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Romance Dildariyan 2

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Guys roj 2-2 ghante mehnat karke ap logon ke liye update likhta hun... but shayad ap logon ko story itni v pasand nahi a rahi k ap 2 second nikal kar ek comment kar sakein... bhai aise toh likhne ka koi maja nahi ayega... Yaar kisi v tarah ka feedback toh dijiye chahe achha ya bura...
:slap: kiski itni majal ki story pasand nahin bole...:dwarf:

Story bohot hi khubsurat aur shandar hai...plot bhi bilkul alag hai kuchh hatke...

Aaj ki update ke baare me kahun to updated is too good more than i expect..

Arav ka fikr yun rashmi ki jikr...
Iteha na le le uski sabr ka....
Ye Rashmi bhi kya bolun yar majuburi sahi lekin yun pagal jaisi harkat karne ki kya jarurat thi.... Wese mujhe story me kiran ki character bohot pasand hai....:shy:
 

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:slap: kiski itni majal ki story pasand nahin bole...:dwarf:

Story bohot hi khubsurat aur shandar hai...plot bhi bilkul alag hai kuchh hatke...

Aaj ki update ke baare me kahun to updated is too good more than i expect..

Arav ka fikr yun rashmi ki jikr...
Iteha na le le uski sabr ka....
Ye Rashmi bhi kya bolun yar majuburi sahi lekin yun pagal jaisi harkat karne ki kya jarurat thi.... Wese mujhe story me kiran ki character bohot pasand hai....:shy:
Thanks bhai... apke comment se sach mein hauslaa mila... aur plz har update padhne ke baad review jarur dein... Fir age likhne mein v maza ata hai...
 
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Update 20

Rashmi ne jhat se uska phone usse chhin liya aur boli “plz aisa mat karo… main a rahi hun party mein aur kya pata wahan usse baat karne ka v mauka mil jaye…” Rashmi ki baat sun kar Kiran aur Sana khusi se nachne lagi aur apne sath jabardasti Rashmi ko v khichne lagi… Rashmi apne ap ko unse chhudane ki kosish kar rahi thi aur un dono par hans rahi thi…

Ab age…..

Toh jaise jaise time nikal raha tha aur sham karib a rahi thi vaise vaise pure sehar mein patakon ki awajein tez hoti ja rahi thi… udher Rashmi v sham dhalte hi sajne sawrne mein lag gayi… wo toh aise tyar ho rahi thi jaise uski shadi ho… Subah tak dukhi sa chehra lekar ghum rahi thi aur abhi ek badi si smile uske chehre par ek dum aise faili huyi thi mano subah ke surya ki pehli kiran…

Rashmi apne ap ko ayine mein dekh kar khud hi sharma rahi thi… akhir wo lag v toh boht hi jyada khubsurat rahi thi… Usne aaj Tyar hone mein itna jyada waqt lgaya tha k Kiran aur Sana kab se tyar hoke uska intzar kar rahi thi aur bed par baithi uwasian le rahi thi…

Kiran(uwasi lete huye): yaar Jaldi kar na ab kion bore kar rahi hai…

Sana: han yaar itna time toh main kabhi exam se pehle padhne mein v nahi lgati jitna tu aj tyar hone mein laga rahi hai…

Kiran(hanste huye): aj iska exam hi toh hai… pyar ka exam…

Sana: han tabhi toh madam aise saj rahi hai mano hum aj hi ise Aarav ke sath bida karne ja rahe ho…

Rashmi(apna duppata thik karte huye): Yaar kion dimag kha rahi ho tum dono… abhi party mein kitna time toh pada hai…

Kiran: are madam time kahan hai… mujhe toh lagta hai humare jane se pehle hi Aarav diwali mana kar so jayega…

Rashmi(jaldi jaldi apni bindi theek karte huye): are fir tum dono yahan kya aaram se so rahi ho… jaldi utho mujhe v late karwa do gi....

Yeh bol kar Rashmi fatafat room se bahar chali gayi aur Sana aur Kiran hairan si hokar Ek dusre ka munh taak rahi thi… “kmaal hai… ulta chor Kotwal ko daante” itna bol kar Kiran v bed se uth khadi huyi aur fir wo aur Sana v Rashmi ke peeche peeche nikal gayin…

Udher Aarav ke ghar ke bahar Faiz apni car mein baitha Horn pe horn baja raha tha… Vicky uske sath wali seat par baitha tha aur Ashu Peeche… wo teeno besabri se Aarav ka intezar kar rahe the…

Vicky: Yaar yeh Aarav v na… pata nahi kya kar raha hai… kab se bola hai usko k hum pick karne a rahe hain tu tyar rehna… par sala abhi tak nahi aya…

