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Mast shuruwat he bhaiUpdate- 01
"W-what?"
Rahul choked..!
" tumne meri baat suni" Avni ki voice Sharp or impatient thi. "me ab tumhare sath nahi rehna chahti..Mujhe koi behtar mil gaya hai!.A real man. koi aisa jo sach me mera khyaal rakh shake or mujhe woh sab de shake jo me chahti hu".
Uske words hathode ki tarah hit hue,lekin uska kam abhi poora nahi hua tha.
" Tumhare jaisa chhota aadmi nahi, jo kisi ghatiya restaurant me apni life barbaad kar raha ho."
Rahul ki fingers mobile par kas gayi, uski dhadkan fast-slow hoti hue chal rahi thi,or under se ek voice aa rahi thi" yeh real nahi hai..aisa ho hi nahi shakta"
" Don't call me again." Avni ne apni aakhri aavaj me kaha. " Pata hai kya? Koi baat nahi. I'm blocking you."
Tint!..
Call End ho gay bas aise hi
Rahul khade-2 ek jagah pe jame hue mobile ki screen ko ghurr raha tha. Uska mind blank. Uska heart....tut gaya tha.
Lehre kinnare se takkra rahi thi. Hawa me namak ki ki khushbu feli hue thi.ye romantic hona chahiye tha..ye uski life ki sabse khubsurat nights me se ek honi chahiye thi.
Niche dekhte hi uska right hath vibrate karne laga, uske hath me ek small box tha Red and Gold colours ka. finely crafted, elegant. Uske under ek ring thi jo night me bhi chamak rahi thi.
Ek ring jiske liye usne 5 year apni salary mai se saving ki thi.
Uske liye..
us aaurat ke liye jo uski maa ki mout ke baad uska sahara bani thi, us aaurat ke liye jisne use dark phase se bahar nikala tha.
Love? Maybe. Ya phir ek dependence thi?.
Rahul ke face par ek kadvi smile aayi,uske seene me jakdan ho rahi thi. Uski nazre uper uthi,usne apne aas-pas ke nazare ko dekha.. Soft candlelight ,rait par bikhri hue phulo ki pankhudiya, is raat ko perfect banane ke liye usne jo mehnat ki thi.
Sab kuch bekar
" mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha ki usne mujhe aaise hi chhod diya..."
Uski aavaj muskil se nikal rahi thi, hawa me uski aavaj gayab ho rahi thi.
" kya uske liye ye sab ek khel tha?"
Uske under kuch tut gaya tha.
Isase pehle ki woh kuch soch pata, uski fingers ring ke box par majbuti se kas gai - or nirasha se dahadte hue , smunder me fek diya.
Fshhh!
Ek second time bita phir dusra or..
Rahul phir apne ghutne pe aa gira.
" Wait. Wait, wait, wait-- MERA PAISA!"
Reality ka bhan hote hi ghabrahat fel gay uske under.
" What the fuck is wrong with me?!"
Bina time waste kiye, apne jute utar kar pani ki taraf bhaga. Woh apni five years ki jama-punji or apni gf ko ek hi raat me khona nahi chahta tha.
Lahre lagatar or wild hokar garaj rahi thi. Lekin rahul ruka nahi, pani bahot hi cold tha jo uski body ko chubh raha tha, par uski nazre pani ki under sateh par ghum rahi thi, box ko dhund rahi thi.
Phir smuder me or aage jane laga.
Woh teara, uski arms laharo ko chirti hue aage badh rahi thi, desperation use aage dhakel rahi thi.
" yaha wapas aao,bewakuff!"
Ek bahot badi laher uske uper tut padi.
Wawe ka force bahot jyada or bhayanak tha, mano eit ki deewar uski body se takkra rahi ho. Pani uske muh , fefde or gale me bhar gaya. Uske hath-pair ladkhada rahe the, lekin smunder bahot strong tha.
Rahul ab dubne laga.
Deeper .!
Pani ke pressure ne or dabav dala, uska vision dhundhla hone laga.
"No. No" no, no."
Usns struggled kiya, likin uski body baijan hone lagi thi. Every movement se uski bachi-kuchi oxygen khatam ho rahi thi.
