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Jab shiva psychic room se bahar nikala toh wo dekhta hai ki samne rudranshi tung jang dono khade the aur dono hi bahut pareshan the shiva ko dekhte hi dono shiva ke paas aate hai .
Tung jang – mujhe yakeen tha ki tumhe kuch nahi hoga
Unke swar me chinta dar aur pareshani saaf dikh rahi thi wahi rudranshi ki ankhon me khauf chhaya hua tha shiva ko se bhap ne me waqt na laga wo kahta hai .
Shiva – agar aisa toh aap dono ki ankhon me se ye pareshani jhank rahi hai .
Dono log ek dosre ko dekhte hai phir rudranshi kahti hai .
Rudranshi – shiva tumhe jald se jald humare saath chalna hoga koi sawal mat karna waise bhi bahut der ho chuki hai .
Shiva – der ho chuki matlb .
Phir shiva ko tung jang ki baat yaad aati hai ki psychic room me mahine dinon ki tarah nikalte aur aur din ghanton ki tarah magar wo kahta nahi aur rudranshi aur tung jang ke saath nikal padta hai shiva ko laga tha ye dono use academy me le jayenge magar ye kya rudranshi ne jeep ek hospital ke samne rok di shiva ne sawaliya nazron se rudranshi ki taraf dekha magar rudranshi ne koi pratikriya nahi di aur andar aane ka ishara kiya jab shiva andar aya toh rudranshi use icu ward ki le chali ab pareshani shiva ke chahre pe bhi thi kyuki icu ward ke bahar dig raghuveer pratap singh khade the shiva jab unke paas ata hai to dig sahab uske kandhe pe haath rakhte hai aur ko ward ke sheeshe me jhankne ka ishara karte hai jab shiva us sheeshe se jhankta hai toh uski ankhe badi ho jati hai aur chahra gusse se laal kyuki icu ward me koi aur nahi balki archan the shiva phir dig ki taraf dekhta hai aur kahta hai
Shiva – kisne kiya aur kyu .
Shiva ke bolne ke laheje se saaf pata chal raha tha ki wo kitne gusse me hai
Rudranshi – tumhare jane jaane baad ne david aur baki sabhi academy aa gye unhe tumhari fikr ho rahi thi jab dheerendra pawar ko ye pata chala toh usne archan mujhe aur subhash aur baki sabhi logon ko milne ke liye bulaya usne kaha tha ki sara jhagda khtm karna chahta hai lekin jab hum log wahan pahuche toh usne hum par humla kar diya wahan se jaise taise bach ke nikle hum log gadiyan me the peechebki gadi me david aur humare saathi the aur aage ki gadi mai aur subhash achank peeche ki gadi me ek rpg laga aur wo blast ho gai aur humari gadi ko kisi truck ne takkar maar di gaadi seedha khai me giri magar hum log bach lekin .
Shiva – lekin kya .
Rudranshi – lekin subhash …
Shiva – subhash kya, kya hua subhash ko
Rudranshi kuch nahi bolti bas rone lagti hai shiva uske dono kandhe ko pakad kar kahta hai .
Shiva – bolo rudranshi subhash ko kya hua .
Rudranshi kuch bola nahi ja raha tha toh dig sahab bolte .
Dig – subhash jeep drive kar raha tha jab jeep ko takkar lagi toh usi me phasa rah gya aur bach nahi paya .
Shiva – uski laash kahan hai .
Dig sahab shiva ko lekar murda ghar jate hai unke tung jang bhi the shiva murda ghar me dakhil hota toh wahan kai lashen rakhi hui thi dig sahab un mese ek paas jake khade ho jate hai shiva kanpte hue kadmo se aage badhta hai aur laash ke chahre se kafan hata ke dekhta hai kafan ke neeche subhash ki adh jali laash thi shiva ki ankhon ke samne subhash ke saath beete hue sare pal sari yaaden ghoomne lagti hai shiva wahi apne ghutno pe baith jata hai aur ek dard bhari cheekh ke saaath rone lagta hai phir thodi der baad shiva apni jagah se uthta hai aur bahar jane lagta hai dig aur tung jang bhi uske peeche kane lagte hai dig sahab shiva ke samne khade ho jate hai aur kahate hai .
Dig – shiva tum kahan ja rahe ho ye mai janta hun magar tum ye jaan lo ki tum akele uska kuch nahi kar paoge wo log bahut khatarnak hai.
Shiva dig sahan ki taraf dekhta hai uski ankhe lal ho chuki thi haatho ki nase phool kar aisi ho gai thi jaise kabhi bhi phat sakti hai wo dig sahab se kahta hai .
Shiva – aaj agar uska naam maut bhi toh bhi wo mere haathon se nahi bach payega .
