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Bahut jabardast update bhai yahi action chalu hoga aur lovers Milne ki raah par bhi chalengeUpdate 8
'Broken Soul'
Samar ki college life sahi jaa rhi thi, subah exercise krna, college jana, aakar padhai krna or Sunday ko shahar ghumna yahi uski life chal rahi thi.
Komal to ab lagbhag jyadatar samay uske room me rehti thi or uske sath hi soti thi. Vo koshish karti thi ki kisi tarah samar ko apni taraf attract kar sake, lekin abhi kuch jyada khul ke nhi kar sakti thi.
Sanjana se samar ki baat abhi bhi kam hoti thi, lekin ab sanjana ne usse rudely baat krna band kar diya tha.
Samar ki Payal se bhi achi dosti ho chuki thi, kyoki payal khud principal Malhotra ki beti thi. Or unka apna ek group ban chuka tha, jisme Samar, Komal, Khushi or Payal thi. Payal inme senior thi.
College me samar ko ab tak koi surag nhi mila tha ki drugs kon or kaise bech rha hai, to pta lgane ke liye usne college ke kuch sabse kamine or badnaam ladko se dosti karne ka faisla kiya.
Raghu ke gunde samar or uske parivar ke bare me,
jankari nikal chuke the or uspar najar banaye hue the.
Gaon me Chanda ki shadi bahut hi shanti or sadgi se kar di gayi. Uski to mano duniya hi ujad gyi thi, usne pehle koshish ki shadi naa krne ki ek baar ghar se bhagne ki bhi koshish ki, lekin bechari kamyab nhi hui. Mandap me baithi thi to mano koi lash baithi ho, ek dum shant, sab kuch hote hue dekh rhi thi lekin keh kuch nhi rahi thi.
Uske pati ka naam Rakesh tha, usne dahej liye bina shadi karne ko kaha to chanda ke parivar vale itne khush hue ki bina uski marzi ki parvah kiye, uski shadi turant krva di. Aur bidai ke baad chali gyi vo apne pati ke sath Mumbai.
Idhar Mumbai shahar me Murders hote hi jaa rhe the, ab to har 2-3 me ek lash kahi milti thi police ko. Logo me dar ka mahol ghar kar chuka tha. marne vali sabhi ladkiya thi isliye logo ne apni Ghar ki ladkiyo ka bahar nikalna bhi band karva diya tha raat me. Janta ab sarkar ke khilaf pradarshan karne par utar aaye thi. Sarkar par Media or Janta ka dawab badhta hi jaa rha tha.
Baat ab ministry tak pahuch chuki thi, Ministry ne police ko saaf shabdo me keh diya ki agar murders jald se jald band nhi hue to sabhi police valo ko suspend kar diya jaega or case Central authorities ko saunpa jayega.
Isi tarah 1 mahina bit gya.
After 1 month
Minister - Koshish, koshish...kya koshish. Mujhe koshish nahi result chahiye commissioner.
Commissioner - Sir hum har tarika apna rhe hai, jisse murders ko roka ja sake. Police ki petroling badha di gyi hai. Sabhi police valo ki chhutiya cancel kar di gyi hai or unhe iss case par focus krne ko kaha hai. ACP Suman iss case ko handle kar rhi hai, She is best in her work, Sir.
Minister - To kya tumhari petroling se murders band hue, ya uss murderer ko pakad paye. Ek Psycho killer tumhare pure department par bhari pad rha hai. Ek hafta, ek hafte ka ultimatum hai tumhare pass agar murders band nhi hue aur uss killer ko khatam nhi kiya to phir apni permanent chutti ke liye taiyar rehna.
In Commissioner Office
Commissioner - ACP Suman, kuch bhi karo lekin inn sab murders ko roko. Uss killer ko pakdo, Jinda yaa Murda. Koi fark nhi padta.
Mene apna kaam hmesha imaandari se kiya hai, mujhe nokri jane ki chinta nhi hai, lekin me apne sath ye daag nhi le skta ki ek killer ko pakad na pane ki vajah se mujhe nokri se nikala gya.
Main tumhe full authority deta hu, 1 hafta hai tumhare pass chahe tumhe kanoon todna hi kyu na pade, lekin ye killer pakda jaana chahiye.
Suman - Yes Sir, Me aapko bharosa dilati hu ki me uss killer ko pakad kar rhungi or vo bhi zinda.
Salute karti hai or nikal jati hai.
Media - ACP Suman aap is case ko handle kar rhi Hain, lekin ab tak police kuch nhi kar pai hai, kya kehna chahengi aap is bare me. Kya ye case aapke glorious career me kalank ki tarah hoga.
Suman - (Un media valo ko dekhte hue) Hum har koshish kar rhe hai Us murderer ko pakadne ki aur jaldi hi vo hamari giraft me hoga.
Media - Ab tak bhi har baar police ka yahi jawab rha hai lekin phir bhi murders ruke nhi hai, kya police logo ko sirf jhuti ummid ke sivay aur kuch nhi de sakti.
Suman - 1 week, sirf 1 hafte ke andar ye sab khatam hoga, (phir camare ki taraf dekhte hue) Main janti hu tum mujhe dekh rhe ho, tum jo bhi ho apni ulti ginti shuru kar do, kyoki 1 hafte baad tum jail ki salakhon ke piche apne kiye ki saja paa rhe hoge.
Yeh kehkar Suman vahan se nikal jati hai.
Suman apne office me
Suman - Shinde
Shinde - Ji madam
Suman - ab tak jitne murders hue hai unn sabki file yahan meri table par honi chahiye
Shinde - Ji mam abhi laya
Suman files ko gaur se dekh rahi thi,
Hmm, Agar sarkar ne minister ki security me naa lagaya hota to ab tak ham ise pakad chuke hote. Maine kaha tha ki ye koi mamuli killer nhi hai, hame jald se jald kuch karna hoga. Lekin tab meri baat suni nhi inn BC netao ne.
