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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,451 82.6%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.5%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 240 13.7%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 38 2.2%

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matlab, werewolf tumhari id yahan hai mere khayal se xp pe kuch aur thi, aur haan last episode system ke baare mein hona chahiye, usne veer ko kyun chuna?
Bhai Kahna To Bahut Kuchh Chahta Hu But Ab Jaane Do Waise Ho Sake To Apni Stories Complete Kar Sakte Hai Kya It's A Humble Request. :respekt:
 

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Arey bhai... :redface: Tum kaha ki kaha le gaye kahani. Maine pehle bhi bataya tha ki jitne system holders ek baar bann gaye uske baad dobaara se nahi bante. 30 system holder the total shuruat me. Jinme se 14 marr chuke hai aur 16 bache hai. Pranajal ko shuru se hi system nahi Mila toh abhi kaise mil sakta hai? Koi bhi Naya system holder nahi bann sakta ab. Jo pehle se hai wahi rahenge.
Sorry Bhai main story ko koi naya mod nahi dy raha bas maan main sawal aya is liyah poch liyah. By the way thank you confusion dur krne k liyah ❣️
 
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Kya koi aur tarike se system holder jitni ya use zada power aa sakti koi aur power hai ?
Nahi! :angryno:
Aur, koi power nahi. Jo hai system ke zariye hi hai.
 
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Extremely sorry for not being able to comment on this masterpiece... 🙇🏻‍♀️
Sudhar jao ab. :angryno:
Actually main weddings me busy thi... nd then the work... Aaj hi 178 nd 179 padhi hu... It was Sunday so I was finally free after such a long time. Nd fir socha tha ki ek saath hi poora review dungi end me...
Revo to kabhi nahi bhoolne ka. :approve:
I am in no position to comment anything about the action scenes. I mean jo insan aisi imagination hi nhi kar sakta (me) wo iske liye kya tareef kare ab? Everything was out of the imagination for me... It took me by surprise... had me on the edges... nd made me shiver several times.
Arey...! You are being too modest. I wanted to give you guys the best. And, that's what I always aim for... I'm glad you guys enjoyed it.
Now, let me say some words which I couldn't in the last few episodes....

For me... Delving into the literary world crafted by Werewolf is akin to embarking on an exhilarating rollercoaster ride through the depths of human emotion and the heights of suspense....

Not only you are an expert in keeping your readers in suspense but you also know how to make each episode as thrilling as possible. And, then the blend of the romance... Ufff 🤌🤌🤌
Actually, that's what enthralls me the most. I'm a sucker for romance + action fantasies. For me, it's like an aphrodisiac. And, that's why it's one of the reasons I tend to write such plots. Guess, I'm not the only one who enjoys it. :D
This part is just killing me... 😭😭😭 Ava Garofano nd now even Erica... Uff.. 3 beauties wants the same man... I'm rooting for Ava but but but... Erica in this episode 🤌😭😭
Is Erica catching your attention now? :D
She's cute not gonna lie though...
Her pictures ... The way she looked at Veer. That's the look you give when you fall for someone my girl...
Exactly! :approve:
Veer has already made his way into her heart. Lekin competition bahut tough h... 😭 There's also Kaera Ava Garofano Sonia nidhi ma'am... Nd if there would be incestuous relationships then we have Arohi kavya tejal nd may be even bhumika... God... So many beauties...
Jalwe hai apne Veer ke. :cool2: Lekin, iss muqaam tak pahuchne ke liye bhi usne bahut kuch kiya hai. Bahut kuch daav pe lagaya hai. Khud ko bahut tapaaya hai. Tab, jaake woh yaha par pahucha hai. Zahir hai ki ab ladkiyaan uske prati rujhaan rakhengi hi.
Kisi ne imagine hi nhi kia hoga ki itne pehle se game khela jaa rha tha... Rebecca Elsher madam ji kisi toofan ki tarah story me aayi h... Her presence with the hat... 🥵🥵🤌
Probably the first female system holder with negative intentions. Now, that makes things interesting. :D
Is she old? 🤔 She addressed Divya as mrs. Divya... I'm assuming she is older than Divya or maybe I could be wrong.
Ye kya logic hua? :laugh:
I mean, Divya is already married. So, isn't it obvious to address her with the prefix 'Mrs.?'

Rebecca may or may not be elder than Divya. Who knows... :D
Werewolf has this uncanny ability to keep readers guessing at every turn... Just when you think you've unraveled the mysteries, he deftly introduces an insane plot twist that leaves you gasping for breath. 🥵
'Uncanny ability'.... I like it. :D Thanks a lot.
But it's not the heart-pounding thrills that makes this so captivating... It's the freaking blend of emotions and romances. I'm telling you... People may become a pro in writing fantasy based stories... Along with superpowers but when it comes to other aspects... Which is romance Majorly... Their writing starts lacking in those aspects.... A beautiful blend is only seen very rarely. And, this is one of those blends.
Thanks. It's the magic of writing style basically. My writing style changes according to the genre on which I write. This story demands the 'script' writing form which is nothing but the writing form in which dramas are written. For example, the dramas by Shakespeare. He used to use the script writing approach. It's good for the story having numerous characters.