Shiva ne ek ek lafz chaba ke kaha aur waha de chala gya uske jane ke baad tung yang dig sahab se kahte hai khai .
Tung jang – jane dijiye aaj ise koi nahi rok sakta .
Rudranshi bhagte hue shiva ke peeche jati hai tab tak shiva jeep start kar chuka tha rudranshi shiva se kahti hai.
Rudranshi – mai bhi tumare saath aa rahi hun .
Shiva – ye jung sirf meri .
Rudranshi – subhash mera bhi dost tha aur jo insan icu me zindgi aur maut ke beech jhool raha hai wo mere pita samaan hai toh ye ladai sirf tumhari kaise hui aur waise bhi mujhe unka thikana pata hai .
Shiva – aao baith jao .
Dono log jeep me baith jate hai toh rudranshi kahti hai .
Rudranshi – waise hum jaa kaha rahe hai .
Shiva – academy .
Shiva jeep academy ke bahar rokta hai aur paidal hi andar chal padta andar ka mahauk bahut ghamgeen tha mis james shiva paas ati hai rokte hue kahti hai .
Mis james – shiva ye kya ho gya .
Shiva – mis james jo hua use badla nahi ka sakta magar uska badla jaroor liya ja sakta hai .
Mis james – unhe zinda mat chhodna .
Shiva – aap agar na bhi kahti toh bhi mai yahi karta .
Kah shiva academy ke peeche ki taraf jata hai rudranshi bhi uske saath chal deti hai academy ke peeche hi ek mandir jaisa bana hua tha shiva usme dakhil hota hai waha ek katana rakhi hui thi use haath me leta hai aur kuch der ke liye apni ankhe band kar leta jab wo ankhe kholta hai toh uski ankhe aisi ho gai thi jaise usme aag lagi ho shiva rudranshi ke paas ata hai aur kahta hai .
Shiva – wo log kaha milenge .
Rudranshi – jungle ke beech o beech hai kareeb 40 log magar dheerendra pawar ke bare me mai nahi janti .
Shiva – chahe kuch bhi ho jaye tum mere peeche nahi aaogi archan ke theek hone tak academy ki zimmedari tumhari hai aur agar mai wapas na aya toh archan ko samjha dena .
Kah kar shiva waha se nikal jata hai
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Jab shiva psychic room se bahar nikala toh wo dekhta hai ki samne rudranshi tung jang dono khade the aur dono hi bahut pareshan the shiva ko dekhte hi dono shiva ke paas aate hai .
Tung jang – mujhe yakeen tha ki tumhe kuch nahi hoga
Unke swar me chinta dar aur pareshani saaf dikh rahi thi wahi rudranshi ki ankhon me khauf chhaya hua tha shiva ko se bhap ne me waqt na laga wo kahta hai .
Shiva – agar aisa toh aap dono ki ankhon me se ye pareshani jhank rahi hai .
Dono log ek dosre ko dekhte hai phir rudranshi kahti hai .
Rudranshi – shiva tumhe jald se jald humare saath chalna hoga koi sawal mat karna waise bhi bahut der ho chuki hai .
Shiva – der ho chuki matlb .
Phir shiva ko tung jang ki baat yaad aati hai ki psychic room me mahine dinon ki tarah nikalte aur aur din ghanton ki tarah magar wo kahta nahi aur rudranshi aur tung jang ke saath nikal padta hai shiva ko laga tha ye dono use academy me le jayenge magar ye kya rudranshi ne jeep ek hospital ke samne rok di shiva ne sawaliya nazron se rudranshi ki taraf dekha magar rudranshi ne koi pratikriya nahi di aur andar aane ka ishara kiya jab shiva andar aya toh rudranshi use icu ward ki le chali ab pareshani shiva ke chahre pe bhi thi kyuki icu ward ke bahar dig raghuveer pratap singh khade the shiva jab unke paas ata hai to dig sahab uske kandhe pe haath rakhte hai aur ko ward ke sheeshe me jhankne ka ishara karte hai jab shiva us sheeshe se jhankta hai toh uski ankhe badi ho jati hai aur chahra gusse se laal kyuki icu ward me koi aur nahi balki archan the shiva phir dig ki taraf dekhta hai aur kahta hai
Shiva – kisne kiya aur kyu .
Shiva ke bolne ke laheje se saaf pata chal raha tha ki wo kitne gusse me hai
Rudranshi – tumhare jane jaane baad ne david aur baki sabhi academy aa gye unhe tumhari fikr ho rahi thi jab dheerendra pawar ko ye pata chala toh usne archan mujhe aur subhash aur baki sabhi logon ko milne ke liye bulaya usne kaha tha ki sara jhagda khtm karna chahta hai lekin jab hum log wahan pahuche toh usne hum par humla kar diya wahan se jaise taise bach ke nikle hum log gadiyan me the peechebki gadi me david aur humare saathi the aur aage ki gadi mai aur subhash achank peeche ki gadi me ek rpg laga aur wo blast ho gai aur humari gadi ko kisi truck ne takkar maar di gaadi seedha khai me giri magar hum log bach lekin .
