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'Broken Soul'
Samar ki college life sahi jaa rhi thi, subah exercise krna, college jana, aakar padhai krna or Sunday ko shahar ghumna yahi uski life chal rahi thi.
Komal to ab lagbhag jyadatar samay uske room me rehti thi or uske sath hi soti thi. Vo koshish karti thi ki kisi tarah samar ko apni taraf attract kar sake, lekin abhi kuch jyada khul ke nhi kar sakti thi.
Sanjana se samar ki baat abhi bhi kam hoti thi, lekin ab sanjana ne usse rudely baat krna band kar diya tha.
Samar ki Payal se bhi achi dosti ho chuki thi, kyoki payal khud principal Malhotra ki beti thi. Or unka apna ek group ban chuka tha, jisme Samar, Komal, Khushi or Payal thi. Payal inme senior thi.
College me samar ko ab tak koi surag nhi mila tha ki drugs kon or kaise bech rha hai, to pta lgane ke liye usne college ke kuch sabse kamine or badnaam ladko se dosti karne ka faisla kiya.
Raghu ke gunde samar or uske parivar ke bare me,
jankari nikal chuke the or uspar najar banaye hue the.
Gaon me Chanda ki shadi bahut hi shanti or sadgi se kar di gayi. Uski to mano duniya hi ujad gyi thi, usne pehle koshish ki shadi naa krne ki ek baar ghar se bhagne ki bhi koshish ki, lekin bechari kamyab nhi hui. Mandap me baithi thi to mano koi lash baithi ho, ek dum shant, sab kuch hote hue dekh rhi thi lekin keh kuch nhi rahi thi.
Uske pati ka naam Rakesh tha, usne dahej liye bina shadi karne ko kaha to chanda ke parivar vale itne khush hue ki bina uski marzi ki parvah kiye, uski shadi turant krva di. Aur bidai ke baad chali gyi vo apne pati ke sath Mumbai.
Idhar Mumbai shahar me Murders hote hi jaa rhe the, ab to har 2-3 me ek lash kahi milti thi police ko. Logo me dar ka mahol ghar kar chuka tha. marne vali sabhi ladkiya thi isliye logo ne apni Ghar ki ladkiyo ka bahar nikalna bhi band karva diya tha raat me. Janta ab sarkar ke khilaf pradarshan karne par utar aaye thi. Sarkar par Media or Janta ka dawab badhta hi jaa rha tha.
Baat ab ministry tak pahuch chuki thi, Ministry ne police ko saaf shabdo me keh diya ki agar murders jald se jald band nhi hue to sabhi police valo ko suspend kar diya jaega or case Central authorities ko saunpa jayega.
Isi tarah 1 mahina bit gya.
After 1 month
Minister - Koshish, koshish...kya koshish. Mujhe koshish nahi result chahiye commissioner.
Commissioner - Sir hum har tarika apna rhe hai, jisse murders ko roka ja sake. Police ki petroling badha di gyi hai. Sabhi police valo ki chhutiya cancel kar di gyi hai or unhe iss case par focus krne ko kaha hai. ACP Suman iss case ko handle kar rhi hai, She is best in her work, Sir.
Minister - To kya tumhari petroling se murders band hue, ya uss murderer ko pakad paye. Ek Psycho killer tumhare pure department par bhari pad rha hai. Ek hafta, ek hafte ka ultimatum hai tumhare pass agar murders band nhi hue aur uss killer ko khatam nhi kiya to phir apni permanent chutti ke liye taiyar rehna.
In Commissioner Office
Commissioner - ACP Suman, kuch bhi karo lekin inn sab murders ko roko. Uss killer ko pakdo, Jinda yaa Murda. Koi fark nhi padta.
Mene apna kaam hmesha imaandari se kiya hai, mujhe nokri jane ki chinta nhi hai, lekin me apne sath ye daag nhi le skta ki ek killer ko pakad na pane ki vajah se mujhe nokri se nikala gya.
Main tumhe full authority deta hu, 1 hafta hai tumhare pass chahe tumhe kanoon todna hi kyu na pade, lekin ye killer pakda jaana chahiye.
Suman - Yes Sir, Me aapko bharosa dilati hu ki me uss killer ko pakad kar rhungi or vo bhi zinda.
Salute karti hai or nikal jati hai.
Media - ACP Suman aap is case ko handle kar rhi Hain, lekin ab tak police kuch nhi kar pai hai, kya kehna chahengi aap is bare me. Kya ye case aapke glorious career me kalank ki tarah hoga.