Uske lungs chikh uthe
" Damm it! agar Avni na hoti to me yaha na hota! meri khud ki stupidity na hoti to--!"
Uske thought sust pad gaye. Uski fight weak pad gay.
Fine
Me haar manta hu. Vaise bhi mera wait karne wala koi nahi hai.
Uski body limp ho gayi, consciousness lupt ho gay.
Then--
CRACK .
Uska sar kisi thos chij se takraya.
A rock
Woh glowed karne laga.
A brilliant, otherworldly light phut pada,jisne gehraiyo ko roshan kar diya. Rahul ko use samajne ka time hi nahi mila tha. Sab kuch uska dard, uske vichar, uska astitav - gayab ho gaya.
He died.
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Rahul ki awareness shuny me laut aay. Ek vishal, ant-hin shuny.
Use laga... weightless . Alag. Uski body?-No, koi body nahi thi, bas flickering karta hua energy ka ek wisp, abyss me floating kar tha .
" Wait..... me kaha hu?"
Uske charo or ek mechanical zhankar gunj uthi, ek emotionless female aavaj.
[ System Activated ]
[ You have received the Sovereign Bond System.]
[ You Have Died.]
Rahul thithak gaya
[ You Will Be Reborn Into a New World.]
"Reborn?(punar-janm) What?!"
Aavaj bina vichlit hue aani chalu rahi.
[ Analyzing Host's Memories...]
[ Searching for a Suitable World...]
[ Scanning Novels the Host Has Read...]
" Wait. wait,what?! Tum bahot fast ja rahi ho!"
Phir, final Notification :
[ Ding! The World of Leah Has Been Chosen.]
Rahul ka Dil ruk gaya.
" Oh. My. Lord."
[ Host , Brace Yourself. You Are Being Reborn.]
Rahul ko kuch samaj pane ka time hi nahi mila tha ki use andhere ne puri tarah se nigal liya.
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Jabardast start huva hai keet it upUpdate - 03
Virat mirror ke samne khada hokar apne aap ko dekh raha tha.
Long, purple baigeni hair uske shoulder se niche tak lehra rahe the. Uski silver jaisi sharp and piercing aankhe, duniya ko glass ki tarah mirrored kar rahi thi. Woh muskuraya.
At least me ab handsome to hu.
Virat Weaverheart ek lady-killer tha, is me koi doubt nahi- ek aisa aadmi jo ek nazar se hi sabka dhyan apni or khich leta tha. Agar uske predecessor ne iss face ka sahi estemal kiya hota, to chije alag hoti.
Tch. What a wast!. Agar old Virat ke paas half brain bhi hota, uska face aisa tha, to wo protagonist bhi uske samne struggle karta.
Lekin vo to tab ki baat hai.
Iss baar, apni looks, apne mind, or-- most important--- apne system ka estemal karke woh sab hasil karega jo woh chahta tha. Yaha tak ki uss princess ko bhi, jo protagonist ke liye use chhodne wali hai.
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Fresh hone ke baad, Virat window ke paas khade hokar vishal Weaverheart Estate ko dekh raha tha.
Morning ka Sun land ko gold se nahala raha tha. Countless training feilds, hare-bhare gardens or uchi marble ki towering jaha tak nazar jati thi,waha tak pheli hue thi. Four great families main se kisi ek liye perfect ek home.
And yet...
This world is insane.
Virat ne marne se pehle novel ke sirf first 30 chapters hi read kiye the. Lekin woh kya jannta tha? Woh baat use immediately bha gai.
Mana dwara governed ek world, Monsters, dungeons, or war dwara Shaped .
Sadiyo pehle, duniya bhar me gates appears hue, jinse nightmares creatures bahar nikle the - goblins, orcs, dire wolves, dragons, undead. Every horror imaginable.
Lekin gates kuch or bhi lekar aaye.
Mana.
Ek mysterious energy jisne human potential ko awaken kiya, unhe supernatural abilities di gai.
Is power ke sath, humanity ne jawabi hamla kiya. But ye akele nahi the jo change hue. Mana ne other races-- elves, dwarves, beastmen, and demons ke rise ka bhi rasta khol diya.
