Thriller Kaun? (Completed)

[humtum]

Climax accha tha..but meri iksha puri nhi hui....

Rohit ke saamne uski mom ka sach aur amit ke saamne uski mom ka sach aana hi chahiye tha....gunaah to wo bhi tha....

Rohit aur indra ko sharminda hona hi chahiye tha.....

Well...overall good story...next ke liye good luck....

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[humtum]

mera bhi yahi manna tha..................

indira ka na sahi................. payal ka jarur ana chahiye tha

jis attitude ke sath rohit ne kaha ki ismein papa se koi matlab nahi...
use ye bhi to pata chalna chahiye tha ki apne baap ko to usne bacha liya....
lekin uske plan aur uske sathiyon ne hi uski maa chod di...............

tab usko attitude ki jagah .................pachhtave ki feeling ati

ok , add kar diya hai end credit me

 

[humtum]

Finally completed this story at XForum due to support of friends like rahul,aakash, naina , kamdev , ankit , dr saab and others. Thankful to all readers and all supporters to finish this story in record time. normally i am known to delay story and leave unfinished but this one finished in one go.

thanks to XF team and all donors to keep this forum active

 

[Story Collector]

Thread Title Changed On Ts's Request.

Regards
Story Collector

 

[Jason carter]

Nice thriller story bhai

 

[Jason carter]

New story start kar do bhai incest adultery

 

[Ankitshrivastava]

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Bhai indra ka to accha raha...
but rohit ki mom ka...use to idea hi nhi ki uska beta sab jaan chuka...ye maa-bete ke saamne open hota to aur accha....

Well....honestly....sach a great story nd narration.....

Thanks......

 

[kamdev99008]

Bhai indra ka to accha raha...
but rohit ki mom ka...use to idea hi nhi ki uska beta sab jaan chuka...ye maa-bete ke saamne open hota to aur accha....

Well....honestly....sach a great story nd narration.....

Thanks......

jo mila utna hi bahut hai..................

humtum bhai ko ki unhone itni mehnat aur lagan se pahli story complete ki bina latkaye

 

[Ankitshrivastava]

jo mila utna hi bahut hai..................

humtum bhai ko ki unhone itni mehnat aur lagan se pahli story complete ki bina latkaye

Hahaha....well said....

Thanks HT ...hope we will see another one soon....

 

[Aakash.]

No matter how many mistakes Sagar may have made, but he tried to save the honor of Kajal, I loved it, at least something good happened. It was not successful, that's another matter.
Bhalla was resorting to Kajal to save his life like a coward. The love chemistry you showed in the beginning now makes sense. Everything happened because of love. Rohit wanted to force Kajal's love and love could not be forced.
Mother and son gave death to both brothers, I am very happy to know that this should happen to such people. The first scene of the story is also being understood now. Indira did well by telling Amit the truth.
Today, due to all your hard work, this story has become good. Finally everything went well I am very happy with it. Everything from the beginning of the story to the last update was very good. I liked your story very much. I am impressed with your writing. I hope you will come to us soon with a new story. Thank You...
...KAUN...

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