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parkas

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UPDATE-2

Break ke time harsh janvi ke sath bas canteen ki taraf jaa hi rha hota hai

Janvi:- harsh tumhe pata hai na ki humare collage mai iss saal ke carnival mai ek dance competition bhi ho rha hai

Harsh:- haa suna maine bhi uske baare mai toh

Janvi:- toh kya harsh hum dono nhi isme part lenge or dekhna hum hi jeetege

Harsh:- dekhege par abhi mera ye dance ya kisi or cheez ka mood nhi hai

itne mai wo canteen phoch jaate hai or harsh dekhta hai ki manya ke sath koi ladka tha

ye dekhkar harsh ko pata nhi bilkul acha nhi lagta or wo unke paas jakar bolta hai ki
Harsh:- manya kya baat hai kya ye tumhe pareshan kar rha hai

ladka:- aare nhi Tum galat samjh rhe ho mai or manya toh dance competition mai ek sath part lene ke baare mai baat kar rhe the

ye sun kar harsh ka dimag kharab ho jaata hai or wo uss ladke ka collar pakar kar bolta hai

Harsh:- kya be tu manya ka dance partner banega ( harsh ko khud nhi pata tha ki wo ye sab kyu kar rha hai )

Manya harsh ko yu gusse mai dekh ek dum se ghabra jaati hai kyuki wo aise gussa bhot kam hi karta tha

manya:- harsh shant ho jao Rahul (uss ladke ka naam ) sirf mujh se puch rha tha ki kya mai uski dance partner banu

Harsh ko pata nhi or gussa aa jata hai or wo Manya ka hath pakar kar usse apne sath collage ke ground mai le jaata hai

harsh:- mayu kya hai ye sab
Manya:- harsh kya hua calm down wo sirf mujhse puch rha tha

harsh:- acha kya tum usse pasand karti ho (harsh ko khud nhi pata tha ki wo usse aisa kyu puch rha hai)

manya:- aare nhi harsh tumhe aise kyu laga

harsh:- bas aise hi pakka na
Manya:- aare haa baba

harsh:- thik hai toh tum usse ab baat nhi karna
Manya;- par kyuu

harsh:- bas aise hi mujhe pasand nhi wo
Manya:- thik hai nhi karugi

harsh:- chalo ab class mai chalte hai or haa iss baar ke dance competition mai tum meri partner banogi

ye bolkar harsh waha se chala jaata or manya shock mai rhe jaate hai usse bikul umeed nhi thi ki harsh usse apna dance partner banne ke liye bolega

fir manya bhi class mai jaati hai or Avni ke sath baith jaati hai

avni:- kya hua manya
Manya:- pata nhi yaar harsh ko achanak kya hua bol rha hai ki rahul se baat mat karna or wo mujhe apna dance partner banne ke liye bol rha hai

Avni:- ohh acha matalab mera Shaq sahi nikla
Manya:- kaisa shaq
Avni:- yehi ki harsh bhi tujhse pyaar karta hai but abhi usko ye baat realise nhi hai

manya:- aare ye tu kya bol rhi meri kuch samjh nhi aa rha
Avni:- aare dekh terko Rahul se baat karta dekh usko jealousy hui or wo terko uske sath dance karte nhi dekh sakta isliye usne tujhe apna partner banne ko bola

manya(khush hote hue) :- aare haa shayad tu sahi bol rhi hai ohh god :DD:

Avni:- ab abhi tu uska ye pyaar bhar lane ki khosish kar

or yehi harsh ko ye samjh nhi aa rha tha ki usne aise react kyu kara or mujhe usko uss ladke ke sath dekhar itna gussa kyu aaya

tabhi harsh ka dost yash usse pareshan dekhar uske pass aata hai harsh usse sab bata deta hai

ye sab sunkar yash muskurate hue usse bolta hai
yash:- bhai bura na mane toh ek baat bolu

harsh:- aare yash aise kyu bol rha hai bol jo bolna hai
yash:- bhai mujhe lagta hai tujhe pyaar ho gya hai manya se

harsh:- yash pagal ho gya hai kya kya bole jaa rha hai behan hai wo meri

Yash:- toh isme bura hi kya hai or ab toh ye comon hai or mujhe lagta hai wo bhi tujhse pyaar karti hai

harsh:- lekin...

