Incest SAAND

[Secretshiva1]

Bhai baaki ka pata nahi par mere vichar se purani Sheetal hi rehni chahiye.
Kyun ki aisa hi toh hota hai badi behan ka pyar.
Bilkul maa ki tarah galti par marna.
Buri adaton se bachana.
Aur jab chot lage toh tut ka khayal rakhna.
Aur baise bhi sheetal sirf behan toh hai nahi, bo ek premika bhi hai jo kisi bhi halat me apne pyar ko baante hue dekhegi toh dukh toh hoga hi.
Ye sab( behan, maa, aur premika) milkar hi toh sheetal ka carachter bana hai puri story me.
Isse badalna bo bhi ab story ke sath injustice hoga.
Baaki aapki aur baaki reader ki soch aur vichar.

 

[Fighter]

SAAND
PUNARAVLOKAN​

Friends, Halanki ye baat main pahle bhi kayi bar bata chuka hu, samjha bhi chuka hu aur ek bar phir se bata raha hu.. kyon ki kuch reader’s ke comments padhne ke baad mujhe vivash hona pad raha hai, ye kahne ke liye phir se..

Jaisa ki main pahle hi clear kar chuka hu ki ye ek sex story hai..jab main SAAJAN story ke updates likh raha tha uss samay bahut se reader’s sex ki demand kar rahe the..jabki uss samay uss story me sex ki koi gunhaish hi nahi thi..kyon ki SAAJAN ek love story hai, na ki sex story..maine ye baat usme bhi baar baar batayi lekin phir bhi kuch reader’s sunne samajhne ko taiyar hi nahi the, unhe to sirf sex scenes hi chahiye tha.

Tab maine gusse me aa kar SAAND story likhna start kiya tha…iss story ko start karte samay mere paas na to koi plot tha aur na hi koi kahani thi..bas mere mann me kewal ek hi cheez goonj rahi thi ki logo ko sex hi pasand hai na to lo padho kitna sex padhoge..bas ek hi baat thi dimag me ki mujhe isme kewal sex ..sex aur kewal sex hi likhna hai…without any love, without any emmotions, without any thrill or suspense..only and only sex..

Yahi karan tha ki maine kahani bhi direct sex se hi shuru ki vo bhi bina kisi bhumika ke…ab bina kisi bhumika ke sex to sirf janwar hi karte hain, usme top par saand hi aata hai…jise sex karne ke liye kisi gaay ko patane ki jarurat nahi hai, bas jaha bhi gaay dikh jaye to chadh jao uss par..isliye maine story ka title bhi rakha SAAND…jisko sirf teen hi kaam aate hain. Pahla to khana, dusra gaay dikhte hi uske upar chadh jana aur teesra, koi dusra uss gaay ki taraf badhe to use patak patak kar maarna...aur ye baat maine kahani ke starting page par hi kahani shuru karne se pahle hi clear kar di thi ki iss kahani me kya hai..

Bas kewal yahi saand ke nature ko maine kahani ke hero me set kar ke story start kar di…ab choonki mere paas koi plot ya kahani to thi nahi to maine sex ke sath sath bina sir pair ki bakchodi chalu kar di story me…kyon ki kahani me sex ke sath kuch to dikhana hi tha to yahi start kar diya.

Yahi vajah hai ki kahani me sex ki adhikta hai…starting ke updates sirf sex based hi hain..kyon ki kahani ka main uddeshya hi sex aur kewal sex tha….lekin mujhe tajjub to tab hua jab logo ne iss bina matlab ki bakchodi ko behad pasand kiya..logo ka itna support dekh kar uss samay pahli bar mere mann me iss kahani ko sucharu roop se vyavasthit karne ki soch paida huyi…halanki tab tak kahani ke 20-25 updates ho chuke the.

Ye vichar mann me aane ke baad maine hero ke nature me changes laane start kiye..love & emmotions ki feelings ke liye sadhana aur sheetal ka character add kiya…to thrill ke liye thakur aur black star ka..sath me kuch suspenses bhi create karne ki koshish ki…hero ke andar apne pariwar aur majbur logo ke prati caring ki bhavna viksit ki jiska sabut shilpa aur arti hain.

Ye sabhi badlaav logo ko pasand aaye sirf ek ke..aur vo tha hero ke nature me change..logo ne hero ke nature ko change na karne ke liye comments diye..uske nature ko vaisa hi chudakkad kism ka banaye rakhne ko kaha.

Lihaja maine logo ki bhavnao ka samman rakhte huye kahani me hero ke saand wale nature ko jas ka tas rahne diya aur baki changes ke sath kahani ko build up karne laga…kuch hi samay me ye kahani forum me top par pahuch gayi.

Ab phir se kayi reader’s ka kahna hai ki kahani me sex bahut jyada hai..isko khatam karo ya kam karo..kahani bina vajah lambi ho rahi hai..kahani slow chal rahi hai..etc..etc.

To main ab yahi kahna chahunga ki dosto kahani ab build up ho chuki hai…yaha se hero ke nature me badlaav karna sambhav nahi hai..agar maine ab aisa kiya to kahani apne title se door ho jayegi.

Koi bhi sahitya ya rachna, kisi kahani ke hero, heroines, ya phir kisi bhi characters ke accordings nahi chalti hai, balki vo sirf aur sirf apne title ke according chalti hai…kahani ke sabhi paatra kahani ke uss title ke sirf mohre hote hain…ab yadi maine hero ke nature se saand wali pravritti hatayi (khana, ladna aur chodna) to kahani title ko charitarth nahi karegi.. kyon ki kisi bhi sahitya, novel, kavita, dharm granth ya phir koi bhi rachna ho..sab me uska title hi main hota hai..yahi vajah hai ki title ko kisi bhi rachna ka Hriday Sthal kaha jata hai.

Aur ye baat maine apni student life me apne hindi ke teacher se sikhi thi..jo ki ek prakhyat kavi bhi the..aur jinki ek rachna hamari pathay pushtak me bhi sammilit thi jise hum padh rahe the.

Kahani ki aaj ki situation par main sirf ye kahna chahta hu ki kahani se sex kam ya khatam nahi kiya ja sakta…chahe halaat kaise bhi ho, sex to rahega hi….haan, main itna avashya kar sakta hu ki unko ek ya do line me hi nipta du.

Kayi reader’s ko sheetal ke character se problem thi to maine sheetal ka character change kar diya hai…vo sheetal jo hero ko uski galtiyo par daantti aur maarti thi, vah kuch logo ko pasand nahi aa raha tha..ab sheetal kabhi aage hero ko daantte ya maarte huye nazar nahi ayegi.

Vaise bhi kahani me main jin character’s ke sath sex encounter ho chuka hai unke sath detail me sex ki punravritti nahi karta hu, balki short me hi clear kar deta hu…

Kuch reader’s ka kahna hai ki kahani ko direct black star ke samne lana chahiye ab..to unn dosto se mera yahi kahna hai ki dosto kahani to black star ke aas paas hi chal rahi hai ab..aur uski taraf hi ja rahi hai…kahani ab dhire dhire apne charmotkarsh ki taraf agrasar hai.

Maine ye pahle hi bataya tha ki ye story lagbhag 300 updates ke aas paas jayegi….kahani me abhi bahut se loop points open hain..itne loop points ke sath black star jaise shatir mainded khiladi ke samne direct jana shayad theek nahi hoga. Mera pahla uddeshya inn loop points ko band karna hai jo ki ho raha hai.

Kahani me jo meri soch thi ki update 250 tak inn loop points ko band kar ke uske baad kahani sirf abhay aur black star par focus rahegi, aur vo bhi aamne samne ki ladayi ladte huye..matlab ye ki last ke 50 updates sirf abhay aur black star par hi honge jinke beech me mushkil se do ya teen sex scenes hi ayenge.

Magar abhi to sabhi ki pregnancy problem ko solve karna, vibhisan, langda admi , raj ke judwa bhai ka suspense, rajasthan me mile case ke suspense solve karna aur ritu, sandhya, kinjal, sadhana, , charu, neera, sweta, damini, shilpa, vishakha, vidhya, ragini, sarika, anamika, shashi, richa,hema, rita, archana,,mansi, abhay ke ghar ke teen member, gaon ki kuch ladkiya, ankita, sita, janki, pammy, revti, nirmala, sheetal..and a very imp hidden character…inn sabhi ke encounters baki hain…to kuch ki shadi jinse kar chuka hai..unki problem bhi hain..raj aur sheetal ki bimari hai…teeno family ko ek karna hai..aur abhi to kahani lalita mousi ki taraf dubara turn honi baki hai.

Ab itne sare characters ke sex scenes baki hain, jinhe main jaldi niptana chahta tha isliye sex ko badhana padega..baki aap log jaisa suggetion denge vaisa karne ki koshish karunga…

Ye sabhi matters isliye bhi solve karna jaruri hai kyon ki agar kahani kaale kamre me pahuch gayi to sidha climax par hi ja kar vaha se loutegi…vahi black star ke makadjaal me phans kar rah jayegi, isiliye main abhi kahani ka rukh kaale kamre ki taraf nahi mod raha hu., balki open loop points ko band karne ka kaam kar raha hu.

Dusri baat ki raj ki medical report me bataya ja chuka hai ki usko daily sex karna jaruri hai..ab aise me sex nahi hoga to kaise kaam chalega….? Jaha tak sheetal aur raj ki bimari ke ilaz ki baat hai to ye bhi kahani me clear hai ki iska koi ilaz nahi hai..kyon ki iss tarah ka virus aur poison duniya ke kisi bhi market me abhi launch hi nahi hua hai..lihaza ye case abhi doctor ke bas ke bahar ki baat hai…isko slow rakhne ka ek hi tarika hai sex..aur yadi uska ilaz hai bhi to vahi janta hai jiske plan ke mutabik ye sab ghatit hua hai..

