sir ye story ki demand hai...har story ka apna ek plot hota hai aur wo usi base par likhi jaati hai...sir agar ye story romantic hoti to m jaroor wese hi likhta jese aap keh rahe ho... lekin itna aap bhi jaan gaye hoge ye story padhne ke baad ki hero ke man mai apni behan ko lekar pyaar se jyada hawas hai.. to bas mai isi base par ye story aage badha raha hu....btw suggestion ke liye thanku very muchBhai, you are a seasoned writter. When brother and sister talk they will not use vulgar language. However, it is your story so you may continue as you prefer. It was just my suggestion that the conversation be more restrained rather than blunt.
Good luck on your story