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[Rihanna]

That's fine....

But I think Bhawna's past update was better

I can agree with the conversation stuff... They were good in Bhavna's past...

But in terms of history prospect, creativity and storytelling... This was far better... Conversations were less nd they only came after quite a handful of paragraphs (narration) that's why it felt like lackluster... But it was 12k update...

So... Considering that... This was better than her past... You like bhavna... Not her past that's why u r being biased...

 

[dododo]

Update - 203 ~ A Past under a Past

Great update. Story me koi bhi loose end nahi chhoda hai. Pehle Nidhi ka POV, phir Ragini ka, aur ab Parijaat kaise shuru hua, kaise uska naam pada, pura past hi saamne khol kar rakh diya hai. Padmini ke ghamand aur murkhta ne un sab ko is bandhan me hamesha ke liye baandh diya. Bas, ek baat yeh huyi ki unko Baldev Singh ke pariwar ke keval ek hi mard ke saath baandha gaya tha.

Ek khaas baat yeh huyi ki Mahadevanand Maharaj ne Baldev ko Rajan keh kar sambhodhit kiya, saaf hai ki unke purvaj Raja/ Maharaja the. Is update ko padh kar aisa laga jaise munh me jaate huye niwale ko kisi ne cheen liya hai. Aisa lag raha tha ki Neel Mani ka rahasya ab saamne aayega, par reh gaya. Waise kafi kuch pehle iske baare me likha hua hai.

<'Maharaj! Chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye, kintu aap neel mani ko apne tan se juda hone mat dena. Warna anarth ho jayega.'>

<Aur woh neel mani? Woh wahi uss yuddh bhumi me ret me kahi dafn hoke reh gaya. Raja Param Veer Singh ke vanshaj bhi dheere dheere khatam ho gaye. Ek itni behatreen peedhi ka dukhad ant.>

Saaf hai ki Baldev aur ab Veer isi Raj Parivar se sambandhit the, isi liye yeh mani Bhavna ko mili aur ab Veer ke gale me hai. Yeh uski raksha karti rahegi. Ab iska origin kahan se hua, yeh bhi kisi update me aayega hi.

Raman kaise Dhananjay tak pahuncha aur kaise usne uski jayedad par kabja kar liya, yeh bhi link ho gaya. Veer tak kaise pahuncha, weh bhi clear ho gaya. To Damian ko Ranjeet ke baare me pata tha.

One thing is to be appreciated, so smoothly you have shifted from Bhojpuri to Rajasthani dialect, hats off to you.

These updates make the story realistic, and I like them. They make the story complete. Nothing is in vain.

Veer ko 'Mystic Touch' skill mil gayi hai. 'Legendary Skills (Cross Categary)' shayad apne missions ko complete karne ke baad mil jaaye. Par Pari se jhagad liya, this is nor Veer style, he has really changed, for good or worst.

Again, a great update.

 

[Werewolf]

Bhakkkk! Kaaye suit hoti hai?

Abhi ke timeline ke hisaab se Ava aur Keara ki jodi Veer ke saath kahaan banti hai? Bhai!
Story ab tak realistically chal rahi hai when it comes to relationships and dreams.
So realistically dekha jaye, Kaera jo abhi abhi apni emotions ko unlock karna seekh hi rahi hai, don’t forget woh abhi bhi apne emotions ke baare mein sahi nahi hui hai. Jab bhi woh apne poore emotions ko unlock karegi, tab uske dimaag mein pehla khayal yahi aayega ki Veer uski chut le gaya I mean virginity le gaya, woh bhi tab jab Keara nashe mein thi. Usko is cheez ko samajhne, accept karne aur continue karne mein thoda aur samay lagega. Upar se she is a baddy and a bold businesswoman too. Of course, she has a soft corner for Veer, but abhi tak woh love ke feelings ko samjhi nahi kyunki uska emotion poori tarah unlock hua hi nahi. Aise mein dono agar relationship mein aa jaye abhi, she will be ended up treating him like a dog, and upar se uska father ji jo corner Mein dildo leKe Khada Hai

Absolutely agreed! Kaera doesn't understand the depth of losing her virginity right now because uske emotions poori tarah se baahar nahi aaye hai. Woh aa rahe hai dheere-dheere. Ye tabhi poori tarah se wapas aayenge jab woh ek ek kar ke emotions ko revisit karegi. Jaise jab use jealousy feel hogi, toh use iss emotion ka bhaav wapas se zehen me aa jayega. Jab woh udaas hogi, guilty hogi toh ye bhaav dheere dheere wapas aa jayenge.