Ab sar par aa pada hai to keh diya ki ek hafte me case solve karo. Lekin karungi me jarur, uss psycho ka dimag to thikane me lagaungi.
Suman bahut dhyan se files ko padh rhi thi aur sabhi murders me common kya hai ye hi dekh rahi thi.
Shinde jante ho ki inn sab murders me common kya hai.
Shinde - Ji mam, yahi ki marne vali sabhi ladkiya hai, aur inke pass se ek card Mila hai usi killer ka
Clown the innocent killer.
Suman - Aur bhi bahut kuch common hai.
Shinde - kya madam
Suman - jaise sabhi ladkiyon ki age 20-28 ke bich hai, sabhi ladkiyan vo hai jo job karti hain, sabhi ka murder raat ke vakt hua hai. Sabhi ko torcher kiya gya hai or unke sharir se khaal utari gyi hai.
Killer apne aapko innocent btana chahta hai ki jo kuch bhi vo kar rha hai vo sahi hai. Or yahi iss tarah ke pagal killers ki takat hoti hai, unhe lagta hai ki vo koi punya ka kaam kar rhe hai.
Vo card dikhana jara....Shinde Suman ko vo card deta hai.
Use dhyan se dekhti hai, vo dekhti hai ki card par kuch pilapan aaya hua tha.
Suman - Ye dekho shinde, ye dekh rhe ho.
Shinde - ye to kuch tel ke jaisa hai mam.
Suman - Baki cards check kro
Shinde baki cards check krta hai to 5-6 aur cards par tel milta hai.
Ab tak vo killer 32 ladkiyo ki Jaan le chuka tha, or har ladki ke paas card milta tha.
Suman - agar ye card usne khud banaye hai to kuch nhi pta, lekin agar ye card usne kisi se banavaye hai to vahan paas me tel ka kaam hota hai.
Shinde 4 policevalo ko iss kaam par lagao ki iss tarah ke card kahan bante hai pta karen. Aur shahar me night petroling badha do samjhe.
Shinde - Ji madam
Shinde nikal office se nikal jata hai or Suman kisi gehri soch me kho jati hai.
Idhar Ghar me
Komal - Mom pls jane do naa, pls
Sugandha - Nahi bilkul nhi.
Komal - lekin kyu, hum pehle bhi gye hai night show me.
Sugandha - haa lekin tab koi killer shahar ki sadko par ladkiyon ko maar nhi rha tha. Apne room me jao. ( Komal udas ho jati hai, aaj koi animated movie lagi thi theater me, jise komal dekhne ki jidd kar rahi thi. Or uska time 9-11 tha)
Sanjana - chal apne kamre me komal vaise bhi animated movie to hai kya ho jayega nhi dekhegi to.
Komal - aap nhi samjhoge Di. Komal upar chali jati hai.
Sanjana - Pagal, college me aa gyi hai lekin abhi bhi bachho ki tarah cartoon dekhne hai ise.
Komal sidha Samar ke pass pahuch jati hai
Komal - Bhaimere pyare bhai
Samar - (use ghurte hue) ab kya kaam aa pada tujhe.
Komal jaldi jaldi use sab kuch bta deti hai
Samar - Hmmm, to maa ki baat Maan aur yahi beth, or itni badi ho gyi ab bhi cartoon dekhti hai.
Komal - bhai pls, aap baat kro na maa se aapki baat Maan jayegi, pls..pls..pls..pls
Samar - acha thik hai, lekin ek shart par.
Komal - kaisi shart
Samar - Tu mujhse ladegi nhi aur detegi to bilkul nahi, jab dekho tab dadi amma banna shuru kar deti hai.
Komal - Ok Done
Ek kamre me ek ladki bistar par bethi thi, uske chehre par puri duniya ke gam the. Naa jane kis baat ka dukh tha use. Lekin kamra ki halat to kuch or hi keh rahi thi. Kamre me jalti mombattiyan, aur pure kamre me faili khushbu to insan ko khushgawar banati thi, lekin uss ladki ko iss sabse koi fark nhi padta tha.
Tabhi kamre me ek aadmi aata hai
Aadmi - kya jabardast maal ho tum, tumse shadi karne me koi nuksaan nhi hua Mera, or baki fayda kama hi lunga me.
Aadmi - lekin aaj to tujhe chakna banta hai janeman, bolti kyu nhi kuch.
Vo aadmi baar baar usse baat krne ki koshish karta hai lekin vo ladki to mano jaise gungi behri thi. Aadmi ko gussa aa jata hai.
Aadmi - Mat bol kuch bhi randi, mujhe kya. Aur vo aadmi uss ladki ke kapde jabardasti utarkar uski sharir ko ganda karne lagta hai, kamre me ab sirf ladki ki dardbhari cheekhe thi.
Vo ladki tut rahi thi, uski aatma chhalni chhalni ho Rahi thi
Lekin uske Mann me ek hi naam tha jo vo mann me rote hue bhi liye jaa rhi thi.
Samarrrr, Samarrr
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Bahut jabardast update bhai Sanjana ki toh shadi bhi ho gayi apne Hero se chalo ek biwi mil gayi hero ko dekhte hai aage aur kitni shadi hoti haiUpdate 9
'The Brutal Encounter'
Komal bahut khush thi, finally vo movie dekhne jaa rhi thi. Samar ne Sugandha ko convince kar liya tha bahar jane ke liye.
Sugandha ne sirf iss shart ke sath jane ki izazat di ki Samar bhi unke sath jayega.
Teeno car me bethe the, Aage Samar Car drive kar rha tha, uske side me komal thi aur piche sanjana baithi hui thi.
Samar - Teri vajah se meri neend khrab hogi.
Komal -
Sanjana shanti se baithi thi,
Sanjana apne man me sochti hai,.. (Kitne close hai ye dono, komal kitna pareshan karti hai ise, phir bhi kuch nhi kehta. Uss din kaise bachaya tha Samar ne...varna uss din to choti... main bhi to time pe nahi pahuchi thi...lekin vo pahuch gya tha... Kya vo mujhe bhi bachayega, agar kabhi main aise khatre me fasi to...)