Main update hi likhne ja raha tha lekin kuch reader’s ke review padhne ke baad mujhe ye sab clear karna ek bar phir se jaruri laga….ab aap log hi kam se kam ye bata dijiye ki uprokt character’s me se kitno ke sex scenes detail me du, kin ke short me aur kin ke ek ya do line me nipta du…?

Jaha tak Jitu aur richa ke baare me itna dikhane ki baat hai, to agar richa koi other girl hoti tab ek do line me hi dikhaya ja sakta tha, lekin richa uski family se hai..to jahir si baat hai direct to nahi dikhaya ja sakta ki nazre mili aur pyar ho gaya..? kuch to vajah dikhani hogi iss rishte me pyar panapne ki..vahi maine dikhane ki koshish ki hai..aur itna scene to chodu gang ke sabhi character's ka ayega.

Jaisa bhi aap sabhi reader’s ka sujhaav hoga, main kahani ko aap sabhi ke anusar hi aage badha dunga..mujhe aap sabhi ke sujhavo ka intazar rahega…

Thanks & sorry
pahle thanks kaha uska reason y h ki aapne regular updates de rhe h vo b itna kuch kahne k bad b sach very nice person bro

sorry isliye mujhe thoda story likhna or padna pasand h to aap jese acche writer ki story kabi na pad pana or fir comment b na krna y mere liye buri baat h jo writer bina kisi comment ki lalach k b apni story aage bada rha h iska reason y h ki meri eyes m problem h y pahle huaa tha tb mene kuch din rest krk egnore kr diya tha ab fir ho gya lekin ab lockdown ki vajah se doctor k pas b nhi ja sakta fir abi kuch din pahle rohan(rajeev) bro se whatsapp pe baat huyi or unhonne kuch tips btaye vahi follow kr rha tha ab kuch tik h


aapne story m jese abi btaya vese hi story aage chlne de kyoki story ka starting k bad badalne se ab vo puri tarh sex virus ki tarh nhi rhi isliye sbi sath jese aapne kaha vese hi chlne de
story sahi ja rhi h vese b jo bache h unk sath to sex pura hi dikhana , suspens k sath story aage bad rhi hi with sex & romance


keep nice going

 

[Nadan Dill]

Nice update bhaii bhot awala maza aya giea bhaiii ab new upbate ka intazar ha

 

[Harry rocks]

Update abhi likh hi raha hu..hope ki agle ek ghante me mil jayega.

Hi aanand bhai please read my story also and give your valuable reviews please

 

[Nothing]

Yrr mera to yeh kehna hai koi gandu aapni gand nahi hilaye ga theek hai Saand bhai jesa chahe likh de sab aacha hota hai agar unko bhi yeh problem aa rahi hai ke short kre seen ya fir long to aik vote pole sath mai start kre aur sath mai update ka end esa kre ki sex season next update mai jaye to fir wo vote ke hisab se next updates de yeh sab ke lye aacha hai



at the end koi bhi insan sabhi ko kush nahi rah sakta to aap aapne hisab se chale baki unki bhi suno kro aapne man ki theek hai bhai


Aik aur bat un ke lye jo story mai sex bhut jada ho gea hai bol rahe hai to mai kehna chau ga ke aap ko hath jod ?????? Requst hai ke pro writers ko demotivate na kre kabhi kabhi jo cheej aap ko pasand na ho vo bhi padh lo ya fri 1-2 din bad try kro aap ko aacha lage ga mai v esa hi krta hu kyu ki mera manna hai ki mostly log aap ko hi niche kre ge comments mai so aap jab aap ka sex pahdne ka mood ho to yeh story ko pehal de aur aap ko bhi bahut se suspense aik sath mai clear ho jaye ge



aur agar kiSi ko meri kisi bat ka bura laga ho to very sorry???????

 

[Nothing]

SAAND
UPDATE- 237​

Pariwar ki aamdani ka koi jariya nahi tha…karzdaro ne alag pareshan karna shuru kar diya tha…jo bhi pahle ki jama poonji thi uske sahare hi grahasthi chal rahi thi…richa padhi likhi thi to ghar me hi kuch ladkiyo ko tution padha diya karti thi…jisse ghar ka kharcha aur jitu ki padhayi chal rahi thi…halanki jitu aur richa me kabhi banti nahi thi..dono hamesha kutte billi ki tarah ladte hi rahte the..

Khair ye baate baad me bhi ki ja sakti hain…jitu jab apni maa se milne ke baad andar gaya to vaha ka scene dekhte hi uske maathe se pasina bahna shuru ho gaya..aur ankhe palak jhapakna hi bhul gayi…

Ab aage…..

Andar kamre me richa kewal towel bhar lapet kar aaine ke samne stool par ek pair rakh kar jhuke huye apne khubsurat gore chikne pairo me tel laga kar unhe aur bhi sundar bana rahi thi….uska ek pair stool par aur dusra jamin par hone ki vajah se towel kuch jyada hi upar chala gaya tha jisse richa ki gori gori sudoul jaanghe be-parda ho kar qayamat dha rahi thi.

Ye scene dekhte hi jitu ke to hosh hi ud gaye…halanki aisa nahi tha ki vo apni bahan ko iss halat me pahli bar dekh raha tha..isse pahle bhi vo richa ko ek do bar iss bhi adhik nangn halat me dekh chuka tha..kintu aaj kafi samay baad richa ke iss madak khubsurat youvan ko dekh kar uski halat kharab ho chali thi.

Vo vaha se hatna chahta tha lekin uski ankhe iss manoram drishya ko dekhne se chukna nahi chah rahi thi..uska dimag kuch kah raha tha to dil kuch aur bol raha tha.

Lekin ye manmohak drishya jyada der tak dekh pana use nasib nahi hua….richa ne apne room ka darwaja band nahi kiya tha shayad ye soch kar ki ghar me uske aur uski maa nirmala ke alawa koi aur to hai nahi..jitu ke aane ka koi andesha nahi tha…isliye vo apne hi dhyan me apne khubsurat youvan ko nikharne me vyast thi..ab use kya pata ki uska apna bhai hi uski iss madmast alhad jawani ko apni ankho se pi raha hai.

Richa ne pair me tel lagane ke baad jaise hi nazre upar ki to samne jitu ko khada dekh kar khush ho gayi lekin agle hi pal apni halat ka dhyan aate hi vo hadbada gayi aur jaldi se bistar ki chadar khich kar apne samne kar liya…aur iske sath hi jitu bhi hosh me aa gaya.

Richa (hadbada kar)—jituuu..tummm..!

Jitu (sakpakate huye)—vo..vo…sorry…didi..

Jitu turant vaha se nazre jhuka kar apne room me chala gaya…magar uska mann ab richa ki nangi jaangho par hi atak kar rah gaya tha..vo apna dhyan richa par se hatana chahta tha par vo aisa kar pa nahi raha tha…richa didi ke baare me sochte huye vo kab ateet ki yado me kho gaya use pata hi nahi chala.

Jitu aur richa bachpan se hi aapas me ladte rahte the…kintu jab richa shadi ke baad apne sasural vida ho rahi thi tab pahli bar jitu bahut roya tha…use apni zindagi ek veeran jaisi mahsoos ho rahi thi…jeevan me ek khalipan sa lag raha tha..aisa lag raha tha jaise ki koi uski bahut kimti anmol cheez usse chheen kar liye ja raha hai..lekin vo cheez kya hai…? Vo ye khud bhi nahi janta tha.

Aur jab richa dulhan banne ke baad kuwari hi vidhwa ban kar vapis ghar aa gayi to uska udas chehra dekh dekh kar jitu bhi dukhi ho jata tha…ab tak ki shararte jo dono ke beech hua karti thi, vo sab tham si gayi thi..richa ab gumsum si rahne lagi thi..jo ki jitu ko bilkul bhi achcha nahi lagta tha.

Kuch dino baad pita ki mrityu ke pashchat jab karzdaro ne kuch jyada hi pareshan karna shuru kar diya tab richa kuch ladkiyo ko tution dene lagi…nirmala ki ummid ab jitu par hi tiki thi…lekin jitu ka mann padhayi me utna nahi lagta tha jitna ki chudai me…

Bade bade amir ghar ki vidhwa ladkiyo ki shadi to badi mushkil se hoti hai..phir jitu ke ghar ki halat to khasta hi thi.. aise me bhala koun richa se shadi karne ko taiyar hota..

Sundarta to richa ko upar wale ne dil khol kar inayat ki thi..upar se uska bhara hua maansal badan, badi badi chuchiya, bahar ko betahasha ubhri huyi gaand kisi buddhe ka bhi lund khada karne ke liye paryapt thi..jisko bhogne ka har koi sapna dekhta tha.

Kayi gaon ke manchalo ne unki garibi ka fayda uthane ki soch kar aaye din richa ko paiso ka lalach dete the..jinme se kuch aise karzdar bhi the..jo apna karza maaf karne ke badle me richa ki jawani ko bhogna chahte the..lekin inn sab ka jawab richa apni sandle se deti thi.

Daulat ka lalach bhi use apni jawani ko kisi par lutane ke liye majbur nahi kar paya...ek din jab vo ghar ke toote phute bathroom me naha rahi thi tabhi vaha achanak se jitu aa gaya...richa ka dhyan to jitu par nahi gaya lekin jitu na bade gour se uss din richa ki madmast jawani ko dekha...jabki richa kapde utar kar nahi naha rahi thi phir bhi uske kapde geele hone ki vajah se uske jism se chipak gaye the jinse uska khubsurat badan nagn hi lag raha tha.

Uss din jitu ne pahli baar apni didi ko ek ladki ki nazar se dekha tha..uske baad vo lagatar richa ki taraf akarshit hota gaya.. ye akarshan kab ek junoon aur ek pyar ban gaya, use khud nahi pata..