Uniting hone ke bajay, in races ne world ko divided kar diya or apne-apne continents par claims karne lage. Iske baad uneasy shanti chha gai.
Expect with the demons.
Vo real enemy the. Unhe war pasand thi. Unhe chaos pasand thi.
Or iss tarah , other races ne mil kar apne most promising talent ko train karne ke liye academy banai. Ek aisa place jaha sabhi races ek sath rehti thi.
Wahi academy jaha Rock -- the protagonist --- Pokémon ki tarah women ko collect karta tha.
Virat ne halke se sans li.
" Damm you. Rock."
Iss world me power ka progression straightforward tha.
14 year ki age me , every child innate talent awakened ho jata hai, jise E-rank se SSS- rank tak graded kiya jata hai.
E-rank ? Bilkul useless.
SSS-rank? Humans ke bich ek god
Awakening ke baad, unhe Akashic Record ki taraf se officially tor par manyta di jati hai -- Strength or recognition ko governing karne wali mysterious system. Every action, every achievement ko record karta tha, or agar aapne koi remarkable kam kiya -- chahe heroic ho ya villainous-- to woh tumhe ek title se rewarded karta hai.
Or titles sirf show ke liye nahi tha.
They granted real power.
Apka titles jitna rarer or powerful hoga, aap utna hi strong banoge. Because iss world me power sirf talent se nahi hoti.
Yeh existence ke bare me tha. Or only achievement and titles gain karke hi apka existence elevate ho sakta hai.
Jab apka existence ek nischit seema tak pahoch jayega, to Akashic Record apko ek choice grant karega.
The best example? Aura.
A- rank tak reach ke liye, vyakti ko apna Aura ko awaken karna padta tha.-- jo vyakti ki presence or energy ka manifestation hai. Ye saalo ki kathor training ya enough titles se achieve kiya ja sakta hai. Kyuki ek baar apka existence ek nischit seema tak pahoch jata. To Akashic Record apko aapki achievement or apke dwara chune hue path ke adhar par Aura selection present karta hai. Kehne ki jaroorat nahi ki apka path jitna powerful and unique hoga, Option utne hi absurd hote hai.
Yah principle S-rank par bhi apply hote hai, But instead Of Aura, vyakti apne Intent ko awaken karta hai-- ek specific concept ki gehray, personal understanding jo itni deep hoti hai ki woh reality ko bhi influence kar sakti hai.
Jaha tak SS-rank or uske aage ki baat hai...
Virat ko kuch pata nahi hai.
Usne kabhi itna aage tak read nahi kiya
Lekin ek baat clear thi-- power earn ki ja sakti thi.
Aap puri tarah se smart, bold or insane hai to aap Akashic Record ko aapko accept karne ke liye force kar sakte hai.
Or yahi woh loophole tha jiska woh advantage uthana chahta tha.
Because.. baki sab se alag..
Uske paas ek system thi. Or woh bhi unique.
Jaise hi woh apne next move ka plan wala tha ki---
Knock. Knock.
" Young master, kya me under aa sakti hu?."
Ek familiar aavaj.
Virat door ki or turn hua or bola " Yes."
Pehli wali middle- aged ki maid under aai, dar or ghabhrai hue, uski aankhe niche jhuki hue thi.
Virat ko turant samaj aa gaya ki vo aise kyu hai.
Uska predecessor ek bigda hua child tha, jo servants ko pareshan karta tha, because use pata tha ki uski maa use kabhi punish nahi karegi.
Now?
Woh usase darre the.
Annoying.
Virat ne aah bhari " kya tumhe kuch chahiye? "
Maid uski aavaj ko sunn kar sock ho gai or haklate hu a boli, " T..The-Lady dining room me aapka wait kar rahi hai."
Virat ne sar hilaya, " Guide me."
Maid shocking reh gai" kya?"
Virat - " kya mujhe apne baat repeat karni hogi?."
" Ah! N-No, Young master! Abhi! " wo kapti hue hallway me bhag gai.