But so far... Guilt? Kis baat ka? Jealousy? Kis se? Uske paas ab kuchh hai jo ek aadmi aim karta hai achieve karne ko. Isliye, ye dheere dheere hoga. Aur, jab hoga toh Kaera ko mehsoos hoga ki ab tak usne kya kuchh kiya hai. But then again... Woh immature nahi hai. So, she won't throw a tantrum like a bitchy amateur teen girl ki tumne meri virginity leli. No! That won't happen, But she will deal with Veer. She will definitely confront him. Because she was not in her sober state that time. But Veer was...!

Ava, it seems Veer ne Ava ko maaf kar diya hai, upar se usne Tej ko bhi bachaya hai. And it’s evident ki she loves Veer. But, but, but, don’t forget Veer ne usko romantically abhi tak nahi dekha. Dono ke beech bas ek ‘more than friends’ wala vibe hai, at least for Veer. Bas ek chhota sa attraction wala scene dikhaya gaya hai Veer ki Ava ke prati, but usse hum Veer ka love nahi keh sakte. Upar se ek relationship mein guilt nahi hona chahiye, par Ava ko abhi tak apne kiye ka guilt hai. Usko usse ubharne mein abhi bhi time lagega. Also don't forget she is a world wide celebrity aise openly agar woh Veer ke saath relationship mein aa gaye to veer ki enemies jo abhi foreign mein hai aur aage ja ke hone wale hai isse woh Veer ko easily access kar lenge ava ke jariye.

Veer is actually very appreciative towards Ava's beauty. But wo itna occupied hai ki woh Ava ko abhi romantic partner ke roop me nahi dekha hai. Ava me guilt rahegi. Kyunki, usne jo kiya use bhula ke aage badhna koi robot hi kar sakta hai. Veer agar 100 baar bhi use maaf kar de par Ava use bhool kaise sakti hai? In fact agar, Veer uss se pyaar bhi karne lage toh ulta ye guilt ko badha sakta hai.

Kyunki, Ava ke mann me tab baar-baar yahi aayega ki jis se woh itna pyaar karti hai, aur jo uss se bhi pyaar karta hai, usi ko kabhi usne maarne ki koshish ki thi. Ye thoughts aur bhi zyada aayenge. And, the means... A major event must happen between both of them. Which we'll see later in the story. Rahi baat Ava ka sabke saamne relationship me aa jaane se Veer ko dikkat hogi... Yes! Ava ke worldwide bahut se suitors hai. Not to mention the male singers, producers, etc jo Ava ko target kar ke baithe hai apne partner ke roop me. Toh unki hate toh milni hi milni hai. Aur, ye sirf Ava ke saath hi nahi hai...

Jitni bhi powerful ladies hai, Ava, Kaera, Sonia, sabhi ke suitors hai kahani me. Bas abhi limelight me aaye nahi hai. Par, wo aayenge ab. Kyunki, ye arc romance par bhi zor daalega. Aur, romance badhega toh suitors ke beech tension bhi badhegi. Woh saamne aayenge.

Other than these two, doosri auraton ki bhi possibilities dekhi jaye toh.

Divya, no. Usko saath Veer ka bedfellows wala relationship hai jo romantically bhi hai, but usse love nahi keh sakte jo relationship ke liye chahiye hota hai.

They do love each other. But yes... only as best friends. Not as soulmates. It's like... lust, attraction, but also care for friend...!

Suhana, maybe yes. Suhana ke saath ek possibility ho sakti hai, but no. Abhi dono ka relationship realistic nahi lagega. Gaurav chomu beech mein jaroor aayega, aur Suhana bhi Veer ke saath relationship mein aane se pehle 100 baar sochegi. Of course, she has feelings for Veer, and Veer also has the same. But terms and time saath nahi dega for now.

Yes. Not to mention the important hindrances... Family and society. Suhana woh nahi hai ki ghar-baar chhor ke Veer ke saath bhaag ke shaant zindagi bitaaye. Maybe woh jaa bhi sakti hai. Lekin, Veer apna empire banaane ke liye aaya hai. Bhaag ke shaadi kar ke shaant jeevan bitaane ke liye.

