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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,446 82.6%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.5%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 239 13.7%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 38 2.2%

  • Total voters
    1,750

Werewolf

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Werewolf

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Yehi to Parijaat ki aurton ka hakikat hain isse kaise bachega Vandana. Aur durrrr ki chachi hone se kiya ho jata hai? Idhar usne apni mousi ka sponge daba Dala aur kidhar ju woh durrrrr ki chachi ki baat kar rahe ho. Aur waise bhi veer wise hai usne koye bhi Parijaat ki aurton ko slave jaisa treat nahi kiya abhi tak. He respect them all.

Stroy padh rahe ho ya aankhe sekh ke nikal ja rahe ho bhai! Kucch sensible Baat To Karo.
Relationship wise dekhe, toh Vandna Veer ke zyada close hai compared to Purvi. Kyunki, Purvi Veer ki muh boli maasi hai. Unka koi blood relation ya koi relative waala relation nahi hai.

Remember. Purvi aur Bhavna bachpan ki saheliya hai. Just like Divya and Suhana. Purvi Veer aur Tej ki asli maasi nahi hai.

But Vandna...

Woh kahi na kahi Veer ki relative lagti hai. Direct relative nahi. But still... A relative indeed. But relative ke pehle hi woh ek parijaat ki ladki thi. Janm hote hi. Toh aaj bhi woh wahi hai. Ab toh parivar bhi jaa chuka hai. You can say that her purpose was served.

And, yes... Veer has never forced anyone. Toh, Vandna agar chaahe toh bina Veer ko physically serve kare bhi reh sakti hai. Sonali ne bhi starting me yahi kiya tha. Aur, Veer ko iss se koi dikkat nahi thi. :declare:
 
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Bahut unexpected our intresting update tha vandna bhi Parijaat ghar se judi hai ye bahut unexpected tha mere liye. Past se bahut jada bate clear hogai hai wolf bhai sai time pe ye clearity diye ho great job 👏 full moon me to veer apne dushmano ko chirfad ke rakh denga abto veer ka pari se behaviour bahut intresting hai overall update was fabulous 👌 fantastic 👏
Bahut bahut dhanyavad. Keep supporting. ✨
Not much action in the last update but the twist and the lore is great and the pictures of system status is also made to perfection. The update might come late or few but the writer puts every bit of effort into them
Action ka plot hi nahi hai abhi. Kis se action dikhaaye? Disembowler jaa chuka hai filhal. Toh, kaha se aayega action? Abhi lore hi expand ho raha hai. Puraani problems ke solutions khoje jaa rahe hai. Taaki next arc me jaane se pehle inn problems ko completely solve kar diya jaaye.
Ok theek hai chalo Maan liya ki veer un sabki respect karta hai but harbaar unke sath tu tadak par utar aata hai main bas ye chahta hu ki veer vandna ke sath ye naa kare

Or rahi baat sensual baat ki to zara soch samajh ke boliye sir meri baat kesi hai ye baat bolne ka haq wolfi ka hai

Or ha ye aakhirli line jo aapne boli ki story padh rahe ho and all main bas apna opinion rakh rha hu jispe wolfi reply dega hi dega so please stay out of it or ye last wali line mujhe bilkul pasand nahi aayi aapki sir disrespect sa fill huva isme
Agar, Parijaat ki aurtein chaahengi ki unhe 'aap' kehkar bulaaya jaaye toh ve tok dengi Veer ko.

Lekin, so far aisa nahi hua hai. Wo sab inn chhoti moti baato se aage aa chuki hai bhai. Unko farq nahi padta. :sigh: Balki, 'tum' se unhe koi pareshani nahi hai. In fact they like it.

Not to mention ki unka rishta ek master slave ka rishta hai. Phir chaahe Veer underage bhi rahe toh bhi woh tu tadaak kar ke baat kar sakta hai.

