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Thank you ... For your thoughts... ye pehla update tha jise post karte wakt hum naa post karne ki soch rahe the ... par likhne me bahut time chala jata hai isiliye kar diya...Acha update hai har update me utar chadav hote hai tabhi to usse agle update me maja aayega
BSS bhai thoda clear kro ye jitu aur pari hai kon
Baanki rahi Baat paridhi aur jitendra ki to Agar story aapne dhyan se padhi hai to aapko itna andaza to hoga dono bhai behan hain....
Hum khud inki love story ko clear karna chahte hain.....par scene aisa hai ki is story me jo v characters hain un sabki love story ki shuruaat aur ant sab likhte likhte mind me aa ja rahi hai hai.... Par paridhi aur jitendra ki love story is difficult to write bcz ye dono lead hain story ke
.. agar inki love story ki shuruaat thodi v utpatang hui to puri story hi kharab ho sakti hai.... isiliye Ho sakta hai kuch time lag jaaye..
