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Monu bhai kya superb update diya h aap na iss barish nai to itni kamukta hi barish ki h Mahendra ke ghar mai ki kya boluWaps Savita pe Chalte hai..
Savita apna chehra uthati hai toh use ektuk uske blouse ki ghati se nazar aati uski badi badi aadhi se jada nangi ho chuki chuchiyon pe uske bete saman bhatije ki nazren jami hui milti hai.. ek gardai aurat ko koi jawan ladka aise dekhega toh uski yoni toh bhagawat ka bigul bajayegi hi na
Savita ab Monu ko dekh rahi thi, jaha wo ab bhi kisi bache saman ektuk apni badi Maa ki badi badi chuchiyon ko aise dekh raha tha maano jaise use uska pasandida khilona dikh gaya ho.. Jisse wo pure jeevan bhar khelna pasand karega
Paseene se chamakti hui bhari aur badi badi lagbhag aadhi se jada nazar aati un Chuchiyon ne Monu k astitv ko hila diya tha, jiska asar razai mein ek bada sa dhire dhire banta hua wo tambu tha jiske bare mein pakke taur pe likh sakta hu khud Monu bhi nahi janta hoga
Monnu toh ektuk apni dono aankhon ko failye hue bas us kamuk nazaraye mein khoya hua tha.. Uska munh aise khula hua tha maano uska bas chale toh un chuchiyon ko apne munh mein bhar le
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Savita k jism mein ajeeb si garmi bharne lagi thi Monu ki us nazron k karan.. Use aisa mehsus hota hai jaise uske badan mein chitiya chalne lagi aur use ajeeb si kasmakas mehsus hoti hai.. Par wo apna kabu banaye rakhti hai aur muskura k kehti hai
“Uth gaya mera Bacha..”
Monu ko toh jaise jhatka laga, wo chah toh raha tha.. Par chah k bhi uski aankhein us nazare ko dekhne se khud ko rok nahi pa rahi thi.. aur yahi cheez Savita k dil ki dhadkan ko tez karne lagi thi
Savita- (Na jane q uska gala sukhne laga tha) Kiya hua Monu.. kiya dekh raha hai?
Savita ne ye dekhne waali baat bahut hi dheemi aawaz mein kahi thi, maano jaise wo cha hi nahi rahi thi ki Monu wo sune.. Par Monu jawab deta hai qki es baar use hosh aat hai..
“Doodh…..”
Savita ek pal k liye samajh nahi paati wo kiya bole, qki kahi na kahi ek jawan ladke se ye sabd sunkar use acha toh laga tha
Monu jaldi se apni galti ko sudhare ki koshish karta hai
“Mera matlab ki Doodh.. Nahi wo.. main keh raha tha ki wo.. Doodh.. Nahi nahi nahi wo.. Doodh”
Savita Monu ko aise haklate hue dekh k apni khushi aur hasi chupa nahi paati aur has padti hai, waise bhi ek jawan ladka es umar mein bhi agar uski jawani k chalte apne sabdo pe kabu na rakh paaye toh eska toh yahi matlab hua na.. ki uski jawani dhalne ki jagah aur nikhar rahi hai
Savita- (Haste hue) Kiya doodh.. Doodh laga rakha, kahi peena toh nahi hai na
Monu- (Ab bhi apne pairon k beeche khade ho chuke us bhayankar naag k bare mein nahi janta tha) Ji… Badi.. Maaa… Doodh peena hai.. Aapka.. Mera matlab wo ki..
Savita- (Beech mein hi bol padti hai) Par peena kise hai.. tujhe ya... ?
Apni aankhon se eshare karte hue Monu ko uske khade hatiyar k bare mein bata hi deti, jiska gyan hote hi Monu jaldi se razai ko aise us jagah pe khichta hai ki wo bada sa tambu nazar aana band ho jaye.. Par na jane kaise aaj kal uska wo tambu pehle se shakt hota ja raha tha
Savita- (Apni hasi chupate hue aage kehti hai) Acha phir ruk main tere liye Haldi wala doodh le aati hu
Monu- (Use khud nahi pata chalta ki kaise wo sabd uske munh se nikal pade) Kiska Doodh hoga.. ?
Par jab tak use apni galti ka ehsas hota hai, use Savita k sabd apne kaano mein sunai pad jaate hai
“Ab Maalti toh hai nahi yaha.. toh mera hi.. mera matlab gaay ka hi hoga na”
Monu ko Savita k sabdon mein ek ras sa nazar aata hai aur ab tak wo khud pe bhi kabu pa chuka tha.. esliye dhire se muskura k kehta hai
“Maa nahi hai toh kiya hua.. Aap bhi toh meri Badi Maa ho”
Savita k chehre pe muskaan khil uthti hai, aur muskura k kehti hai
“Ha par ab jaise teri Maa pila sakti hai.. Waise toh nahi pila sakti na mein
Esliye jab tak Maalti nahi aa jati, tujhi Gaay k doodh se ki kaam chalana padega”
Monu 'Savita' ki bina pallu wali chuchiyon ki ghati ko ektuk dekhte hue muskura k kehta hai
“Tyagi Chacha ne kaha tha.. Mujhe taqat k liye sudh cheeze hi khani chahiye, ab gaay waale doodh mein milawat nikli toh
Mujhe toh aisi halat mein Taqat wala hi doodh Chahiye”
Savita, Monu ki ab bhi jami hui nazron aur uske sabdon ko sunkar muskura k kehti ha
“Bas kar… kha hi jayega kya?”
