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Thriller khaamoshiya...Ek Rahasya (Completed)

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Ankita ji..... Bahut khoob :applause:

Ek Bollywood movie thi nana patekar ki.... Bluff master... Yahan bhi kahani kuchh vaisi hi lag rahi hai....

Na varsha psycho hai, na arun naukri karne aya hai.... Na Rajvir bechara hai
Lekin dikh yahi raha hai...
Rajvir is movie ka writer, director aur producer sab kuchh hai... Varsha lead role mein, arun supporting cast me.... Aur jaal bichhaya ja raha hai villain ko fasane ka... Jisne nisha ka murder kiya..... Killer lady... Aanchal

Dharmesh parallel investigation kar raha tha... Jaal me fasne se pahle machhli ko chaukanna na kar de isliye use rajvir ne apne sath lagakar ghumana shuru kar diya.... Jab dharmesh fir dimag chalane laga to haddi weapon ka clue dekar use delhi bhej diya aur apne hi khabri se arun ke pas pahuchne aur rukne ko majbur kar diya...
Ab dharmesh ke pas Vaishali ki photo hai 5 sal purani... Wo ab use pahchan nahin sakta..... Samne wale ghar me rahte huye wo Vaishali nahi varsha hai.... Baki uske dimag ko concentrate hone se rokne ke liye arun ki non-stop bakchodi....

Keep it up
बिल्कुल सही कहा आपने । मेरा भी थिंकिंग यही था । राजवीर , अरूण और वैशाली तीनों मिलकर निशा के क़ातिल का पर्दाफाश करने की कोशिश कर रहे हैं ।
 
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आप को सैल्यूट है अंकिता जी । क्या गजब की कहानी है और साथ में अद्भुत लेखनी । कभी स्टोरी के माध्यम से दहशत में डाल देती हो तो कभी हंसा हंसा कर लोटपोट करा देती हो ।
हर एक किरदार का रोल शानदार है । अद्भुत लेखनी । पात्रों के बीच जो भी संवाद होता है वो बिल्कुल वास्तविक जैसा ही लगता है ।
इस अपडेट में वैशाली ने उस लफंगे की जो हालत की है वो तो पढ़कर मेरे रोंगटे खड़े हो गए। क्या गजब का किरदार गढ़ा है वैशाली उर्फ बर्षा का ।
धर्मेश और अरूण के संवाद ने हंसने पर मजबूर कर दिया । कामेडी लिखना या कामेडी करना सबसे मुश्किल होता है । वो भी शानदार तरीके से कर रही है ।
 

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Dharmesh subuah subha delhi ki flight pakad leta hai...or sare raste bahut kuch uske dimak me chl rha tha...use to yhi lg rha tha ki rajveer ne jaanbujhkr vaishali ko bchane ke lie usse ab tk ye sb chhipaya....

"Vaishali delhi me hai...prr wo whaa hi kyuu gyi......kyaa plan hai uska...yaa fir bs wo us neta ko hi maarne gyi thi...kyaa raaz hai isme....ab us neta ke baad kisko wo apna shikar bnane wali hai..."
Bht sare swaal or uljhno ke sath dharmesh khoya hua tha....

Delhi...

Krib 15min baad..
"Bhaiya...plss apna phon dikhayege...mujhe ek importent call krni hai..."
Varsha sadak pr jaate ek ldke se phon mangti hai...
Ldka-jiii...lijiye.
Varsha noumber dial krti hai-hello sir...mai kajal bol rhi hu...

"Kon kajal"
Varsha-sir...wo....
"Achha to tumhara naam kaajal hai...mai bs aaa rha hu..."
Varsha-sir plssss 15min laate aaiyega...meri frdn ki mom ki tbiyt khrab hai...thoda time lg rha hai...

"Saleee tere nkhre bahut hai"
Varsha-please sir...
"Thik hai...thik hai..."
Or varsha ke honto pr ek katil muskaan aajati hai ....