Sanjana's self - Kyu bachayega tujhe, tu to usse baat bhi nahi karti... Uski ragging bhi karvane ki koshish ki thi...
Apni hi antaratma ki ye baat sunke vo udas ho gyi...
Samar car ke mirror se Sanjana ko dekh rha tha...
Samar - Didi? Kya hua...aap kuch udas lag rahi ho?
Sanjana - Hmm? Nhi kuch nhi... main thik hu.
Sanjana's self - Hayyy main mar jawa... Nhi yarr bacha bhi sakta hai... Pakka tujhpe fida hai vo... Kaise teri udasi 2 second me bhanp li. Bacha lega tu musibat me pad to sahi...
Sanjana - (man me) chup karo... harr baar ek hi bakwas... Kab kaha usne pyar karta hai mujse...
Sanjana's self - Are ye baat kehne vali nhi hoti... aankho ko padha jata hai...
'Naino ki to baat Naina jane hai,
Sapno ke Raaz to Naina jane hai.'
Sanjana kuch nhi bolti.
Raat ke 8:45 ho gye the, movie ka show 9:00 ka tha, abhi movie shuru hone me 15 minute the. Teeno log Mall me pahuchte hai, Samar car park karke Komal aur Sanjana ke sath Theater ke counter pe pahuchta hai aur teen tickets leta hai.
Movie animated thi lekin kafi log dekhne aaye the. Samar ticket lekar chalne lagta hai to.
Komal - Bhai!
Samar - Kya hai
Komal - Popcorn to lelo
Samar - Samar popcorn bucket leta hai sath me komal ke liye colddrink bhi. Samar ne apne liye li nhi thi aur sanjana ne bhi mna kar diya tha.
Samar - hmm, lut macha rkhi hai 2000 ka bill bana diya ye 400 g popcorn aur colddrink ka.
Komal - ab chalo bhai, kya late karaoge.
Teeno log ek sath movie hall me chale jate hai, night show tha lekin phir bhi bheed achi khasi thi. Almost seats bhari hui thi.
Komal - dekha aap dono ne, keh rahe the ki animated movie hai kon dekhta hai. Kitni bheed hai yahan, itne old log bhi aaye hai. Stupid both of you.
Sanjana - komal, language..
Komal Samar se popcorn aur colddrink leke aur sanjana ko jibh dikha ke apni seat par bhag jati hai.
Sanjana - ye ladki bhi naa, din par din bigadti jaa rahi hai.
Sanjana bolti hai to sochti hai ki samar koi jawab dega. Lekin Samar to hall ko dekhne me lga hua tha.
Sanjana - Samar! Kya dekh rhe ho.
Samar - dekh rahi hai aap Didi. Itni bheed hai lekin ladkiya bahut kam hai almost naa ke barabar. I think ye bhi uss killer ke dar ki vajah se hai.
Sach me hall me 5-6 ladkiya hi thi. Baki sab aadmi hi the.
Sanjana - Haa
Samar - aaiye Didi komal ke pass chalte hai.
Ye dono jaa hi rhe hote hai ki
Sanjana - Ahh... Samar!
Samar - Ji
Sanjana - vo main keh rahi thi ki...ki... Tum mujhe didi mat kaha kro.
Samar - Haaa? lekin aap meri didi hai naa to mein kya kahu.
Sanjana - tum mujhe naam se bulaya kro.
Samar - nhi, aap mujhse badi hai. Main aapka naam nhi le skta.
Sanjana - kyu divya bhi to tumse badi hai aur Payal vo bhi tumse badi hai unka to naam lete ho tum.
Samar - vo... vo... lekin maa kya kahengi agar main aapka naam lunga to.
Sanjana - Maa kuch nhi kahengi. Unhe main bol dungi. Thik hai.
Samar - thik hai main koshish karunga.
Ye kehkar dono komal ke pass hi jakar beth jatein hai, jo maje se movie dekh rahi thi aur jor jor se hans rahi thi.
Use aise dekhkar Sanjana aur Samar ke chehre bhi khil uthte hai.
Movie dekhkar ye log bahar aate hai to komal restaurant chalne ki jidd karne lagti hai.
Sanjana - komal ye kya baat hui, movie dekh li naa ab chal. Aur ghar se khake to aayi hai. Kitna khayegi.
Komal - ek ek burger hi to hai Di. Chalo na Bhai, Pls.
Samar - acha chal, tera ye pls kisi din maa se pitwayega mujhe. Unhone jaldi aane ko kaha tha aur tu late karva degi.
Komal -
Phir ye teeno mall ke hi restaurant me jate hai aur burger order karte hai. Ab komal burger tak to rukti nhi to ice cream bhi manga li. Isi tarah inhe 12:30 ho gye.
Finally ye log ghar ke liye nikalte hai. Komal to kha pikar sone lagi thi to majburan samar ko use apni goud me uthakar car tak lana pada. Komal ko piche sulakar. Sanjana aur Samar aage Beth jate hai aur ghar ke liye nikal jate hai. Neend to Sanjana ko bhi aa rahi thi aur Samar ko bhi. Lekin Samar ka control tha apni nind par to ise koi problem nhi thi car chalane me.
Samar - kya hua aapko bhi nind aa rahi hai, aap bhi so jaiye ghar pahunchkar utha dunga aapko.
Sanjana - Haa, aaj bahut late kara diya isne.
Sanjana bhi so jati hai aur samar car ghar ki taraf dauda deta hai.
Raste me police ki nakabandi bahut thi, jagah jagah check post bani hui thi. Suman ke order par almost sabhi police valo ko night duty karni padh rahi thi.
Samar ki car check post par pahuchati hai to police uski car rokti hai.
Inspector - kahan se aa rhe ho itni raat ko.