Sis kink ko dekha jaye toh, Veer ke behno ke saath abhi yeh toh kisi bhi tarah se possible nahi hai. Haan, Tej × Veer can become a couple secretary, but pressure rahega Tej, Veer ke upar kyunki Bhavna ne Tej ke behaviour ka na jaane kab se notice kar rahi hai. Aise mein dono abhi relationship nahi rakh sakte. On the other hand, Veer × Kavya. It seems dono kisi tarah ke relationship mein hi hain. Dono apne feelings bhi confess kar chuke hain aamne saamne, sabhi bahanon Mein sabse pahle Kavya Ne hi Veer ki cushli
but again woh bhi secret hai, usse relationship nahi keh sakte, Aur Arohi bechari limelight se door hai abhi. Filhaal bhool hi jao bhai bahan chudai kink ka.

Har incest route ka starting phase secret affair hi hai kahani me. Kavya ne chhip ke kiya, Tej ne chhip ke kiya. Aur, Purvi ne bhi bina bataaye Veer ko breastfeed karwaya. Ye cheezein share nahi kar sakte. Because of the family and blood relationship. Lekin, iska breakthrough kabhi na kabhi toh hona hi hai. Prefix me incest hai toh zaahir hai kisi ki cherry toh pop hogi hi hogi...

Ragini, yes. Iske saath Veer ka relationship ho sakta hai abhi. Dono pehle se hi ek romantic physical relationship mein hain, upar se love and care bhi hai dono mein. Bas Ragini ko apni aankhon se Veer ko lekar jo misunderstanding hai, uska utarna baaki hai, although misunderstanding kafi had tak clear ho chuka hai, bas chhota sa gussa hai. Upar se woh toh chahti hi hai ki Veer ke saath uska taanka bhid jaye. Bas Veer ko thoda courage dikhana padega family ke saamne. Dekha jaye toh bhabhi ko apnana in sab mein se realistic hoga. But again, family issues rahega.

Ragini's route is still tough. You are forgetting that she is one of the most possessive females out of the three heroines. Kal ko woh raazi ho bhi gayi. Veer bhi raazi ho gaya. But then use Veer ke baaki relationships ke baare me pata laga toh? Ye jaante hue ki Kavya, Tej, Nidhi, Suhana, Kaera, Ava sabhi uske peechhe padi hai, use kaise bardasht karegi woh? This is why it's very difficult.

Shreya × Veer toh hoga hi nahi abhi. Kahi se bhi realistic nahi hai. Veer ne abhi bhi Shreya ke liye feelings develop hi nahi kiye. Shreya ke saath toh 0 possibility abhi.

Nope! In fact Shreya ke paas inn sabhi se zyada achha chance hai. Uski situation kaafi better hai. Reasons?

1) Woh Veer ki age ke saath ki hai. Yes. Badi hai uss se halka-sa but still, very close to his age.
2) Sundar hai, susheel hai. Achhi family se hai. Upar se Nidhi ki chhoti behan hai. Nidhi aur uski family ko Veer ka parivar acche se jaanta hai. So, a trustworthy family and girl.
3) Shreya ke mata-pita khud apni chhoti beti ka haath dene ke liye raazi hai Veer ko. Hum yeh dekh hi chuke hai. Shreya koi blood relation share nahi karti Veer se like Arohi, Tej and Kavya. Na hi woh married hai unlike Nidhi and Suhana. Na hi woh umr me badi hai zyada like Ava, Sonia and Kaera. I mean trinity ki age ignore kari jaa sakti hai, itna bhi koi gap nahi hai but still, Shreya Veer ki age se kaafi close hai.
4) Veer bhale hi pyaar nahi karta uss se but... He has a favorable impression of her. Aur, isliye woh date suggest karne ki baat Shreya ki... Shreya has the opportunity to make him fall for her.

Inn points ko consider kare toh sabse zyada advantage abhi Shreya ko hi hai.

Nidhi, yes. Veer × Nidhi ek couple ho sakta hai. Nidhi bhi abhi apne mann ki sunne lagi hai, aur Veer toh hai hi Nidhi ka paglu. But again, Nidhi Veer ke saath relationship mein aane se pehle sochegi ki Veer uska student hai, usse kafi chhota hai, upar se woh Shreya ke baare mein sochegi. Shayad woh apne bhanje ke baare mein soch ke peeche hat jaye. Nidhi agar yeh sab overcome kar paye, toh ho sakta hai.

There is a vast difference between accepting your feelings and accepting the feelings with whatever may come.

Nidhi ne apni feelings accept kar li hai. Woh Veer ko jata bhi sakti hai, ya in fact keh bhi sakti hai ki haan use uss se pyaar hai. Lekin... Iska matlab ye nahi hai ki woh Veer ko apna pati maan ke uss se dobara shaadi karne ke liye taiyaar hai. Iska matlab ye nahi hai ki ab woh pyaar me giri hui ladki ki tarah sab bhool bhaal ke society ke taane sunane ke liye taiyaar hai.