Krib 30min baad wo ldka aata hai...
Varsha whi khdi milti hai...
Ldka-ye lo 5lakh rupey ..
Varsha usse pese le leti hai...
Varsha-chalna kaha hai...
Ldka-yha hmara farmhouse hai....
Varsha-wha to nokr honge na...
Ldka-wha koi nhi hai...
Varsha chup ho jaati hai...

Ldka-tumne abhi tk apna muh nhi dikhaya...
Varsha-muh kya...ab sb dekh lijiyega...
Ldka-hahah...sahi baat hai...wese aaj se phle kiya hai...bf ke sth ya...

Varsha-nahi sir...
Ldka-wowww...great...mja aayega...
Or dono farmouse pr aajate hai...
Ldka lock kholkr varsha ko andr le jaata hai...

Varsha hr jagah ko achhi tarah
se dekh rhi thi...kyki use camera ka bhi dr tha...pr wha koi camera nahi tha...
Farmhouse kàafi bda tha...us ldko ko koi dr tha nhi kuki wha koi nhi tha...
Varsha-sir aap kitne pdhe likhe hai...
Lkda-pdhai likhai kmaane ke liye ki jaati hai...bht pesa hai hmare paas kya krna pdkr...

Varsha-biilkul bhi nhi..
Ladka-phli class me teacher ne ek thppd maar diya tha...saale ko bht peeta ...tbse naam kt gya school se...mene uske bad kbhi school ki shakal nhi dekhi..
Varsha-wese pdhai likhai bs kmaane ke lie nhi...or bhi kai jagah kaam ati hai...maan lijiye apko kuch btana hai kisi ko...to kaise btayege...
Ldka-uske liye bol skte hai na...

Ldka varsha ko banho me lene k lie aage bdhta hai...
Jaise hi wo varsha ko touch krne wala hota hai...
Varsha ek dm uska hath pakad leti hai...
Ladka-kyaa hua...
Varsha-muje khun khraabe se dr lgta hai...
Ladka-dekho...phli baar me blood to niklega hhi...
Varsha-drd bhi hoga...
Ladka-haa drd bhi hoga...prr bad me mjaa aayega...
Varsha-pakka na...
Ladka-ekdm pkka yaar...experiance hai...
Varsha uske pkde hue hath ko achank mod deti hai...
Ldka chilla pdta hai...

"Aaahhh...oye kya kr rhi hai.....
Varsha hath chhodke ek jordar mukka uske muh pe marti hai...
Ldka mukka pdte hi thoda piche ki taraf ho jaata hai...

Ldka-oyee pagal ho gyi hai kya...
Or wo ldka varsha ko marne ko hota hai...
Varsha uske hath pkd leti hai or ek orr mukka us ldke ke muh pr pdta hai.....
Ab us ldke ko gussa aajaja hai.....or varsha ki taraf bdhta hai...

Lekin varsha furti se uske war krne se phle hi uski pet me ek laat maarti hai...
Wo ldka drd se presan ho jaata hai...
Varsha uske sr ko pakadti hai...or sr ko niche ki trf kheechke apna gutna uske sr prr maarti hai...

Ye war esa tha ki ldke ka sr chkra gya tha...
Varsha ab tk ek word bhi nhi boli thi...bs use maare jaa rhi thi...

Ladka-teriiii to...saleee....or wo varsha ko mukka marna chahta hai...lekin varsha niche beth jaati hai...orr achank us ldke ko ek mukka uske private paart prr pdta hai...
Ab wo ldka ekdm dheela pd jaata hai...
Ladka niche beth jaata hai...
Varsha hath se ishara krti hai-"uthh"
Ladka drd se tdpta hua-kon hai tu...kya chahti hai...

Varsha-uthhh....phle ye dikha tujhme kitna dm hai....comon yrrr...ek ldki se maar kha rha hai...comon uth...
Ldka -tujhe teri mot laayi hai yha bulakr
Ldka is baar uthkr varsha ki taraf bdhta hai...lekin varsha ek kich uski jangh pr maarti hai ...

