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silently pad raha tha, lekin tum bahut achcha likh rahe ho, ab ye naye naam ke piche vo kon hai jo mujhe jaanta haiArey bhai!?Ye kaise hua?
Itne saalo baad...! Mujhe toh laga tha ab na aaoge. Ab swastha kaise hai?
Thanks!silently pad raha tha, lekin tum bahut achcha likh rahe ho,
Matlab?ab ye naye naam ke piche vo kon hai jo mujhe jaanta hai

matlab, werewolf tumhari id yahan hai mere khayal se xp pe kuch aur thi, aur haan last episode system ke baare mein hona chahiye, usne veer ko kyun chuna?Thanks!
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Bhai Kahna To Bahut Kuchh Chahta Hu But Ab Jaane Do Waise Ho Sake To Apni Stories Complete Kar Sakte Hai Kya It's A Humble Request.matlab, werewolf tumhari id yahan hai mere khayal se xp pe kuch aur thi, aur haan last episode system ke baare mein hona chahiye, usne veer ko kyun chuna?

ab likhne ka dil nahi karta, kabhi agar hua to likhunga lekin Safar ek lambi aur tense kahani hai chute hue bhi dar lagta hai, dekhte hain kya hoga aageBhai Kahna To Bahut Kuchh Chahta Hu But Ab Jaane Do Waise Ho Sake To Apni Stories Complete Kar Sakte Hai Kya It's A Humble Request.![]()
Sorry Bhai main story ko koi naya mod nahi dy raha bas maan main sawal aya is liyah poch liyah. By the way thank you confusion dur krne k liyahArey bhai...Tum kaha ki kaha le gaye kahani. Maine pehle bhi bataya tha ki jitne system holders ek baar bann gaye uske baad dobaara se nahi bante. 30 system holder the total shuruat me. Jinme se 14 marr chuke hai aur 16 bache hai. Pranajal ko shuru se hi system nahi Mila toh abhi kaise mil sakta hai? Koi bhi Naya system holder nahi bann sakta ab. Jo pehle se hai wahi rahenge.
Nahi!Kya koi aur tarike se system holder jitni ya use zada power aa sakti koi aur power hai ?
Sudhar jao ab.Extremely sorry for not being able to comment on this masterpiece...![]()
Revo to kabhi nahi bhoolne ka.Actually main weddings me busy thi... nd then the work... Aaj hi 178 nd 179 padhi hu... It was Sunday so I was finally free after such a long time. Nd fir socha tha ki ek saath hi poora review dungi end me...
Arey...! You are being too modest. I wanted to give you guys the best. And, that's what I always aim for... I'm glad you guys enjoyed it.I am in no position to comment anything about the action scenes. I mean jo insan aisi imagination hi nhi kar sakta (me) wo iske liye kya tareef kare ab? Everything was out of the imagination for me... It took me by surprise... had me on the edges... nd made me shiver several times.
Actually, that's what enthralls me the most. I'm a sucker for romance + action fantasies. For me, it's like an aphrodisiac. And, that's why it's one of the reasons I tend to write such plots. Guess, I'm not the only one who enjoys it.Now, let me say some words which I couldn't in the last few episodes....
For me... Delving into the literary world crafted by Werewolf is akin to embarking on an exhilarating rollercoaster ride through the depths of human emotion and the heights of suspense....
Not only you are an expert in keeping your readers in suspense but you also know how to make each episode as thrilling as possible. And, then the blend of the romance... Ufff![]()
Is Erica catching your attention now?This part is just killing me...Ava Garofano nd now even Erica... Uff.. 3 beauties wants the same man... I'm rooting for Ava but but but... Erica in this episode
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Exactly!Her pictures ... The way she looked at Veer. That's the look you give when you fall for someone my girl...
Jalwe hai apne Veer ke.Veer has already made his way into her heart. Lekin competition bahut tough h...There's also Kaera Ava Garofano Sonia nidhi ma'am... Nd if there would be incestuous relationships then we have Arohi kavya tejal nd may be even bhumika... God... So many beauties...
