bechaini chhupane ki koshish me) "Dev! Tum bhi? Tumhe toh Cobra ke logon ka samna karna chahiye tha…"
Dev – (Pistol ghumate hue, ek thandi awaaz me) "Kiya tha. Sab khatam ho chuke hain."
Ravyaan ke chehre ka rang udd gaya. Halki si thartharahat uske haathon me dikh rahi thi. Usne ek nazar aaspaas daali—har taraf sirf maut ka nazara tha.
Ravyaan – (Aankhon me darr) "Tu… tune sabko maar diya?"
Dev – "Aur tu jo next hai… bas uska intezaar kar raha hoon."
Tabhi, peeche se ek awaz aayi. Ek confident, nishchit awaz.
Ananya – "Bhai, isse aapke upar chhodna chahiye ya main khud nipta loon?"
Dev ne dheere se muskurakar Ananya ki taraf dekha. Uske chehre pe ab na dar tha, na confusion—sirf ek alag si chamak thi. Dev ne phir apni nazar Ravyaan ki taraf ghumai.
Dev – (Ek thandi awaaz me) "Iska faisla sirf main karunga."
Ravyaan ne bhaagne ki koshish ki, lekin Ananya ne turant ek kadam aage badhakar uska rasta rok diya.
Ananya – (Gusse se) "Tu bhaag nahi sakta, Ravyaan."
Ravyaan ne ek pal bhi waste nahi kiya—usne apni pistol uthai aur seedha Ananya par target kiya!
BANG!
Lekin jaise hi usne trigger dabaaya, Ananya ka body ekdum natural reflex ke saath neeche jhuk gaya. Jaise koi anjaan shakti uske movements guide kar rahi ho. Goli uske baal ke ek strand ko bhi nahi chhoo saki.
Ananya – (Ek ajeeb sa confidence) "Tu slow hai, Ravyaan."
Usne Ravyaan ke haath par ek zor ka punch maara, jisse pistol uske haath se gir gayi. Ek aur baar Ravyaan ne punch maarne ki koshish ki, magar Ananya neeche jhuk gayi aur ek low kick se uske ghutne pe attack kar diya. Ravyaan ka balance hil gaya. Uski aankhon me dar tha—Ananya waise nahi lad rahi thi jaise pehle.
Ravyaan – (Ghabrakar) "Teri…"
Aur uske kehne se pehle Ananya ka ek aur punch uske face pe pada— jo itna zor ka tha ki Ravyaan peeche gir gaya.
Ravyaan ne dekha ki base me rukna maut bulane jaisa hai. Wo turant ek side flip maar kar peeche hata, aur ek hidden sidearm nikal li!
BANG! BANG!
Goli seedha Dev ke taraf ja rahi thi, magar Dev ne bina kisi hesitation ke ek side roll kiya aur ek stone pillar ke piche cover le liya.
Dev – (Andar hi andar) "Jungle tak bhaag ke bhi tu zinda nahi bachega…"
Ravyaan bina peeche dekhe jungle ki taraf daud gaya! Uske jooton ke neeche sukhaye hue patton ki awaaz raat ki sannate me gunj rahi thi. Saans phuli hui thi, magar dar usse aur tez bhaga raha tha.
Ravyaan – (Andar hi andar) "Bas ek baar jungle pahunch jaun, phir tu mujhe kabhi nahi dhoond paayega, Dev!"
Par Dev waisa shikaar nahi tha jo apni shikaar ko bhaagne de.
Dev – (Ek chhoti si smile) "Tujhe laga tu bhaag sakega? Galti kar di."
Dev aur Ananya dono jungle ke andher me ek shadow ki tarah ghus gaye. Dev ka har kadam, har movement planned tha—jaise uske dimaag me ek maansik map ho.
Jungle ka andhera ghana ho chuka tha. Hawa me mitti aur sard raat ki boo thi. Peeche se patton ki halki awaaz aayi—jaise koi jungle me slowly move kar raha ho.
Aur ussi moment…
PISHH!
Ek single suppressed shot!
Goli seedha Ravyaan ke pair me lagi. Uska shareer ek jhatke se neeche gira.
Ravyaan – (Cheekh kar) "AAHHH!!"