Sport shoes ki vajh se ldke ko bahut jaada jor ki pdi...wo whi beth gya...

Varsha-kaafi hai drd yaa or du...
Ldka kuch nhi bolta bs apni jangho pr hath rkhe betha rahta hai....
Varsha jeans se apni belt nikalti hai..
Ladka-kon hai tu...kyaa kr rhi hai ye...tujhe pese diye hai mene...
Varsha-to mene kaha pese free me liye...ye pese mai drd ...khun...pseeena dekar hi lungi...okaay

Ladka ke mn me ab thoda sa dr paida hone lgta hai...
Ldka-hai kon tu...janti hai mai kon hu...kiska beta hu mai....

Varsha-jb tere bap se baat ki to thoda thik lga...agr wo tere jaise hota to tum dono baap beto ko aaaj jaan se maar deti...
Ldki-kyaaaa...kyaaa kah rhi hai tu...wo mla hai...yha ke...mrwa denge tujhe
Vaishali ke hath me ab belt thi

"Hahahahaha...mrne se mai nhi drti....tum drte ho...tera baap drta hai...khair wo bechara achha lga...islie bs tujhe laaayi yha...ab bol kaise marna pasand krega...
Ladka-saaali...

Varsha ko gussa aajata hai...
Varsha-hrr baat prr gali........bht gaaliya jheli mene teri...lekin tb mjbur thi....mn to kr rha tha ki usi wkt teri jubaan kaat lu...lekin tu fikar mt kr....aajke bad tu kisi ko gaali nhi dega...smjha..

Or vaishali usko belt se maarna shuru kr deti hai...
Ladka bilbila uthta hai.....
Belt kbhi uski peeth pr ldti hai to kbhi uske kandhe pr...kbhi pet pr to kbhi haath prr

Ab ldka smjh gya tha ki ye esi wesi ldki nhi hai...
Ldka-chhod do...muje...pese rkhko tum...jaane do mujhe

Varsha bina kuch bole bs maare jaa rhi thi...kmsekm 2min lgatar belt ki maar se ldka tadap uthta hai...

Ldke ki shirt taar taar ho jaati hai...or belt ke nishaan pure shreer pr pd jaate hai..
Varsha uske paas beth jaati hai...

Varsha-shhitttt yrrr...ek glti ho gyi...
Ldka drd ki vajah aah aah kiye jaa rha tha..
Varsha-ghar se namak lekar aana chahiye tha ....ese me tere jkhmo prr namak lgaati to kitna mja aata na...
Ladka rota hua-kon hai tu...kuu kr rhi hai ye sb...
Varrsha-maza....khun dekhne me...khun krne me...hath todna ...per todna in sbme muje mzaa aata hai.....

Varsha khadi hokr-ab tk 15murder kr chuki hu...tu 16va hoga..
Ab ldka ke hosh ud jaate hai...
Ldka haklaata hua-kkkk...kyaaa...muje maarogi tum...
Varsha-haaa...bahut din se koi mil nh rha tha..av tu dikha kal muje...socha tujhe hi tpka daalu...thanks yrrr...mujse milne k lie..

Ladka drta hua-prrr mene kiya kya hai....
Varsha-lagta hai...belt ki maar ka asr kuch km ho gya....orr maaru kya ..
Ldka-nhi...plsss nahi...
Varsha-hmmm to kraahta hua baat kr.
Ladka-aaah aaah....tum ..aah mujee ...aah kuu marna...aaah chahti aah ho aahh....
Varsha-thats good...agr tera karaahna band hua ...toomuje lgega ki tera drd km ho gya...or muje belt or maarni pdegi...
Ladka drta hua-prrr tum kuu kr rhi ho...mtlb mene tumhara kyaa bigaada hai...


