Adultery Jung Pyar ke liye Nafrat Se

[Raj142]

WAITING

 

[_ABHAY]

चलो आपने पहले ही बता दिया कि ये रण्डी मॉं और उसे वापस पाने के लिए चूतिया बनाते बेटे की कहानी है।
बेमतलब में अपना समय खराब करता अब आगे तो नहीं पढ़ना पड़ेगापता नहीं इस फोरम पर कुकोल्ड, कुकसन और इन्टरफेथ कहानियों की बाढ़ आ गई है एडल्टरी के नाम से
रिवेंज, पेबैक BtB (burn the bitch/bastard) लोगों ने लिखना ही बन्द कर दिया क्या?

Socha tha aacha khasa review likhunga Story ka kamiyan aur khoobiyon ke uper magar... Conversation se pata chal gaya aage kya hone waala hai... story mai... So bekar hai kuch kehna... Aapne pehle hi mera point out kar diya aur mujhe Future update ke baare mai satark bhi kar diya...


Baaki Nothing bad for You writer... Best of luck for Your First Story... It's Quite Good but not my type... Sorry...

 

[Sunli]

भाई जिसको ये कहानी पसन्द नहीं आ रही है वो नहीं पढ़ेगा परन्तु जिसको पसन्द आई उनके लिए तो अपडेट दीजिए

 

[Jassybabra]

Waiting

 

[ayush01111]

भाई जिसको ये कहानी पसन्द नहीं आ रही है वो नहीं पढ़ेगा परन्तु जिसको पसन्द आई उनके लिए तो अपडेट दीजिए

Are bhai tension na le just suffering from high fever it may be typhoid aj trst karwaya hai and kal ya parso pakka update mil jayga and uske baad thoda break lunga agar typhod nahi hua to dosto ke sath pataya jana hai bhagwan se mano mujhe viral ho

 

[RAAZ]

Update 17
Arav apne hisab se mohre bitha raha hai magar kahtey hai na qismat apne hisab se khel khelti hai aur yah khel mai kabhi jeet to kabhi haar hoti hai abhi filhaal to sab uske hisab se hai magar jaisay aapne kaha kuch bada tufaan aane ko hai. Dekhtey hai kia hota hai.

 

[ayush01111]

Socha tha aacha khasa review likhunga Story ka kamiyan aur khoobiyon ke uper magar... Conversation se pata chal gaya aage kya hone waala hai... story mai... So bekar hai kuch kehna... Aapne pehle hi mera point out kar diya aur mujhe Future update ke baare mai satark bhi kar diya...


Baaki Nothing bad for You writer... Best of luck for Your First Story... It's Quite Good but not my type... Sorry...

Bina padhe ja rahe ho babu saheb

 

[kamdev99008]

Socha tha aacha khasa review likhunga Story ka kamiyan aur khoobiyon ke uper magar... Conversation se pata chal gaya aage kya hone waala hai... story mai... So bekar hai kuch kehna... Aapne pehle hi mera point out kar diya aur mujhe Future update ke baare mai satark bhi kar diya...


Baaki Nothing bad for You writer... Best of luck for Your First Story... It's Quite Good but not my type... Sorry...

Padhkar dekho...
Meri is post ke reply me lekhak mahoday ne apni shakti ka ahsas dilaya aur vo emotional fool ki jagah angree young man rakhenge hero ko

 

[Babasarkar]

Nice story

 

[_ABHAY]

Bina padhe ja rahe ho babu saheb

15 update padh liya bhai story ke... Tabhi agree hua baaki dekhte hai aage kya hota hai...

Rebu chahiye bata dena... Story ka overall view de dunga abhi tak ka...
Baaki mana kar do jayada behtar hai past experience se keh raha hun... 6 writer's mere ek rebu ke baad hafte bhar mai story chhod kar chale gaye... Mai chahta hurt ho koi...