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Ye awaaz deva ke Phone ki thi deva apna phone nikal kar dekhta hai toh koi unknown number tha deva call receive karta hai.

Deva – hello .

Dusri taraf – shiva ko phone de .

Deva – kaun bol raha hai .

Dusri taraf – kareem bol raha hun chal jaldi shiva ko phone de .

Deva kuch nahi kahta aur shiva ki taraf phone badha deta hai .

Shiva – hello .

Kareem – mai bol raha hun kareem .

Shiva – toh .

Kareem – tera wo college president rohan mere paas hai agar tu use zinda dekhna chahta hai toh kal theek 10 baje mere adde pe aa jana wo bhi akele .

Shiva – mai janta tha tu aisa hi kuch bolega chal theek hai kal milte hai .

Kah kar shiva Phone kaat deta hai.

Aslam – kaun tha .

Shiva – kreem .

Aziz – aur kya kah raha tha .

Shiva – usne rohan ko kidnap kar liya hai .

Nisha – oh my god kahi wo use kuch kar na de

Shiva – nahi wo rohan ko kuch nahi karega .

Charu – tum itne yakeen se kaise kah sakte ho.

Shiva – kyuki usne rohan ke badle mujhe apne adde pe bulaya hai akele .

Sabhi log kafi pareshan ho jate hai shiva kahta hai .

Shiva – come guys vacation is over tum log 15 min me yahan se nikaloge .

Tamanna – tum log matlab tum humare saath nahi aa rahe ho .

Shiva – nahi mai rahul ke saath jaunga .

Kah kar shiva apni jagah se uth kar wahan se kuch door chala jata hai sabhi log packing me lag jate hai kuch der baad nisha shiva ke paas aati hai toh shiva bina use dekhe kahta hai .

Shiva – tum yahan kya kar rahi ho .

Nisha – kya problem hai .

Nisha ne shiva ki baat ko nazarandaz karte hue kaha.

Shiva – kuch bhi toh nahi .

Nisha – tum sab se jhooth bol sakte ho mujhse nahi chalo jaldi batao kya baat hai .

Shiva – kuch khaas nahi bas davud ka yaha is tarah milna mujhe kuch theek nahi lag raha aisa lag raha hai ki jaise mere ateet ka toota hua tukda achanak mere aaj ke raaste me aa gya hai ab dar is baat ka hai ki kahi tum logon ke paaon zakhmi na ho jayen .

Nisha – tum fikr mat karo tumhare hote hue kisi ko kuch nahi ho sakta .

Kah kar wo chali jati hai kuch der baad sabhi log bus me baith kar wahan se rawana ho jate hai sirf david rahul aur shuva hi baki the david shiva se kahta hai

David – toh karna kya hai .

Shiva – tum humare saath nahi aa sakte .

David – samjh sakta hun .

Kah kar shiva aur rahul jane lagte hai toh david kahta hai .

David – fir kab miloge .

Shiva – agar zinda raha toh jald hi mulakat hogi.

Kah kar shiva aur rahul aage badh jaate hai .

Shiva – tum kis se aaye ho .

Rahul – meri car se .

Shiva – hmm theek hai mai drive karunga.

Kah kar shiva aur rahul car ki taraf badh chalte hai .


Idhar sabhi logo ko ghar pahuche adha ghanta ho gya tha magar shiva ka koi pata nahi tha nisha aur nidhi dono ghar chhod diya gya tha sabhi log shiva ka intzaar kar rahe the kuch hi der baad shiva ghar me dakhil hota hai uske haath me ek bag tha jise wo darwaze ke paas rakh kar aage badhta hai .

Deva – kaha the yaar tum .

Charu – han yar abhi tak koi planning bhi nahi ki hai .

Shiva – plan ready hai .

Kah kar shiva sabhi ko bulata hai .