Varsha-btatai hu...bs ek min...
Or varsha udhar udhr dekhne lgti hai....use baahr ki taraf ek pathhr dikhai deta hai...
Varsha baahr jaakr pathhrr uthakr laati hai....
Pathhr ko apne paas rakhkr
Varsha-haa ab bol...kyaa puch rha tha...
Ladka us pathhr ko dekhkr smjhne ki kosis krta hai ki varsha krna kya chahti hai....

Varsha-bol na...
Ladka-wo...kyu....kyu kr rhi ho...mujhe kyuu marna chahti ho...mene kyaa bigaada bai tumhara..
Varsh furti se uska hath pkdkti or niche rkhkr...uski ungli prr ek jordar pathhr maarti hai.
"Aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh.......papapaaaaaaa....bchaaaao.........aaaaaaaaaaaa....."
Ladka bhut tej drd se chillata hai...
Uske ek hath ki chhoti ungli pr varsha ne itna tej war kia ki ungli ke andr ki haddiya tk pis gyi....

Ldka drd se itna tadap rha rha ki maano uski jaan nikal rhi ho..
"Hahahahahaha....dekho ye ro rha hai...hahahaha.....ro orr ro....hahahahaa....bli chadhaugi teri bli hahahahaa...hahahahaha...ye ro rha hai...ise drd ho rha hai...hahahaha...mrd ko bhi drd hota hai...hahahahah....varsha apni jangho me hath maar maarkr has rhi thi..

Uski hsi sunkr ladka bhi apna drd bhul gya...or pglo ki trh varsha ko dekhe jaa rha tha...
Achank varsha chup ho jaati hai...
Varsha-chl apne baap ko phon lga...or bol ki...tere do dost...tujhe shahr ke bahr le gye...or tujhe maarne ki kosis kr rhe hai ..lga...

Ladka drke maare jldi se phon nikalta hai or apne papa ka no dial krta hai. ..
Ldka-papa...mere 2dost muje maarna chahte hai...mujhe shahar ke bahr ek jungle me rkha hai unhone...

Varsha phon kaatne ka ishara krti hai...
Ldke ka left hand kanpkpaa rha tha...kuki usi pr varsha ne pathhr se vaar kiaa tha...
Ldka-rota hua...plsss bta do...mene kya kiya hai...plssss..

Varsha-dekh...mrne se drna nhi chahiye...mot to ekdin sbko aani hai...tu to khushnseeb hai...ki tujhe teri psnd ki mot mil rhi hai....bol na...kaise mrega...glaa kaatu....ya gla dabau...yaaa us pathhr se tera sr fodu...zahar se mrega...
Ladka varsha ki baate sunkr or uska pagaln dekhkr buri trh dr gya tha..

Ladka-lekin bta to do....mene kiya kya hai...kuu muje marna chahti ho...kon ho tum...
Varsha-mai hu...killer .....or tuje mai kaha maarna chahti hu...mai to bs teri khwahish puri krna chahti hu.....teri hi baato ko puri kr rhi hu...
Ladka-kon si bate...kon si khwahish...
Varsha-tune hi kaha tha na...ki BAHUT KHUN NIKALTA HAI..BAHOT DRD HOTA HAI ...PASEENA NIKALTA HAI....... ye dekh...tera khunn....prrrr kuch km hai na...orr nikalna pdega na...
Varsha uska hath fir se dharti pr rakhkti hai or pathhr marne wali hoti hai
"Naaaaaahiiii...nahi....nahi....plsss chood do...mai hath jodta hu......chood do...mt tdpao....

Varsha -ohhh realyyy....khuun km hai....
Ladka-maine ....maine sex ko kaha tha...usme jo khun nikalta hai...isko nahi yr...
Varsha-ohhh phle kyu nhi btaya......wese galt baat...ldka ldki dono ka contribution hona chahiye na....tera khun nikal rha hai...mujhe paseena aarha hau...tujhe drd milega...lekin...khun or drd km hai abhi...nikal apne private part ko baahr....us se khun nikaalti hu....

