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Ghost Rider ❣️

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Brother a story bhi Soch Samajh Kar likh rahe ho jahan tak ummid hai Hai Pichhle do kahaniyon ke mukabale....
Shandar shuruaat bus bhai isko continue Rakhna
bhai ye meri khud ki story hai aur wo story main kitna bhi apna se likh dun people usko copy hi bta de rha :sad: toh apna ko bnd krna pda ye meri hi toh aisa hi chalti rhegii
 

Ghost Rider ❣️

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For every action there is an equal and opposite reaction

~ Newton Unkil

Ju ne rebo walo ka dil khush kiya tha ab wo ju ka dil khush ker rahe hai :D Time lage ga, Lekin agar ju chalte rahe to ju ko expected audience mil jaye gi :approve:


Btw! :congrats: for story
:haha: ye toh mujhe pta tha sir ji :hehe: but wait karo kuch update ka fir dekhna audiance kaise aati hai no problem at all but :verysad: ju ye baat dusri baar bol rha :sigh2:
Time lagne per story padhne ata hu :runaway:
sure buddy!! :heart:
 

Kingisborn

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Bhai ye wali story bahut acchi hai
Lekin ap apni wo wali story
Pita ki maut ke baad wali story kab continue Karo ge.
Ap hamesha bolte ho bhai
Ki wait wait
Please Bhai uska part 2 ab chalu karo
Uske.kayi sare fans hai bhai please usko chalu karo brother 🥺
 

Ghost Rider ❣️

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Bhai ye wali story bahut acchi hai
Lekin ap apni wo wali story
Pita ki maut ke baad wali story kab continue Karo ge.
Ap hamesha bolte ho bhai
Ki wait wait
Please Bhai uska part 2 ab chalu karo
Uske.kayi sare fans hai bhai please usko chalu karo brother 🥺
bhai isi month usko open karna hai.... kosis hai puri... bas story line prepare kar rha hun.... plus tum logo ko veer ko hi dekhna hai toh veer ko hi lead main banunga... :yes1: alok ko hta kar ab khus :sigh2: bs itna wait kiya hai toh thoda aur karo... ab ye story ka mja lo
 

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bhai isi month usko open karna hai.... kosis hai puri... bas story line prepare kar rha hun.... plus tum logo ko veer ko hi dekhna hai toh veer ko hi lead main banunga... :yes1: alok ko hta kar ab khus :sigh2: bs itna wait kiya hai toh thoda aur karo... ab ye story ka mja lo
Bhai abb theek hai chalo Kum se kum ap start to karoge ab story.
Chalo koi Naa isi baat se khus hai hum khuch dino baad intzaar khatam ho jayega
 

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Chapter - 1 Past and Clan matter

"Maa! Maa! Dekho naah, maina new rank par breakthrough kar liya"-

Ek ladka jiske aas paas Red aura faila hua tha, jo uska Domain tha, aur uska domain uske sharir se bahar aa rha tha!, jo is baat ka sabut tha ki usne abhi abhi breakthrough kiya hai isiliye uska domain stable nhi tha.


lekin jaldi hi us ladke ko is baat ka realise ho gya ki uski aawaz uski maa ke kano tak ni jaa rhi toh wo aur jor se purana laga.

"Arre ohhh , meri mata shriii, kider ho"-
"Mammaa! please yaar kyu pareshan kar rhi ho yarr?".

"Ajay! kya hua be jhaatu laal, chilla rha hai, saala ander jaa kar mammy ko bta naah, waise bhi Mera breakthrough nhi hua", Ajay ka dost usko ye bolta hai.

"haa! tu shi kah rha hai main ander jaa kar dekta hun, mammy aksar toh aisa nhi karti thi , fir aaj kya hua ?", ajay apna main hi uljha hua sochta hua ander jaata hai.

*Maaaaaaaaaa!!!*

*Maaaaaaaaa!!!*

Apna dost ki chilaane ki aawaz sun kar Deep turant ander jata hai bhaag kar aur saamne ka nazara dekh kar uski aankhein hi bahar aa jati hai.

