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Waise to iske baad kuch pata nahi chalna chiye tha lekin abhi mujhe thandi hawa ka ahsas ho raha tha, ek aisi mahek thi hawa me jo bahot vakht baad meri saaso me ghul rahi thi, ek jaani pahechani si khusbu thi ye jo ki main kabhi nahi bhul sakta ye us mahek ki jaisi hai jo mere ghar me hardam aati thi. Haan ghar me lekin yeh mujhe marne ke baad kaise?....

Jaise hi mene dekhne ki koshish ki aagese andhera gayab hota gaya aur pahele to mujhe sab safed dikha jiski vajh se mujhe apni aankhe firse bandh karni padi. Par mene dubara ankhe kholni chahi kyo ki ye dekhne ki chah ki ye khusbu kaha se aa rahi hai aur me abhi kaha hu, bahot havi thi. Jaise hi meri ankho ne Roshni ke saath adjust kiya mujhe ek jaana pehchana karma dikha. Ye hall tha wo bhi mere ghar ka.

Me sann reh gaya kyo ki ye possible hi nahi tha isiliye mene apni hi bazu pe chimti li. Mujhe turant hi dard ka ahsas hua jo ki do chize tay karti thi.

Ek ki yeh sapna nahi hai aur dusra ki me ZINDA hu. Tabhi mere dimag me bahot dard hua. Saari bate jo mujhe pata thi marne se pahle vo sab mere dimmag me jaise chap rahi hai. Akir das minut ke baat dard band hua. Ab mujhe bahot si aisi chize bhi yaad hai us time ki jise maine dekhi ya ho par zehn me na rahi ho. Mujhe to abhi bhi yakin nahi horaha tha kyo ki isse ek aur baad pukhta ho gai ki main pahela mar chuka hu aur ab vaaps zinda hua hu, marne ka vo ahsas khwab kabhi nahi ho sakta.

Tezi se me aaine ki taraf bhaga aur apna chahera dekha taki ye pata chale ki me vakht me piche aaya hu ya me kisi aur ki body me hu. Aaina dekhte hi me Khushi se jum utha kyo ki ye meri hi body thi aur vo bhi mere jawani ke dino ki. Ab jalbaazi is chiz ki ho rahi thi ki ye kaunsi Tarikh hai. Jaise hi mene aine ke paas wale calendar me dekha vo saal tha 2020 joki vahi saal tha jab me collage me admission lene wala tha aur uske baad ghar me sab ki zindgi tabah hone vali thi. Mujhe sab sahi karne ka mauka mila tha, isse jyada koi kya pa sakta hai. Mene apni ache band ki aur dil se uparwale ka shukriya ada karne laga kyoki ye chamatkar unke bina kaise mumkin hota.

Uske baad me kitchen ki taraf gaya jahape mujhe yakin tha ki me ammi ko dekh paunga. Aur jaise hi me bhagte hue kitchen me gaya ammi vahi thi subhe ka nashta bana rahi thi. Meri aankhe bar aayi. Kyoki sabse jyada pyar mujhe aami se hi tha, unke mujhe adopt na karne par pata nahi mera kya hota. Aur upar se me thehra dusre sect ke logo ka bacha. Ye mere liye to bahot badi baat thi. Jaise hi ammi meri taraf ghumi aur mujhe dekhi,

Ammi: are tu uth gaya? Vo bhi itni jaldi? Chal aaja nashta karle.

Me to bas unhe hi dekhe ja raha tha kyoki ammi abhi mere samne thi vo bhi zinda aur mujhse baat kar rahi thi.

Ammi ne mujhe paas aakar hilaya

Ammi: kaha kho gaya?

me: (hadbadahat me) ka..kahi nahi, k..kuch bhi to nahi hua, kuchh kya h..hoga

Mene badi mehnat se aakhi me aane vaale aansuon ko roka taki mujhe rota dekh kar ammi ko takleef na ho aur meri fikr na hone lage par me khud ko unke gale lagne se nahi rok paya. Ammi bhi mujhe gale lagi. Thodi der aise hi rahne ke baad.

Ammi: thik hai thik hai chal ab tu nashta to karle aur mujhe dusra bhi kaam hai. Agale mahine tera 12vi ka result hoga. Age kya karna hai kaise karna hai sab apni baji se aur kisi jankar insan se puchh lena.