Samar - Sir, movie dekhne gye the, ab ghar jaa rhe hai.
Inspector ne jab car me do ladkiyon ko sote hue dekha to use samar par shak hua.
Ofcourse is vakt har kisi ko shak ki nigaho se dekha jaa rha tha. Killer koi bhi aur kahi bhi ho skta tha.
Inspector - acha, jara bahar aao.
Samar - bahar aate hue, kya baat hai sir. hame late ho rha hai. Aap jaldi documents dekhiye aur hame jane dijiye.
Inspector - hame mat sikhao apna kaam karna, kya naam hai tumhara aur ye dono ladkiya kon hai. Kahi inhe behosh karke to nhi le jaa rhe.
Samar - Sir, jara thik se baat kijiye. Behne hai meri vo. Movie dekh ke aa rhe the, thak gyi hai isliye so rahi hai.
Inspector - mujhe tameez sikha rha hai, chahu to abhi andar kar du, behne hai to jagao unko. dekhe sach bol rha hai yaa jhuth.
Samar - maine kaha na vo so rahi hai, ye lijiye mera ID card, dekh lijiye naam. Unhe jagane ki jarurat nhi hai.
Inspector - acha to tum aise nhi manoge, abhi btata hu.
Inme behes ho hi rahi thi ki itne me,
Suman - kya baat hai tiwari. Itna time kyu lag rha hai, checking me.
Inspector Tiwari - Mam ye ladka cooperate nhi kar rha. hamne bola ki vo ladki kon hai unhe jagao to badtameezi kar rha hai.
Suman - Kyu ladke, kya problem hai. Police ke sath badtamiji kar rhe ho.
Samar - Mam badtameezi maine nhi aapke police inspector ne ki hai. Main to pura sath de rha hu. Yahi jail me dalne ki dhamki de rhe hai.
Suman - acha, vo ladkiyan kon hai. Unse baat karao hamari.
Itne me sanjana jaag chuki thi, vo car ke bahar aati hai.
Sanjana - kya hua mam, koi baat hai kya.
Suman - Tum iske sath ho. Abhi kahan ja rhe ho.
Sanjana -yes mam, abhi hum ghar ja rhe hai.
Suman - hmm, thik hai uss ladki se bhi hame baat karni hai.
Samar - ho gyi naa baat aapki, use jagana jaruri nhi hai.
Suman - kya jaruri hai kya nhi ye hum dekh lenge.
Sanjana - (Samar ko rokte hue) ok mam abhi jagati hu use.
Sanjana komal ko uthati hai, to vo uthti nhi hai. kehti hai ki Samar ko police ne pakad liya, komal ek jhatke me uth jaati hai aur bahar aa jati hai. Uski ye harkat dekhke ek baar to Suman bhi hans deti hai.
Suman - Tum iske sath ho? Kon lagta hai ye tumhara.
Komal - kya mam inki car me hu to inke sath hi hongi naa, aur ye mere bhai hai.
Suman - thik hai, tum log jaa skte ho, lekin itni raat ko bahar nikalana safe nhi hai.
Jante nhi abhi bahar bahut khatra hai.
Komal - hame kuch nhi hoga, bhai hai na hamare sath. Uss killer ko to aise hi patak de mere bhaiya.
Sanjana komal ko khich kar le jati hai, aur samar bhi car me bethkar ghar ke liye nikal leta hai.
Sanjana - chup karke beth, bahut chapad chapad karti hai.
Ye teeno ghar jaa hi rahe the 15-20 minute ki duri par hi ghar tha. Ki itne me ek baar phir Samar car rokta hai.
Sanjana - kya hua?
Samar - Sadak par shayad koi aadmi pada hai, lagta hai accident hua hai.
Sanjana - Itni raat ko accident, sadak to bilkul khali hai koi traffic nhi hai.
Samar - Aap car me hi bethiye me dekh kar aata hu.
Samar car se utarkar uss body ke paas jane lagta hai jo sadak ke bicho bich padhi thi. Uska chehra dusri taraf tha isliye Samar ko dikhai nhi de rha tha. Uss body ke paas pahunchkar samar aawaz deta hai.
Samar - Hello, kya aap thik hai, kya aap mujhe sun paa rhe hai.
Vahan se koi jawab na aata dekhkar samar uss body ke paas pahuchta hai aur use hilata hai to bhi koi reaction nhi hota.
Lagta hai serious accident hai ambulance ko call karna padega, ye kehkar jaise hi samar uss aadmi ka chehra apni taraf karta hai, ek pal me vo aadmi tezi se uthkar samar ke chehre par kuch dhuaan jaisa chhodta hai, shayad kisi tarah ki gas.
Samar me liye ye hamla unexpected tha, uss gas se uski aankho me jalan hone lagi thi. Vo abhi kuch samajh pata ki itne me hi uss aadmi ne ek penchkas se samar ke kandhe par hamla kiya, hamla itna tez tha ki vo penchkas samar ke kandhe se hokar uski haddi chirte hue uske armpit se bahar nikal gya. Samar ki ek jordar chikh vahan gunj gyi.
Car me se jab Sanjana ne ye dekha to vo ek dum chikhi aur Car se bahar nikal aayi, uski chikh se komal bhi jaag gyi thi aur turant vo bahar aa gyi.
Jab sanjana aur komal ne dekha ki ek aadmi samar par hamla kar raha hai. Vo dono jor se chikh padi, aur bhagte hue samar ki taraf aane lagi.
Uss aadmi ne itne me hi ek aur hamla samar ke pet me kiya aur pura penchkas sar ke pet me utar diya. Uss gas ke asar ke karan samar kuch kar nhi paa rha tha.
Komal - Bhaiiiii.
Sanjana - Samarrrr.
Ye dono jaise hi samar ke paas pahuchati vo aadmi khada ho gya aur unki taraf ek bhanayak muskaan ke sath dekh rha tha. Jab komal aur Sanjana ne uska chehra dekha to unki to jaise jaan hi atak gyi.