She has accepted her own feelings for now. But yes.. Use Veer ko ek answer dena hi padega. Kyunki, Veer ke paas unlimited age nahi hai. Woh wait hi nahi karta rahega. Nidhi ko apne bubble se baahar aana padega ki sab kuchh aisa hi chalta rahe. Aur, hum ye aage dekhenge ki woh kya decision leti hai.q

so realistically, Nidhi aur Ragini, yeh dono hi possibilities hain Veer ke saath ek full-fledged relationship mein aane ke liye. Sabse zyada Ragini ki possibility hai.

Both are polar opposites. Ragini is extremely possessive. And, Nidhi is the sacrificial type. Toh, dono ke saath hi tough route hai. As I said, Shreya ke paas inn dono se hi adhik advantage hai. Also...

Shreya ke paas ek aur khaas weapon hai. Her virginity.

Werewolf relationship ko chhodo, main toh wait kar raha hoon final arc ka. Sabhi guthhiyaan sulajh jaayengi. System ka secret samne aayega, locket ka secret bhi.

Neel mani ka secret finale arc ke pehle hi de dunga. Yaad dila diyo bas beech beech me..!

Ohh, locket se yaad aaya, pichhla update padh ke locket ka rahasya shayad maine soongh liya hai.

Soonghte raho. That's what I want from the readers.

Anyway, woh toh final arc mein pata chal hi jayega. Acche se cook karna, man! Mystery unlock × action × Veer’s personal relationship × drama × chhodaam patti. Jo bhook 4 years se lagayi hai, uske liye badiya cooking karna!

Sab cooked hai pehle se.. bas intezar karna hai hume. Thanks a lot btw. The analysis was great. I pretty much agree with most of the points. Keep supporting!

 

[Avaran]

Hahaha love to see If Veer goes on a darker path.... Where he choses evil over good. But that's not gonna happen.

Same Thought
Veer Family wala Banda hai wo dark path par aise Manorath ji ki death ki wajah se Nahi Jane wala .

Dark path par Jaane ke liye veer ki Sari Family aagar kisi wajah se Maari Jaati hai Toh hi veer evil rasta choose karega.

Veer ke paas abhi bahut kuch hai use kisi galat raste par jane se rokne ke liye, and Werewolf doesn't like dark endings.

Jab Tak family hai veer evil raste par nahi Jaaraha .

 

[Avaran]

Are you sure about that? Have you read Architect?

Architect ju ka usc ki story

meine starting ki read ki thee lekin read karte waqt dusra kaam aagaya Toh fir usko read Nahi kiya .

Kabhi Samay Milne par read karunga usee .

 

[Samar_Singh]

Are you sure about that? Have you read Architect?

Yes I read that. Exactly yaad nahi but ek baar AoT aur Naruto ki endings ko lekar kuch discussion hua tha hamara uss base par maine kaha.

Baki agar ju Bhawna ke hatho Veer ko tapkana chaho ending me. To kya Kiya jaa sakta hai.

 

[Ahsan Ali]

very detailed update, Parijaat House ka concept bhi clear ho Gya

 

[Werewolf]

Bhai jo story man se padhte hai unke liye yeh update bhi zabardast hai mere liye bhi

Aor neel mani ko nahi bholle hai ham log

Par parizat ki past se Mera ek doubt hai ki sharap me sirf vansh ke ek ki khidmat karne ka sharap mila tha par jab pichli baar harikiran ki mout ke waqt jab bhavna ke ghar ka scene chal raha tha tab yeh bataya gaya tha ki uske ghar me parizat ke sath sareerik sambandh bante aaye hai isliye thoda confusion hai agar aap door karna chahe?

Baki bahut badhiya update aor yeh bhi theek hai mahine ka bandhna ki kitne updates aayenge yeh dikkat karta hoga q ki life jaisa ham sochte hai sab waisa hi nahi hota aapka jab mare likhna shuru kijiye aor jab aapke targets poore ho jaye tab aap jab dil kare deliver kar dijiye chahe mahine ka 1 update ho 4 jitna aap karna chahe

Nahi nahi. Kul me sarvashreshta waarish ke prati samarpann rakhna hoga. Jaise abhi ke kul me Veer sabse sarvashreshta hai. Woh baat bhi hai ki ab sirf wahi bacha hai. Dusri Tej hai par woh Veer se kamtar hai qualities ke maamle me.