Faiz(horn bajate huye): are bhai jaldi aja isse pehle k Ladkiyan wahan pahunche humein wahan pahunchna hoga…

Vicky: koi na tension na le hum pahunch jayenge… aur bhai plz tu horn baja baja ke kaan mat kha aur jyada horn bajayega toh aiven kisi se maar khani padegi…

Ashu: han pata chale k Diwali ke bomb hamari gaand par hi fat gaye…

Ashu ki baat sun kar wo teeno hans pade tabhi unko Aarav door se nikalta huya dikhayi pada… wo ek dum hero ki tarah darwaje se nikal kar nawabon wali chaal mein Car ki taraf badh raha tha… Gora Rang teekhe nain naksh aur neeli ankhein… uper se Kamaal ka safed colour ka kurta pjama aur uske uper Light blue colour ki printed Nehru jacket… aisa lag raha tha mano koi Rajkumar ho… Koi v ladki aj use dekhti toh kam se kam ek baar toh man mein Aah bhar hi leti…

Par uske kameene doston ko uske rang roop se ghanta fark nahi padta… Vicky ne jaise hi Aarav ko dekha toh Faiz ke uper se hi khidki mein se munh nikal kar us par tut pada “abe sale tujhe time ki koi value hai kya… kab se call ki hai tumhe k tyar ho ja aur tu yahan dheere dheere nawabon ki tarah chala a raha hai…pairon mein mehndi lagi hai kya…”

Aarav(Ashu ke paas baithte huye): Yaar kion tyagi ki tarah gaand marwa raha hai apni… mera kurta press nahi tha aur Mom gayi hain Shital aunty ke yahan… tujhe kya pata kitni mehnat karke press kiya hai isko…

Vicky: abe tu…

Faiz(Gusse se chilate huye ): abhi tu kion mere kaan mein raag darwari baja raha hai… chup chap baith na bhai… wo bol raha hai na k press kar raha tha… abhi tu bol bol ke late karwa raha hai…

Faiz ki baat sunkar Vicky v chup chap apni seat par baith gaya aur Faiz ne ek baar uski taraf dekha aur jab use tasalli ho gayi k ab Vicky shant hai toh usne car start ki aur wahan se Vicky ke Farm house ki taraf nikal pada…

Kus hi der mein wo Log Farm house pahunch gaye… Farm house Sehar se halka sa bahar tha aur charon taraf hariyaali hi dikhayi de rahi thi… Raat ke halke halke andhere mein ek jagah dur se hi dikhayi pad rahi thi jo Raat mein kaale akash mein Maujud chaand ki tarah jagmaga rahi thi… yahi tha Vicky ka farm house… yahan usne boht hi bhayankar wali sajawat kar rakhi thi… kamaal ki lighting aur decoration dekh kar lag raha tha k Vicky ne kafi kharcha kar diya tha…khair un logon ne bahar hi gaadi park ki yahan pehle se hi kafi saari gaadiyan aur bikes parked thi..

Jab wo Farm house ke main gate se enter huye toh wahan se leke Farm house tak Garden ke beech se jo ek lamba sa Rasta bana huya tha uske uper se v Kamaal ki lightning aur sajawat ki huyi thi… aur Farm house ke uper toh mano ek inch v jagah khali na thi yahan colourful lights aur decoration na ho… aur us sab ke uper chaar chaand laga raha tha Farm House ke bilkul uper rang birangi lights ki madad se likha huya HAPPY DIWALI… jo k boht dur se hi nazar a raha tha…

Aarav(har taraf nazar ghumate huye): are wah bhai Vicky… tune toh bilkul kehar hi dhaa rakha hai…

Vicky: thank you yaara… but yeh sab Ashu aur Faiz ke bina possible na ho paata…

Aarav: par yaar yeh sab tum logon ne kab plan kiya… aur mujhe kion nahi bataya…

Faiz: tumhe kaise batate… tere liye hi toh sab kiya hai…

Aarav(chaunkte huye): mere liye… kya matlab?

Vicky: Yaar tu thodi thand rakh… sab pata chal jayega… abhi chal mujhe lagta hai sab log a chuke hain… party enjoy karte hain…

Ashu(excited hokar): han yaar chalo… subah se wait nahi ho raha… chalo jaldi se ander chalte hain…

Fir wo log Jaldi jaldi chalte huye Farm House tak pahunch hi gaye aur wahan v Un teeno ne kamaal kar rakha tha… gate ke uper do aadmi bilkul saahi kapdon mein khade the jinhone un charon ko dekhte hi salaam karte huye bade adab se darwaja khol diya... yeh sab dekh kar Aarav ne ek baar fir Vicky ki Taraf dekh kar ankhon hi ankhon mein use daad di…aur Vicky ne v halka sa muskura diya…