Vo ek joker ka makeup kiye hue tha aur itna bhayanak lag rha tha ki kisi ki bhi saans atak jaye. Samar niche pada dard se tadap raha tha. Uski aankho me bahut jyada jalan ho rahi thi. Uske sharir me kampan hone laga tha aur sharir sunn pad rha tha.
Vo aadmi sanjana aur komal ki taraf badhne laga
darkar dono piche hone lagi. Uss aadmi ne apni kamar me se ek bada sa chaku nikala jisse gosht kata jata hai. Aur unki aur badhne laga.
Sanjana - (komal ka hath majbooti se pakad leti hai. Aur use apne piche chipa leti hai) Aage mat badhna vrna acha nhi hoga. Kon ho tum kya kiya tumne samar ke sath.
Komal bahut jyada dar gyi thi, samne vo aadmi maut ki tarah chalkar aa rha tha to sadak par samar buri halat me karah raha tha. Use samar ki bhi chinta ho rahi thi.
Sanjana - Komal, tu bhag yahan se.
Komal - (rote hue)
Sanjana - dekho aage mat bhdana vrna me mar dungi tumhe.
Vo aadmi sanjana ki baat sunkar pagalo ki tarah hasne lagta hai.
Aadmi - hahhhhhh, hahhhhhh tum ladkiya sab pagal hoti ho. Maut se kon bacha hai. Aaj to maja aayega. 2-2 khubsurat ladkiyon ke khun se nahaunga.
Komal aur Sanjana ka dar ye baat sunkar aur kai guna badh gya.
Sanjana - koooo. koooon to tum.
Aadmi - tum sab ladkiya pagal hi hoti ho... News nahi dekhti... clown ko nhi pehchanti.
Aa jao mere pass mujhe tumse pyar karna hai tumhare khun se nahana hai.
Samar - Sanjanaaaaa... bhago komal ko lekar...jao...
Sanjana samar ki baat sunti hai aur komal ko khichkar car ki taraf le chalti hai.
Vo killer bhi unke piche aane lagta hai, sanjana komal ko car me baithati hai aur car start karne lagti hai lekin car start nhi hoti..vo baar baar chabi dalkar start karti hai lekin koi fayda nhi...
Vo killer unki taraf badh rha tha aur komal ko dar se halat bigadti jaa rahi thi, dar to sanjana ko bhi bahut lag rha tha...
Komal - Didi...bhaiya ko bacha lo
Sanjana - For God sake start hona... Haa komal hum bacha lenge..car lekar samar ko usme bitha lenge... Start you fucking damnit car.
Sanjana phir chabhi ghumati hai. aur car start ho jati hai. Uski soch thi ki car ko turant samar ke paas lekar jayegi aur use bithakar yahan se turant niklegi.
Lekin tab tak Clown aa chuka tha, car start hote hi usne ek jor ka mukka komal vali side window par mara aur kanch todkar komal ka gala pakad liya.
Komal - Diiiiiii.
Komal ko dekhkar sanjana komal ko bachane ki koshish karne lagi isi vajah se car ka balance bigada aur car tazi se street pole se jakar takra kar ruk gyi.
Jhatke ki vajah se Clown dur jakar gira.
Lekin komal bhi dar aur sar par chit lagne se behosh hi gyi.
Sanjana ko bhi halki chot aayi, lekin uski parvah krne ka vakt nhi tha. Usne komal ko behosh dekha, car ko start krne ki koshish ki to vo khrab ho chuki thi aur start nhi ho rahi thi. Vo jaldi se bahar aayi aur komal ko uthane ki koshish karne lagi.
Sanjana - komal, komal uth,
Komal behosh thi, lekin clown phir se uth khada hua, ab vo sanjana ki taraf aa rha tha, sanjana ka uspe koi dhyan nhi tha.
Udhar kuch dur samar gira hua tha uski halat bahut kharab thi. Uski body khub se bhar gyi thi. Aankhe kholna mushkil ho rha tha, aur behoshi aane ko thi, uski aankhe band hone lagi.
Sugandha - Thik hai, lekin tum bhi inke sath jaoge. Vrna main inhe nhi jane dungi.
Samar - thik hai maa.
Sugandha - Aur inka khyal rakhna, tumhare bharose hi jane de rahi hu. Aur apna bhi.
Samar - Haa Maa, kuch nhi hone dunga me. Aap tension mat lo.
Samar ek dum se aakhe kholta hai,,,
Nhi maa kuch nhi hoga komal ko.
Samar apni puri jaan lagakar uthne ki koshish karta hai. Uske kandhe aur pet me betahasha dard ho rha tha.
Lekin vo khada hota hai aur samne uss killer ko dekhta hai jo ab sanjana ki taraf badh rha tha. Samar ko sab kuch dhundhla nazar aa rha tha vo uske pair bhi ladkhada rahe the. Lekin vo phir bhi aage badhta hai.
Clown sanjana ke bilkul piche pahuch gya tha. Sanjana ki iska bilkul aabhas nhi tha ki uske piche uski mout khadi hai. Vo komal ki fikr me thi.
Clown apne hath me vahi chaku lekar uske sar par vaar krne vala tha. Ek hamla aur uske sar ke do tukde hona lazim tha.
Jaise hi usne sanjana par vaar kiya, samar ne uske khanjar ko hawa me hi rok liya. Khanjar itna tez tha ki Samar ke hath me se mano khun ki nadi beh chali ho.
Samar ka khun behkar niche girne laga jahan sanjana thi. Uska khun sanjana ki maang ko bharne laga.
Uska khun uski maang se hote hue uske chehre par aa raha tha.
Samar ne apni puri takat se Clown ki chhati par ek punch mara jisse clown ki ek pasli tut gayi. Vo do kadam dur jakar gira. Sanjana ne piche dekha to uske samne Samar khada hua tha.