yash:- dekh yaar tera usko kisi or ke sath dekar jealous hona uski care karna sab bata rha hai
harsh:- chor yaar ye sab

YAsh:- sach se kitna bhi bhaag le par wo badlta nhi

yash ki baate sunkar harsh soch mai doob jaata hai


TO BE CONTINUED....
Nice and awesome update...
 

andyking302

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UPDATE-2

Break ke time harsh janvi ke sath bas canteen ki taraf jaa hi rha hota hai

Janvi:- harsh tumhe pata hai na ki humare collage mai iss saal ke carnival mai ek dance competition bhi ho rha hai

Harsh:- haa suna maine bhi uske baare mai toh

Janvi:- toh kya harsh hum dono nhi isme part lenge or dekhna hum hi jeetege

Harsh:- dekhege par abhi mera ye dance ya kisi or cheez ka mood nhi hai

itne mai wo canteen phoch jaate hai or harsh dekhta hai ki manya ke sath koi ladka tha

ye dekhkar harsh ko pata nhi bilkul acha nhi lagta or wo unke paas jakar bolta hai ki
Harsh:- manya kya baat hai kya ye tumhe pareshan kar rha hai

ladka:- aare nhi Tum galat samjh rhe ho mai or manya toh dance competition mai ek sath part lene ke baare mai baat kar rhe the

ye sun kar harsh ka dimag kharab ho jaata hai or wo uss ladke ka collar pakar kar bolta hai

Harsh:- kya be tu manya ka dance partner banega ( harsh ko khud nhi pata tha ki wo ye sab kyu kar rha hai )

Manya harsh ko yu gusse mai dekh ek dum se ghabra jaati hai kyuki wo aise gussa bhot kam hi karta tha

manya:- harsh shant ho jao Rahul (uss ladke ka naam ) sirf mujh se puch rha tha ki kya mai uski dance partner banu

Harsh ko pata nhi or gussa aa jata hai or wo Manya ka hath pakar kar usse apne sath collage ke ground mai le jaata hai

harsh:- mayu kya hai ye sab
Manya:- harsh kya hua calm down wo sirf mujhse puch rha tha

harsh:- acha kya tum usse pasand karti ho (harsh ko khud nhi pata tha ki wo usse aisa kyu puch rha hai)

manya:- aare nhi harsh tumhe aise kyu laga

harsh:- bas aise hi pakka na
Manya:- aare haa baba

harsh:- thik hai toh tum usse ab baat nhi karna
Manya;- par kyuu

harsh:- bas aise hi mujhe pasand nhi wo
Manya:- thik hai nhi karugi

harsh:- chalo ab class mai chalte hai or haa iss baar ke dance competition mai tum meri partner banogi

ye bolkar harsh waha se chala jaata or manya shock mai rhe jaate hai usse bikul umeed nhi thi ki harsh usse apna dance partner banne ke liye bolega

fir manya bhi class mai jaati hai or Avni ke sath baith jaati hai

avni:- kya hua manya
Manya:- pata nhi yaar harsh ko achanak kya hua bol rha hai ki rahul se baat mat karna or wo mujhe apna dance partner banne ke liye bol rha hai

Avni:- ohh acha matalab mera Shaq sahi nikla
Manya:- kaisa shaq
Avni:- yehi ki harsh bhi tujhse pyaar karta hai but abhi usko ye baat realise nhi hai

manya:- aare ye tu kya bol rhi meri kuch samjh nhi aa rha
Avni:- aare dekh terko Rahul se baat karta dekh usko jealousy hui or wo terko uske sath dance karte nhi dekh sakta isliye usne tujhe apna partner banne ko bola

manya(khush hote hue) :- aare haa shayad tu sahi bol rhi hai ohh god :DD:

