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Mahaul kafi bhari ho gya tha jise halka karte hue surya bolta hai .



Surya – ab humari bari toh pahle kiska turn hai .

Shiva – mai karunga david se .

David shiva ki taraf dekhta hai muskura ke kahta hai .

David – mai janta tha ki mujhse interrogation kiye bina nahi manoge puchho .

Shiva – jab humare saare sathi mare gye toh tum kaise zinda rah gye .

David – jaisa ki rudranshi ne bataya ki hum logon pe usne bazooka se him pe fire kiya tha aur jab hua toh mai gadi se neeche khai me gir gya wahan ke local tribes mujhe apne saath le gye 6 mahine tak mai coma me raha aur jab mai hosh me aya toh maine sabse tumhe khojne ki sochi isiliye mai academy gaya waha mujhe pata chala ki tum ne dheerendra pawar ko mar dala hai aur tumhe 3saal ki saja ho gai maine jail me tumse milne ki koshish ki magar dig sahab ne bataya ki tum kisi se bhi milna nahi chahte aur na hi tumse koi mil sakta hai phir 3 saal baad bhi maine tumhe bahut dhoondha magar tum aise gayab ho gye the ki jaise gadhe ke sar par seengh.

Apni baat khtm kar ke david ne shiva taraf dekha jo ki lagatar use aise dekh raha tha jaise kuch dhoodh raha ho jaise abhi bhi use David ki baton pe yakeen na ho apni or shiva ko is tarah ghoorte hue dekh kar david kahta hai .

David – janta hun ki tumhe yakeen nahi ho raha hoga magar sach yahi hai .

Shiva – yakeen karna na karna baad ki baat aur baad ki baten baad me hi honi chahiye .

Shiva ki baat sunne ke baad deva kahta hai .

Deva – chalo ab hum game start kar sakte hai .

Charu – tujhe badi jaldi hai .

Deva – bilkul tum logon ko nahi thi .

Aziz – toh shuru kaun karega .

Deva – aslam tu shuru kar

Aslam – hmm theek toh mai task dunga tamanna ko .

Aslam ke aisa bolte hi sabhi log use hoot karne lagte hai toh aslam kahta hai .

Aslam – ab mai bol sakta hun .

Tammana – han pucho .

Aslam – pucho nahi do mai tumhe task dunga dare samjhi .

Charu – ye kya baat hui tamanna ne toh tumse truth karwaya tha tum dare de rahe .

Deva – are ye dene wale ke upar hai aslam chal shuru kar .

Aslam – shiva ek cigarette dena .

Shiva aslam ki taraf ghoor ke dekhta hai kyuki wo janta tha ki aslam cigarette nahi peeta phir bhi wo aslam ko cigarette de deta hai .

Aslam – tamanna toh tumhara dare ye hai ki tumhe cigarette poori peeni hai aur .

Tamanna – aur .

Aslam – ise muh se bina hataye peena hai matlb agar tumne ek baar ye cigarette hothon se laga li toh khtm hone se pahle tum ise hata nahi sakti samjhi .

Nidhi - yar ye kaisa dare hua .

Charu – bilkul aslam tu janta hai na ki tamanna ko cigarette se kitni nafarat hai tu kuch aur dare dede .

Aslam – tamanna are you ready agar nahi toh koi saral sa task de dunga .

Tamanna ne aslam ki baat suni aur muskurate hue kaha.

Tamanna – maine toh mana nahi kiya aaj pahli bar kisi ne itne haq se mujhse kuch kaha mai mana kaise kar sakti hun .

Tamanna aahe badhti hai aur cigarette hothon se laga kar jala leti hai abhi usne do teen kash hi liye honge ke uski ankhon se ansu bahne lage use wakai cigarette se bahut allergy thi magar aslam ke kahne par usne ek baar me han bol diya ab aslam ko uska yun rona bardasht nahi ho raha tha pata nahi kyu magar khud baht taqleef ho rahi thi wo turant apni jagah se uthta hai aur tamanna ke paas ja ke uske hothon se cigar nikal ke phek deta hai sabhi log ek tak dono ko dekhe ja rahe the aslam tamanna ka chahra apne haathon me leta hai aur kahta hai .

Aslam – kyu kiya tumne se .

Aslam ki awaz me dard saaf pata chal raha tha .

Tamanna ki ankhen nam thi magar phir bhi usne muskurate hue jawab diya .

Tamanna – tum ne pahli baar mujhse kuch karne ke liye bola tha mai mana kaise karti akhir tum hi toh jise mai pyar karti hun .

Tamanna ki is baat se jahan sabhi log chauk jate hai wahi aslam ke pairon tale zameen khisak jati hai wo hairani se tamanna ko dekhta rahta hai aur phir wapas apni jagah jake baith jata hai sabhi log aslam ke kuch bolne ka intzaar kar rahe the magar usne toh jaise rahne ki kasam si la thi phir deva bolta hai .

