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andyking302

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Hy friends ye meri first story hogi
Ye story ek bhai bhen ke beech sache pyaar ki hogi ki kaise wo iss duniya mushkilo ko face karke last mai ek jo jate hai
Iss story ko mai pura khatam karuga or regular 1 update daily aayega
Bas aap sabke support ki jarurat hai
Aaj mai story ke main characters ka introduction post karuga
Congratulations for new start
 

andyking302

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family introduction
Harsh Gupta ( hero ):- age 23, bhot handsome hai, CA banne ki tayari kar rha hai ,dil ka bhot acha hai par kisi se ek baar nafrat ho jaye toh uski taraf dubara nhi dekhta

Manya (heroine):- age 21 harsh ke mama ki beti hai ye bhi bhot beautiful hai but bhot shareef hai ye harsh ko bachpan se pasand karti hai isliye aaj tak kisi or ladke ko line nhi di

Lovish:- age 18 Harsh ke mama ka beta


kaveri :- age 45 harsh ki badi mami Manya ki mummy thodi purani soch ki hai or apni family se bhot pyaar karti hai

Ashish:- age 46 harsh ke bade mama sidhe sadhe se hai dono mama ne wholesale store chalte hai

Rita:- age 40 harsh ki choti mami
Manish :- age 41 Rita ka husband
Umang :- unka beta age 20

Ridhi :- umang ki behan (age 18) bholi bhali si cute si hai

Stay tune guys kal first update dunga aap logo ko
Nice intro bhai
 

andyking302

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family introduction
Harsh Gupta ( hero ):- age 23, bhot handsome hai, CA banne ki tayari kar rha hai ,dil ka bhot acha hai par kisi se ek baar nafrat ho jaye toh uski taraf dubara nhi dekhta

Manya (heroine):- age 21 harsh ke mama ki beti hai ye bhi bhot beautiful hai but bhot shareef hai ye harsh ko bachpan se pasand karti hai isliye aaj tak kisi or ladke ko line nhi di

Lovish:- age 18 Harsh ke mama ka beta


kaveri :- age 45 harsh ki badi mami Manya ki mummy thodi purani soch ki hai or apni family se bhot pyaar karti hai

Ashish:- age 46 harsh ke bade mama sidhe sadhe se hai dono mama ne wholesale store chalte hai

Rita:- age 40 harsh ki choti mami
Manish :- age 41 Rita ka husband
Umang :- unka beta age 20

Ridhi :- umang ki behan (age 18) bholi bhali si cute si hai

Stay tune guys kal first update dunga aap logo ko
All the best bro
 

andyking302

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UPDATE- 1
Ek nayi subha ki asha bhari kirane Manya ke kamre mai padti hai subha ho chuki thi par manya aaj abhi tak nhi uthi thi kyuki wo harsh ke sath apne haseen sapne mai khoyi hui thi jaha
Manya:- harsh I LOVE YOU mai bachpan se tumse bhot pyaar karti hu

harsh:- haa manya mai ye janta hu or mai bhi tumhe bachpan se bhot chata hu
ab hum kabhi juda nhi honge

itna bolte hi harsh usse apni baho ki kheech kar ek lip kiss karne hi wala tha ki uske muh par koi pani phekta hai or wo ek dum se chilla kar uth jaati hai or wo shaks joro se hasne lagta hai

ye or koi ni lovish tha jo Manya ko uthne aaya tha

Lovish:- oyee kitni der tak soti rhegi aaj collage nhi jana collage ke holidays khatam

manga:- Abbey ohh ye konsa tareeka hai kisi ko uthane ka mai kitna acha sapna dekh rhi thi or tune

lovish:- ohh acha sapna jara hume bhi toh pata chale aaj meri pagal behana kiske sapne dekh rhi hai bata

Lovish ki ye baat sunkar manya Sharma jaati hai or bolti hai aisa kuch nhi hai

Lovish:- acha aisa kuch nhi hai toh tu itna Sharma kyu rhi hai

Manya usse thoda irritate ho jaati hai or usko bolti:- tu na jayada mat bol samjha or nikal yaha se

lovish itna sunkar haste hue uske kamre se chala jaata hai

or fir manya apne man mai bolti hai :- kitna acha sapna dekh rhi thi mai bas iss bandar ne aakar kharab kar diya kya woh sapna sach hoga kya kabhi harsh meri feelings ko samjh payega ohhh god harsh ye kya jaadu kar diya hai tumne
ab toh sapne bhi tumhare hi aane lage hai mujhko ye sochte hue woh uthti hai or bathroom mai jaakar fresh hokar niche aati hai

jaha uski puri family breakfast ke liye baithi thi
kaveri:- kya baat hai beta aaj bhot der laga di uthne mai

