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Me abhi apne behoshi ke haalat me tha ki tabhi mujhe mere aankhon ke saamne kuch ajibo garib drushya dikhayi diye mera ek man jaanta tha ki ye sab kewal meri kalpana aur bhram hai

lekin phir bhi mera ek man mujhse lagataar kah raha tha ki ye sab kahi na mere jiwan se juda hai aur is tarah sochte hi mere pure sharir me dar ki siharan paida ho jati iska kaaran tha mere saamne ka drushya

ek puri tarah se nasht aur niraasha se bhara hua ek aisa vishv jo puri tarah se nasht aur niraasha se bhara hua sthaan tha

Ek samay mein hare-bhare jangal, khubasurat nadiyaan, aur unche pahaad is vishv ki shobha badhaate the, lekin ab sab kuchh nasht ho chuka tha

jangal paniakar svaaha ho gae the, nadiyaan sukh gai thin, aur pahaad dhvast ho gae the vishv ki sundarata aur jivan ki urja puri tarah se nasht ho gai thi

vaayu pradushit thi, pani dushit tha, aur dharati ujaad thi vishv ke jiv-jantu aur ped-paudhe puri tarah se nasht ho gae the maanav sabhyata bhi puri tarah se nasht ho gai thi

Shaharon ke dhaanche dhvast ho gae the, aur logon ke gharon ke avashesh bikhare hue the vishv mein ek ajib si shaanti thi, lekin yah shaanti niraasha aur avasaad se bhari hui thi

Yah vishv ab ek puri tarah se nasht aur niraasha se bhara hua sthaan tha, jahaan jivan ki koi ummid nahin thi is vishv mein koi jivan nahin tha, koi sundarata nahin thi, aur koi aasha nahin thi

Yah vishv puri tarah se nasht ho gaya tha, aur iski koi bhi vastu ab nahin bachi thi bachi thi toh kewal nirasha se bhari chikhe aur yade jo baar baar mujhe apne pass bula rahi thi

mujhse madad mang rahi thi mujhe maarne ke liye aage badhti toh kuch santvana dene ke kuch atyant dukhi the ya kuch atyant pida me dikh rahe the

Lekin in sabse alag sabki aankhon mujhe lekar me krodh ke bhav mahsoos kar sakta tha jo chikh chikh kar kah rahi thi ki is sabka jimmedar me tha

lekin me kaise kya mere pichle jivan me mene koi apradh kiya tha ya kuch aur me abhi is baare me soch raha tha ki tabhi mujhe mere kanon me ek karkash aawaj sunayi dene lagi

"Dekho kaun bechara laut aaya hai ye na tab kuch kar saka tha na ab kuch kar sakega tab iske wajah se ye grah tabah hua tha aur ab phir se iski kamjori ke wajah se pura bramhand tabah hoga aur ye bas dekhte rahega"

Jaise jaise ye aawaj mere kanon me ja rahi thi waise waise hi meri ichha shakti pahle se kamjor hone lagi tyi mera dil khali maidaan ke tarah ho gaya tha na kewal dil balki mano mera dimag bhi kholhla ho gaya tha

Jaise ki usme na koi yaad ho na koi bhavna bas tha toh kewal khokhla aur nirasha se bhara hua akela pan tha me chah kar bhi kuch nahi pa raha tha

mujhe is baat ka ehsaas ho raha tha ki us kawach ka asar abhi bhi mere uper hai kyuki ye sapne me hone je bawjood bhi me mahsoos kar sakta tha ki mere sharir par kitna wajah hai toh wahi qbhi me nirasha se pura bhara hua tha ki tabhi ek saumya aawaj ne mera dhyan apne upar kendrit karaya

"Viraj tum haar nahi maan sakte me jaanti hu ki tum us shaitaan se meri maut ka humare pariwar ke maut ka badla jaroor loge mujhe tum par bharosa hai tum hi jitoge"

Bhale hi me khud par se pura bharosa Kho chuka tha mera aatmavishwas chaknachur ho gaya tha lekin woh saumya aawaj sunkar mujhe aisa laga jaise ki mujhe nayi urja naya aatmavishwas aur sabse important naya jiwan prapt ho gaya ho

Aur aisa mahsoos hote hi mene turant apne is dukhad swapan se bahar nikalne ka faisla kar liya aur aisa karte hi mujhe ek judaw mahsoos hone laga

jo mere dil aur dimag ke bich tha lekin ye bilkul kisi patle dhage ke tarah kamjor tha lekin is patle dhage ki maujudgi bhi mere liye kafi madadgar sabit hui

mene turant is judaw ko aur bhi majboot karne ke liye apne dil aur dimag ko ek karne ka prayas kiya aur pahle ke mukable is baar mujhe ye karne me koi dikkat nahi hui

balki me pahle se bhi jyada utsahit aur taakatwar mahsoos kar pa raha tha jiske parinaam swarup me apne dil aur dimag ko ek karne me kaamyaab raha aur aisa karte hi mere aaspaas ki sabhi chije yaha tak ki jamin bhi rakh me badal gaye

aur woh puri jagah tez prakash me ghir gayi woh prakash itna tez tha ki usne mujhe apni aakhe band karne par majboor kar diya

Aur jab mene apni aakhe kholi to me usi jungle me tha mere saamne woh aadmi jo apne crossbow se mujh par nishana tane baitha tha lekin jis baat ne mujhe hvayuan kar diya woh tha dard

jo hosh me aane ke baad mujhe jara bhi mahsoos nahi hua tha mujhe yaad hai ki me behosh hone se pahle kitne dard me tha lekin ab jaise sab kuch gayab ho gaya tha

aur saath me hi ab mujhe mere upar kawach ka koi dabav ya wajan bhi mahsoos nahi ho raha tha jisse mere chehre par ek muskaan aa gayi

aur isse pahle ki woh mujh par agla tir chhod pata me turant khada ho gaya aur jis haath me usne apna crossbow pakda hua tha us hath par apni laat se humla kiya

aur ek hi jhatke me uske hath se uska crossbow chut gaya aur door jake gira aur aise hote hi mene turant apna hath hawa me uthaya jisse aasman se ek aakriti mere taraf badhne lagi jo kuch aur nahi balki meri hi talwaar thi anant urja astra aur uske aate hi nene turant talwar ko usje gardan par rakh diya

Me :- (shaitaani muskan ke saath) ab batao yaha kaun marne wala hai

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Ifrito ko haraane ke baad mere sharir me ek nayi urja thi. Aag ke andar ka aggression mere sharir me behte hue me mahasoos kar sakta tha, lekin uske saath control ka ek naya bhaav bhi tha. Lekin main jaanta tha ki ye sirf shuruaat thi agla kadam ab mujhe ek nayi shakti ke saamne le jaa raha tha paani ka prakop.

