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Mishka: “Nahi, school jaungi!”
Jyoti (muskurate hue): “Good girl. Chalo, fresh ho jao.”
Jyoti ne Mishka ke sirr ko sehlaya, par Mishka ka dhyan Jyoti ke haath par gaya. Uske dahine haath par ek safed bandage bandha hua tha.
Mishka : “Mumma, aapke haath par bandage kyun hai?”
Jyoti ke chehre par ek pal ke liye ghabrahat dikhayi di. Usne jaldi se haath chhupaya.
Jyoti : “Y-yeh... kuchh nahi! Ab baatein chhodo aur fresh ho chalo, School ka time ho raha hai.”
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Jyoti ke kadam apne aap uske ghar ke andhere corridor mein dheeme-dheeme badh rahe the. Uske dil ki dhadkan itni tezi se chal rahi thi ki usse lag raha tha jaise woh kisi bhi pal bahar nikal jayegi. Usne apne dono betiyon, Ria aur Mishka, ko school chhodkar ghar wapas aayi thi. Lekin aaj uska mann bechain tha, uski saansein bhari, aur uske haathon mein ek ajib si kampan thi.
Jyoti apne kamre ki taraf ja rahi thi, par uska dil uss bacche ke kamre ki taraf kheench raha tha. Usne idhar-udhar dekha, darwaza khula tha, ghar mein sannata tha, bas uske apne kadmon ki dheemi-dheemi aawaz thi. Ek baar fir usne charon taraf nazar ghumayi, double check kiya, koi nahi tha ghar pe.
Woh dheere se khidki ki taraf badhi. Khidki khuli thi, aur uske andar ka nazara dekhkar uska dil ekdum se ruk sa gaya. Waha, uska nanha sa beta, chain ki neend so raha tha. Uska munh itna masoom tha ki jaise usne duniya ki koi buraai dekhi hi na ho. Par Jyoti uske paas nahi jaa sakti. uske paas Anita baithi thi, apni aankhon se us bacche ko ek tak nihar rahi thi. Anita ka chehra shant tha, aur uski aankhon mein piyaar thi.
Jyoti ye sab dekhti rahi. Uske dil mein ek toofan utha. Waha Anita nahi Jyoti ko hona chahiye tha. Uski aankhein ekdum se nam ho gayi, aur aansuon ka sailab uske chehre par behne laga. Woh khidki ke paas khadi thi, apne aap ko sambhalte hue, par uska dil chikh raha tha.
"Waaaaaa! Waaaaaa!"
Achanak uska nanha beta ekdum se ro utha. Sayad usse ye ehsaas ho raha tha ki Jyoti aas paas hi hai. Uski cheekh itni teekhi thi ki jaise usne us ghar ke sannate ko cheer diya ho.
Anita ekdum se hadbada gayi. Usne jaldi se bacche ko god mein uthaya aur use chup karane lagi.
Anita : "Kya hua babu? Abhi toh chain se so rahe the! Kya hua?"
Tabhi Anita ko ek aahat mehsoos hui. Jaise koi uske peeche khidki par khada ho. Usne palatkar dekha, par wahan koi nahi tha. Bas sannata usse ghoor rahe the. Usne bacche ko fir se chup karane lagi.
Anita (dheeme se): "So jao babu, so jao. Main hoon na, kuch nahi hoga."
Par Jyoti ab wahan nahi thi. Jab bacche ki cheekh uske kaano mein padi, uske dil mein ek teer sa chubha. Uske aansuon ka sailab ruk nahi raha tha. Jab Anita ne palat kar dekha tha, Jyoti waha se bhag chuki thi. Apne muh ko pallu se dabaye, apne kamre ki taraf daudti hui chali gayi.
Kamre mein pahunchte hi woh bistar par gir padi. Uske haathon se pallu chhoot gaya, Woh ro rahi thi, bilak rahi thi, jaise uska saara wajood toot chuka ho.
Jyoti (rote hue): "Kis tarah ki maa hoon main? Main... main insaan hi nahi rahi! Koi aisa kaise kar sakta hai? Hey bhagwan... mujhe... mujhe meri galti ki saza do! Jarur do! Ho sake toh mujhe is duniya se utha lo! Fir bhi... fir bhi mera paap ka ghada kabhi pura nahi hoga!"
Uske aansuon se uska chehra bheeg chuka tha. Uske chehre ka rang sookh gaya tha, jaise uske shareer mein jaan hi na bachi ho. Woh aise ro rahi thi jaise uske paap ka bojh usse ek pal ke liye bhi chain na lene de.
Tabhi usko mishka ka woh sawaal yaad aaya. Mishka ne usse pucha tha, "Mummy, yeh haath pe bandage kyun hai?" Jyoti ne us waqt baat taal di thi, par ab uska wohi haath uske saamne tha. Usne us bandage ko dekha, aur kal ki woh raat uske zehen mein dobara jee uthi.
Kal jab Ria aur Mishka so chuke the, Jyoti apne pati Prakash aur saas Shanti ke saath chhat par gayi thi. Teenon ke kadam chhat ki seedhiyon par dheere-dheere badh rahe the, par unke pair kaanp rahe the, khaas kar Jyoti ke. Uska chehra safed pad chuka tha, uski aankhon mein dar tha, ek ajeeb si bechaini thi.
Jyoti (darte hue): "Kya yeh sab karna zaroori hai?"
Prakash (sakhti se): "Bilkul zaroori hai!"
Shanti : "Bahu, ab chup raho. Baaton mein waqt barbaad mat karo. Dekh, hum chhat par pahunch gaye."
Chhat par ka mahaul maut ke sannate jaisa tha. Charon taraf andhera chhaya hua tha, dur-dur tak koi roshni nahi. Bas Shanti ke haath mein ek mombatti ki lau thi, jo dheemi-dheemi jhul rahi thi. Aasman mein na chand dikh raha tha, na taare. Hawa jaise ruk si gayi thi. Aur sabse ajeeb baat? Chhat ke charon taraf kauwe baithe the. Raat ke is samay kauwe? Koi aawaz nahi, bas woh apni kaali aankhon se ghoor rahe the, jaise koi bhayanak ghatna dekhne ke liye jama hote hain. Teenon ne apna thook gatka. Mahaul aisa tha ki dil dhadakne laga.
Shanti (kaampte hue): "Prakash... chhuri nikal."
Prakash : "Yeh... yeh lo..."
Shanti : "Budbak, mujhe kyun de raha hai? Tu... tu kar!"
Prakash (hadbadate hue): "M-main?"
Shanti : "Aur kaun? Jaldi kar!"
Prakash (Jyoti ki taraf mudkar): "Jyoti, apna haath aage karo."
Jyoti (dar se kaanpte hue): "H-haan...?"
Shanti (sakhti se): "Bahu, nakhre mat kar! Aadhi raat ho chuki hai!"
Jyoti : "Par... main... main yeh sab nahi chahti. Mujhse aur paap mat karwao... main tum logo ke pair padti hoon!"
Shanti (dhamkate hue): "Ssssh! Chup kar, warna... warna teri betiyon ko bhi America bhej doongi!"
Jyoti (darte hue): "Nahi! Aisa mat karo... hey bhagwan!"
Raat ke is andhere mein, teenon ki fufusati awaazein hi thi jo goonj rahi thi. Charon taraf sannata, aur woh kauwe jo chupchap ghoor rahe the. Jyoti ne roka, toka, mana kiya, par apni betiyon ke khatre ki baat sunte hi usne kaanpte hue apna haath aage kiya. Prakash ne chhuri nikali. Chand ki halki si roshni mein chhuri chamak uthi, aur uski chamak dekhkar Jyoti ke shareer mein ek siharan daud gayi. Woh jaanti thi kya hone wala hai. Prakash ne uska haath pakda, hatheli ghumayi.
Prakash (sakht awaaz mein): "Chillana mat. Bas thodi si takleef hogi."
Aur fir, ek tez chhuri se Prakash ne Jyoti ki hatheli par ek gehra cut laga diya.
Jyoti (cheekhte hue): "AAAAHHHHHHHH!"
Uski cheekh ne sannate ko cheer diya. Yeh wahi cheekh thi jo neeche Ria aur Mishka ne suni thi. Khoon uski hatheli se tapak raha tha, chhat par gir raha tha, aur uska dard usse andar tak jala raha tha.
