Dhansu
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Bhai, you are a seasoned writter. When brother and sister talk they will not use vulgar language. However, it is your story so you may continue as you prefer. It was just my suggestion that the conversation be more restrained rather than blunt.sir m samjha nahi aap kya kehna chahte ho
Bhai, you are a seasoned writter. When brother and sister talk they will not use vulgar language. However, it is your story so you may continue as you prefer. It was just my suggestion that the conversation be more restrained rather than blunt.
Good luck on your story