Or esa bolkr varsha uski pent ki taraf ko hath bdhaati hai...
"Nahi....plllssssss...plsss mt kro...mtt kro ye sb...mai mr jauga....chhod do muje...plssss mai per pkdta hu tumhare..."
Ldka varsha ke hath ko htate hue apni zip prr hath rkhta hua bolta hai...

Varsha fr se khdi hoti hai or idhr udhr ghumti hui-bta koi akhri khwahish.....
Ladka rota hua-plsss muje jaane do...mene kuch nhi kiyaaa...pllssssss.....
Ldka us ungli wale hath ko dusre hath se pkdkr buri trh rota hua bolta hai...

Varsha uske baalo ko sahlaane lgti hai...
Varsha-kyaa zulfe hai....ye zulfe kya mai...le skti hu..
Ldka rota hua-kyaaa bol rhi ho tumm...
Varsha-tummm???
Ladka-soryy aap....

Varsha uske balo ka ek guchha ukhaad deti hai.
Orr ldka ki cheekh nikal jaati hai...
"Aaaaaaaaaaa....baaahut drd ho rha hai yrr yrr kuu kr rhi ho ye sb...kyaaa mil rha hai tumhe ye krke..."
Us ldke ke sr se khun niklane lgta hai...
Varsha-ohh soryyy glti se ho gya...mujhe maaf krdo plss...


Ladka-kyaaa ho tum...apna chehra to dikhao kon ho tum....
Varsha-chehra dikhaya to tumhari ankh bhi fodni pdegi...bolo...manjur hai...
Ladka sochte hue-nahi...tum jao...muje chhod do plssss..plss mujhe jaaane do..
Varsha- akeli mai...akela hu....tujhe baandha nhi hua...chla ja...gate khula hai...
Ldka-sch chla jaau na...

Varsha-haaa chla jaa...prrr mai pese nhi dugi..
Ldka ansu ponchta hua-haa mt do...jaane do.....plsss
Or ldka jldi se uthkr gate ki trf lapakta hai...

Lekin varsha usse pahle pahuchkr ek laaat uske seene prr maarti hai...jissse ladka wapas whi jaakr girta hai ..jaha betha hua tha...


Idhar dharmesh delhi airport pr utarkar sidha dwarka pahuchkr kisi se room ke liye puchhta hai...
Kyuki wo jaanta tha ki case itni jldi to solve hoga nhi....orr hotel me rkhkr koi case solve hota nhi...use rhna to public me hi tha...

Ye uski kismt achhi hai ki ek aadmi ne...use wo room suggest kiya jisme arun rah rha tha..kuki us admi ko pta nhi tha ki usme koi rahne lga hai....bht din se room khali tha use lga ab bhi khaali hoga...
Lgbhg ek ghnta presan hokr
Dharmesh arun ke room tk ghumta firta aa hi pahuchta hai...

Arun ka gate khtkhtata hai..
Arun andr se baahr aata hai...
Arun-jii kahiye.
Dharmesh-beta yha koi...room khali hai kya...
Arun-rent prr rhna hai kya...
Dharmesh-haaa..on rent..
Arun-koi nhi hai...kisi or se puchiye ...
Dharmesh-mujhe yhi adress btaya hai kisi ne ...1ghnte se pure dwarka me ghum liya prr koi room nhi mila...

Arun-hmmm...mai 10din se yha rah rha hu...yha jldi se room milege nhi..
Dharmesh kuch sochta hua-to fir....kya hm room share kr skte hai...

Arun-no...sir...m happy...wese bhi agr aapko room share krna pdega...to...jwan hona pdega...m not comfy with oldy... .
Dharmesh-plssss yrrr...really urgent...koi orr room nhi mil rha......chahe to room ka saara kiraya mai deduga..

Arun-butt...u know...comfy...oldyy.....
Dharmsh kuch sochta hua-yrr banda umr se nahi dil se jvan hota hai...

Arun-achha aap dil se jvaan ho...proof kro...
Dharmesh-gf se baat kraau kya...
Arun-gf yaa wife...
Dhamresh-ghr me wife or bahar gf...
Arun ek ajib smile ke sath-schme jvaan ho...i like it ..aajao..welcome...