Main seedha uttar purv ki taraf badh raha tha. Aag ke prabhav ke saath zameen ke neeche ka taap mujhe aasani se mehsoos ho raha tha, lekin jaise jaise main aage badh raha tha, hava thandi hoti ja rahi thi. Paanch din tak chalne ke baad main ek gehri ghaati ke kinare pahucha samudra ke saath milti hui nadiyon ke paas.

Paani ki awaaz har taraf goonj rahi thi. Hawa ke saath ek thanda pan tha jo mere rom-rom ko suunna kar raha tha. Main ne apni talwar ko mayan se nikaala aur aag ke chamak ke saath talwar ki dhar chamak rahi thi lekin ab mujhe aag ke saath nahi, paani ke flow ke saath ladna tha.

Tabhi ek bhayanak awaaz hawa me gunj gayi.

"Tumne agni ko jeet liya... lekin paani ko jeetna asaan nahi hoga."

Main seedha apni jagah pe khada raha. Samudra ke beech se ek bhayanak shakal nikal rahi thi. Ek bade saap ke jaise sharir wala prani, jiske sharir pe pani ka pratik tha. Uski aankhein neela rang ki thi, jaise gehre samudra ke tah se dekh rahi ho.

“Tum kaun ho?” maine apni awaaz ko sambhalte hue kaha.

Usne apni aankhein meri taraf uthayi. "Main Hydron hoon pani ka danav."

Hydron ke sharir ke aaspaas paani ka chakr ban raha tha. Har saans ke saath samudra ke leheron me ek kampan thi.

“Tum yahaan kyun aaye ho, yuvak?”

Maine apni talwar ko neeche kiya. "Main tumse ladne aaya hoon tumhe haraane ke liye."

Hydron ke chehre pe ek halki si muskaan thi. “Paani ko jeetna mushkil hai. Tum agni ke saath aaye ho lekin agni paani ke saamne hamesha shant ho jaati hai.”

Maine apni talwar ke upar aag ke flow ko mehsoos kiya lekin mujhe maloom tha ki is baar mujhe sirf aag ke saath nahi, paani ke flow ke saath ladna hoga. aag ke aggression ko control karke paani ke flow ko samajhna hoga.

Hydron ne apne haathon ko uthaya samudra ke lehron ke saath ek teekha chakr bana. Ek pani ki bhaari leher mere taraf daud rahi thi.

Maine apni talwar ko uthaya lekin jaise hi maine aag ke saath strike kiya, paani ne aag ke glow ko daba diya. Ek zor ka dhakka laga aur main peeche ja gira.

Main apni saans ko sambhal ke utha. Hydron ke chehre pe ek thandi si muskaan thi. "Yeh toh bas shuruaat hai."


Day 1:

Main apni talwar lekar khada hua. Hydron ke haathon se ek aur leher nikli is baar leher ke saath thandi hawa thi. Main apni talwar ke saath counter karne ke liye aage badha lekin jaise hi talwar paani ke flow ke saath takraayi, ek thanda pan meri haddiyon tak pahunch gaya.

Paani ka pressure mere sharir ke upar tha aag ke saath main virodh kar raha tha lekin aag ke andar ka aggression paani ke smooth flow ke saamne bekar tha.

Main peeche gira. Hydron ne apni aankhein tang ki. "Tum aggressive ho... lekin paani ke saath aggressiveness kaam nahi karega."

Main apni saans ko sambhala. Apni aankhein band ki. aag ke andar ke aggression ko peeche kiya apni body ko relax kiya aur paani ke flow ke saath apni body ko match kiya.

Hydron ne ek aur strike ki lekin is baar main ne apni talwar ko dheere se ghoomaya aag ke saath nahi, apni body ke natural flow ke saath. Strike ko maine side me ghoomake tod diya.

Hydron ne apni aankhein meri taraf uthayi. "Tum samajhne lage ho."


Day 2:

Doosre din Hydron ne apni speed badhaayi. Paani ke chakr ab mere aaspaas ghoom rahe the. Hydron ke haathon se nikalti hui lehron ke saath samudra ke leher mil rahi thi.

Main apni talwar ke saath paani ke flow ko mehsoos kar raha tha lekin jaise hi main apni talwar ko ghoomata, aag ka aggression beech me aa raha tha.

Ek leher ke dhakke ne mujhe zameen pe gira diya.

Main ne apni saans ko andar li apni body ko dheere se adjust kiya apni talwar ko paani ke flow ke saath match kiya. aag ke aggression ko peeche kiya.

Hydron ne ek bade chakr ko meri taraf phenka lekin maine apni talwar ke saath apni body ko paani ke saath ek kiya ek arc ke saath strike kiya paani ke chakr ko tod diya.

Hydron ke chehre pe ab hvayuani thi. "Tumne apna flow pakad liya hai."


Day 3:

Teesre din Hydron ne apni asli shakti dikhayi. Samudra ke andar ke leheron ke saath usne ek storm create kiya. Paani ke beech main apni talwar lekar khada tha. Hawa tez ho chuki thi.

Main apni talwar ko apne saamne rakha paani ke flow ke saath apni body ko milaaya. Ek strike maari lekin Hydron ne apni body ke saath paani ke andar se attack kiya ek zor ka dhakka laga.

Meri aankhein bandh thi.

Main ne apni body ke andar ke flow ko pakda aag ko shant kiya paani ke saath apni body ko match kiya. Ek arc ke saath apni talwar ko ghoomaya Hydron ke flow ke saath apne flow ko match kiya.

Ek zor ka dhamaka hua. Hydron peeche gira. Samudra ke leher ab shant ho gayi thi.

Main uske samne khada tha talwar uske gale pe rakhi thi.

Hydron ne apni aankhein band ki. "Tumne paani ke flow ko samajh liya hai."

Hydron ki body se ek neela glow meri talwar ke blade me sama gaya. Paani ki shakti ab mere andar thi.

Main apni talwar ko mayan me daal ke aage badha. Ab main aag aur pani ke balance ke saath tayyar tha. Lekin ab bhi mujhe teen elements ka samna karna tha.