Avni:- ab abhi tu uska ye pyaar bhar lane ki khosish kar

or yehi harsh ko ye samjh nhi aa rha tha ki usne aise react kyu kara or mujhe usko uss ladke ke sath dekhar itna gussa kyu aaya

tabhi harsh ka dost yash usse pareshan dekhar uske pass aata hai harsh usse sab bata deta hai

ye sab sunkar yash muskurate hue usse bolta hai
yash:- bhai bura na mane toh ek baat bolu

harsh:- aare yash aise kyu bol rha hai bol jo bolna hai
yash:- bhai mujhe lagta hai tujhe pyaar ho gya hai manya se

harsh:- yash pagal ho gya hai kya kya bole jaa rha hai behan hai wo meri

Yash:- toh isme bura hi kya hai or ab toh ye comon hai or mujhe lagta hai wo bhi tujhse pyaar karti hai

harsh:- lekin...

yash:- dekh yaar tera usko kisi or ke sath dekar jealous hona uski care karna sab bata rha hai
harsh:- chor yaar ye sab

YAsh:- sach se kitna bhi bhaag le par wo badlta nhi

yash ki baate sunkar harsh soch mai doob jaata hai


TO BE CONTINUED....
शानदार जबरदस्त भाई
 

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UPDATE-3

harsh (man me) :- kya yash jo khe rha tha wo sahi kya mai sach mai manya se pyaar karne laga hu. Nhi nhi!!! Harsh tu ye kya soch rha hai behan hai wo teri or kya tu apne mama mami ka vishwas todega nhi aise nhi hoga

collage khatam hone ke baad harsh bahar aata hai or usse Manya bike ke pass khadi uska intezar karti dikhti hai
aaj Manya usse kuch alag lag rhi thi
uska muskurahat, uski bholi sa muh , hase toh lage jaise bijli gir rhi ho harsh ne aaj hi diyan diya tha ki manya kitni khubsurat hai



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Harsh manya ki khubsurati mai itna kho gya tha ki usko dhyan hi nhi rha ki wo usse kabse ghur rha hai

or yaha manya jab harsh ko apni ghurte hue dekhti hai toh uske man mai khushi ki lehar dor jaati hai kyuki wo toh chati thi ki harsh uski or dhyan de

fir wo uske pass jakar chutki baja kar bolti hai kya hua harsh aaj ghar nhi chalna kya

harsh ek dum se apni soch se bahar aate hue bolta :-hai haa kyu nhi chalo or waise aaj bhot achi lag rhi ho
Fir harsh man mai:- aare ye maine kya bol diya pata ni kya soch rhi hogi ab mere baare mai

yehi manya bhot khush ho jaati hai harsh ke muh se apni tareef sunkar or thanks bolti hai

collage se nikal kar pure raste harsh Manya ko side mirror se dekhe hi jaa rha tha
or Manya ne bhi ye notice kiya or man hi man khush hote hue boli:- lagta hai ab harsh ko mera hone mai jayada waqt nhi lagega

dono apni apni soch mai manya ghar phochte hai par harsh ka toh aaj Manya ko chor ke jaane ka man hi nhi tha wo soch hi rha tha ki kya kare ki itne mai

RIdhi bhi aa jati or harsh ko waha dekhar khush hote hue bolti hai
Ridhi:- hyy bhaiya
harsh:- hello my princess kaise ho aap

Ridhi:- mai toh achi hu par shayad aap mujhse pyaar nhi karte
harsh:- kyu maine kya kara
Ridhi (roni si surat mai bola) :- kyuki aap mujhse milne nhi aate na baat karte bas pura din manya di ke sath rhete ho

harsh or manya ko uski bholi baate sunkar thodi si hasi aa gyi or harsh bola
harsh:- ohh toh mera bachu mujhse naraj ho gya toh thik hai aaj mai apna pura din apne babu ke sath hi rhauga
harsh ko toh phele hi yaha rukne ka koi bahana chaiye tha jo usse mil gya tha


