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APANI GAADI - TAAD KI GAADI (Part-2)

AB AAGE.....

" Ae Tittu, ehva se chala ja apne laundan ko leke, pahile se hi batay deta hu, fir naa boliye ki hum pahile se na bole, agar kachhu ho jaaye to"

Subah ke peher ho chala tha, abhi suraj nikalne me waqt tha, par aasman me chhata bikheri laalima sanket de chuki thi, ek naye ullash ki, nayi ummido ki.
Chidiyon ki chakchakahat, murge ki baang, gaaye aur bhaiso ka rambhana, aur mand mand si chalti thandi hawayein.....Viraan dil ko thandak dene ke liye kafi tha.
Gaon me chahal pahal suru ho chuka tha jo aam baat thi is antaral me. Gaaon ke log apne kheto ki or nikal chale the jo kal sandhya ko adhuri reh gyi thi use pura karne.
Cycle ke pichhe latkaye do bade bade doodh ke dabbe aur kuch baltani handle pr bhi, ghar ghar dene ko, sadko se hi awaaz lagaye doodh wala cycle ko nachaye ja raha tha.
Dukaano me kahi kisi film ke gaane radio pe baj rhe the to kahi charchayein baithi thi, aur charchaon ka chunav akhabaar ke paano se hi hota, aur kabhi kabhi to muth bhedh bhi ho jaati jab viparit vichaarein takrati to. Bina kisi sair pair ke charchaon pe bahas baaji...aur charchayein bhi aisi 'Neeta ambaani ke pass duniya ka sabse mehanga phone hai......Riya chakarvarti hi kaatil hai?, insaaf milna chahiye! ...CBI wale mile huye hai mai to kehta hu!?' ....koi kuch kehta to koi kuch....sirf baatein hi hoti, kaam naa hota to yahi hota......bematalbi!

Par in sabse dur gaon ke school ke pichhe, Saaf maidan se pata chal raha tha ki yaha school se chhutne ke baad bachhe aksar yahi hud dang machaya karte ho. Charo tarf se kantile tarein jo kahi kahi se ukhadi jaa chuki thi, usse karib chaar ya sadhe chaar bisse ko gheri gayi thi, jisme abhi fasalo ka bona baaki tha.....

Par abhi to vaha Jung ka maidan bichha tha, aur ye jung Vishya yudhh ( world war) se kam naa tha.
Sarkari school ke dress pehne , Basta pith pe laade to kuch haatho me liye. Solah- satrah ladke, jo barabar do tukdo me bate huye the, sirf do gaj ka hi fasla tha unme.
Umar jyada kisi ki na rahi hogi, yahi koi nau ya barah ke bich hi hogi. Pr Apne aapko Samraat Ashok se kam na samjh rahe the. Badale aur krodh se unki aankhein laal hui padi thi aur saansein gehri. Muthhi bhhichi aur shirt ke color uthi thi unki.

"Naa to kaa kar lega...umm?" Tittu ne apni aankhe Raju ke aankho me daal, daanto ko piste huye, usse ek ya dedh feet ke samip aa gya.

"U to pata chal jaayi, jab hoyi, aur e humar maidan hai, samjha ki naahi, babuji se keh, phikwa dunga, poolia se!"
Satta ka lobh, har kisi ko hoti hai aur uski taakat ki bhi, aur usko pane keliye koi sa bhi kadam galat ya sahi nahi hota. Unke najrome khastor pr, jinke pehle se hi haath range ho aur sath me mauka bhi, to der nn lagti dusro ke kandhe par banduk rakh goli chalane se.
Aur yahi haal tha Raju ka. Baap uska pradhaan, aur Tittu se dusmani to pehle hi din se suru ho gayi thi, jab Tittu ne uski kaksha me baithne wali bench hathiya li thi. Khoon khaul gya tha Raju ka us samay, par kiya kuch nahi, khoon ka ghut pi kar reh gya tha bas.
Par aaj jab baat aa gayi, uske hi jamin pe kabje ki to, usse ab naa ruka gya. Paani sar se upar jaa chuki thi, krodh ka toofan charam pe tha, aur badale ki bhaawna bijali si kadkne ko ho chali thi, aur bas bari thi Barasne ki.

Par apna Tittu bhi kam naa tha. Vo vo tha jo Sher ki maand me ghush, sher ke panje se Boti chhin, kha jaye, aur boti vahi fek, chal de.