Virat bhi under hi under aah bharte hue piche-piche aaya.. mujhe uske liye bhura lag raha hai par... lekin mujhe samaj nahi aa raha ki aakhir dining room kaha hai.
kas, mujhe apne predecessors ki memories virasat me mili hoti.
System, at least next time apna kam thik se karna.
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Dinning hall vishal tha, phir bhi bhayanak roop se khali tha.
Room main ek long mahogany table pheli hue thi, lekin dono chhor par sirf two chairs rakhi hue thi.
It made sense.
Weaverheart Family main only do log the.
Virat or uski Maa.
Or uska Father?
Unknown.
Aisa nahi hai ki isase koi fark padta ho.
" Hello, Maa."
Table ke head par ek striking women bethi thi, jiske silver hair lehra rahe the and uski piercing violet aankhe thi.
Shreya Weaverheart.
Castria Empire ki sabse strongest women's main se ek, human domain ki ruler.
Ek terrifying existence.
Usne muskurate huwe apni baahe phela di, " idher aao, mere bacche. Maa ke gale lag ja."
Virat hesitated.
uske predecessor ne always apni maa ke affection ko rejecte kar diya tha.
Lekin is virat ke liye koi one person tha jiske sath use quickly ghulne-milne ki jaroorat thi, wo uske maa shreya thi.
Woh aage badha or gale lag gaya.
Shreya sakht ho gai.
Uski arms shock se freeze ho gaye, mano woh samaj hi na pa rahi ho ki abhi kya hua.
Virat thoda pichhe jhuka or apna sar jhukaya, " Maa? Is something wrong?"
Shreya ki fingers uske charo or kas gai.
Virat ne shreya ko dhruj te huwe mehsus kiya.
Virat(Apne aap se)- Are yaar! Kya mene jyada kar diya?
Shreya pichhe hat gai, uski purple ankhe virat ki aankho se takra gai.
" tujhe kya ho gaya?" Shreya ne fusfusate huwe puchha. " tumne mujhe kabhi gale nahi lagne diya."
Virat ne ek sharmili smile ke sath kaha. " mujhe realize hua.... me idiot tha."
usne nazre niche ki. " log hamesha kehte hai ki main aapke bina kuch bhi nahi hu. Me weak hu , talentless hu. Ki me apni training kabhi puri nahi kar paunga.
" Me hamesha aapke bharose nahi rahna chahta tha , is liye khud ko aap se durr rehne ki koshish ki."
Shreya ki naazar soft pad gai
Virat ko jhuth bolne ki jaroorat hi nahi thi.
Jo usne kaha wahi uske predecessor ne kiya tha.
Shreya ne aage badh kar virat ka chehra sahlaya, " tujhe pata hai, tujhe unki care karne ki jaroorat nahi hai ki log kya kehte hai."
Then
Temperature dropped.
Room main ek murderous aura bhar gaya.
Shreya ki aavaj ice ki tarah cold ho gai.
" ...bas thoda wait karo, my love. Main un sabhi ko dhundh nikalugi jinhone tumhare bare main aisa kaha tha or unhe paida hone par regret karvaungi."
Virat shivered. Yeh yandere switch bahot fast tha.
Usne lightly cough ki. " Ah, thik hai. To... aapne mujhe yaha kyon bulaya ? "
Shreya muskurate huwe pichhe jhuk gai.
" tujhe pata hai kal tumhara fourteen birthday hai."
" tera awakening hona ka din."
" kya tum ready hai?."
Virat ka heart teji se dhadak ne laga. Uski finger halki si twitch hone lagi.
Already?!
Yeh plot kal se start ho raha hai.
Virat :- system, meri maa ke affection level ko dikha.
[ Affection Level : Shreya Weaverheart - 90% ]
To kya main unke talent ko share kar sakta hu.
[ No. Aapki mother ka rank SS hai. Ek unawakene person ke roop me, aap only C-rank tak ke parson ke sath hi share kar sakte hai. ]
Virat ne gali dete hue kaha, " Shit. That's a problem ."
" Of course , Maa. Me ready hu."
Usne forced smile di.
-- ya me kal se pehle waha pahoch jaunga.
Mera matlab hai ki meri appearance ki vajahse , yeh impossible nahi hai ki koi mujhe secret roop se like na kare, right?