Manya isse phele kuch bolti lovish beech mai bol padta hai

lovish:- haa mummy aaj kal ye kiske sapno mai khoyi rheti hai or hasne lagta hai

manya usko ghur kar kha jaane wali nazro se dekhti hai

kaveri:- chup Badmash apni behan se koi aise bolta hai mai bachi toh bhot sidhi sadhi hai tu chup chaap nasta kar warna chappal khayega

manya bhi breakfast karne baith jaati hai ki itne mai harsh bhi apni bike lekar unke ghar poochta hai kyuki wo or manya ek hi collage mai the or isliye apni Mami ke kahne par wo usse apne sath le jaata tha

(Note:- harsh apne collage ke hostel mai rheta hai uske mummy papa Gujarat mai rhete hai or woh yaha padai ki wajah se aaya hua hai or apne mama mami par koi bhoj nhi bana chata haa lekin apne yaha sbse milne aata rheta hai)

Usko aata dekh manya ke chehre par ek badi si muskan aa jati hai
harsh andar aakar sabko good morning wish karti hai

kaveri :- aare harsh aaja beta nasta karle jaldi abhi garam garam bana hai

Harsh:- nhi mami abhi nhi mai karke aaya hu or waise bhi holidays ke baad aaj phele din hai or mai aaj late nhi hona chata

fir wo Manya ki or muskurate hue dekhte hue bolta hai :- chale meri sweety behna

Manya:- ( jadli se ) haa mera ho gya or jaldi se sabko bye bolkar harsh ke sath chali jaati hai

( Note:- abhi harsh ke man mai Manya ko lekar koi Alag feeling nhi haa woh usse bhot pyaar karta hai kyuki uski koi sagi behan bhi nhi thi isliye manya uski jaan thi )

Abhi ke liye itna hi agla update aaj shaam tak daalne ki koshish karuga or aap apne reviews jarur de or bataye ki aapko ye kahani kaisi lag rhi hai
stay tuned
शानदार shurwat
 

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Ghar se nikalne ke baad manya harsh se joro se chipak gyi mano jaise wo usse kabhi chodegi hi nhi

harsh:- aare mayu (manya) kya kar rhi hai mujhse saas bhi nhi li jaa rhi chor mujhe takleef ho rhi hai

Par manya apne aap mai khoyi hui hi bolti hai :- kya hua meri jaan mere hote hue kaise takleef

harsh ye sunkar heran rhe jaata hai or bolta hai:- kya kha tumne abhi

Manya ko jab ehsaas hua ki usne kya bol diya hai toh jaldi se baat badlte hue boli
:- aare kuch nhi bas ye khe rhi thi ki aapko mere hote hue kya takleef ho sakti hai

harsh ko kuch ajeeb sa lagta hai par wo ignore kar deta hai

Collage aa chuka tha harsh bike park karta hai ki piche se ladki aakar usko bolti hai

Ladki:- or janab kaise ho kabhi hume bhi yaad kar liya karo or manya ko bhi hey bolti hai

Ye ladki Janvi thi harsh ke sath hi padti thi thodi ziddi par man ki saaf

Manya ka chera usko dekh kar utar gya kyuki wo humesha harsh se chipkane ki khosish karti thi

Harsh:- hey! Janvi kaisi ho or kya chal rha hai

Janvi:- mai toh achi hu tum apna sunao dikhte hi nhi aaj kal


Harsh:- aare nhi aise bhi kuch nhi hai
Janvi:- acha harsh chalo chalte hai mujhe waise bhi bhot se baate karni hai tumse

Harsh :- haa kheta hai or fir manya ki taraf dekh kar kheta hai ki
:- mayu tum apni class mai chalo or break ke time canteen mai milna okk

Manya bechari kya bolti fir

fir sab apni class mai chale gye or manya apni best friend Avni se mili

Avni:- aare kya hua aaj humari madam ka muh utra hua kyu hai

manya:- kuch nhi yaar wo subha subha wo chudial harsh se chipkane lagi or fir apne sath le gayi

Avni:- ohh toh ye baat hai dekh ab mujhe lagta hai tujhe der nhi karni chaiye or harsh ko apni feelings ke baare mai bata dena chahiye
(Avni manya ki harsh ko lekar saari feeling ke baare mai janti thi ki wo kitni deep love karti hai harsh se)

manya:- haa shayad tu sahi ho bol rhi hai par kya harsh meri feelings ko samjhega kahi wo mujhse gussa toh nhi ho jayega

avni:- yaar dekh ye uspar depend karta hai lekin mujhe lagta hai ki samjh jaayega or shayad kahi na kahi wo bhi tujhse se bhot pyaar karta hai