Samar - Uske chehre ko pakdte hue kuch nhi hoga aapko. Sanajana ke chehre par iss vakt me bhi ek ummid bhari muskan aa gyi.
Sanjana - Samarrrrrr
Sanjana chillayi, kyoki clown ek baar phir uthkar samar par vaar krne aaya tha, lekin is baar vo kamyab nhi hua.
Samar turant niche ko hua aur apni gardan par vaar hone se bachaya.
Phir usne bethe hue hi usi penchkas se Clown ki jagh par vaar kiya. Mahol me ek jordar chikh gunj gyi. Is baar ye chikh clown ki thi. Samar ne ek aur vaar clown ki aankh par kiya aur uski ek aankh phod di. Clown dard se tadapne laga.
Samar ek baar phir uspar vaar karta ki itne me clown ne vahi chaku usko fek kar mara jo sidha aakar samar ki chati par laga, samar ne apni chati se vi chaku nikala aur clown ke hath par vaar kiya aur ek hi vaar me uski sidhe hath ki 4 ungliyan kaat di.
Clown bhyanak dhang se chikha. Dono ki hi halat bahut buri ho chuki thi.
Samar ne clown ke sar par ek punch mara ab ye ladai hatho ki ladai ban chuki thi. Samar gas ke asar ki vajah se unconscious hone laga tha lekin phir bhi vo ladh rha tha.
Clown uspar bhari padh rha tha. Ladte ladte ye road ke kinare aa chuke the. Road ke side me ek bada naala behta tha.
Samar ne ek akhir baar apni puri takat lagai aur clown ka hath pakadkar modh diya aur phir use uthakar usi naale me fek diya. Clown ki ek jordar chikh gunji aur phir har taraf Shanti cha gyi.
Sanjana daudkar Samar ke pass aayi.
Sanjana - Samarrrr...
Samar - Ahhhhh... Komal...Komal kaisi hai...
Samar ko saans lene me taklif ho rahi thi...uska pura shareer khun se bheega hua tha...
Aur vo behosh hokar gir pada.
Sanjana jaldi se car me jakar Sugandha ko phone karti hai...
Sugandha ek hi ring me phone utha leti hai....
Sugandha - kaha ho tum sab mene jaldi aane ke liye kaha tha naa... mera dil kitna ghabra raha hai.
Sanjana - (rote hue) Maa
To be continued
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Suresh Singh - age 47, Samar ke tauji, Mumbai me textile ka business hai. Kaam me bahut jyada busy rehte hai. Apni family ko Kam time de pate hai.
Sugandha Singh - Age 45, Samar ki badi maa, Family or kaam me balance banakar chalti hai. Sanskari ke sath sath modern khyal bhi rakhti hai. Doctor thi, lekin filhal vo kaam chod diya hai. Abhi sirf medical colleges me guest ke taur pe lecture deti hai. Khubsurati ki misal hai, apni umra se jyada jawan nazar aati hai.
Sanjana Singh - Age 22, Suresh or Sugandha ki badi beti, thodi ziddi hai, apni chize kisi ke sath share krna pasand nhi hai. Mumbai se hi Business Management me graduation kar rhi hai kar rhi hai. Abhi 3rd year me hai.
Komal Singh - Age 19, Suresh or Sugandha ki choti beti, abhi 12th paas ki hai, sabke sath pyar se rehna pasand karti hai. Ghar me sabki ladli hai.
Suraj Samar ke sath mumbai tak aana chahta tha, lekin Samar ne jabardasti use railway station se hi vapas lauta diya or akela Mumbai tak train me aa gya. Jab train Station pe pahuchi to Samar ek baar ke liye itni bheed dekh kar hairat me padh gya, Usne apni sari jindagi gaon me hi bitayi thi, pass ke shahar me bhi vo tab hi jata tha jab koi jarurat ho. Itni bheed uske liye nayi baat thi, halanki Mobile me internet ke jariye usne duniya bhar ki jankari hasil kar li thi. Lekin aankho dekha experience to alag hi hota hai.
Samar - huhh itni bheed, chal samar ab tu bhi inme se ek hai.
Train se utarkar samar Exit ki taraf jata hai to bahar taxi ki line lagi hui thi. Samar apna mobile nikalkar call krta hai.
Samar - Hello, haa badi maa main bahar aa gya hu, aap kahan par hai.
Sugandha Samar ke samne hi peeth karke khadi thi.
Sugandha - Beta, me to exit ke paas hi khadi hu. Tum kahan par ho.
Samar - me bhi to vahi khada hu badi maa.
Sugandha palatkar dekhti hai to use samar nazar aata hai, vo use dekhte hi pehchan leti hai. Lekin Samar use nhi pehchanta. Sugandha jab uske karib aati hai, to Samar use dhyaan se dekhta hai or pehchanta hai. Or phir uske pairo ko chune ke liye jhukta hai. Sugandha use beech me hi rokakar apne gale se lga leti hai.
Sugandha - Mera beta, gale lag jaa mere lal. Kitna arsa ho gya tujhe dekhe.
Sugandha Samar ko gale se lgaye rkhe hi baate krti hai.
Sugandha - Tujhe meri yaad bhi nhi aayi hogi. Tujhe gale se lgakar kitna sukoon mil rha hai, Mere bete.
Sab log station PE inhi dono ko dekh rhe the. Samar ne ye baat notice ki or Sugandha se bola.
Samar- maine bhi aapko yaad Kiya badi maa. Chaliye ab ghar chalte hai. Sab hme hi dekh rhe hai.
Sugandha - dekhne de, me apne bete ko gale lga rhi hu kisi gair ko nhi.
Samar- ghar Jake jee bharke gale lga Lena badi maa. Mujhe bahut bhookh lagi hai.
Sugandha - are haa tu kitna lamba safar karke aaya hai, thak gya hoga, chal ghar chalte hai.
Samar apna saman uthakar chal deta hai, dono car me bethkar nikal padte hai.