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Me :- (shaitaani muskan ke saath) ab batao yaha kaun marne wala hai

Jaise hi mene apni talwar ko us aadmi ke gardan par rakha turant hi uske chehre ke expression badalne lage ye sab kewal kuch second me hi hua tha

Isiliye us aadmi ke pass apne reflex use karke bachne ka koi mauka nahi tha aur jab usne apni halat par gaur kiya toh uske chehre par aaye shocking bhav dheere dheere muskaan me badalne lage

Uske sharir se kala dhua nikalne laga aur dekhte hi dekhte woh aadmi us kale dhue me kahi gayab ho gaya jo dekhkar ab shocked hone ki bari meri thi

Me yaha waha dekh raha tha ki tabhi mujhe mere piche se tqliyon ki aawaj aane lagi aur jab mene mudkar dekha toh me dang rah gaya

Kyunki waha par Guru shika khade the jo mere taraf muskurate hue dekh rahe the aur taliya bajate hue aage aage badh rahe the me unhe dekhkar dang tha

Kyuki us aadmi ke kahe mutabik guru shika ko usne maar diya tha aur ab woh mere saamne sahi salamat dekhkar me turant unke saamne pahunch gaya

Me (chinta me):- shika aap thik to hai aapko kuch hua toh nahi

Mene Abhi sawal pucha tha ki tabhi shika ne ek laat mere sine par maar di lekin pichle baar ki tarah piche girne ke bajaye me kewal thoda ladkhada gaya tha

Shika :- sahi sarvnaam ka istemal karo kitne baar tumhe batau aur rahi baat in sab chikon ki toh ye kewal ek bhram tha is jungle kadam rakhte hi tum mere adhukarik kshetra me pahunch gaye ho isiliye tum Kisi jaduyi shaktiyon ya astron ka istemal nahi kar sakte lekin anant urja astra jo mere se kahi jyada shaktishali hai me use rok nahi paya isiliye tumhe sahi gyan aur training ke liye mujhe ye bhram taiyar karna pada yodha ka tumhari talwaar cyinne ka kawach ka aur aakhir me tumhare upar humle ka jiske parinaam tumhare saamne hai ab tu pahle s4 bhi jyada tez jyada shaktishali aur jyada gyani ho aur dil dimaag ek karne se mere bhram bhi tumhare saamne tik nahi saka

Jaise jaise shika mujhe sab bata raha tha waise me hvayuan ho raha tha me samajh bhi nahi pa raha tha ki aakhir kab aur kaise me is jaal me phas gaya aur kab unhe mere anant urja astra ke baare me pata chala

Aur abhi me soch raha tha ki tabhi mujhe yaad aaya jungle me humari pahali muthbhed jaha shika ne apne khanjar se mujhe jakhami kiya tha

Jab ki anant urja astra ke hote mujhe chot nahi pahuch sakti aur unhone ne toh jakhmi kar diya tha matlab is jungle me aaye hi me bhram me tha

Ab unke is ghamand ka karan samajh aata hai ki Kyu woh khud ko sarvagyani guru maharaj shika kahalwana pasand karte hai

Toh wahi jab me in sab khayalon me uljha hua tha ki tabhi mujhe aisa laga jaise Puri duniya ulat gayi Jo ghas mere pvayuo ke niche thi

Ab woh mere sar ke uper tvayu rahi thi lekin jab me is badlaw ko mahsoos kar hosh me aaya toh pata chala me haea me ulta latka hua tha aur shika hath me crossbow leke mujh par nishana tane khade the

Shika :- agar yuddh ke maidan me tum aise vicharon me gum ho gaye toh shatru ke jaal me faskar humesha mar jaoge yaad rakhna shatru tumhe maarne ke liye ya pakadne ke liye kisi bhi bhram ka istemal kar sakta hai isiliye ab ye tum par hai ki tumhe shatru ke bhram se bachna hai ya fasna hai (thandi saas chodte hue)bahut kuch shikhana padega tumhe bachhe

Me (utsah se):- toh kya aap yani sarvagyani guru maharaj shika mujhe woh sab shikhayenge jo mujhe shikhna hai

Shika (muskurate hue) :- agar me tumhe apna shishya banana nahi chahta toh kabhi tum mujhe dekh bhi nahi sakte toh kal subah tayar rahna

Me :- toh ab mujhe yaha se utar bhi dijiye taki hum abhi shuru kar sake

Shika :- ye bhi ek bhram hai tumhari aakhiri pravesh pariksha ise tod kar kal subah tak choti ke niche pahunch jana

Itna bolkar woh waha se nikal gaye aur me waise hi waha latakta raha aur kuch ghanto ki mehanat me is bhram ko bhi aasani se tod saka bhram ke todne ke baad jab mene apne anant urja astra ko apne sharir me sama liya toh achanak mera sharir chamakne laga aur jab chamak kam ho gayi toh mere kamar ek mayan aa gayi thi jisme anant urja astra kisi sadharan talwar ki tarah rakha tha

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Meri training ka pehla mahina ek nightmare jaisa tha. Shika ne mujhe subah se lekar raat tak khada rakha talwar chalana, stance pakadna, aur apni body ko discipline dena.

“Zyada zor mat laga,” Shika ne kaha jab maine apni talwar ko ek bure strike ke saath ghoomaya. “Talwar ka wazan mehsoos karo. Force se nahi, balance se kaam lo.”

Main pasine se bheeg chuka tha, haath dard se kamp rahe the. Lekin Shika ke chehre pe koi reham nahi tha.

“Dobara,” usne kaha.

Maine apni saans ko sambhala aur talwar uthai. Shika ne apni talwar ko halka sa ghoomaya ek fluid, effortless motion jo meri talwar ke path ko block kar gayi. Ek second ke andar, uski talwar meri gardan ke paas thi.

“Tum bahut soch rahe ho,” Shika bole. “Talwar ko mehsoos karo socho mat.”

Maine apne thake hue hathon ko dekha. “Lekin bina soche talwar kaise chalau?”

Shika ne apni talwar ko mayan me dala aur meri taraf dekha. “Samay ke saath.”

Agle din, training aur zyada intense ho gayi. Shika ne mujhe ek choti si patthar ki machan pe khada kiya aur ek task diya jo tha, “Balance.”

Main apni talwar ko grip karta raha jab hawa tez hone lagi. Shika ne apni talwar se ek sharp strike kiya main apni talwar se usse block karne ki koshish ki lekin mere pvayu fisal gaye. Main zameen pe gir gaya.

Shika mere upar jhuke “Tum bas apni taqat pe bharosa kar rahe ho. Balance chahiye. aag, dharti, vayu, aakash aur pani ke flow ko samjho. Control karo.”

Maine apni saans ko control kiya aur dobara khada hua. Shika ne mujh par fir se strike kiya is baar main zyada shant tha. Maine apni talwar ko defensive position pe rakha, apni saans ko sambhala, aur strike ko deflect kiya.

Shika ke chehre pe ek chhoti si muskaan aa gayi.

“Shuruvaat achhi hai,” usne kaha. “Lekin yeh sirf shuruvaat hai.”

Do mahine ke baad meri body strong hone lagi thi. Muscles tight ho rahi thi, grip mazboot ho gayi thi. Lekin Shika ke training ka asli test tab aaya jab usne mujhe pehli baar elements ke saath train karne ko kaha.