Har kul me kisi ek sarvashreshta waaris ki seva karni padti hai. Jaise jab humne Bhavna ka ateet dekha tha toh usme Bhavna ke bhai Parijaat ki aurat ke saath sambhog kar ke baahar aaye the. (Veer ke mama ji)

Toh andaza laga lo ab ki unke kul me uss waqt kaun sarvashreshta tha.

Veer ke mama ji ke jaane ke baad ab Veer hai. Hope ab clear ho gaya hoga. Abhi aur vistar se jaanenge hum ise update me.

Mind-blowing update
Parijat house ka past surprising tha
Veer ne dhananjay ko dhundne ka wada kiya hai par woh to mar chuka hai
Use Bihar Jana padega lekin abhi 2 mission pending hai
Raman wala mission kafi dino baad hi dekhne ko milaga

Veer ke paas time nahi hai Bihar jaane ka.

सुपर बहुत ही सुंदर kya strength me our poit nhi dalsakta tha kya veer Q ki disebhumber SHB use karke apni strength double karsakta hai na Am I write

Ek saath saare points nahi udaaye jaate. 30 points bahut hote hai ek saath invest karne ke liye.

Veer ab situation ke hisaab se aage badh raha hai. Dekhte jao bas.

Nice update.
Now would like what these changes in behaviours bring new turns in the story line

Thanks

Werewolf
Superb update.
Past ke baare me janne ke baad ab baki ka aur zada detailed aur clear lag rha hai. It's very good to see that even parijaat naam ke piche bhi reason hai , aur jo log bolenge ki past boring to aisa nahi hai kyuki ab past padh ke chize aur zada sense bana rahi hai . I just want to say this to all , plz dhayan se padhiye iss update ko to aapko pata chalega ki writer ne kitna detailed likha hai so that everything will make sense . appreciate krna sikho yaar writer kitni mehnat se ye sab likhta hai, bolna easy hai but it's very hard to connect every pre-written points properly and accurately.

Thanks a lot man.
Yes. It takes so much time to write a 12k update. I don't get time to do anything else after my job. I have to keep aside my own interests (watching tv, shows, sports, etc) to just stick to the story and write updates. And, as a writer I want to put an end to this story as soon as possible. But not while rushing it. With the utmost attention and care just like how I gave to the previous updates. But that's true too that I do want to get this load off of my shoulders. I haven't relaxed since last 4 yrs since I started this story. The moment I'll complete this, only then I would be able to relax. To be free of the mental fatigue and exhaustion. But in order to do that... I'll have to consistent with my work.

Dhananjay ka padh kr dukh bhi hota kyuki I think he was different than other males of his family. Anyways I think Veer have become harsher towards pari in particular.

That's life. Unpredictable. Anything can happen to anyone.

Vandana ko thoda unexpected tha , I mean dhananjay ke jagah lene wale ko hate krna samajha ja sakta tha but vandana ka parijaat ke sath wala itna deep connection puri tarah se unexpected tha. Well ju ne update dene ke pehele hi bata diya tha that update is full of twists. Shraap ka concept mujhe sahi laga, I mean ki ye parijaat ki loyalty ab zada sense bana rahi hai kyuki bina koi thos reason ke why would someone would be willing to be someone's slave

Exactly. No one would in right mind surrender to anyone like this. There was a reason behind this. The curse. Although, in earlier times... Parijaat ladies were afraid of the curse and that's why they had to submit to the best heir of the Singh family. But... Later, this fear was gone. You can see now that Parijaat ladies are now not afraid to get close to Veer. In fact they willingly serves him.

There's a hidden part in the curse. Whoever serves the master... Their family will eventually reach greater heights in his care. As Suman always says... They were in that small village getting abused. Look at them now. Right after they accepted Veer as their master. Sonali is earning through the food truck learning new things. Suman is the head of the mahila mandal now and doing social tasks. Aabha got to fulfill her dream to travel outside and explore the world.

Just by accepting that Veer is their master. Same Happen with Varsha, Sudha, Mukta. They are earning now. They are receiving respect from the society. Even after being a Parijaat woman.

On the other hand, look at Vandna. Her family tried to harm Veer's family. All of them died. Except Vandna. She's a Parijaat lady. She would have died too if she continued to take revenge from Veer. But a chance was given to him. To surrender... To acknowledge Veer... And, now she's here. We'll see how she proceeds. But remember that this curse is way too powerful than it seems.

Guess soon veer will be clashing with Raman. Mujhe nahi lagta Raman will be big deal for Veer , cause veer waise hi bohot bade bade diggajo se bhid chuka hai. Chalo dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai.

