SAAND
PUNARAVLOKAN
Friends, Halanki ye baat main pahle bhi kayi bar bata chuka hu, samjha bhi chuka hu aur ek bar phir se bata raha hu.. kyon ki kuch reader’s ke comments padhne ke baad mujhe vivash hona pad raha hai, ye kahne ke liye phir se..
Jaisa ki main pahle hi clear kar chuka hu ki ye ek sex story hai..jab main SAAJAN story ke updates likh raha tha uss samay bahut se reader’s sex ki demand kar rahe the..jabki uss samay uss story me sex ki koi gunhaish hi nahi thi..kyon ki SAAJAN ek love story hai, na ki sex story..maine ye baat usme bhi baar baar batayi lekin phir bhi kuch reader’s sunne samajhne ko taiyar hi nahi the, unhe to sirf sex scenes hi chahiye tha.
Tab maine gusse me aa kar SAAND story likhna start kiya tha…iss story ko start karte samay mere paas na to koi plot tha aur na hi koi kahani thi..bas mere mann me kewal ek hi cheez goonj rahi thi ki logo ko sex hi pasand hai na to lo padho kitna sex padhoge..bas ek hi baat thi dimag me ki mujhe isme kewal sex ..sex aur kewal sex hi likhna hai…without any love, without any emmotions, without any thrill or suspense..only and only sex..
Yahi karan tha ki maine kahani bhi direct sex se hi shuru ki vo bhi bina kisi bhumika ke…ab bina kisi bhumika ke sex to sirf janwar hi karte hain, usme top par saand hi aata hai…jise sex karne ke liye kisi gaay ko patane ki jarurat nahi hai, bas jaha bhi gaay dikh jaye to chadh jao uss par..isliye maine story ka title bhi rakha SAAND…jisko sirf teen hi kaam aate hain. Pahla to khana, dusra gaay dikhte hi uske upar chadh jana aur teesra, koi dusra uss gaay ki taraf badhe to use patak patak kar maarna...aur ye baat maine kahani ke starting page par hi kahani shuru karne se pahle hi clear kar di thi ki iss kahani me kya hai..
Bas kewal yahi saand ke nature ko maine kahani ke hero me set kar ke story start kar di…ab choonki mere paas koi plot ya kahani to thi nahi to maine sex ke sath sath bina sir pair ki bakchodi chalu kar di story me…kyon ki kahani me sex ke sath kuch to dikhana hi tha to yahi start kar diya.
Yahi vajah hai ki kahani me sex ki adhikta hai…starting ke updates sirf sex based hi hain..kyon ki kahani ka main uddeshya hi sex aur kewal sex tha….lekin mujhe tajjub to tab hua jab logo ne iss bina matlab ki bakchodi ko behad pasand kiya..logo ka itna support dekh kar uss samay pahli bar mere mann me iss kahani ko sucharu roop se vyavasthit karne ki soch paida huyi…halanki tab tak kahani ke 20-25 updates ho chuke the.
Ye vichar mann me aane ke baad maine hero ke nature me changes laane start kiye..love & emmotions ki feelings ke liye sadhana aur sheetal ka character add kiya…to thrill ke liye thakur aur black star ka..sath me kuch suspenses bhi create karne ki koshish ki…hero ke andar apne pariwar aur majbur logo ke prati caring ki bhavna viksit ki jiska sabut shilpa aur arti hain.
Ye sabhi badlaav logo ko pasand aaye sirf ek ke..aur vo tha hero ke nature me change..logo ne hero ke nature ko change na karne ke liye comments diye..uske nature ko vaisa hi chudakkad kism ka banaye rakhne ko kaha.
Lihaja maine logo ki bhavnao ka samman rakhte huye kahani me hero ke saand wale nature ko jas ka tas rahne diya aur baki changes ke sath kahani ko build up karne laga…kuch hi samay me ye kahani forum me top par pahuch gayi.
Ab phir se kayi reader’s ka kahna hai ki kahani me sex bahut jyada hai..isko khatam karo ya kam karo..kahani bina vajah lambi ho rahi hai..kahani slow chal rahi hai..etc..etc.
To main ab yahi kahna chahunga ki dosto kahani ab build up ho chuki hai…yaha se hero ke nature me badlaav karna sambhav nahi hai..agar maine ab aisa kiya to kahani apne title se door ho jayegi.
Koi bhi sahitya ya rachna, kisi kahani ke hero, heroines, ya phir kisi bhi characters ke accordings nahi chalti hai, balki vo sirf aur sirf apne title ke according chalti hai…kahani ke sabhi paatra kahani ke uss title ke sirf mohre hote hain…ab yadi maine hero ke nature se saand wali pravritti hatayi (khana, ladna aur chodna) to kahani title ko charitarth nahi karegi.. kyon ki kisi bhi sahitya, novel, kavita, dharm granth ya phir koi bhi rachna ho..sab me uska title hi main hota hai..yahi vajah hai ki title ko kisi bhi rachna ka Hriday Sthal kaha jata hai.
Aur ye baat maine apni student life me apne hindi ke teacher se sikhi thi..jo ki ek prakhyat kavi bhi the..aur jinki ek rachna hamari pathay pushtak me bhi sammilit thi jise hum padh rahe the.
Kahani ki aaj ki situation par main sirf ye kahna chahta hu ki kahani se sex kam ya khatam nahi kiya ja sakta…chahe halaat kaise bhi ho, sex to rahega hi….haan, main itna avashya kar sakta hu ki unko ek ya do line me hi nipta du.