Fir me na chahte hue bhi alag hua aur nashta karne baitha aur ammi mujhe sab chize de kar apne kaam me lag gai. Khana khate hi mein jaise jannat pahunch gaya tha. Khana ammi ke siwa kisi aur ka itna achha ho hi nahi sakta. Vaise to ye sadharan sa khana hi tha par abhi to mujhe laziz chizo se bhi jyada laziz lagraha tha.

Thodi der baad nashta kar ke hall me baitha to ammi ki avaz ayi

Ammi: krunal vo hall me padi table uthake kamre me rakh dena jara

Me: thik hai abhi rakh deta hu

Me utha aur table ki taraf gaya. Ab mujhe pata tha ye table bahot bhari hai is eek side se utha ke ghasit kar le jana padega. Lekin jaise hi maine table ko ek side se uthane ki try ki puri ki puri table uth gai vo bhot halki mehsoos ho rahi thi. Ye dekh ke me khud shocked tha. Lakin mujhe apne badan me aaj fark lag raha tha. Maine kamre me jakar apni body ka muayna kiya to mujhe bahot Khushi hui kyo ki mere 6 pack abs the aur muscle me bahot takat ka abhas ho raha tha.

Mai bahar gaya aur us table ko utha ke kamre me rakh diya par uske baad mujhe khayal aaya ki agar ghar me ye pata chalta he to ammi ko tension hojayegi ki ek hi din me itni power kaha se aayi mujme aur agar bahir kisi ko pata chalta hai ki mere paas itni jyada power hai to mujhe istemaal karne ke liye wo meri family ko bhi hard de sakte hai jo is baar me hone nahi dena chahta. To is baat ko raaz rakhna hi achha hai abhi ke liye.

Ab baari hai is body ko maintain rakhne ki to me ammi ko bol ke bahar garden ki taraf chal diya ghar se bahar ane pe mene garden ki taraf daud lagayi to me apne aap ko bilkul sfurti se bhara hua mehsoos kiya. jyada takat ko wajah se mujhe thakaan bhi jyada nahi lag rahi thi.
Meri speed bhi normal se to jyada hi thi. To mujhe khayal aaya ki power ki numayish karna har vakht achha nahi hota, ye muskeliya bhi kahdi kar sakta hai mere liye.

Isliye mein Dhire dhire normal speed se daud ne laga. Mujhe ye baat clear ho gayi ki agar me chahu to hi ye takat zahir hoti thi. Jaise ki maine table uthane se pahle socha tha ki is table ko puri takt se uthana padega. Jab me ye nahi sochta ki mujhe jyada power se koi kaam karna hai tab tak sab kaam normal hi hote hai.

Me garden pahucha aur 2ghante kasrat kiya. Uske baad pasine se bhiga ghar aaya to dono baji aur ammi mujhe bina palak japkaye dekh rahe the to koi kuchh bole usse pahle maine kaha,

Me: aise kya dekh rahe hai sab mene aaj se kasrat shuru ki hai

Uske baad kuch kahe sune bagair me sidhe ghoosal khane (bathroom) me chala gaya nahane. nahte hue me sochraha tha ki Ab meri zindgi me sirf tin goal the ek paisa kamana, dusra apne dusmano se badla lena, tisra aur most important ammi aur behno ko zindgi ki har Khushi dena.



INTRO:

Abdullah: ye the mere abba jo ek encounter me mare gaye 2004 me. Kaisa kamina aadmi tha ye to aapko pata hi hoga.

Aminah: ye hai meri ammi. Dil ki bahot achhi mujhse sabse jyada pyar karti hai. 38-28-40 ka figure tha jo hamesha kapdo ke pichhe daka rahta hai. Inho ne aaba ki maut ke baad bahot mehnat karke logo ke ghar kaam karke meri behno ko aur mujhe padha rahi hai. Abhi vo ek mall me sabse niche ki post ‘sales women’ kia kaam karti hai.


Zaynab: badi behn. Jise me baji bulata hu ye mujh se 4saal badi hai. Inka size 38-26-38 ka hourglass shape ka hai. Mujhse jyada baat nahi karti apne kaam me hi busy rehti hai. Ek company me job karti hai jisse ghar me madad ho sake.


Aamna: aamna baji mujhse karib 3 saal badi hai collage ke last year me hai. Unka figure 36-24-38 ka hai. Ye mujhse kabhi baat nahi karti. Na me ise bulata hu kyo ki jab bhi hamari baat hoti he ham sirf ladte hai.