Jise sunkar Monu k muh se anayas hi nikal padta hai
“Ye toh peene ki cheez hai…”
Savita ne muskurate hue jhoota sa ghussa dikhate hue kaha
“Kya kaha?”
Waise wo ab bhi theek usi avastha mein bistar k theek samne neeche jameen pe baithi hui thi, aur wo apne gir chuke Pallu ko wapas se sambhalne ki tanik bhi chaista nahi kar rahi thi
Monu ko ehsaas hota hai ki kahi wo kuch jada hi toh nahi bol gaya hai, waise ye sayad ek prakar se samman hi tha.. warna aise toh Savita uske aand tak chus chuki hai
(Reference - Part #01
Update #22 - Page No. 154 - Badi Maa... mera nikalne wala hai)
Monu jaldi se bigadti hui baat ko sambhalte hue
“Doodh… Doodh.. mera matlab wo agar doodh mil jata toh sahi hota na Badi Maa
Maine suna hai Doodh peene se taqat aati hai… bas wo bina malawat ka hona Chahiye”
Monu apni baat toh sudharta hai par uske khade lund ka kiya jo us razai mein tambu banaye hue tha, esliye uske sabd ek baar phir se apna rasta saree k andar jane wale mood pe mud hi jata hai
Savita ko bhi in baaton mein purn ras milne laga tha, sayad esiliye uski saree k andar kamuk nadi ka bahav dikhne laga tha
“Acha bina milawat ka… chahiye”
Monu ko yakeen ho gaya tha ki uski Badi Maa uski baat ka bura nahi maan rahi hai, esliye wo purn shararat se aage kehta hai
“Haan… bina milawat wala hoga toh zyada acha rahega…
wo kiya hai ki.. abhi kamjori zyada hai toh..”
Savita muskurate hue apne dono hathon ko peeche jameen pe tikhate hue apni badi badi Chuchiyon ko aur uper ki aur uthaye hue apne pairon ko faila deti hai.. Jis karan uski saree uske gehua rang k kamuk ghutno tak uper sarak jaati hai, ab nazara hi samne ka kuch aisa tha ki bechare Monu ki razai mein uska hatiyar joro se bhukamp laane lagta hai
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Savita ki parkhi nazren bhi us tambu k hite hue dekh leti hai, esliye wo muskura k apni nazron ko wahi tikate hue kehti hai
“Dekh k toh nahi lag raha hai.. ki koi kamjori hai?”
Monu ko samajhte dair nahi lagta ki uski Badi Maa kiya dekh rahi hai.. Aur konsi kamjori ki baat kar rahi hai, wo khud hi apne pairon ko aur ache se faila deta hai jisse uska wo tambu kuch jada hi bada nazar aane lagta hai, jise dekh k ek pal k liye toh Savita ko aisa lagta hai ki kahi uske pairon k beech uski kaali ghataon mein varsha ritu ka aagman na ho jaye
Monu bhi waise apne hatiyar ki es nayi taqat se thoda hairan hi tha, qki aaj se pehle wo kabhi itna pareshan nahi karta tha.. Jitna ki ab uske hosh mein aane k baad use kar raha hai
Monu apne Tau ji ki Patni aur apni Badi Maa ki maashal janghon ki aur aise dekhta hai maano prathana kar raha ho ki ek hawa ka jhonka aaye aur wo saree purn uper tak uth jaye
“Aapke saamne toh ache-ache kamzor pad jaate hai... Badi Maa… “
Monu muskurate hue aage kehta hai, aur phir apni Badi k us anokhe tarah se baithne k karan uski badi badi chuchiya jo maano bas blouse ko phad dena cha rahi ho unki aur dekhte hue aage kehta hai
“Esliye agar bina milawat wala doodh piunga toh kamjori jaldi jayegi, aur agar aapko meri jaurat padi toh main kamjor bhi nahi padunga”
Savita muskurate hue apne dono hathon ko jameen pe tikaaye hue apne seene ko aur uper ki aur taan deti hai aur muskura k kehti hai
“Tujhe dekh k lag toh nahi raha hai.. ki tu jara bhi kamjor padne wala hai”
Monu- (Muskurate hue) ha wo toh hai.. Par pehle se tayyari jaruri hai na..”