Shiva – lekin kya .
Rudranshi – lekin subhash …
Shiva – subhash kya, kya hua subhash ko
Rudranshi kuch nahi bolti bas rone lagti hai shiva uske dono kandhe ko pakad kar kahta hai .
Shiva – bolo rudranshi subhash ko kya hua .
Rudranshi kuch bola nahi ja raha tha toh dig sahab bolte .
Dig – subhash jeep drive kar raha tha jab jeep ko takkar lagi toh usi me phasa rah gya aur bach nahi paya .
Shiva – uski laash kahan hai .
Dig sahab shiva ko lekar murda ghar jate hai unke tung jang bhi the shiva murda ghar me dakhil hota toh wahan kai lashen rakhi hui thi dig sahab un mese ek paas jake khade ho jate hai shiva kanpte hue kadmo se aage badhta hai aur laash ke chahre se kafan hata ke dekhta hai kafan ke neeche subhash ki adh jali laash thi shiva ki ankhon ke samne subhash ke saath beete hue sare pal sari yaaden ghoomne lagti hai shiva wahi apne ghutno pe baith jata hai aur ek dard bhari cheekh ke saaath rone lagta hai phir thodi der baad shiva apni jagah se uthta hai aur bahar jane lagta hai dig aur tung jang bhi uske peeche kane lagte hai dig sahab shiva ke samne khade ho jate hai aur kahate hai .
Dig – shiva tum kahan ja rahe ho ye mai janta hun magar tum ye jaan lo ki tum akele uska kuch nahi kar paoge wo log bahut khatarnak hai.
Shiva dig sahan ki taraf dekhta hai uski ankhe lal ho chuki thi haatho ki nase phool kar aisi ho gai thi jaise kabhi bhi phat sakti hai wo dig sahab se kahta hai .
Shiva – aaj agar uska naam maut bhi toh bhi wo mere haathon se nahi bach payega .
Shiva ne ek ek lafz chaba ke kaha aur waha de chala gya uske jane ke baad tung yang dig sahab se kahte hai khai .
Tung jang – jane dijiye aaj ise koi nahi rok sakta .
Rudranshi bhagte hue shiva ke peeche jati hai tab tak shiva jeep start kar chuka tha rudranshi shiva se kahti hai.
Rudranshi – mai bhi tumare saath aa rahi hun .
Shiva – ye jung sirf meri .
Rudranshi – subhash mera bhi dost tha aur jo insan icu me zindgi aur maut ke beech jhool raha hai wo mere pita samaan hai toh ye ladai sirf tumhari kaise hui aur waise bhi mujhe unka thikana pata hai .
Shiva – aao baith jao .
Dono log jeep me baith jate hai toh rudranshi kahti hai .
Rudranshi – waise hum jaa kaha rahe hai .
Shiva – academy .
Shiva jeep academy ke bahar rokta hai aur paidal hi andar chal padta andar ka mahauk bahut ghamgeen tha mis james shiva paas ati hai rokte hue kahti hai .
Mis james – shiva ye kya ho gya .
Shiva – mis james jo hua use badla nahi ka sakta magar uska badla jaroor liya ja sakta hai .
Mis james – unhe zinda mat chhodna .
Shiva – aap agar na bhi kahti toh bhi mai yahi karta .
Kah shiva academy ke peeche ki taraf jata hai rudranshi bhi uske saath chal deti hai academy ke peeche hi ek mandir jaisa bana hua tha shiva usme dakhil hota hai waha ek katana rakhi hui thi use haath me leta hai aur kuch der ke liye apni ankhe band kar leta jab wo ankhe kholta hai toh uski ankhe aisi ho gai thi jaise usme aag lagi ho shiva rudranshi ke paas ata hai aur kahta hai .
Shiva – wo log kaha milenge .
Rudranshi – jungle ke beech o beech hai kareeb 40 log magar dheerendra pawar ke bare me mai nahi janti .
Shiva – chahe kuch bhi ho jaye tum mere peeche nahi aaogi archan ke theek hone tak academy ki zimmedari tumhari hai aur agar mai wapas na aya toh archan ko samjha dena .
Kah kar shiva waha se nikal jata hai
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Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai.
Bahut hi khubsurat update hai Bhai. .
Flashback end hone Wala hai lgta hai ...
Bahut hi khubsurat update hai Bhai. .
Flashback end hone Wala hai lgta hai ...
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Action scene kuch dhang ka likhne ki koshish kar raha hun isiliye waqt lag raha hai