"Haath laga ke to dikha, fir haath dundhte firiyo, langadate huye, ek pair pe" itna sunn, Raju ke andar ki jawalamukhi futh padi. Usne apne hath ki muthi ko khola jo nn jaane kab se bandhi thi.
Aur usne apne dahine haath ko utha, Tittu ke gaal pe jad diya. Gore gaal laal ho chuki thi, gulabi nase ubhar gyi thi, kaan laal aur aankho me kuch bunde bhi. Sann ki awaz aane lagi thi kaano se, hothon se halke khoon ka rishaaw suru ho gya tha jo uske thoddi ki or beh niche jamin ko girne ko ho chali thi.

Sab itna achhanak hua, kisi ko kuch nn samjh aaya. Isse pehle sabhi kuch karte Tittu ne aao dekha nn taw Jamin se uth, daud, Tittu ne apne baaju ko Raju ke charo taraf se gher liya aur apne sang use jordar dhakka diya.
Dono ab jamin pe pade huye the. Sabhi ladke kabhi ek dusre ko dekhte to kabhi Raju aur Tittu ko.

Tittu uth, uske upar baith , do se teen mukke jad diye mooh pe. Jo haal Tittu ka tha ab usse badtar Raju ka ho gaya tha. Raju ke nathuno se khoon nikalna suru ho gya tha, gaal bhi halke fat gaye the.

"Maaro be saalo, dekh ka rahe ho." Raaju ke itna bolte hi Do tuk me bate solah-satrah ladke bhid gye ek dusre se...
Raaju ne usko dhaaka de niche jamin pe gira diya...aur uth khada hua. Bagal me padi 'Taad ki gaadi' jo Tittu ki hi thi, utha li, aur de mara Tittu ke pith pe...Tittu vahi jaamin pe karaah ke reh gya. Dard se uski aawaz bhi aani band ho gyi thi. Pasine se kapdo pe lagi mitti ab gili ho chuki thi.... Aur Raju ka bhi haal koi alag nn tha, shirt ke upari do batton tut chuki thi uski....

Do tukdon me ladke apas me koharaam machaye pade the... koi apne baste se maar rha tha, to koi apne chappalo se waar karta, jo milta usse saamne wale dushman par dhaawa bolne me jara bhi hichkichahat na karte...paas pade mitti ke dhelo se bhi hamala suru ho chuka tha ab to...baat bahut aage nikal chuki thi...

Raaju tittu ki or badha, hath me liye 'Taad ki gaadi'. Tittu abhi bhi haaf raha tha, dard ke maare usse saanse bhi naa li jaa rahi thi, aankhe bojhil ho chali thi, Jameen pe ghutno ke bal baitha, hatho se jameen ka shara liye huye. Jab usne apni aankhe ghumayi to Raju ko ek baar fir tuti huyi 'Taad ki gaadi' se waar karta hua dekha to. Usne apni aankhe mund li, uski himmat tut chuki thi, jaise uski Taad ki gaadi ki.

"Ae...ehva kaa ho raha hai, abhi batata hu sabko". Master ji ki aawaz sun Tittu ne aankhe kholi to sabhi ladke bhaagte firte huye nazar aaye, baste aur chappale vahi jamin pe chode huye, kuch apne ghar ki or to kuch gaon ke siwaan ( khet) ki or, aur unme Raju bhi bhaagta hua nazar aaya.

Vo bas tuktuki lagaye dekhe hi jaa raha tha, kabhi samne se aate hath me chhadi liye master ji ko to kabhi vo apne 'Taad ki gaadi' ko dekhta, jiski dandi tut chuki thi, jo ab ek chakke ki hi bas reh gayi thi, ve gaadi, jaise vo tha, Akela........!!
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Kramashah......
 
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nice update ..school ke bachcho ka jhagda mast dikhaya hai ?...tittu to bach gaya ,nahi to dobara taad ki gaadi ka fatka khana hi tha bhala ho master aa gaya ...
a master kya karega tittu ke saath ?...
Ab to ye agle bhag me hi pata chalega ki...Master ji uske sath kya karenge...
Aur Sukriya comments ke liye.
 

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Mere pyare Dosto,
Main 'APANI GAADI- TAAD KI GAADI' ko abhi yahi APLPVIRAAM dena chahunga...
Abhi waqt hai naye ehsaas ko, kalam ki takat se use pirone ki, bhawanao ke laharo ko sametne ki...aur, aur waqt hai apne soch ko naye disha ki or lejane ki.....SURAJ ki or,.....Roshani ki or...

Ek nayi kahani jald hi pesh hogi, aapke samaksh...'SIMMI BANAM SIMARAN -DIKHAWE KI ZINDAGI'.....
..
Umeed hai aapko pasand aayegi...
Dhanywaad?
 