Savita, Monu ki baat pe muskuraye bina nahi reh paati
“Baatein toh teri theek hain waise…
Par ab Gaon mein bina milawat ka doodh milna itna asan kaha……. Beta”
Savita apni baat kehte hue, Beta sabd pe jada hi jor deti hai aur phir aage kehti hai
“Waise Maalti janti hogi.. Ki bina milawat wala doodh kaha mil sakta hai”
Monu apni Maa ka naam aane pe bhi peeche nahi rehta aur muskura k kehta hai
“Ab Maa ko toh samay lag jayega, mausam bhi toh kitna geela geela hai..hai na.. Badi Maa”
Monu k sabdon mein aaya Geela sabd sunkar Savita ko ek pal k liye aisa lagta hai jaise wo sach mein uski saree k andar uski geeli hoti hui Yoni ko dekh pa raha ho
“Baat toh teri theek hai.. Aur doodh bhi tera peena jaruri hai”
Savita haste hue kehti hai, jispe Monu tapak se bol uthta hai
“Bina malawat wala badi Maa.. usi mein toh taqat hoti hai"
Savita Monu ki baat sunar ek angadi si jeti hai jisse ke pal ko toh blouse itna kas sa jata hai jaise lagta hai bas phat hi jayega, par Monu ki kismat itni achi bhi kaha.. Par wo nazara aisa tha ki us pal k liye Maalti ka beta saans lena jarur bhool gaya tha
Savita muskura k Monu ko khud k jism pe yu nazren jamaye hue dekh k kehti hai
“Waise tujhe pata ho toh mujhe bata de.. Tera taqat wala doodh kaha milega, main waha se le aungi”
Monu ki himmat ab uska sath chorne lagi thi, waise bhi Savita jaisi aurat ki garmi sambhalna har kisi k bas ki baat nahi hai, par wo bhi Maalti ka doodh pike bada hua hai.. Esliye itni asani se haar nahi maan sakta tha
“Bilkul pata hai badi Maa… par uske liye aapko yaha aana hoga mere pass, wo kiya hai ki jor se bolunga toh sabko pata lag jayega”
Ek pal k liye toh Savita ko laga jaise Monu sidha hi keh raha hai ki yaha aao mujhe aapka doodh peena hai, par uske khelte hue sabdon ko sunkar uska jism bhi kamukta se magn ho rah tha.. Savita muskurate hue
“Nahi nahi tum rehne hi do… waise bhi abhi bade kamjor ho tum..”
Savita ek pal k liye rukti hai aur phir aage kehti hai
“Mujhe nahi lagta tum Desi doodh hajam kar paoge”
Savita es baar Monu ko jawan dene ka koi moka nahi deti aur apni baat kehte hue muskura k apni jagah pe khadi ho jaati hai.. Aur sath hi sath apna Jhadu bhi utha leti hai
“Tu thoda aaram kar, main tere liye Haldi wala desi doodh laati hu”
Savita muskura k kamre k bahar jane lagti hai par darwaje pe pahuch k wo ek baar phir se razai mein us bade se tambu ko dekhne se khud ko rok nahi paati
Aur meri(Monu) nazren bhi es samay sirf aur sirf us desi doodh pe thi.. Jise pee k sach mein taqat aa jayegi
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Aasha karta hu yaha tak ka Update aap sabhi ko pasand aaya hoga..
Jaldi hi 'Update #20' k antim Drisya k sath wapas milte hai.. saal k antim din pe
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Waps Savita pe Chalte hai..
Savita apna chehra uthati hai toh use ektuk uske blouse ki ghati se nazar aati uski badi badi aadhi se jada nangi ho chuki chuchiyon pe uske bete saman bhatije ki nazren jami hui milti hai.. ek gardai aurat ko koi jawan ladka aise dekhega toh uski yoni toh bhagawat ka bigul bajayegi hi na
Savita ab Monu ko dekh rahi thi, jaha wo ab bhi kisi bache saman ektuk apni badi Maa ki badi badi chuchiyon ko aise dekh raha tha maano jaise use uska pasandida khilona dikh gaya ho.. Jisse wo pure jeevan bhar khelna pasand karega
Paseene se chamakti hui bhari aur badi badi lagbhag aadhi se jada nazar aati un Chuchiyon ne Monu k astitv ko hila diya tha, jiska asar razai mein ek bada sa dhire dhire banta hua wo tambu tha jiske bare mein pakke taur pe likh sakta hu khud Monu bhi nahi janta hoga
Monnu toh ektuk apni dono aankhon ko failye hue bas us kamuk nazaraye mein khoya hua tha.. Uska munh aise khula hua tha maano uska bas chale toh un chuchiyon ko apne munh mein bhar le
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Savita k jism mein ajeeb si garmi bharne lagi thi Monu ki us nazron k karan.. Use aisa mehsus hota hai jaise uske badan mein chitiya chalne lagi aur use ajeeb si kasmakas mehsus hoti hai.. Par wo apna kabu banaye rakhti hai aur muskura k kehti hai
“Uth gaya mera Bacha..”
Monu ko toh jaise jhatka laga, wo chah toh raha tha.. Par chah k bhi uski aankhein us nazare ko dekhne se khud ko rok nahi pa rahi thi.. aur yahi cheez Savita k dil ki dhadkan ko tez karne lagi thi
Savita- (Na jane q uska gala sukhne laga tha) Kiya hua Monu.. kiya dekh raha hai?
Savita ne ye dekhne waali baat bahut hi dheemi aawaz mein kahi thi, maano jaise wo cha hi nahi rahi thi ki Monu wo sune.. Par Monu jawab deta hai qki es baar use hosh aat hai..
“Doodh…..”