Shanti : "Chup! Chup kar, bahu! Neeche sab jag jayenge!"
Jyoti ke haath se khoon lagatar beh raha tha. Usne apni aankhein band kar li, dard ko sehne ki koshish karti hui. Shanti ne apne haath ki mombatti Jyoti ke khoon ke upar rakh diya aur kuch mantra jaisa bolne lagi. Prakash ne bhi aankhein band kar li. Jaise hi Shanti ka bolna khatam hua, ek ajeeb si garmi mahaul mein fail gayi. Kauwe achanak udne lage, aur charon taraf ek ajeeb si boo chha gayi.
Shanti (gabhraate hue): "Prakash? Kuch hua kyun nahi?"
Prakash (hairani se): "Humne toh sab theek kiya!"
Jyoti (dar se kaanpte hue): "Udhar... udhar dekho!"
Jyoti ne chhat ke doosre kone ki taraf ishara kiya. Shanti aur Prakash ne us taraf dekha, aur unki saansein ruk gayin. Wahan, andhere mein, teen saaye khade the. Chand ab pura dikh raha tha, aur woh kauwe ud rahe the, par chupchap. Jaise dar unhe bhi lag raha tha, Woh teen saaye seedhe unki taraf dekh rahe the. Ye deekh Shanti ne thook gatka dar se.
Shanti (kaampte hue): "E-Elders!"
Jyoti ka dil itna tezi se dhadak raha tha ki usse laga woh abhi behosh ho jayegi. Khoon ke behne se usmein kamzori aa rahi thi, uski aankhein adhi band ho chuki thi, par woh khadi rahi. Palak jhapakte hi woh teen saaye unke saamne aa gaye. Unka chahera dikhai nahi de raha tha teenon ne ajeeb sa pehnawa tha, Shanti dar ke maare char kadam peeche hati.
Shanti (darte hue): "E-Elders!"
Elders (gehri, bhayanak awaaz mein): "Humein yahan kyun bulaya gaya, Shanti?"
Shanti (hadbadate hue): "Hum... main... woh..."
Shanti itna ghabra gayi thi ki woh bhool gayi thi ki usne kyun bulaya tha.
Prakash : "Maa?"
Shanti : "Haan! Haan! Woh... uss manhoos ka ab kya karna hai, Elders? Kya... kya hum usse abhi hi...?"
Jyoti (cheekhte hue): "Nahi! Abhi kyun? Woh toh abhi sirf...!"
Shanti (gusse se): "Bahu, samjha kar! Yeh sab hamari bhalai ke liye hai..."
Shanti ki baat poori nahi hui ki Elders ne uski baat kaat di.
Elders (sakht awaaz mein): "12 saal baad."
Shanti (hairani se): "12 saal baad?"
Elders: "Haan. Ussi janam tithi par."
Shanti (darte hue): "T-Theek hai!"
Jyoti yeh sab sun rahi thi. Woh jaanti thi yeh baatein kiske baare mein ho rahi thi. Uska sarr chakkar kha raha tha, woh girne wali thi, par apne aap ko sambhale hue khadi thi abhi tak.
Elders: "Aur kuch?"
Shanti : "Haan! Agar aap yahan hain toh... uska ek naam bhi rakh dijiye."
Prakash: "Haan!"
Elders: "Theek hai. Uska naam hoga M.......!"
Elders ne abhi naam ka pehla akshar hi bola tha ki Jyoti ne cheekhkar baat kaat di.
Jyoti (zor se): "Nahi!"
Shanti (gusse se): "Bahu, tu kya kar rahi hai? Maafi maang, jaldi!"
Jyoti (sakht awaaz mein): "Nahi! Mere bete ka naam main rakhungi!"
Prakash (gusse se): "Tu kya kar rahi hai? Elders ki baat kaat rahi hai? Maafi maang, abhi!"
Elders (shant par bhayanak awaaz mein): "Prakash!"
Prakash (darte hue): "J-Ji?"
Elders: "Jyoti maa hai. Uska itna haq hai ki woh naam rakh sake."
Prakash (dheeme se): "J-Ji, Elders."
Elders: "Rakho, jo naam rakhna chahti ho."
Jyoti ka sarr chakkar kha raha tha. Kamzori usse le rahi thi. Uski aankhon ki roshni kam ho rahi thi, saansein bhari ho rahi thi. Tabhi, uske shareer mein ek ajeeb si thandak daud gayi, jaise koi uske andar thodi se Shakti dedi thodi der ke liye. Bas woh itna bol paye -
Jyoti : "Mere bete ka naam hoga... aryan!"
Itna kehte hi, Jyoti ki aankhein band ho gayi. Uska shareer dheela pad gaya, aur woh zameen par gir padi.
Elders : "Theek hai. Yahi naam hoga uss bacche ka."
Shanti : "J-Ji!"
Elders (sakht awaaz mein): "12 saal hone tak humein mat bulana, Shanti."
Shanti (dheeme se): "J-Ji, Elders."
Palak jhapakte hi woh teen elders ki saaye gayab ho gaye. Prakash ne jaldi se Jyoti ko uthaya aur neeche le jakar litaya.
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Jyoti apne bistar par leti hui thi, uski aankhein aansuon se bheegi hui thi. Kal ki woh bhayanak raat uske zehen mein goonj rahi thi. Woh janti thi 12 Saal Baad Kya hone wala tha tabhi -
Aryan?
Aryan!
Mera baccha Aryan!
ARYANNN!!!"
Woh bistar se uchal padi, uski saansein bhari thi, uska chehra safed pad chuka tha. Usne apne charon taraf dekha, par andhera hi andhera tha.
Jyoti (rote hue): "Mera beta kahan hai? ARYAN? ARYANNN!!!"
Tabhi kamre ka darwaza khula, aur Anita daudti hui andar aayi.
Anita (gabhraate hue): "Bahurani! Kya hua? Aap aise kyun cheekh rahi hain?"
Jyoti (hafte hue): "Anita di? Tum yahan kyun? Aryan ko chhodkar kyun aayi? Woh dar jayega! Uske paas jao, usse sula do! Nahi... main... main chalti hoon. Ghar mein koi nahi hai, mein abhi ja sakti hu huske paas!"
Jyoti ki awaaz mein bechaini thi. Woh uthne lagi, Anita ne usse dekha, aur uski aankhein aansuon se bhar aayi. Usne apna pallu se muh chhupa liya.
Anita (mann mein) : "hey Bhagwan..."!
Jyoti (hairani se): "Tum ro kyun rahi ho?"
Anita chup rahi woh kiya kahe usse samajh nahi aa rahi thi, bas roti rahi. Ye dekh Jyoti ka dil aur bechain hua.
Jyoti (zor se): "Kya hua? Tum ro kyun rahi ho? Chalo, ghar mein koi nahi hai, main Aryan ke paas ja sakti hoon. Usse godi mein utha sakti hoon!"
Anita ab aur nahi ruk saki. Use ab Sach batana hi hoga. Usne Jyoti ki taraf dekha, uski aankhein aansuon se bhar gayi.
Anita (rote hue): "Aapne fir se wahi sapna dekha, bahurani!"
Jyoti (hairani se): "Sapna? Kaunsa sapna?"
Anita (rote huye) : "Haan! Aapne fir se wahi sapna dekha! Babu... babu ko mare hue 8 saal ho chuke hain, bahurani! Woh ab is duniya mein nahi hai!"
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Bro sach bol raha hu yeh scene padh kar yeh picture dekhkar mere bhi ek pal ke liye baal khade ho gaye the..
Jyoti (dar se kaanpte hue): "Udhar... udhar dekho!"
Jyoti ne chhat ke doosre kone ki taraf ishara kiya. Shanti aur Prakash ne us taraf dekha, aur unki saansein ruk gayin. Wahan, andhere mein, teen saaye khade the. Chand ab pura dikh raha tha, aur woh kauwe ud rahe the, par chupchap. Jaise dar unhe bhi lag raha tha, Woh teen saaye seedhe unki taraf dekh rahe the. Ye deekh Shanti ne thook gatka dar se.
Bro yeh story Earth ke pov se chal rahi hai ya kisi aur planet par, jaha powers yeh sab hote hai, and jese elders ke pass powers hai wesi hi prakash aur shanti ke pass bhi ho sakti hai kya?