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♡♡♡ CHATURTH LAGHU KATHA ♡♡♡

SIMMI BANAM SIMRAN - DIKHAWE KI ZINDAGI (Part-1)


' Dikhaawe me jine wale vyakti, dusro ke samne apne aapko ko uchh strr pe jarur le jaate hai, pr sirf unhe pta hota hai, kya ve sarvoch hai!?...Ye ehsaas vaisa hi hai jaise udhaar ki jindagi ! ve bhale hi sina taan, apne aapko upari soch aur aazad khayali maante ho, pr andar se kya ve aazaad hote hai? Aur Kya dusro ki soch ke gulam ve nahi hote?
Hriday me shanka rehti,aur saamne wale vyaktiva ke vicharo ka anookul prakritiya ka intezar karte! Aur aise me kya ve aazadi se kuch bhi karne me saamarth hote hai?

Thik vaisa hi, jaise dhero saundarya samagri ki parte, nikhaar deti hai, aur badle me unhe milti hai dhero tarife. kya sach me ve unke hukdaar hai? Aur kya ve isse sehmat hai ya fir khush!?..... nhi bilkul nahi,!

Aksar aise log akelepan ka shikar hote hai, sabse dur aur ekant me dukhi! Viran saa!

Na apne man ki karne ki aazadi, apne vyktitva ko bhul jaate hai, jo ve asal me hai. Dusro ki nakal kar khud ko kahi dur andhakaar me dhakel dete hai.......aur aise me jine wali jindagi ko Dikhawe ki jindagi kehte hai !
Jo gehre andhakaar aur kaale dhooyein ka dhoondh hai.
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"No. I'm going right now ...... I..I have lot of stuff that time, please..Sorry for that." Simmi kuch pareshan si lag rahi thi, aur ye koi pehli baar nahi tha, vo akasar hi aise bechain si ho jaati thi, aksar uske saanse tej, ghutan si hone lagti thi, Ac me pasine aana, use aur kamzor kar deti thi, mann uska ashant sa ho jaata tha, jab jab ve apne saheliyo ke sath bahar aaya karti thi...

"Simmi, are you alright. Is any thing serious, I can help you, tell me!? And please open the door." Jab bahut waqt guzarne ke bawazud, Simmi wapas nahi aayi bathroom se to Aliya ne usse bathroom ke darwaaze ko khataka kr kholne ko keh rehi thi.
Mehenge, shandaar aur chamchamati Italian marbal aur tiles, jo bichhi thi diwaro aur zamin pe, Tubelight ki roshani me kisi chaand ke roshani se chamak rahe the, aur uspe bani khoobsurat aakritiya, use aur bhi chamkila banaye huye thi. Vaha har vo chije maujood thi jinhe apna banane ki kosis me nn jaane uske maalik ne kitno ka hakk chhina hoga, kitno ki rooh tadpi hogi, aur najaane kitno ki baduayein unme beawaaz gunzati hongi.

Darwaaze ke daayi or bade se sisse me khud ko Simmi nn jaane kab se apne aapko ghoore jaa rahi thi, ankh me anshuon ke sath, laal doriya bhi nazar aa rhi thi, aur kajal thoda failta hua nazar sa aa rha tha.

Laal rang ki mehangi paschimi dress, bina baah ke bade gale ka tha jo gale se ghutno tak hi rahi thi, jo kahi kahi se paardisha bhi thi, jisse uske kuch andruni halke gulaabi gore ang ka muyaana asaani se ho rha tha.
Hotho pe Gaadhi laal lipstik, aankho me mote kaajal, lashesh ke saath, kaano me chaandi ke chamak ki ear rings jinme laal rang ke motiyon se jadan kiya gya tha. Pairo me unchi edi wali laal rang ki sandle jo uske Dress se male khhati thi.

Chehre pe jaadui saundarya samgarri ki parte, jo chehre ko halka gulabi banaye rakha tha.

Pr phir bhi vo aaj thi kuch udaas itne sajjo sajawat ke baavjud.
Akasar uske saath ho jaaya krta tha.
Maathe pe pasina, gale ka sukhna, hotho ka thartharana, sharir me kampan, ve bahut jaldi hi ghabara jaati thi...aur aaj bhi kusch uske sath aise hi ho rha tha,
Par aaj baat kuch aur thi,
............

"Sorry Aliya, Im not feeling well right now, I think i have to go!."
Simmi ne Bathroom se nikal , kamare me aati hai jaaha uske sabhi saathi maujood the.