Deva – agla turn kiska hai .

Surya – mera hmm toh mai task dunga charu ko ready charu

Charu - han ready .

Surya – theek hai phir tujhe yahan maujood kisi bhi ladke ko dedicate karke ek gana gana hoga aur wo bhi romantic sa .

Charu – hmm theek hai .

Wo apni jagah se uthti hai aur shiva ka haath pakad kar use khada karti hai shiva use aise ghoor raha tha ki mano pahli baar dekha ho kuch der shiva ki ankhon me dekhne ke baad charu gana shuru karti hai .

अपनी आँखें खाली कर दे
काश तू मेरी आँखें भर दे
काश तू मेरी आँखें भर दे
मेरे यारा तेरे गम अगर पाएँगे
हमें तेरी है कसम, हम संवर जाएँगे
हो मेरे यारा तेरे गम अगर पाएँगे
हमें तेरी है कसम, हम संवर जाएँगे

दो ये सौगात तुम, तो ज़माने की हम
दो ये सौगात तुम, तो ज़माने की हम
हर खुशी से मुकर जाएँगे
हम मर जाएँगे, हो ओ.. हम मर जाएँगे

मेरे यारा तेरे गम अगर पाएँगे
हमें तेरी है कसम, हम संवर जाएँगे

तेरे काँधे से ही लग के
यारा बीती उम्र सारी
सोचो कैसी होगी किस्मत
हुआ यूँ तो फिर हमारी
सारे आँसू तो हो तेरे
और आँखें हो हमारी
तेरे दर्द हमें जो मिले प्यार में
तेरे दर्द हमें जो मिले प्यार में
हम खुशी से यूँ भर जाएँगे
हम मर जाएँगे हो ओ..
हम मर जाएँगे

मेरे यारा तेरे गम अगर पाएँगे
हमें तेरी है कसम, हम संवर जाएँगे

चाहे दुःख हो, चाहे सुख हो
दिल ने तुझको ही पुकारा
तुने हमको है बनाया
तुने हमको है संवारा
जहां को तो रब का है
हमें तेरा है सहारा
बस तेरा साथ हो
चाहे जो बात हो
बस तेरा साथ हो
चाहे जो बात हो
तेरे कहने से कर जाएँगे
हम मर जाएँगे हो ओ..
हम मर जाएँगे

हाँ.. मेरे यारा तेरे गम अगर पाएँगे
हमें तेरी है कसम, हम संवर जाएँगे

मेरे यारा तेरे गम अगर पाएँगे
हमें तेरी है कसम, हम संवर जाएँगे

Gana khatam hota hai toh sabhi log taliyan bajane lagte hai charu wapas apni jagah pe aake baith jati hai Toh aziz bolta hai.

Aziz – now it’s my turn arohi ji are you ready .

Arohi – of course

Aziz – ok apne mujhe dare diya tha lekin mai apko truth de raha hun apko hum mese yani ladkon mede kisi ek ke bare me apni true feeling batani hogi ok .

Arohi – hmm gud one theek mai taiyar hun .

Kuch der sochne ke baad arohi kahti .

Arohi – waise toh mai sabhi ke bare me janti hun magar jise maine sabse jyada samjha hai wo hai shiva , shiva ek aisa insan hai jo akele sari mushkilen khelta hai koi chahat nahi koi khwahish nahi bas logon ke liye jeena .

Shiva – bas bahut hua aur nahi .

Arohi ko beech me tokte hue shiva ne kaha .

Deva – kyu theek hi toh kah rahi .

Shiva – magar mujhe accha nahi lagta ki koi meri tareef kare .

Veenu – kyu tareef toh sabhi ko pasand hai ek min sorry mai toh bhool hi gai tum toh alien ho .

Shiva kuch kahne hi wala tha ki tabhi lucky bol padta hai .

Lucky – ab meri bari nisha ji ready

Nisha - ready

nisha ne muskurate hue jawab diya magar shiva ki nazar lucky pe kadi ho gai .

Lucky – mai apko dare dunga aur dare ye hai ki shiva ko hansa ke dikhao .

Deva – yar lucky ye impossible task kyu de raha hai .

Nisha – kisne kaha impossible hai .

Nisha ne muskurate hue shiva ki taraf dekha shiva ne use gardan hila ke na ka ishara kiya jaise koi chetawani de raha ho magar nisha par uska koi asar nahi hua usne shiva ki taraf ek nazar dali aur uski ankhon me aankhen dal muskuraye hue use ankh mari magar shiva abhi khamosh tha sabhi ek taraf nisha ki himmat ki daad de rahe the wahi us pe has bhi rahi the jisse nisha ko gussa aa jata hai aur shiva ke chahre pe bikul kareeb aake usse dheeme se kahti hai .