12 saal baad kuch hona tha aur aryaan ko mare hue 8 saal ho gaye, matlab aryaan abhi zinda hoga to thik 20 saal ka hoga, i think usse bachaane ke piche Mishka aur Ria ka hath hoga aur unki help shyd Anita ne kari hogi, ya kisi aur ne Aryaan ki bachaya ho...
Ab to yeh agle update mai pata chalega aapne Aryaan ko kese bachaaya hoga..
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Badhiya shaandar updateUpdate 3
Previous...
Mishka: “Nahi, school jaungi!”
Jyoti (muskurate hue): “Good girl. Chalo, fresh ho jao.”
Jyoti ne Mishka ke sirr ko sehlaya, par Mishka ka dhyan Jyoti ke haath par gaya. Uske dahine haath par ek safed bandage bandha hua tha.
Mishka : “Mumma, aapke haath par bandage kyun hai?”
Jyoti ke chehre par ek pal ke liye ghabrahat dikhayi di. Usne jaldi se haath chhupaya.
Jyoti : “Y-yeh... kuchh nahi! Ab baatein chhodo aur fresh ho chalo, School ka time ho raha hai.”
Continue...
Jyoti ke kadam apne aap uske ghar ke andhere corridor mein dheeme-dheeme badh rahe the. Uske dil ki dhadkan itni tezi se chal rahi thi ki usse lag raha tha jaise woh kisi bhi pal bahar nikal jayegi. Usne apne dono betiyon, Ria aur Mishka, ko school chhodkar ghar wapas aayi thi. Lekin aaj uska mann bechain tha, uski saansein bhari, aur uske haathon mein ek ajib si kampan thi.
Jyoti apne kamre ki taraf ja rahi thi, par uska dil uss bacche ke kamre ki taraf kheench raha tha. Usne idhar-udhar dekha, darwaza khula tha, ghar mein sannata tha, bas uske apne kadmon ki dheemi-dheemi aawaz thi. Ek baar fir usne charon taraf nazar ghumayi, double check kiya, koi nahi tha ghar pe.
Woh dheere se khidki ki taraf badhi. Khidki khuli thi, aur uske andar ka nazara dekhkar uska dil ekdum se ruk sa gaya. Waha, uska nanha sa beta, chain ki neend so raha tha. Uska munh itna masoom tha ki jaise usne duniya ki koi buraai dekhi hi na ho. Par Jyoti uske paas nahi jaa sakti. uske paas Anita baithi thi, apni aankhon se us bacche ko ek tak nihar rahi thi. Anita ka chehra shant tha, aur uski aankhon mein piyaar thi.
Jyoti ye sab dekhti rahi. Uske dil mein ek toofan utha. Waha Anita nahi Jyoti ko hona chahiye tha. Uski aankhein ekdum se nam ho gayi, aur aansuon ka sailab uske chehre par behne laga. Woh khidki ke paas khadi thi, apne aap ko sambhalte hue, par uska dil chikh raha tha.
"Waaaaaa! Waaaaaa!"
Achanak uska nanha beta ekdum se ro utha. Sayad usse ye ehsaas ho raha tha ki Jyoti aas paas hi hai. Uski cheekh itni teekhi thi ki jaise usne us ghar ke sannate ko cheer diya ho.
Anita ekdum se hadbada gayi. Usne jaldi se bacche ko god mein uthaya aur use chup karane lagi.
Anita : "Kya hua babu? Abhi toh chain se so rahe the! Kya hua?"
Tabhi Anita ko ek aahat mehsoos hui. Jaise koi uske peeche khidki par khada ho. Usne palatkar dekha, par wahan koi nahi tha. Bas sannata usse ghoor rahe the. Usne bacche ko fir se chup karane lagi.
Anita (dheeme se): "So jao babu, so jao. Main hoon na, kuch nahi hoga."
Par Jyoti ab wahan nahi thi. Jab bacche ki cheekh uske kaano mein padi, uske dil mein ek teer sa chubha. Uske aansuon ka sailab ruk nahi raha tha. Jab Anita ne palat kar dekha tha, Jyoti waha se bhag chuki thi. Apne muh ko pallu se dabaye, apne kamre ki taraf daudti hui chali gayi.
Kamre mein pahunchte hi woh bistar par gir padi. Uske haathon se pallu chhoot gaya, Woh ro rahi thi, bilak rahi thi, jaise uska saara wajood toot chuka ho.
Jyoti (rote hue): "Kis tarah ki maa hoon main? Main... main insaan hi nahi rahi! Koi aisa kaise kar sakta hai? Hey bhagwan... mujhe... mujhe meri galti ki saza do! Jarur do! Ho sake toh mujhe is duniya se utha lo! Fir bhi... fir bhi mera paap ka ghada kabhi pura nahi hoga!"
Uske aansuon se uska chehra bheeg chuka tha. Uske chehre ka rang sookh gaya tha, jaise uske shareer mein jaan hi na bachi ho. Woh aise ro rahi thi jaise uske paap ka bojh usse ek pal ke liye bhi chain na lene de.
Tabhi usko mishka ka woh sawaal yaad aaya. Mishka ne usse pucha tha, "Mummy, yeh haath pe bandage kyun hai?" Jyoti ne us waqt baat taal di thi, par ab uska wohi haath uske saamne tha. Usne us bandage ko dekha, aur kal ki woh raat uske zehen mein dobara jee uthi.
Kal jab Ria aur Mishka so chuke the, Jyoti apne pati Prakash aur saas Shanti ke saath chhat par gayi thi. Teenon ke kadam chhat ki seedhiyon par dheere-dheere badh rahe the, par unke pair kaanp rahe the, khaas kar Jyoti ke. Uska chehra safed pad chuka tha, uski aankhon mein dar tha, ek ajeeb si bechaini thi.
Jyoti (darte hue): "Kya yeh sab karna zaroori hai?"
Prakash (sakhti se): "Bilkul zaroori hai!"
Shanti : "Bahu, ab chup raho. Baaton mein waqt barbaad mat karo. Dekh, hum chhat par pahunch gaye."
Chhat par ka mahaul maut ke sannate jaisa tha. Charon taraf andhera chhaya hua tha, dur-dur tak koi roshni nahi. Bas Shanti ke haath mein ek mombatti ki lau thi, jo dheemi-dheemi jhul rahi thi. Aasman mein na chand dikh raha tha, na taare. Hawa jaise ruk si gayi thi. Aur sabse ajeeb baat? Chhat ke charon taraf kauwe baithe the. Raat ke is samay kauwe? Koi aawaz nahi, bas woh apni kaali aankhon se ghoor rahe the, jaise koi bhayanak ghatna dekhne ke liye jama hote hain. Teenon ne apna thook gatka. Mahaul aisa tha ki dil dhadakne laga.
Shanti (kaampte hue): "Prakash... chhuri nikal."
Prakash : "Yeh... yeh lo..."
Shanti : "Budbak, mujhe kyun de raha hai? Tu... tu kar!"
Prakash (hadbadate hue): "M-main?"
Shanti : "Aur kaun? Jaldi kar!"
Prakash (Jyoti ki taraf mudkar): "Jyoti, apna haath aage karo."
Jyoti (dar se kaanpte hue): "H-haan...?"
Shanti (sakhti se): "Bahu, nakhre mat kar! Aadhi raat ho chuki hai!"
Jyoti : "Par... main... main yeh sab nahi chahti. Mujhse aur paap mat karwao... main tum logo ke pair padti hoon!"
Shanti (dhamkate hue): "Ssssh! Chup kar, warna... warna teri betiyon ko bhi America bhej doongi!"
Jyoti (darte hue): "Nahi! Aisa mat karo... hey bhagwan!"
Raat ke is andhere mein, teenon ki fufusati awaazein hi thi jo goonj rahi thi. Charon taraf sannata, aur woh kauwe jo chupchap ghoor rahe the. Jyoti ne roka, toka, mana kiya, par apni betiyon ke khatre ki baat sunte hi usne kaanpte hue apna haath aage kiya. Prakash ne chhuri nikali. Chand ki halki si roshni mein chhuri chamak uthi, aur uski chamak dekhkar Jyoti ke shareer mein ek siharan daud gayi. Woh jaanti thi kya hone wala hai. Prakash ne uska haath pakda, hatheli ghumayi.