Writing it like this...

Veer (glances) : Teju di! Mujhe aapse kuch kehna tha.

Tej (curiously) : Hmm? Kya Veer?

This is script form where you mention the character's name before their dialogues.

I added 'onomatopoeia' to it which created a distinctive style of my own. And, it won't be a stretch to say that I was the one who actually brought onomatopoeia in trend on this forum. Otherwise, people didn't even use to pay attention to it.

I was also the one who started quoting multiple comments to reply them in a single message. :D Otherwise, writers used to reply their readers one by one. It all came in change when I started doing it because of the numerous comments I had received on 'Akhir kyu? From hatred to love.'

Then, comes the novel form. The original form of writing. And, I personally adore this approach. I'll show you how it changes the reading experience. It goes like this...

"Mujhe aapse kuch kehna tha, Teju di." Veer ne himmat kar ke uss se kaha.

"Hmm?" Tej ki bauhe jigyasa me upar uthi. "Kya, Veer?"

You see the difference? :D This approach is more suited for limited number of characters. This approach is actually a little bit harder than the script writing approach. And, I know it both. I can write in both of these in any language. Be it Hindi, English or even Hinglish.

Kuch zyada hi gyaan pel diya. :D I'll wrap up.
Whether it's the shimmering tension between Ava and Veer or the chilling aura 🥶 of the Cunning upcoming antagonist.
It's called the 'contrast setting.' :declare:
And of course... Ava bhi Veer k saath Jaa rhi h... Are you hinting us a love quadrilateral??? Noooo I'm not prepared for this slow burn love 😭😭😭
Of course. There's no doubt about it. :D Ava is coming to Mumbai. What do you expect? Obviously, the trinity will be assembled. Whether they will reconcile or continue the fued. Only time will tell...
Trinity will be assembled... The differences they have between them... A spark will be ignited... Nd Veer will be the reason for it... You are pulling my heartstrings by this plot setup... 😭 I'm rooting for Kaera... But ...Ava is there too... Nd Sonia... Nd then Erica... Nd Garofano... How can I choose one after having so many beautiful characters? That's a cheating...
Gotta catch'em all. :yes2:
The freaking news report... :bow:
It felt like I was watching a news straight from the BBC channel. The English part... Was a chef's kiss 💋🤌 Such profound usage of the English. Aisa lag rha tha ki koi reporter hi bol rhi h...
When you realise that your author actually knows some things about the instruments and mechanisms used by professional writers. :cool2:
The linkage :applause: We finally now know... Garofano ne Veer ke face k baare me wo sab kyu kaha tha... She was a surgeon after all .. she loves symmetry... Veer's face is like a perfect symmetry for her... She's hot and sassy too. 🥵 🥵 🥵
Now, you said the right word. 'Symmetry.' Yesss!!! :approve: Garofano has weird love for symmetrical things. Being a surgeon she gives utmost respect to it. Veer's face is like a perfectly symmetrical shape.
Rebecca is one hell of a problem here... 🥶
The fact she tried to hypnotize Veer in the past. And top it over the fact that she knew she might fail so she came directly to ensnare Veer again .. 🥶 uff...
And, what do you have to say about the new unknown guy? :D
Nd the fact that she knew all along what may transpire... But then comes the unknown guy again... The one who made this plan... Sheeshh... Already looking like a king 🥵 Plz Don't make hot villains... I'm weak to them. I may start liking him... 😭
Nobody is bounding you to not love the villains. :laugh: Go for it. :goteam:
Now I have a complaint tooo... Business arc bahut hi mild guzra tha... So plz plz plz... This time... I want a full on focus on nidhi ma'am, Arohi, kaera and Sonia... I won't hear any excuses... 😤😤 Kavya ka to chalo humne unki vacation me thoda dekh lia tha... But tejal, Arohi were casted aside... We now want them in full limelight... Again... Wishing a safe and happy trip... We'll be waiting for the new arc to start... Keep writing sir... 💋 :heart:
Ye toh hona hi hai. :D Ye koi kehne ki baat hi nahi. :nana: Sabhi limelight se dur Gaye characters iss baar limelight me rahenge. Thank you so much for this wonderful revo. :five: Aur, revo deti rehne ka. Kam se kam presence hi jata jaane ka. Taaki, pata laga rahe ki padh toh rahi ho kam se kam. :?:
Keep supporting. ✨
 
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