Hum abhi jungle mein aye hi the ki jeet bola chl bta apni bottle.kahan chupai hai
Mainne bottle dhoondi aur nikal.kar peg lagane lagee
Abhi ja ek.do.peg hi lagaye the ki jeet bola.
Jeet... Teri priya didi se ladai jhagda huya hai.kya
Main.. shocked ho geya
Main.. nhi yr esa to kuch nhi huya kyu kya baat ho gai.
Jeet.. kuch nhi didi bola ke kabir ke sath mattt raha karo acha ladka nhi hai.
Main.. jeet ki baat sun kar soch mein.padh geya apne past ke bare mein sochne lag gaya.
Jeet.. abe gadhe ke.lund jab bhi main kuch phoch ta hoon sala lund jaisa muh bna kar chup ho jata hai abe baat kya hai.
Main... Kuch nhi yr tu dekh le apni didi ki baat maan.le
Jeet... Abe didi ka kya woh to bolti.rehti.hai
Ab didi ke kehne par main tujhe nhi chodd sskda
Tu to jaan hai.meri tere bina to mera lund soona ho jata hai.
Main... Gaand maronga teri woh bhi petrol.daal.kar bsdk
Jeet.. na re petrol.bhot.mehnga hai.
Hum ase hi baat krne lage jis de mahoul thoda halka huya.
Jeet ne kaffi daro.pee li.thi woh abhi set sa hoker wohi jungle.main betha betha so geya.
Mujhe kuch khass assr nhi hota tha daro.ka lekin yeh nhi ki bilkul bhi nhi hota tha.
Main abhi uth kar susu krne jungle ki aur chla geya abhi pent.mein se lund ki minat kr raha tha ki bahr ayo pisab karna hai ki tabhi.
Koi ladki wohi pass se gurzri or mujhe boli.
Ladki.... tumhe yahan nhi ana chahiye tha
Woh.log tuhme maar denge.
Sab mile huye hain sab sazis kr rahe hai tujhe maarne ki
Main.. kon ho tum kon sazis kr raha hai or meri kisi.ke.sath kya dusmani main to yahan par bulata bhi kisi.ko.
Ladki... Tumhe maloom chl jayega or dusmani to bhut purani hai tujse unki.
Main.. lekin meine te kuch kiya nhi kisi ke sath fir mere sath esa kyu.
Ladki... Koi baat nhi jab maroge tab tumhe sab btaa denge woh.
Main... Lund pakad.le.mera bekaar mein bakws kiye jaa rahi hai daro.pee hai kya tune
Ladki... Gusse mein mujhe lga teri help kr deni.chahiye lekin nhi tujje to.marna hi chahiye.
Yeh bol.kr ladki nikl gai.
Main daro.ke.nashe mein tha socha sla veham hoga
Main apne dost jeet ke pass aya bola uth.be
Jeet.. kya hua be gaand dene ka dil kr raha kyaa.
Main.. abe sale teri gaand maronga chl ghr ko chlte hai.
Jeet.. chl be kal ko mela bhi hai.
Main .. main nhi jane wala mele mein.
Jeet ...abe chl te hain main tujhe lene ayonga
Hum abhi ghr ki traf chl diye jeet ko oske ghr chodda aor main apne ghr
Ghr mein mom thi unse kuch khass baat nhi hui na hi mom ne mujjhe bulaya
Raat ka time tha ki socha bahr ghoom lo
Gaon mein sab jldi so jate hain
Main abhi ghoom hi raha tha ki palvi dikhi merr ko.
Woh chepp kar kahi jaa rahi thi
Pehle to meine ignore kiya lekin bad mein soch peecha krta hoon sala kya pta koi raaz khul jaye
Palvi sab ki nigabacha kar moter ki traff jaa rahi thi.
Main bhi pishe hi chl raha tha
Palvi ke pass gaddi aker ruki or oh jungle ki aor chl di
Pehle to Maine socha jane de lekin jab dekha ke gaddi ke jungle phouchne se pehle hi main shortcut se jungle pehle phouch jaonga to main ne bhagg kr jungle ki aor ghuss geya lekin mujhe kya pta koi mera hi intzaar kr raha hai
iss larke ka attitude hi samajh nahin aa raha hain... har taraf isse danger signs dikh rahe hain lekin ignore kiye jaa raha hain... jab chachi ne jhooth bola toh isne ek baar bhi chachi se poocha kyun nahin kee usne kab dekha aur kiske saath dekha... dost ko jigri bolta hain lekin usse baat bhi chhupa raha hain... aur jab isse kisi bhi baat se farq nahin parta toh phir ek larki kee beijjati kyun sah raha tha... ek thee toh jaye haathi ke ga##d mein aise hi kuchh bhi bol ke chali jayegi...
aisa lag raha hain jaise yeh kisi hadse ka wait kar raha hain... rota hain family pyar nahin deti.. .arre iss toh pehle se hi pata tha yeh baat kee wo pyar nahin karte hain toh phir ab naya kya tha... jo ro raha hain...
aur aise kitne secrets hain jo past se hain iske jo kisi ko na maloom... aur jab shab bolte hain naukri karne ko toh phir padhai poori karne ke baad ghar kyun aaya wapas... kya gaon mein jobs kee bharmar hain jo wapas aaaya hain...
waise thora pace jyada hain isse lagta hain kee asal kahani kuchh aur hain yeh bas build up hain isse apne ghar se door jaane ke liye... lagta hain dutkara jayega jordar tarike se akhir iski harkate hee aisi hain... shiwaye daaru ke isse kuchh soojhta hee na hain... yeh janta hain kee koi isse badnam karna chahta hain marna chahta hain toh phir yeh kyun nahin saawdhan hain...
ek larki ne sawdhan kiya usse sawal jawab karne ke bajaye usko hi dutkar ke bhaga raha hain... ab aise mein kuchh bura bhi hoga toh kya baal ukharega...
anyway plotting interesting hain... likh badhiya rahe ho thori speed pe break maro scenes bari teji se flash ho rahe hain aur abhi tak base nahin bana hain...