Incest Albela

[DEVIL MAXIMUM]

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[A.A.G.]

Bahot time baad forum pe aaya toh yeh albela story dikhi aur pichhli story ki yaad aagayi..isliye yeh story padhi maine..!! Writer ne achha try kiya hai story ko alag dhang se pesh karne ka..naye characters bhi add kiye hai jaise chandni, chandni ki maa, king aur bhi hai..!! Chandni aur uski maa ne bahot pyaar diya hai abhay ko aur story me ab abhay wapas bhi apne gaon aachuka hai..chandni pehle abhay se dur rahi lekin baad me usko pyaar karne lagi iska reason bataya nahi gaya..lagta hai abhay ka past jankar woh badal gayi hogi..!! Shanaya madam ka character bhi bahot achha hai..woh bhi abhay se pyaar karti hai aur woh bhi college me principal bankar aagayi hai..chandni ka alag hi Mission chal raha hai..abhay ka apna alag hi mission hai..lag raha hai sab connected hi hoga..!!
Ab aate hai main characters par abhay, sandhya aur payal..!! Pehle payal ki baat kare toh pichhli kahani ki Tarah hi yaha bhi woh abhay ki diwani hai aur usko pehchan bhi li..woh abhay ki life me ek thehrav layegi..!! Sandhya ne bahot sari galtiya ki hai iss story me bhi aur usko saja toh bhugatni hi padegi..abhay usko easily maaf nahi karega..aur karna bhi nahi chahiye..story ka main theme hi yahi hai bete ki ma ke liye nafrat..sandhya ne raman ke sath muh kaala kiya abhay ke upar Julm kiye bhale anjane me kiye lekin koi maa agar khud ki aulad ke sath aisa behave karegi toh aulad bagawat karegi hi..!! Writer achha likh rahe hai aap lekin story ka main theme hi aap miss kar rahe ho jiski wajah se hum purani story se connect huye the..main focus abhay aur sandhya pe hi hona chahiye..kaise abhay apni ma ko saja deta hai aur kaise sandhya apni galtiya sudharti hai..maafi toh usko nahi milne wali..!!
Yaar maine kuchh comments padhe chandni se related abhi toh socha apni bhi raay rakh di jaaye..!! Waise sach kahu toh muze iss raj ke character me itna interest hai hi nahi..abhay itna strong ban ke aaya hai ki woh sab khud hi kar sakta hai..raj ke character ki wajah se kahani thodi bhataki huyi lagi..!! Aur rahi chandni ki baat toh aapne abhay aur chandni ka bond itna achha dikhaya hai ki mai pehle se soch raha tha ki payal ke sath sath chandni bhi heroine hogi abhay ki..lekin aakhri update me kuchh alag hi padh liya..raj kaha se bich me aagaya pata nahi..aur yeh mai story incest hai isliye nahi bol raha..maine jis hisab se story padhi uss hisab se bol raha hu aur main baat chandni sagi behen toh hai nahi abhay ki toh incest ka yaha sawal hi nahi uthata isliye payal jaise kahani me heroine hai waise chandni bhi abhay ki heroine ban sakti hai..baki yaar aapki story hai aapki marji..bas kahani main characters pe focused rahe toh achha hai..!!
Waise bhai mai time milne par yeh story aage bhi padhunga aur reply bhi dunga..achha likh rahe ho..!!

 

[paand]

DEVIL MAXIMUM dosti apni jagah hai aur story ka basis point apni jagah hai isliye story ke basis point ko na bhule humble request

 

[DEVIL MAXIMUM]

I wasn't really planning to read any story today! But it's been too long, and I think this is the 4th or 5th time you've asked me to read your story, so yeah, here I am starting your story

Story hindi me hai to main auto translator Use ker raha hu! Ache shabdon ka chunav kiya gaya hai to Visualize karna bhi kaafi easy hai, Unnecessary details per samay barbad nahi kiya hai ye ek achi baat hai.

My man have Tez tufani barish me uski aankhe nam hai lekin usko gaon ke baahir se kamra dikh raha hai Choti umar me uski aankhon ne bohat kuch daikh liya hai.....Bohat kuch


Bhabhi labar spotted

Basically you're trying to say ke train ke sabhi passengers

Spoiler

Asian mom's things Ab utne se to bhaaga nahi ho ga? Wo bhaaga kyu ke Maa chu-


Okay, I don't know ke aage kya ho ga! But i love मालती character for now, It's like ke paani me bhigo ker joote lag rahe hai



Behosh? Abhi confirm to hone do ke sach me bhaag gaya hai Chudte time behosh hona yaad nahi hota, Lekin bete ko dhoodhne ka time aya to behosh ho gayi? Huh, Ye torture karti kaise thi? Ya abhay he zyada lad me tha ke gaand per aik raipta usko hunter ki tarha lagta tha Sab se pehle hero ki gaand todni banti hai Bc, Sharingan hai to aise he maar de na sab ko


Ab tak to story sahi lagi hai! Ab tak? Ek he to update padha hai Anyways, first update me story ki building shuru ho gayi hai, Kuch saval hai aur kuch savalon ke spoiler de diye gye the, Ab kisne bataye yaad nahi lekin i blame Samar_Singh


Like i said sab se pehle hero ki gaand todne ka kaam shuru karna hai! Abhay se yaad aya, My friend AddiXtion Ye ju ho kya?

