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◆ Update 1 ◆

Ghani andheri raat thi sunsaan road.... Aise main mumbai se nikli huyi us private bus ka driver sakharam ne highway par door ek car ke paas hath hilate huye ek bande ko dekha aur us khade insan ko dekh kar usne apni gadi ki raftar kam ki aur gadi ek side main roki.....waise to sakharam raat beraat ko kisi ke liye gadi nahi rokta tha lekin band padi huyi car aur ache khase kapde pehne huye us aadmi ko dekh kar usne man main koi doubt nahi aaya aur usne bus roki....

"boss...gadi band pad gayi hai age ke kisi gaon tak lift milegi kya waha ke garage se kisi macanic ko le aaunga.."
us insan ne sakharam se kaha.....

sakharam- ha..ha thik hai chalo chod deta hu dekho ander baithne ki jagah hai kya to nati to yaha cabin main hi baithna padega...

skharam ki baat sun kar us aadmi ko thodi rahat mili usne bus main ander chad kar dekha to uska naseeb acha tha use waha ek seat khali mil gayi..

apne bagal ki seat par kon baitha hai ye usne bus ke light ki mand ujale main dekhne ki koshish ki....uske bagal main kareb 25-26 sal ki ek ladki aankhen band kar ke so rahi thi...usne apne handbag main se shawl bahar nikali aur apne uper lapet kar wo waha baith gaya bahar ki thand ke hisab se gadi main thodi garmi thi......

kuch hi samay main gadi ne fir se raftaar pakar ki....khidkiyo ain se bayanak thandi hawa ander aane lagi...us ladki ye baal us hawa main us ladke ke chehre ke as paas ud rahe the aur us bande ko wo hawa ki thandi sahan nahi ho rahi thi akhir kaar usne majburi main us ladki se kaha...

"aap please wo khidki band kar dengi bohot thand lag rahi hai....."

us ladki ne uski or dkhe bagair ki khidki band ki aur fir se so gayi.....

gadi main ke sabhi lights ab band ho chuke the shayad sabhi passengers so chuke the....bus ka awaj...beech beech main se jane wale truck ka awaz uske lights ki roshni...kahi to bhi thodi si khuli khidki ki gap e aane wali hawa ka awaz sab kuch ek taal main chal raha tha...gadi main ab achi khasi garmi nirman ho gayi thi wo ladka bhi us shawl ko apne sharir ke ird gird majbuti se lapet kar so chuka tha....

kuch teen char ghante beete honge use neend lage huye itne main achanak uski neend tuti...uske hath ko kisi ke thandegaar hath ka sparsh hua tha....uske hath par uske baju main baithi huyi ladki ka hath tha.....

usne ek baar us ladki ki or dekhawo ab bhi neend main hi thi thand ki wajah se uske hath thande pad chuke the...

usne halke se us ladki ka hath utha kar baju main rakh diya..kuch samay baad fir se uski ungliyo ko uske thande hato ka sparsh hua usne aankhen khol kar uski or dekha to wo ab bhi so rahi thi is baar usne apna hath baju main sarka liya....

kuch samay baad fir se uski ungliyo ko us ladki ke hath ka sparsh hua usne fir se uski or dekha to to bagal se jane wale ek truck ke headlight us ladki ke chehre par padi to ek pal ko to wo ladka seham gaya......

'wo uski or hi dekh rahi thi......

matlab ye sare sparsh jaan-bujh kar the.....

is baar wo bhi piche hatne wala nahi tha usne apna hath uske hath ke niche sarka diya.....us ladki ke hato ki ungliya us ladke ke gaam hath se chipak gayi.....

wo thanda spash us ladke ke sharir par ek thandi laat faila raha tha..uska hath na chahte huye bhi apne sharir ki garmi uske hath ko dene ki koshish kar raha tha....

kuch samay ke baad uske apne hath ki pakad dheeli ki...usne uska hath chod kiya...ab uski ungliya uske manga se lekar khande tak najukta se ghoom rahi thi ....aur wo sparsh us ladke se sharir par kate la raha tha....uske kaan garam ho gaye the..itne garam ki usne apna dusra garam hath kaan par rakha to wo bhi use thanda laga.....