“aag aur pani ek doosre ke virodhi hai,” Shika bole, apni talwar ko samne pakad kar. “Lekin jab yeh ek saath kaam karte hain… tab asli power dikhti hai.”

Main ek khule maidan me tha. Shika ke talwaar se aag ke chhote chhote flames nikal rahe the.

“aag ko apne talwar me lao,” usne kaha.

Maine apni saans ko control kiya, apni talwar ke wazan ko mehsoos kiya. Maine aag ke liye apni body ke andar ke garmi ko mehsoos kiya ek dhadkan jaisi jo mere haathon tak pahuch rahi thi.

Talwar ke blade ke upar ek laal chamak aayi. Shika ne ek sharp strike kiya main apni aag-wrapped talwar ko lekar aage badha. Talwar ke clash se ek chhoti si chingari nikli.

Lekin fir Shika ne apni talwar se pani ki ek lahar nikali jo mere talwar ke upar girte hi uski flame bujh gayi. Main peeche hat gaya.

“aag ko control karo,” Shika bole. “pani ko dushman mat samjho. Use apna saathi samjho.”

Maine apni saans ko dobara control kiya. Maine aag ko dobara apni talwar me bulaya is baar maine pani ko bhi mehsoos kiya ek thandi sanse jo aag ke garmi ke opposite thi.

Main aage badha. Shika ne pani ka ek doosra strike kiya maine aag ko twist kiya, usse paani ke flow ke saath milaya. Talwar ke blade pe ek laal aur neeli chamak thi.

Shika ne apni talwar neeche ki.

“Ab samajh aaya?”

Maine apni talwar ko neeche kiya, saans tezi se chal rahi thi.

“aag aur pani ek doosre ke virodhi nahi hain,” Shika bole. “Woh ek doosre ki taakat ko balance karte hain.”

Us din ke baad meri training badal gayi. Main sirf aag ya sirf pani pe focus nahi karta tha main dono ko ek saath laane ki koshish karta tha. aag ki garmi ko pani ke thande flow ke saath milana. Strength aur calmness ko balance karna.

Ek din, Shika ne ek bada test diya.

Usne ek bade pani ki lahar ko mere upar bheja. Main aag ke saath strike kiya lekin paani ke flow ko toda nahi. Maine apne andar ki shakti ko balance kiya aag ko paani ke saath milaya. Talwar ke blade pe ek fiery-blue chamak aayi.

Shika ne apni talwar neeche ki. “Bohot accha.”

Maine apni saans ko normal kiya, haath abhi bhi kamp rahe the.

“Ab agla step,” Shika bole. “Tumhe ab sirf aag aur pani nahi… baki elements ko bhi samajhna padega.”

Main apni talwar ke blade ko dekha, jo ab bhi thodi si chamak raha tha. aag aur pani ek saath… lekin abhi dharti, vayu, aur aakash ko samajhna baki tha.

Aur unke liye bhi Main ready tha.

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Paanchvein mahine tak, mera sharir mazboot ho chuka tha jahan kabhi sirf kamzori thi, wahan ab majbooti thi. Talvaar ki mutthi mere haathon ko ab chot nahi pahunchata tha. Mera man tez ho chuka tha, mere pratikriya aur bhi tej. Par Shika ne ye sunishchit kiya ki sirf shakti hi kaafi nahi hai.

“Shakti bina santulan ke sirf vinash hai,” Shika bole. “Talvaar ko samjho, apne sharir ko samjho par agar tatvon par niyantran nahi kiya, toh tum mar jaoge.”

Subah, ek patharile maidan par, bijliyon se ghirte asmaan ke neeche, prashikshan shuru hua. Shika apni lathi zameen mein gaad kar khade the, uski aankhein bilkul thandi aur ghehri thi.

“Paanch tatv hote hain,” usne kaha. “Aag, prithvi, pani, vayu… aur aakash.”

"Lekin me toh pahle hi 0ancho tatvon ke astra aur shaktiyon ka istemal kar sakta hoon" mene aatmavishwas se kaha"yaha tak ki mene black flames aur pink flames ko bhi use kiya hai"

"Acha... Phir bhi tumhe agni aur pani ko balance karne me 2 mahine lag gaye " unhone mere aatmavishwas chaknachur karte hue kaha "shakti ka istemal koi bhi kar sakta hai lekin important hai use kabu karna aur santulan banana" ekdum se mere bagal me aa kar "agar tum unhe kabu kar chuke hote toh jungle me bhi unka istemal kar chuke hote aur me kabhi tumhari shakti ko bandh nahi pata"

Uske aise bolne se mera aatmavishwas chaknachur ho gaya aur ab me phir se unke saamne training ke liye aa gaya

Usne ek kadam peeche liya aur apni lathi uthai. “Tatvon ko apni talvaar mein samao.”

Maine aankhein band ki aur apne sharir ke andar ki gati ko mehsoos kiya. Maine prithvi ko bulaya jo mere pairon ke neeche gunj rahi thi. Ek zordaar shakti ka bhaav mere sharir mein daud gaya. Phir maine hawa ko mehsoos kiya jo mere chehre se takra rahi thi.

Neeli bijli meri talvaar ke dhaar par chamak uthi, maine is urja ko aag mein badal diya. Talvaar bhadak uthi.

Shika ne apni lathi ghuma di aur achanak ek majboot aur jordaar pani ka pravah meri talvaar se takra gaya, turant hi aag bujh gayi.

“aag bahut jyada hai,” Shika ne thande swar mein kaha. “Aag sirf kha jaati hai. Yeh sthir nahi rehti.isiliye use kabu me rakho”

Maine gehri saans li aur phir se koshish ki. Is baar, maine hawa ko apne saath bulaya. Hawa mere chaaron taraf ghoom gayi, dhool ko udane lagi. Maine ise apni talvaar ke ird-gird lapet diya, ek tez dhaar banayi.

Shika ne phir apni lathi uthai. Ek jhatke se prithvi fat gayi aur ped ki jade mere pairon ko lapetne lagi. Maine turant talvaar se unhe kaat diya, par jaise hi hawa bikhari, talvaar bhi kamzor pad gayi.

“Hawa bina kendrit kiye bekaar hai.”

Maine zameen pe ek mukka maara. “Tum mujhe adjust karne ka mauka hi nahi de rahi ho!”

Shika ki aankhein tez ho gayi. “Asal yudh mein koi mauka nahi deta ab tak tum yuddh ke maidan me 5 baar mar gaye hote.”

Aur fir usne hamla kar diya.

Aag ka ek tez gola meri taraf badha maine pani ki ek lehar uthai aur use hata diya, ek bhaari dhuaan ud gaya. Par dhund ke us paar maine Shika ki chhaya dekhi tezi se meri taraf aati hui.