Uske haathon me mitti chipak gayi thi, aur pair se khoon beh raha tha. Usne bhaagne ki koshish ki, magar ab wo sirf apni maut ka intezaar kar raha tha.
Ek kadam uske saamne pada.
Phir ek aur.
Dev dheere se jungle ke andher se ek shadow ki tarah aage badha. Uska chehra ekdum emotionless tha. Koi shabd nahi, koi emotion nahi—sirf maut ki sannata.
Ananya – "Bhai, iska kaam ab khatam."
Dev ne apni pistol Ravyaan ke forehead par laga di.
Dev – (Cold voice) "Kya socha tha, ki meri Anu ko apni baato me fasa lega?"
Ravyaan – (Darte hue) "Dev, please… yaar ek mauka de…!"
Dev ne uski aankhon me dekha, aur ek second ka break liya.
Dev – "Mauka chahiye?"
Ravyaan – "Haan… please…"
Dev – (Ek chhoti si hansi ke saath) "Chal, ek diya."
PISHH!
Ek aur suppressed shot.
Ek second me silence.
Ravyaan ka laash neeche gir gayi. Jungle ki mitti uske khoon se bhig chuki thi.
Dev ne dheere se apni gun holster me rakhi, aur Ananya ki taraf dekha.
Ananya – (Dheere se) "Khatam?"
Dev – (Ek chhoti si smile) "Abhi sirf shuruwaat hai."
Jungle ki thandi hawa ab bhi behti ja rahi thi. Pedon ki halki sarasarahat aur mitti ki basi khushbu ne raat ko aur gehra bana diya tha. Dev aur Ananya ab ek bhayanak ladaayi jeet chuke the. Unke saamne Ravyaan ki laash padi thi, khoon abhi bhi zameen par tapak raha tha.
Ananya ki aankhon me ek ajeeb si chamak thi—jeet ki khushi, ek naya ehsaas. Uska saans tez chal raha tha, lekin uske chehre pe sukoon tha.
Ananya – (Halki hasi ke saath) "Bhai, hum jeet gaye!"
Dev uske chehre ko ghoorta raha, jaise usme kuch dhoondh raha ho. Uski aankhon me emotions ki ek gehri lehar thi—pyaar, fikr, aur ek ajeeb sa rishta jo dono ko samajh nahi aata tha.
Dev – (Gehri awaaz me) "Haan Anu, magar asli jung abhi baaki hai."
Ananya ne Dev ki aankhon me dekha, ek pal ke liye sab kuch ruk gaya. Uska dil tez dhadak raha tha, jaise uss raat ki syaahi me sirf dono ek dusre ke liye bane ho.
Aur phir, bina soche, bina kisi sharam ke, Ananya ne apne haath Dev ke gale me daal diye aur uske lips ko apne lips se lock kar liya.
CHUMMA
Ek gehra, intense, aur pyaar bhara kiss.
Dev ek pal ke liye ekdum still ho gaya. Ananya ki saansein uske chehre pe lag rahi thi. Uske lips naram the, pyaar bhare, jaise ek ajeeb si lagan thi us kiss me.
Lekin uske samajhne se pehle hi, ek tez hawa ka jhoka aaya!
SHHHHHH...!
Hawa ekdum tez ho gayi. Mitti, patte, aur dhool charo taraf udne lage. Dev ne turant apna haath Ananya ki aankhon pe rakh diya.
Dev – (Dheere se) "Anu, aankhein band rakho, dhool chali jaaye toh bataana."
Hawa aur tez ho gayi, jaise kisi ne jaan ke isko aur badhaya ho. Dev ki grip aur tight ho gayi, Ananya uske bilkul paas thi.
Phir jaise hi hawa ruki…
Ananya ne dheere se apni aankhein kholi…
Aur dono ne jo dekha, usne unke hosh uda diye!
Ravyaan ki body gayab thi!
Ananya – (Chauk ke) "Bhai... bhai... body kahan gayi??"
Dev – (Shock me) "Yeh kaise ho sakta hai…?"
Ravyaan ka laash wahi thi sirf ek minute pehle. Lekin ab, sirf khoon zameen par tha woh bhi naam matra… laash ka koi naam-o-nishaan nahi tha!