Dharmesh anadr aajata hai...
Arun use paani deta hai...
Room me charo trf kpde faile the...bartan idhr udhar pde the ..

Dharmesh-nice room achha sjaya hai...
Arun-ji...thanks...mai aapko kya bolu..
Dharmesh-naam lena...dost hu tumhara..
Arun-kya naam hai aapka...
Dharmesh-dharmesh...

Arun-ajib hai...mai apko dhammu bulauga...chlega..
Dharmesh chonkta hua-whattt dhammu.....
Arun-yes....dhammu...orr dhammu kaisa hai...
"Kitni ijjt hai police me ye kchra kr rha hai..."dharmesh apne mn me sochta hai..
Dhamesh-achha hu



Delhi.
"Hahahahaaha....hahahahahahaha.....mugambo bahht din bad khush hua...hahahaha......aaaj mai bhut khush hu..."varsha paglo ki trh hasti hui bolti hai...
Or achank varsha uske muh ke paas aati hai...."tujhe pta hai...bht din se tdp rhi thi ki kb varsha se vaishali bnu......aaj mai bahut khush hu....paarty dungi aaj sbko...waowwww....."
Ladka uska pagaln dekhkr buri trh dr jaata hai....uski dhadkne bdhne lgti hai...
Ladka-kon varsha kon vaishali...

Varsha-tuuu nhi janta inko...chl mai btati hu...hmare gao ne na...2 ldki thi...ek varsha ek vaishali ...varsha bht sidhi sadhi thi....or vaishali....vaishali ek killer...logo ki bli chdhane wali.....dono mr gyi...ab unki aatma ...bhatak rhi hai....kisi me bhi ghus jaati hai..."

Varsha bahot draawne trike se use ek ajib o grib kahani sunaati hai.....jise sunkr ldke ki kmpkpi chahutne lgti hai....

"Orrrr ye ldki jo tere samne bethi hai...kaajal...iske andr phle varsha ghusi thi...ab vaishali hai...jo bli chdhakr rhegi teri...

Ladka rota hua or drta hua-tumm schme uski aatma ho...
Varsha-haaa
Ladka drta hua or kampkpi awaj me-jay jay..hanuman gyan gun sagar...jay kpees tihu lok ujagr...
Varsha-ramdut atulit bal dhama...anjani putra pawan sut nama...
Ladka-aree...yrr mai bhut bgane lie ga rha hu...orr tum bhi mere sath gaa rhi ho...kesi bhut ho yrr...bhut kbhu hanuman chalisa gaata hai kya..
Varsha-modern bhut hu...kisi se nhi drti...
Ladka-kyaa yr...tum pagal ho

Varsha-tum mujhe... tum ku kah rhe ho...gaali do...saalee...yhi bol rhe the na baar baar...do gaaali....do gaali muje....
Varsha cheekhti hui bolti hai-ladka...plsss muje maaf krdo...mai ab kisi ko gaali nhi duga...

Varsha ekdm uska hath kheeckr uski dusri ungli me pathhr maarti hai...orr ldka fr se cheekh pdta hai...
Vasha-de gaali...
Ldka mrta kya na krta
"Saa...saaali...." Ldka bahur drta hu bolta hai.
Vaishli-teri awaaj clear nhi aarhi...kyaa hua...totla hai kya....jraa apni jeebh bahar nikaal....
Ldka soch me pd jaata hai....
Varsha chillate hue-bola na jeebh bahar nikal...

Ldka use apni jeebh baahr nikalkr dikhata hai hai...
Furti se varsha apni jeans ki piche ki jeb se kuch nikalti hai or........

Agle hi pal jeebh ka ek tukda dhrti prr pda tha.

Ldke ka muh khuun se bhr gya tha.....
Varsha us ktee hui jeeb ko dekhkr....
"Ise mera chaaku khayega...."
Or jeebh ko uthake wo polytheen me rakh leti hai.....
Varsha-khuun khraaba kaafi ho gya na...yaa orrr kru....