Aur, ek baat ... Hume ye nahi bhoolna chahiye ki Sonali bhi Veer se tu tadaak kar ke hi baat karti hai. Jabki, woh Veer ki slave hai. Toh double standards nahi rakho bhai. :sigh: Yahi complaint Sonali ke liye bhi rakho. Ki woh kyu tu tadaak kar ke baat karti hai. Veer toh use kuchh nahi bolta in fact. :dazed:

Kyunki, Veer aur Parijaat ki aurtein... Sabhi inn sab baato ko mind nahi karte. 'tum' kehna aur close feel karwata hai 'aap' kehne ke bajaaye. Baaki, agar kisi ko taqleef hoti hai. Toh woh Veer ko keh sakti hai. Veer will comply. :approve:
Harbar tu tadak karke baat karta hai? Kaha man! Mujhe jitna yaad hai veer apni kisi bhi slave se tu tadak nahi katna, balki ulta veer to Suman ko "aap" Kehkar sambodhan kiya tha woh to Suman ne hi usse tum kehne ko bola.

Ab Werewolf ju hi bolo yeha pe mein sahi hu ye Ajay chauhan bhai.
Yaha pe ju hi sahi ho. :approve:
Really impressed with your knowledge and try to measure the length of canvas where you are painting this story…
But failure to catch and good part of brain storming surprisingly feel very happy…
Awesome 👌
Thanks a lot.
Bahut hi mast update hai maza agaya padke pichle update me jo doubts aye the espe sab clear hogaye our veer ne Ranjeet ko marne ka shrey Trisha ko diya😀🤪
Dhanyavad.
Outstanding fabulous 👌 👏 bahut badiya kam kiya bhai update pe great job brother 👍 bahut mast likha hai
Dhanyavad.
 

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Waise Dexter, Dhananjay/Ranjeet, Rajat aur Aadesh ko Veer ke against uchkane me direct haath to Damian ka hai lekin mastermind to Rebecca hi hai. Isme Mr X involve nahi hai. Ab Damian tak pahunchne me hi Veer ka mission pura ho jayega ya phir Rebecca tak... Lekin ek baat samajh me nahi aayi ki Rebecca aakhir Veer ke peeche kyon padi hai. Usko pata hai ki common person system holder ka, khas kar Veer jaise powerful person ka, kuch nahi kar sakte, phir bhi usne Veer ki family ko target kar ke Veer ko upset kar diya hai. Shayad yeh hi uska Veer ko kamzor karne ka uddeshya ho. Veer ne Aura Vision Maximum par upgrade kar liya hai, yahi Rebecca ke against kaam ayega.

Nik is samay India me hai, Gaurav to hai hi. Yeh samay theek hai ki Veer jaldi se apna Pushkar wala mission pura kar le.
 

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Kyunki, I respect my work. Ye past bahut zaroori tha.
Yes! Past story ka ek tarah se backbone hota hai jahan se aur bhi kai updates aur new story start hoti hai, sorry main kuchh din aur busy rahunga toh abhi philhaal story nahi padh paunga, lekin pahle ki hi tarah maine updates ko sirf like kar diya hai.
 

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Update - 203 ~ A Past under a Past

alright, Hamen flashback mein le jata hai jaha Harikiran Singh aur Bijaipur-Mayra ke haveliyon ka itihas samne aata hai, ekdum seamless hai. Bijaipur ke Dharam Singh ka parivar, jo angrezo ke khilaaf lada, aur Mayra ke Harikiran ka khandaan, jo angrezo ke saath mila hua tha, yeh contrast story ko historical aur social weight deta hai.

Bhavna ke parivar ka raat bhar mein jal ke khak ho jana aur Harikiran ka rutba badhna ek tragedy ka foundation rakhta hai. Yeh backstory na sirf plot ke stakes ko badhaata hai, balki yeh bhi dikhaata hai ki kaise purani dushmaniyaan aaj ke characters ke jeevan ko shape karti hai.

Harikiran ka kasayi-khaane jaise gande dhande mein haath daalna uske character ko aur bhi dirty banata hai, jo aage ke events ko justify karta hai.