Suman - (Un media valo ko dekhte hue) Hum har koshish kar rhe hai Us murderer ko pakadne ki aur jaldi hi vo hamari giraft me hoga.
Media - Ab tak bhi har baar police ka yahi jawab rha hai lekin phir bhi murders ruke nhi hai, kya police logo ko sirf jhuti ummid ke sivay aur kuch nhi de sakti.
Suman - 1 week, sirf 1 hafte ke andar ye sab khatam hoga, (phir camare ki taraf dekhte hue) Main janti hu tum mujhe dekh rhe ho, tum jo bhi ho apni ulti ginti shuru kar do, kyoki 1 hafte baad tum jail ki salakhon ke piche apne kiye ki saja paa rhe hoge.
Yeh kehkar Suman vahan se nikal jati hai.
Suman apne office me
Suman - Shinde
Shinde - Ji madam
Suman - ab tak jitne murders hue hai unn sabki file yahan meri table par honi chahiye
Shinde - Ji mam abhi laya
Suman files ko gaur se dekh rahi thi,
Hmm, Agar sarkar ne minister ki security me naa lagaya hota to ab tak ham ise pakad chuke hote. Maine kaha tha ki ye koi mamuli killer nhi hai, hame jald se jald kuch karna hoga. Lekin tab meri baat suni nhi inn BC netao ne.
Ab sar par aa pada hai to keh diya ki ek hafte me case solve karo. Lekin karungi me jarur, uss psycho ka dimag to thikane me lagaungi.
Suman bahut dhyan se files ko padh rhi thi aur sabhi murders me common kya hai ye hi dekh rahi thi.
Shinde jante ho ki inn sab murders me common kya hai.
Shinde - Ji mam, yahi ki marne vali sabhi ladkiya hai, aur inke pass se ek card Mila hai usi killer ka
Clown the innocent killer.
Suman - Aur bhi bahut kuch common hai.
Shinde - kya madam
Suman - jaise sabhi ladkiyon ki age 20-28 ke bich hai, sabhi ladkiyan vo hai jo job karti hain, sabhi ka murder raat ke vakt hua hai. Sabhi ko torcher kiya gya hai or unke sharir se khaal utari gyi hai.
Killer apne aapko innocent btana chahta hai ki jo kuch bhi vo kar rha hai vo sahi hai. Or yahi iss tarah ke pagal killers ki takat hoti hai, unhe lagta hai ki vo koi punya ka kaam kar rhe hai.
Vo card dikhana jara....Shinde Suman ko vo card deta hai.
Use dhyan se dekhti hai, vo dekhti hai ki card par kuch pilapan aaya hua tha.
Suman - Ye dekho shinde, ye dekh rhe ho.
Shinde - ye to kuch tel ke jaisa hai mam.
Suman - Baki cards check kro
Shinde baki cards check krta hai to 5-6 aur cards par tel milta hai.
Ab tak vo killer 32 ladkiyo ki Jaan le chuka tha, or har ladki ke paas card milta tha.
Suman - agar ye card usne khud banaye hai to kuch nhi pta, lekin agar ye card usne kisi se banavaye hai to vahan paas me tel ka kaam hota hai.
Shinde 4 policevalo ko iss kaam par lagao ki iss tarah ke card kahan bante hai pta karen. Aur shahar me night petroling badha do samjhe.
Shinde - Ji madam
Shinde nikal office se nikal jata hai or Suman kisi gehri soch me kho jati hai.
Idhar Ghar me
Komal - Mom pls jane do naa, pls
Sugandha - Nahi bilkul nhi.
Komal - lekin kyu, hum pehle bhi gye hai night show me.
Sugandha - haa lekin tab koi killer shahar ki sadko par ladkiyon ko maar nhi rha tha. Apne room me jao. ( Komal udas ho jati hai, aaj koi animated movie lagi thi theater me, jise komal dekhne ki jidd kar rahi thi. Or uska time 9-11 tha)
Sanjana - chal apne kamre me komal vaise bhi animated movie to hai kya ho jayega nhi dekhegi to.
Komal - aap nhi samjhoge Di. Komal upar chali jati hai.
Sanjana - Pagal, college me aa gyi hai lekin abhi bhi bachho ki tarah cartoon dekhne hai ise.
Komal sidha Samar ke pass pahuch jati hai
Komal - Bhaimere pyare bhai
Samar - (use ghurte hue) ab kya kaam aa pada tujhe.
Komal jaldi jaldi use sab kuch bta deti hai
Samar - Hmmm, to maa ki baat Maan aur yahi beth, or itni badi ho gyi ab bhi cartoon dekhti hai.