Veer is too occupied right now to clash with Raman.

Thank you very much for the entertaining update.
BTW I'm still waiting for Ava and veer's family meetup.

Thanks a lot. Ava will meet Veer's family in this arc only. Just have some patience. And, keep supporting.

 

[Werewolf]

Hmm to ye huva tha Sara khel sach main ek behad hi romanchak update diya wolfi ye expect nahi kiya tha I mean ki yaha pura itihaas khulega well I really liked this update thats call something new

To sabse pehle aate hai is raman or ranjeet pe to ye dono ko maine aira gaira hi samjha tha jo sirf paiso keliye logo ko thagte hai but ye log merder bhi kardenge ye expect nahi kiya tha maine

Kyu nahi kar denge murder? Police waalo se hi toh ladd raha tha Ranjeet pichhle update me. Open fire. Toh jab police ke itne logo se ladne me use darr nahi laga toh Dhananjay kya tha?

Or ranjeet ke sath jo huva wo sahi huva wo usi layak tha but afsos yaha raman nahi tha warna ranjeet ki lash dekh kar wo apna dhanda hi badal deta or agar na bhi badalta to shayad aaj ke baad veer se to sekdo kilometre door rehta

Abhi Raman ko kaha pata chala hai ki Veer ne ye sab kiya hai. Koi bataane waala hi nahi hai. Kisi ne dekha hi nahi Veer ko. Upar se Ranjeet Veer ke peechhe Raman ko bina bataaye gaya tha. Usne Veer ko lekar zyada details nahi di raman ko. Isliye, Raman clueless hai.

But aapne yaha parijaat ka itihaas bhi dekhaya jo un expected tha but ye sabse intresting part bhi tha I mean origin of parijaat nd vandna ka past ye sab

Bechari vandhna abhi bhi ye ummed lagaye baithi hai kahi na kahi uska beta uska laal jinda hai but uski kahani to uske baap dada ke sath hi khatam hogyi ab kyahi kar sakte hai isme agar kiski galti hai to wo hai karimiran ki kya jarurat thi use patna bhejne ki mumbai me agar brijesh ke pass bhej deta to uske baap ka kya jata

Patna bhejne ki kya zaroorat thi woh bhi update me explain Kiya gaya hai.
Kyunki, Patna Bihar me aata hai aur udhar sheher + gaanv dono ka mishran hai. Bhakti, pooja paath se juda hua sheher hai aur western ideologies se dur hai. Utna affected nahi hai unlike Mumbai jaha western culture itna fela hua hai ki khud ka culture dhundhne me time lag jaaye.

Harikiran nahi chaahta tha ki uska pota sheher ghoomne ki bajaaye waha ke taur tareeko se influence ho jaaye aur ghar hi na aaye. Isliye, Patna jaise sheher me use bheja gaya.

Aur, Brijesh ke paas kyu bhejta bhai? Harikiran toh shuru se hi Manorath ke ghar me phoot daalta aaya hai. Usi ne toh Bhavna ko nikalwaya tha. Woh apne hi pote ko uske ghar me kyu bhejega? Koi logic hi nahi hai iss baat ka toh.

But I really fill bed for vandna bechari ka sab kuch chinn gaya or to or use apni jindgi ka ek sabse bada sach bhi pata chala jo uske liye shayad zeher se bhi kadva tha kaha wo mayra gaav ki sethani thi or ab kaha wo Vijay Nagar ke waris ki rakhail nikli

Rakhail aur Parijaat ki aurton me zameen asmaan ka farq hai bhai.

Agar rakhail hi rakhni hoti toh woh toh bazaar me kahi bhi mil jaayengi paiso me. Phir Parijaat ka kya astitva hai? Koi astitva hi nahi.

Comparing them to prostitutes is like comparing a horse to a donkey.

Parijaat ki aurtein aur agar Veer chaahe, toh dono ko sehmati par woh bina koi shareerik sambandh banaaye bhi use serve kar sakti hai. Koi zaroori nahi hai ki bed par laitna hi padega. Aur, Veer toh Parijaat ki aurton prostitutes ki tarah rakhta hi nahi hai. Na hi unhe aise dekhta hai. Suman ke saath uski kink baahar aa jaati hai bas. In fact, Suman bhi yahi chaahti hai ki Veer uska istemal kare.

Lekin, overall wo koi prostitutes nahi hai. Aise shabdo ki ju se ummeed nahi thi.