Ek patthar ka teela mere neeche se nikla maine chalang lagai, vayu ko apne neeche mehsoos kiya aur surakshit zameen par utaara.

Shika ki lathu mere sir ki taraf ayi jise maine mushkil se roka.

“come on,” Shika bole, uski aankhein ek alag chamak se bhar gayi. “Santulan. Pravah banaye rakho nahi toh maut nischit hai”

Maine haanpte hue peeche kadam rakha.

“Aakash ka kya?” maine poocha.

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Me :- Aakash ka kya

Shika halki si muskurai. “Aakash bulaya nahi jata. Use mehsoos kiya jata hai (thandi aah bharte hue) aao mere piche me batata hoon.”

Shika ne mujhe ek purane mandir ke samne khada kiya. Mandir ke upar kaale badal chha rahe the, aur hawaa thodi bhaari lag rahi thi jaise kuch bada hone wala ho.

“aag, dharti, pani aur vayu ke saath tumne balance banana seekh liya hai,” Shika bole, uski awaaz ekdum theek aur shant thi. “Lekin ek element abhi bhi bacha hai.”

Maine apni talwar ko mayan se nikal liya. “aakash?”

Shika ne dheere se sir haan me hilaya.

“aakash sirf khaali jagah nahi hai,” Shika bole, apni talwar ko zameen pe tikate hue. “Yeh sab kuch ko jodne wala ek adrishya dhaga hai. Agar tum aakash ko samajh jao, toh tum elements ke flow ko bend kar sakte ho.”

Mera gala sukh gaya. “Kaise?”

Shika ne apni talwar ko uthaya. “Seekhne ke liye, tumhe pehle apne andar ke shor ko shant karna hoga.”

Main ek kadam aage badha, lekin achanak Shika ne strike mara ek tez vayu ka jhonka meri taraf aaya. Maine apni talwar ko defensive stance me rakha, lekin hawa ka pressure itna zyada tha ki main peeche fisal gaya.

Shika ne dobara attack kiya ek teekha aag ka stream mere samne aya. Maine apni talwar se block karne ki koshish ki, lekin Shika ne aakash ke andar ek distortion create kiya aag ke flames mere guard ko tod kar mujhe piche girane wale the jab maine hawa ko use kiya.

Main hawa ke flow ke saath aag ko divert kar diya. Lekin tabhi Shika ne aakash ke andar ek aur tear kiya mere side se ek patthar ka spike nikal ke aaya.

Main shock me tha. “Yeh kya tha?”

Shika ne apni talwar ko neeche kiya. “aakash ek bridge hai aag ko pani se, pani ko dharti se jodne wala ek thread.”

Main saans le raha tha, meri body abhi bhi tension me thi.

“Tum bas force se kaam le rahe ho,” Shika bole. “aakash force se nahi, flow se control hota hai.”

Maine apni aankhen band ki. aag ki garmi ko mehsoos kiya lekin aakash ke andar ek halka sa khali pan bhi mehsoos kiya. dharti ki solidity ko samjha lekin aakash ke andar ek soft echo bhi mehsoos kiya. Hawa ke flow ke saath paani ke motion ko connect karne ki koshish ki.

Aur phir maine aakash ke andar ek vibration mehsoos kiya. Ek halka kamjor sa dhaga jo har element ko ek saath bandh raha tha.

Main apni talwar ke saath aage badha. Shika ne ek sharp strike kiya aag aur pani ka ek saath strike. Maine apni talwar ko ghoomaya aakash ke andar ke echo ko mehsoos kiya aur strike ko ek side pe divert kar diya.

Shika ne apni talwar ko hawa ke saath ghoomaya main neeche jhuka, apni talwar ke saath ek small arc create kiya aakash ke flow ke saath apni body ko move kiya. Hawa ka attack mere upar se nikal gaya.

Shika ke chehre pe ek halki si muskaan thi. “Behtareen.”

Lekin tabhi uski muskaan gayab ho gayi. “Ab asli test.”

Shika ne apni talwar ko aakash ke andar ghoomaya. Ek distortion create hua maine dekha ki ek saath aag, pani, dharti aur vayu chaaron elements mere upar toot rahe the.

Maine apni saans ko andar liya. Apni talwar ke weight ko mehsoos kiya. Apne haathon ke andar ki garmi ko mehsoos kiya aag ke heat ko samjha. Paas ke thande hawa ke flow ko mehsoos kiya. Zameen ke thos hone ka asar apni body pe mehsoos kiya. Paani ke flow ko apni naso tak mehsus kiya.

Aur phir… maine aakash ke andar ke echo ko samjha.

Main apni talwar ke saath aage badha. aag aur pani ki lahar ke beech se guzra talwar ko ek smooth arc ke saath ghoomaya aakash ke andar ke vibration ke saath apni body ko adjust kiya.

dharti ka spike mere neeche se nikal raha tha maine vayu ke flow ke saath apni position ko adjust kiya aur spike ke edge ko apni talwar ke saath tor diya.

Shika ne aakash ke andar ek aur tear create kiya lekin maine aakash ke flow ko samjh liya tha. Maine apni talwar ko twist kiya aakash ke andar ke pressure ko feel kiya aur tear ke vibration ko calm kiya.

Shika ne apni talwar neeche ki. “Bas.”

Main saans le raha tha, meri body thodi kamp rahi thi lekin ab dar nahi tha. aakash ke andar ke flow ko mehsoos kar raha tha. Ek harmony thi ek silence jo aag, pani, dharti, aur vayu ke saath connected tha.

Shika mere saamne aaye

“Tumne aakash ko samajh liya hai,” uski awaaz me ek gurutv tha. “Ab tum elements ke flow ko tod sakte ho ya unhe apni marzi se control kar sakte ho.”

Maine apni talwar ko neeche kiya. Talwar ke blade ke upar ek safed aur neela glow tha aag aur pani ka saath, dharti ka weight, vayu ka flow sab kuch ek balance me tha.

Shika ne pehle baar apni aankhon me ek softness dikhayi.

“Ab tum tayyar ho.”

Maine apni talwar ko mayan ke andar rakha. Ab is sab training ke baad meri body ke andar ek naya balance mehsoos ho raha tha.

Elements ka flow ab mere control me tha. Main tayyar tha.

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Barf gir rahi thi jab Shika mujhe ek jami hui jheel ke kinaare le gayi. Raat ka asmaan khoon ke rang ka tha laal chand ki roshni barf ke upar ek teekhi chamak daal rahi thi.

Shika jheel ke kinaare pe khade the, apni talwar ko zameen pe tikaye hue

“Tumne control seekh liya hai,” Shika ne kaha, thandi hawa ke saath uski awaaz bilkul saaf sunayi di. “Lekin control kaafi nahi hai.”