Savita ek pal k liye samajh nahi paati wo kiya bole, qki kahi na kahi ek jawan ladke se ye sabd sunkar use acha toh laga tha
Monu jaldi se apni galti ko sudhare ki koshish karta hai
“Mera matlab ki Doodh.. Nahi wo.. main keh raha tha ki wo.. Doodh.. Nahi nahi nahi wo.. Doodh”
Savita Monu ko aise haklate hue dekh k apni khushi aur hasi chupa nahi paati aur has padti hai, waise bhi ek jawan ladka es umar mein bhi agar uski jawani k chalte apne sabdo pe kabu na rakh paaye toh eska toh yahi matlab hua na.. ki uski jawani dhalne ki jagah aur nikhar rahi hai
Savita- (Haste hue) Kiya doodh.. Doodh laga rakha, kahi peena toh nahi hai na
Monu- (Ab bhi apne pairon k beeche khade ho chuke us bhayankar naag k bare mein nahi janta tha) Ji… Badi.. Maaa… Doodh peena hai.. Aapka.. Mera matlab wo ki..
Savita- (Beech mein hi bol padti hai) Par peena kise hai.. tujhe ya... ?
Apni aankhon se eshare karte hue Monu ko uske khade hatiyar k bare mein bata hi deti, jiska gyan hote hi Monu jaldi se razai ko aise us jagah pe khichta hai ki wo bada sa tambu nazar aana band ho jaye.. Par na jane kaise aaj kal uska wo tambu pehle se shakt hota ja raha tha
Savita- (Apni hasi chupate hue aage kehti hai) Acha phir ruk main tere liye Haldi wala doodh le aati hu
Monu- (Use khud nahi pata chalta ki kaise wo sabd uske munh se nikal pade) Kiska Doodh hoga.. ?
Par jab tak use apni galti ka ehsas hota hai, use Savita k sabd apne kaano mein sunai pad jaate hai
“Ab Maalti toh hai nahi yaha.. toh mera hi.. mera matlab gaay ka hi hoga na”
Monu ko Savita k sabdon mein ek ras sa nazar aata hai aur ab tak wo khud pe bhi kabu pa chuka tha.. esliye dhire se muskura k kehta hai
“Maa nahi hai toh kiya hua.. Aap bhi toh meri Badi Maa ho”
Savita k chehre pe muskaan khil uthti hai, aur muskura k kehti hai
“Ha par ab jaise teri Maa pila sakti hai.. Waise toh nahi pila sakti na mein
Esliye jab tak Maalti nahi aa jati, tujhi Gaay k doodh se ki kaam chalana padega”
Monu 'Savita' ki bina pallu wali chuchiyon ki ghati ko ektuk dekhte hue muskura k kehta hai
“Tyagi Chacha ne kaha tha.. Mujhe taqat k liye sudh cheeze hi khani chahiye, ab gaay waale doodh mein milawat nikli toh
Mujhe toh aisi halat mein Taqat wala hi doodh Chahiye”
Savita, Monu ki ab bhi jami hui nazron aur uske sabdon ko sunkar muskura k kehti ha
“Bas kar… kha hi jayega kya?”
Jise sunkar Monu k muh se anayas hi nikal padta hai
“Ye toh peene ki cheez hai…”
Savita ne muskurate hue jhoota sa ghussa dikhate hue kaha
“Kya kaha?”
Waise wo ab bhi theek usi avastha mein bistar k theek samne neeche jameen pe baithi hui thi, aur wo apne gir chuke Pallu ko wapas se sambhalne ki tanik bhi chaista nahi kar rahi thi
Monu ko ehsaas hota hai ki kahi wo kuch jada hi toh nahi bol gaya hai, waise ye sayad ek prakar se samman hi tha.. warna aise toh Savita uske aand tak chus chuki hai
(Reference - Part #01
Update #22 - Page No. 154 - Badi Maa... mera nikalne wala hai)
Monu jaldi se bigadti hui baat ko sambhalte hue
“Doodh… Doodh.. mera matlab wo agar doodh mil jata toh sahi hota na Badi Maa
Maine suna hai Doodh peene se taqat aati hai… bas wo bina malawat ka hona Chahiye”
Monu apni baat toh sudharta hai par uske khade lund ka kiya jo us razai mein tambu banaye hue tha, esliye uske sabd ek baar phir se apna rasta saree k andar jane wale mood pe mud hi jata hai
Savita ko bhi in baaton mein purn ras milne laga tha, sayad esiliye uski saree k andar kamuk nadi ka bahav dikhne laga tha
“Acha bina milawat ka… chahiye”
Monu ko yakeen ho gaya tha ki uski Badi Maa uski baat ka bura nahi maan rahi hai, esliye wo purn shararat se aage kehta hai
“Haan… bina milawat wala hoga toh zyada acha rahega…
wo kiya hai ki.. abhi kamjori zyada hai toh..”
Savita muskurate hue apne dono hathon ko peeche jameen pe tikhate hue apni badi badi Chuchiyon ko aur uper ki aur uthaye hue apne pairon ko faila deti hai.. Jis karan uski saree uske gehua rang k kamuk ghutno tak uper sarak jaati hai, ab nazara hi samne ka kuch aisa tha ki bechare Monu ki razai mein uska hatiyar joro se bhukamp laane lagta hai
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Savita ki parkhi nazren bhi us tambu k hite hue dekh leti hai, esliye wo muskura k apni nazron ko wahi tikate hue kehti hai
“Dekh k toh nahi lag raha hai.. ki koi kamjori hai?”