But bro ek baat main batata hu ye mera wese personal opinion hai agar ise consider karo to accha lagega but jesa ki main harbaar kehta hu ki agar isse plot main changes na ho to


Main ye cahta hu ki veer vandna ko apne ghar me or dill main jagah de naki bister mai bhale hi wo parijaat ki aurat hai but agar riste se dekha jaye to wo veer ki door ki chachi bhi hai or shayad bhavna vandna ko apne is dukh se ubhar ne main help kar sake

Koi sawal hi paida nahi hota.
I'll explain:

1) Vandna Veer ki ek prakar se rishtedar lagti hai. No doubt. Lekin, use bheja Parijaat ki taraf se gaya tha ye aim karte hue ki Harikiran ka parivar agar khatra bana toh shraap ke antargat ve khud hi samapt ho jayenge.

2) Veer ke mann me Vandna ko lekar abhi koi emotions nahi hai. Not to mention Harikiran aur bhanu pratap ki harqate abhi bhi uske mann me taaza hai.

3) Veer ne aaj tak kisi ko force nahi kiya hai. Toh yeh kyu assume kar ke chal rahe ho ki Vandna Veer ka bistar garam karegi?
Ye vandna ke upar hai. Agar, woh nahi chaahegi toh Veer thodi uske saath kuchh karega. Simple. Woh wahi Parijaat ke ghar me reh sakti hai aur physically help na kar ke, uske kisi aur kaamo me help kar sakti hai.

4) Vandna khud abhi Veer ko lekar confused hai. Kayi saalo tak wo apne parivar ke saath rahi hai. Fir uska husband aur sasur Veer ke haatho mara. Aur upar se use ye pata chalta hai ki jisne unhe maara uske prati hi use apna sab kuchh samarpann karna hai. Toh vandna ke mann me khataas hai. Aur, ye waqt legi.

It's that simple.

Main ye nahi kehraha ki vandna or veer ka sex na karvao obviously wo parijaat ki aurat hai but to sex to agar veer karna cahe to shayad vandna mana bhi naa kar paye but veer uske sath pure emotionally physical hoye na ki sum ke sath jese shayad proper malik or dasi ke jese jese purvi wala scene tha wo use aihsaas dila paye ki wo bhi uska mali nahi beta hai

Sex nahi hoga.
Vandna pe depend karta hai ki woh kya karna chaahti hai. Aur, use abhi dekh ke nahi lagta ki woh khud ko saupegi.
Aur, na hi Veer isme kuchh karega. Veer ke paas pehle hi bahut kaam hai. Vandna ko behla ke uske saath sex karne ka samay nahi hai uske paas.
Ye vandna ke upar hai ki woh kya decision leti hai.

Main chahta hu veer vandna ke sath uska Dhananjay banke khada ho naki Vijay Nagar ka koi tharki varish wese mera manna to hai ki suman ke sath bhi ek baar pure love or emotions ke sath sex kare veer use dikhaye ki suman uske liye bahut mayne rakhti hai but har baar veer uske sath tu tadak main utar aata hai ye mujhe accha nahi lagta ek suman ko aap kehke sex kar lene se veer ki ego thi haurt hojayegi

Suman uski amma nahi hai bhai.
In fact shuruvat me Veer ne 'aap' keh ke hi sambodhit kiya tha. Lekin, Suman ne hi mana kar diya tha.

Tum jaha Suman ko le jaana chaahte ho udhar Suman khud nahi jaani chaahti.

Use nahi hai ye sab pasand. Ki uske maalik komal bann kar uss se pyaar bhari baat kare. Woh jaanti hai ki uski jagah kya hai. Aur, use wahi jagah pasand hai. Maalik ke saath lover bann kar nahi reh sakti woh. Kuchh kshan ke liye lover ki responsibility le sakti hai, kyunki woh daasi hai. Lekin, role nahi le sakti completely.

Yeh baat Suman jaanti hai aur isliye Sonali ko bhi samjhaati hai ki maalik ko pati ke roop me na dekhne lage.

Suman ko hardcore sex pasand hai. Rough sex. Use ye careful lovely way pasand nahi. Ye kahani me pehle bhi bataya gaya hai ki Suman ek masochist hai. Uski kink hi yahi hai ki roughly uske maalik uske saath kare. In fact uski kinks aisi-aisi hai ki aage padhoge to bologe ye kya hai...

She's the most degenerate woman in the Parijaat ghar. But also... The most perfect woman of Parijaat ghar to ever exist.

Toh jaha Suman ko tum dekhna chaahte ho udhar Suman khud nahi jaana chaahti.