Nisha – chupchap hans do warna .

Shiva – warna kya .

Nisha – warna mai tumse kabhi baat nahi karungi .

Nisha ne itni masoomiyat se kaha jaise uska sara bachpana nisha ke samne aa khada hua kuch seconds hi hue honge nisha ki ye kahe hue ki mahaul me ek hansi thahaka goonjta hai sabhi log hairan pareshan kabhi shiva ko toh kabhi ek dusre ko dekh rahe the deva aur nisha ko chhod kar ye pahli baar tha jab kisi ne shiva ko hanste hue dekha tha shiva ek nazar sabhi ki taraf daudata hai aur phir bilkul khamosh ho jata hai.


Deva – wah nisha tumhe toh padmabhooshan milna chahiya .


Sabhi log hasne lagte hai deva kahta hai shiva ab tumhari bari .

Shiva – mujhe kisi de kuch poochne ki zarurat nahi.

Aziz – yar aisa mat karo poora game kharab ho jayega .

Nisha – yes don’t spoil the game .

Shiva ek gahri saans leta hai aur kahta hai .

Shiva – nidhi mai tumse seedha sada ek sawal poochunga theek .

Nidhi – ok .

Shiva – mai ye janta hun ki tum apni bahan se bahut pyar karti ho aur ek dusre ko sari bate batati ho magar kya kabhi aisa hua jo tumne nisha se chhipaya ho .

Nidhi ek nazar nisha ki taraf dekhti hai aur kahti hai .

Nidhi – han hua .

Nisha chaukte .

Nisha – kya .

Nidhi – han ye sach hai ki maine tumse ek baat chhipai hai .

Nisha – kya .

Nidhi – mai rahul se pyar karti hun .

Nisha – toh tumne aaj tak use bataya kyu nahi .

Nidhi – darti thi ki kahin use kho na dun .

Shiva – aisa nahi hoga .

Nidhi – tumhe kaisa pata .

Shiva – mai is baat ki garanti leta hun .

Nidhi – mai nahi manti .

Shiva – agar rahul khud kahe tab toh manogi.

Nidhi nisha aur baki sab chauk jata me hai .

Shiva – bolo manogi .

Nidhi kuch nahi kahti bas sharma ke apna sar jhuka leti hai .

Shiva – rahul bahar aa ja .

Shiva ke kahte hi rahul ghani jhadiyon se muskurata hua sab ke samne aa jata hai kisi ko bhi is baat ka bilkul bhi andaza nahi tha ki rahul yahan hoga rahul ko dekhte hi nidhi apni jagah se khadi hi jati hai dono log ek dusre ko bas dekhe ja rahe the aur baki log khamoshi se in dono ko dekhe ja rahe the is khamoshi ko todte hue nidhi bolti hai .

Nidhi – tum yahan kaise .

Shiva – rahul tumhe tab tak jawab nahi dega jab tak tum isse apni dil ki baat nahi kahti .

Nidhi apni nazren jhuka leti hai Rahul aage badhta hai aur uska chahra tham kar kahta hai .

Rahul – bolo tum mujhse pyar karti ho .

Nidhi kuch kuch nahi bolti bas uske seene se lag jati hai dono log is pal ko mahsoos kar rahe the tabhi taliyon ka shor unke kanon me padta hai dono log ek dusre se alag ho jate hai nidhi sharma kar nisha ki bahon me chhip jati hai aur rahul shiva ki bagal me baith jata hai toh nisha shiva se poochti hai .

Nisha – tumhe inke bare me kaise pata chala aur rahul yahan kab aya .

Shiva – sab batunga magar gane khtm hone ke baad .

Toh deva bolta hai .

Deva – han meri bari hai veenu ready .

Veenu – han ready .

Deva – tumne mujhe dare diya tha magar mai tumhe truth deta hun tum ye batao tum lucky Se kitna pyar karti ho.

Deva ki is sawal se jahan veenu ke chahre pe muskan aur sharm thi wahin shiva veenu ko gaur se dekhta hai jaise ye analyse kar raha ho ki uska jawab kya hoga veenu bolti hai .

Veenu – pata nahi ki kitna pyar karti hun magar mujhe yaad hai ki jab hum pahli baar mile the toh maine inke andar ek nek aur saccha insaan dekha tha aur usi nek air sacche insaan se mai pyar karti hun aur ye pyar aisa hai hum dono ek doosre ki khushi taqleef pareshani sab kuch bina bolo bina izhaar kiye samjh sakte hai .

Veenu abhi bol hi rahi thi ke tabhi kuch awaaz hoti hai……..


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