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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,430 82.7%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.6%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 236 13.6%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 37 2.1%

  • Total voters
    1,730

Werewolf

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Likhna start kiye ho ya nahi ......🙊
 
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Likhna start kiye ho ya nahi ......🙊
Kal hi toh kiya hai. Ab samay toh lagega. Target pehle hi readers achieve kar dete toh aur jaldi start ho jaata likhna.
 

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Top class update diya hai bhai maza aa gaya baqi aaj ka pura episode ruthne manane aur rishton ke naye naye roop dikhane me guzar gaya jisko hum saZa kahtey hai woh kabhi kabhi kuch aur hi hota hai jaisay Bhavna ne kia thaa aur veer n pari again jugalbandi start magar jab level badne per system reboot hoga tab kaun si Pari aati hai yah dekhnay layaq hoga.
Aap likhyeu raho aisay hi mazedar update detay raho.
Family se related updates aise aate rahenge kyuki neev yahi rakhte hai aur characters ke saath emotional touch bhi yahi manaate hai. Lekin, parallel me main kahani bhi chalti jaa rahi hai. Aur, iska proof hume update ke end me dekhne ko mil hi Gaya. Thanks a lot btw. Keep supporting. ✨
मेरी नजर में वीर को भावना ने बचा लिया. उसकी सुनाई सजा की वजह से सबका दिमाग डायवर्ट हो गया, और सब उसे सजा देने की जगह सजा से बचाने में लग गए.

वरना उसकी बैंड बजने वाली थी।

Nice update. Waiting for next.
Ye baat bhi sahi hai. Haha! Agar, Bhavna natak na karti toh definitely Tej aur Arohi sakhti se hi pesh aane waali thi. Thanks btw.
excellent narrative ... though in the end of the episode little intimacy was felt ....
looking foresrd for an early update
Intimacy will be shown in the later updates. Right now, an emotional welcome was needed. I didn't want to ruin this emotional aspect by showing intimacy so left that part for now... But you'll definitely see some spice in the upcoming updates.
Dobara padhne pe clear ho gaya ki Dexter Veer ka naam sunte hi chonka, yaani yeh wahi Dexter hai jisko Slogan ne hire kiya tha. Ab itni resourceful to keval Rebecca hi hai jisne na hi Dexter ko dhund nikala balki uski Veer se dushmani ke baare me bhi pata kar liya. Isase to lagta hai ki yeh ladka bhi wahi system hoder hai jo China me Le Renshu se lad raha tha aur isko Rebecca ne hi bheja hoga... Just guessing...
Yup! :approve: Remember! Only Matthew was killed by the Veer in the forest. Dexter who appeared at the mirror galler was only wounded by Veer. He's still alive.
fabulous update
india return veer ke liye aise hi damakedaar hona tha
bahwan ka gussa jayaz bhi tha aur baakiyon ki narazgi bhi
par last me maa ki mamta bhi jeet gayi
sahi bete ko dard dekar kaun si maa ko neend ayegi
pari aur veer ka bhi patach up ho gaya hai ab
abhi bhi ghar wale thoda aur veer se naraz reh sakte hai taaki veer personally sabk manaye gift dekar
aur baaki logo ko bhi pata hai ya nahi ki veer bahar tha india se jaise nidhi keara soniya
agar pata hai to fir veer unko kaise karega handle khaskar nidhi ke side dekhna hai


keep writing
Bilkul! Naraz rahe ya na rahe lekin mann me doubts ne ab janm le liya hai. Woh sabhi jaante hai ab ki Veer kuch na kuch unse chhipa raha hai. Aur, Veer ke liye ye accha sanket nahi hai. Thanks btw. Keep supporting! ✨
 