Kya sach me Ravyaan mar chuka tha? Ya koi aur taqat is jungle me thi jo Dev aur Ananya ko abhi samajh nahi aayi thi…?
Nani ka character abhi mysterious lag raha hai. Agar woh sach hai to DEV ko bohat acchi aliance mil gaya hain. Magar abhi DEV. Kuch faisla nahi kar paa raha hai shayad uska reason bhi hai ab tak jo rishton ke naam per usay dhokey miley hai ussay woh ubhar nahi paa raha hai aur har cheez per shak kar rHa hain.UPDATE 25
Naye Raaste
Naya Sach
Dev – (Ek gehre soch me) "Anu, ab hume yaha se chalna chahiye. Jyada der rukna safe nahi hai."
Ananya – (Halki udaasi ke saath) "Thik hai… par kaha jaayenge? Main uss ghar me wapas nahi jaaungi."
Dev – (Soch kar) "Thik hai, Nani ke yaha chaltein hain. Kuch din baad yaha main koi naya ghar dekh lunga, jisme hum shift kar sakein."
Ananya ke chehre pe ek chamak aa gayi. Uske dil me ek ajeeb si khushi thi.
Ananya – (Bachpani wale excitement me) "Sach me?"
Dev – (Halki si muskurahat ke saath) "Haan Anu, sach me. Chal, ab jaldi kar… Yaha jyada der rukna theek nahi hai."
Dev aur Ananya ne base se ek sports bike nikali. Dev ne Viper se thodi der aur baat ki, usse kuch naye instructions diye, aur fir Ananya ko saath le kar nikal pada.
Sadak pe bike ki headlights ek chamakte bhed ki tarah andhere ko cheer rahi thi. Raat ki thandi hawa Ananya ke chehre ko choo rahi thi, lekin uska mann ab pura shant tha.
Lekin Dev ke dimaag me ab bhi kuch sawal chal rahe the.
"Jab sab jhoothe hain… toh kya yeh jo meri 'Nani' hain, yeh bhi asli hain ya sirf ek aur chaal?"
Thodi der ke baad Dev ne silence todha.
Dev – "Anu, ek baat bata."
Ananya – "Haan bhai, bolo?"
Dev – "Yeh jo tracker tha mere andar… iska pata tujhe Nani ne hi bataya tha na?"
Ananya – (Halki si soch me) "Haan… Unhone kaha tha ki jaisa tumhe lag raha waisa kuch nahi hai. Time aane par sab pata chal jaayega. Shayad Nani jaanti hain ki humara asli sach kya hai."
Dev ka dimaag ab aur zyada sawalon me ghusne laga.
"Nani sach me humare apne hain… ya yeh bhi ek game hai?"
Bike chalate-chalate Dev ne ek aur sawal puch liya, jo uske mann me kab se chal raha tha.
Dev – "Agar sach me tera kuch nahi hua hota… toh kaisa lagta tujhe?"
Ananya ne ekdum se Dev ko tight pakad liya. Uska haath Dev ke seene se jakad gaya, jaise woh kabhi chhodna hi nahi chahti thi.
Ananya – (Dil ki gehraiyon se) "Abhi mere muh se baar-baar 'bhai' nikal raha hai… iska yeh matlab nahi ki main usi rishte ko maanta hoon. Woh toh aadat pad gayi hai, isiliye ho raha hai."
Dev – (Halki si muskurahat) "Toh phir kya maana jaye?"
Ananya ne dheere se apne honth Dev ke kaan ke paas laaye. Uske saans ki garmi Dev ke gardan ko chhoo rahi thi. Aur phir ekdum se…
Ananya ne Dev ke kandhe pe daanton se halka sa kaat liya.
Dev – (Ek halki cheekh ke saath) "Aaah! Anu… yeh kya kar rahi hai?!"
Ananya – (Has kar) "Aapke kandhe pe apna haq jama rahi hoon… mere boyfriend ka!"
Dev ekdum shocked tha.
Dev – "Acha matlab ab tum meri real life baby ban gayi ho?"
Ananya – (Shararat bhari hasi) "Ji haan! Aur aap chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye, mujhse chutkara nahi paa sakte."