Car me - Sugandha - acha beta Ghar par sab kaise hai, maa ji or Kavita.
Samar- sab ache hai badi maa, dadi to aapko bahut yaad karti hai.
Sugandha - acha hai, ab tu yahi padhega, maa ji ne kal phone karke btaya tha mujhe tere baare me. Bilkul apni maa pe gya hai padhai me awwal.
Samar- Haa badi maa, dadi ne jidd karke bhej diya. Mene to kaha tha ki vahi kisi college me padh lunga.
Sugandha - kyu vahan kyu pdega, yahan padhna. Main Tera admission shahar ke sabse bade college me karaungi. Sanjana bhi usi me padhti hai or ab komal bhi vahi jaegi. 1 mahine baad se college shuru hoga. Tab tak shahar ko dekh le, yahan adjust ho jaa. Dekh to kitna dubla ho gya hai, lgta hai kavita kuch deti nhi khane ko.
Sugandha sab kuch ek hi saans me bol gyi.
Samar - are badi maa, me to yu hi bol rha tha, or gaon me to mere jaisa koi nhi or aap kehti hai ki me dubla ho gya.
Sugandha - haa tere jaisa koi nhi, itna dubla or kon hoga gaon me.
Samar is baat pe hans diya,
Samar - acha badi maa Ghar me sab kaise hai, tau ji, didi or komal.
Sugandha - sab thik hai beta, tere tauji ko to time hi nhi milta kaam se, sanjana apne dosto ke sath busy rehti hai or komal use to filmi sapne dekhne se fursat nhi. Ab tu aa gya hai mujhse bhi koi baat krne vala hoga.
Sugandha - or ye bta station pe tune mujhe pehchana kyu nhi. Hmm?
Samar - are badi maa me to aapko dekhte hi pehchan gya tha vo to bas.
Sugandha - kya vo to bta.
Samar - aap itni khubsurat lag rhi thi ki me kuch bol hi nhi paaya.
Sugandha- (sharamakar)chal badmash, apni badi maa se hi flirt krta hai, lgta hai kavita ke laad pyar ne jyada bigad diya. Teri pitai karni padegi.
Samar - mene to sach hi kaha badi maa.
Sugandha -
Isi tarah batein krte hue ye ghar pahunchate hai.
Ek high society me Sugandha ka 2 manzila ghar tha. Koi mahal to nhi tha, lekin dekhkar lgta tha ki paisa kafi lgaya hai ghar me. Ghar me enter krte hi ek chota sa corridor shuru hota tha or uske baad living room. Niche ek side me Kitchen or mandir the or dusri side Sugandha or Suresh ka room or 2 guest room. upar bhi Komal, Sanjana ke room the or ek guest room.
Ghar me pahuchkar sugandha komal ko aawaj deti hai, Komal... Komal..
Komal - Ayi maa.... Kya hua maa, aap to mujhe padhne bhi nhi deti.
Sugandha - sab pta hai mujhe kitna padhti hai, ye dekh kon aya hai.
Komal Samar ko dekhti hai aur pehchanne ki koshish karti hai.
Sugandha - are pagal ladki aise kya dekh rhi hai, Tera bhai hai - Samar, Ranjit chacha or Sweta ka beta
Komal ne samar ko sirf bachpan me hi dekha tha, kyoki vo gaon sirf ek baar hi gyi thi uska janm bhi mumbai me hi hua tha. Isliye vo samar ko pehchan nhi payi, lekin jab sugandha ne btaya ki vo kon hai to komal bahut khush hui, kyoki sugandha aksar ghar or gaon ke bare me use batati thi.
Komal - Samar bhai, (zor se gale lagte hue) maa hmesha aapki baat krti hai. Kehti hai samar Aisa hai, Samar vaisa hai. Khushi se jhumte hue, aap mumbai ghumne aaye hai, mein aapko pura shahar dikhaungi. Thik hai.
Sugandha - vo mumbai ghumne nhi, padhne aaya hai ab vo yahi rhega. Sanjana ke college me hi iska admission karvana hai, tere sath.
Komal - sach me, yahoo... Tab to aur maza ayega. Hum sath me college jaenge. Pta hai bhai me hmesha chahti thi ki mera ek bhai ho aur dekho aap aa gye. Ab aap kahi mat jana. Ok
Samar- kahi nhi jaunga, apni gudiya ko chhodkar. Vaise badi maa or koi nhi dikhai de rha, kahan hai sab.
Sugandha - sanjana gyi hogi kahin apne dosto ke sath, or iske papa to business trip par gye hai.
Samar - oh.. acha
Komal - chaliye bhaiya, mere room me aapko apne video games dikhati hu.
Sugandha - (thoda dantate hue) vo abhi abhi aya hai pehle use fresh hone de, phir dikhati rehna apne games.
Komal - ok maa
Samar - badi maa koi baat nhi, use mat datiye. Komal se - pehle me fresh ho jau. Phir hum sath me tumhare games dekhenge.
Komal - Ok bhaiya (Samar ke galo pe kiss karte hue) or apni maa ko jibh dikhakar bhag jati hai.
Sugandha - ye ladki bhi naa, iske papa or. behen Kam the ise sar par chadhane ke liye, ki ab tu bhi iski side le rha hai.
Samar - koi baat nhi badi maa, abhi bachi hai. Aap to mere liye kuch khane ko laiye bahut bhukh lagi hai. Or me kis room me jakar fresh hou.
Sugandha - abhi to tu samne vale room me chala jaa, jaldi hi me tere liye kamra khali karvati hu, vo kya hai naa abhi kuch kamro me renovation ka kaam chal rha hai.
Samar - ok badi maa.
Samar fresh hokar, khana khakar usi room me aaram krta hai or uske baad komal ke sath uske games dekhta hai or khelta bhi hai. Isi tarah raat ho jati hai.
Raat 8 bje dinner ke lime pe sugandha komal or Samar ko aawaz deti hai.
