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Hotttttttttt update
dudh ke chakkar me bahot seduction de diye
bina kuch kiye hi pani aa gya


to kya savita ka dudh pi payega monu aaj ya dudh se kuch jyada hi payega
Bahut Bahut Dhanyawad R_Raj Bhai, aapke Shaandaar sabd hamesha hi mujhe protsahit karte hai

Agla Update es baar thodi alag kamukta leke aane wala hai

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baki Maa (Maalti) es samay kiya kar rahi hai ye toh aap jante hai

👆भाई यह बात मुझे कुछ समझ नहीं आई मालती क्या कर रही है माफ करना कुछ दिनों से स्टोरी पढ़ नहीं पा रहा हूं
Mitra Maa es samay kaha hai ye janne k liye aapko pichle kuch Update padne honge

Qki wo cheez aise batane mein maza nahi aayega, jab aap padenge tabhi uska anand le payenge
 
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Kon sa ai hai bhai
Current Update ka link har page pe uper hi tagg kar rakha hai, aap padiye aur apne anmol vichar mujhe jarur bataiyega

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Waps Savita pe Chalte hai..

Savita apna chehra uthati hai toh use ektuk uske blouse ki ghati se nazar aati uski badi badi aadhi se jada nangi ho chuki chuchiyon pe uske bete saman bhatije ki nazren jami hui milti hai.. ek gardai aurat ko koi jawan ladka aise dekhega toh uski yoni toh bhagawat ka bigul bajayegi hi na

Savita ab Monu ko dekh rahi thi, jaha wo ab bhi kisi bache saman ektuk apni badi Maa ki badi badi chuchiyon ko aise dekh raha tha maano jaise use uska pasandida khilona dikh gaya ho.. Jisse wo pure jeevan bhar khelna pasand karega

Paseene se chamakti hui bhari aur badi badi lagbhag aadhi se jada nazar aati un Chuchiyon ne Monu k astitv ko hila diya tha, jiska asar razai mein ek bada sa dhire dhire banta hua wo tambu tha jiske bare mein pakke taur pe likh sakta hu khud Monu bhi nahi janta hoga

Monnu toh ektuk apni dono aankhon ko failye hue bas us kamuk nazaraye mein khoya hua tha.. Uska munh aise khula hua tha maano uska bas chale toh un chuchiyon ko apne munh mein bhar le
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Savita k jism mein ajeeb si garmi bharne lagi thi Monu ki us nazron k karan.. Use aisa mehsus hota hai jaise uske badan mein chitiya chalne lagi aur use ajeeb si kasmakas mehsus hoti hai.. Par wo apna kabu banaye rakhti hai aur muskura k kehti hai
“Uth gaya mera Bacha..”

Monu ko toh jaise jhatka laga, wo chah toh raha tha.. Par chah k bhi uski aankhein us nazare ko dekhne se khud ko rok nahi pa rahi thi.. aur yahi cheez Savita k dil ki dhadkan ko tez karne lagi thi

Savita- (Na jane q uska gala sukhne laga tha) Kiya hua Monu.. kiya dekh raha hai?
Savita ne ye dekhne waali baat bahut hi dheemi aawaz mein kahi thi, maano jaise wo cha hi nahi rahi thi ki Monu wo sune.. Par Monu jawab deta hai qki es baar use hosh aat hai..
“Doodh…..”

Savita ek pal k liye samajh nahi paati wo kiya bole, qki kahi na kahi ek jawan ladke se ye sabd sunkar use acha toh laga tha

Monu jaldi se apni galti ko sudhare ki koshish karta hai
“Mera matlab ki Doodh.. Nahi wo.. main keh raha tha ki wo.. Doodh.. Nahi nahi nahi wo.. Doodh”

Savita Monu ko aise haklate hue dekh k apni khushi aur hasi chupa nahi paati aur has padti hai, waise bhi ek jawan ladka es umar mein bhi agar uski jawani k chalte apne sabdo pe kabu na rakh paaye toh eska toh yahi matlab hua na.. ki uski jawani dhalne ki jagah aur nikhar rahi hai

Savita- (Haste hue) Kiya doodh.. Doodh laga rakha, kahi peena toh nahi hai na

Monu- (Ab bhi apne pairon k beeche khade ho chuke us bhayankar naag k bare mein nahi janta tha) Ji… Badi.. Maaa… Doodh peena hai.. Aapka.. Mera matlab wo ki..