Dev ne bike ki speed aur tez kar di. Ab woh dono sirf ek naye ghar ki talash nahi kar rahe the… balki apne naye rishte ki shuruaat kar rahe the.
Lekin…
Sach yeh bhi thaa ki ravyaan ki body waha se gayab thi
Dev aur Ananya ek tez speed se jungle ke beech se guzarti raat me Nani ke ghar ki taraf ja rahe the. Dev bike chala raha tha, aur Ananya uske peeth se chipak kar bethi thi.
Hawa thodi thandi thi, lekin Dev ka body heat uske liye ek garam ahsaas de raha tha.
Ananya – (Dheere se, uske kaan ke paas) "Aap itne garam kyun lag rahe ho…?"
Dev – (Muskura kar) "Abhi bhi adrenaline high hai, Anu… aur waise bhi, tere itne kareeb hone ka asar bhi ho sakta hai."
Ananya – (Halki hasi) "Acha? Toh ab sirf itne me asar hone laga?"
Ananya ne zyada chipak kar apna haath Dev ke chaati pe rakh diya… Jaise hi usne thoda pressure dala, Dev ki saans ek pal ke liye ruk gayi.
Dev – (Gehri saans le kar) "Anu… abhi yeh sab theek nahi…"
Ananya – (Shararati lehze me) "Par aap toh kehte the ki main jo chaahu woh kar sakti hoon… Toh ab?"
Dev ne thodi speed aur badhayi, jaise ki apne mann ke distraction ko control kar raha ho. Uske andar ka soldier aur uska dil, dono lad rahe the.
Raat ka samay… Jungle ka raasta… Dev aur Ananya bike par tez speed se Nani ke ghar ki taraf ja rahe the.
Jungle ke beech ek bada aur shandaar haveli jaisa mahal saamne aane laga. Is jagah ka aura alag tha… jaise ek purani, shaktishaali legacy ki kahani suna raha ho.
Kuch der baad Jaise hi bike mahal ke darwaze ke paas pahunchi, do bade security guards saamne aa gaye.
Bodyguard 1 – "Aap log kaun ho?"
Dev ne bike roki, aur sidha unki aankhon me dekha.
Dev – "Nani se kehna… unka dev aur ananya aaye hain."
Bodyguards pehle confuse hue, phir jaise hi naam suna, ekdum alert ho gaye.
Bodyguard 2 – (Ek dusre ki taraf dekhte hue) "Unhe turant inform karo!"
Ek bodyguard andar bhaaga, aur doosra Dev aur Ananya ke paas khada ho gaya, jaise unki suraksha de raha ho.
Ananya ne Dev ka haath pakad liya.
Ananya – (Dheere se) "Lagta hai, Nani ab bhi waise hi taqatwar hain jaisa humne suna tha."
Dev andar se thoda shaant ho gaya tha. Yeh jagah uske liye ajnabi thi,kyuki ananya hi jada aayi thi dev nahi par ek ajeeb si apnapan bhi mehsoos ho raha tha.
Tabhi andar se ek tez kadmon ki awaaz sunai di…
Darwaza poori shaan se khula…
Nani – "MERE BACHA!!!"
Ek safed saari me ek strong personality wali aurat tez bhaagti hui aayi…
Jaise hi Nani ne Dev aur Ananya ko dekha, unke chehre pe ek pyari muskurahat aa gayi.
Ananya – "Naniii!"
Ananya ekdum bhaag kar unke gale lag gayi. Nani ne use kas ke pakad liya, jaise ek maa apni beti ko sambhalti hai.
Uske baad Nani ki nazar Dev pe padi.
Dev bas chup chaap khada tha.
Nani – "Beta… aa jaa, tujhe kitne saalon baad dekh rahi hoon…"
Aur phir Nani ne Dev ko bhi apni baahon me le liya.
Dev kuch bol nahi paya. Yeh ehsaas naya tha. Itne saalon se sirf dukh aur maut dekhi thi… Lekin yeh pyaar ka ahsaas alag tha.
Nani – (Pyaar se) "Ab koi tum dono ko haath bhi nahi laga sakta. Yeh ghar tumhara hai. Tum meri jaan ho!"