Prakash (sakht awaaz mein): "Chillana mat. Bas thodi si takleef hogi."
Aur fir, ek tez chhuri se Prakash ne Jyoti ki hatheli par ek gehra cut laga diya.
Jyoti (cheekhte hue): "AAAAHHHHHHHH!"
Uski cheekh ne sannate ko cheer diya. Yeh wahi cheekh thi jo neeche Ria aur Mishka ne suni thi. Khoon uski hatheli se tapak raha tha, chhat par gir raha tha, aur uska dard usse andar tak jala raha tha.
Shanti : "Chup! Chup kar, bahu! Neeche sab jag jayenge!"
Jyoti ke haath se khoon lagatar beh raha tha. Usne apni aankhein band kar li, dard ko sehne ki koshish karti hui. Shanti ne apne haath ki mombatti Jyoti ke khoon ke upar rakh diya aur kuch mantra jaisa bolne lagi. Prakash ne bhi aankhein band kar li. Jaise hi Shanti ka bolna khatam hua, ek ajeeb si garmi mahaul mein fail gayi. Kauwe achanak udne lage, aur charon taraf ek ajeeb si boo chha gayi.
Shanti (gabhraate hue): "Prakash? Kuch hua kyun nahi?"
Prakash (hairani se): "Humne toh sab theek kiya!"
Jyoti (dar se kaanpte hue): "Udhar... udhar dekho!"
Jyoti ne chhat ke doosre kone ki taraf ishara kiya. Shanti aur Prakash ne us taraf dekha, aur unki saansein ruk gayin. Wahan, andhere mein, teen saaye khade the. Chand ab pura dikh raha tha, aur woh kauwe ud rahe the, par chupchap. Jaise dar unhe bhi lag raha tha, Woh teen saaye seedhe unki taraf dekh rahe the. Ye deekh Shanti ne thook gatka dar se.
Shanti (kaampte hue): "E-Elders!"
Jyoti ka dil itna tezi se dhadak raha tha ki usse laga woh abhi behosh ho jayegi. Khoon ke behne se usmein kamzori aa rahi thi, uski aankhein adhi band ho chuki thi, par woh khadi rahi. Palak jhapakte hi woh teen saaye unke saamne aa gaye. Unka chahera dikhai nahi de raha tha teenon ne ajeeb sa pehnawa tha, Shanti dar ke maare char kadam peeche hati.
Shanti (darte hue): "E-Elders!"
Elders (gehri, bhayanak awaaz mein): "Humein yahan kyun bulaya gaya, Shanti?"
Shanti (hadbadate hue): "Hum... main... woh..."
Shanti itna ghabra gayi thi ki woh bhool gayi thi ki usne kyun bulaya tha.
Prakash : "Maa?"
Shanti : "Haan! Haan! Woh... uss manhoos ka ab kya karna hai, Elders? Kya... kya hum usse abhi hi...?"
Jyoti (cheekhte hue): "Nahi! Abhi kyun? Woh toh abhi sirf...!"
Shanti (gusse se): "Bahu, samjha kar! Yeh sab hamari bhalai ke liye hai..."
Shanti ki baat poori nahi hui ki Elders ne uski baat kaat di.
Elders (sakht awaaz mein): "12 saal baad."
Shanti (hairani se): "12 saal baad?"
Elders: "Haan. Ussi janam tithi par."
Shanti (darte hue): "T-Theek hai!"
Jyoti yeh sab sun rahi thi. Woh jaanti thi yeh baatein kiske baare mein ho rahi thi. Uska sarr chakkar kha raha tha, woh girne wali thi, par apne aap ko sambhale hue khadi thi abhi tak.
Elders: "Aur kuch?"
Shanti : "Haan! Agar aap yahan hain toh... uska ek naam bhi rakh dijiye."
Prakash: "Haan!"
Elders: "Theek hai. Uska naam hoga M.......!"
Elders ne abhi naam ka pehla akshar hi bola tha ki Jyoti ne cheekhkar baat kaat di.
Jyoti (zor se): "Nahi!"
Shanti (gusse se): "Bahu, tu kya kar rahi hai? Maafi maang, jaldi!"
Jyoti (sakht awaaz mein): "Nahi! Mere bete ka naam main rakhungi!"
Prakash (gusse se): "Tu kya kar rahi hai? Elders ki baat kaat rahi hai? Maafi maang, abhi!"
Elders (shant par bhayanak awaaz mein): "Prakash!"
Prakash (darte hue): "J-Ji?"
Elders: "Jyoti maa hai. Uska itna haq hai ki woh naam rakh sake."
Prakash (dheeme se): "J-Ji, Elders."
Elders: "Rakho, jo naam rakhna chahti ho."
Jyoti ka sarr chakkar kha raha tha. Kamzori usse le rahi thi. Uski aankhon ki roshni kam ho rahi thi, saansein bhari ho rahi thi. Tabhi, uske shareer mein ek ajeeb si thandak daud gayi, jaise koi uske andar thodi se Shakti dedi thodi der ke liye. Bas woh itna bol paye -
Jyoti : "Mere bete ka naam hoga... aryan!"
Itna kehte hi, Jyoti ki aankhein band ho gayi. Uska shareer dheela pad gaya, aur woh zameen par gir padi.
Elders : "Theek hai. Yahi naam hoga uss bacche ka."
Shanti : "J-Ji!"
Elders (sakht awaaz mein): "12 saal hone tak humein mat bulana, Shanti."
Shanti (dheeme se): "J-Ji, Elders."
Palak jhapakte hi woh teen elders ki saaye gayab ho gaye. Prakash ne jaldi se Jyoti ko uthaya aur neeche le jakar litaya.
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Jyoti apne bistar par leti hui thi, uski aankhein aansuon se bheegi hui thi. Kal ki woh bhayanak raat uske zehen mein goonj rahi thi. Woh janti thi 12 Saal Baad Kya hone wala tha tabhi -
Aryan?
Aryan!
Mera baccha Aryan!
ARYANNN!!!"
Woh bistar se uchal padi, uski saansein bhari thi, uska chehra safed pad chuka tha. Usne apne charon taraf dekha, par andhera hi andhera tha.
Jyoti (rote hue): "Mera beta kahan hai? ARYAN? ARYANNN!!!"
Tabhi kamre ka darwaza khula, aur Anita daudti hui andar aayi.
Anita (gabhraate hue): "Bahurani! Kya hua? Aap aise kyun cheekh rahi hain?"
Jyoti (hafte hue): "Anita di? Tum yahan kyun? Aryan ko chhodkar kyun aayi? Woh dar jayega! Uske paas jao, usse sula do! Nahi... main... main chalti hoon. Ghar mein koi nahi hai, mein abhi ja sakti hu huske paas!"
Jyoti ki awaaz mein bechaini thi. Woh uthne lagi, Anita ne usse dekha, aur uski aankhein aansuon se bhar aayi. Usne apna pallu se muh chhupa liya.
Anita (mann mein) : "hey Bhagwan..."!
Jyoti (hairani se): "Tum ro kyun rahi ho?"
Anita chup rahi woh kiya kahe usse samajh nahi aa rahi thi, bas roti rahi. Ye dekh Jyoti ka dil aur bechain hua.
Jyoti (zor se): "Kya hua? Tum ro kyun rahi ho? Chalo, ghar mein koi nahi hai, main Aryan ke paas ja sakti hoon. Usse godi mein utha sakti hoon!"
Anita ab aur nahi ruk saki. Use ab Sach batana hi hoga. Usne Jyoti ki taraf dekha, uski aankhein aansuon se bhar gayi.
Anita (rote hue): "Aapne fir se wahi sapna dekha, bahurani!"
Jyoti (hairani se): "Sapna? Kaunsa sapna?"
Anita (rote huye) : "Haan! Aapne fir se wahi sapna dekha! Babu... babu ko mare hue 8 saal ho chuke hain, bahurani! Woh ab is duniya mein nahi hai!"
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Mishka: “Nahi, school jaungi!”
Jyoti (muskurate hue): “Good girl. Chalo, fresh ho jao.”
Jyoti ne Mishka ke sirr ko sehlaya, par Mishka ka dhyan Jyoti ke haath par gaya. Uske dahine haath par ek safed bandage bandha hua tha.