Wese agar padmini ne apne ahankar ko side main rakha hota to shayad aaj parijaat ghar ka kuch or hi matlab hota

Well ye thi update ki baat ab kuch sawal hai jiske baare main jawab mile to bahut badhiya hoga

Kya hume Brijesh or veer ka ek accha khasa lamba chuda convo dekhne ko milega jisme jile sikhve ki baat hoye kuch ho sakta hai kya iss baare main

Yes. Mil sakta hai. Definitely.

Kya veer or is intelligent pari main vapas sulah hogi ya ye personality bhi aise ladte jagadte jayegi

Pari aur Veer ek hai. Woh lade jhagde par ek dusre se akhir kitni der naraaz rahenge?

Or ab konsa part pe focus hoyega finding damiyan , autoshield ka welcome , ya fir nik and gaurav wala mission inme se ab konsa part pe continue hoyega

Sab parallel me chalega.

And haa kya ab bhavna lime light main ayegi ya nahi sala uska scene to aap wolfi shuru karte ho khatam kardete ho yaar naa ek baar bhi jab se bhavna aayi hai tabse ek baar bhi usne veer ko apne seene se lagakar nahi sulaya nahi usse theek se baat hoti hai hoti bhi hai to bohot awkwardly hota hai or ha bhavna bhale hi sex na kare chalo Maan liya ki tum inka nahi hi dikhaoge but doodh chuska koi kharab baat nahi hai wo scene to dall hi sakte ho ..

Bhavna wo character nahi hai jaha wo lalla lalla kar ke Veer ko apne doodh ke andar ghused ke use pyaar kare.

Ateet me uski personality alag thi. Par, uss tragedy ke baad se woh badal chuki hai. Matured hai bahut ab. Isliye, uske pyaar karne ka dhang bhi alag hai. Woh Shweta ki tarah harqate nahi karti. Sakhti me bhi uska pyaar dikhta hai. For example : Jab usne Veer ko chhat par sone ki punishment di thi. Tab wahi end me upar aayi thi Veer ke paas. Uske baad ka convo humne dekha hi tha.

Uska dhang alag hai. Woh Veer ko space de rahi hai. Woh jaanti hai ki abhi Veer manorath ki death ke baad se pareshan hai. Isliye, Nidhi aur Purvi ke ghar jaane bhi allowed kar diya usne.

Rahi baat unke intimate scenes ki...
Uss baare me mein already decide kar chuka hu.

Ant main full status jab dekha na mere dimang main jonny livar ka hera pheri wala dilong yaad aagaya " yeaahhhhh abhiich maza ayega na bhidu "

Sabhi ke sabhi main stat on full 200 I like it I love it ab BERSERK, and BEOWOLF ka jalwa dekhne main maza ayega


Beowolf ko agility ko 50 % badhata hai or full moon night me double % hojaye hai to ab veer ki agility hai 200 usme agar 50 % add kare to hota hai 200 + 100 = 300 or full moon main 400


Or berserk main intelligence+ strength dono hi 200 to uska bhi total 400 ki strength mujhe to veer ke opponent per abhi se daya aa rahi hai broo kya hi hell scenerio hoga jab iska istemal hoga

Yes. Agar Veer Beowulf's blessings aur Berserk dono ek saath istemal karta hai, woh bhi full moon me... Toh haalat kharab kar dega woh opponent ki.

But dhyaan rahe... Berserk me intelligence zero ho jaata hai. Toh bhale hi agility aur strength 400 pahuch jaaye. Without intelligence he would be like a mad bull. Yes. Tab bhi woh khatarnak rahega lekin... Agar kisi ka intelligence bahut high raha aur agar agility me Veer ke barabar raha toh woh bach ke nikal jaaega. Ya phir Veer ko kisi trap me bhi phasa sakta hai. But filhal aise kisi system holder ke chances Kam hai. Summit arc me aur idea lag sakta hai.

Or ye baat aapke liye nahi hai ye baat un reader keliye jo bolte hai ki wolfi time per update nahi deta unhe koi update 202 or 203 ka difference dikhao or ek baat writer ki skill ko samman dena sikho or unhe time do thoda naki unhe di motivet karo

Ye toh laga hi rahega. Use control nahi kar sakte.

 

[Werewolf]

Werewolf sir aapne har chiz ki back story or details ne aapki story ko char chand laga diye hai isi liye aapke har update per comment dillse likhta hu
Really appreciate you sir

Thanks a lot for the big revo. Aise hi saath bane rehne ka.