Dev ne dheere se Nani ka haath pakad liya, jaise usne bhi woh rishte ko apna liya ho.
Par pata nahi kyu joh yakeen ek pariwar par hota woh nahi kr paa raha thaa woh abb .
Andar mahal ek taqat ka kendra lag raha tha. Har jagah bodyguards aur high-tech security thi.
Bodyguard – "mam humne pura mahal secure kar diya hai."
Nani – "Achha kiya. Ab in dono ki safety meri zimmedari hai."
Ananya – (Masti me) "Toh iska matlab Dev bhai yaha safe hai? Koi bhi aakar humpe attack nahi karega?"
Nani – "Jab tak main zinda hoon, tum dono par koi haath bhi nahi rakh sakta!"
Lekin Dev ke dimaag me ek aur sawal tha…
Yeh jagah sirf ek mahal nahi… ek suraksha ka kila lag rahi thi… Lekin kyun...aa
khir Nani ko etnai security ki kaya jarurat hai aur yeh dono joh bodyguard hi yeh toh usne military me joh trainings ki uss level ke lag rahe the ?
Raaz gheray se ghera hota jaa raha hai aur dushman bhi badtey jaa rahey hai aur jaisa Dev ne socha thaa Nani uski sagi nahi hai magar aaj unke sath khadi hui hai.UPDATE 26
Chapter - Asali Rishtey
Mahal ke andar ek alag hi mehsoos hota tha—ek taqat ka gadh, ek raaz ka kila. Har jagah high-tech security aur trained guards the. Yeh sirf ek ghar nahi, balki ek base lag raha tha.
Nani – (Halki si muskurahat ke saath) "Ab tum dono thak gaye hoge. Tumhare liye alag-alag rooms ready hain, jao aram karo."
Ananya ne turant Dev ka haath aur kas ke pakad liya. Uske chehre pe ek ajeeb si bechaini thi.
Ananya – (Sakht lehze me) "Main alag room me nahi jaaungi."
Nani ne thoda gusse se Ananya ko dekha, jaise kuch samajhne ki koshish kar rahi ho. Mahal ke bade hall me ek sannata chha gaya.
Nani – (Ananya ko ghurte hue) "Kyun, beta?"
Ananya – (Aankhon me jazbaat le kar) "Kyunki… Main Dev ke saath hoon, aur ab alag hone ka sawaal hi nahi uthta."
Nani ka chehra ek second ke liye stiff ho gaya. Unki aankhein Ananya ko scan kar rahi thi—jaise uske andar tak dekhna chah rahi ho.
Phir achanak… Ek ajeeb si muskurahat Nani ke chehre pe aa gayi.
Nani – (Halki si thandi awaaz me) "Thik hai ,jaisa tum chaho."
Dev ne Ananya ki taraf dekha. Uske dil me ek ajeeb si garmi thi. Woh pehle hi samajh gaya tha ki ab yeh .rishta sirf ek bhai-behen ka nahi raha…
Sirf teen log yeh sach jaante the—Dev, Ananya, aur ek aur…
Ravayaan.
Ananya ne Dev ka haath zor se daba diya, jaise keh rahi ho ki koi bhi ho, kahin bhi ho… ab hume koi alag nahi kar sakta.
Nani - thik hai bacho Aram karo
Mahal ke ek secret room me andhera tha. Sirf ek badi screen jagmagaa rahi thi, jisme Dev aur Ananya ka live feed dikh raha tha. Dono ek dusre ke paas the, jaise duniya me sirf wahi dono ho.
Uss room kaa gate khulata hai aur Nani enter karti hai
Nani (Madhavi Trivedi) ne screen ki taraf dekha, fir peeche khadi do shadows ki taraf—Dr. Arvind Sharma (Mama) aur Dr. Meera Sharma (Mami). Unke chehre pe ek ajeeb si thakaan thi, jaise kisi aise sach ka bojh jo kabhi halka nahi hota.
Nani – (Thandi awaaz me)
"Humne har tareeke se inhe alag karne ki koshish ki..."
Arvind (Mama) – (Halki si bechaini ke saath)
"Par woh jo rishte humne unke dimag me daale the, woh bhi unhe alag nahi kar paaye."