Sugandha - Samar... Komal.. niche aa jao mene khana lga diya hai.
Samar - abhi aaye badi maa..., Chal gudiya niche chalte hai. Badi maa bula rhi hai.
Komal - O ho.. ye maa bhi naa kabhi mujhe khelene nhi deti. Kitna maza aa rha tha. Mene aapke player ko almost maar diya tha.
Samar- itni der se to game hi khel rhe hai, or mujhe in video games ki itni practice nhi hai vrna tum jit nhi paati. Vaise asli me to fight me mujhe koi nhi hara skta.
Komal - kyu aapko kya martial arts aate hai.
Samar - Haa
Komal - kya sach me, oh my god mujhe naa martial arts bahut pasand hai. Bas mujhe aate nhi hai
Samar- thik hai sikha dunga, lekin kisi se kehna mat. Samjhi.
Komal - (dhire se ) Ok
Samar - chal ab niche, vrna badi maa gussa krengi.
Is tarah ye dono niche aate hai or table pe aakar beth jate hai. Komal puchti hai - kya bnaya hai maa.
Sugandha - aaj mene sabkuch apne bete ki pasand ka bnaya hai.
Komal - hmmmmeri pasand ka to kabhi kuch nhi bnati.
Sugandha - chup kar, har dusre din to apni pasand ka hi banwati hai or pura din kamre se jo maharani ki tarah aadesh deti ki mumma ye bnado vo bnado.
Ye sunkar komal sirf khilkhilakar has di
Sugandha - ye sanjana kahan reh gyi, komal jara phone to kar use.
Komal abhi phone kar hi rahi thi ki itne me sanjana tez kadmo ke sath andar aati hai.
Sugandha - aa gyi beti, chal aaja mene khana lga diya hai.
Abhi tak sanjana ka dhyan Samar par nhi gya tha, lekin jaise hi samar ne sanjana ko dekha... Uski to duniya hi tham gyi, itni khubsoorat, haseen ladki usne kabhi nhi dekhi thi. Sanjana ki khubsurati to pure college me famous thi. College ki ladkiya to usse rask karti thi. Sab ladke uspe fida the, lekin sanjana ke gusse ki vajah se kisi ladke ki himmat nhi hoti thi use prapose krne ki, jawab sabhi jante the ki inkar hi hoga. Sanjana me khubsurati ke sath sath mazbooti bhi thi, na jane kitne ladke jinhone sanjana se badtameezi ki thi... Uske thappado se apne jabde hilva chuke the.
Samar ki aankhe to mano duniya ko dekhna hi bhul gyi thi... Sanjana ne jab dekha ki samne table pe ek ladka betha use ghur rha hai to uski bauhe chad gyi. Use aise ghurne vale ladke katai pasand nhi the. Bechare Samar ka first impression hi kharab gya tha and first impression is the last impression.
Samar ka dhyan tuta komal ki awaz se...
Komal - hai naa meri didi sabse khubsurat.
Samar - Haa
Komal - kya
Samar - hmm! Kuuuch... Kuch nhi.
Komal - khane pe focus Karo Bhai vrna lene ke dene pad jayenge.
Sanjana - Maa ye kon hai.
Sugandha - beta ye samar hai, Ranjit chacha ka beta, ab se yahi rahkar pdegha.
Sanjana ne ek baar samar ko gaur se dekha aur phir apna dinner krne lagi.
Khana khane ke baad sabhi hall me TV dekh rhe the tabhi doorbell bajne ki aawaz ayi..
Sugandha ne jakar darvaza khola to samne Suresh khada tha.
Sugandha - aa gye aap, andar aaiye.
Suresh ghar ke andar aate hue sugandha se pani mangta hai.
Sugandha - (Pani dete hue) aap to 2 din baad aane vale the.
Suresh - haa, lekin kaam jaldi pura ho gya to aa gya, 2 din baad phir Jana hai. Or suno khana mat lgana. Bas mujhe aaram krna hai.
Sugandha - Ji
Itne me Samar aakar suresh ke paon chhuta hai.
Suresh - Jite raho, or gaon me sab kaise hai. Safar to thik se hua naa.
Samar- Ji Tauji, gaam me sab thik hai or safar bhi aaram se hua.
Suresh - achi baat hai, sugandha ne bataya tha tumhare bare me, jaldi hi admission ho jaega college me to komal ke sath hi padhna.
Suresh - acha ab me sone chalta hu, bahut thak gya hu. Or baccho tum bhi so jao. Ab kafi raat ho gyi hai.
Komal - Ok Papa
Suresh apne kamre me chala jata hai.
Sugandha - (sanjana se) beti tum aaj komal ke sath room share kar lo samar ke liye room Khali ho jaega.
Sanjana - kya? No mom, aap janti hai ki mujhe kisi ke sath room share krna pasand nhi. Nhi me akeli hi soungi.
Sugandha - beta abhi baki kamro me renovation ka kaam chal rha hai to koi room Khali nhi hai. Thoda adjust krna pdega.
Sanjana - No mom, isse kahiye hall me so jae.
Sugandha - (gusse me) bas, kyu hall me soega vo, mene keh Diya ki tum komal ke sath room share krogi to krogi. Discussion end.
Sanjana - Samar ko gusse se dekhkar apne pair patakte hue chali gyi.
Sugandha - Beta uski baato ka bura mat manna thodi ziddi hai ye ladki.
Samar - koi baat nhi badi maa, aapne unhe bewajah daanta me to hall me bhi so skta tha.
Sugandha Samar ko muskurakar dekhti hai or apne room me chali jati hai.
Raat me sanjana komal ke sath ek room me soti hai or apne man me sochti hai.
Sanjana - hmm mere room ko mujse chhina tujhe me chhodungi nhi bacchu. Bhondu si to shakal hai or mujse panga lene chala hai.
Apne gusse me Sanjana ne Samar ki personality par dhyan hi nhi diya ki vo kitna handsome hai.
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