Shiva – suno plan ye hai ki mai samne ke raste andar jaunga kyuki kareem ne mujhe akele bulaya hai deva tum air aziz tum is side wale slum area se hote hue aage badhoge surya aslam tum dono inka backup rahoge agar kuch gadbad hoti hai toh tum is raste se humla karoge charu tamanna tum log ilake se 20 meeter ki doori pe car me hum logon ka wait karogi jaise hi hum wahan pahuchenge tum log hume lake nikal jaogi .

Aslam – wo toh theek hai magar uske aadmiyon ke saath saath aam public bhi hogi agar wo log beech me aaye toh .

Shiva – uske liye plan b hai agar public beech me aati hai toh tum log public pe hand granade phek dena .

Tammana – magar isse bahut se masoom log mare ja sakte hai .

Shiva – nahi ye handmade granade honge jinse sirf dhamaka hoga jisse bheed hat jayegi unme sharp particles nahi honge .

Deva – magar itni jaldi hume ye grandes milenge kaha.

Shiva aage badhta hai aur darwaze ke paas se wo bag utha kar lata hai aur table pe rakh deta hai jab shiva wo bag kholta hai toh sabhi log hairan rah jaate hai usme 20 se 25 handmade granade the .

Shiva – ye lo aur jaldi taiyar ho jao humare paas waqt bahut kam hai.

Kah kar shiva bar me baith kar sharab peene lagta hai kuch der baad veenu shiva ke paas aati aur use gaur se dekhti hai wo kuch soch raha tha veenu usse kahti .

Veenu – kya baat shiva tum kuch pareshan lag rahe ho mujhe batao mai kisi ko nahi batungi .

Shiva uski baat ka koi jawab nahi toh wo ek baar phir shiva ko hilate hue kahti hai .

Veenu – bolo na kya baat hai .

Shiva – shut up tumhe kya lagta hai ki yahan mazaak chal raha bewakoof .

Poori taqat se chillate hue kaha aur apne kamre me ghus gya uski awaz itni tez thi ghar me maujood sabhi log chauk jate hai veenu wahi bar ke paas baith kar ghutno me apna sar diye rone lagti hai sabhi log uske paas aate hai aur use dilasa dene lagte hai magar jaise hi sab log uske paas aate hai wo aur tez tez rone lagti hai uska rudan itna bhayankar tha ki sabhi ki ankhe nam ho jati hai aaj tak veenu ko sabhi ne haste muskurate hue hi dekha tha magar aaj wo buri tarah se ro rahi thi shayad usne apne andar jo dard aur taqleef aaj tak sabr ke bandh se rok rakhi thi wo baandh aaj shiva ke ke is tarah chillane se toot gya tha uske rokne ki awaz shiva ke kamre me bhi jaa rahi thi kuch der baad shiva apne kamre se bahar nikalta hai use dekhte hi sabhi log do kadam peeche hat jate hai shiva veenu ke paas aake khada ho jata hai aur uske sar pe pyar se haath pherta jaise hi veenu shiva ka haath apne sar par mahsoos karti hai wo turant uth kar shiva ke gale lag jati hai aur toone lagti hai shiva uske sar ko pyar se sakate hue kahta hai

Shiva – sorry mujhe tum se aise baat nahi karni chahiye thi.

Shiva ki awaz bhari ho jati hai wo bhol jata hai ki wo is waqt kaha hai wo is pal me khota chala jata hai veenu ko bhi uski bahon me bahut sukoon mil raha tha magar ye sukoon jyada der ke liye nahi shiva jaldi hi khud pe kaabo paa leta hai aur veenu ko khud se alag kar ke apne room me ghus jata hai.

Shiva ke jane ke baad jab veenu normal ho jati hai toh surya usse kahta hai .

Surya – ye wakai tumse bahut pyar karta hai .

Tamanna – yes you are right warna shiva jise kisi se koi matlb nahi hota chahe koi mare ya jiye aaj achanak veenu ka rona sun ke apne kamre bahar kyu aya .

Aziz – aya to aya gale bhi lagaya air sorry bhi bola it’s miracle it self .

