Romance Psycho Lovers

[RagVi Singh]

Episode 14 posted.
Let me know — did it hit… or miss?

 

[RagVi Singh]

To chaliye shuru karte hai...
Is update ko padhne ke baad ek baat to clear ho jaati hai — ye kahani simple nahi hai...

Starting se hi mood heavy ho jaata hai. Hospital aur crime scene ki smell ka description itna vivid hai ki bina bole hi scene dimag mein chhap sa jaata hai. Pace slow hai fir bhi kahin bhi bore feel nahi hota, kyunki har chhoti detail kuch hint chhod jaati hai kyu ki hamari writer Sahiba chahti hai ke ham bhi sochte rahe...

Engagement is most imp thing btwn writer n reader

Ab Arnav babu pe aate hai to is update mein Arnav pehli baar investigator se zyada insaan lagta hai. Uski vulnerability forced nahi lagti, balki naturally emerge hoti hai. Jaise-jaise metaphors, ribbon aur Anamika ke words connect hote jaate hain, ham bhi wahi question khud se poochne lagta hai —
“Ye coincidence hai ya kuch aur?”
Ye doubt hamari lekhika ne bahut smartly hamare mind mein plant karti hai.

This uncertainty remained till end

Aur hamari Beauty Anamika ko directly har scene mein laane ki zarurat hi nahi padti, phir bhi wo poore episode par dominate karti hai like my chidokali . Interviews aur text messages ke through uski presence bahut calm aur controlled hai ke bc dara deti hai. Wo na chillati hai, na khud ko justify karti hai — bas observe karti hai. Aur ye silence tumne bahut ache se weaponize kiya hai.

Text message sequence honestly episode ka strongest moment laga mujhe. Meri reading speed khud slow ho gayi, kyunki har message ke baad lagta tha ki agla line aur zyada unsettling hoga. “Forensic boy” aur “I just give them vocabulary” ye kuch ese dialogues hai jo mere dimag me chhap se gaye hai, ye psychological punches lagte hai.

Future interaction r gonna more interesting

Ending ek ajeeb si feeling chhod jaati hai — satisfaction nahi, anticipation. Jaise ye sirf ek murder case nahi, balki ek long psychological chess game ka pehla serious move ho. Ragvi yahan clearly batati hai ki ye story patience maangti hai, aur reward bhi wahi degi.

Patience is n I also waiting

As a reader, mujhe sabse zyada impress ye baat karti hai ki Ragvi ki writing mujhe decide nahi karne de rahi ke galat kon hai. Ye moral discomfort hi is episode ki real strength hai.

I just want things simple becouse Ik simple things r not easy.

Ye episode entertain kam, unsettle jyada karta hai — aur jesa tum likh rahi ho I think uske liye yehi sabse bada compliment banta hai.
Tumhara main moto yahi hai na ke story hamare dimag me utar jaaye aur I think tum sahi track pe ho
Next episode ka wait rahega.
Good luck bestie

Thnks a lot
Keep supporting
in the end bs yhi kahungi
' it's not romance it's psychology '

 

[vihan27]

Engagement is most imp thing btwn writer n reader

This uncertainty remained till end

Future interaction r gonna more interesting

Patience is n I also waiting

I just want things simple becouse Ik simple things r not easy.

Thnks a lot
Keep supporting
in the end bs yhi kahungi
' it's not romance it's psychology '

Bahut sukha sukha sa response tha

 

[RagVi Singh]

Bahut sukha sukha sa response tha

Seriously???

 

[vihan27]

Seriously???

Koi naa... Abhi ke liye manage kar lunga

 

[RagVi Singh]

Koi naa... Abhi ke liye manage kar lunga

Me kuch spoil nhi Krna chahti that's the reason

 

[vihan27]

Me kuch spoil nhi Krna chahti that's the reason

Spoil to karna bhi nhi chahiye... Me to bas.. chal koi naa... Btw Great going

 

[RagVi Singh]

Spoil to karna bhi nhi chahiye... Me to bas..

Bol do incomplete Mt rkho

chal koi naa... Btw Great going

Btwn thnks for ur support otherwise jis trh reaction nhi aa rhe mene story close kr deni thi

 

[vihan27]

Bol do incomplete Mt rkho

Kuch adhura bhi rahna jaruri hai fir se shuruwat karne ke liye...

Btwn thnks for ur support otherwise jis trh reaction nhi aa rhe mene story close kr deni thi

Kahani tum apne liye likh rahi ho na to fir itna kyu sochna... Adult forum pe esi kahani likh rahi hai to guts chahiye kyuki pata hai yaha readers kya padhne aate hai uske baad bhi tumne esa subject choose kiya

 

[RagVi Singh]

Kuch adhura bhi rahna jaruri hai fir se shuruwat karne ke liye...

Achha mene toh esa kabhi nhi suna

Kahani tum apne liye likh rahi ho na to fir itna kyu sochna...

Agr esa hi hota toh me prvt sec me likhti

Adult forum pe esi kahani likh rahi hai to guts chahiye kyuki pata hai yaha readers kya padhne aate hai uske baad bhi tumne esa subject choose kiya

Adult forum ko sirf corn se connect mat kro. For me Adult forum is a platform where adult people boldly discuss n share there view widely on explicit and mature topics

 

[vihan27]

Achha mene toh esa kabhi nhi suna

Jaruri nhi naa ke hame sab kuch pata hi, aaj tujhe nayi baat jan'ne ko milli

Agr esa hi hota toh me prvt sec me likhti

Likh sakti hai but ek writer ke liye sabse important kya hai ke sabse pahle use khud to lagna chahiye naa ke usne kuch acha likha hai, khudko ko sure hona padega... Aur esa to kabhi hoga nhi ke sabko hamara content psnd aaye

Adult forum ko sirf corn se connect mat kro. For me Adult forum is a platform where adult people boldly discuss n share there view widely on explicit and mature topics

Baat teri sahi hai but yaha teri tarah sochne walo ki kami hai naa... Baki tu apni story pe focus kar, acha likh rahi hai aur ummid hai aage aur acha likhegi...