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harsh man hi man khush hote hue manya or ridhi ke sath andar gya uski dono mami bhi usko dekh kar khush hui kyuki wo usko apne bete ki tarah hi manti thi

Rita:- aare bacho aa gye chalo jaldi hath dholo fir khana kha lo

ridhi toh mano harsh ka picha hi nhi chor rhi jisse manya ko usse thodi thodi jealousy bhi hi rhi thi par harsh ka dhyan baar baar manya ki or jaa rha tha or shayad usko bhi samjh aa rha tha ki manya ridhi se thoda jealous ho rhi hai isliye usne usko thoda or jealous karne ke liye

Harsh:- chalo aaj mai apni princess ko apne hatho se khana khilaunga
or harsh ek niwala ridhi ki or bade pyaar se khilata hai
ridhi bhi khush hote hue khati hai
harsh jaan kar manya ki or nhi dekhta jisse manya bhot udaas ho jati hai

or chup chap khane lagti hai par jab harsh Manya ki or uska udaas chera dekhta hai toh uska dil mai dard sa hota hai usko lagta hai shayad usne thoda jayda kar diya

harsh:- chalo mayu ab tumhari baari or ek niwala manya ki or bhi karta hai

manya bhot khush jo jati hai or harsh ke haath se wo niwala kha leti or khud usse aone haatho se khilane lagti hai

Rita bhi ye sab dekh rhi toh or usko harsh ki samjhdari par proud feel ho rha tha or uska uski behno ko lekar pyaar dekhar bhi wo khush thi

khane ke baad sab thodi der baate karte hai or fir harsh Manya ko apne sath dance practice karne ke liye chalne ko bolta hai

Manya ye sun kar kaveri ki or dekhti hai jaise usse permission mang rhi ho or kaveri bhi haste hue boli jao beta or all the best
kaveri aise isliye bolti hai kyuki usse harsh par pura trust tha par usse kya pata tha ki ye bhai behan ek dusre ke pyaar mai gir chuke hai

Fir Manya apne room mai jakar ek chota se bag lekar wapas aati hai or harsh ko chalne ke liye bolti hai

ab firse wo harsh ke sath chipkar baith jaati hai iss baar harsh bhi kuch nhi bolta or manya ke hatho ke sparsh ko mehsoos karne lagta hai
 

parkas

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UPDATE-3

harsh (man me) :- kya yash jo khe rha tha wo sahi kya mai sach mai manya se pyaar karne laga hu. Nhi nhi!!! Harsh tu ye kya soch rha hai behan hai wo teri or kya tu apne mama mami ka vishwas todega nhi aise nhi hoga

collage khatam hone ke baad harsh bahar aata hai or usse Manya bike ke pass khadi uska intezar karti dikhti hai
aaj Manya usse kuch alag lag rhi thi
uska muskurahat, uski bholi sa muh , hase toh lage jaise bijli gir rhi ho harsh ne aaj hi diyan diya tha ki manya kitni khubsurat hai



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Harsh manya ki khubsurati mai itna kho gya tha ki usko dhyan hi nhi rha ki wo usse kabse ghur rha hai

or yaha manya jab harsh ko apni ghurte hue dekhti hai toh uske man mai khushi ki lehar dor jaati hai kyuki wo toh chati thi ki harsh uski or dhyan de

fir wo uske pass jakar chutki baja kar bolti hai kya hua harsh aaj ghar nhi chalna kya

harsh ek dum se apni soch se bahar aate hue bolta :-hai haa kyu nhi chalo or waise aaj bhot achi lag rhi ho
Fir harsh man mai:- aare ye maine kya bol diya pata ni kya soch rhi hogi ab mere baare mai

yehi manya bhot khush ho jaati hai harsh ke muh se apni tareef sunkar or thanks bolti hai

collage se nikal kar pure raste harsh Manya ko side mirror se dekhe hi jaa rha tha
or Manya ne bhi ye notice kiya or man hi man khush hote hue boli:- lagta hai ab harsh ko mera hone mai jayada waqt nhi lagega

dono apni apni soch mai manya ghar phochte hai par harsh ka toh aaj Manya ko chor ke jaane ka man hi nhi tha wo soch hi rha tha ki kya kare ki itne mai