Ek bar to richa ne use range hath pakad bhi liya tha apni panty ko lund par pahna kar muth maarte huye..uss din usne achchi pitayi bhi lagayi thi jitu ki…lekin jitu ka uske liye diwanapan dino din badhta hi gaya…jab richa ne uski adat me koi sudhar nahi dekha to usne phir jam kar khari khoti sunayi…to jitu ne bhi apne pyar ka izhar kar diya…magar richa ne use thukra diya.

Samay apni hi gati se chalta raha...aur jitu ka richa ke liye pyar badhta gaya...yaha tak ki richa se chhedchhad karne walo ladko se aaye din uski maar peet hone lagi...ek to garibi aur dusra jitu ki shikayto se dono maa beti pareshan rahne lagi.. richa ne usko bahut samjhane ki koshish ki magar jitu par to apni bahan ki ashiqui ka nasha sir chadh kar bol raha tha, vo samjhane aur samajhne ki seema paar kar chuka tha.

Ek din uske pados me rahne wale uske hi college ke ek ladke ne richa ki saheli ki madad se richa ko janamdin ki party ke bahane se ek khali makaan me bulwa liya..jaha pahle se hi teen ladke moujud the…ye vahi ladke the jinhe kabhi richa ne sandle se peeta tha…unn ladko ko vaha dekh kar aur party ke naam par vaha daru ki bottles dekhte hi richa sab samajh gayi lekin ab vo unke jaal me buri tarah phans chuki thi…vo apne bachaav me rone chillane lagi..kintu iss band ghar me uski sunne wala koi nahi tha.

Sanyog se jitu ko ye baat uske ek dost ne bata di....jisse uska khoon khaul utha...aur vo uss samay jaisi halat me tha, vaisi hi halat me gusse se bhara hua nikal gaya…uss jagah pahuchte hi richa ke cheekhne ki awaz uske kano me padi to vah turant vaha pahuch gaya…

Jitu ko dekhte hi richa jor jor se rone lagi….phir kya tha, kisi ka hath toota to kisi ka pair to kisi ka sir phod diya…halanki jitu ko bhi bahut chot aayi..lekin usne akhirkar richa ki izzat par kisi bhi tarah ka daag nahi lagne diya…iss ghatna se jitu gambhir roop se ghayal ho gaya tha..lekin richa ki din raat ki dekh bhaal ne use theek kar ke hi dum liya..aur jitu ke dil me richa ke liye pyar aur bhi gahra ho gaya.

Jitu ne phir se apne pyar ka izhar kiya lekin richa ne accept nahi kiya…theek hone ke baad jitu phir se college jane laga.. richa ko paane ki chahat me vo ab daru bhi pine laga tha...ek din college me uski unhi ladko se phir jhadap ho gayi aur jiske karan principal ne jitu ko college se nikaal diya.

Agle din vo principal madam ke ghar mafi maangne ke liye gaya to durbhagya se principal madam uss samay bathroom se naha kar kewal peticot me bahar nikli hi thi...jitu ko vaha dekh kar vo ulta sidha bolne lagi...jabki unhe iss halat me dekhte hi jitu ka lund aag ugalne laga aur usne principal madam ko patak kar vahi chod diya.

Natiza ye hua ki jitu ko jail jana pad gaya aur uske pariwar par musibat hi jaise aan giri..jail me uski mulaqat apne hi jaise kuch chodu bhai amtul, raghuhalkal, iron man, siraj patel se huyi jo ki uski hi tarah musibat ke maare the aur jaldi hi unme dosti bhi ho gayi...tabhi unki zindagi me ek din raj aa gaya aur unhe jail ki rihayi ke sath sath, ek achchi naukri aur paisa to mila hi sath me jeene ka ek maqsad bhi mil gaya..

Jitu abhi apne khyalo me khoya hua hi tha ki tabhi uske room ka darwaja khula aur.....

Vahi dusri taarf sheetal ke muh se khoon nikalte dekh kar sadhana aur rashmi ke hosh ud gaye...rashmi ghabra kar raj ko bulane ja hi rahi thi ki sheetal ne use rok diya aur raj se iss baare me kuch bhi na batane ki vinti karne lagi..kintu tabhi piche se raj ki awaz sun kar vo buri tarah darr gayi.

"Didii"

Sheetal didi ke iss tarah se bhagne se main behad ghabra gaya tha..lekin mere pahuchne se pahle hi vo apne room me ja kar darwaja band kar chuki thi..main lagatar knock kiye ja raha tha...

Meri awaz sunte hi sheetal didi ne jaldi se towel se apna muh me laga blood saaf kar ke towel ko door phenk diya..aur phir do minute baad rashmi didi ne apne anshu poch kar darwaja khola...teeno ke chehre par tension saaf jhalak rahi thi ki kahi maine kuch sun na liya ho... ?

Raj—didi..kya hua aap ko... ? aap iss tarah muh daba ke bhagi kyo…?

Sheetal (darte huye)—vo..vo..kuch nahi..rajj...bas muh me koi kida chala gaya tha...jisse mujhe ulti aane lagi thi..

Raj (lambi saans khich kar)—ohhh...pata hai ki main kitna ghabra gaya tha... ?

Sheetal—main ab theek hu..tu tension mat le...ja raat abhut ho chuki hai..so ja...

Raj—lekin aap kuch bol rahi thi na…? haan, apni kisi khwahish ko poora karne ke baare me…? Aap mujhe batao abhi..

Sheetal—vo main kal bata dungi..ab ja…

Raj—theek hai..lekin dhyan se bata dena….

Main vaha se apne room me aa gaya…idhar sheetal didi ki bra khuli hone ke karan kurte ki baanh se bahar nikal aayi thi jis par rashmi aur sadhana dono ki nazar pad gayi jise dekhte hi vo chounk gayi.

Rashmi—ye tumhari bra kaise khul gayi…?

Sheetal (hadbada kar)—bra..!…vo..vo..daudte huye gir gayi thi na..to khul gayi hogi..shayad…

Sadhana—lekin main samajh gayi ki tumhari bra kaise khuli…?

Sheetal—kkkk..kyaaa samajh gayi…? Jo tum..soch rahi ho vaisa kuch nahi hua hai…

Rashmi (mann me)—jarur raj ne sadhana ke dhokhe me bra khol kar iske doodh dabaye honge…aur ye bhi aaj raj ko rok nahi payi hogi..

Sadhana—main to tumhari khwahish bhi samajh gayi…

Rashmi—koun si khwahish…?

Sadhana—jo bhi hai, bas samajh gayi…tension mat lo..tumhari khwahish jarur poori hogi..aur vo bhi aaj hi poori hogi..

Rashmi—mujhe bhi to kuch batao..akhir kis khwahish ki baat ho rahi hai…?

Sadhana—bata du..sheetal…?

Sheetal—vo sab chhodo..tumhe raj ko wish nahi karna kya…?

Sadhana—areey haan, main to bhul hi gayi thi…abhi raj ko wish kar ke aati hu…

Sadhana vaha se mere room ki taraf badh gayi jabki rashmi ghur ghur kar sheetal ko dekhne lagi…uske chehre par tension abhi barkaraar tha,.

Rashmi—akhir tum raj se itni badi baat kyo chhupa rahi ho…? Ye jante huye bhi ki ek na ek din to use pata chal hi jayega.. tab socha hai tumne ki use kitna dukh hoga, tumhare baare me jaan kar…? Tumne kisi ko bhi nahi bataya..kab se ho raha hai ye…?

Sheetal—bas aaj hi se didi….aaj raj ka birthday hai aur main nahi chahti ki aaj ke din jab sabhi ke chehro par khushi hogi vo dhumil ho jaye…aur aap to janti hain ki raj ye sunte hi pagal ho jayega…toot jayega vo didi, jab use malum chalega sach to…poore pariwar ki ek vahi to akhiri ummid hai…main sab ki khushiyo ka gala nahi ghont sakti didi…

Rashmi—tujhe kya lagta hai ki raj ko malum nahi chalega…akhir kab tak…? Dekh abhi vo kuch na kuch kar ke tera ilaz bhi karwa kar theek karwa sakta hai…uski pahuch central govt. tak hai..baad me jab use malum chalega tab kya vo nahi tootega..? uss samay use jyada taklif hogi, sheetal..tu samajhti kyo nahi…?

Sheetal—didi, aap bhi achchi tarah se janti ho ki iss poison ka koi ilaz nahi hai…hame sabse pahle raj ko bachane ke baare me sochna chahiye…raj theek ho gaya to samjho main bhi theek ho jaungi..kyon ki rog to dono ka ek hi hai..

Rashmi—dekh to phir meri baat maan le..raj ko ye bata de ki tu hi uski sadhana hai…aur tu raj ke sath sex karegi to shayad dono ki bimari kuch control me rahegi..

sheetal—bata dungi didi..main khud hi..

jaha ye aapas me baate kar arhi thi vahi ussi samay ek saya bahar nikla kintu jaise hi sheetal ke room se use awaze sunayi padi to vah turant dubara kamre me ghus gaya..shayad vo kisi tarah ka risk nahi lena chahta tha.

Udhar main abhi bistar meleta hi tha ki tabhi sadhana mere room me aa gayi..use dekhte hi maine usko apni baho me kas liya aur chumne laga.

Sadhana—happy birthday rajj..

Raj—vo to theek hai..lekin mujhe mera gift chahiye..

Sadhana—gift raat me milega..

Raj—mujhe apni sadhana ka gift chahiye..personal wala..

Sadhana—mera gift chahiye to tumhe ek kaam karna padega…

Raj—hukum karo meri sarkar..