Lekin, iss muqaam tak pahuchne ke liye bhi usne bahut kuch kiya hai. Bahut kuch daav pe lagaya hai. Khud ko bahut tapaaya hai. Tab, jaake woh yaha par pahucha hai. Zahir hai ki ab ladkiyaan uske prati rujhaan rakhengi hi.Probably the first female system holder with negative intentions. Now, that makes things interesting.Kisi ne imagine hi nhi kia hoga ki itne pehle se game khela jaa rha tha... Rebecca Elsher madam ji kisi toofan ki tarah story me aayi h... Her presence with the hat...![]()
Ye kya logic hua?Is she old?She addressed Divya as mrs. Divya... I'm assuming she is older than Divya or maybe I could be wrong.
'Uncanny ability'.... I like it.Werewolf has this uncanny ability to keep readers guessing at every turn... Just when you think you've unraveled the mysteries, he deftly introduces an insane plot twist that leaves you gasping for breath.![]()
Thanks. It's the magic of writing style basically. My writing style changes according to the genre on which I write. This story demands the 'script' writing form which is nothing but the writing form in which dramas are written. For example, the dramas by Shakespeare. He used to use the script writing approach. It's good for the story having numerous characters.But it's not the heart-pounding thrills that makes this so captivating... It's the freaking blend of emotions and romances. I'm telling you... People may become a pro in writing fantasy based stories... Along with superpowers but when it comes to other aspects... Which is romance Majorly... Their writing starts lacking in those aspects.... A beautiful blend is only seen very rarely. And, this is one of those blends.
It's called the 'contrast setting.'Whether it's the shimmering tension between Ava and Veer or the chilling auraof the Cunning upcoming antagonist.
Of course. There's no doubt about it.And of course... Ava bhi Veer k saath Jaa rhi h... Are you hinting us a love quadrilateral??? Noooo I'm not prepared for this slow burn love![]()
Gotta catch'em all.Trinity will be assembled... The differences they have between them... A spark will be ignited... Nd Veer will be the reason for it... You are pulling my heartstrings by this plot setup...I'm rooting for Kaera... But ...Ava is there too... Nd Sonia... Nd then Erica... Nd Garofano... How can I choose one after having so many beautiful characters? That's a cheating...
When you realise that your author actually knows some things about the instruments and mechanisms used by professional writers.The freaking news report...
It felt like I was watching a news straight from the BBC channel. The English part... Was a chef's kissSuch profound usage of the English. Aisa lag rha tha ki koi reporter hi bol rhi h...
Now, you said the right word. 'Symmetry.' Yesss!!!The linkageWe finally now know... Garofano ne Veer ke face k baare me wo sab kyu kaha tha... She was a surgeon after all .. she loves symmetry... Veer's face is like a perfect symmetry for her... She's hot and sassy too.
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Garofano has weird love for symmetrical things. Being a surgeon she gives utmost respect to it. Veer's face is like a perfectly symmetrical shape.And, what do you have to say about the new unknown guy?Rebecca is one hell of a problem here...
The fact she tried to hypnotize Veer in the past. And top it over the fact that she knew she might fail so she came directly to ensnare Veer again ..uff...
Nobody is bounding you to not love the villains.Nd the fact that she knew all along what may transpire... But then comes the unknown guy again... The one who made this plan... Sheeshh... Already looking like a kingPlz Don't make hot villains... I'm weak to them. I may start liking him...
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Go for it.
Ye toh hona hi hai.Now I have a complaint tooo... Business arc bahut hi mild guzra tha... So plz plz plz... This time... I want a full on focus on nidhi ma'am, Arohi, kaera and Sonia... I won't hear any excuses...Kavya ka to chalo humne unki vacation me thoda dekh lia tha... But tejal, Arohi were casted aside... We now want them in full limelight... Again... Wishing a safe and happy trip... We'll be waiting for the new arc to start... Keep writing sir...
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Sabhi limelight se dur Gaye characters iss baar limelight me rahenge. Thank you so much for this wonderful revo.
Aur, revo deti rehne ka. Kam se kam presence hi jata jaane ka. Taaki, pata laga rahe ki padh toh rahi ho kam se kam.