Thriller khaamoshiya...Ek Rahasya (Completed)

[AK 25]

Ju ko badi aag lagi padi hai

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

varsha ne jo kahani batayi wo jhooth hai yaa sach aur khudko kajal kyu bol rahi hai ?? shayad us ladke ko darane ke liye banayi ho kahani ..
par ye varsha ka aadhar card kisne banwaya .kahi wo dusri killer lady ne to nahi bheja ..

aur 16 khoon kiye hai varsha ne ..agar bali hi chadhani hoti to us ladke ko maar deti par chhod diya ..shayad jo usne kaha gaon ki kahani aur 16 khoon wo sab jhooth ho ..

aapne aisa kaunsa hint diya tha jo sab miss kar gaye ?? shayad ek baar repeat padhna padega ..par ek hint dobara do ki kitne update ke baad diya tha wo hint ..waqt mile to repeat karunga do din se nonstop reading hi chalu hai ..

 

[Ankitarani]

Update me kuch gadbad hui h...bs 15min

 

[Ankitarani]

varsha ne jo kahani batayi wo jhooth hai yaa sach aur khudko kajal kyu bol rahi hai ?? shayad us ladke ko darane ke liye banayi ho kahani ..
par ye varsha ka aadhar card kisne banwaya .kahi wo dusri killer lady ne to nahi bheja ..

aur 16 khoon kiye hai varsha ne ..agar bali hi chadhani hoti to us ladke ko maar deti par chhod diya ..shayad jo usne kaha gaon ki kahani aur 16 khoon wo sab jhooth ho ..

aapne aisa kaunsa hint diya tha jo sab miss kar gaye ?? shayad ek baar repeat padhna padega ..par ek hint dobara do ki kitne update ke baad diya tha wo hint ..waqt mile to repeat karunga do din se nonstop reading hi chalu hai ..

Update me bht gdbd tha...thnks btane k liye...or wo kyuu kisiko ko real naam btayegi...sb kahani naam jhut hai...dimak n lgao koi b

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

Asthana-or wo jo khun krne ko kahti h...bs draati rhti h...aap log usse itna mt dro...bss jo use psnd nhi aap wo mt kro...wrna fr wo esa kregi jo aapko psnd nhi..
update 5 tak ye hi ek line mili hai ..

 

[kamdev99008]

Ankita ji..... Bahut khoob

Ek Bollywood movie thi nana patekar ki.... Bluff master... Yahan bhi kahani kuchh vaisi hi lag rahi hai....

Na varsha psycho hai, na arun naukri karne aya hai.... Na Rajvir bechara hai
Lekin dikh yahi raha hai...
Rajvir is movie ka writer, director aur producer sab kuchh hai... Varsha lead role mein, arun supporting cast me.... Aur jaal bichhaya ja raha hai villain ko fasane ka... Jisne nisha ka murder kiya..... Killer lady... Aanchal

Dharmesh parallel investigation kar raha tha... Jaal me fasne se pahle machhli ko chaukanna na kar de isliye use rajvir ne apne sath lagakar ghumana shuru kar diya.... Jab dharmesh fir dimag chalane laga to haddi weapon ka clue dekar use delhi bhej diya aur apne hi khabri se arun ke pas pahuchne aur rukne ko majbur kar diya...
Ab dharmesh ke pas Vaishali ki photo hai 5 sal purani... Wo ab use pahchan nahin sakta..... Samne wale ghar me rahte huye wo Vaishali nahi varsha hai.... Baki uske dimag ko concentrate hone se rokne ke liye arun ki non-stop bakchodi....

Keep it up

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

Ankita ji..... Bahut khoob

Ek Bollywood movie thi nana patekar ki.... Bluff master... Yahan bhi kahani kuchh vaisi hi lag rahi hai....

Na varsha psycho hai, na arun naukri karne aya hai.... Na Rajvir bechara hai
Lekin dikh yahi raha hai...
Rajvir is movie ka writer, director aur producer sab kuchh hai... Varsha lead role mein, arun supporting cast me.... Aur jaal bichhaya ja raha hai villain ko fasane ka... Jisne nisha ka murder kiya..... Killer lady... Aanchal

Dharmesh parallel investigation kar raha tha... Jaal me fasne se pahle machhli ko chaukanna na kar de isliye use rajvir ne apne sath lagakar ghumana shuru kar diya.... Jab dharmesh fir dimag chalane laga to haddi weapon ka clue dekar use delhi bhej diya aur apne hi khabri se arun ke pas pahuchne aur rukne ko majbur kar diya...
Ab dharmesh ke pas Vaishali ki photo hai 5 sal purani... Wo ab use pahchan nahin sakta..... Samne wale ghar me rahte huye wo Vaishali nahi varsha hai.... Baki uske dimag ko concentrate hone se rokne ke liye arun ki non-stop bakchodi....

Keep it up

wakai me aapne zabardast theory di hai ..aisa hona sahi lagta hai mujhe bhi ..

 

[3XXX]

Behad hai shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob, ekdom superb aur fadu .

Waah bada hi kamal ka scene create kiya h aapne.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai .

Or ab besabree se ,
Aage ka intjaar :

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

Vaishali us haddi ko dekhti hui-ab se phle ek ldka mere piche pda tha...uski haddi hai ye...prr teri kismt achhi hai...jo tune muje bahan bna liya...agr wo bhi bna leta to...shayd ye haddi uske shrir me hoti....hahahahahaah...
agar wo ladka behen bana leta to usko maar deti ( pata hai yaha bhi fenk rahi hai ) ..ek request hai spelling poori likho samajhne me jyada aasani hogi ..

 

[Ankitarani]

Ankita ji..... Bahut khoob

Ek Bollywood movie thi nana patekar ki.... Bluff master... Yahan bhi kahani kuchh vaisi hi lag rahi hai....

Na varsha psycho hai, na arun naukri karne aya hai.... Na Rajvir bechara hai
Lekin dikh yahi raha hai...
Rajvir is movie ka writer, director aur producer sab kuchh hai... Varsha lead role mein, arun supporting cast me.... Aur jaal bichhaya ja raha hai villain ko fasane ka... Jisne nisha ka murder kiya..... Killer lady... Aanchal

Dharmesh parallel investigation kar raha tha... Jaal me fasne se pahle machhli ko chaukanna na kar de isliye use rajvir ne apne sath lagakar ghumana shuru kar diya.... Jab dharmesh fir dimag chalane laga to haddi weapon ka clue dekar use delhi bhej diya aur apne hi khabri se arun ke pas pahuchne aur rukne ko majbur kar diya...
Ab dharmesh ke pas Vaishali ki photo hai 5 sal purani... Wo ab use pahchan nahin sakta..... Samne wale ghar me rahte huye wo Vaishali nahi varsha hai.... Baki uske dimag ko concentrate hone se rokne ke liye arun ki non-stop bakchodi....

Keep it up

Ohhhh great kyaa baat hai....mza aagya hai...prr afsos aisa nhi hai ..mene wo movie b n dekho....jis ki ek beti already mr gyi ho...wo apne bchho ko ese khtrnak mamle me nhi daalega...jante ho na kitna risk hai vaishali or arun ko waha agr apke btaye anusar story hai to..arun ko or vaishali ko kuch hua to eajveer ka rah hi kya jaeyag...so....esa bilkul nhi hai...plss nice thinking esa hota to bhi kahani achhi hoti...