Me: mera naam Krunal hai. 6feet ki height ke saath 9inch ka hathiyaar hai. Mujhe dusra mauka mila hai jo sab ko nahi milta. Me apni RE – LIFE ko bahetar banana chahta hu pichhli baar se.

Noor: ye he meri chhoti behn. Meri ham umra hai. Saaf dil ki. Gazab ki baat ye hai ki ham dono ek din aur ek vakht pe paida hue the aur uski aankhe bhi bilkul meri tarah neeli hai. Usne bhi mere saath 12vi ki exam di hai abhi vacation hai to ammi ki help karti hai. Vaise to ye shant hai par mere saath ye ghar me sabse jyada baat karti hai, shayad ham umra hai isliye. Main bhi uski saar bate manta hu kabhi kabhi to uski zidd bhi. Ammi bhi kehti hai ki Noor ko mujhse alag karna na moomkin hai. Vo bhi wahi admission legi jaha me lunga. Uska size 34-22-34 hai pura kasa hua kyoki abhi hi jawaani ko chuua he usne.


Manjur: ye mere chacha hai ye hamare baji me rahte hai. Ek hi deewar pe hai dono makaan. ye ek behad lalchi insaan hai, ise paiso ke aage kuchh nahi dikhta. Mein uske raste ka kanta hu kyo ki mere rehtey wo hamara ghar hadap nahi kar pa rahe hai. Ekdam haraami kism ka aadmi.

Benazir: ye hai meri chachi. Inhe paisa bahut pasand hai. Chachaji se jyada banti nahi kyoki inhe jitne paise chahiye utne chacha ke paas nahi hote aur nahi wo inhe jismani kushi de pata hai jiski wajah se inme ladai hoti rehti hai. Ek dam gadraye hui hai aurat hai. Size hai 42-40-44.


Sufiya: zaynab baji ki ham umra hai ye. Inke saath meri thodi bahot baatchit hoti hai par jyada nahi. Inka figure bhi inki ammi ki tarah bhara hua hai 37-35-38.




NOTE: Jaise jaise new character aayenge waise waise me unko introduce karta jaunga.

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UPDATE 003


Waise to iske baad kuch pata nahi chalna chiye tha lekin abhi mujhe thandi hawa ka ahsas ho raha tha, ek aisi mahek thi hawa me jo bahot vakht baad meri saaso me ghul rahi thi, ek jaani pahechani si khusbu thi ye jo ki main kabhi nahi bhul sakta ye us mahek ki jaisi hai jo mere ghar me hardam aati thi. Haan ghar me lekin yeh mujhe marne ke baad kaise?....

Jaise hi mene dekhne ki koshish ki aagese andhera gayab hota gaya aur pahele to mujhe sab safed dikha jiski vajh se mujhe apni aankhe firse bandh karni padi. Par mene dubara ankhe kholni chahi kyo ki ye dekhne ki chah ki ye khusbu kaha se aa rahi hai aur me abhi kaha hu, bahot havi thi. Jaise hi meri ankho ne Roshni ke saath adjust kiya mujhe ek jaana pehchana karma dikha. Ye hall tha wo bhi mere ghar ka.

Me sann reh gaya kyo ki ye possible hi nahi tha isiliye mene apni hi bazu pe chimti li. Mujhe turant hi dard ka ahsas hua jo ki do chize tay karti thi.

Ek ki yeh sapna nahi hai aur dusra ki me ZINDA hu. Tabhi mere dimag me bahot dard hua. Saari bate jo mujhe pata thi marne se pahle vo sab mere dimmag me jaise chap rahi hai. Akir das minut ke baat dard band hua. Ab mujhe bahot si aisi chize bhi yaad hai us time ki jise maine dekhi ya ho par zehn me na rahi ho. Mujhe to abhi bhi yakin nahi horaha tha kyo ki isse ek aur baad pukhta ho gai ki main pahela mar chuka hu aur ab vaaps zinda hua hu, marne ka vo ahsas khwab kabhi nahi ho sakta.