Kayi reader’s ko sheetal ke character se problem thi to maine sheetal ka character change kar diya hai…vo sheetal jo hero ko uski galtiyo par daantti aur maarti thi, vah kuch logo ko pasand nahi aa raha tha..ab sheetal kabhi aage hero ko daantte ya maarte huye nazar nahi ayegi.
Vaise bhi kahani me main jin character’s ke sath sex encounter ho chuka hai unke sath detail me sex ki punravritti nahi karta hu, balki short me hi clear kar deta hu…
Kuch reader’s ka kahna hai ki kahani ko direct black star ke samne lana chahiye ab..to unn dosto se mera yahi kahna hai ki dosto kahani to black star ke aas paas hi chal rahi hai ab..aur uski taraf hi ja rahi hai…kahani ab dhire dhire apne charmotkarsh ki taraf agrasar hai.
Maine ye pahle hi bataya tha ki ye story lagbhag 300 updates ke aas paas jayegi….kahani me abhi bahut se loop points open hain..itne loop points ke sath black star jaise shatir mainded khiladi ke samne direct jana shayad theek nahi hoga. Mera pahla uddeshya inn loop points ko band karna hai jo ki ho raha hai.
Kahani me jo meri soch thi ki update 250 tak inn loop points ko band kar ke uske baad kahani sirf abhay aur black star par focus rahegi, aur vo bhi aamne samne ki ladayi ladte huye..matlab ye ki last ke 50 updates sirf abhay aur black star par hi honge jinke beech me mushkil se do ya teen sex scenes hi ayenge.
Magar abhi to sabhi ki pregnancy problem ko solve karna, vibhisan, langda admi , raj ke judwa bhai ka suspense, rajasthan me mile case ke suspense solve karna aur ritu, sandhya, kinjal, sadhana, , charu, neera, sweta, damini, shilpa, vishakha, vidhya, ragini, sarika, anamika, shashi, richa,hema, rita, archana,,mansi, abhay ke ghar ke teen member, gaon ki kuch ladkiya, ankita, sita, janki, pammy, revti, nirmala, sheetal..and a very imp hidden character…inn sabhi ke encounters baki hain…to kuch ki shadi jinse kar chuka hai..unki problem bhi hain..raj aur sheetal ki bimari hai…teeno family ko ek karna hai..aur abhi to kahani lalita mousi ki taraf dubara turn honi baki hai.
Ab itne sare characters ke sex scenes baki hain, jinhe main jaldi niptana chahta tha isliye sex ko badhana padega..baki aap log jaisa suggetion denge vaisa karne ki koshish karunga…
Ye sabhi matters isliye bhi solve karna jaruri hai kyon ki agar kahani kaale kamre me pahuch gayi to sidha climax par hi ja kar vaha se loutegi…vahi black star ke makadjaal me phans kar rah jayegi, isiliye main abhi kahani ka rukh kaale kamre ki taraf nahi mod raha hu., balki open loop points ko band karne ka kaam kar raha hu.
Dusri baat ki raj ki medical report me bataya ja chuka hai ki usko daily sex karna jaruri hai..ab aise me sex nahi hoga to kaise kaam chalega….? Jaha tak sheetal aur raj ki bimari ke ilaz ki baat hai to ye bhi kahani me clear hai ki iska koi ilaz nahi hai..kyon ki iss tarah ka virus aur poison duniya ke kisi bhi market me abhi launch hi nahi hua hai..lihaza ye case abhi doctor ke bas ke bahar ki baat hai…isko slow rakhne ka ek hi tarika hai sex..aur yadi uska ilaz hai bhi to vahi janta hai jiske plan ke mutabik ye sab ghatit hua hai..
Main update hi likhne ja raha tha lekin kuch reader’s ke review padhne ke baad mujhe ye sab clear karna ek bar phir se jaruri laga….ab aap log hi kam se kam ye bata dijiye ki uprokt character’s me se kitno ke sex scenes detail me du, kin ke short me aur kin ke ek ya do line me nipta du…?
Jaha tak Jitu aur richa ke baare me itna dikhane ki baat hai, to agar richa koi other girl hoti tab ek do line me hi dikhaya ja sakta tha, lekin richa uski family se hai..to jahir si baat hai direct to nahi dikhaya ja sakta ki nazre mili aur pyar ho gaya..? kuch to vajah dikhani hogi iss rishte me pyar panapne ki..vahi maine dikhane ki koshish ki hai..aur itna scene to chodu gang ke sabhi character's ka ayega.
Jaisa bhi aap sabhi reader’s ka sujhaav hoga, main kahani ko aap sabhi ke anusar hi aage badha dunga..mujhe aap sabhi ke sujhavo ka intazar rahega…
Bhai isme apki meri ya kisi or ki koi galti nhi hai hum duniya ko humesa apne dhang se dekhna chahte hai, chahe vo galat hi kyu
Na ho kahani apki dono hi badhiya hai,
Isme sak ki koi gunzaish hi nhi hai
Apki saajan kahani ke 10 bade update
Mene din raat ek karke padhe the use
Padhne ke alawa or kuch sujta hi nhi
Tha lekin dil me nirasa thi to is
Baat ki kahani puri kyu nhi hai, me
Abhi kahani padh nhi rha kyunki me
Use wk baat me nonstop ek baar me
End tak pdhna chahta hu