Savita- (Beech mein hi bol padti hai) Par peena kise hai.. tujhe ya... ?

Apni aankhon se eshare karte hue Monu ko uske khade hatiyar k bare mein bata hi deti, jiska gyan hote hi Monu jaldi se razai ko aise us jagah pe khichta hai ki wo bada sa tambu nazar aana band ho jaye.. Par na jane kaise aaj kal uska wo tambu pehle se shakt hota ja raha tha

Savita- (Apni hasi chupate hue aage kehti hai) Acha phir ruk main tere liye Haldi wala doodh le aati hu

Monu- (Use khud nahi pata chalta ki kaise wo sabd uske munh se nikal pade) Kiska Doodh hoga.. ?

Par jab tak use apni galti ka ehsas hota hai, use Savita k sabd apne kaano mein sunai pad jaate hai
“Ab Maalti toh hai nahi yaha.. toh mera hi.. mera matlab gaay ka hi hoga na”

Monu ko Savita k sabdon mein ek ras sa nazar aata hai aur ab tak wo khud pe bhi kabu pa chuka tha.. esliye dhire se muskura k kehta hai
“Maa nahi hai toh kiya hua.. Aap bhi toh meri Badi Maa ho”

Savita k chehre pe muskaan khil uthti hai, aur muskura k kehti hai
“Ha par ab jaise teri Maa pila sakti hai.. Waise toh nahi pila sakti na mein

Esliye jab tak Maalti nahi aa jati, tujhi Gaay k doodh se ki kaam chalana padega”

Monu 'Savita' ki bina pallu wali chuchiyon ki ghati ko ektuk dekhte hue muskura k kehta hai
“Tyagi Chacha ne kaha tha.. Mujhe taqat k liye sudh cheeze hi khani chahiye, ab gaay waale doodh mein milawat nikli toh

Mujhe toh aisi halat mein Taqat wala hi doodh Chahiye”

Savita, Monu ki ab bhi jami hui nazron aur uske sabdon ko sunkar muskura k kehti ha

“Bas kar… kha hi jayega kya?”

Jise sunkar Monu k muh se anayas hi nikal padta hai
“Ye toh peene ki cheez hai…”

Savita ne muskurate hue jhoota sa ghussa dikhate hue kaha
“Kya kaha?”

Waise wo ab bhi theek usi avastha mein bistar k theek samne neeche jameen pe baithi hui thi, aur wo apne gir chuke Pallu ko wapas se sambhalne ki tanik bhi chaista nahi kar rahi thi

Monu ko ehsaas hota hai ki kahi wo kuch jada hi toh nahi bol gaya hai, waise ye sayad ek prakar se samman hi tha.. warna aise toh Savita uske aand tak chus chuki hai
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Reference - Part #01 👇
Update #22 - Page No. 154 - Badi Maa... mera nikalne wala hai
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Monu jaldi se bigadti hui baat ko sambhalte hue

“Doodh… Doodh.. mera matlab wo agar doodh mil jata toh sahi hota na Badi Maa

Maine suna hai Doodh peene se taqat aati hai… bas wo bina malawat ka hona Chahiye”
Monu apni baat toh sudharta hai par uske khade lund ka kiya jo us razai mein tambu banaye hue tha, esliye uske sabd ek baar phir se apna rasta saree k andar jane wale mood pe mud hi jata hai

Savita ko bhi in baaton mein purn ras milne laga tha, sayad esiliye uski saree k andar kamuk nadi ka bahav dikhne laga tha
“Acha bina milawat ka… chahiye”

Monu ko yakeen ho gaya tha ki uski Badi Maa uski baat ka bura nahi maan rahi hai, esliye wo purn shararat se aage kehta hai

“Haan… bina milawat wala hoga toh zyada acha rahega…

wo kiya hai ki.. abhi kamjori zyada hai toh..”