Sadhana—tumhe apni sadhana se shadi karni hogi aur vo bhi aaj hi…

Raj—main to abhi karne ko taiyar hu…meri jaan…

Sadhana—main majaak nahi kar rahi rajj..I’m serious..

Raj (hairan)—theek hai..main maa ko bol dunga..vo pandit ji se koi achcha sa muhurt dekhne ko bol dengi..

Sadhana—main aaj ki baat kar rahi hu rajjj…tumhe aaj hi apni sadhana se shadi karni hogi..

Raj (hairan)—lekin itna jaldi kaise ho sakti hai shadi…? Shadi ke liye sab ki invite bhi to karna padega…

Sadhana—agar main ye kahu ki ye sheetal ki khwahish hai ki tumhari shadi aaj hi tumhari sadhana se ho..tab bhi tum yahi kahoge…?

Raj (shocked)—kyaaa…sheetal didi ki khwahish…?

Sadhana—haan, sheetal tumse apni issi khwahish ke baare me bolna chahti thi….ab tumhare upar hai ki tum apni sheetal didi ki khwahish poori karte ho ya nahi…

Raj (serious)—agar ye meri sheetal didi ki khwahish hai to jarur poori hogi..aur aaj hi poori hogi….tum ja kar didi ko bol do ki raj unki har khwahish poori karega..

Sadhana (hoth chumte huye)—thanks rajj…I Love You…

Sadhana vaha se uth kar chali gayi aur main soch me doob gaya ki achanak se sheetal didi ke mann me meri shadi ka khyal kyo aa gaya aur vo bhi aaj hi…? Magar main abhi jyada kuch soch pata ki tabhi rashmi didi mere room me aa gayi.

Rashmi—janamdin mubarak ho rajj..

Raj—aise nahi..mujhe pahle gift do..

Rashmi—gift shaam ko milega..jab cake katega..

Raj—mujhe vo bazaru gift nahi chahiye didi..mujhe to asli gift chahiye..vo bhi abhi ke abhi..

Rashmi—abhi mera mood nahi hai…baad me mil jayega vo gift bhi..

Raj—theek hai jao..

Rashmi—lagta hai ki naraz ho gaya mera bhai…achcha bol kya chahiye…?

Raj—jo maangu vo dogi…?

Rashmi—pakka dungi..ab bata..

Raj (kaan me)—mujhe iss samay apni rashmi didi ki bur chahiye…

Rashmi (dhire se)—kyaaaa…? Abhi..tum pagal to nahi ho..? sheetal aur sadhana dono jaag rahi hain..aur upar se koi bhi aa sakta hai aaj tumhare room me, wish karne..samjha karo raj…baad me le lena..

Lekin main kuch sunne ke mood me nahi tha to rashmi didi ko haan karni hi padi…maine bhi jyada samay na lagate huye unko nangi kiye bina hi kewal salwar aur panty niche khiska ke aur kurta upar kar ke unki bur me lund pel diya ..rashmi didi ne apne muh me chadar thoons li jisse ki uski cheekh bahar na nikle..main rashmi didi ko unke doodh dabate huye chodne laga…dus minute me hi rashmi didi jhad gayi lekin mera to abhi baki tha to main unhe pelne me laga raha.

Magar tabhi mere darwaje par knock hone lagi to rashmi didi ghabra kar jaldi se uth gayi aur aanan faanan me apni salwar upar kar jaldi se nada baandhne lagi…darwaja kholte hi samne maa khadi dikh gayi..rashmi didi ko haanfte dekh kar vo bhi chounk gayi.

Malti—rashmi beta, kya hua…?

Rashmi—kkk…kuch nahi..kuch bhi nahi bua..main to bas raj ko wish karne aayi thi…ab main chalti hu…

Itna kah kar rashmi didi vaha se khisak gayi..unke jaate hi maa andar aa gayi..maa ke andar aate hi maine jaldi se darwaja band kiya aur unko pakad kar bistar me lita diya.

Malti—rajj, ye kya kar raha hai..? main to tujhe tere janamdin ki badhayi dene aayi thi..

Raj—Maa,vo janam din ki bate karna chhod..Aur Pahle jaldi se apna bhosda khol.

Maine maa ki saree upar kar ke unke upar chadh gaya aur dono pair phaila ke ek hi jhatke me gachch se lund unki bur me pel diya..maa cheekh uthi..lekin jaldi se unhone apne hatho se muh ko daba liya…aur main danadan unhe chodne laga.. kintu yaha bhi meri kismat kharab nikli kyon ki maa ke jhadte hi phir se koi darwaja khatkhatane laga..jisse maa bistar se uth gayi aur main ek bar phir se beech me hi latak kar rah gaya.

Maa ne darwaja khola to samne radha khadi thi…maa ke jate hi usne mujhe wish kiya aur phir chali gayi…aur main lund pakad ke so gaya…vahi dusre room me sadhana ne jab sheetal ko shadi wali baat batayi to vah khushi se khil uthi..rashmi bhi ye baat janti hi thi ki sheetal aur sadhana dono judwa bahan hain isliye uske samne ye baat batane me koi dikkat nahi huyi aur usko bhi khushi hi huyi sheetal ki shadi ki baat se.

Kuch der tak baate karne ke baad teeno phir se sone ki koshish karne lagi…rashmi to chud kar sust pad chuki thi isliye use jaldi hi neend aa gayi lekin dono billiya abhi bhi jaag rahi thi aur black star ke plan ke baare me soch vichar karne me lagi thi..

Tabhi sadhana ko kisi ke dhire dhire chalne ki aahat ke sath sath kamre me jal rahe night bulb ki madhyam roshni me kisi ki parchhayi nazar aayi..ye dekhte hi uske kaan turant khade ho gaye.

Sheetal ne choonki ankhe band kar rakhi thi isliye use pata nahi chala..dhire dhire pairo ki aahat dhimi padne lagi aur vo parchhayi bahar ki taraf jati huyi mud gayi…ye dekh sadhana ki dil joro se dhak dhak karne laga…usne turant sheetal ke kaan me kuch kaha jise sunte hi vo bhi hadbada kar uth gayi.

Sadhana (dhire se)—mujhe lagta hai ki seema chachi hai..shayad bahar ja rahi hai…?

Sheetal (dhire se )—jaldi se torch utha…jaldi chal..main bhi danda le leti hu…aaj tu Sali ke muh muh par hi torch maarna… jisse ankho me light padne se vo bhag nahi payegi aur tab tak main kutiya ki gaand me danda pel dungi..chal jaldi..

Sadhana ne jaldi se torch liya aur sheetal ne ek kone me rakha hua danda utha liya jo ki usne aaj din me chhupa ke rakh liya tha iss kaam ke liye hi…aur phir tezi se darwaja khol kar dono bahar aa gayi.

Bahar nikalte hi dono charo taraf dekhne lagi..tabhi unki nazar kuch doori par kisi ki parchhayi ki taraf gayi jo ki aage ja rahi thi..ye dekhte hi dono uski taraf daud padi..

Sheetal—sadhana..daud jaldi se…aaj bachni nahi chahiye ye kamini…

Sadhana (daudte huye)—sheetal..maaar ..maarrr Sali ko…danda phenk ke maar…

Uss saaye ne jaise hi ye mahsoos kiya ki koi uske piche daud raha hai to vah bhi tezi se aage ki taraf bhagne laga…

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SAAND
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Friends, Halanki ye baat main pahle bhi kayi bar bata chuka hu, samjha bhi chuka hu aur ek bar phir se bata raha hu.. kyon ki kuch reader’s ke comments padhne ke baad mujhe vivash hona pad raha hai, ye kahne ke liye phir se..

Jaisa ki main pahle hi clear kar chuka hu ki ye ek sex story hai..jab main SAAJAN story ke updates likh raha tha uss samay bahut se reader’s sex ki demand kar rahe the..jabki uss samay uss story me sex ki koi gunhaish hi nahi thi..kyon ki SAAJAN ek love story hai, na ki sex story..maine ye baat usme bhi baar baar batayi lekin phir bhi kuch reader’s sunne samajhne ko taiyar hi nahi the, unhe to sirf sex scenes hi chahiye tha.

Tab maine gusse me aa kar SAAND story likhna start kiya tha…iss story ko start karte samay mere paas na to koi plot tha aur na hi koi kahani thi..bas mere mann me kewal ek hi cheez goonj rahi thi ki logo ko sex hi pasand hai na to lo padho kitna sex padhoge..bas ek hi baat thi dimag me ki mujhe isme kewal sex ..sex aur kewal sex hi likhna hai…without any love, without any emmotions, without any thrill or suspense..only and only sex..

Yahi karan tha ki maine kahani bhi direct sex se hi shuru ki vo bhi bina kisi bhumika ke…ab bina kisi bhumika ke sex to sirf janwar hi karte hain, usme top par saand hi aata hai…jise sex karne ke liye kisi gaay ko patane ki jarurat nahi hai, bas jaha bhi gaay dikh jaye to chadh jao uss par..isliye maine story ka title bhi rakha SAAND…jisko sirf teen hi kaam aate hain. Pahla to khana, dusra gaay dikhte hi uske upar chadh jana aur teesra, koi dusra uss gaay ki taraf badhe to use patak patak kar maarna...aur ye baat maine kahani ke starting page par hi kahani shuru karne se pahle hi clear kar di thi ki iss kahani me kya hai..

Bas kewal yahi saand ke nature ko maine kahani ke hero me set kar ke story start kar di…ab choonki mere paas koi plot ya kahani to thi nahi to maine sex ke sath sath bina sir pair ki bakchodi chalu kar di story me…kyon ki kahani me sex ke sath kuch to dikhana hi tha to yahi start kar diya.