Nazarein kisi se bhi na mila rahi thi, vajah thi ghridha...khud ke liye ya viparit sabke liye, ye tay karna muskil tha.

Vo apni gulabi rang ki ladies purse dudhne ke liye najre idhar udhar daudai. Simmi ko purse ko dundhta dekh Sam ne uske purse ko utha kr use diya jo uske Sam ke bagal me hi mehngi sofe pe tha.
"Ohk, so if you already decide that you'll not stay at here tonight then, i'll drop you at yours door step!" Sam ne ek achhe premi ki tarah use apni mansha jatayi, andar se bedhia ho ya na, bs usse pata hai ya fir kisi aur ko bhi!

"No, not needed, but thanks for asking me"
Simmi ne apna purse sam ke hathon se jath se liya aur ek baar sabko najaro se dekh, vo bahar ki tarf nikal padi.

Do manjile ghar ke saamne bada sa bagicha jo haro taraf se solah ya athharah feet unchi deewar jispe katile taare bichhayi gyi thi, jo pure ghar ko ghere huye thi, bagiche me tarah tarah ke manmohak phool, videsi ghass aur marbal ki fauhare lagyae gye the.
Ghar ki or jaate huye road pe do mehange chaar pahiye vahan aur ek adhunik do pahiya bhi lagi huyi thi. Aur road se khatam hota 20 feet unchi badi si pile aur laal rango ka Darwaaja jisme ek chhota darwaaj bhi bana gya tha, jaha do choukidar gehre nile rang ki wardi pehne pehle se hi mustaid the.

Simmi ko aate huye dekh, dono choukidaar ne salam kiya aur chhoti wali darawaja khola.

Jaise hi simmi bahar aayi, mano jaan me jaan aayi, ab usko kuch sukun sa mil rha tha.
Aaj usse apne aap se ghinn aane lagi thi, aaj use apna hi ye saundarya aur sajjo sajawat, use sabkuch usse utar fek dena chahti thi. Use aaj amiro se nafarat ho chali thi aur apne aap se bhi.
Aakhir vo bhi to aisa hi chahti thi, mehenge kapde maehnge sringaar samagriya aur mehangi gaadiya.... akhir usski ichhayein bhi to yahi thi... aur aaj vo jis haalaat me thi, ye sabhi uske ichhao ki kaali sachai thi... fir amiro ka inme dosh kaha se...aakhir bhediyo ke saamne boti feki jaaye to ve use sungh mooh to naa fer lenge nn...jaahire hai apne hawas se bhari nukilo danto se nochenge hi...

Us Boti ke haalaat se kuch kam naa thi simaran ki.


Simmi jiska asal parichay Simaran preet kaur tha.... par usse ye naam naa jachta.

(Inside Bunglow)

" So Priya, Is that your plan? She left... and you made me promise that tonight she's laid on my bed?" Sam jaise aag babula sa ho gya tha, apne shikar ko uske haatho se ret ki tarh fisalte huye jaate dekha to. Kai mahino ke mehnat ko aise barbaad hota dekh uska sabr tut sa gya.
Apni anaitik aur nich soch ko anazaam naa de sakne se vanchit reh gya.

Simmi ke aise yu chale jaane se use tanik bhi der naa lagi pta chalne me ki, chiddiya udd chuki hai, reh gayi hai to bas uski parchai, aur mann me krodh.


Kramasah...
 
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सर्वप्रथम इन अनुपम कृतियों के लिए हार्दिक अभिनन्दन।
उस निच्छल बचपन की बहुत याद आती है इस अवसरवादी संसार में।
पुरानी स्मृतियाँ को पुनः याद दिलाने के लिए बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद।
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Dhanyawaad aapka... aur ye meri khushkismati hogi ki meri lekhani ke jariye...aapko apni khushmayi purani smrityo ko punh jine ka awasar mila...
nice story ...
Dhanyawaad bhai...bas aise hi saath banaye rakhiye...
 

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Hello Everyone :hello:
We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of Xforum "The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC)..

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Iske baare Mein thoda aapko btaadun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kissi bhi prefix ki short story post kar shaktey ho jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words takk ho shakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap Iss contest Mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa Rupp dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko pura Xforum dekhega ye ek bahot acha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories k liye kyunki USC Ki stories ko pure Xforum k readers read kartey hain.. Or jo readers likhna nahi caahtey woh bhi Iss contest Mein participate kar shaktey hain "Best Readers Award" k liye aapko bus karna ye hoga ki contest Mein posted stories ko read karke unke Uppar apne views dene honge.

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