Savita muskurate hue apne dono hathon ko peeche jameen pe tikhate hue apni badi badi Chuchiyon ko aur uper ki aur uthaye hue apne pairon ko faila deti hai.. Jis karan uski saree uske gehua rang k kamuk ghutno tak uper sarak jaati hai, ab nazara hi samne ka kuch aisa tha ki bechare Monu ki razai mein uska hatiyar joro se bhukamp laane lagta hai
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Savita ki parkhi nazren bhi us tambu k hite hue dekh leti hai, esliye wo muskura k apni nazron ko wahi tikate hue kehti hai

“Dekh k toh nahi lag raha hai.. ki koi kamjori hai?”

Monu ko samajhte dair nahi lagta ki uski Badi Maa kiya dekh rahi hai.. Aur konsi kamjori ki baat kar rahi hai, wo khud hi apne pairon ko aur ache se faila deta hai jisse uska wo tambu kuch jada hi bada nazar aane lagta hai, jise dekh k ek pal k liye toh Savita ko aisa lagta hai ki kahi uske pairon k beech uski kaali ghataon mein varsha ritu ka aagman na ho jaye


Monu bhi waise apne hatiyar ki es nayi taqat se thoda hairan hi tha, qki aaj se pehle wo kabhi itna pareshan nahi karta tha.. Jitna ki ab uske hosh mein aane k baad use kar raha hai

Monu apne Tau ji ki Patni aur apni Badi Maa ki maashal janghon ki aur aise dekhta hai maano prathana kar raha ho ki ek hawa ka jhonka aaye aur wo saree purn uper tak uth jaye

“Aapke saamne toh ache-ache kamzor pad jaate hai... Badi Maa… “
Monu muskurate hue aage kehta hai, aur phir apni Badi k us anokhe tarah se baithne k karan uski badi badi chuchiya jo maano bas blouse ko phad dena cha rahi ho unki aur dekhte hue aage kehta hai

“Esliye agar bina milawat wala doodh piunga toh kamjori jaldi jayegi, aur agar aapko meri jaurat padi toh main kamjor bhi nahi padunga”

Savita muskurate hue apne dono hathon ko jameen pe tikaaye hue apne seene ko aur uper ki aur taan deti hai aur muskura k kehti hai
“Tujhe dekh k lag toh nahi raha hai.. ki tu jara bhi kamjor padne wala hai”

Monu- (Muskurate hue) ha wo toh hai.. Par pehle se tayyari jaruri hai na..”

Savita, Monu ki baat pe muskuraye bina nahi reh paati

“Baatein toh teri theek hain waise…

Par ab Gaon mein bina milawat ka doodh milna itna asan kaha……. Beta”
Savita apni baat kehte hue, Beta sabd pe jada hi jor deti hai aur phir aage kehti hai
“Waise Maalti janti hogi.. Ki bina milawat wala doodh kaha mil sakta hai”


Monu apni Maa ka naam aane pe bhi peeche nahi rehta aur muskura k kehta hai

“Ab Maa ko toh samay lag jayega, mausam bhi toh kitna geela geela hai..hai na.. Badi Maa”
Monu k sabdon mein aaya Geela sabd sunkar Savita ko ek pal k liye aisa lagta hai jaise wo sach mein uski saree k andar uski geeli hoti hui Yoni ko dekh pa raha ho

“Baat toh teri theek hai.. Aur doodh bhi tera peena jaruri hai”
Savita haste hue kehti hai, jispe Monu tapak se bol uthta hai

“Bina malawat wala badi Maa.. usi mein toh taqat hoti hai"

Savita Monu ki baat sunar ek angadi si jeti hai jisse ke pal ko toh blouse itna kas sa jata hai jaise lagta hai bas phat hi jayega, par Monu ki kismat itni achi bhi kaha.. Par wo nazara aisa tha ki us pal k liye Maalti ka beta saans lena jarur bhool gaya tha

Savita muskura k Monu ko khud k jism pe yu nazren jamaye hue dekh k kehti hai
“Waise tujhe pata ho toh mujhe bata de.. Tera taqat wala doodh kaha milega, main waha se le aungi”

Monu ki himmat ab uska sath chorne lagi thi, waise bhi Savita jaisi aurat ki garmi sambhalna har kisi k bas ki baat nahi hai, par wo bhi Maalti ka doodh pike bada hua hai.. Esliye itni asani se haar nahi maan sakta tha
“Bilkul pata hai badi Maa… par uske liye aapko yaha aana hoga mere pass, wo kiya hai ki jor se bolunga toh sabko pata lag jayega”