Yahi vajah hai ki kahani me sex ki adhikta hai…starting ke updates sirf sex based hi hain..kyon ki kahani ka main uddeshya hi sex aur kewal sex tha….lekin mujhe tajjub to tab hua jab logo ne iss bina matlab ki bakchodi ko behad pasand kiya..logo ka itna support dekh kar uss samay pahli bar mere mann me iss kahani ko sucharu roop se vyavasthit karne ki soch paida huyi…halanki tab tak kahani ke 20-25 updates ho chuke the.

Ye vichar mann me aane ke baad maine hero ke nature me changes laane start kiye..love & emmotions ki feelings ke liye sadhana aur sheetal ka character add kiya…to thrill ke liye thakur aur black star ka..sath me kuch suspenses bhi create karne ki koshish ki…hero ke andar apne pariwar aur majbur logo ke prati caring ki bhavna viksit ki jiska sabut shilpa aur arti hain.

Ye sabhi badlaav logo ko pasand aaye sirf ek ke..aur vo tha hero ke nature me change..logo ne hero ke nature ko change na karne ke liye comments diye..uske nature ko vaisa hi chudakkad kism ka banaye rakhne ko kaha.

Lihaja maine logo ki bhavnao ka samman rakhte huye kahani me hero ke saand wale nature ko jas ka tas rahne diya aur baki changes ke sath kahani ko build up karne laga…kuch hi samay me ye kahani forum me top par pahuch gayi.

Ab phir se kayi reader’s ka kahna hai ki kahani me sex bahut jyada hai..isko khatam karo ya kam karo..kahani bina vajah lambi ho rahi hai..kahani slow chal rahi hai..etc..etc.

To main ab yahi kahna chahunga ki dosto kahani ab build up ho chuki hai…yaha se hero ke nature me badlaav karna sambhav nahi hai..agar maine ab aisa kiya to kahani apne title se door ho jayegi.

Koi bhi sahitya ya rachna, kisi kahani ke hero, heroines, ya phir kisi bhi characters ke accordings nahi chalti hai, balki vo sirf aur sirf apne title ke according chalti hai…kahani ke sabhi paatra kahani ke uss title ke sirf mohre hote hain…ab yadi maine hero ke nature se saand wali pravritti hatayi (khana, ladna aur chodna) to kahani title ko charitarth nahi karegi.. kyon ki kisi bhi sahitya, novel, kavita, dharm granth ya phir koi bhi rachna ho..sab me uska title hi main hota hai..yahi vajah hai ki title ko kisi bhi rachna ka Hriday Sthal kaha jata hai.

Aur ye baat maine apni student life me apne hindi ke teacher se sikhi thi..jo ki ek prakhyat kavi bhi the..aur jinki ek rachna hamari pathay pushtak me bhi sammilit thi jise hum padh rahe the.

Kahani ki aaj ki situation par main sirf ye kahna chahta hu ki kahani se sex kam ya khatam nahi kiya ja sakta…chahe halaat kaise bhi ho, sex to rahega hi….haan, main itna avashya kar sakta hu ki unko ek ya do line me hi nipta du.

Kayi reader’s ko sheetal ke character se problem thi to maine sheetal ka character change kar diya hai…vo sheetal jo hero ko uski galtiyo par daantti aur maarti thi, vah kuch logo ko pasand nahi aa raha tha..ab sheetal kabhi aage hero ko daantte ya maarte huye nazar nahi ayegi.

Vaise bhi kahani me main jin character’s ke sath sex encounter ho chuka hai unke sath detail me sex ki punravritti nahi karta hu, balki short me hi clear kar deta hu…

Kuch reader’s ka kahna hai ki kahani ko direct black star ke samne lana chahiye ab..to unn dosto se mera yahi kahna hai ki dosto kahani to black star ke aas paas hi chal rahi hai ab..aur uski taraf hi ja rahi hai…kahani ab dhire dhire apne charmotkarsh ki taraf agrasar hai.

Maine ye pahle hi bataya tha ki ye story lagbhag 300 updates ke aas paas jayegi….kahani me abhi bahut se loop points open hain..itne loop points ke sath black star jaise shatir mainded khiladi ke samne direct jana shayad theek nahi hoga. Mera pahla uddeshya inn loop points ko band karna hai jo ki ho raha hai.

Kahani me jo meri soch thi ki update 250 tak inn loop points ko band kar ke uske baad kahani sirf abhay aur black star par focus rahegi, aur vo bhi aamne samne ki ladayi ladte huye..matlab ye ki last ke 50 updates sirf abhay aur black star par hi honge jinke beech me mushkil se do ya teen sex scenes hi ayenge.

Magar abhi to sabhi ki pregnancy problem ko solve karna, vibhisan, langda admi , raj ke judwa bhai ka suspense, rajasthan me mile case ke suspense solve karna aur ritu, sandhya, kinjal, sadhana, , charu, neera, sweta, damini, shilpa, vishakha, vidhya, ragini, sarika, anamika, shashi, richa,hema, rita, archana,,mansi, abhay ke ghar ke teen member, gaon ki kuch ladkiya, ankita, sita, janki, pammy, revti, nirmala, sheetal..and a very imp hidden character…inn sabhi ke encounters baki hain…to kuch ki shadi jinse kar chuka hai..unki problem bhi hain..raj aur sheetal ki bimari hai…teeno family ko ek karna hai..aur abhi to kahani lalita mousi ki taraf dubara turn honi baki hai.

Ab itne sare characters ke sex scenes baki hain, jinhe main jaldi niptana chahta tha isliye sex ko badhana padega..baki aap log jaisa suggetion denge vaisa karne ki koshish karunga…

Ye sabhi matters isliye bhi solve karna jaruri hai kyon ki agar kahani kaale kamre me pahuch gayi to sidha climax par hi ja kar vaha se loutegi…vahi black star ke makadjaal me phans kar rah jayegi, isiliye main abhi kahani ka rukh kaale kamre ki taraf nahi mod raha hu., balki open loop points ko band karne ka kaam kar raha hu.

Dusri baat ki raj ki medical report me bataya ja chuka hai ki usko daily sex karna jaruri hai..ab aise me sex nahi hoga to kaise kaam chalega….? Jaha tak sheetal aur raj ki bimari ke ilaz ki baat hai to ye bhi kahani me clear hai ki iska koi ilaz nahi hai..kyon ki iss tarah ka virus aur poison duniya ke kisi bhi market me abhi launch hi nahi hua hai..lihaza ye case abhi doctor ke bas ke bahar ki baat hai…isko slow rakhne ka ek hi tarika hai sex..aur yadi uska ilaz hai bhi to vahi janta hai jiske plan ke mutabik ye sab ghatit hua hai..

Main update hi likhne ja raha tha lekin kuch reader’s ke review padhne ke baad mujhe ye sab clear karna ek bar phir se jaruri laga….ab aap log hi kam se kam ye bata dijiye ki uprokt character’s me se kitno ke sex scenes detail me du, kin ke short me aur kin ke ek ya do line me nipta du…?

Jaha tak Jitu aur richa ke baare me itna dikhane ki baat hai, to agar richa koi other girl hoti tab ek do line me hi dikhaya ja sakta tha, lekin richa uski family se hai..to jahir si baat hai direct to nahi dikhaya ja sakta ki nazre mili aur pyar ho gaya..? kuch to vajah dikhani hogi iss rishte me pyar panapne ki..vahi maine dikhane ki koshish ki hai..aur itna scene to chodu gang ke sabhi character's ka ayega.

Jaisa bhi aap sabhi reader’s ka sujhaav hoga, main kahani ko aap sabhi ke anusar hi aage badha dunga..mujhe aap sabhi ke sujhavo ka intazar rahega…

 

[Tiwari_baba]

SAAND
PUNARAVLOKAN​

Friends, Halanki ye baat main pahle bhi kayi bar bata chuka hu, samjha bhi chuka hu aur ek bar phir se bata raha hu.. kyon ki kuch reader’s ke comments padhne ke baad mujhe vivash hona pad raha hai, ye kahne ke liye phir se..

Jaisa ki main pahle hi clear kar chuka hu ki ye ek sex story hai..jab main SAAJAN story ke updates likh raha tha uss samay bahut se reader’s sex ki demand kar rahe the..jabki uss samay uss story me sex ki koi gunhaish hi nahi thi..kyon ki SAAJAN ek love story hai, na ki sex story..maine ye baat usme bhi baar baar batayi lekin phir bhi kuch reader’s sunne samajhne ko taiyar hi nahi the, unhe to sirf sex scenes hi chahiye tha.

Tab maine gusse me aa kar SAAND story likhna start kiya tha…iss story ko start karte samay mere paas na to koi plot tha aur na hi koi kahani thi..bas mere mann me kewal ek hi cheez goonj rahi thi ki logo ko sex hi pasand hai na to lo padho kitna sex padhoge..bas ek hi baat thi dimag me ki mujhe isme kewal sex ..sex aur kewal sex hi likhna hai…without any love, without any emmotions, without any thrill or suspense..only and only sex..

Yahi karan tha ki maine kahani bhi direct sex se hi shuru ki vo bhi bina kisi bhumika ke…ab bina kisi bhumika ke sex to sirf janwar hi karte hain, usme top par saand hi aata hai…jise sex karne ke liye kisi gaay ko patane ki jarurat nahi hai, bas jaha bhi gaay dikh jaye to chadh jao uss par..isliye maine story ka title bhi rakha SAAND…jisko sirf teen hi kaam aate hain. Pahla to khana, dusra gaay dikhte hi uske upar chadh jana aur teesra, koi dusra uss gaay ki taraf badhe to use patak patak kar maarna...aur ye baat maine kahani ke starting page par hi kahani shuru karne se pahle hi clear kar di thi ki iss kahani me kya hai..

Bas kewal yahi saand ke nature ko maine kahani ke hero me set kar ke story start kar di…ab choonki mere paas koi plot ya kahani to thi nahi to maine sex ke sath sath bina sir pair ki bakchodi chalu kar di story me…kyon ki kahani me sex ke sath kuch to dikhana hi tha to yahi start kar diya.