Main confuse ho gaya. “Control ke bina to kuch bhi nahi hota… fir control kaafi kyu nahi hai?”

Shika ne apni talwar ko nikal liya ek patla, kaala steel ka blade jo andhere me chamak raha tha.

“Ab tak tumne elements ko samjha hai. Ab dekho kya hota hai jab woh tumhare khilaf use hote hain.”

Main peechhe hata. “Kya matlab?”

Shika ne bina ek shabd kahe mujh par vaar kiya.

Uski talwar hawaa ko cheerte hue meri taraf aayi. Maine apni talwar uthayi, strike ko block kiya ek zor ka jhatka mere haathon me laga. Shika ne dobara attack kiya aag ke ek flame ke saath.

Main ghoom gaya, apni talwar ko aag ke saamne rakha. Ek zor ki chingari phooti jab dono blades takraaye. Main peeche hata, dil zor se dhadak raha tha.

“Shika!” maine cheekha.

Usne koi jawab nahi diya. Uska chehra ekdum shant tha, jaise ek warrior jo maidan me apni shikar ko dekh raha ho.

“Tum sach me lad rahe ho?” maine kaha, haath se apni talwar ko mazbooti se pakadte hue.

Shika ne ek sharp strike kiya is baar hawa ke saath. Ek tez hawa ka jhonka meri taraf aaya maine apni talwar ko use block karne ke liye ghoomaya, lekin hawa ke pressure ne mujhe peeche gira diya.

Main zameen pe gira, saans tezi se chal rahi thi.

“Tumhare dushman reham nahi karenge,” Shika ne kaha, hawaa me apni talwar ko uthate hue. “Kya tum tayyar ho?”

Maine apni saans ko normal kiya. aag ko bulaya. Talwar ke blade ke aas paas ek laal chamak aayi. Maine strike kiya lekin Shika ne apni talwar se ek paani ka stream bhej diya. aag bujh gaya.

Main shock me tha. “Yeh kaise ho sakta hai?”

Shika ne apni talwar ko ghoomaya ek patthar ka spike mere neeche se utha. Maine aag aur hawa ko bulaya spike ko girane ki koshish ki lekin Shika ne aakash ka istemal kiya. aakash ke ek halka sa distortion ne mere aag aur hawa ke flow ko bigaad diya.

Main peeche gira, barf pe gir gaya.

Main saans lene ke liye struggle kar raha tha. aag ka control mere haathon se nikal raha tha. pani ke flow ko samajh nahi pa raha tha. dharti mere control me nahi thi. aakash ko chhoonne ki koshish karta tha lekin wo meri pakad se door ja raha tha.

“Tum elements ke khilaf lad rahe ho,” Shika bole, uski awaaz thandi thi. “Unke saath behne ki koshish karo.”

Maine apni aankhen band ki. Saans andar li. aag ki garmi ko mehsoos kiya lekin uske saath dharti ke thos hone ko bhi samjha. Paani ke thande flow ko mehsoos kiya lekin hawaa ke halka sa touch bhi mehsoos kiya.

Aur phir… maine aakash ko mehsoos kiya. Ek khaali jagah jo sab kuch ko jod rahi thi. aag, dharti, pani, vayu sab kuch ek line me.

Maine apni talwar uthayi.

Shika ne attack kiya ek storm ke saath. aag, pani, aur vayu ek saath.

Maine apni saans andar li aag ko bulaya, lekin uske saath paani ko bhi chalaya. dharti ke strength ke saath apne stance ko mazboot kiya. Hawa ke flow ke saath apni body ko chalaya. aakash ke quiet hum ke saath apni talwar ko balance kiya.

Ek safed chamak meri talwar se nikal gayi.

Maine Shika ki talwar ke saath takraaya ek zor ki dhamak sunayi di. Shika ka blade ek jhatke ke saath peeche gaya.

Shika ne ek doosra attack kiya ek barf ka spike. Maine aag aur paani ko ek saath ghoomaya spike ko melt kiya aur talwar ko ghoomaya.

Shika ne apni talwar ko aakash ke saath ghoomaya lekin maine aakash ke flow ko samajh liya tha. Maine apni talwar ko uske blade ke side se ghoomaya aag aur pani ke flow ke saath ek tez strike diya.

Shika ke haathon se talwar gir gayi. Main uske saamne tha, apni talwar uski gardan ke paas le jaate hue.

Shika ke chehre pe ek halki si muskaan aayi.

“Shabash.”

Main saans lete hue peeche hata. Talwar ko neeche kiya. Mere haath abhi bhi thoda kamp rahe the lekin ab koi darr nahi tha.

Shika ne apni talwar ko uthaya. “Tumne sirf elements ko nahi samjha. Tumne balance ko samjha hai.”

Maine apni talwar ke blade ko dekha jo ab ek safed chamak ke saath roshan ho raha tha. aag, pani, dharti, vayu aur aakash ke saath ek perfect balance.

Shika ne andhere horizon ki taraf dekha. “Ab tum tayyar ho.”

Maine apni talwar ko mayan kiya. Laal chand ke neeche barf ke upar ek safed chamak phel rahi thi.

Main tayyar tha

Shika se shiksha lene ie baad ab me taiyar tha apni nayi chunauti aur aakhiri padaw ke liye jo the panchguni shakti jaise ki god ne mujhe bola tha ki mujhe shaitaan ko maarne ke liye panchguni shakti ki jarurat hai aur ye shakti pane ke liye panchguni rakshason ko apne andar samana jaroori hai toh ab mene tatly kar liya tha ki ab mujhe kya karna hai

ABHI NEXT CHAPTER SE HUM ACTION KA EK NAYA ROOP DEKHENGE JO MERE STORIES ME NAHI DEKHA HOGA

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Shika se shiksha lene ke baad ab me apne yojna ke mutabik agle padaw par aagrasar tha Guru shika ke kahe mutabik me sarvapratham purva disha me jane ka faisla kiya jaha mera pahla lakshya tha 8frito yqni aag ka danav jo pratik tha kridh ka

Paanch din ka safar khatam ho chuka tha. Seedha purv ki taraf jaate hue, main ek andheri ghati ke beech pahucha jahan zameen pani chuki thi. Hawa me ek tez paniti hui gandh thi jaise yeh jagah kabhi kisi aag ke prakop se guzar chuki ho. Pahaadon ke beech se laal glow nikal raha tha jaise lava zameen ke neeche se dhadak raha ho. Mere dil ki dhadkane tez thi pata tha ki samay aa gaya tha.