Monu ko samajhte dair nahi lagta ki uski Badi Maa kiya dekh rahi hai.. Aur konsi kamjori ki baat kar rahi hai, wo khud hi apne pairon ko aur ache se faila deta hai jisse uska wo tambu kuch jada hi bada nazar aane lagta hai, jise dekh k ek pal k liye toh Savita ko aisa lagta hai ki kahi uske pairon k beech uski kaali ghataon mein varsha ritu ka aagman na ho jaye
Monu bhi waise apne hatiyar ki es nayi taqat se thoda hairan hi tha, qki aaj se pehle wo kabhi itna pareshan nahi karta tha.. Jitna ki ab uske hosh mein aane k baad use kar raha hai
Monu apne Tau ji ki Patni aur apni Badi Maa ki maashal janghon ki aur aise dekhta hai maano prathana kar raha ho ki ek hawa ka jhonka aaye aur wo saree purn uper tak uth jaye
“Aapke saamne toh ache-ache kamzor pad jaate hai... Badi Maa… “
Monu muskurate hue aage kehta hai, aur phir apni Badi k us anokhe tarah se baithne k karan uski badi badi chuchiya jo maano bas blouse ko phad dena cha rahi ho unki aur dekhte hue aage kehta hai
“Esliye agar bina milawat wala doodh piunga toh kamjori jaldi jayegi, aur agar aapko meri jaurat padi toh main kamjor bhi nahi padunga”
Savita muskurate hue apne dono hathon ko jameen pe tikaaye hue apne seene ko aur uper ki aur taan deti hai aur muskura k kehti hai
“Tujhe dekh k lag toh nahi raha hai.. ki tu jara bhi kamjor padne wala hai”
Monu- (Muskurate hue) ha wo toh hai.. Par pehle se tayyari jaruri hai na..”
Savita, Monu ki baat pe muskuraye bina nahi reh paati
“Baatein toh teri theek hain waise…
Par ab Gaon mein bina milawat ka doodh milna itna asan kaha……. Beta”
Savita apni baat kehte hue, Beta sabd pe jada hi jor deti hai aur phir aage kehti hai
“Waise Maalti janti hogi.. Ki bina milawat wala doodh kaha mil sakta hai”
Monu apni Maa ka naam aane pe bhi peeche nahi rehta aur muskura k kehta hai
“Ab Maa ko toh samay lag jayega, mausam bhi toh kitna geela geela hai..hai na.. Badi Maa”
Monu k sabdon mein aaya Geela sabd sunkar Savita ko ek pal k liye aisa lagta hai jaise wo sach mein uski saree k andar uski geeli hoti hui Yoni ko dekh pa raha ho
“Baat toh teri theek hai.. Aur doodh bhi tera peena jaruri hai”
Savita haste hue kehti hai, jispe Monu tapak se bol uthta hai
“Bina malawat wala badi Maa.. usi mein toh taqat hoti hai"
Savita Monu ki baat sunar ek angadi si jeti hai jisse ke pal ko toh blouse itna kas sa jata hai jaise lagta hai bas phat hi jayega, par Monu ki kismat itni achi bhi kaha.. Par wo nazara aisa tha ki us pal k liye Maalti ka beta saans lena jarur bhool gaya tha
Savita muskura k Monu ko khud k jism pe yu nazren jamaye hue dekh k kehti hai
“Waise tujhe pata ho toh mujhe bata de.. Tera taqat wala doodh kaha milega, main waha se le aungi”
Monu ki himmat ab uska sath chorne lagi thi, waise bhi Savita jaisi aurat ki garmi sambhalna har kisi k bas ki baat nahi hai, par wo bhi Maalti ka doodh pike bada hua hai.. Esliye itni asani se haar nahi maan sakta tha
“Bilkul pata hai badi Maa… par uske liye aapko yaha aana hoga mere pass, wo kiya hai ki jor se bolunga toh sabko pata lag jayega”
Ek pal k liye toh Savita ko laga jaise Monu sidha hi keh raha hai ki yaha aao mujhe aapka doodh peena hai, par uske khelte hue sabdon ko sunkar uska jism bhi kamukta se magn ho rah tha.. Savita muskurate hue
“Nahi nahi tum rehne hi do… waise bhi abhi bade kamjor ho tum..”
Savita ek pal k liye rukti hai aur phir aage kehti hai
“Mujhe nahi lagta tum Desi doodh hajam kar paoge”
Savita es baar Monu ko jawan dene ka koi moka nahi deti aur apni baat kehte hue muskura k apni jagah pe khadi ho jaati hai.. Aur sath hi sath apna Jhadu bhi utha leti hai
“Tu thoda aaram kar, main tere liye Haldi wala desi doodh laati hu”
Savita muskura k kamre k bahar jane lagti hai par darwaje pe pahuch k wo ek baar phir se razai mein us bade se tambu ko dekhne se khud ko rok nahi paati
Aur meri(Monu) nazren bhi es samay sirf aur sirf us desi doodh pe thi.. Jise pee k sach mein taqat aa jayegi
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Bilkul sahi kaha Bhai, aisi baaton ka ek apna alag maza hai par badi mehnat lagti hai aisi cheezon ko likhne meinBahut mazedaar update hai bhai... Waise bhi chudai se jyada double meaning baato ka maza hi alag hai... Upar se jab ye baate ek gadrayi Aurat jawan ladke ke beech ho... Monu Bhai Maalti Maa ka birthdaywala update kabtak aayega Bhai.. uska bahut besabri se intjar hai... Meri favourite character Maalti maa hai uske bina kuch adhura sa lagta hai... Unka naam update aate hi alag hi maza aa jaata...