Ldka bss uuhhh uhhh kr rha tha...kuch bol nahi paa rha rha.....uske ankho se aansu or uske chehre prr pseena saaf bta rha tha ki uspr is samay kyaa beeth rhi hai...

Vaesha pathhr uthake ek hath ki sbhi ungliyo ko tod deti hai....or last me..15,20mukke uske muh muh prr maarke uske sare daant tod deti hai...

Varsha uska coller pakadkr-aaj ke baad agr kisi bhi ldki ke mn me teri vjh se dr paida hua...to tu bchega nhi....chhod rhi hu tujhe aaj to...tu baar baar puch rha tha ki kuu kr rhi hu esa...tu jo aaye din ldkiyo ko chhedta hai...unnhe gaaliya deta hai...aajke baad tu gaali to kya...unse namaste bhi nhi kr paayega....
Or uski peeth prr us hthiyar se kuch likh deti hai...

Varsha chl deti hai...
Or achank rukkr-kaha tha na...pdhai likhai ka bht faeda hota hai...ab kaise btayega...ki tere sath ye kisne or kuu kiya...


Dhamresh leta hua araam kr rha tha..
Arun-orr dhamiya kaisi hai...
Dhamesh-kon dhmiya...
Arun-are tera item yrr...mtlb teri wife...
Dharmesh-item nhi yr...wife hai meri....anyway achhi hai...dhamiya..
"Ye aajkl ke ldke kitne vulgur ho gye hai...maa samaan orat ko item"dhrmesh apne mn me sochta hai...

Arun-orrr dhamaaka....
Dharmesh-ab ye... dhamaka....
Arun-are tera beta...
Dhamresh apne maathe me hath maarta hui"hey bhgwan kaha fs gya mai...vaishali ko pkdu na pkdu...prr pagal jrur ho jaauga ..

Karib 2ghnte bad varsha aati hai...
Preity-are varsha tumhare liye koi parcel aaya hai...dekho...
Varsha dekhti hai to usme...uske adhar card ki xerox copy thi...lekin isme naam vaishali nahi varsha tha...or adress shimla ka..
"Varsha nam ka adhar card....ye kisne...kahi..arun ne to nahi...lekin use pta bhi nahi ki muje jrurt hai adhar card ki....fir kon....kisne...pahli baar varsha ka dimak chakraya tha

Next update will be soon...
Nice and superb update.....
 

Ankitarani

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vaishali martial arts bhi jaanti hai...
waise us ladke ko saza mil gayi hai par itni khaufnaak aur dardnaak .. joh saza mili hai usse accha toh maut hi zyada behtar rahti.. ek toh woh ladka jindgi bhar apne kiye gaye har galat kaam ko leke pachtata rahega aur dusri, ek apahiz ki jindagi...
narak ka toh pata nahi par is ladke ne jeete jee narak dekh liya.. :D
baatein bhi karo toh dard se kahar kar :D
modern bhootni :lol:
khoon paseene ki kamayi :lol:
waise kya planning thi.. uski pehle hi puch liya ki padh likh sakte ho ki nahi.. ushi hishab aage ki kaarvahi ki vaishali ne..
aur udhar arun aur dharmesh :lol:
oldy dhammu, dhamiya, dhamal :roflol:
poor dharmesh.. :sigh:
adhar card bhejne wali woh kaatil ladki hi hai..
sach mein Ankita mam thrill ke sath comedy combo ju hi likh sakti ho yaar... :bow:
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill :applause: :applause:
Mai to kahti hu usse bhi khofnak sja milni chahiye...eso ki vajah se pta n kitni ldkiya school jaana bnd kr deti hai...kitna mansik tnaav jhelna pdta hai unko...ye chhoti chhoti gltiya hoti hai..jinki vajah se bht bdi bdi baate ho jaati hai......ye sb baate aayegi aage wait...
Isme sbse achhi baat ye lgi ki...varsha usko uske ghr se utha laai....kitni asaani se...ise kahte kahte hai dimak...varsha islie intelligent hai.
 