wo is sukh ke adhin ho gaya tha bus ko lagne wale jhatke khadkhadahat use kuch bhi mehsoos nahi ho raha tha....us ladki ke bas ungliyo se sparsh se hi us ladkle ke sharir ka har ek snayu uttejit ho gaya tha.......

achanak gadi ko kisi cheej ka jordar dhakkar baith aur wo ek side khadi ho gayi....bus ka xcel toot gaya tha....jab gadi main ki lights jali tab us ladke ki tandri tooti aur usne apna hath baju main kiya....

Cleaner ne gadi main aa ke ghoshna ki ke gadi ko thik hone main thoda waqt lagega...uski baat sun kar adhe log to wapis so gaye aur baki ke log guthka cigarette ke liye niche utar gaye.....
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Badiya update brother....shuruat achi hai ladka bahut amir khandan se lagata hai...or bus me anjaan ladki jaan bujh kar uske saath aisa kar rhi hai...shayad us ladki ko pta lag gya hoga ...ladka bahut rich family se hai...dekhte hai aage kya hai..
 
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* Update 2 *

achanak gadi ko kisi cheej ka jordar dhakkar baith aur wo ek side khadi ho gayi....bus ka xcel toot gaya tha....jab gadi main ki lights jali tab us ladke ki tandri tooti aur usne apna hath baju main kiya....

Cleaner ne gadi main aa ke ghoshna ki ke gadi ko thik hone main thoda waqt lagega...uski baat sun kar adhe log to wapis so gaye aur baki ke log guthka cigarette ke liye niche utar gaye.....
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waha baithi huyi wo ladki bhi niche utar gayi aur waha se uthe waqt uske sharik ka us ladke ko hua hua sparsh us ladke ke sharir par ek bijli lehar dauda gaya..us ladki ke sharir se aane wali mand khushboo uske sare senses ko uttejit kar rahi thi...

usne khidki main se jhuk kar dekha ki wo ladki kaha ja rahi hai to usne paya ke raste ke dusri or thodi door kuch lights dikh rahi thi usne waha ke tubelight ke ujale main waha ka naam padha..'sujit lodge'

us ladki ne ek baar uski or palat kar dekha aur fir piche na dekhte huye aage chalne lagi...ab us ladke ke man main chal bichal suru ho gayi thi...wo uth kar khada hua aur niche aa kar cleaner ko pucha..

"andajan kitna time lagega boos isse thik hone main??" usne cleaner se pucha..

"kareeb ek dedh ghanta to lagega hi sir.."us cleaner ne jawab diya

"acha thik hai main hu yahi.." aisa bol kar wop us ladki ke piche piche jane laga..

vatavaran main mahol main achi khasi thandi thi lekin tezz hawaye ruk gayi thi sare jhad ab stabdh ho gaye the..usne asmaan main ek najar dali to chand ab badlo ke piche chip gaya tha....asman bhar aaya tha mano kisi bhi pal uske uper gir jayega...

wo ab bhi bagair piche dekhe chal rahi thi..

street lights ki rosni main us ladke ni narah us ladki ke pure sharir par fir rahi thi..sudaul badan...sahi jagah aaya hua sahi aakar...uska dhayan khud ki or kheech raha tha..aur wo uski or khicha ja raha tha..

wo lodge main gayi aur waha ke counter ke paas ja kar khadi ho gayi..

kaan-topi, mufler odha hua counter par ka aadmi use dekh kar bade hi alas ke sath utha

"bhaiya meri bus band ho gayi hai aur ek do ghante thik hogi aisa lagta nahi hai...meri tabiyat bhi thik nahi hai saise main kuch ghanto ke liye room chahiye thi" dur khadi band bus ki or ishara karte huye us ladki ne kaha..

us counter par ke aadmi main drawer main se ek chabi nikali aur us ladki ko di aur uski details likhne ke liye ek ragister uske samne kiya ki tabhi uski najar mand ujale main darwaje ke paas aate huye us ladke par padi to use sara majra samajh main aa gaya usne ragistar band kiya aur chehre par chader odh kar fir se so gaya..

wo ladki ab seedhiyo se uper ja rahi thi aur wo ladka uske piche piche...