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baki Maa (Maalti) es samay kiya kar rahi hai ye toh aap jante haiWaps Savita pe Chalte hai..
Savita apna chehra uthati hai toh use ektuk uske blouse ki ghati se nazar aati uski badi badi aadhi se jada nangi ho chuki chuchiyon pe uske bete saman bhatije ki nazren jami hui milti hai.. ek gardai aurat ko koi jawan ladka aise dekhega toh uski yoni toh bhagawat ka bigul bajayegi hi na
Savita ab Monu ko dekh rahi thi, jaha wo ab bhi kisi bache saman ektuk apni badi Maa ki badi badi chuchiyon ko aise dekh raha tha maano jaise use uska pasandida khilona dikh gaya ho.. Jisse wo pure jeevan bhar khelna pasand karega
Paseene se chamakti hui bhari aur badi badi lagbhag aadhi se jada nazar aati un Chuchiyon ne Monu k astitv ko hila diya tha, jiska asar razai mein ek bada sa dhire dhire banta hua wo tambu tha jiske bare mein pakke taur pe likh sakta hu khud Monu bhi nahi janta hoga
Monnu toh ektuk apni dono aankhon ko failye hue bas us kamuk nazaraye mein khoya hua tha.. Uska munh aise khula hua tha maano uska bas chale toh un chuchiyon ko apne munh mein bhar le
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Savita k jism mein ajeeb si garmi bharne lagi thi Monu ki us nazron k karan.. Use aisa mehsus hota hai jaise uske badan mein chitiya chalne lagi aur use ajeeb si kasmakas mehsus hoti hai.. Par wo apna kabu banaye rakhti hai aur muskura k kehti hai
“Uth gaya mera Bacha..”
Monu ko toh jaise jhatka laga, wo chah toh raha tha.. Par chah k bhi uski aankhein us nazare ko dekhne se khud ko rok nahi pa rahi thi.. aur yahi cheez Savita k dil ki dhadkan ko tez karne lagi thi
Savita- (Na jane q uska gala sukhne laga tha) Kiya hua Monu.. kiya dekh raha hai?
Savita ne ye dekhne waali baat bahut hi dheemi aawaz mein kahi thi, maano jaise wo cha hi nahi rahi thi ki Monu wo sune.. Par Monu jawab deta hai qki es baar use hosh aat hai..
“Doodh…..”
Savita ek pal k liye samajh nahi paati wo kiya bole, qki kahi na kahi ek jawan ladke se ye sabd sunkar use acha toh laga tha
Monu jaldi se apni galti ko sudhare ki koshish karta hai
“Mera matlab ki Doodh.. Nahi wo.. main keh raha tha ki wo.. Doodh.. Nahi nahi nahi wo.. Doodh”
Savita Monu ko aise haklate hue dekh k apni khushi aur hasi chupa nahi paati aur has padti hai, waise bhi ek jawan ladka es umar mein bhi agar uski jawani k chalte apne sabdo pe kabu na rakh paaye toh eska toh yahi matlab hua na.. ki uski jawani dhalne ki jagah aur nikhar rahi hai
Savita- (Haste hue) Kiya doodh.. Doodh laga rakha, kahi peena toh nahi hai na
Monu- (Ab bhi apne pairon k beeche khade ho chuke us bhayankar naag k bare mein nahi janta tha) Ji… Badi.. Maaa… Doodh peena hai.. Aapka.. Mera matlab wo ki..
Savita- (Beech mein hi bol padti hai) Par peena kise hai.. tujhe ya... ?
Apni aankhon se eshare karte hue Monu ko uske khade hatiyar k bare mein bata hi deti, jiska gyan hote hi Monu jaldi se razai ko aise us jagah pe khichta hai ki wo bada sa tambu nazar aana band ho jaye.. Par na jane kaise aaj kal uska wo tambu pehle se shakt hota ja raha tha
Savita- (Apni hasi chupate hue aage kehti hai) Acha phir ruk main tere liye Haldi wala doodh le aati hu
Monu- (Use khud nahi pata chalta ki kaise wo sabd uske munh se nikal pade) Kiska Doodh hoga.. ?
Par jab tak use apni galti ka ehsas hota hai, use Savita k sabd apne kaano mein sunai pad jaate hai
“Ab Maalti toh hai nahi yaha.. toh mera hi.. mera matlab gaay ka hi hoga na”
Monu ko Savita k sabdon mein ek ras sa nazar aata hai aur ab tak wo khud pe bhi kabu pa chuka tha.. esliye dhire se muskura k kehta hai
“Maa nahi hai toh kiya hua.. Aap bhi toh meri Badi Maa ho”
Savita k chehre pe muskaan khil uthti hai, aur muskura k kehti hai
“Ha par ab jaise teri Maa pila sakti hai.. Waise toh nahi pila sakti na mein
Esliye jab tak Maalti nahi aa jati, tujhi Gaay k doodh se ki kaam chalana padega”
Monu 'Savita' ki bina pallu wali chuchiyon ki ghati ko ektuk dekhte hue muskura k kehta hai
“Tyagi Chacha ne kaha tha.. Mujhe taqat k liye sudh cheeze hi khani chahiye, ab gaay waale doodh mein milawat nikli toh
Mujhe toh aisi halat mein Taqat wala hi doodh Chahiye”
Savita, Monu ki ab bhi jami hui nazron aur uske sabdon ko sunkar muskura k kehti ha
“Bas kar… kha hi jayega kya?”