Main apni talwar ko mayan se nikala. Blade ke upar ek safed glow tha aag, dharti, pani, vayu, aur aakash ke balance ka pramaan. Lekin aag ke andar jo aggression tha, usse control karna aasan nahi hoga.

Achanak zameen ke neeche se ek garaj ke saath dhadkan mehsoos hui. Hawa tez ho gayi thi.

Phir maine usse dekha.

Ek bhayanak roop Ifrito ek insaan ke size ka prani, lekin poori tarah se aag se bana hua. Lava uske sharir ke andar dhadak raha tha, aur uski aankhein do panite hue surakh jaise thi jo seedha meri rooh ko cheer rahi thi. Har kadam ke saath zameen pigal rahi thi.

Ifrito ne apni aankhein meri taraf uthayi. Ek bhayanak awaaz hawa me gunj gayi.

“Tum kaun ho?”

Maine talwar ko apne saamne uthaya. “Main yahan tumhe haraane aaya hoon.”

Ifrito ke chehre pe ek teekhi muskaan thi. “Tumhe lagta hai ki tum mujhe hara sakte ho?”

Phir usne apni haathon ko uthaya lava ki lahar zameen ke neeche se nikal ke mere taraf aane lagi aur ye mahsoos karte hi mujhe uska tod bhi samajh aa gaya jiske baad Maine dharti ke flow ko mehsoos karte hue apni talwar ko neeche kiya dharti ke andar ke vibration ko apni body ke saath joda aur lava ki lahar ko apni talwar ke ek strike ke saath tod diya.

Ifrito ke chehre pe ek gusse ki lahar thi lekin hontho par ek bhayanak muskaan “Interesting.”

(Ye panchguni rakshason ke sath yuddh kayi Dino tak chalega isliye mene days me divide karke likha hai shayad aapko pasand aaye)


Day 1

Usne apni body ko ghoomaya aag aur hawa ke saath ek storm create ho gaya paniti hui hawaa ke jhonke mere taraf aane lage. Main neeche jhuka apni talwar ko ghoomaya lekin aag ke andar ke aggression ne mujhe apni jagah se hila diya. Hawa ke saath aag ne mujhe peeche dhakel diya.

Main zameen pe gira hua tha aur mere haath panie hue the. Saans tez ho gayi thi.

Ifrito ke haathon se ek aur fireball nikal ke meri taraf aayi. Main ne apni talwar ko apne saamne rakha lekin aag ke dhadakne ke saath meri body ko ek jhatka laga.

Main apni saans ko control karta hua jaise taise khada hua.

Ifrito ne ek aur shaitani muskaan dete hue kaha. “Kya bas itni hi shakti hai?”

Uski baat sunkar Maine apni talwar ko neeche kiya. "Main abhi shuruat kar raha hoon."

Isi bich aaj ka din samapt ho gaya lekin hum mese koi ruka nahi


Day 2

Dusre din, Ifrito ne apni shakti ko badhaya. Uske haathon se nikalti hui aag zameen ke neeche se lava ki lahar ko upar kheench rahi thi. Main apni talwar ke saath aag ke flow ko samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha.

Main neeche jhuka, talwar ke saath ek arc banaya aag ke flow ke saath apni body ko adjust kiya lekin aag ke andar ka aggression ab bhi zyada tha.

Ek aag ke blast ne mujhe ek bade pathar ke uper fek diya. Meri chati se khoon nikal raha tha. Lekin maine apni body ko sambhala.

Main apni saans andar li aag ke flow ke saath apni talwar ko match kiya. aag ke andar ke aggression ko samjha lekin abhi bhi mujhe flow ke saath poori tarah balance nahi mila tha.


Day 3:

Teesre din tak meri body thak chuki thi. aag ke andar ka pressure meri haddiyon tak pahunch chuka tha. Ifrito har strike ko aur zyada taqat ke saath maar raha tha.

Main apni talwar ko apne saamne rakha lekin aag ke blast ne mujhe dubara peeche gira diya.

Main apni saans ke saath focus karta raha. Apni aankhein band ki. aag ke flow ko mehsoos kiya. Apni body ko uske saath adjust kiya. aag ke andar ka aggression mehsoos kiya lekin uske andar ke balance ko pakda.

Main talwar ko lekar khada hua.

Ifrito ne apni bhaunhe chadhayi. "Ab tum aag ko samajh rahe ho?"

Main ne talwar ko ghoomaya aag ke flow ke saath apni body ko adjust kiya. Ek aag ke storm ke saath main apni talwar ko chala raha tha.

Ifrito ne ek zor ka dhamaka kiya lekin is baar main apni body ke andar ke flow ke saath uske attack ko tod raha tha.


Day 4 - 6

Chaute din tak meri body thak chuki thi. Haathon se khoon nikal raha tha. Saans tez thi. Ifrito ke attacks aur tez ho gaye the. Uske andar ke aag ka flow ab aur zyada bhayankar ho raha tha.

Main ek cliff ke edge pe khada tha. Ifrito ne ek bade aagball ko mere taraf bheja. Maine apni talwar ko neeche kiya aag ke flow ke saath apni body ko adjust kiya aur ek arc ke saath aagball ko tod diya.

Paanchve din tak mere haath sun ho chuke the. Main sirf apne andar ke flow ke saath lad raha tha.

Chehve din tak, main aag ke saath ek ho chuka tha. aag ke aggression ko samjha uske andar ke nirmaan ko mehsoos kiya. aag ko todne ki jagah maine uske saath flow kiya.


Day 7

Saathve din tak Ifrito ke chehre pe ek thakaan thi. Usne apni aankhein band ki. Phir usne apni body ko poori tarah aag ke andar ghoomaya ek final attack.

Maine apni saans andar li aag ke flow ke saath apni talwar ko match kiya ek safed Roshani meri talwar ke blade se niklne lagijise dekhkar

Main ne talwar ko ghoomaya aag ke tornado ke beech me ghusa aur apni talwar ko uske andar ke flow ke saath sync kiya. Ek dhamake ke saath aag ke tornado ko tod diya.

Ifrito zameen pe gira.

Main uske samne tha, talwar uski chest pe rakhi. Ek safed glow meri body ke andar behta hua mehsoos ho raha tha mera anant urja astra mere sharir me ek nayi utja ki sanrachna kar raha tha aur apni nok se ifrito ki shakti ko apne andar sama raha tha

Ifrito ne apni aankhein kholi. “Tumne ab meri aag ko apne andar sama liya hai.”

Itna bolte hi Ifrito ki body hawa me bikhar gayi. Ek laal glow meri talwar ke blade pe chamak raha tha. aag ki taqat ab meri thi.