Mishka : “Mumma, aapke haath par bandage kyun hai?”
Jyoti ke chehre par ek pal ke liye ghabrahat dikhayi di. Usne jaldi se haath chhupaya.
Jyoti : “Y-yeh... kuchh nahi! Ab baatein chhodo aur fresh ho chalo, School ka time ho raha hai.”
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Jyoti ke kadam apne aap uske ghar ke andhere corridor mein dheeme-dheeme badh rahe the. Uske dil ki dhadkan itni tezi se chal rahi thi ki usse lag raha tha jaise woh kisi bhi pal bahar nikal jayegi. Usne apne dono betiyon, Ria aur Mishka, ko school chhodkar ghar wapas aayi thi. Lekin aaj uska mann bechain tha, uski saansein bhari, aur uske haathon mein ek ajib si kampan thi.
Jyoti apne kamre ki taraf ja rahi thi, par uska dil uss bacche ke kamre ki taraf kheench raha tha. Usne idhar-udhar dekha, darwaza khula tha, ghar mein sannata tha, bas uske apne kadmon ki dheemi-dheemi aawaz thi. Ek baar fir usne charon taraf nazar ghumayi, double check kiya, koi nahi tha ghar pe.
Woh dheere se khidki ki taraf badhi. Khidki khuli thi, aur uske andar ka nazara dekhkar uska dil ekdum se ruk sa gaya. Waha, uska nanha sa beta, chain ki neend so raha tha. Uska munh itna masoom tha ki jaise usne duniya ki koi buraai dekhi hi na ho. Par Jyoti uske paas nahi jaa sakti. uske paas Anita baithi thi, apni aankhon se us bacche ko ek tak nihar rahi thi. Anita ka chehra shant tha, aur uski aankhon mein piyaar thi.
Jyoti ye sab dekhti rahi. Uske dil mein ek toofan utha. Waha Anita nahi Jyoti ko hona chahiye tha. Uski aankhein ekdum se nam ho gayi, aur aansuon ka sailab uske chehre par behne laga. Woh khidki ke paas khadi thi, apne aap ko sambhalte hue, par uska dil chikh raha tha.
"Waaaaaa! Waaaaaa!"
Achanak uska nanha beta ekdum se ro utha. Sayad usse ye ehsaas ho raha tha ki Jyoti aas paas hi hai. Uski cheekh itni teekhi thi ki jaise usne us ghar ke sannate ko cheer diya ho.
Anita ekdum se hadbada gayi. Usne jaldi se bacche ko god mein uthaya aur use chup karane lagi.
Anita : "Kya hua babu? Abhi toh chain se so rahe the! Kya hua?"
Tabhi Anita ko ek aahat mehsoos hui. Jaise koi uske peeche khidki par khada ho. Usne palatkar dekha, par wahan koi nahi tha. Bas sannata usse ghoor rahe the. Usne bacche ko fir se chup karane lagi.
Anita (dheeme se): "So jao babu, so jao. Main hoon na, kuch nahi hoga."
Par Jyoti ab wahan nahi thi. Jab bacche ki cheekh uske kaano mein padi, uske dil mein ek teer sa chubha. Uske aansuon ka sailab ruk nahi raha tha. Jab Anita ne palat kar dekha tha, Jyoti waha se bhag chuki thi. Apne muh ko pallu se dabaye, apne kamre ki taraf daudti hui chali gayi.
Kamre mein pahunchte hi woh bistar par gir padi. Uske haathon se pallu chhoot gaya, Woh ro rahi thi, bilak rahi thi, jaise uska saara wajood toot chuka ho.
Jyoti (rote hue): "Kis tarah ki maa hoon main? Main... main insaan hi nahi rahi! Koi aisa kaise kar sakta hai? Hey bhagwan... mujhe... mujhe meri galti ki saza do! Jarur do! Ho sake toh mujhe is duniya se utha lo! Fir bhi... fir bhi mera paap ka ghada kabhi pura nahi hoga!"
Uske aansuon se uska chehra bheeg chuka tha. Uske chehre ka rang sookh gaya tha, jaise uske shareer mein jaan hi na bachi ho. Woh aise ro rahi thi jaise uske paap ka bojh usse ek pal ke liye bhi chain na lene de.
Tabhi usko mishka ka woh sawaal yaad aaya. Mishka ne usse pucha tha, "Mummy, yeh haath pe bandage kyun hai?" Jyoti ne us waqt baat taal di thi, par ab uska wohi haath uske saamne tha. Usne us bandage ko dekha, aur kal ki woh raat uske zehen mein dobara jee uthi.
Kal jab Ria aur Mishka so chuke the, Jyoti apne pati Prakash aur saas Shanti ke saath chhat par gayi thi. Teenon ke kadam chhat ki seedhiyon par dheere-dheere badh rahe the, par unke pair kaanp rahe the, khaas kar Jyoti ke. Uska chehra safed pad chuka tha, uski aankhon mein dar tha, ek ajeeb si bechaini thi.
Jyoti (darte hue): "Kya yeh sab karna zaroori hai?"
Prakash (sakhti se): "Bilkul zaroori hai!"
Shanti : "Bahu, ab chup raho. Baaton mein waqt barbaad mat karo. Dekh, hum chhat par pahunch gaye."
Chhat par ka mahaul maut ke sannate jaisa tha. Charon taraf andhera chhaya hua tha, dur-dur tak koi roshni nahi. Bas Shanti ke haath mein ek mombatti ki lau thi, jo dheemi-dheemi jhul rahi thi. Aasman mein na chand dikh raha tha, na taare. Hawa jaise ruk si gayi thi. Aur sabse ajeeb baat? Chhat ke charon taraf kauwe baithe the. Raat ke is samay kauwe? Koi aawaz nahi, bas woh apni kaali aankhon se ghoor rahe the, jaise koi bhayanak ghatna dekhne ke liye jama hote hain. Teenon ne apna thook gatka. Mahaul aisa tha ki dil dhadakne laga.
Shanti (kaampte hue): "Prakash... chhuri nikal."
Prakash : "Yeh... yeh lo..."
Shanti : "Budbak, mujhe kyun de raha hai? Tu... tu kar!"
Prakash (hadbadate hue): "M-main?"
Shanti : "Aur kaun? Jaldi kar!"
Prakash (Jyoti ki taraf mudkar): "Jyoti, apna haath aage karo."
Jyoti (dar se kaanpte hue): "H-haan...?"
Shanti (sakhti se): "Bahu, nakhre mat kar! Aadhi raat ho chuki hai!"
Jyoti : "Par... main... main yeh sab nahi chahti. Mujhse aur paap mat karwao... main tum logo ke pair padti hoon!"
Shanti (dhamkate hue): "Ssssh! Chup kar, warna... warna teri betiyon ko bhi America bhej doongi!"
Jyoti (darte hue): "Nahi! Aisa mat karo... hey bhagwan!"
Raat ke is andhere mein, teenon ki fufusati awaazein hi thi jo goonj rahi thi. Charon taraf sannata, aur woh kauwe jo chupchap ghoor rahe the. Jyoti ne roka, toka, mana kiya, par apni betiyon ke khatre ki baat sunte hi usne kaanpte hue apna haath aage kiya. Prakash ne chhuri nikali. Chand ki halki si roshni mein chhuri chamak uthi, aur uski chamak dekhkar Jyoti ke shareer mein ek siharan daud gayi. Woh jaanti thi kya hone wala hai. Prakash ne uska haath pakda, hatheli ghumayi.
Prakash (sakht awaaz mein): "Chillana mat. Bas thodi si takleef hogi."
Aur fir, ek tez chhuri se Prakash ne Jyoti ki hatheli par ek gehra cut laga diya.
Jyoti (cheekhte hue): "AAAAHHHHHHHH!"
Uski cheekh ne sannate ko cheer diya. Yeh wahi cheekh thi jo neeche Ria aur Mishka ne suni thi. Khoon uski hatheli se tapak raha tha, chhat par gir raha tha, aur uska dard usse andar tak jala raha tha.
Shanti : "Chup! Chup kar, bahu! Neeche sab jag jayenge!"