Virat ki aankhe hard ho gai.
Agar koi person nahi bhi hai, to main yeh make sure karunga ki kal morning se pehle ek ho. Kisi ka to talent share karna hi padega awakening se pehle.
...But wait. Agar meri maa mujhse itni obsessed hai, to ye 100% kyon nahi hai?
[ 90% is the highest a mother's love can naturally reach. Anything beyond that... is something else entirely. ]
Virat ne uljhan se palke jhapkai.
Tabhi- ek cold ehsaas uske mind me aaya.
No, iska matlab yeh to nahi ho sakta... hai na?
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Jabardast bhai ko apni takat mil gayi vo bhi sss rank kiUpdate -04 - Awakening (1)
Shreya dinning hall me akeli bethi thi. Uski patli fingers polish ki hue mahogany ki table par slow rhythm beat me thapthapa rahi thi.
Tak. Tak. Tak.
Uski violet aankhe candlelight me chamak rahi thi.
" kya tumhe nahi lagta ki mera bachha mature ho gaya hai?"
Ek aavaj-- emotionless and unseen-- responded from the shadows.
" Yes, my lady. Young master ne aaj alag rang dhikhaye hai.
Shreya ke hotho par ek soft smile aa gai.
" mujhe pata tha ki vo mere pas wapas aayega. Kya tumne nahi dekha ki usne mujhe kaise gale lagaya? Uski aankhe mujhe dekh rahi thi...kitni pyaar se bhari hue?"
Lekin phir--uski nigahe sakht ho gai.
Room ka temperature bahot gir gaya.
Ice par ice ek pal main table par phelne lagi. Or crystalline ice me nigal ne lagi. Hawa bhi itni tej thi ki kaat ko ready thi.
" un sab ko dhundo."
Shadow se aati aavaj silent rahi.
" jo log uski pith piche kanaphusi karte the. Jinhone ne mere apne bete ko itne saal tak mujhse durr rakha, unhe mere pas lao."
Deeware cold ke weight tale kahra rahi thi, hawa bhi mano freeze hue thi.
S-rank ke niche ka koi bhi person minutes me mar jayega.
" jaisi aapki command, my lady."
Bas yuhi hi, ice pighal gai. Room me phir se apni shandar garmahat lout aai, mano kuch hua hi na ho.
Shreya ne sans li , uske expression soft pad gaye.
" kal uske liye ek bada din hai."
Usne apni finger apne lips par thapthapai, uski aavaj achanak halki, lagbhag chanchal ho gai.
" main soch rahi hu... mujhe kis tarah ka gift ready karna chahiye?."
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Virat estate se hokar chala, uske kadam nape-tule the, uska face shant tha.
Lekin under?
Bilkul bhi shanti nahi thi.
" System, main jinke pas se nikalta hu un sabhi ko scan karo. Kisi aise person ko dhundo jo mere prati kam se kam 50% affection rakhta ho-- rank C ya usase kam."
[ Understood. ]
Or iss tarah, hunt start hua.
Virat training ground se nikla, jaha knights moonlight main training karte the.
Nothing.
Vo library main gaya, jaha prachin books se bhari uchi-uchi almariya thi. Virat kisi lucky encounter ki talash main tha.
Nothing.
Phir vo gardens,maids ke quarters, knights ke barracks --har jagah ghuma .
Still nothing.
Ghante bit gaye.
Virat courtyard me akela khada tha, blue moonlights uske charo or long shadows bana rahi thi.
Uski fingers fists me bandh gai.
" This is ridiculous. "
Mujhe pata tha ki mera predecessor ek arrogant fool tha, lekin kya truly usase itni nafrat ki jati thi?
Uske muh se ek slowly, kadvi or cold hasi nikli.
" tumne truly mujhe barbad kar diya, hain na?"
Woh cool grass par let gaya or raat ke endless sky ko ghurne laga.
Ek pal ke liye usne apni past life ke bare me socha. Woh duniya jo usne pichhe chhod di thi.
Or tab----
Sarsarahat.
Virat turant uth betha. Uski sharp silver jaisi aankhe andhere ko ghurne lagi thi.