RIdhi bhi aa jati or harsh ko waha dekhar khush hote hue bolti hai
Ridhi:- hyy bhaiya
harsh:- hello my princess kaise ho aap

Ridhi:- mai toh achi hu par shayad aap mujhse pyaar nhi karte
harsh:- kyu maine kya kara
Ridhi (roni si surat mai bola) :- kyuki aap mujhse milne nhi aate na baat karte bas pura din manya di ke sath rhete ho

harsh or manya ko uski bholi baate sunkar thodi si hasi aa gyi or harsh bola
harsh:- ohh toh mera bachu mujhse naraj ho gya toh thik hai aaj mai apna pura din apne babu ke sath hi rhauga
harsh ko toh phele hi yaha rukne ka koi bahana chaiye tha jo usse mil gya tha


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Nice and superb update...
 

parkas

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harsh man hi man khush hote hue manya or ridhi ke sath andar gya uski dono mami bhi usko dekh kar khush hui kyuki wo usko apne bete ki tarah hi manti thi

Rita:- aare bacho aa gye chalo jaldi hath dholo fir khana kha lo

ridhi toh mano harsh ka picha hi nhi chor rhi jisse manya ko usse thodi thodi jealousy bhi hi rhi thi par harsh ka dhyan baar baar manya ki or jaa rha tha or shayad usko bhi samjh aa rha tha ki manya ridhi se thoda jealous ho rhi hai isliye usne usko thoda or jealous karne ke liye

Harsh:- chalo aaj mai apni princess ko apne hatho se khana khilaunga
or harsh ek niwala ridhi ki or bade pyaar se khilata hai
ridhi bhi khush hote hue khati hai
harsh jaan kar manya ki or nhi dekhta jisse manya bhot udaas ho jati hai

or chup chap khane lagti hai par jab harsh Manya ki or uska udaas chera dekhta hai toh uska dil mai dard sa hota hai usko lagta hai shayad usne thoda jayda kar diya

harsh:- chalo mayu ab tumhari baari or ek niwala manya ki or bhi karta hai

manya bhot khush jo jati hai or harsh ke haath se wo niwala kha leti or khud usse aone haatho se khilane lagti hai

Rita bhi ye sab dekh rhi toh or usko harsh ki samjhdari par proud feel ho rha tha or uska uski behno ko lekar pyaar dekhar bhi wo khush thi

khane ke baad sab thodi der baate karte hai or fir harsh Manya ko apne sath dance practice karne ke liye chalne ko bolta hai

Manya ye sun kar kaveri ki or dekhti hai jaise usse permission mang rhi ho or kaveri bhi haste hue boli jao beta or all the best
kaveri aise isliye bolti hai kyuki usse harsh par pura trust tha par usse kya pata tha ki ye bhai behan ek dusre ke pyaar mai gir chuke hai

Fir Manya apne room mai jakar ek chota se bag lekar wapas aati hai or harsh ko chalne ke liye bolti hai

ab firse wo harsh ke sath chipkar baith jaati hai iss baar harsh bhi kuch nhi bolta or manya ke hatho ke sparsh ko mehsoos karne lagta hai
Nice and excellent update..
 

aalu

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family introduction
Harsh Gupta ( hero ):- age 23, bhot handsome hai, CA banne ki tayari kar rha hai ,dil ka bhot acha hai par kisi se ek baar nafrat ho jaye toh uski taraf dubara nhi dekhta

Manya (heroine):- age 21 harsh ke mama ki beti hai ye bhi bhot beautiful hai but bhot shareef hai ye harsh ko bachpan se pasand karti hai isliye aaj tak kisi or ladke ko line nhi di