Jise sunkar Monu k muh se anayas hi nikal padta hai
“Ye toh peene ki cheez hai…”
Savita ne muskurate hue jhoota sa ghussa dikhate hue kaha
“Kya kaha?”
Waise wo ab bhi theek usi avastha mein bistar k theek samne neeche jameen pe baithi hui thi, aur wo apne gir chuke Pallu ko wapas se sambhalne ki tanik bhi chaista nahi kar rahi thi
Monu ko ehsaas hota hai ki kahi wo kuch jada hi toh nahi bol gaya hai, waise ye sayad ek prakar se samman hi tha.. warna aise toh Savita uske aand tak chus chuki hai
(Reference - Part #01
Update #22 - Page No. 154 - Badi Maa... mera nikalne wala hai)
Monu jaldi se bigadti hui baat ko sambhalte hue
“Doodh… Doodh.. mera matlab wo agar doodh mil jata toh sahi hota na Badi Maa
Maine suna hai Doodh peene se taqat aati hai… bas wo bina malawat ka hona Chahiye”
Monu apni baat toh sudharta hai par uske khade lund ka kiya jo us razai mein tambu banaye hue tha, esliye uske sabd ek baar phir se apna rasta saree k andar jane wale mood pe mud hi jata hai
Savita ko bhi in baaton mein purn ras milne laga tha, sayad esiliye uski saree k andar kamuk nadi ka bahav dikhne laga tha
“Acha bina milawat ka… chahiye”
Monu ko yakeen ho gaya tha ki uski Badi Maa uski baat ka bura nahi maan rahi hai, esliye wo purn shararat se aage kehta hai
“Haan… bina milawat wala hoga toh zyada acha rahega…
wo kiya hai ki.. abhi kamjori zyada hai toh..”
Savita muskurate hue apne dono hathon ko peeche jameen pe tikhate hue apni badi badi Chuchiyon ko aur uper ki aur uthaye hue apne pairon ko faila deti hai.. Jis karan uski saree uske gehua rang k kamuk ghutno tak uper sarak jaati hai, ab nazara hi samne ka kuch aisa tha ki bechare Monu ki razai mein uska hatiyar joro se bhukamp laane lagta hai
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Savita ki parkhi nazren bhi us tambu k hite hue dekh leti hai, esliye wo muskura k apni nazron ko wahi tikate hue kehti hai
“Dekh k toh nahi lag raha hai.. ki koi kamjori hai?”
Monu ko samajhte dair nahi lagta ki uski Badi Maa kiya dekh rahi hai.. Aur konsi kamjori ki baat kar rahi hai, wo khud hi apne pairon ko aur ache se faila deta hai jisse uska wo tambu kuch jada hi bada nazar aane lagta hai, jise dekh k ek pal k liye toh Savita ko aisa lagta hai ki kahi uske pairon k beech uski kaali ghataon mein varsha ritu ka aagman na ho jaye
Monu bhi waise apne hatiyar ki es nayi taqat se thoda hairan hi tha, qki aaj se pehle wo kabhi itna pareshan nahi karta tha.. Jitna ki ab uske hosh mein aane k baad use kar raha hai
Monu apne Tau ji ki Patni aur apni Badi Maa ki maashal janghon ki aur aise dekhta hai maano prathana kar raha ho ki ek hawa ka jhonka aaye aur wo saree purn uper tak uth jaye
“Aapke saamne toh ache-ache kamzor pad jaate hai... Badi Maa… “
Monu muskurate hue aage kehta hai, aur phir apni Badi k us anokhe tarah se baithne k karan uski badi badi chuchiya jo maano bas blouse ko phad dena cha rahi ho unki aur dekhte hue aage kehta hai
“Esliye agar bina milawat wala doodh piunga toh kamjori jaldi jayegi, aur agar aapko meri jaurat padi toh main kamjor bhi nahi padunga”
Savita muskurate hue apne dono hathon ko jameen pe tikaaye hue apne seene ko aur uper ki aur taan deti hai aur muskura k kehti hai
“Tujhe dekh k lag toh nahi raha hai.. ki tu jara bhi kamjor padne wala hai”
Monu- (Muskurate hue) ha wo toh hai.. Par pehle se tayyari jaruri hai na..”