Meera (Mami) – (Ek thandi muskurahat ke saath)
"Memory Transfer Technology se Dev ko ek artificial past diya gaya. Use yeh lagna chahiye tha ki Ananya uski chhoti behan hai, par..."
Nani ne screen ki taraf dekha. Ananya ne Dev ka haath pakda hua tha, jaise ki agar chhod diya toh saari duniya toot jayegi.
Nani – (Aankhein sekudte hue)
"Jo humne bhai-behan ka bandhan banaya tha, usse bhi zyada gehra ek aur rishta tha..."
Arvind ne ek lambi saans li.
Arvind (Mama) – (Afsos ke saath)
"Unka pyaar hamesha natural tha. Humne socha ki yaadein badal kar unhe alag kar denge, par pyaar kisi dimaag ka khel nahi hota..."
Meera (Mami) – (Halki si gussa bhari awaaz me)
"Toh iska matlab hum fail ho gaye? Itni planning, itni technology, sab bekaar?"
Nani – (Ek ajeeb si shaanti ke saath)
"Nahi. Humne sirf waqt kharida. Sach jitna dabaoge, utna hi ubhar kar aayega."
Ek bhari sannata chha gaya. Sirf screen pe chalti recording ki halki si awaz thi.
Arvind ne dheere se kaha, jaise khud se baat kar raha ho—
Arvind (Mama) –
"Matlab… chahe hum kuch bhi kar le, Dev aur Ananya ko koi alag nahi kar sakta?"
Nani – (Aankhein bandh karte hue)
"Nahi… Ab nahi."
Meera ne table pe zor se haath mara.
Meera (Mami) – (Gusse se)
"Agar humne unhe alag nahi kiya, toh ek din sach saamne aa jayega!"
Nani ne dheere se aankhein kholi aur ek thandi muskurahat di.
Nani –
"Sach toh kab ka saamne aa chuka hai, Meera."
Screen pe Dev aur Ananya ek dusre ki taraf dekh rahe the. Sirf ek nazar, aur sab kuch keh diya gaya tha.
Pyaar ko dimaag me likha nahi ja sakta. Aur pyaar dimaag se mitaya bhi nahi ja sakta.
Intro of new characters
Nani (Madhavi Trivedi) – The Queen Who Lost Control
Relation: Dev ki maa Dr. Sima Trivedi ki maa (Dev ki Nani).
Personality: Ek tez dimaag wali aurat, jo har insaan ki asliyat pehchaan sakti hai. Wo emotions aur body language ko itna achi tarah padhti hai ki samne wale ko khud nahi pata hota ki uska raaz khul gaya hai.
Strengths: Cold, calculative, aur kisi bhi situation ko apne favor me moadne ka hunar rakhti hai.
Weakness: Apne hi bachon (Arvind aur Meera) ke samne hamesha haarti hai. Chaahe kitni bhi shatir ho, apne ghar ke andar apni baat nahi manwa sakti. Usne koshish ki, par Arvind aur Meera ne uski har ek chal ko manipulate kar diya.
Motto: “Sach chhupaya ja sakta hai, mitaaya nahi.”
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Mama (Dr. Arvind Sharma) – The Cold Scientist
Relation: Dev ki maa Dr. Sima Trivedi ka chhota bhai (Dev ka Mama).
Personality: Bahar se calm aur composed, par andar se ek ruthless scientist jo sirf apne research ke liye jeeta hai. Uske liye log bas lab experiments hai.
Strengths: Biotechnology aur Human Experimentation ka expert hai. Woh ek Mind-Altering Drug ka creator hai jo logon ki memory manipulate kar sakta hai.
Weakness: Nani se thoda dar lagta hai, lekin sirf emotional level pe. Uske decisions hamesha logical hote hain, aur emotions uske liye sirf ek data glitch hai.
Motto: “Science se badhkar kuch nahi. Log sirf test subjects hain.”
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Mami (Dr. Meera Sharma) – The Master of Mind Control
Relation: Dr. Arvind Sharma ki patni, Dev ki Mami.