Deva – jab ye tumse itna pyar karta hai toh phir ye aise tumse rude kyu rahta hai .

Veenu – kyuki maine use chhod diya tha .

Veenu ke is khulase ne sabhi ke hosh uda diye sabhi log sawaliyan nazron se veenu ki taraf dekhne lagte hai toh charu puchti hai .

Charu – kyu chhod diya tha tum ne shiva ko .

Veenu ek gahri saans leti hai aur kahti hai .

Veenu – uski zindagi ke liye .

Deva – matlb .

Veenu – un dino shiva was at the end of his 10th aur tabhi se wo shahar ke mafiyas aur gundon ke utta baithta tha aisa nahi tha ki shiva bura tha ya wo log bure the magar gunda toh gunda hi hota hai aur upar se hum castes same nahi thi wo thakur aur mai yadav.

Charu – toh shiva us tym kaisa tha .

Veenu – he was just a blast humesha hasta khelta muskurane wala insan tha magar ladkiyon se bahut darta tha uski pahli unknown female interaction mujhse hi hui thi and I remember wo kanp raha tha wo aisa hi tha magar maar peet me sabse aage tha kisi se nahi darta tha siway mere mujhe yaad hai jab kisi ne uske gharwalon ko humare bare me bataya tha toh usne sabse khule aam kah diya tha ki shadi karunga toh veenu se uske family relatives in sab mamalon me bahut strict the magar wo sabse lad gya .

Tammana – toh fir chhodne ki wajah kya thi .

Veenu – jab hum dono relationship me aye toh usne sab kuch chhod diya jo ladka katta chaku aur motorcycle ki chain ke bina ghar se nahi nikalta tha usne hathiyar uthane se mana kar diya uske sare dost aur jin logon ke saath uthta baithta tha wo log bahut khush the magar uski isi wajah ka fayada utha kar mere bhai ne uspe attack kiya magar shiva ka kuch nahi bigad paye par mai dar gai thi phir mere bhai ne mujhse kaha ki agar maine shiva se milna nahi chhoda toh wo use jan se mar dega isiliye maine usse break up kar liya wo bhi phone pe uske doston ne bataya mujhe ki usne 1 saal intzaar kiya mera phir achanak wo gayab ho gya kisi ko nahi pata tha ki wo kahan koi kahta tha ki wo mar gya kii kahta tha ki wo shahar chhod gya magar exactly kisi ko kuch pata nahi tha .

Aziz – toh tumne use dhoonda kaise .

Veenu – ek bar usne kaha tha ki agar maine use chhod diya toh suicide nahi karega magar marne ka bahana zarur khojega jab pahli bar shiva ka naam highlight hua tab hi mai usse milne aane wali thi magar tab tak bahut der ho chuki thi mujhe pata chala ki use 5 saal ki jail ho gai hai aur phir kuch dino ke baad khabar aai ki shiva ko jail me hi kisi ne mar diya but I didn’t believe that mujhe yakeen tha ki wo mujhe chhod kar nahi ja sakta phir achanak 5 saal baad shiva ka naam phir se samne aya toh mai bina deri kiye yaha aa gai .
Surya – ek doubt hai tum toh kisi lucky se pyar karti ho na toh shiva .

Veenu – use ye naam maine hi diya tha jab bhi mai usse baat karte hue pakdi jaati yahi kahti ki shiva se baat kar rahi .

Veenu abhi bol hi rahi thi ki Shiva ki apne kamre se bahar nikalta hai aur kahta hai .

Shiva – get ready guys we have to go aziz ammunition le aa deva check the mouth mics .

Kahkar shiva phir bar me baith kar sharab peene lagta hai tabhi lucky uske paas ata hai aur kahta hai .

Lucky – mujhe bilkul accha nahi laga ki tumne veenu se is tarah se baat ki .

Shiva ek nazar use ghoor ke dekhta hai aur kahta

Shiva – bhad me jao .