Tezi se me aaine ki taraf bhaga aur apna chahera dekha taki ye pata chale ki me vakht me piche aaya hu ya me kisi aur ki body me hu. Aaina dekhte hi me Khushi se jum utha kyo ki ye meri hi body thi aur vo bhi mere jawani ke dino ki. Ab jalbaazi is chiz ki ho rahi thi ki ye kaunsi Tarikh hai. Jaise hi mene aine ke paas wale calendar me dekha vo saal tha 2020 joki vahi saal tha jab me collage me admission lene wala tha aur uske baad ghar me sab ki zindgi tabah hone vali thi. Mujhe sab sahi karne ka mauka mila tha, isse jyada koi kya pa sakta hai. Mene apni ache band ki aur dil se bhagwan ka shukriya ada karne laga kyoki ye chamatkar unke bina kaise mumkin hota.

Uske baad me kitchen ki taraf gaya jahape mujhe yakin tha ki me ammi ko dekh paunga. Aur jaise hi me bhagte hue kitchen me gaya ammi vahi thi subhe ka nashta bana rahi thi. Meri aankhe bar aayi. Kyoki sabse jyada pyar mujhe aami se hi tha, unke mujhe adopt na karne par pata nahi mera kya hota. Aur upar se me thehra dusre mazhab ke logo ka bacha. Ye mere liye to bahot badi baat thi. Jaise hi ammi meri taraf ghumi aur mujhe dekhi,

Ammi: are tu uth gaya? Vo bhi itni jaldi? Chal aaja nashta karle.

Me to bas unhe hi dekhe ja raha tha kyoki ammi abhi mere samne thi vo bhi zinda aur mujhse baat kar rahi thi.

Ammi ne mujhe paas aakar hilaya

Ammi: kaha kho gaya?

me: (hadbadahat me) ka..kahi nahi, k..kuch bhi to nahi hua, kuchh kya h..hoga

Ammi: thik hai thik hai nashta to karle. Agale mahine tera 12vi ka result hoga. Age kya karna hai kaise karna hai sab apni baji se aur kisi jankar insan se puchh lena.

Fir me nashta karne baitha aur ammi mujhe sab chize de kar apne kaam me lag gai

Thodi der baad me nashta kar ke hall me baitha to ammi ki avaz ayi

Ammi: krunal vo hall me padi table uthake kamre me rakh dena jara

Me: thik hai abhi rakh deta hu

Me utha aur table ki taraf gaya. Ab mujhe pata tha ye table bahot bhari hai is eek side se utha ke ghasit kar le jana padega. Lekin jaise hi maine table ko ek side se uthane ki try ki puri ki puri table uth gai vo bhot halki mehsoos ho rahi thi. Ye dekh ke me khud shocked tha. Lakin mujhe apne badan me aaj fark lag raha tha. Maine kamre me jakar apni body ka muayna kiya to mujhe bahot Khushi hui kyo ki mere 6 pack abs the aur muscle me bahot takat ka abhas ho raha tha.

Mai bahar gaya aur us table ko utha ke kamre me rakh diya par uske baad mujhe khayal aaya ki agar ghar me ye pata chalta he to ammi ko tension hojayegi ki ek hi din me itni power kaha se aayi mujme aur agar bahir kisi ko pata chalta hai ki mere paas itni jyada power hai to mujhe istemaal karne ke liye wo meri family ko bhi hard de sakte hai jo is baar me hone nahi dena chahta. To is baat ko raaz rakhna hi achha hai abhi ke liye.

Ab baari hai is body ko maintain rakhne ki to me ammi ko bol ke bahar garden ki taraf chal diya ghar se bahar ane pe mene garden ki taraf daud lagayi to me apne aap ko bilkul halka mahsoos karne laga jaise ki meri body me koi weight hi na ho. Aur meri reaction speed bhi bahot tez ho gayi thi. Ye to achha hua ki me turant ruk gaya agar koi dekh leta to sari baate dhire dhire pata chal jati.

Maine fir ek gehri sans li aur normal walking shuru ki aur dhire dhire normal speed se daud ne laga. Mujhe ye baat clear ho gayi ki agar me chahu to hi ye takat zahir hoti thi. Jaise ki maine table uthane se pahle socha tha ki is table ko puri takt se uthana padega. Jab me ye nahi sochta ki mujhe jyada power se koi kaam karna hai tab tak sab kaam normal hi hote hai.

Me garden pahucha aur 2ghante kasrat kiya. Uske baad pasine se bhiga ghar aaya to sab mujhe bina palak japkaye dekh rahe the to koi kuchh bole usse pahle maine kaha,

Me: aise kya dekh rahe hai sab mene aaj se kasrat shuru ki hai

Uske baad kuch kahe sune bagair me siddha ghoosal khane (bathroom) me chala gaya nahane. nahte hue me sochraha tha ki Ab meri zindgi me sirf tin goal the ek paisa kamana, dusra jo dil me aaye vo karna yani dil ki sunna aur zindgi ke pure maze lena, tisra aur most important ammi aur behno ko zindgi ki har Khushi dena.