Personality: Ek emotionally dead aurat, jiske liye sirf control aur power matter karti hai. Woh logon ke dimaag ke saath khelti hai, aur unka reality perception badal sakti hai.
Strengths: DNA Modification aur Brainwashing me expert hai. Usne hi Dev ki yaadon ko manipulate kiya tha taki usse lage ki Ananya uski behan hai.
Weakness: Woh kabhi kabhi overconfident ho jaati hai aur emotions ko underestimate karti hai. Dev aur Ananya ka pyaar uske liye ek glitch tha, jo uski calculation me nahi aaya.
Motto: “Dimaag ko control kar lo, toh insaan khud tumhara ho jata hai.”
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Nisha 'Echo' Verma – The Shadow Hacker
Relation: Meera Sharma ke under kaam karti hai.
Personality: Yeh insaan nahi, ek ghost hai digital duniya me. Koi bhi system hack kar sakti hai, koi bhi conversation sun sakti hai bina kisi ko pata chale.
Strengths: Surveillance, hacking, aur data manipulation. Uske pass har kisi ka koi na koi secret hota hai.
Weakness: Dev se secretly impressed hai. Woh usko analyze kar rahi hai, par uski unpredictability se dar bhi lagta hai.
Motto: “Sab kuch dekh rahi hoon… aur sun bhi rahi hoon.”
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Kabir 'Ghost' Sharma – The Silent Assassin
Personality: Ek deadly killer jo sirf orders manta hai. Uske emotions already dead hai.
Strengths: Stealth aur silent kills ka expert. Ek baar target fix ho gaya, toh uska bachna namumkin hai.
Weakness: Dev ki unpredictability. Woh kabhi nahi samajh pata ki Dev agla kadam kya karega.
Motto: “Mujhe sirf ek baar bolne ki zaroorat hai.”
Aditya 'Bull' Nair – The Living Weapon
Personality: Ek janwar jaisa soldier jisme koi emotion nahi hai. Uska sirf ek kaam hai—Tabahi.
Strengths: Hand-to-hand combat aur heavy weapons expert.
Weakness: Woh sirf orders pe jeeta hai, apni soch nahi hai.
Motto: “Hukum kar, kaun marna chahta hai?”
Dev aur Ananya jaise hi room me enter karte hain, ek hidden security system activate ho jata hai. Ek secret button press hota hai, aur uss room ka live feed secretly ek screen par broadcast hone lagta hai.
Inside the Room – Dev & Ananya
(Room ka darwaza band hota hai, aur waha sirf Dev aur Ananya hote hain.)
Dev jaise hi darwaza band karke piche mudta hai, Ananya bina kisi warning ke uski god me uchhal padti hai.
Ananya (whispering, almost desperate): “Main ab aur nahi rukh sakti, Dev…”
Uske arms tight ho jate hain Dev ke gale ke around, jaise woh usse kabhi chhodna nahi chahti.
Aur agle hi moment me…
Uske lips Dev ke lips se takraa jate hain.
Ek passionate, uncontrollable kiss. Jaise saalon ki doori ek pal me mit rahi ho.
Secret Monitoring Room
Ek bade screen par live feed chal rahi thi. Dev aur Ananya ek dusre me kho gaye the, jaise duniya ka koi wajood hi nahi.
Jaise hi Dev aur Ananya ka intense kiss screen par dikhne laga, room me baithe logon ke chehre rage se laal hone lage. Ek teekha sannata chha gaya, jo sirf ek tufaan ke aane ka indication tha.
Dr. Arvind Sharma (Mama) – (Hissed in anger) “Ye ladka hamari Ananya ko chhoo bhi kaise sakta hai! Woh ek GANDA KHOON hai!”
Dr. Meera Sharma (Mami) – (Teeth clenched) “Humne har tareeke se in dono ko alag karne ki koshish ki. Uske dimaag me bachpan ki jhooti yaadein daali, ki Ananya uski behan hai, lekin phir bhi yeh haadsa ho gaya! Yeh toh paap hai!”
Nisha 'Echo' Verma – (Cold voice) "Baat sirf yeh nahi ki Ananya uske saath hai... Baat yeh hai ki yeh ladka ab tak zinda kyun hai?"