Jyoti ke haath se khoon lagatar beh raha tha. Usne apni aankhein band kar li, dard ko sehne ki koshish karti hui. Shanti ne apne haath ki mombatti Jyoti ke khoon ke upar rakh diya aur kuch mantra jaisa bolne lagi. Prakash ne bhi aankhein band kar li. Jaise hi Shanti ka bolna khatam hua, ek ajeeb si garmi mahaul mein fail gayi. Kauwe achanak udne lage, aur charon taraf ek ajeeb si boo chha gayi.
Shanti (gabhraate hue): "Prakash? Kuch hua kyun nahi?"
Prakash (hairani se): "Humne toh sab theek kiya!"
Jyoti (dar se kaanpte hue): "Udhar... udhar dekho!"
Jyoti ne chhat ke doosre kone ki taraf ishara kiya. Shanti aur Prakash ne us taraf dekha, aur unki saansein ruk gayin. Wahan, andhere mein, teen saaye khade the. Chand ab pura dikh raha tha, aur woh kauwe ud rahe the, par chupchap. Jaise dar unhe bhi lag raha tha, Woh teen saaye seedhe unki taraf dekh rahe the. Ye deekh Shanti ne thook gatka dar se.
Shanti (kaampte hue): "E-Elders!"
Jyoti ka dil itna tezi se dhadak raha tha ki usse laga woh abhi behosh ho jayegi. Khoon ke behne se usmein kamzori aa rahi thi, uski aankhein adhi band ho chuki thi, par woh khadi rahi. Palak jhapakte hi woh teen saaye unke saamne aa gaye. Unka chahera dikhai nahi de raha tha teenon ne ajeeb sa pehnawa tha, Shanti dar ke maare char kadam peeche hati.
Shanti (darte hue): "E-Elders!"
Elders (gehri, bhayanak awaaz mein): "Humein yahan kyun bulaya gaya, Shanti?"
Shanti (hadbadate hue): "Hum... main... woh..."
Shanti itna ghabra gayi thi ki woh bhool gayi thi ki usne kyun bulaya tha.
Prakash : "Maa?"
Shanti : "Haan! Haan! Woh... uss manhoos ka ab kya karna hai, Elders? Kya... kya hum usse abhi hi...?"
Jyoti (cheekhte hue): "Nahi! Abhi kyun? Woh toh abhi sirf...!"
Shanti (gusse se): "Bahu, samjha kar! Yeh sab hamari bhalai ke liye hai..."
Shanti ki baat poori nahi hui ki Elders ne uski baat kaat di.
Elders (sakht awaaz mein): "12 saal baad."
Shanti (hairani se): "12 saal baad?"
Elders: "Haan. Ussi janam tithi par."
Shanti (darte hue): "T-Theek hai!"
Jyoti yeh sab sun rahi thi. Woh jaanti thi yeh baatein kiske baare mein ho rahi thi. Uska sarr chakkar kha raha tha, woh girne wali thi, par apne aap ko sambhale hue khadi thi abhi tak.
Elders: "Aur kuch?"
Shanti : "Haan! Agar aap yahan hain toh... uska ek naam bhi rakh dijiye."
Prakash: "Haan!"
Elders: "Theek hai. Uska naam hoga M.......!"
Elders ne abhi naam ka pehla akshar hi bola tha ki Jyoti ne cheekhkar baat kaat di.
Jyoti (zor se): "Nahi!"
Shanti (gusse se): "Bahu, tu kya kar rahi hai? Maafi maang, jaldi!"
Jyoti (sakht awaaz mein): "Nahi! Mere bete ka naam main rakhungi!"
Prakash (gusse se): "Tu kya kar rahi hai? Elders ki baat kaat rahi hai? Maafi maang, abhi!"
Elders (shant par bhayanak awaaz mein): "Prakash!"
Prakash (darte hue): "J-Ji?"
Elders: "Jyoti maa hai. Uska itna haq hai ki woh naam rakh sake."
Prakash (dheeme se): "J-Ji, Elders."
Elders: "Rakho, jo naam rakhna chahti ho."
Jyoti ka sarr chakkar kha raha tha. Kamzori usse le rahi thi. Uski aankhon ki roshni kam ho rahi thi, saansein bhari ho rahi thi. Tabhi, uske shareer mein ek ajeeb si thandak daud gayi, jaise koi uske andar thodi se Shakti dedi thodi der ke liye. Bas woh itna bol paye -
Jyoti : "Mere bete ka naam hoga... aryan!"
Itna kehte hi, Jyoti ki aankhein band ho gayi. Uska shareer dheela pad gaya, aur woh zameen par gir padi.
Elders : "Theek hai. Yahi naam hoga uss bacche ka."
Shanti : "J-Ji!"
Elders (sakht awaaz mein): "12 saal hone tak humein mat bulana, Shanti."
Shanti (dheeme se): "J-Ji, Elders."
Palak jhapakte hi woh teen elders ki saaye gayab ho gaye. Prakash ne jaldi se Jyoti ko uthaya aur neeche le jakar litaya.
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Jyoti apne bistar par leti hui thi, uski aankhein aansuon se bheegi hui thi. Kal ki woh bhayanak raat uske zehen mein goonj rahi thi. Woh janti thi 12 Saal Baad Kya hone wala tha tabhi -
Aryan?
Aryan!
Mera baccha Aryan!
ARYANNN!!!"
Woh bistar se uchal padi, uski saansein bhari thi, uska chehra safed pad chuka tha. Usne apne charon taraf dekha, par andhera hi andhera tha.
Jyoti (rote hue): "Mera beta kahan hai? ARYAN? ARYANNN!!!"
Tabhi kamre ka darwaza khula, aur Anita daudti hui andar aayi.
Anita (gabhraate hue): "Bahurani! Kya hua? Aap aise kyun cheekh rahi hain?"
Jyoti (hafte hue): "Anita di? Tum yahan kyun? Aryan ko chhodkar kyun aayi? Woh dar jayega! Uske paas jao, usse sula do! Nahi... main... main chalti hoon. Ghar mein koi nahi hai, mein abhi ja sakti hu huske paas!"
Jyoti ki awaaz mein bechaini thi. Woh uthne lagi, Anita ne usse dekha, aur uski aankhein aansuon se bhar aayi. Usne apna pallu se muh chhupa liya.
Anita (mann mein) : "hey Bhagwan..."!
Jyoti (hairani se): "Tum ro kyun rahi ho?"
Anita chup rahi woh kiya kahe usse samajh nahi aa rahi thi, bas roti rahi. Ye dekh Jyoti ka dil aur bechain hua.
Jyoti (zor se): "Kya hua? Tum ro kyun rahi ho? Chalo, ghar mein koi nahi hai, main Aryan ke paas ja sakti hoon. Usse godi mein utha sakti hoon!"
Anita ab aur nahi ruk saki. Use ab Sach batana hi hoga. Usne Jyoti ki taraf dekha, uski aankhein aansuon se bhar gayi.
Anita (rote hue): "Aapne fir se wahi sapna dekha, bahurani!"
Jyoti (hairani se): "Sapna? Kaunsa sapna?"
Anita (rote huye) : "Haan! Aapne fir se wahi sapna dekha! Babu... babu ko mare hue 8 saal ho chuke hain, bahurani! Woh ab is duniya mein nahi hai!"
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Mishka: “Nahi, school jaungi!”
Jyoti (muskurate hue): “Good girl. Chalo, fresh ho jao.”
Jyoti ne Mishka ke sirr ko sehlaya, par Mishka ka dhyan Jyoti ke haath par gaya. Uske dahine haath par ek safed bandage bandha hua tha.
Mishka : “Mumma, aapke haath par bandage kyun hai?”
Jyoti ke chehre par ek pal ke liye ghabrahat dikhayi di. Usne jaldi se haath chhupaya.
Jyoti : “Y-yeh... kuchh nahi! Ab baatein chhodo aur fresh ho chalo, School ka time ho raha hai.”
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Jyoti ke kadam apne aap uske ghar ke andhere corridor mein dheeme-dheeme badh rahe the. Uske dil ki dhadkan itni tezi se chal rahi thi ki usse lag raha tha jaise woh kisi bhi pal bahar nikal jayegi. Usne apne dono betiyon, Ria aur Mishka, ko school chhodkar ghar wapas aayi thi. Lekin aaj uska mann bechain tha, uski saansein bhari, aur uske haathon mein ek ajib si kampan thi.