INTRO:

Ahmad: ye the mere abba jo ek encounter me mare gaye 2004 me. Kaisa aadmi tha ye to aapko pata hi hoga.

Aminah: ye hai meri ammi. Dil ki bahot achhi mujhse sabse jyada pyar karti hai. 38-28-40 ka figure tha jo hamesha kapdo ke pichhe daka rahta hai. Inho ne aaba ki maut ke baad bahot mehnat karke logo ke ghar kaam karke meri behno ko aur mujhe padha rahi hai. Abhi vo ek mall me sabse niche ki post ‘sales women’ kia kaam karti hai.


Zaynab: badi behn. Jise me baji bulata hu ye mujh se 4saal badi hai. Inka size 38-26-38 ka hourglass shape ka hai. Mujhse jyada baat nahi karti apne kaam me hi busy rehti hai. Ek company me job karti hai jisse ghar me madad ho sake.


Aamna: aamna baji mujhse karib 3 saal badi hai collage ke last year me hai. Unka figure 36-24-38 ka hai. Ye mujhse kabhi baat nahi karti. Na me ise bulata hu kyo ki jab bhi hamari baat hoti he ham sirf ladte hai.


Me: mera naam Krunal hai. 6feet ki height ke saath 9inch ka hathiyaar hai. Mujhe dusra mauka mila hai jo sab ko nahi milta. Me apni RE – LIFE ko bahetar banana chahta hu pichhli baar se.

Noor: ye he meri chhoti behn. Meri ham umra hai. Gazab ki baat ye hai ki ham dono ek din aur ek vakht pe paida hue the aur uski aankhe bhi bilkul meri tarah neeli hai. Usne bhi mere saath 12vi ki exam di hai abhi vacation hai to ammi ki help karti hai. Vaise to ye shant hai par mere saath ye ghar me sabse jyada baat karti hai, shayad ham umra hai isliye. Main bhi uski saar bate manta hu kabhi kabhi to uski zidd bhi. Ammi bhi kehti hai ki Noor ko mujhse alag karna na moomkin hai. Vo bhi wahi admission legi jaha me lunga. Uska size 34-22-34 hai pura kasa hua kyoki abhi hi jawaani ko chuua he usne.




NOTE: Jaise jaise new character aayenge waise waise me unko introduce karta jaunga.



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wo teen mahine tabahi laayenge yeh maloom tha... lekin itna neeche gir jayega uske abba yeh maine na socha tha... akhir bachha na chahiye tha iske liye apni bewi toh bewi,,, betio tak ko kothe pe bechne chala tha... kaise nirdayee insan hain yeh... karma apna hisaab khud karti hain,, wahee mila jo usne doosre ke liye socha tha... kutte kee maut mara gaya...

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ek ko mila coma dooja ho gaye full stop... lekin kahani yehan se fast forward hui aur aisi hui kee launda sidha oopar ko fast forward ho gaya... aur wapas se rewind bhi maar raha hian... sala zindagi na ho koi video hain jab man jaise kiya manipulate karte jaa raha hain... aur zindagi mili wapas lekin kaise,,, aur jo yaade uski hain kya wo wakai mein yaade hain ya phir uske deemag ka bhram...

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waise ammi ko jinda dekh ke pehla reaction hota unse jaa ke lipat jana... akhir usne apni ammi ko marte dekha hain aur wapas se jinda dekh ke bhaawvibhor jaroor ho jata.. launde ko acting nahin aata wo bhi natural waali... iske sikhao writer saheb...

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khair itne kashto ke baad uski amma ne usse pala hain toh launda ab zindagi ke maje lena chahta hain... aur yeh takat wagaira kahan se aaya... kaheen radioactive saand ne toh na kata jo itna takatwar ho gaya hain... hawa kee gati se duarne laga hain,,, dekh ke kaheen bhoot chudail na peechhe par jaye.. kahir ghar mein behne hain lekin isse kisi kee banti na hain shiwaye humumra noor kee... yeh bhi college mein jaa ke jhandus pana karega aur befizul kee dushman banayega..

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nice one...
 
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