Yahi vajah hai ki kahani me sex ki adhikta hai…starting ke updates sirf sex based hi hain..kyon ki kahani ka main uddeshya hi sex aur kewal sex tha….lekin mujhe tajjub to tab hua jab logo ne iss bina matlab ki bakchodi ko behad pasand kiya..logo ka itna support dekh kar uss samay pahli bar mere mann me iss kahani ko sucharu roop se vyavasthit karne ki soch paida huyi…halanki tab tak kahani ke 20-25 updates ho chuke the.

Ye vichar mann me aane ke baad maine hero ke nature me changes laane start kiye..love & emmotions ki feelings ke liye sadhana aur sheetal ka character add kiya…to thrill ke liye thakur aur black star ka..sath me kuch suspenses bhi create karne ki koshish ki…hero ke andar apne pariwar aur majbur logo ke prati caring ki bhavna viksit ki jiska sabut shilpa aur arti hain.

Ye sabhi badlaav logo ko pasand aaye sirf ek ke..aur vo tha hero ke nature me change..logo ne hero ke nature ko change na karne ke liye comments diye..uske nature ko vaisa hi chudakkad kism ka banaye rakhne ko kaha.

Lihaja maine logo ki bhavnao ka samman rakhte huye kahani me hero ke saand wale nature ko jas ka tas rahne diya aur baki changes ke sath kahani ko build up karne laga…kuch hi samay me ye kahani forum me top par pahuch gayi.

Ab phir se kayi reader’s ka kahna hai ki kahani me sex bahut jyada hai..isko khatam karo ya kam karo..kahani bina vajah lambi ho rahi hai..kahani slow chal rahi hai..etc..etc.

To main ab yahi kahna chahunga ki dosto kahani ab build up ho chuki hai…yaha se hero ke nature me badlaav karna sambhav nahi hai..agar maine ab aisa kiya to kahani apne title se door ho jayegi.

Koi bhi sahitya ya rachna, kisi kahani ke hero, heroines, ya phir kisi bhi characters ke accordings nahi chalti hai, balki vo sirf aur sirf apne title ke according chalti hai…kahani ke sabhi paatra kahani ke uss title ke sirf mohre hote hain…ab yadi maine hero ke nature se saand wali pravritti hatayi (khana, ladna aur chodna) to kahani title ko charitarth nahi karegi.. kyon ki kisi bhi sahitya, novel, kavita, dharm granth ya phir koi bhi rachna ho..sab me uska title hi main hota hai..yahi vajah hai ki title ko kisi bhi rachna ka Hriday Sthal kaha jata hai.

Aur ye baat maine apni student life me apne hindi ke teacher se sikhi thi..jo ki ek prakhyat kavi bhi the..aur jinki ek rachna hamari pathay pushtak me bhi sammilit thi jise hum padh rahe the.

Kahani ki aaj ki situation par main sirf ye kahna chahta hu ki kahani se sex kam ya khatam nahi kiya ja sakta…chahe halaat kaise bhi ho, sex to rahega hi….haan, main itna avashya kar sakta hu ki unko ek ya do line me hi nipta du.

Kayi reader’s ko sheetal ke character se problem thi to maine sheetal ka character change kar diya hai…vo sheetal jo hero ko uski galtiyo par daantti aur maarti thi, vah kuch logo ko pasand nahi aa raha tha..ab sheetal kabhi aage hero ko daantte ya maarte huye nazar nahi ayegi.

Vaise bhi kahani me main jin character’s ke sath sex encounter ho chuka hai unke sath detail me sex ki punravritti nahi karta hu, balki short me hi clear kar deta hu…

Kuch reader’s ka kahna hai ki kahani ko direct black star ke samne lana chahiye ab..to unn dosto se mera yahi kahna hai ki dosto kahani to black star ke aas paas hi chal rahi hai ab..aur uski taraf hi ja rahi hai…kahani ab dhire dhire apne charmotkarsh ki taraf agrasar hai.

Maine ye pahle hi bataya tha ki ye story lagbhag 300 updates ke aas paas jayegi….kahani me abhi bahut se loop points open hain..itne loop points ke sath black star jaise shatir mainded khiladi ke samne direct jana shayad theek nahi hoga. Mera pahla uddeshya inn loop points ko band karna hai jo ki ho raha hai.

Kahani me jo meri soch thi ki update 250 tak inn loop points ko band kar ke uske baad kahani sirf abhay aur black star par focus rahegi, aur vo bhi aamne samne ki ladayi ladte huye..matlab ye ki last ke 50 updates sirf abhay aur black star par hi honge jinke beech me mushkil se do ya teen sex scenes hi ayenge.

Magar abhi to sabhi ki pregnancy problem ko solve karna, vibhisan, langda admi , raj ke judwa bhai ka suspense, rajasthan me mile case ke suspense solve karna aur ritu, sandhya, kinjal, sadhana, , charu, neera, sweta, damini, shilpa, vishakha, vidhya, ragini, sarika, anamika, shashi, richa,hema, rita, archana,,mansi, abhay ke ghar ke teen member, gaon ki kuch ladkiya, ankita, sita, janki, pammy, revti, nirmala, sheetal..and a very imp hidden character…inn sabhi ke encounters baki hain…to kuch ki shadi jinse kar chuka hai..unki problem bhi hain..raj aur sheetal ki bimari hai…teeno family ko ek karna hai..aur abhi to kahani lalita mousi ki taraf dubara turn honi baki hai.

Ab itne sare characters ke sex scenes baki hain, jinhe main jaldi niptana chahta tha isliye sex ko badhana padega..baki aap log jaisa suggetion denge vaisa karne ki koshish karunga…

Ye sabhi matters isliye bhi solve karna jaruri hai kyon ki agar kahani kaale kamre me pahuch gayi to sidha climax par hi ja kar vaha se loutegi…vahi black star ke makadjaal me phans kar rah jayegi, isiliye main abhi kahani ka rukh kaale kamre ki taraf nahi mod raha hu., balki open loop points ko band karne ka kaam kar raha hu.

Dusri baat ki raj ki medical report me bataya ja chuka hai ki usko daily sex karna jaruri hai..ab aise me sex nahi hoga to kaise kaam chalega….? Jaha tak sheetal aur raj ki bimari ke ilaz ki baat hai to ye bhi kahani me clear hai ki iska koi ilaz nahi hai..kyon ki iss tarah ka virus aur poison duniya ke kisi bhi market me abhi launch hi nahi hua hai..lihaza ye case abhi doctor ke bas ke bahar ki baat hai…isko slow rakhne ka ek hi tarika hai sex..aur yadi uska ilaz hai bhi to vahi janta hai jiske plan ke mutabik ye sab ghatit hua hai..

Main update hi likhne ja raha tha lekin kuch reader’s ke review padhne ke baad mujhe ye sab clear karna ek bar phir se jaruri laga….ab aap log hi kam se kam ye bata dijiye ki uprokt character’s me se kitno ke sex scenes detail me du, kin ke short me aur kin ke ek ya do line me nipta du…?

Jaha tak Jitu aur richa ke baare me itna dikhane ki baat hai, to agar richa koi other girl hoti tab ek do line me hi dikhaya ja sakta tha, lekin richa uski family se hai..to jahir si baat hai direct to nahi dikhaya ja sakta ki nazre mili aur pyar ho gaya..? kuch to vajah dikhani hogi iss rishte me pyar panapne ki..vahi maine dikhane ki koshish ki hai..aur itna scene to chodu gang ke sabhi character's ka ayega.

Jaisa bhi aap sabhi reader’s ka sujhaav hoga, main kahani ko aap sabhi ke anusar hi aage badha dunga..mujhe aap sabhi ke sujhavo ka intazar rahega…

Pata nahi log apne aap ko kya samajhte hain..... Story likhna itna asan nahi hai.... Ye baat ab samajh aai jab khud likh raha hun..... Waiting waiting waiting likhna asan hai.... Main readers ki kadar bhi karta hun.... But jo negative comments karke writer ki manobal ko todte hai ye achha nahi........ Are story writer ki jaise chahe likhe.... Wo kahte hain naa insaani fitrat hi aisi hai...... Jo chizz nahi hota hai naa usi ki maan karta hai... Sex naa ho to bhai sex dalo....... Sex ho to bhai bahut sex ho gaya ab kuchh naya karo... Are had hoti hai bhai...... Are bhai itni sari sex story hai wo padh lo ek me nahi hoga to koun saa asman geer jayega.... Or agar sex hai ro mood change karne ke liye bina sex wali story padh lo....... Isss story ke kamyabi ka raaz yahi hai ki... Isko anand bhai iss tarah se likhte hain ki sex scene bhi mazedar hi lagta hai....... Bhai main to kahunga aap apne hisaab se hi chalo.... Story lambi ho rahi hai to kya hua.... Aapka to style hi lambi story ka hai... Good luck

 

[plh2499]

SAAND
PUNARAVLOKAN​

Friends, Halanki ye baat main pahle bhi kayi bar bata chuka hu, samjha bhi chuka hu aur ek bar phir se bata raha hu.. kyon ki kuch reader’s ke comments padhne ke baad mujhe vivash hona pad raha hai, ye kahne ke liye phir se..

Jaisa ki main pahle hi clear kar chuka hu ki ye ek sex story hai..jab main SAAJAN story ke updates likh raha tha uss samay bahut se reader’s sex ki demand kar rahe the..jabki uss samay uss story me sex ki koi gunhaish hi nahi thi..kyon ki SAAJAN ek love story hai, na ki sex story..maine ye baat usme bhi baar baar batayi lekin phir bhi kuch reader’s sunne samajhne ko taiyar hi nahi the, unhe to sirf sex scenes hi chahiye tha.