Komal - bhai pls, aap baat kro na maa se aapki baat Maan jayegi, pls..pls..pls..pls
Samar - acha thik hai, lekin ek shart par.
Komal - kaisi shart
Samar - Tu mujhse ladegi nhi aur detegi to bilkul nahi, jab dekho tab dadi amma banna shuru kar deti hai.
Komal - Ok Done
Ek kamre me ek ladki bistar par bethi thi, uske chehre par puri duniya ke gam the. Naa jane kis baat ka dukh tha use. Lekin kamra ki halat to kuch or hi keh rahi thi. Kamre me jalti mombattiyan, aur pure kamre me faili khushbu to insan ko khushgawar banati thi, lekin uss ladki ko iss sabse koi fark nhi padta tha.
Tabhi kamre me ek aadmi aata hai
Aadmi - kya jabardast maal ho tum, tumse shadi karne me koi nuksaan nhi hua Mera, or baki fayda kama hi lunga me.
Aadmi - lekin aaj to tujhe chakna banta hai janeman, bolti kyu nhi kuch.
Vo aadmi baar baar usse baat krne ki koshish karta hai lekin vo ladki to mano jaise gungi behri thi. Aadmi ko gussa aa jata hai.
Aadmi - Mat bol kuch bhi randi, mujhe kya. Aur vo aadmi uss ladki ke kapde jabardasti utarkar uski sharir ko ganda karne lagta hai, kamre me ab sirf ladki ki dardbhari cheekhe thi.
Vo ladki tut rahi thi, uski aatma chhalni chhalni ho Rahi thi
Lekin uske Mann me ek hi naam tha jo vo mann me rote hue bhi liye jaa rhi thi.
Samarrrr, Samarrr
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Minister longo ko jab apni kursi jaane ka khatra dikhta h tow police walo ki gaand m danda kerte h ab commissioner ko ultimatum de dia ek hafte ka dekhte h kia hota h suman ko kuch clue Mila tow h dekhte kia woh usske zariye qatil tak pahoch paati hUpdate 8
'Broken Soul'
Samar ki college life sahi jaa rhi thi, subah exercise krna, college jana, aakar padhai krna or Sunday ko shahar ghumna yahi uski life chal rahi thi.
Komal to ab lagbhag jyadatar samay uske room me rehti thi or uske sath hi soti thi. Vo koshish karti thi ki kisi tarah samar ko apni taraf attract kar sake, lekin abhi kuch jyada khul ke nhi kar sakti thi.
Sanjana se samar ki baat abhi bhi kam hoti thi, lekin ab sanjana ne usse rudely baat krna band kar diya tha.
Samar ki Payal se bhi achi dosti ho chuki thi, kyoki payal khud principal Malhotra ki beti thi. Or unka apna ek group ban chuka tha, jisme Samar, Komal, Khushi or Payal thi. Payal inme senior thi.
College me samar ko ab tak koi surag nhi mila tha ki drugs kon or kaise bech rha hai, to pta lgane ke liye usne college ke kuch sabse kamine or badnaam ladko se dosti karne ka faisla kiya.
Raghu ke gunde samar or uske parivar ke bare me,
jankari nikal chuke the or uspar najar banaye hue the.
Gaon me Chanda ki shadi bahut hi shanti or sadgi se kar di gayi. Uski to mano duniya hi ujad gyi thi, usne pehle koshish ki shadi naa krne ki ek baar ghar se bhagne ki bhi koshish ki, lekin bechari kamyab nhi hui. Mandap me baithi thi to mano koi lash baithi ho, ek dum shant, sab kuch hote hue dekh rhi thi lekin keh kuch nhi rahi thi.
Uske pati ka naam Rakesh tha, usne dahej liye bina shadi karne ko kaha to chanda ke parivar vale itne khush hue ki bina uski marzi ki parvah kiye, uski shadi turant krva di. Aur bidai ke baad chali gyi vo apne pati ke sath Mumbai.
Idhar Mumbai shahar me Murders hote hi jaa rhe the, ab to har 2-3 me ek lash kahi milti thi police ko. Logo me dar ka mahol ghar kar chuka tha. marne vali sabhi ladkiya thi isliye logo ne apni Ghar ki ladkiyo ka bahar nikalna bhi band karva diya tha raat me. Janta ab sarkar ke khilaf pradarshan karne par utar aaye thi. Sarkar par Media or Janta ka dawab badhta hi jaa rha tha.