Lucky kuch kahne hi wala hota hai ki tabhi deva bol padta hai .

Deva – are commissioner sahab aap aaj bina bataye kaise .

Shiva mud ke dekhta hai toh commissioner krishmurti gate pe khade hue the wo andar aate hi kahte hai .

Commissioner krishmurti – toh tum Logon ko khabar mil hi gai accha hua ab hum drugs ke consignment ko pakad payenge .

Aslam – drugs ka consignment .

Commissioner krishmurti – han aaj 10 baje drugs ka ek bahut bada consignment aane wala hai .

Deva – magar hume toh uski koi information nahi hai .

Commissioner krishmurti – information nahi hai toh taiyari kis kiye ho rahi hai .

Phir deva unhe poori baat batata hai jise sunke commissioner krishmurti kahte hai .

Commissioner krishmurti – ye toh bahut badi problem ho gai ab kya karen .

Tabhi shiva haath me sharab ka gilas liya unke paas ata hai aur kahta hai .

Shiva – koi problem nahi hui hai aap sabhi log consignment ko rokiye rohan ko mai akela bacha lunga.

Commissioner krishmurti - Magar akele tum kaise rohan ko waha se la paoge .

Shiva – don’t worry about me humare paas waqt bahut kam hai aap poori location bataiye deva map leke aao .

Deva ek map leke aata hai aur use table pe baccha deta hai

Commissioner krishmurti – shiva consignment is raste se ayega magar ye one way dono taraf gahri khai hai hume unpe sirf samne se hi attack karne ka mauka milega .

Shiva – nahi hum un par do taraf se humla kar sakte hai .

Commissioner krishmurti – wo kaise .

Shiva – deva aur aziz tum lo 20 20 meter ki doori se road ke parallel latke rahoge charu tamanna tum log un par sirf nazar rakhoge commissioner sahab aap surya aur aslam un par samne se attack karoge jaise hi pahli goli ki awaz aayegi aziz aur deva tuk log un par peeche se attack kar doge theek hai .

Commissioner krishmurti – plan toh accha hai magar agar hum log chook gye toh matlb is baar agar kismat ne unka saath diya toh .

Shiva – toh uske liye plan b hai aap log apni position se 100 meter peeche land mines bicha denge taki agar wo log aage badhe toh unka truck blast ho jaye .
Commissioner krishmurti – hmm gud plan .

Shiva – abhi 8 baje tum logo ko nikalna hoga deva zara mujhe apna phone dena .

Deva shiva ko apna phone de deta hai shiva ghar se bahar jakar kisi se baat karta hai aur baat karne ke baad contact delet kar deta hai andar aake wo deva ko uska phone lauta deta hai aur apne kamre me ghus jata hai shiva ke jaye hi deva apni call list check karta hai magar use kuch nahi 10 min baad shiva kamre se bahar aata hai aur kahta hai.

Shiva – mai nikal raha hun tum log bhi niklo humare paas waqt baht kam hai .

Kah kar shiva ghar se bahar nikal jata hai uske peeche peeche deva bhi bahar aa jata hai shiva is waqt apni bike ke paas khada apni guns check kar raha tha deva uske paas ata hai aur kahta .

Deva – tumne kise call kiya tha .

Shiva – agar tumhe batana hota toh mai number kyu delet karta .

Deva – matlb ab tumhe mujh par bhi bharosa nahi .

Shiva – baat bharose ki nahi hai ahtiyat ki hai tera phone koi bhi check kar sakta hai aur agar kisi aur ko ye pata chala mai kisi ki madad lene wala hun toh shayad rohan ki jaan bhi ja sakti hai .

Deva – matlb tere hisaab se hum mese koi rahman se mila hua hai .

Shiva – shayad .

Deva – kaun .

Shiva – koi bhi ho sakta hai .