Ek pal k liye toh Savita ko laga jaise Monu sidha hi keh raha hai ki yaha aao mujhe aapka doodh peena hai, par uske khelte hue sabdon ko sunkar uska jism bhi kamukta se magn ho rah tha.. Savita muskurate hue

“Nahi nahi tum rehne hi do… waise bhi abhi bade kamjor ho tum..”
Savita ek pal k liye rukti hai aur phir aage kehti hai

“Mujhe nahi lagta tum Desi doodh hajam kar paoge”
Savita es baar Monu ko jawan dene ka koi moka nahi deti aur apni baat kehte hue muskura k apni jagah pe khadi ho jaati hai.. Aur sath hi sath apna Jhadu bhi utha leti hai

“Tu thoda aaram kar, main tere liye Haldi wala desi doodh laati hu”

Savita muskura k kamre k bahar jane lagti hai par darwaje pe pahuch k wo ek baar phir se razai mein us bade se tambu ko dekhne se khud ko rok nahi paati

Aur meri(Monu) nazren bhi es samay sirf aur sirf us desi doodh pe thi.. Jise pee k sach mein taqat aa jayegi


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Aasha karta hu yaha tak ka Update aap sabhi ko pasand aaya hoga..

Jaldi hi 'Update #20' k antim Drisya k sath wapas milte hai.. saal k antim din pe

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Ye hota hai ek amazing aur bada writer jo sirf sabdo se hi meri jaisi 48 saal ki Aurat ki bur bhi paniya deta hai
 

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Monu bhai agr aap sattu ka new year mai kuch kamuk sa koi sean likh de to maja hi aa jayega
Mai aap ko koi suggestion nhi dunga kyu ki aap khud ek bht acche writer ho agr ho sake to kuch likh dena bhai it's my humble request
Ha par kahani mein naye saal jaisa kuch nahi hai kyuki ye kahani alag samay mein chal rahi hai, par bade lekhak ji chahe toh kuch na kuch jarur kar sakte hai
 

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Sabse pehle toh aapke Anmol sabdo k liye Dhanyawaad

Main puri Koshish karunga ki Bhavisya k Update bhi aise hi ras se bhare ho aur aap sabhi ko pasand aaye

Savita ka doodh aur Harshita ki chut pe kon raaz karne wala hai ye aapko agle Update mein pata lagega

Aur pura wada hai ki wo puri tarah unexpected hoga


Aap kuch bhi soch le par wo nahi soch sakte 😉
Ehi to achhi baat lagti apki monu bhai,ham jo soch rahe he ap usko or jada kamuk or unexpected update post karke hame padne me maza dete he
Sabse pehle toh aapke Anmol sabdo k liye Dhanyawaad

Main puri Koshish karunga ki Bhavisya k Update bhi aise hi ras se bhare ho aur aap sabhi ko pasand aaye

Savita ka doodh aur Harshita ki chut pe kon raaz karne wala hai ye aapko agle Update mein pata lagega

Aur pura wada hai ki wo puri tarah unexpected hoga


Aap kuch bhi soch le par wo nahi soch sakte 😉
Ehi to achhi baat lagti apki monu bhai,ham jo soch rahe he ap usko or jada kamuk or unexpected update post karke hame padne me maza dete he , intezaar rahega agle update kya savita dud kon piyega or harshita ki chut kon jutai karega
 
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Ye hota hai ek amazing aur bada writer jo sirf sabdo se hi meri jaisi 48 saal ki Aurat ki bur bhi paniya deta hai
Itni badi baat kehne k liye aapka bahut bahut Dhanyabad 🙏Mam

Par yaha main bas kahani likhne ki koshish karta hu, bada writer jaisa kuch nahi hai mujhmein

Aapko Shetan Mam, mere khas Mitra Deepaksoni ji ki Story padni chahiye, uslnka level bahut hi acha hai

Baki aapke Prem aur sahyog k liye Dhanyawaad
 
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Ha par kahani mein naye saal jaisa kuch nahi hai kyuki ye kahani alag samay mein chal rahi hai, par bade lekhak ji chahe toh kuch na kuch jarur kar sakte hai
Main puri Koshish karunga ki Aisa kuch la saku, par abhi Jo aage k kuch Update hai unmein ye sambhav nahi par kuch na kuch jarur launga 🙏
 
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