Savita, Monu ki baat pe muskuraye bina nahi reh paati
“Baatein toh teri theek hain waise…
Par ab Gaon mein bina milawat ka doodh milna itna asan kaha……. Beta”
Savita apni baat kehte hue, Beta sabd pe jada hi jor deti hai aur phir aage kehti hai
“Waise Maalti janti hogi.. Ki bina milawat wala doodh kaha mil sakta hai”
Monu apni Maa ka naam aane pe bhi peeche nahi rehta aur muskura k kehta hai
“Ab Maa ko toh samay lag jayega, mausam bhi toh kitna geela geela hai..hai na.. Badi Maa”
Monu k sabdon mein aaya Geela sabd sunkar Savita ko ek pal k liye aisa lagta hai jaise wo sach mein uski saree k andar uski geeli hoti hui Yoni ko dekh pa raha ho
“Baat toh teri theek hai.. Aur doodh bhi tera peena jaruri hai”
Savita haste hue kehti hai, jispe Monu tapak se bol uthta hai
“Bina malawat wala badi Maa.. usi mein toh taqat hoti hai"
Savita Monu ki baat sunar ek angadi si jeti hai jisse ke pal ko toh blouse itna kas sa jata hai jaise lagta hai bas phat hi jayega, par Monu ki kismat itni achi bhi kaha.. Par wo nazara aisa tha ki us pal k liye Maalti ka beta saans lena jarur bhool gaya tha
Savita muskura k Monu ko khud k jism pe yu nazren jamaye hue dekh k kehti hai
“Waise tujhe pata ho toh mujhe bata de.. Tera taqat wala doodh kaha milega, main waha se le aungi”
Monu ki himmat ab uska sath chorne lagi thi, waise bhi Savita jaisi aurat ki garmi sambhalna har kisi k bas ki baat nahi hai, par wo bhi Maalti ka doodh pike bada hua hai.. Esliye itni asani se haar nahi maan sakta tha
“Bilkul pata hai badi Maa… par uske liye aapko yaha aana hoga mere pass, wo kiya hai ki jor se bolunga toh sabko pata lag jayega”
Ek pal k liye toh Savita ko laga jaise Monu sidha hi keh raha hai ki yaha aao mujhe aapka doodh peena hai, par uske khelte hue sabdon ko sunkar uska jism bhi kamukta se magn ho rah tha.. Savita muskurate hue
“Nahi nahi tum rehne hi do… waise bhi abhi bade kamjor ho tum..”
Savita ek pal k liye rukti hai aur phir aage kehti hai
“Mujhe nahi lagta tum Desi doodh hajam kar paoge”
Savita es baar Monu ko jawan dene ka koi moka nahi deti aur apni baat kehte hue muskura k apni jagah pe khadi ho jaati hai.. Aur sath hi sath apna Jhadu bhi utha leti hai
“Tu thoda aaram kar, main tere liye Haldi wala desi doodh laati hu”
Savita muskura k kamre k bahar jane lagti hai par darwaje pe pahuch k wo ek baar phir se razai mein us bade se tambu ko dekhne se khud ko rok nahi paati
Aur meri(Monu) nazren bhi es samay sirf aur sirf us desi doodh pe thi.. Jise pee k sach mein taqat aa jayegi
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Aasha karta hu yaha tak ka Update aap sabhi ko pasand aaya hoga..
Jaldi hi 'Update #20' k antim Drisya k sath wapas milte hai.. saal k antim din pe
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Kon sa ai hai bhaiMonu bhai kya superb update diya h aap na iss barish nai to itni kamukta hi barish ki h Mahendra ke ghar mai ki kya bolu
Jha ek trf Harshita apni geeli chut mai apne nikalne wale rush ko le kr pareshan h to
Wahi ham sab ki faverate mast gardai hatni ke saman savita bhi bechan ghum Rahi h kisi ka land lene k liye ek bar apne bete ke land mai baith kr bhi uska man nhi bhara h or ab apne rus chodti chut ke sath monu ke pass pahuch kr usko subha Subha ese sean dikhaya h ki bechara uske chuchiyo mai hi Gus kr reh gya h dekhte h ki savita ab monu ko apne chuciyo ka doodh pilati h ki cow ka doodh mai haldi mila kr pilati h
Harshita apne bhatije sattu ke land ka rus apni nabhi mai leti hui
Savita apne doodh ki takat kisko de rahi h yahi dekhna h monu bhai ye satyam h monu h sattu h ya sonu
Bahut bahut Dhanyabad MitraWow..... fantastic update guruji
Main puri Koshish karunga MitraMonu bhai agr aap sattu ka new year mai kuch kamuk sa koi sean likh de to maja hi aa jayega
Mai aap ko koi suggestion nhi dunga kyu ki aap khud ek bht acche writer ho agr ho sake to kuch likh dena bhai it's my humble request
Sabse pehle toh aapke Anmol sabdo k liye DhanyawaadMonu bhai kya superb update diya h aap na iss barish nai to itni kamukta hi barish ki h Mahendra ke ghar mai ki kya bolu
Jha ek trf Harshita apni geeli chut mai apne nikalne wale rush ko le kr pareshan h to
Wahi ham sab ki faverate mast gardai hatni ke saman savita bhi bechan ghum Rahi h kisi ka land lene k liye ek bar apne bete ke land mai baith kr bhi uska man nhi bhara h or ab apne rus chodti chut ke sath monu ke pass pahuch kr usko subha Subha ese sean dikhaya h ki bechara uske chuchiyo mai hi Gus kr reh gya h dekhte h ki savita ab monu ko apne chuciyo ka doodh pilati h ki cow ka doodh mai haldi mila kr pilati h
Harshita apne bhatije sattu ke land ka rus apni nabhi mai leti hui
Savita apne doodh ki takat kisko de rahi h yahi dekhna h monu bhai ye satyam h monu h sattu h ya sonu