Kah kar shiva apni bike aage badha deta hai




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Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai....
Ye old update hai Bhai yahn tk to Mai already padh chuka hu. JB Deva ke phone SE Shiva kisi ko cll krta hai or no delete krta hai. .
I hope kl ek new update mile
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Shiva ghar se nikal kar college hostel ke samne pahunch jata hai waha rahul use khada milta hai shiva rahul ke paas jata hai aur usse kuch kahta hai rahul uski poori baat bade dhyan se sunta hai aur kahta hai .

Rahul – theek hai jaisa aapne bola waisa hi karenge .

Phir wahan se seedha kareem ke adde ki taraf nikal padta hai .

Wahi dusri taraf Commissioner krishmurti aur baaki sabhi log 1 ghante pahle hi location pe pahuch jate hai commissioner krishmurti aslam aur surya apni apni positions se 100 meter door landmines lagane lagte hai charu aur tamanna prime location 1 kilomitar aage ek car me baithi hui thi deva aur aziz khud ko rassiyon se bandh rahe the kareeb aadhe ghante me sab kuch taiyar tha commissioner krishmurti surya aur aslam samne ji taraf chhipe hue the wahi deva air aziz road ke kinare se 20 20 meyer ki doori pe latke hue the ab intzaar toh bas consignment ke aane ka aziz deva se chutki lete hue bolta hai .

Aziz – kyu deva maza aa raha hai .

Deva – chup kar sale aise latakne me tujhe hi maza aata hoga mujhe nahi .

Charu kahti hai .

Charu – kyu deva apni hanging date enjoy toh kar rahe ho na .

Deva – han bahut jyada pata nahi kis mod me sale ne plane banaya tha jo mujhe yahan latka diya .

Deva ki baat sunke sabhi log hasne lagte hai sabhi log bate kar hi rahe the ki charu ko ek bada sa truck aur 2 gadiya aati hui dikhai deti .

Charu – guys get ready consignment aa raha hai .

Aslam – kitni gadiyan hai .

Tamanna – do ek aage aur ek peeche .

Surya – ab kya .

Commissioner krishmurti – jo karne aye the wo toh karna hi hai

jaise hi truck aur gadiyan aslam aur aziz ki position ko cross karti hai commissioner krishmurti surya aur aslam teeno apni apni positions se firing shuru kar dete hai jaise hi aziz aur deva firing ki awaz sunte hai wo log bhi upar aakar peeche se firing karne lagte hai achanak hue humle se gangsters thoda chauk jate hai magar wo log bhi turant counter firing karne lagte hai aur takkar ka muqabala dene lagte hai firing kareeb ek ghanta chalti hai kuch hi gangsters bache the magar tabhi un mese ek admi granade nikal kar commissioner krishmurti ki taraf fekta hai commissioner krishmurti furti se wahan se hat jaate hai magar thode se zakhmi zarur ho jate hai ye dekh kar aslam aur surya un par andhadhundh firing karne lagte hai idhar deva sur aziz bhi lagatar goliyan chalaye ja rahe the kuch der baad sare gangsters mare jaste hai .

Idhar rahman apne boss ke paas jata hai aur kahta hai .

Rahman – sir humara plan kamyab hua shiva akele kareem ke adde pe gya hai aur uski team consignment ko rokne gai hai commissioner krishmurti ke saath .

Boss – gud aage bhi sab plan le mugalon hi hona chahiye .

Rahaman – ji .


Kah kar wo wahan se chala jata hai .


Wahi dusri taraf shiva kareem ke adde ki taraf tezi se badh raha tha karen 20 min baad shiva us area me dakhil hota hai jahan kareem ka adda hai ye is shahar ka sabse bada slum area tha yahan sabse jyada kacchi sharab banai jaati thi magar aaj tak yahan kisi police wale raid dalne ki himmat nahi ki kyunki is ilake me kareeb 2 se 3000 log rahte the aur sabhi log yahi kaam karte the agar koi poore shahar ki force leke bhi yahan raid karega toh bhi uska zinda wapas jaana namumkin tha shiva apni bike se theek speed me us basti me dakhil hota hai charon taraf jhopdiyan padi hui thi jinme kacchi sharab banai jaa rahi thi shiva bike chalte hue seedhe kareem ke adde ke samne pahuch jata hai adde ke bahar 2 admi khade the wo log shiva ke paas aate hai aur uski talashi lete hai magar shiva ke paas kuch nahi milta toh ek admi kahta hai .