Ab ju ki gaaliya kisi aur abhay ko de sakta hu!


Kuch points miss kiye kyu ke translation ke baad review ke time sirf yaad ker ke points ko quote kiya hai! Lekin abhi ke liye sahi thi to hum aage padh sakte hai.


Update ko main 10 me se # number du ga


In the end story ke liye kuch kahu ga.

Spoiler

Chlo jan ke Khushi hue majak he sahi story read to ki aapne
Thanku

 

[paand]

Aur story sare confusion kamse kam kar do

 

[DEVIL MAXIMUM]

Bhai aap yaha apna time barbad kar rahe ho..aap kuchh bologe or ye sab sap ke uper gangup ho jayenge...mujhe hasi arahi hai jab log ise incest or adultery kah rahe hai ye nahi incest hai na adultery ye ek time wast story hai na koi direction hai na koi focus point, click bait hai ye story..aap apni story pe focus karo aap ki story bohot arousal hai KHAMOSHIYA, Maja deti hai. Kamal ki baat ye hai ki aap ki story or ye story dono themewise same hai but jaha aap ki story excite karti hai to wahi ye story bore, frustrate and time wast feel karati hai.

Bas yehi request hai ki aap apni story complete Karan jaroor ...asi kamal ki story complete honi hi chahiye.

Agar wo bhai saheb apna time barbaad ker rhe hai to aap kya ker rhe ho
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Kafi samajdar bande ho aap

 

[DEVIL MAXIMUM]

Bilkul sahi aur dono writer ke bahavior me bhi kafe fark hai ...ek taraf Khamoshiyan ka writer hai jo jyada bolta nhi sirf story per focus kerta hai ..sub se ache se baat kerta hai ....

Aur dusre taraf ye writer sahab hai ...jisko kuch bolo to bharak jayege...uper se iske sath kuch aur aaker gangup ker lenge ...

Per ye luser Bhai ke sath esaa nhi ker sakte kyu ke ye banda bahot pouche huwe chij hai ...app iss story per inka phala comment dekh lo ...usme luser Bhai ne isee criticise Kiya thaa aur yee banda barak gyaa thaa ...per uske baad jo isko hate comment Ane suru huwe ....lambe lambe hate comment Ane lage thee....ye benda pura demorliase ho gya thaa...


Aap abhi bhi luser Bhai ka pichla comment dekh sekte ho iss story per ....jisko legta hai me jhuth bol rhaa hu

Jaha tak mai janta hoo to aapse meri kabhi bat hue nahi hai meri to mai aap per kab bhadak gaya
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Ek Doctor or ek Medical Store ke bnde me kya fark hai pata hai nahi hoga to karlo pata

 

[DEVIL MAXIMUM]

Kahani ki catagory ek ishara matr hai... Use ek bandhan mat banao .. chudai kisi incest ya adultery ki sima me nahi bandhi ja sakti

Bus is bat ko pade likhe samjdar log samj jaay SIR ji

 

[DEVIL MAXIMUM]

Iss abhay se mera koi lena dena nahi.... Aur witer sahab pehle hi mujhe bhali buri suna chuke hai....

Yekeen nahi ho raha toh neeche dekho post par jaakr jaha mera reply bhi mill jayega kya likha tha...

Bat to pte ki khee aapne bhai
Badi mehnat lagi hogi aapko comment dudne me
Sath me Message ka bhi screenshot yaha de dete aap use Q chor ia aapne

 

[DEVIL MAXIMUM]

Ati uttam mind blowing update bhai Raj yani apun ko chandni pasand aagai, or sala apun ko pata hi nai? Waise police wali kadak hoti hai
Chief ne xhandnise kaha hai abhay se sach nikal Wane ko, perkaise? Ye dekhne wali baat hogi awesome update again and superb writing DEVIL MAXIMUM bhai

Thank You Sooo Mucchhhh Raj_sharma bhai
Or ab kya he khoo update ke leye is update ke bad kafi log Raj se jal rhe hai aapko dikh rha ho ga comment me
Congratulations bhai

 

[DEVIL MAXIMUM]

Samar bhai ne sab valid points already de diye hai aapko Devil bhai

Ha sahi hai