Dhananjay ka character is update ka ek bada highlight hai. Woh ek aisa naujawan hai jo apne gaanv ke bandhan se tang aa chuka hai. Uska, “Manne baahar ki duniya dekhni hai,” uski restlessness aur ambition ko dikhaata hai. Uska alhadpann aur zid usko relatable banata hai, par yahi uski kamzori bhi hai.

Harikiran ka Patna chunna ek aisa sheher jo na pura urban hai na pura rural, ek shaatir move hai jo uske controlling nature ko dikhata hai. Yeh decision Dhananjay ke safar ka turning point banta hai, kyunki yahi usko Raman ke paas le jata hai. Nicely thoughtful writing.

Raman aur Ranjeet ka raat ka scene, jaha woh Dhananjay ko lootne ki planning karte hai. Raman ka zameen ke neeche paise chhupana aur Ranjeet ko gaddi dena ek gritty stereotype realism deta hai.Yeh scene dikhata hai ki kaise yeh dono logon ki aastha se khel ke apna empire bana rahe hai.

jab Dhananjay unki baat sunn leta hai aur bhaagta hai. Uska bhaagna, Ranjeet ka peecha karna aur woh gunshots. Then Dhananjay ki maut. Dhananjay ko hum bura nahi keh sakte isliye uska mout chota sa emotional tha, aur uske baad Vandna ka Ranjeet ke haathon bandhi ban jana aur bhi dard deta hai. Yeh sequence raw aur thoda sa heartbreaking tha.

Vandna ka Bijaipur bhaag kar Abhilasha se milna is update ka sabse gehra aur emotional part hai. Abhilasha ka khulasa ki Vandna ek Parijaat ki aurat hai.

Maine pichhali review Mein keh diya tha, guess kar liya tha yah hone wala hai😁

Parijaat ka itihas - Paramhans Mahadevanand Ji ka shraap, Padmini ka abhimaan, aur Baldev Singh ke parivar ke saath Parijaat aurton ka bandhan, yeh sab ek mythological saga jaisa laga.

Shraap ka yeh angle ki Parijaat ki aurtein Baldev ke vansh ki seva karegi, aur agar khilaaf gayi toh unka patan hoga, Vandna ke parivar ke khatma ko explain karta hai ye shraap.

Abhilasha ka confess karna ki usne Vandna ki shaadi Mayra ke parivar mein karwayi taaki shraap apna kaam kare, aur Bhavna ke parivar ke dushman khatam ho. Ye dikhaata hai ki kaise ek purana shraap aaj ke jeevan ko tabah kar sakta hai.


Veer ka role isme ekdum complex hai. Woh ek taraf toh ek mastermind hai, jo Ranjeet ko itni shaatir tarah se khatam karta hai ki koi us par shak bhi nahi karta. Par doosri taraf, uska Pari ke saath jhagda uske andar ke moral conflict ko dikhata hai.

Pari ka roona aur sleep mode mein chala jana ek insaani rishta veer ke saath jaisa feel deta hai. Veer ka yeh kehna ki “This is the right way” aur Pari ka uske brutal hone par dukh dikhana, story mein ek moral dilemma add karta hai.

Dhananjay ki tragedy, Vandna ka dard, aur Veer ka badalta hua character, gehra tha.

Bhale hi yah update Bhavna ke flashback Jitna intense nahi tha, but hey i like it. Parijaat ke auraton Ka Rahasya Khul Ke Samne Aaya, Jo ki iss update ka main focus tha, aur shayad iss update Se Mujhe locket ka hint bhi Mila. Shabdon ka bhi istemal achcha Kiya gaya tha. contrast bhi sahi tha.
 

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Relationship wise dekhe, toh Vandna Veer ke zyada close hai compared to Purvi. Kyunki, Purvi Veer ki muh boli maasi hai. Unka koi blood relation ya koi relative waala relation nahi hai.
Woh to hai hi, I agree. But Mera Kahana relationship se nahi tha, closeness pe tha, closeness ke mamle mein kahan Purvi aur kahan Vandana. Purvi se closeness jiyada hai iss context mein bola tha.
 
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