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Ankitarani

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बिल्कुल सही कहा आपने । मेरा भी थिंकिंग यही था । राजवीर , अरूण और वैशाली तीनों मिलकर निशा के क़ातिल का पर्दाफाश करने की कोशिश कर रहे हैं ।
Aisa nhi hai prrr...ye sb alg alg hai....rajveer ko pta jrur hai vaishali kaha hai...use ye nhi pta ki arun uske paas rhta hai...rajver vaishali or arun teeno alg alg hai...
 
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आप को सैल्यूट है अंकिता जी । क्या गजब की कहानी है और साथ में अद्भुत लेखनी । कभी स्टोरी के माध्यम से दहशत में डाल देती हो तो कभी हंसा हंसा कर लोटपोट करा देती हो ।
हर एक किरदार का रोल शानदार है । अद्भुत लेखनी । पात्रों के बीच जो भी संवाद होता है वो बिल्कुल वास्तविक जैसा ही लगता है ।
इस अपडेट में वैशाली ने उस लफंगे की जो हालत की है वो तो पढ़कर मेरे रोंगटे खड़े हो गए। क्या गजब का किरदार गढ़ा है वैशाली उर्फ बर्षा का ।
धर्मेश और अरूण के संवाद ने हंसने पर मजबूर कर दिया । कामेडी लिखना या कामेडी करना सबसे मुश्किल होता है । वो भी शानदार तरीके से कर रही है ।
Thns aapne kaha sanvaad reality lgta hai...usi reality se btaa rhi hu ki koi baap apne chhoti bchhi ko ese khtrnak kaam lr nhi bhejega...so...vaishaki arun rajveer milkr plan kr rhe hai ye sochna glt hai
 

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Agr is sotry me ye teeno milkr plan kr rhe hao to shayd ye reality nhi lagegi...kyuki real me to koi bhi baap apne bchho ko ese khtre me nhi daalega...or ese plan me khtra to hai hi...ek beti uski phle se mr chuki ab apne dono bchho ko kaise wo daanv prr lga skta hai....socho aap hi
 

KEKIUS MAXIMUS

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Mai to kahti hu usse bhi khofnak sja milni chahiye...eso ki vajah se pta n kitni ldkiya school jaana bnd kr deti hai...kitna mansik tnaav jhelna pdta hai unko...ye chhoti chhoti gltiya hoti hai..jinki vajah se bht bdi bdi baate ho jaati hai......ye sb baate aayegi aage wait...
Isme sbse achhi baat ye lgi ki...varsha usko uske ghr se utha laai....kitni asaani se...ise kahte kahte hai dimak...varsha islie intelligent hai.
sahi kaha aapne .. :applause: .
 

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Mai to kahti hu usse bhi khofnak sja milni chahiye...eso ki vajah se pta n kitni ldkiya school jaana bnd kr deti hai...kitna mansik tnaav jhelna pdta hai unko...ye chhoti chhoti gltiya hoti hai..jinki vajah se bht bdi bdi baate ho jaati hai......ye sb baate aayegi aage wait...
Isme sbse achhi baat ye lgi ki...varsha usko uske ghr se utha laai....kitni asaani se...ise kahte kahte hai dimak...varsha islie intelligent hai.
Ji bilkul sahi kah rahi hai aap.
Btw mujhe aisi hi kahani ki talash thi jahan main lead character yeh pyar mohabbat na karke ya intimate na hoke bas aise hi brutally badla leti rahe... like woh heroine toh ho par sath hi psycho killer bhi ho.. :D joh anyaay na dekh sake aur na hi sun.. aur faisla le on the spot :D kayi writers se request ki aisi kahani likhne ki.. even nain11ster saheb se bhi par koi maane hi nahi... Sukriya joh aapne bina request kiye hi meri man pasand kahani likh rahi hai.. :bow:
 
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