Nani (Madhavi Trivedi) – (Deep sigh, quiet but firm)
“Hum kitni bhi koshish kar lein… yeh dono ek dusre se alag nahi honge. Tum sab samajh nahi rahe—tum Dev ko uski jagah dikhane ki baat kar rahe ho, par sach yeh hai ki ab yeh hamari beti ko bhi humse cheen chuka hai.”
Arvind ek jhatke se uth khada hota hai. Uske haath gusse se kaanp rahe the.
Dr. Arvind Sharma – (Roaring in fury)
"Bas bohot ho gaya! Main abhi jaake uss GANDA KHOON ko uski aukaat dikhata hoon."
Meera Sharma – (Cold smirk)
"Haan, ab waqt aa gaya hai. Is baar yeh abhi yahin khatam hoga."
Nani – (Aankhein bandh kar ke ek thandi saans leti hai, jaise pehle se pata ho ki yeh hone wala hai)
“Dev… kya tum sach me yeh ladayi jeet paoge?”
(Just as they turned towards the exit, two shadows blocked their way.)
Kabir 'Ghost' Sharma & Aditya 'Bull' Nair – (Standing like an unshakable wall.)
Kabir 'Ghost' – (Low but deadly voice) "Aap log ek baat bhool rahe hain."
Aditya 'Bull' – (Arms crossed, eyes burning with authority) "Dev koi aam garib ladka nahi hai, jispar tum logon ne experiments kiye the…"
Kabir 'Ghost' – (Eyes sharp as a blade) "Woh CODE X ka main lead hai."
(Room me ek ghera sannata chha gaya. Dr. Arvind aur Meera Sharma ek pal ke liye chokh gaye.)
Dr. Meera Sharma – (Disbelief me) "Kya bakwas hai? Code X sirf ek legend tha, ek failure!"
Kabir – (Ek step aage badhkar, glare intense hoti ja rahi thi) "Agar Code X ek failure hota, toh Dev aaj tumhare samne zinda nahi hota."
Aditya 'Bull' – (Deep voice, deadly smirk) "Aur agar aap log ne uspe haath bhi lagaya, toh Code X sirf ek legend nahi, ek nightmare ban jayega."
Nani – (Aankhon mein ek gehraai, jaise kisi bade raaz ka bojh utha rahi ho)
"Toh yeh sach hai… Code X ab bhi zinda hai…
Aur tumhari behan, jo tum jaise nahi sochti thi… usne Dev ko sirf apna beta nahi banaya nahi , apna beta bhi maan liya tha.Uski memory badalte hi uske andar ka asli insaan jaag gaya… aur tumhe pata bhi nahi chala.
Aur jis Revenant Program ki baatein ho rahi hain, woh asal mein Code X hi hai.
Aur uski key… Ananya hai.
Aur Code X… khud Dev hai.
Dono saath hain. Aur agar tumne kuch bhi galat kiya…
Toh yeh jo ladka tumhe sirf ek pagal Ganda khoon lag raha hai…
Tumhare khoon se bani cold drink pike tumhara antim sanskar karega.
Samjhe…?"
Jaise hi Nani apni baat khatam karti hain, ekdum se room ke speakers se Ananya ki awaaz gunjti hai.
Ananya (Speaker se, halki saans phooli hui) –
"Dev, mujhe next step par jaana hai… apni body ko tumhari body me feel karna hai."
Ek pal ke liye pure monitoring room me ek gehra sannata chha jata hai. Har kisi ki aankhein screen par jam jati hain.
Meera (Mami) – (Shock me)
"Yeh ladki… yeh kya keh rahi hai!?"
Arvind (Mama) – (Teeth clenched, gusse me)
"Yeh sab hamari aankhon ke samne ho raha hai… aur hum kuch nahi kar sakte?"
Nisha ‘Echo’ Verma – (Ek halki muskurahat ke saath)
"Bas yahi baat samajhne ki hai, Doctor Sahab. Aap logon ne inki yaadein badli, rishta nahi…"
Nani (Thandi muskurahat ke saath) –
"Aur jab dil ka rishta itna gehra ho, toh baaki sab sirf ek mukhota ban jata hai ."
Yeh bol kar woh security camera ko off kar deti hai .......