Par asal nazara toh ander dekhne wala tha… darwaje ke khulte hi Aarav ka munh v khul gaya aur wo wahin khada khada har taraf nazar ghumane laga… Ander toh kamaal hi huya pada tha… Wahan ki sajawat sabse achhi thi aur uper ek bada sa kaanch ka jumar latak raha tha jo us bade aur alishan hall hi shobha badha raha tha… Wahan ek taraf khane peene ka bandobast tha aur ek side mein round table sajaye huye the… Sab log alag alag group bana kar khade apas mein batein kar rahe the aur Waiters ghum ghum kar un logon ko drinks aur snacks serve kar rahe the… sab Diwali ke liye Indian dresses pehan kar aye the aur mahaul kafi achha lag raha tha…Aarav ko sab se jyada khusi toh tab huyi jab usne dekha ek side mein Dance floor laga huya hai aur mood lights chal rahi hain aur dheemi awaj mein DJ par romantic gaane chal rahe hain… yeh sab dekh kar use apne doston par bada proud feel ho raha tha aur wo Vicky ko bina jhapi diye na reh paya…

Aarav: are wah mere yaaro tum logon ne kamaal hi kar diya… saalo mujhe nahi pata tha k itna tagda surprise doge… sach mein yaar dil khus kar diya…

Fir usne Ashu aur Faiz ko v gale se laga kar apni khusi ka izhaar kar hi diya… tabhi Vicky bol pada “Are bhai abhi toh surprise baki hai… Tu dekhta chal is baar ki diwali tu puri jindgi yaad rakhega…”

Aarav(excited hokar): are bhai ab aur kya surprise doge…

Faiz: Yaar tu thoda sabar kar aur party enjoy kar… tera surprise ata hi hoga… (Vicky ko) are tum log chalo kus khao peeyo main abhi ata hun…

Fir Vicky Aarav aur Ashu ke sath age ko Chal pada aur Faiz apna phone nikal kar ek corner ki taraf chal pada.... “are yaar yeh Kiran abhi tak ayi kion nahi… pata nahi Rashmi maani v hogi yah nahi… kahin sab gadbad na ho jaye…” Faiz apne ap se hi baat kar raha tha… Fir usne Kiran ko call kiya aur Kiran ne v jhat se phone utha liya…

Faiz(thoda jor se bolta huya): Yaar tum log abhi aye kion nahi… Rashmi a rahi hai na?

Kiran: han wo a rahi hai… hum log farm house tak a chuke hain bas 2 minute mein ander ate hain…

Faiz(khus hokar): chal ok ok… jaldi a jao… Aarav v a chuka hai…

Fir Kiran ne ok bol kar phone kaat diya aur Faiz Apne doston ke paas chala gaya… wo log apas mein batein kar rahe the… Faiz ko dekhte hi Vicky ne ishare se Rashmi ke bare mein puchha toh samne se Faiz ne bhi han mein ishara karke bata diya k Rashmi a rahi hai…

Abhi Aarav ne bas un dono ke ishare ko samjhne ki kosish ki hi thi k tabhi Farm house ka darwaja khula aur Aarav ne jhat se us taraf dekha… uske baad toh mano Aarav apne hosh hi kho baitha ho…uski najar Rashmi par padte hi wo hang sa ho gaya… Rashmi ne aj tyar hone mein koi kasar nahi chhodi thi… White colour ka lehnga choli aur uske uper chhote chhote shining daane… baaki bhagwan ne toh use banaya hi ek dum pari tha… Jo v Rashmi ki taraf dekh raha tha use diwali ki sajawat feeki lag rahi thi…. Par Rashmi ko aur kisi se koi lena dena nahi tha… use toh bas Aarav chahiye tha aur uski ankhein usi ki khoj mein charon taraf ghum rahi thi… Tabhi use Aarav apne Doston ke sath apni taraf dekhta huya mil hi gaya... Aarav ko aise ankhein gadaye dekhta pa kar Rashmi sharma si gayi aur usne apni garden neeche kar li aur Aarav ki taraf chal padi…

Rashmi apne lehnge ko apne dono hathon mein sambhale huye ek pyari si smile ke sath ander chali a rahi thi aur Aarav ki dadhkan uske ek ek kadam ke sath tez hoti ja rahi thi… uske Kanon mein koi romantic sa song baj raha tha aur uski nazar Rashmi se hatne ko tyar hi nahi thi… Wo Rashmi ki khubsurti mein itna dub chuka tha k Rashmi apni dhadhkano ko thame kab uske samne ake khadi ho gayi use pata hi nahi chala…

To be continued…
 
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Belated happy diwali.... May god fulfill all your wishes....
Dono updates bohot mast the...
Dono ko apne pyar ka ehsas ho chuka hai...
Party toh shandar honewala hai...
:thanks: for the update
 
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