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Relationship wise dekhe, toh Vandna Veer ke zyada close hai compared to Purvi. Kyunki, Purvi Veer ki muh boli maasi hai. Unka koi blood relation ya koi relative waala relation nahi hai.Yehi to Parijaat ki aurton ka hakikat hain isse kaise bachega Vandana. Aur durrrr ki chachi hone se kiya ho jata hai? Idhar usne apni mousi ka sponge daba Dala aur kidhar ju woh durrrrr ki chachi ki baat kar rahe ho. Aur waise bhi veer wise hai usne koye bhi Parijaat ki aurton ko slave jaisa treat nahi kiya abhi tak. He respect them all.
Stroy padh rahe ho ya aankhe sekh ke nikal ja rahe ho bhai! Kucch sensible Baat To Karo.

Bahut bahut dhanyavad. Keep supporting.Bahut unexpected our intresting update tha vandna bhi Parijaat ghar se judi hai ye bahut unexpected tha mere liye. Past se bahut jada bate clear hogai hai wolf bhai sai time pe ye clearity diye ho great jobfull moon me to veer apne dushmano ko chirfad ke rakh denga abto veer ka pari se behaviour bahut intresting hai overall update was fabulous
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Action ka plot hi nahi hai abhi. Kis se action dikhaaye? Disembowler jaa chuka hai filhal. Toh, kaha se aayega action? Abhi lore hi expand ho raha hai. Puraani problems ke solutions khoje jaa rahe hai. Taaki next arc me jaane se pehle inn problems ko completely solve kar diya jaaye.Not much action in the last update but the twist and the lore is great and the pictures of system status is also made to perfection. The update might come late or few but the writer puts every bit of effort into them
Agar, Parijaat ki aurtein chaahengi ki unhe 'aap' kehkar bulaaya jaaye toh ve tok dengi Veer ko.Ok theek hai chalo Maan liya ki veer un sabki respect karta hai but harbaar unke sath tu tadak par utar aata hai main bas ye chahta hu ki veer vandna ke sath ye naa kare
Or rahi baat sensual baat ki to zara soch samajh ke boliye sir meri baat kesi hai ye baat bolne ka haq wolfi ka hai
Or ha ye aakhirli line jo aapne boli ki story padh rahe ho and all main bas apna opinion rakh rha hu jispe wolfi reply dega hi dega so please stay out of it or ye last wali line mujhe bilkul pasand nahi aayi aapki sir disrespect sa fill huva isme
Balki, 'tum' se unhe koi pareshani nahi hai. In fact they like it.
Yahi complaint Sonali ke liye bhi rakho. Ki woh kyu tu tadaak kar ke baat karti hai. Veer toh use kuchh nahi bolta in fact. 

Yaha pe ju hi sahi ho.Harbar tu tadak karke baat karta hai? Kaha man! Mujhe jitna yaad hai veer apni kisi bhi slave se tu tadak nahi katna, balki ulta veer to Suman ko "aap" Kehkar sambodhan kiya tha woh to Suman ne hi usse tum kehne ko bola.
Ab Werewolf ju hi bolo yeha pe mein sahi hu ye Ajay chauhan bhai.

Thanks a lot.Really impressed with your knowledge and try to measure the length of canvas where you are painting this story…
But failure to catch and good part of brain storming surprisingly feel very happy…
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Dhanyavad.Bahut hi mast update hai maza agaya padke pichle update me jo doubts aye the espe sab clear hogaye our veer ne Ranjeet ko marne ka shrey Trisha ko diya![]()
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bahut badiya kam kiya bhai update pe great job brother
bahut mast likha hai
Around 3k wordsWhat is the current work count for next update
Yes! Past story ka ek tarah se backbone hota hai jahan se aur bhi kai updates aur new story start hoti hai, sorry main kuchh din aur busy rahunga toh abhi philhaal story nahi padh paunga, lekin pahle ki hi tarah maine updates ko sirf like kar diya hai.Kyunki, I respect my work. Ye past bahut zaroori tha.
Update - 203 ~ A Past under a Past
Woh to hai hi, I agree. But Mera Kahana relationship se nahi tha, closeness pe tha, closeness ke mamle mein kahan Purvi aur kahan Vandana. Purvi se closeness jiyada hai iss context mein bola tha.Relationship wise dekhe, toh Vandna Veer ke zyada close hai compared to Purvi. Kyunki, Purvi Veer ki muh boli maasi hai. Unka koi blood relation ya koi relative waala relation nahi hai.