Manya:- hope aise hi ho

avni:- hmm chalo abhi class mai chalo
Nice bro
 

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Break ke time harsh janvi ke sath bas canteen ki taraf jaa hi rha hota hai

Janvi:- harsh tumhe pata hai na ki humare collage mai iss saal ke carnival mai ek dance competition bhi ho rha hai

Harsh:- haa suna maine bhi uske baare mai toh

Janvi:- toh kya harsh hum dono nhi isme part lenge or dekhna hum hi jeetege

Harsh:- dekhege par abhi mera ye dance ya kisi or cheez ka mood nhi hai

itne mai wo canteen phoch jaate hai or harsh dekhta hai ki manya ke sath koi ladka tha

ye dekhkar harsh ko pata nhi bilkul acha nhi lagta or wo unke paas jakar bolta hai ki
Harsh:- manya kya baat hai kya ye tumhe pareshan kar rha hai

ladka:- aare nhi Tum galat samjh rhe ho mai or manya toh dance competition mai ek sath part lene ke baare mai baat kar rhe the

ye sun kar harsh ka dimag kharab ho jaata hai or wo uss ladke ka collar pakar kar bolta hai

Harsh:- kya be tu manya ka dance partner banega ( harsh ko khud nhi pata tha ki wo ye sab kyu kar rha hai )

Manya harsh ko yu gusse mai dekh ek dum se ghabra jaati hai kyuki wo aise gussa bhot kam hi karta tha

manya:- harsh shant ho jao Rahul (uss ladke ka naam ) sirf mujh se puch rha tha ki kya mai uski dance partner banu

Harsh ko pata nhi or gussa aa jata hai or wo Manya ka hath pakar kar usse apne sath collage ke ground mai le jaata hai

harsh:- mayu kya hai ye sab
Manya:- harsh kya hua calm down wo sirf mujhse puch rha tha

harsh:- acha kya tum usse pasand karti ho (harsh ko khud nhi pata tha ki wo usse aisa kyu puch rha hai)

manya:- aare nhi harsh tumhe aise kyu laga

harsh:- bas aise hi pakka na
Manya:- aare haa baba

harsh:- thik hai toh tum usse ab baat nhi karna
Manya;- par kyuu

harsh:- bas aise hi mujhe pasand nhi wo
Manya:- thik hai nhi karugi

harsh:- chalo ab class mai chalte hai or haa iss baar ke dance competition mai tum meri partner banogi

ye bolkar harsh waha se chala jaata or manya shock mai rhe jaate hai usse bikul umeed nhi thi ki harsh usse apna dance partner banne ke liye bolega

fir manya bhi class mai jaati hai or Avni ke sath baith jaati hai

avni:- kya hua manya
Manya:- pata nhi yaar harsh ko achanak kya hua bol rha hai ki rahul se baat mat karna or wo mujhe apna dance partner banne ke liye bol rha hai

Avni:- ohh acha matalab mera Shaq sahi nikla
Manya:- kaisa shaq
Avni:- yehi ki harsh bhi tujhse pyaar karta hai but abhi usko ye baat realise nhi hai

manya:- aare ye tu kya bol rhi meri kuch samjh nhi aa rha
Avni:- aare dekh terko Rahul se baat karta dekh usko jealousy hui or wo terko uske sath dance karte nhi dekh sakta isliye usne tujhe apna partner banne ko bola

manya(khush hote hue) :- aare haa shayad tu sahi bol rhi hai ohh god :DD:

Avni:- ab abhi tu uska ye pyaar bhar lane ki khosish kar

or yehi harsh ko ye samjh nhi aa rha tha ki usne aise react kyu kara or mujhe usko uss ladke ke sath dekhar itna gussa kyu aaya

tabhi harsh ka dost yash usse pareshan dekhar uske pass aata hai harsh usse sab bata deta hai

ye sab sunkar yash muskurate hue usse bolta hai
yash:- bhai bura na mane toh ek baat bolu

harsh:- aare yash aise kyu bol rha hai bol jo bolna hai
yash:- bhai mujhe lagta hai tujhe pyaar ho gya hai manya se

harsh:- yash pagal ho gya hai kya kya bole jaa rha hai behan hai wo meri

Yash:- toh isme bura hi kya hai or ab toh ye comon hai or mujhe lagta hai wo bhi tujhse pyaar karti hai

harsh:- lekin...

yash:- dekh yaar tera usko kisi or ke sath dekar jealous hona uski care karna sab bata rha hai
harsh:- chor yaar ye sab

YAsh:- sach se kitna bhi bhaag le par wo badlta nhi

yash ki baate sunkar harsh soch mai doob jaata hai


TO BE CONTINUED....
 
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