Admi – hathiyar nahi laye .

Shiva – nahi mujhe tum logon ko marne ke liye hathiyaron ki jarurat nahi .

Dusra admi – bahut badi badi baate bolta hai sake yahin thook dunga .

Shiva use ghoor ke dekhta hai aur kahta hai .

Shiva – koshish kar ke dekh le .

Wo admi shiva ke is tarah ghoorne aur bolne se kuch ghbra jata hai shiva kuch nahi kahta hai aur adde me dakhil ho jata hai shiva ke anadar aate hi us jagah ka gate band kar diya jata hai shiva ke samne 10 kadam ki doori pe kareeb 20 25 log the jinke hathon me hathiyar the shiva bade araam se chalta hua 5 kadam aage badhta hai aur phir ruk jata hai aur kahta hai .

Shiva – kareem kaha hai .

Tabhi unmese ek admi kahta hai .

AdMi – mai hun kareem .

Shiva – abe chirkut tu kya samjhta hai mujhe pata nahi chalega aise khel mai un dino se khel raha hun jab tu angutha chusta tha samjha chal kareem ko bula mai chillaron se baat nahi karta .

Tabhi un admiyon ke peeche se ek tagda tandurust madyam kad laathi ka admi taliyan bajata hua bahar aata .

Admi – man gye shiva tumhe koi dhoka nahi de sakta .

Shiva – rohan kahan hai .

Kareem apne ek admi ko ishara karta hai wo rohan ko leke aata hai rohan ke dono haath bandhe hue the uske chare pe choot ke kai nishan the haath pair bhi buri tarah se zakhmi the wo apne pairon pe bhi nahi ho paa raha tha use dekh kar shiva ka gussa satve aasaman pe pahuch jata hai aur wo kahta hai .

Shiva – waise toh shayad kai tujhe zinda bhi chhod deta par ab nahi .

Kareem haste hue kahta hai .

Kareem – accha mazaak hai .

Shiva – mai mazaak nahi karta .

Kareem – maro saale ko

Sabhi log shiva ki taraf badhne lagte hai magar shiva ke chahre pe koi khauf ya koi dar nahi tha wo log shiva se bas kuch hi kadam doori pe the ki tabhi shiva apni kamar se urumi nikalta hai ( ye ek flexible sword hai jin logon ko iske baare me nahi maloom wo log ashoka movie dekh len ) sabhi log shiva ko gher lete hai aur uspe humla kar dete hai shiva bhi urumi ko hawa me laharate hue sab pe war karne lagta hai sare aadmi zameen pe gire pade hote hai magar tabhi achanak shiva ke sar pe koi peeche se war karta hai shiva wahi zameen pe gir jata hai

Wahi dusri taraf jab commissioner krishmurti aur baki sab log jab us consignment ke container ko khol ke dekhte hai hai toh unki ankhe phati ki phati rah jati hai.

Kya shiva kareem ke adde se rohan ko nikal payega kya shiva khud wahan se zinda nikal payega Kya hai rahman ka plan aisa kya hai us consignment container me jise dekh sabhi log hairan rah gye kya mod legi ye Kahani janne ke liye saath bane rahiye.
 

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Dimag ka dahi KR Diya .dhoka is bar v Shiva je sath dhoka hua hai..but bc Fark kise pasta hai..shiva..ha ise to Fark padta hai writer sahab bhale hi apni feeling na dikhata ho but sbse jayda Fark Shiva ko hi padta hai ..
Consignment Mai kiy tha iska idea jrur Shiva ko hoga..
Shiva ko piche see war Kon kiy ..dekhna dilchasp hoga
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