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Interesting update. Everyone planned and teamed up to make Veer confess reasons for his sudden absence, but Shweta found this as an opportunity to score some brawny points with Veer. Alas, maa to maa hoti hai... First Tej could not resist Veer's punishment and and went to him, then the soft side of Bhavana was beautifully shown, her hesitancy to slap Veer was very emotional
Shweta was shweta... Tej was being Tej, Arohi being Arohi... But I'm pretty sure no one would have seen this coming from Bhavna's side. She lured you into the thought that she was instigating the punishment for Veer but eventually it turned out to be all fluke. Bhavna being bhavna again...! She holds her unpredictable side. No wonder why Veer surprises us time to time too. He inherited it from Bhavna.
So we straight away jump to the serious stuff, the two pending issues - serial killer and blast at Casa Belle. Let's see how Veer gets involved in them. I think it was Rebecca who told Garofano about Veer and also about blast at Casa Belle. Missile came from Spain, is she initiating war and chaos...
Who knows what's happening on the other side. For now, we can only focus on what's happening inside Mumbai. Terrible news shocks everyone straight after Veer returns to his home. The murders, the lurking danger of unknown, and what chess pieces are being arranged, it will all come up together at the end only to make readers gasp in anxiety.
Is this Dexter the same assassin who was hired by Slogan earlier... I don't think so, who could be the common enemy... Is Dexter also a system holder and Rebecca/ Evil Person or Mr X is the common enemy... 17 system holders are left, five (Veer, Le Renshu, Erica, Ava, Garofano) have already made a loose association, three (Rebecca, Evil Person, Young Boy) are on the other side. Besides them, Pagal Doctor and Mr X are also there. So 7 or maybe 8 more are there, as Mr X could be the Evil Person. We will come to know later as the story unfolds further...
Yes. Dexter is one of the assassins hired by Slogan. Matthew was the other one. Veer killed Matthew. But, Dexter was only wounded. He survived. Veer never killed him. There are only 16 system holders left. Not 17. Jaw Long died so only 16 remains now. It's upto you to make assumptions who are the existing ones. For me... I can tell you that Veer, Garofano, Ava, Renshu, Erica, Rebecca, Masked man, Psycho prison escapee, are all system holders. I mean it's quite obvious! I'll leave rest of the imagination to the readers.
Or... or... or... this Dexter is the same person and the common enemy is Veer. This is more logical... Then who is this boy... Ajay, Pranjal, less probable... or the system holder Young Boy.

Again, a great update.
Veer was already an enemy for Dexter. Dexter was assigned to kill Veer. Veer wounded him. Why is he working as a cashier after being an assassin? That too, in Mumbai? Go figure! :D