Baat ab ministry tak pahuch chuki thi, Ministry ne police ko saaf shabdo me keh diya ki agar murders jald se jald band nhi hue to sabhi police valo ko suspend kar diya jaega or case Central authorities ko saunpa jayega.
Isi tarah 1 mahina bit gya.
After 1 month
Minister - Koshish, koshish...kya koshish. Mujhe koshish nahi result chahiye commissioner.
Commissioner - Sir hum har tarika apna rhe hai, jisse murders ko roka ja sake. Police ki petroling badha di gyi hai. Sabhi police valo ki chhutiya cancel kar di gyi hai or unhe iss case par focus krne ko kaha hai. ACP Suman iss case ko handle kar rhi hai, She is best in her work, Sir.
Minister - To kya tumhari petroling se murders band hue, ya uss murderer ko pakad paye. Ek Psycho killer tumhare pure department par bhari pad rha hai. Ek hafta, ek hafte ka ultimatum hai tumhare pass agar murders band nhi hue aur uss killer ko khatam nhi kiya to phir apni permanent chutti ke liye taiyar rehna.
In Commissioner Office
Commissioner - ACP Suman, kuch bhi karo lekin inn sab murders ko roko. Uss killer ko pakdo, Jinda yaa Murda. Koi fark nhi padta.
Mene apna kaam hmesha imaandari se kiya hai, mujhe nokri jane ki chinta nhi hai, lekin me apne sath ye daag nhi le skta ki ek killer ko pakad na pane ki vajah se mujhe nokri se nikala gya.
Main tumhe full authority deta hu, 1 hafta hai tumhare pass chahe tumhe kanoon todna hi kyu na pade, lekin ye killer pakda jaana chahiye.
Suman - Yes Sir, Me aapko bharosa dilati hu ki me uss killer ko pakad kar rhungi or vo bhi zinda.
Salute karti hai or nikal jati hai.
Media - ACP Suman aap is case ko handle kar rhi Hain, lekin ab tak police kuch nhi kar pai hai, kya kehna chahengi aap is bare me. Kya ye case aapke glorious career me kalank ki tarah hoga.
Suman - (Un media valo ko dekhte hue) Hum har koshish kar rhe hai Us murderer ko pakadne ki aur jaldi hi vo hamari giraft me hoga.
Media - Ab tak bhi har baar police ka yahi jawab rha hai lekin phir bhi murders ruke nhi hai, kya police logo ko sirf jhuti ummid ke sivay aur kuch nhi de sakti.
Suman - 1 week, sirf 1 hafte ke andar ye sab khatam hoga, (phir camare ki taraf dekhte hue) Main janti hu tum mujhe dekh rhe ho, tum jo bhi ho apni ulti ginti shuru kar do, kyoki 1 hafte baad tum jail ki salakhon ke piche apne kiye ki saja paa rhe hoge.
Yeh kehkar Suman vahan se nikal jati hai.
Suman apne office me
Suman - Shinde
Shinde - Ji madam
Suman - ab tak jitne murders hue hai unn sabki file yahan meri table par honi chahiye
Shinde - Ji mam abhi laya
Suman files ko gaur se dekh rahi thi,
Hmm, Agar sarkar ne minister ki security me naa lagaya hota to ab tak ham ise pakad chuke hote. Maine kaha tha ki ye koi mamuli killer nhi hai, hame jald se jald kuch karna hoga. Lekin tab meri baat suni nhi inn BC netao ne.
Ab sar par aa pada hai to keh diya ki ek hafte me case solve karo. Lekin karungi me jarur, uss psycho ka dimag to thikane me lagaungi.
Suman bahut dhyan se files ko padh rhi thi aur sabhi murders me common kya hai ye hi dekh rahi thi.
Shinde jante ho ki inn sab murders me common kya hai.
Shinde - Ji mam, yahi ki marne vali sabhi ladkiya hai, aur inke pass se ek card Mila hai usi killer ka
Clown the innocent killer.
Suman - Aur bhi bahut kuch common hai.
Shinde - kya madam
Suman - jaise sabhi ladkiyon ki age 20-28 ke bich hai, sabhi ladkiyan vo hai jo job karti hain, sabhi ka murder raat ke vakt hua hai. Sabhi ko torcher kiya gya hai or unke sharir se khaal utari gyi hai.
Killer apne aapko innocent btana chahta hai ki jo kuch bhi vo kar rha hai vo sahi hai. Or yahi iss tarah ke pagal killers ki takat hoti hai, unhe lagta hai ki vo koi punya ka kaam kar rhe hai.
