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Leave this topicJaruri nhi naa ke hame sab kuch pata hi, aaj tujhe nayi baat jan'ne ko milli
Likh sakti hai but ek writer ke liye sabse important kya hai ke sabse pahle use khud to lagna chahiye naa ke usne kuch acha likha hai, khudko ko sure hona padega... Aur esa to kabhi hoga nhi ke sabko hamara content psnd aaye
Baat teri sahi hai but yaha teri tarah sochne walo ki kami hai naa... Baki tu apni story pe focus kar, acha likh rahi hai aur ummid hai aage aur acha likhegi...
Are thread me pata chal jaata hai na... 8.5k plus views hai, not bad... Aage aur bhi acha hogaHow i know

Ise coincidence hargiz nahi kah sakte, ye to observation, controlling and mind ka game hai...jisme na chahte huye bhi fasna hai.Handwriting neat thi. Too neat.
Sirf ek line likhi hui thi:
“Some people bloom only in darkness.”
Uska stomach tighten ho gaya.
Ye line… ye metaphor…
Ye exactly wahi phrase tha jo Anamika ne apni latest story collection ke launch pe casually drop kiya tha.
Us time Arnav ne notice nahi kiya tha.
Ab usse yaad aa raha tha.
Coincidence?
Ufff...ye wo tha jisne kuch aisa feel karaya jaise kisi ne dimag me ghus kar tumse bola ho....hello dear i'm everywhere and you cannot escape from me...Relax, forensic boy. I’m just observing.

Exactly....Wo Clean bold ho chuka haiUs raat woh ghar jaake bhi Anamika ke interviews dekhta raha. Her pauses. Her micro-smiles. Her lack of apology.
He opened victim’s notebook photos again.
Same ribbon sketch.
Same dark metaphors.
Arnav ko realization hone lagi:
Ye sirf crime nahi hai.
Ye narrative hai.
Aur koi is narrative ko likh raha hai.
He could report the similarities.
He didn’t.
He saved them in his personal folder.
Aur wahi moment tha jab Arnav officially professional nahi raha.
Sirf curious bhi nahi.
Woh involved ho chuka tha.
Ek aur shikaar final ho gaya. I mean ek aisa insaan jo aage victim banne wala haiAur kahin door, kisi quiet balcony mein, Anamika wine glass haath mein pakde city lights dekh rahi thi.
Phone screen dark ho chuki thi.
She smiled softly.
Not victory.
Anticipation.
Because the game had finally begun.


Aisa sochna bhi mat dear....Aise subject par readers kam hi milenge. But apan jaise readers to hain na ju ke support me, so lagi raho....ye soch kar ki apne liye likh rahi hootherwise jis trh reaction nhi aa rhe mene story close kr deni thi

Chill man I am not gonna stop it as of now.Aisa sochna bhi mat dear....Aise subject par readers kam hi milenge. But apan jaise readers to hain na ju ke support me, so lagi raho....ye soch kar ki apne liye likh rahi ho![]()
Thnks dear , I always like to make readers uncomfortableThis is not a story, this is a magic that will freeze your mind...and when such a situation arises, it should be understood that the writer has succeeded in her purpose...brilliant dear![]()
Anamika is heart of story everything happens arround her with or without her concernWell, Is update ke bare me zyada kya bolu...bas ye kah dena kafi hai ki pure update me anamika hi ghoomti rahi, usne na ho kar bhi apni presence ko clearly feel karwaya. Chahe text msgs se ho ya fir arnav ke dwara.![]()
Observation ya obsession jaldi hi pata chal jaegaIse coincidence hargiz nahi kah sakte, ye to observation, controlling and mind ka game hai...jisme na chahte huye bhi fasna hai.![]()
Ufff...ye wo tha jisne kuch aisa feel karaya jaise kisi ne dimag me ghus kar tumse bola ho....hello dear i'm everywhere and you cannot escape from me...![]()

I feel for Arnav he is so cuteExactly....Wo Clean bold ho chuka hai![]()
HeheheEk aur shikaar final ho gaya. I mean ek aisa insaan jo aage victim banne wala hai![]()
That's the biggest suspense either murder or suicideLog uski story read karte hain aur usme aisa doobte hain ki suicide hi kar lete hain...kya ye pre-planned murder hai?? Agar hai to kaise proof karoge??![]()
Thnks a lotWell, update was amazing as always, brilliant writing...Keep it up dear![]()
IkAisa sochna bhi mat dear....Aise subject par readers kam hi milenge. But apan jaise readers to hain na ju ke support me, so lagi raho....ye soch kar ki apne liye likh rahi ho![]()
Never mindFirst sorry for late response as I am in office
That's why I call her darling because she deserves it....Anamika is heart of story everything happens arround her with or without her concern
Ye baatIk
Don't worry I try to keep regular updates
Stay tuned

Never mind![]()

Achha jiThat's why I call her darling because she deserves it....![]()
Thank a lotYe baat![]()