Main apni talwar ko mayan me daal ke aage badha. Ab main ek naye taqat ke saath tayyar tha. Ab aage ke baad me badh raha tha pani ke danav hydron ke pass jisme nafrat ka gun tha

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Ifrito ko haraane ke baad mere sharir me ek nayi urja thi. Aag ke andar ka aggression mere sharir me behte hue me mahasoos kar sakta tha, lekin uske saath control ka ek naya bhaav bhi tha. Lekin main jaanta tha ki ye sirf shuruaat thi agla kadam ab mujhe ek nayi shakti ke saamne le jaa raha tha paani ka prakop.

Main seedha uttar purv ki taraf badh raha tha. Aag ke prabhav ke saath zameen ke neeche ka taap mujhe aasani se mehsoos ho raha tha, lekin jaise jaise main aage badh raha tha, hava thandi hoti ja rahi thi. Paanch din tak chalne ke baad main ek gehri ghaati ke kinare pahucha samudra ke saath milti hui nadiyon ke paas.

Paani ki awaaz har taraf goonj rahi thi. Hawa ke saath ek thanda pan tha jo mere rom-rom ko suunna kar raha tha. Main ne apni talwar ko mayan se nikaala aur aag ke chamak ke saath talwar ki dhar chamak rahi thi lekin ab mujhe aag ke saath nahi, paani ke flow ke saath ladna tha.

Tabhi ek bhayanak awaaz hawa me gunj gayi.

"Tumne agni ko jeet liya... lekin paani ko jeetna asaan nahi hoga."

Main seedha apni jagah pe khada raha. Samudra ke beech se ek bhayanak shakal nikal rahi thi. Ek bade saap ke jaise sharir wala prani, jiske sharir pe pani ka pratik tha. Uski aankhein neela rang ki thi, jaise gehre samudra ke tah se dekh rahi ho.

“Tum kaun ho?” maine apni awaaz ko sambhalte hue kaha.

Usne apni aankhein meri taraf uthayi. "Main Hydron hoon pani ka danav."

Hydron ke sharir ke aaspaas paani ka chakr ban raha tha. Har saans ke saath samudra ke leheron me ek kampan thi.

“Tum yahaan kyun aaye ho, yuvak?”

Maine apni talwar ko neeche kiya. "Main tumse ladne aaya hoon tumhe haraane ke liye."

Hydron ke chehre pe ek halki si muskaan thi. “Paani ko jeetna mushkil hai. Tum agni ke saath aaye ho lekin agni paani ke saamne hamesha shant ho jaati hai.”

Maine apni talwar ke upar aag ke flow ko mehsoos kiya lekin mujhe maloom tha ki is baar mujhe sirf aag ke saath nahi, paani ke flow ke saath ladna hoga. aag ke aggression ko control karke paani ke flow ko samajhna hoga.

Hydron ne apne haathon ko uthaya samudra ke lehron ke saath ek teekha chakr bana. Ek pani ki bhaari leher mere taraf daud rahi thi.

Maine apni talwar ko uthaya lekin jaise hi maine aag ke saath strike kiya, paani ne aag ke glow ko daba diya. Ek zor ka dhakka laga aur main peeche ja gira.

Main apni saans ko sambhal ke utha. Hydron ke chehre pe ek thandi si muskaan thi. "Yeh toh bas shuruaat hai."


Day 1:

Main apni talwar lekar khada hua. Hydron ke haathon se ek aur leher nikli is baar leher ke saath thandi hawa thi. Main apni talwar ke saath counter karne ke liye aage badha lekin jaise hi talwar paani ke flow ke saath takraayi, ek thanda pan meri haddiyon tak pahunch gaya.

Paani ka pressure mere sharir ke upar tha aag ke saath main virodh kar raha tha lekin aag ke andar ka aggression paani ke smooth flow ke saamne bekar tha.

Main peeche gira. Hydron ne apni aankhein tang ki. "Tum aggressive ho... lekin paani ke saath aggressiveness kaam nahi karega."

Main apni saans ko sambhala. Apni aankhein band ki. aag ke andar ke aggression ko peeche kiya apni body ko relax kiya aur paani ke flow ke saath apni body ko match kiya.

Hydron ne ek aur strike ki lekin is baar main ne apni talwar ko dheere se ghoomaya aag ke saath nahi, apni body ke natural flow ke saath. Strike ko maine side me ghoomake tod diya.

Hydron ne apni aankhein meri taraf uthayi. "Tum samajhne lage ho."


Day 2:

Doosre din Hydron ne apni speed badhaayi. Paani ke chakr ab mere aaspaas ghoom rahe the. Hydron ke haathon se nikalti hui lehron ke saath samudra ke leher mil rahi thi.

Main apni talwar ke saath paani ke flow ko mehsoos kar raha tha lekin jaise hi main apni talwar ko ghoomata, aag ka aggression beech me aa raha tha.

Ek leher ke dhakke ne mujhe zameen pe gira diya.

Main ne apni saans ko andar li apni body ko dheere se adjust kiya apni talwar ko paani ke flow ke saath match kiya. aag ke aggression ko peeche kiya.

Hydron ne ek bade chakr ko meri taraf phenka lekin maine apni talwar ke saath apni body ko paani ke saath ek kiya ek arc ke saath strike kiya paani ke chakr ko tod diya.

Hydron ke chehre pe ab hvayuani thi. "Tumne apna flow pakad liya hai."


Day 3:

Teesre din Hydron ne apni asli shakti dikhayi. Samudra ke andar ke leheron ke saath usne ek storm create kiya. Paani ke beech main apni talwar lekar khada tha. Hawa tez ho chuki thi.

Main apni talwar ko apne saamne rakha paani ke flow ke saath apni body ko milaaya. Ek strike maari lekin Hydron ne apni body ke saath paani ke andar se attack kiya ek zor ka dhakka laga.

Meri aankhein bandh thi.

Main ne apni body ke andar ke flow ko pakda aag ko shant kiya paani ke saath apni body ko match kiya. Ek arc ke saath apni talwar ko ghoomaya Hydron ke flow ke saath apne flow ko match kiya.

Ek zor ka dhamaka hua. Hydron peeche gira. Samudra ke leher ab shant ho gayi thi.

Main uske samne khada tha talwar uske gale pe rakhi thi.

Hydron ne apni aankhein band ki. "Tumne paani ke flow ko samajh liya hai."

Hydron ki body se ek neela glow meri talwar ke blade me sama gaya. Paani ki shakti ab mere andar thi.

Main apni talwar ko mayan me daal ke aage badha. Ab main aag aur pani ke balance ke saath tayyar tha. Lekin ab bhi mujhe teen elements ka samna karna tha.

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Aaj ke liye itna hi

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Badhiya shaandar
Tow pani ki Shakti bhi mil gayi Viraj ko sahi h
Ab teen element Bache h dekhte h yaha kitni chunauti multi h
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