Vo card dikhana jara....Shinde Suman ko vo card deta hai.
Use dhyan se dekhti hai, vo dekhti hai ki card par kuch pilapan aaya hua tha.
Suman - Ye dekho shinde, ye dekh rhe ho.
Shinde - ye to kuch tel ke jaisa hai mam.
Suman - Baki cards check kro
Shinde baki cards check krta hai to 5-6 aur cards par tel milta hai.
Ab tak vo killer 32 ladkiyo ki Jaan le chuka tha, or har ladki ke paas card milta tha.
Suman - agar ye card usne khud banaye hai to kuch nhi pta, lekin agar ye card usne kisi se banavaye hai to vahan paas me tel ka kaam hota hai.
Shinde 4 policevalo ko iss kaam par lagao ki iss tarah ke card kahan bante hai pta karen. Aur shahar me night petroling badha do samjhe.
Shinde - Ji madam
Shinde nikal office se nikal jata hai or Suman kisi gehri soch me kho jati hai.
Idhar Ghar me
Komal - Mom pls jane do naa, pls
Sugandha - Nahi bilkul nhi.
Komal - lekin kyu, hum pehle bhi gye hai night show me.
Sugandha - haa lekin tab koi killer shahar ki sadko par ladkiyon ko maar nhi rha tha. Apne room me jao. ( Komal udas ho jati hai, aaj koi animated movie lagi thi theater me, jise komal dekhne ki jidd kar rahi thi. Or uska time 9-11 tha)
Sanjana - chal apne kamre me komal vaise bhi animated movie to hai kya ho jayega nhi dekhegi to.
Komal - aap nhi samjhoge Di. Komal upar chali jati hai.
Sanjana - Pagal, college me aa gyi hai lekin abhi bhi bachho ki tarah cartoon dekhne hai ise.
Komal sidha Samar ke pass pahuch jati hai
Komal - Bhai
Samar - (use ghurte hue) ab kya kaam aa pada tujhe.
Komal jaldi jaldi use sab kuch bta deti hai
Samar - Hmmm, to maa ki baat Maan aur yahi beth, or itni badi ho gyi ab bhi cartoon dekhti hai.
Komal - bhai pls, aap baat kro na maa se aapki baat Maan jayegi, pls..pls..pls..pls
Samar - acha thik hai, lekin ek shart par.
Komal - kaisi shart
Samar - Tu mujhse ladegi nhi aur detegi to bilkul nahi, jab dekho tab dadi amma banna shuru kar deti hai.
Komal - Ok Done
Ek kamre me ek ladki bistar par bethi thi, uske chehre par puri duniya ke gam the. Naa jane kis baat ka dukh tha use. Lekin kamra ki halat to kuch or hi keh rahi thi. Kamre me jalti mombattiyan, aur pure kamre me faili khushbu to insan ko khushgawar banati thi, lekin uss ladki ko iss sabse koi fark nhi padta tha.
Tabhi kamre me ek aadmi aata hai
Aadmi - kya jabardast maal ho tum, tumse shadi karne me koi nuksaan nhi hua Mera, or baki fayda kama hi lunga me.
Aadmi - lekin aaj to tujhe chakna banta hai janeman, bolti kyu nhi kuch.
Vo aadmi baar baar usse baat krne ki koshish karta hai lekin vo ladki to mano jaise gungi behri thi. Aadmi ko gussa aa jata hai.
Aadmi - Mat bol kuch bhi randi, mujhe kya. Aur vo aadmi uss ladki ke kapde jabardasti utarkar uski sharir ko ganda karne lagta hai, kamre me ab sirf ladki ki dardbhari cheekhe thi.
Vo ladki tut rahi thi, uski aatma chhalni chhalni ho Rahi thi
Lekin uske Mann me ek hi naam tha jo vo mann me rote hue bhi liye jaa rhi thi.
Samarrrr, Samarrr
Chanda ki Shaadi jisse huwi h lagta h woh yaha laker use galat dhandha kerwane wala h dekhte h kia hota h
Badhiya shaandar update
Are bhai mene kuch nhi kiya
Ab uska pati harami hai to main kya kar sakta hu
Lekin uski saza bhi milegi usko
I also feel Chanda's pain, isliye to update ka naam bhi broken soul hai. Kyoki chanda ki aisi hi halat hai is vakt.
Dekhte hai kya hoga aage, Samar ko jab chanda ke bare me pta lagega to kya hoga.
Dekhte hai Bhai
Kya karegi Suman ya phir kuch kar bhi payegi yaa nhi.
And kind a nice guess about Chanda
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