Jyoti apne kamre ki taraf ja rahi thi, par uska dil uss bacche ke kamre ki taraf kheench raha tha. Usne idhar-udhar dekha, darwaza khula tha, ghar mein sannata tha, bas uske apne kadmon ki dheemi-dheemi aawaz thi. Ek baar fir usne charon taraf nazar ghumayi, double check kiya, koi nahi tha ghar pe.
Woh dheere se khidki ki taraf badhi. Khidki khuli thi, aur uske andar ka nazara dekhkar uska dil ekdum se ruk sa gaya. Waha, uska nanha sa beta, chain ki neend so raha tha. Uska munh itna masoom tha ki jaise usne duniya ki koi buraai dekhi hi na ho. Par Jyoti uske paas nahi jaa sakti. uske paas Anita baithi thi, apni aankhon se us bacche ko ek tak nihar rahi thi. Anita ka chehra shant tha, aur uski aankhon mein piyaar thi.
Jyoti ye sab dekhti rahi. Uske dil mein ek toofan utha. Waha Anita nahi Jyoti ko hona chahiye tha. Uski aankhein ekdum se nam ho gayi, aur aansuon ka sailab uske chehre par behne laga. Woh khidki ke paas khadi thi, apne aap ko sambhalte hue, par uska dil chikh raha tha.
"Waaaaaa! Waaaaaa!"
Achanak uska nanha beta ekdum se ro utha. Sayad usse ye ehsaas ho raha tha ki Jyoti aas paas hi hai. Uski cheekh itni teekhi thi ki jaise usne us ghar ke sannate ko cheer diya ho.
Anita ekdum se hadbada gayi. Usne jaldi se bacche ko god mein uthaya aur use chup karane lagi.
Anita : "Kya hua babu? Abhi toh chain se so rahe the! Kya hua?"
Tabhi Anita ko ek aahat mehsoos hui. Jaise koi uske peeche khidki par khada ho. Usne palatkar dekha, par wahan koi nahi tha. Bas sannata usse ghoor rahe the. Usne bacche ko fir se chup karane lagi.
Anita (dheeme se): "So jao babu, so jao. Main hoon na, kuch nahi hoga."
Par Jyoti ab wahan nahi thi. Jab bacche ki cheekh uske kaano mein padi, uske dil mein ek teer sa chubha. Uske aansuon ka sailab ruk nahi raha tha. Jab Anita ne palat kar dekha tha, Jyoti waha se bhag chuki thi. Apne muh ko pallu se dabaye, apne kamre ki taraf daudti hui chali gayi.
Kamre mein pahunchte hi woh bistar par gir padi. Uske haathon se pallu chhoot gaya, Woh ro rahi thi, bilak rahi thi, jaise uska saara wajood toot chuka ho.
Jyoti (rote hue): "Kis tarah ki maa hoon main? Main... main insaan hi nahi rahi! Koi aisa kaise kar sakta hai? Hey bhagwan... mujhe... mujhe meri galti ki saza do! Jarur do! Ho sake toh mujhe is duniya se utha lo! Fir bhi... fir bhi mera paap ka ghada kabhi pura nahi hoga!"
Uske aansuon se uska chehra bheeg chuka tha. Uske chehre ka rang sookh gaya tha, jaise uske shareer mein jaan hi na bachi ho. Woh aise ro rahi thi jaise uske paap ka bojh usse ek pal ke liye bhi chain na lene de.
Tabhi usko mishka ka woh sawaal yaad aaya. Mishka ne usse pucha tha, "Mummy, yeh haath pe bandage kyun hai?" Jyoti ne us waqt baat taal di thi, par ab uska wohi haath uske saamne tha. Usne us bandage ko dekha, aur kal ki woh raat uske zehen mein dobara jee uthi.
Kal jab Ria aur Mishka so chuke the, Jyoti apne pati Prakash aur saas Shanti ke saath chhat par gayi thi. Teenon ke kadam chhat ki seedhiyon par dheere-dheere badh rahe the, par unke pair kaanp rahe the, khaas kar Jyoti ke. Uska chehra safed pad chuka tha, uski aankhon mein dar tha, ek ajeeb si bechaini thi.
Jyoti (darte hue): "Kya yeh sab karna zaroori hai?"
Prakash (sakhti se): "Bilkul zaroori hai!"
Shanti : "Bahu, ab chup raho. Baaton mein waqt barbaad mat karo. Dekh, hum chhat par pahunch gaye."
Chhat par ka mahaul maut ke sannate jaisa tha. Charon taraf andhera chhaya hua tha, dur-dur tak koi roshni nahi. Bas Shanti ke haath mein ek mombatti ki lau thi, jo dheemi-dheemi jhul rahi thi. Aasman mein na chand dikh raha tha, na taare. Hawa jaise ruk si gayi thi. Aur sabse ajeeb baat? Chhat ke charon taraf kauwe baithe the. Raat ke is samay kauwe? Koi aawaz nahi, bas woh apni kaali aankhon se ghoor rahe the, jaise koi bhayanak ghatna dekhne ke liye jama hote hain. Teenon ne apna thook gatka. Mahaul aisa tha ki dil dhadakne laga.
Shanti (kaampte hue): "Prakash... chhuri nikal."
Prakash : "Yeh... yeh lo..."
Shanti : "Budbak, mujhe kyun de raha hai? Tu... tu kar!"
Prakash (hadbadate hue): "M-main?"
Shanti : "Aur kaun? Jaldi kar!"
Prakash (Jyoti ki taraf mudkar): "Jyoti, apna haath aage karo."
Jyoti (dar se kaanpte hue): "H-haan...?"
Shanti (sakhti se): "Bahu, nakhre mat kar! Aadhi raat ho chuki hai!"
Jyoti : "Par... main... main yeh sab nahi chahti. Mujhse aur paap mat karwao... main tum logo ke pair padti hoon!"
Shanti (dhamkate hue): "Ssssh! Chup kar, warna... warna teri betiyon ko bhi America bhej doongi!"
Jyoti (darte hue): "Nahi! Aisa mat karo... hey bhagwan!"
Raat ke is andhere mein, teenon ki fufusati awaazein hi thi jo goonj rahi thi. Charon taraf sannata, aur woh kauwe jo chupchap ghoor rahe the. Jyoti ne roka, toka, mana kiya, par apni betiyon ke khatre ki baat sunte hi usne kaanpte hue apna haath aage kiya. Prakash ne chhuri nikali. Chand ki halki si roshni mein chhuri chamak uthi, aur uski chamak dekhkar Jyoti ke shareer mein ek siharan daud gayi. Woh jaanti thi kya hone wala hai. Prakash ne uska haath pakda, hatheli ghumayi.
Prakash (sakht awaaz mein): "Chillana mat. Bas thodi si takleef hogi."
Aur fir, ek tez chhuri se Prakash ne Jyoti ki hatheli par ek gehra cut laga diya.
Jyoti (cheekhte hue): "AAAAHHHHHHHH!"
Uski cheekh ne sannate ko cheer diya. Yeh wahi cheekh thi jo neeche Ria aur Mishka ne suni thi. Khoon uski hatheli se tapak raha tha, chhat par gir raha tha, aur uska dard usse andar tak jala raha tha.
Shanti : "Chup! Chup kar, bahu! Neeche sab jag jayenge!"
Jyoti ke haath se khoon lagatar beh raha tha. Usne apni aankhein band kar li, dard ko sehne ki koshish karti hui. Shanti ne apne haath ki mombatti Jyoti ke khoon ke upar rakh diya aur kuch mantra jaisa bolne lagi. Prakash ne bhi aankhein band kar li. Jaise hi Shanti ka bolna khatam hua, ek ajeeb si garmi mahaul mein fail gayi. Kauwe achanak udne lage, aur charon taraf ek ajeeb si boo chha gayi.
Shanti (gabhraate hue): "Prakash? Kuch hua kyun nahi?"
Prakash (hairani se): "Humne toh sab theek kiya!"
Jyoti (dar se kaanpte hue): "Udhar... udhar dekho!"
Jyoti ne chhat ke doosre kone ki taraf ishara kiya. Shanti aur Prakash ne us taraf dekha, aur unki saansein ruk gayin. Wahan, andhere mein, teen saaye khade the. Chand ab pura dikh raha tha, aur woh kauwe ud rahe the, par chupchap. Jaise dar unhe bhi lag raha tha, Woh teen saaye seedhe unki taraf dekh rahe the. Ye deekh Shanti ne thook gatka dar se.