Tab maine gusse me aa kar SAAND story likhna start kiya tha…iss story ko start karte samay mere paas na to koi plot tha aur na hi koi kahani thi..bas mere mann me kewal ek hi cheez goonj rahi thi ki logo ko sex hi pasand hai na to lo padho kitna sex padhoge..bas ek hi baat thi dimag me ki mujhe isme kewal sex ..sex aur kewal sex hi likhna hai…without any love, without any emmotions, without any thrill or suspense..only and only sex..

Yahi karan tha ki maine kahani bhi direct sex se hi shuru ki vo bhi bina kisi bhumika ke…ab bina kisi bhumika ke sex to sirf janwar hi karte hain, usme top par saand hi aata hai…jise sex karne ke liye kisi gaay ko patane ki jarurat nahi hai, bas jaha bhi gaay dikh jaye to chadh jao uss par..isliye maine story ka title bhi rakha SAAND…jisko sirf teen hi kaam aate hain. Pahla to khana, dusra gaay dikhte hi uske upar chadh jana aur teesra, koi dusra uss gaay ki taraf badhe to use patak patak kar maarna...aur ye baat maine kahani ke starting page par hi kahani shuru karne se pahle hi clear kar di thi ki iss kahani me kya hai..

Bas kewal yahi saand ke nature ko maine kahani ke hero me set kar ke story start kar di…ab choonki mere paas koi plot ya kahani to thi nahi to maine sex ke sath sath bina sir pair ki bakchodi chalu kar di story me…kyon ki kahani me sex ke sath kuch to dikhana hi tha to yahi start kar diya.

Yahi vajah hai ki kahani me sex ki adhikta hai…starting ke updates sirf sex based hi hain..kyon ki kahani ka main uddeshya hi sex aur kewal sex tha….lekin mujhe tajjub to tab hua jab logo ne iss bina matlab ki bakchodi ko behad pasand kiya..logo ka itna support dekh kar uss samay pahli bar mere mann me iss kahani ko sucharu roop se vyavasthit karne ki soch paida huyi…halanki tab tak kahani ke 20-25 updates ho chuke the.

Ye vichar mann me aane ke baad maine hero ke nature me changes laane start kiye..love & emmotions ki feelings ke liye sadhana aur sheetal ka character add kiya…to thrill ke liye thakur aur black star ka..sath me kuch suspenses bhi create karne ki koshish ki…hero ke andar apne pariwar aur majbur logo ke prati caring ki bhavna viksit ki jiska sabut shilpa aur arti hain.

Ye sabhi badlaav logo ko pasand aaye sirf ek ke..aur vo tha hero ke nature me change..logo ne hero ke nature ko change na karne ke liye comments diye..uske nature ko vaisa hi chudakkad kism ka banaye rakhne ko kaha.

Lihaja maine logo ki bhavnao ka samman rakhte huye kahani me hero ke saand wale nature ko jas ka tas rahne diya aur baki changes ke sath kahani ko build up karne laga…kuch hi samay me ye kahani forum me top par pahuch gayi.

Ab phir se kayi reader’s ka kahna hai ki kahani me sex bahut jyada hai..isko khatam karo ya kam karo..kahani bina vajah lambi ho rahi hai..kahani slow chal rahi hai..etc..etc.

To main ab yahi kahna chahunga ki dosto kahani ab build up ho chuki hai…yaha se hero ke nature me badlaav karna sambhav nahi hai..agar maine ab aisa kiya to kahani apne title se door ho jayegi.

Koi bhi sahitya ya rachna, kisi kahani ke hero, heroines, ya phir kisi bhi characters ke accordings nahi chalti hai, balki vo sirf aur sirf apne title ke according chalti hai…kahani ke sabhi paatra kahani ke uss title ke sirf mohre hote hain…ab yadi maine hero ke nature se saand wali pravritti hatayi (khana, ladna aur chodna) to kahani title ko charitarth nahi karegi.. kyon ki kisi bhi sahitya, novel, kavita, dharm granth ya phir koi bhi rachna ho..sab me uska title hi main hota hai..yahi vajah hai ki title ko kisi bhi rachna ka Hriday Sthal kaha jata hai.

Aur ye baat maine apni student life me apne hindi ke teacher se sikhi thi..jo ki ek prakhyat kavi bhi the..aur jinki ek rachna hamari pathay pushtak me bhi sammilit thi jise hum padh rahe the.

Kahani ki aaj ki situation par main sirf ye kahna chahta hu ki kahani se sex kam ya khatam nahi kiya ja sakta…chahe halaat kaise bhi ho, sex to rahega hi….haan, main itna avashya kar sakta hu ki unko ek ya do line me hi nipta du.

Kayi reader’s ko sheetal ke character se problem thi to maine sheetal ka character change kar diya hai…vo sheetal jo hero ko uski galtiyo par daantti aur maarti thi, vah kuch logo ko pasand nahi aa raha tha..ab sheetal kabhi aage hero ko daantte ya maarte huye nazar nahi ayegi.

Vaise bhi kahani me main jin character’s ke sath sex encounter ho chuka hai unke sath detail me sex ki punravritti nahi karta hu, balki short me hi clear kar deta hu…

Kuch reader’s ka kahna hai ki kahani ko direct black star ke samne lana chahiye ab..to unn dosto se mera yahi kahna hai ki dosto kahani to black star ke aas paas hi chal rahi hai ab..aur uski taraf hi ja rahi hai…kahani ab dhire dhire apne charmotkarsh ki taraf agrasar hai.

Maine ye pahle hi bataya tha ki ye story lagbhag 300 updates ke aas paas jayegi….kahani me abhi bahut se loop points open hain..itne loop points ke sath black star jaise shatir mainded khiladi ke samne direct jana shayad theek nahi hoga. Mera pahla uddeshya inn loop points ko band karna hai jo ki ho raha hai.

Kahani me jo meri soch thi ki update 250 tak inn loop points ko band kar ke uske baad kahani sirf abhay aur black star par focus rahegi, aur vo bhi aamne samne ki ladayi ladte huye..matlab ye ki last ke 50 updates sirf abhay aur black star par hi honge jinke beech me mushkil se do ya teen sex scenes hi ayenge.

Magar abhi to sabhi ki pregnancy problem ko solve karna, vibhisan, langda admi , raj ke judwa bhai ka suspense, rajasthan me mile case ke suspense solve karna aur ritu, sandhya, kinjal, sadhana, , charu, neera, sweta, damini, shilpa, vishakha, vidhya, ragini, sarika, anamika, shashi, richa,hema, rita, archana,,mansi, abhay ke ghar ke teen member, gaon ki kuch ladkiya, ankita, sita, janki, pammy, revti, nirmala, sheetal..and a very imp hidden character…inn sabhi ke encounters baki hain…to kuch ki shadi jinse kar chuka hai..unki problem bhi hain..raj aur sheetal ki bimari hai…teeno family ko ek karna hai..aur abhi to kahani lalita mousi ki taraf dubara turn honi baki hai.

Ab itne sare characters ke sex scenes baki hain, jinhe main jaldi niptana chahta tha isliye sex ko badhana padega..baki aap log jaisa suggetion denge vaisa karne ki koshish karunga…

Ye sabhi matters isliye bhi solve karna jaruri hai kyon ki agar kahani kaale kamre me pahuch gayi to sidha climax par hi ja kar vaha se loutegi…vahi black star ke makadjaal me phans kar rah jayegi, isiliye main abhi kahani ka rukh kaale kamre ki taraf nahi mod raha hu., balki open loop points ko band karne ka kaam kar raha hu.

Dusri baat ki raj ki medical report me bataya ja chuka hai ki usko daily sex karna jaruri hai..ab aise me sex nahi hoga to kaise kaam chalega….? Jaha tak sheetal aur raj ki bimari ke ilaz ki baat hai to ye bhi kahani me clear hai ki iska koi ilaz nahi hai..kyon ki iss tarah ka virus aur poison duniya ke kisi bhi market me abhi launch hi nahi hua hai..lihaza ye case abhi doctor ke bas ke bahar ki baat hai…isko slow rakhne ka ek hi tarika hai sex..aur yadi uska ilaz hai bhi to vahi janta hai jiske plan ke mutabik ye sab ghatit hua hai..

Main update hi likhne ja raha tha lekin kuch reader’s ke review padhne ke baad mujhe ye sab clear karna ek bar phir se jaruri laga….ab aap log hi kam se kam ye bata dijiye ki uprokt character’s me se kitno ke sex scenes detail me du, kin ke short me aur kin ke ek ya do line me nipta du…?

Jaha tak Jitu aur richa ke baare me itna dikhane ki baat hai, to agar richa koi other girl hoti tab ek do line me hi dikhaya ja sakta tha, lekin richa uski family se hai..to jahir si baat hai direct to nahi dikhaya ja sakta ki nazre mili aur pyar ho gaya..? kuch to vajah dikhani hogi iss rishte me pyar panapne ki..vahi maine dikhane ki koshish ki hai..aur itna scene to chodu gang ke sabhi character's ka ayega.

Jaisa bhi aap sabhi reader’s ka sujhaav hoga, main kahani ko aap sabhi ke anusar hi aage badha dunga..mujhe aap sabhi ke sujhavo ka intazar rahega…

bhai khanni ko isse chalne do
koe badlava nahi karo bhai please

 

[Loveyou143]

SAAND
PUNARAVLOKAN​

Friends, Halanki ye baat main pahle bhi kayi bar bata chuka hu, samjha bhi chuka hu aur ek bar phir se bata raha hu.. kyon ki kuch reader’s ke comments padhne ke baad mujhe vivash hona pad raha hai, ye kahne ke liye phir se..