" waha kon hai?."
Jhadiyo ke pas ek shadow move hua. Virat tense ho gaya -- phir thithak gaya.
Ek small si black cat moonlight main tahel rahi thi, uska sleek fur chamak raha tha.
Uski aankhe cat jaisi piercing purple thi, jo normal animal se jyada intelligence se glow kar rahi thi.
" Ek....cat?."
Woh creature use kafi time tak ghurta raha, phir gracefully se uske pas aaya - uske pair par apna sar sehlane laga.
[ Ding! Target mil gaya.]
Virat ki breath hitched.
" kyaa? "
Usne apna sar idhar-udhar ghumaya, is umeed me ki pas me koi hidden figure dikhay degi.
Nothing.
" System, tumhara kya matlab hai? "
[ target aapke samne wala creature hai. ]
Virat ne palke jhapkai.
Phir palke jhapkai.
Cat ki taraf dekha
" phir se aao? "
Cat ne apna sar jhuka liya, uski bright purple eyes khushi se chamak uthi, kyon ki virat ka attention us par focused tha.
" kya woh sirf ek cat nahi hai? "
[ wo ek divine beast ki santan hai. Ye to bas uska base form hai -- ek baar enough roop se strong ho jayegi, to woh human roop dharan kar legi. ]
Virat niche jhuk gaya, uska hath sahaj roop se cat ko sahlane ke liye aage badha.
Cat ghur-ghurai.
" Scan her. "
Uske samne ek translucent panel appear hua
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Name : Neko Neko
Race : Divine Beast - Ba'astara
Rank : C
Titles : None
Affinity : Ice ( S - rank )
Talent : Child of Ice ( S-rank )
Physique : Divine beast's Ba'astara physique (S Level )
Bloodline : Divine beast's ba'astara bloodline ( S level )
Affection Level : 75 %
[ Note: woh tumhe tumhare born ke din se hi like karti hai. Tumhari beauty charm ne use mohit kar liya tha, or tab se woh tumhe dur se hi dekhti rehti thi. ]
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Virat ghurta raha.
Phir halki si hasi nikali.
" mujhe pata tha ki kisi ko to mujh par mohit hona hi tha... bas mujhe cat ki umeed nahi thi or sach me tum kaha se aay ho."
" System, kya main iska talent share kar sakta hu?."
[ Yes.]
Virat ke face par smile aa gai.
Usne small cat ko apni baho me utha liya. Cat ne halki si meow ki, phir uske pas beth gai.
" Alright, Neko. Tumne mujhe bacha liya."
Bina ek bhi second wast kiye, Virat apne room main aa gaya.
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Virat apne bad par palthi mar kar beth gaya, Neko uski god me simat gai.
" System, do it. "
[ Ding! You have formed a Bond with Neko. ]
Virat ke chest me ek ajib si garmahat phail gai. Ek dor -- Ek link -- use apni baho main liye small creature se connect kar rahi thi.
Cat ne bhi feel kiya. Uski blue aankhe soft pad gai, or woh or pas aa gai.
" ab, iske talent or affinity ko share karo."
[ Ding! Applying the ×10,000 effect
[ You have gained the Ice Affinity( SSS- rank). ]
[ You have gained the Talent : Sovereign of Ice ( SSS - rank - unawakene )
Virat ne dheere se sans chhodi .
Usne expect kiya tha ki kuch badlega -- uski body main power ka sanchar hoga -- uske mind expand hova-- Lekin inke bajay, usne mehsus kiya .
Nothing.
" System, muje kuch bhi mehsus kyu nahi ho raha?."
[ tumhari awakening abhi baki hai. Ek baar awakening ho jaoge, to tumhara talent puri tarah se manifest ho jayega
Virat ne sar hilaya , Window se bahar dekhte huve uski silver jaisi aankhe chamak uthi.
Stars chamak rahe the. Blue moon duniya ko cold roshni se nehla raha tha.
Virat ke face par halki smile phail gai.
" SSS-rank, huh?."
woh pichhe jhuk gaya, uski fingers Neko ke soft balo ko sehla rahi thi.
" Well, that changes everything."
And ye to bas beginning thi.
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