Shanti (kaampte hue): "E-Elders!"
Jyoti ka dil itna tezi se dhadak raha tha ki usse laga woh abhi behosh ho jayegi. Khoon ke behne se usmein kamzori aa rahi thi, uski aankhein adhi band ho chuki thi, par woh khadi rahi. Palak jhapakte hi woh teen saaye unke saamne aa gaye. Unka chahera dikhai nahi de raha tha teenon ne ajeeb sa pehnawa tha, Shanti dar ke maare char kadam peeche hati.
Shanti (darte hue): "E-Elders!"
Elders (gehri, bhayanak awaaz mein): "Humein yahan kyun bulaya gaya, Shanti?"
Shanti (hadbadate hue): "Hum... main... woh..."
Shanti itna ghabra gayi thi ki woh bhool gayi thi ki usne kyun bulaya tha.
Prakash : "Maa?"
Shanti : "Haan! Haan! Woh... uss manhoos ka ab kya karna hai, Elders? Kya... kya hum usse abhi hi...?"
Jyoti (cheekhte hue): "Nahi! Abhi kyun? Woh toh abhi sirf...!"
Shanti (gusse se): "Bahu, samjha kar! Yeh sab hamari bhalai ke liye hai..."
Shanti ki baat poori nahi hui ki Elders ne uski baat kaat di.
Elders (sakht awaaz mein): "12 saal baad."
Shanti (hairani se): "12 saal baad?"
Elders: "Haan. Ussi janam tithi par."
Shanti (darte hue): "T-Theek hai!"
Jyoti yeh sab sun rahi thi. Woh jaanti thi yeh baatein kiske baare mein ho rahi thi. Uska sarr chakkar kha raha tha, woh girne wali thi, par apne aap ko sambhale hue khadi thi abhi tak.
Elders: "Aur kuch?"
Shanti : "Haan! Agar aap yahan hain toh... uska ek naam bhi rakh dijiye."
Prakash: "Haan!"
Elders: "Theek hai. Uska naam hoga M.......!"
Elders ne abhi naam ka pehla akshar hi bola tha ki Jyoti ne cheekhkar baat kaat di.
Jyoti (zor se): "Nahi!"
Shanti (gusse se): "Bahu, tu kya kar rahi hai? Maafi maang, jaldi!"
Jyoti (sakht awaaz mein): "Nahi! Mere bete ka naam main rakhungi!"
Prakash (gusse se): "Tu kya kar rahi hai? Elders ki baat kaat rahi hai? Maafi maang, abhi!"
Elders (shant par bhayanak awaaz mein): "Prakash!"
Prakash (darte hue): "J-Ji?"
Elders: "Jyoti maa hai. Uska itna haq hai ki woh naam rakh sake."
Prakash (dheeme se): "J-Ji, Elders."
Elders: "Rakho, jo naam rakhna chahti ho."
Jyoti ka sarr chakkar kha raha tha. Kamzori usse le rahi thi. Uski aankhon ki roshni kam ho rahi thi, saansein bhari ho rahi thi. Tabhi, uske shareer mein ek ajeeb si thandak daud gayi, jaise koi uske andar thodi se Shakti dedi thodi der ke liye. Bas woh itna bol paye -
Jyoti : "Mere bete ka naam hoga... aryan!"
Itna kehte hi, Jyoti ki aankhein band ho gayi. Uska shareer dheela pad gaya, aur woh zameen par gir padi.
Elders : "Theek hai. Yahi naam hoga uss bacche ka."
Shanti : "J-Ji!"
Elders (sakht awaaz mein): "12 saal hone tak humein mat bulana, Shanti."
Shanti (dheeme se): "J-Ji, Elders."
Palak jhapakte hi woh teen elders ki saaye gayab ho gaye. Prakash ne jaldi se Jyoti ko uthaya aur neeche le jakar litaya.
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Jyoti apne bistar par leti hui thi, uski aankhein aansuon se bheegi hui thi. Kal ki woh bhayanak raat uske zehen mein goonj rahi thi. Woh janti thi 12 Saal Baad Kya hone wala tha tabhi -
Aryan?
Aryan!
Mera baccha Aryan!
ARYANNN!!!"
Woh bistar se uchal padi, uski saansein bhari thi, uska chehra safed pad chuka tha. Usne apne charon taraf dekha, par andhera hi andhera tha.
Jyoti (rote hue): "Mera beta kahan hai? ARYAN? ARYANNN!!!"
Tabhi kamre ka darwaza khula, aur Anita daudti hui andar aayi.
Anita (gabhraate hue): "Bahurani! Kya hua? Aap aise kyun cheekh rahi hain?"
Jyoti (hafte hue): "Anita di? Tum yahan kyun? Aryan ko chhodkar kyun aayi? Woh dar jayega! Uske paas jao, usse sula do! Nahi... main... main chalti hoon. Ghar mein koi nahi hai, mein abhi ja sakti hu huske paas!"
Jyoti ki awaaz mein bechaini thi. Woh uthne lagi, Anita ne usse dekha, aur uski aankhein aansuon se bhar aayi. Usne apna pallu se muh chhupa liya.
Anita (mann mein) : "hey Bhagwan..."!
Jyoti (hairani se): "Tum ro kyun rahi ho?"
Anita chup rahi woh kiya kahe usse samajh nahi aa rahi thi, bas roti rahi. Ye dekh Jyoti ka dil aur bechain hua.
Jyoti (zor se): "Kya hua? Tum ro kyun rahi ho? Chalo, ghar mein koi nahi hai, main Aryan ke paas ja sakti hoon. Usse godi mein utha sakti hoon!"
Anita ab aur nahi ruk saki. Use ab Sach batana hi hoga. Usne Jyoti ki taraf dekha, uski aankhein aansuon se bhar gayi.
Anita (rote hue): "Aapne fir se wahi sapna dekha, bahurani!"
Jyoti (hairani se): "Sapna? Kaunsa sapna?"
Anita (rote huye) : "Haan! Aapne fir se wahi sapna dekha! Babu... babu ko mare hue 8 saal ho chuke hain, bahurani! Woh ab is duniya mein nahi hai!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi.
Yeh update ek emotional aur suspense ka tha Jyoti ka dard itni gahraayi se likha hai ki uski har saans, har aansoo, aur uska woh guilt reader ke dil mein utar jata hai.
Chhat wala scene toh ekdum masterpiece hai-kauwon ka woh chupchap ghoorna, andhere ka sannata, aur Elders ka entry, yeh sab ek aisa daravana aur mysterious vibe banata hai ki goosebumps aa jate hain.
Jab Jyoti ka haath kaata jata hai aur khoon tapakta hai, toh dil dhadakne lagta hai, aur Anita ka woh dil tod dene wala khulasa -"Babu ko mare hue 8 saal ho chuke hain"-ekdum se aankhon mein aansoo la deta hai.
Yeh kahani har pal ek naya twist deti hai, jo dil ko jhanjhor deta hai aur dimag ko sochne pe majboor kar deta hai.
Writing style ki baat karein, toh writer ka andaaz ekdum cinematic hai. Har dialogue, har description itna sharp aur powerful hai ki jaise koi film ke scenes likhe ja rahe ho.
Jyoti ke emotions aur uske flashbacks ka flow itna natural hai ki padhte waqt ekdum seamless lage.
Chhat ke scene mein sensory details-jaise kauwon ki kaali aankhein, mombatti ki dheemi lau, poora scene aankhon ke saamne jee uth ta hai, jaise koi dark fantasy film ka set ho.
Excitement ka factor toh ismein ekdum zabardast hai, Jyoti ka past, uska guilt, Aryan ke saath kya hua? aur woh 12 saal baad wala mystery? yeh sab ek puzzle ke pieces ki tarah judte hain. aur Anita ka woh shocking sach, yeh sab ekdum edge-of-the-seat wala thrill deta hai. Reader ke dimag mein sawalon ka hungama mach jata hai ki Elders kaun hain? Jyoti ka paap kya tha? 12 saal baad kya hone wala hai? Yeh suspense aur curiosity sur strong karta hai.
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