Jaisa ki main pahle hi clear kar chuka hu ki ye ek sex story hai..jab main SAAJAN story ke updates likh raha tha uss samay bahut se reader’s sex ki demand kar rahe the..jabki uss samay uss story me sex ki koi gunhaish hi nahi thi..kyon ki SAAJAN ek love story hai, na ki sex story..maine ye baat usme bhi baar baar batayi lekin phir bhi kuch reader’s sunne samajhne ko taiyar hi nahi the, unhe to sirf sex scenes hi chahiye tha.

Tab maine gusse me aa kar SAAND story likhna start kiya tha…iss story ko start karte samay mere paas na to koi plot tha aur na hi koi kahani thi..bas mere mann me kewal ek hi cheez goonj rahi thi ki logo ko sex hi pasand hai na to lo padho kitna sex padhoge..bas ek hi baat thi dimag me ki mujhe isme kewal sex ..sex aur kewal sex hi likhna hai…without any love, without any emmotions, without any thrill or suspense..only and only sex..

Yahi karan tha ki maine kahani bhi direct sex se hi shuru ki vo bhi bina kisi bhumika ke…ab bina kisi bhumika ke sex to sirf janwar hi karte hain, usme top par saand hi aata hai…jise sex karne ke liye kisi gaay ko patane ki jarurat nahi hai, bas jaha bhi gaay dikh jaye to chadh jao uss par..isliye maine story ka title bhi rakha SAAND…jisko sirf teen hi kaam aate hain. Pahla to khana, dusra gaay dikhte hi uske upar chadh jana aur teesra, koi dusra uss gaay ki taraf badhe to use patak patak kar maarna...aur ye baat maine kahani ke starting page par hi kahani shuru karne se pahle hi clear kar di thi ki iss kahani me kya hai..

Bas kewal yahi saand ke nature ko maine kahani ke hero me set kar ke story start kar di…ab choonki mere paas koi plot ya kahani to thi nahi to maine sex ke sath sath bina sir pair ki bakchodi chalu kar di story me…kyon ki kahani me sex ke sath kuch to dikhana hi tha to yahi start kar diya.

Yahi vajah hai ki kahani me sex ki adhikta hai…starting ke updates sirf sex based hi hain..kyon ki kahani ka main uddeshya hi sex aur kewal sex tha….lekin mujhe tajjub to tab hua jab logo ne iss bina matlab ki bakchodi ko behad pasand kiya..logo ka itna support dekh kar uss samay pahli bar mere mann me iss kahani ko sucharu roop se vyavasthit karne ki soch paida huyi…halanki tab tak kahani ke 20-25 updates ho chuke the.

Ye vichar mann me aane ke baad maine hero ke nature me changes laane start kiye..love & emmotions ki feelings ke liye sadhana aur sheetal ka character add kiya…to thrill ke liye thakur aur black star ka..sath me kuch suspenses bhi create karne ki koshish ki…hero ke andar apne pariwar aur majbur logo ke prati caring ki bhavna viksit ki jiska sabut shilpa aur arti hain.

Ye sabhi badlaav logo ko pasand aaye sirf ek ke..aur vo tha hero ke nature me change..logo ne hero ke nature ko change na karne ke liye comments diye..uske nature ko vaisa hi chudakkad kism ka banaye rakhne ko kaha.

Lihaja maine logo ki bhavnao ka samman rakhte huye kahani me hero ke saand wale nature ko jas ka tas rahne diya aur baki changes ke sath kahani ko build up karne laga…kuch hi samay me ye kahani forum me top par pahuch gayi.

Ab phir se kayi reader’s ka kahna hai ki kahani me sex bahut jyada hai..isko khatam karo ya kam karo..kahani bina vajah lambi ho rahi hai..kahani slow chal rahi hai..etc..etc.

To main ab yahi kahna chahunga ki dosto kahani ab build up ho chuki hai…yaha se hero ke nature me badlaav karna sambhav nahi hai..agar maine ab aisa kiya to kahani apne title se door ho jayegi.

Koi bhi sahitya ya rachna, kisi kahani ke hero, heroines, ya phir kisi bhi characters ke accordings nahi chalti hai, balki vo sirf aur sirf apne title ke according chalti hai…kahani ke sabhi paatra kahani ke uss title ke sirf mohre hote hain…ab yadi maine hero ke nature se saand wali pravritti hatayi (khana, ladna aur chodna) to kahani title ko charitarth nahi karegi.. kyon ki kisi bhi sahitya, novel, kavita, dharm granth ya phir koi bhi rachna ho..sab me uska title hi main hota hai..yahi vajah hai ki title ko kisi bhi rachna ka Hriday Sthal kaha jata hai.

Aur ye baat maine apni student life me apne hindi ke teacher se sikhi thi..jo ki ek prakhyat kavi bhi the..aur jinki ek rachna hamari pathay pushtak me bhi sammilit thi jise hum padh rahe the.

Kahani ki aaj ki situation par main sirf ye kahna chahta hu ki kahani se sex kam ya khatam nahi kiya ja sakta…chahe halaat kaise bhi ho, sex to rahega hi….haan, main itna avashya kar sakta hu ki unko ek ya do line me hi nipta du.

Kayi reader’s ko sheetal ke character se problem thi to maine sheetal ka character change kar diya hai…vo sheetal jo hero ko uski galtiyo par daantti aur maarti thi, vah kuch logo ko pasand nahi aa raha tha..ab sheetal kabhi aage hero ko daantte ya maarte huye nazar nahi ayegi.

Vaise bhi kahani me main jin character’s ke sath sex encounter ho chuka hai unke sath detail me sex ki punravritti nahi karta hu, balki short me hi clear kar deta hu…

Kuch reader’s ka kahna hai ki kahani ko direct black star ke samne lana chahiye ab..to unn dosto se mera yahi kahna hai ki dosto kahani to black star ke aas paas hi chal rahi hai ab..aur uski taraf hi ja rahi hai…kahani ab dhire dhire apne charmotkarsh ki taraf agrasar hai.

Maine ye pahle hi bataya tha ki ye story lagbhag 300 updates ke aas paas jayegi….kahani me abhi bahut se loop points open hain..itne loop points ke sath black star jaise shatir mainded khiladi ke samne direct jana shayad theek nahi hoga. Mera pahla uddeshya inn loop points ko band karna hai jo ki ho raha hai.

Kahani me jo meri soch thi ki update 250 tak inn loop points ko band kar ke uske baad kahani sirf abhay aur black star par focus rahegi, aur vo bhi aamne samne ki ladayi ladte huye..matlab ye ki last ke 50 updates sirf abhay aur black star par hi honge jinke beech me mushkil se do ya teen sex scenes hi ayenge.

Magar abhi to sabhi ki pregnancy problem ko solve karna, vibhisan, langda admi , raj ke judwa bhai ka suspense, rajasthan me mile case ke suspense solve karna aur ritu, sandhya, kinjal, sadhana, , charu, neera, sweta, damini, shilpa, vishakha, vidhya, ragini, sarika, anamika, shashi, richa,hema, rita, archana,,mansi, abhay ke ghar ke teen member, gaon ki kuch ladkiya, ankita, sita, janki, pammy, revti, nirmala, sheetal..and a very imp hidden character…inn sabhi ke encounters baki hain…to kuch ki shadi jinse kar chuka hai..unki problem bhi hain..raj aur sheetal ki bimari hai…teeno family ko ek karna hai..aur abhi to kahani lalita mousi ki taraf dubara turn honi baki hai.

Ab itne sare characters ke sex scenes baki hain, jinhe main jaldi niptana chahta tha isliye sex ko badhana padega..baki aap log jaisa suggetion denge vaisa karne ki koshish karunga…

Ye sabhi matters isliye bhi solve karna jaruri hai kyon ki agar kahani kaale kamre me pahuch gayi to sidha climax par hi ja kar vaha se loutegi…vahi black star ke makadjaal me phans kar rah jayegi, isiliye main abhi kahani ka rukh kaale kamre ki taraf nahi mod raha hu., balki open loop points ko band karne ka kaam kar raha hu.

Dusri baat ki raj ki medical report me bataya ja chuka hai ki usko daily sex karna jaruri hai..ab aise me sex nahi hoga to kaise kaam chalega….? Jaha tak sheetal aur raj ki bimari ke ilaz ki baat hai to ye bhi kahani me clear hai ki iska koi ilaz nahi hai..kyon ki iss tarah ka virus aur poison duniya ke kisi bhi market me abhi launch hi nahi hua hai..lihaza ye case abhi doctor ke bas ke bahar ki baat hai…isko slow rakhne ka ek hi tarika hai sex..aur yadi uska ilaz hai bhi to vahi janta hai jiske plan ke mutabik ye sab ghatit hua hai..

Main update hi likhne ja raha tha lekin kuch reader’s ke review padhne ke baad mujhe ye sab clear karna ek bar phir se jaruri laga….ab aap log hi kam se kam ye bata dijiye ki uprokt character’s me se kitno ke sex scenes detail me du, kin ke short me aur kin ke ek ya do line me nipta du…?

Jaha tak Jitu aur richa ke baare me itna dikhane ki baat hai, to agar richa koi other girl hoti tab ek do line me hi dikhaya ja sakta tha, lekin richa uski family se hai..to jahir si baat hai direct to nahi dikhaya ja sakta ki nazre mili aur pyar ho gaya..? kuch to vajah dikhani hogi iss rishte me pyar panapne ki..vahi maine dikhane ki koshish ki hai..aur itna scene to chodu gang ke sabhi character's ka ayega.

Jaisa bhi aap sabhi reader’s ka sujhaav hoga, main kahani ko aap sabhi ke anusar hi aage badha dunga..mujhe aap sabhi ke sujhavo ka intazar rahega…

Aap jaise kahani konaage badhane ki soch rahe hai waise hi badhaiye...