Lovish:- age 18 Harsh ke mama ka beta


kaveri :- age 45 harsh ki badi mami Manya ki mummy thodi purani soch ki hai or apni family se bhot pyaar karti hai

Ashish:- age 46 harsh ke bade mama sidhe sadhe se hai dono mama ne wholesale store chalte hai

Rita:- age 40 harsh ki choti mami
Manish :- age 41 Rita ka husband
Umang :- unka beta age 20

Ridhi :- umang ki behan (age 18) bholi bhali si cute si hai

Stay tune guys kal first update dunga aap logo ko
lovely family lekin tharkee hero heroine...
 

aalu

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harsh man hi man khush hote hue manya or ridhi ke sath andar gya uski dono mami bhi usko dekh kar khush hui kyuki wo usko apne bete ki tarah hi manti thi

Rita:- aare bacho aa gye chalo jaldi hath dholo fir khana kha lo

ridhi toh mano harsh ka picha hi nhi chor rhi jisse manya ko usse thodi thodi jealousy bhi hi rhi thi par harsh ka dhyan baar baar manya ki or jaa rha tha or shayad usko bhi samjh aa rha tha ki manya ridhi se thoda jealous ho rhi hai isliye usne usko thoda or jealous karne ke liye

Harsh:- chalo aaj mai apni princess ko apne hatho se khana khilaunga
or harsh ek niwala ridhi ki or bade pyaar se khilata hai
ridhi bhi khush hote hue khati hai
harsh jaan kar manya ki or nhi dekhta jisse manya bhot udaas ho jati hai

or chup chap khane lagti hai par jab harsh Manya ki or uska udaas chera dekhta hai toh uska dil mai dard sa hota hai usko lagta hai shayad usne thoda jayda kar diya

harsh:- chalo mayu ab tumhari baari or ek niwala manya ki or bhi karta hai

manya bhot khush jo jati hai or harsh ke haath se wo niwala kha leti or khud usse aone haatho se khilane lagti hai

Rita bhi ye sab dekh rhi toh or usko harsh ki samjhdari par proud feel ho rha tha or uska uski behno ko lekar pyaar dekhar bhi wo khush thi

khane ke baad sab thodi der baate karte hai or fir harsh Manya ko apne sath dance practice karne ke liye chalne ko bolta hai

Manya ye sun kar kaveri ki or dekhti hai jaise usse permission mang rhi ho or kaveri bhi haste hue boli jao beta or all the best
kaveri aise isliye bolti hai kyuki usse harsh par pura trust tha par usse kya pata tha ki ye bhai behan ek dusre ke pyaar mai gir chuke hai

Fir Manya apne room mai jakar ek chota se bag lekar wapas aati hai or harsh ko chalne ke liye bolti hai

ab firse wo harsh ke sath chipkar baith jaati hai iss baar harsh bhi kuch nhi bolta or manya ke hatho ke sparsh ko mehsoos karne lagta hai
in dono ke lagne waale hain ghar mein hi dangal shuru karna chah rahe hain... bas tharak rahti toh theek tha kamre ke andar band kar ke raat ke andhere mein ya hotel ke kamre mein pura ho jata... sala yeh pyar hi toh pura jhamele kee jar hain... baad mein jab yeh mami jee ko pata chalega toh isko toh paregi laat aur bechari manya kee ho jayenge peele haath...

khair abhi pyar ke do panchi do pal chain ke jee lene do thumke lagate hue....
 

Aayush_8228

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in dono ke lagne waale hain ghar mein hi dangal shuru karna chah rahe hain... bas tharak rahti toh theek tha kamre ke andar band kar ke raat ke andhere mein ya hotel ke kamre mein pura ho jata... sala yeh pyar hi toh pura jhamele kee jar hain... baad mein jab yeh mami jee ko pata chalega toh isko toh paregi laat aur bechari manya kee ho jayenge peele haath...

khair abhi pyar ke do panchi do pal chain ke jee lene do thumke lagate hue....
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