Thanks a lot. And, keep supporting as usual. ✨
 
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चाईना के हंगामेदार और सनसनी मिशन के बाद अचानक से इस अपडेट मे यू टर्न ला दिया आपने । यह पुरा अपडेट ही भावनाओं के कई रूप से ओतप्रोत था ।
Itna bhavuk scene dene ke baare me Maine khud ne nahi sochta tha pehle actually. Mann me bas yahi tha ki kuch hatt ke dena hai. Khaali interrogation nahi likhna hai. Kuch aisa ho jiske chalte woh sawal jawab boriyat mehsoos na hone de. Aapko pasand aaya ye jaan ke accha laga bhaaya.
उदासी , भय , सहानुभूति , भ्रम , सहानुभूतिपूर्वक दर्द , ममत्व , प्रेम और यौन इच्छा जैसे भावनाओं से सुसज्जित
अपडेट था यह ।
Koshish thi meri bas...!
भावना जी का वीर को डांट-फटकार लगाना , सजा के तौर पर सोने के लिए टेरेस पर भेजना कहीं से भी गलत नही था । लेकिन परिवार के बाकी सभी मेम्बर की तरह मै भी इस बात से सहमत था कि वीर को कम से कम टेरेस पर सोने के लिए नही भेजा जाना चाहिए ।
भावना जी की तरह ही इस परिवार की सभी औरतें वीर से प्यार करती है । यह और बात है कि उनके प्यार का दृष्टिकोण भिन्न-भिन्न हैं । कोई बेटे की तरह प्यार करता है तो कोई भाई की तरह । कोई प्रेमी मानता है तो कोई पति । कोई स्वामिभक्त की भाव लिए हुए है तो कोई उसे अपना बेस्ट फ्रैंड मानता है ।
लेकिन वीर की सलामती की फिक्र सभी के दिल मे है ।
Gussa sabhi the. Narazgi sabhi ko thi Veer se. Kintu, jaise hi kathor saza Bhavna ne Veer ko dene ka nishchit kiya waise hi hume dekhne ko mila ki kaise sabhi Veer ko bachaane ki liye uski aadh me aa ke khade hone lage. Narazgi kitni hi kyu na ho... Prem hamesha zyada hi rahega. Ye baat darsha di last update ne.
फिर टेरेस पर रात को जो कुछ हुआ वह परिवार के सभी सदस्यों की तरह मुझे भी हैरत मे डाल गया ।
उस दौरान भावना जी और वीर के दरम्यान जो - जो बातें हुई वह पुरी तरह से एक मां और बेटे के बीच के आपसी विश्वास की और ममत्व से भरी हुई बातें थी । यह पुरा लम्हात अत्यंत ही भावुक भरा पल था । मै स्वयं भावुक हो गया था ।
Agar aisa hai... Toh mein safal ho gaya. :D
मां की ममता असीमित और अपरंपार होती है लेकिन अंधी भी नही होती । एक मां के लिए सबसे खुशी की बात होती है कि उसका संतान सदैव खुश , स्वस्थ्य और सानंद रहे ।
अगर वह अपने संतान से नाराज होकर उसे डांट-फटकार लगाती है , उसे दो चार तमाचे जड़ देती है तब भी इसमे उसका फिक्र , चिंता और प्यार ही छिपा रहता है ।
Bilkul! Bhavna jaisi maa ho toh fir toh baat hi alag hai. Use woh har cheez pata lag jaati hai jo uska beta uss se kehna chaahta hai, use chhipata hai.
यह सब मां का हक है और यह सब उससे कोई नही छिन सकता । यह सब भी मां के लाड-दुलार का एक हिस्सा होता है ।
Bhavna ke andar kahi na kahi woh ek Hich-kichahat maujood thi abhi bhi... Magar, iss prakran ke baad... Ab uske upar se saare bojh, saari jhijak samapt ho chuki hai. Beshaq, ab uska aur Veer ka rishta aur bhi mazboot ho gaya hai. Jo glani Bhavna ke andar thi Veer ke liye uske bachpan me na hone ki... Woh Veer ke prem ne jaise gayab kar di hai. Dukh zaroor hoga use ki woh Veer ke liye uske saath reh na saki. Magar, uski bharpayi karne ke liye uske paas ab samay hi samay hai. Aur, ye baat woh bhali bhaanti jaan gayi hai.
और वीर जैसा इंसान तो इसे कतई गलत नही समझता । यह ऐसा इंसान है कि एक मशीन को भी लगातार काम करते हुए देख नही सकता , इंसान तो दूर की बात है ।
जो इंसान एक सिस्टम ' परी ' की दुख नही बर्दाश्त कर सकता वह अपनी मां के एक थप्पड़ को कैसे अपने दिल पर ले लेता !
Bilkul! Veer woh insaan hai jo kisi ko kindness ko kabhi bhi nahi bhulta. Uske zehen me hamesha ye rahega ki Pari hi woh thi... Jisne use sab kuch banaya. Jisne use iss muqaam tak pahuchaya. Jisne uss par bharosa kiya aur use upar uthaaya. Toh bhala aise me Veer apni pyaari Pari se kaise nirash ho sakta tha? Aur, yahi baat Pari ke liye bhi laagu hoti hai. Veer hi uska ekmaatra saathi raha hai. Kaise naraz reh sakti hai woh? Dono ka Bandhan atoot hai, dono ek dusre ke bagerr nahi reh sakte. :heart:
इस पुरे प्रकरण को बहुत ही संजीदा पूर्वक दिखाया है आपने । इस प्रकरण मे आपने रीडर्स के इमोशंस को जगाया है । और बहुत ही खुबसूरती से जगाया है
Bahut bahut dhanyavad bhaaya. ✨
मै अपडेट के अंतिम पैराग्राफ के बारे मे कुछ नही लिखना चाहता क्योंकि इस मां- बेटे के प्रसंग के बाद कुछ और लिखने की इच्छा ही नही बची ।

अद्भुत और
वन आफ माई बेस्ट अपडेट वोल्फी भाई ।
जगमग जगमग अपडेट ।
Dhanyavad! Yuhi saath bane rahiyega bhaaya. Ye arc bahut hatt ke hoga. Ye arc aap sab ko batayega ki ye kahani kya cheez hai aur kis mod ki orr jaa rahi hai. Chinatown arc toh bas ek trailer tha. Ye arc aap sabko aise aapko on the edge par rakhega ki aap majboor ho jaoge bechain hone ke liye.
Thanks once again. And, keep supporting. ✨
 

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Super duper awesome update luvd it to gud Bhai.
Really emotional and beautiful update
Eagerly waiting for your next update plz do cont asap take care
 
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