'103' room ke samne aake wo ruke us ladki ne apne paas ki chabi se darwaja khola aur dono ander aane ke baad usne darwaja band kar diya..ab wo us ladki ko pure prakash main dekh raha tha uski aankhon main kuch alag hi attraction tha jo us ladke ko apni or kheech raha tha iitna ki use lag raha tha ke kski aatma us ladki se milan ke liye uske sharir se bahar aa jayegi...uska gala sukha pad gaya tha...chati dhadak rahi thi..tab us ladki ne apna hath uski or badhaya...
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"chalo sab....baitho gadi main.....sab aa gaye na?? cleaner ne ek baar charo taraf najar daudayi..ravangi ke pehle usne sare passengers ko moja....to seaqt no D 5-6 khali tha...

"ab ye kaha chale gaye" kuch tang hote huye cleaner fir se niche utra lekin dhundne par bhi use wo log nahi mile

"are wo waha us lodge ki or jate huye dikhe the waha dekhlo hai kya to" ek passenger ne kaha..

cleaner us dono ko galiya bakte huye us lodge main gaya counter par ka banda gehri neend main tha..

"maa ki aankh...mar gaya kya ye?" usne us bande ko hila hila ke jagaya

"yaha kareeb 1 ghante pehle koi aaya tha kya" cleaner ne un dono ka discription dete huye pucha

"ha sir yaha do log aaye the ek ladka aur ek ladki waha uper hai room no 103" usne seedhiyo ki or ishara karte huye kaha aur wapis se chader odh li...

"lo hum waha pareshan ho rahe hai aur yaha bhakta hi kuch chal raha hai" cleaner do do seedhiya chadhta hua uper aaya room no 103 ka light chalu tha..

"o sir ho gaya hoga to chalo gadi tayar hai...chalo madem nahi to maro yahi hum nikal rahe hai.."cleaner waha chilla raha tha lekin ander se koi awaz nahi aa raha tha...

"thik hai raho yahi gadi nikal rahi hai" wo jhatpatate huye niche utarne hi waha tha ke usi samay wo counter par ka aadmi uper aaya

"kya hua kyu chilla rahe ho jao na nahi aana hoga unko"

usne halke se darwaje ko kaan laga to ander se koi awaz nai aa raha tha nahi koi halchul ho rahi thi usne bhi do teen baar darwaja khatkhataya lekin koi responce nahi

"iski maa ka kahi bhag to nahi gaye main soya tha tabi"

"are aise kaise bhagenge gadi to yahi hai" cleaner..

"kuch to gadbad hai" itna bol kar wo niche bhaga room ki dusri chabi lane ke liye...

door se bus ke horn ka awaz sunai de raha tha

us aadmi ne apni layi huyi chabi se room ka darwaja khola aur samne ka drishya dekh kar dono ki saanse hi ruk gayi...apan jo dekh rahe hai uspar un dono ka wiswas hi nahi ho raha tha..

samne palang par us ladki ki adhi nangi lash padi thi...uske sharir ki chir fad ki huyi thi mano jaise kisi takiye ko fada ho............
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Another badhiya update.....lagta hai ladke ne hi ladki ko maar kar bhag gya...dekhte hai aage kya hota hai..
 
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Punnu said:
Badiya update brother....shuruat achi hai ladka bahut amir khandan se lagata hai...or bus me anjaan ladki jaan bujh kar uske saath aisa kar rhi hai...shayad us ladki ko pta lag gya hoga ...ladka bahut rich family se hai...dekhte hai aage kya hai..
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Another badhiya update.....lagta hai ladke ne hi ladki ko maar kar bhag gya...dekhte hai aage kya hota hai..
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shukriya bhai aur late reply ke liye sorry yaaro
 
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