Deep: yyy yee kaise, kisne kiya ye? kiski itni himmat hui?

tabhi deep ki najar uska dost par jaati hai jiski aankhein dhere dhere laal ho rhi thi, uske sharir ke baal accnak se bade hone laga tha.

"Ajay nhi nhi mera bhai nhi abhi hm werewolf mai transform nhi ho sakta, thoda dimag se kaam le, hme ni pta ye kiska kaam hai, hosh mai aa ajay", Deep ajay ko uske werewolf form mai aane se rok rha tha.

"Tu janta hai, ajay ye kisika bhi kaam ho sakta hai, hme ni pta ye kis badi clan ka kaam hai, Misty cloud sect , yaa Dragon Pheonix sect , Demon hunter clan , yaa blood clan, yaa sword clan?", deep abhi bhi confused tha wo sab sochne ki kosis kar rha tha ki ye kiska kaam ho sakta hai.

"Vampire kaa kaam hai ye"- Ajay ne tuti hui awaaz mai bola , aur uski aankhein thodi der ke liya blue ho gai thi.

"tu ye kaise kah sakta hai?", deep ne ajay se pucha.

"Tu janta hai naah meri undead technique kaisa kaam karti hai, Aur sabse badhkar inke sharir main abhi ek bhi blood nhi hai, aur inhone marte time jiska chahra dekha tha wo", ajay ne ghussa main diwal par ek mukka maara bolte time jisse dhere dhere jameen red hone lagi thi.

"Kaun tha wo bol nah"-

"Mera baap Sarthak", ajay ne ye bola aur bahar nikal gya.

"saale vampires ne apni aukaat dikha di, hm kya kare ajay wo tera baap hai, aur tera vijay abhi cultivation karna ke liya ander gya, tu janta hai, hm cultivation karta time kisiko bhi maar sakta hai, is time wo sbse weakest form main hoga?".

"Khoon ke badle khoon, jaan ke badle jaan, us insaan se mera rishta meri maa ke Marne ke baad hi khatam ho gya", Ye kahta hua ajay bhahar nikal jata hai aur vampire clan ki taraf nikal jata hai.

Uske picha deep bhi apne werewolf form main aa jata hai aur pura vampire clan un dono ki owl se dahal utha.

*Awoooo*
*Awoooo*

"Meri maa ke aasu barbaad ni jaynge, uske aakhiri sabd jab tak main zinda hun tab tak pura honge, Ye vampire clan se juda jitna bhi log meri maa ke maut se juda hai unhe marna hoga", ajay ne ghussa main 2 feet uchi diwar se kudte hua jor se chillaya.

"Red Death sword"-

isse pahle ki vampire clan kuch samaj paati Ek laal tornado jo red sword se bna tha har taraf usse sabki cheekhe sunai padne lagi.

"Elder Sarthak! Elder Sarthak, hum par hamla hua hai", ek normal sainik jaldi se bhaagte hua Sarthak ke paas aata hai usko batata hai.

"kya, kisne kiya! kya ye demons hai", Sarthak jo hairan tha aur teji se bhaagte hua sainik ki taraf bina dekta hua pucha.

"nhi! sir ye hamla werewolf ke proud, aur apke beta, Alpha Ajay ki taraf hua hai"-


sainik ki aawaz sunkar sarthak apne ghutno par aa gya aur jor se chillaya,"Mera beta mera apna khoon! Divya".

isse pahle kuch aur sarthak kahta wo khud ajay ke saamne aa gya, aur dusri taraf Werewolf aur vampire ki aapas main ladai shuru ho gai.

"Ye tum kya kar rha ho ajay, aur yha aa kar attack karna ke picha ki kya wajah hai", sarthak abhi bhi sab samajne ki kosis kar rha tha.

tabhi ek jordaar howl ki aawaz sab ko sunai padne lagi.

*Awooo*
*Awooo*

Gharaaahhhh!

"Vintage dark poison punch", ek jordaar poison hamla sarthak ki taraf aaya aur uske sharir bhaye hath ko todta hua chala gya.

aur sarthak is Accnak hamla se hairan ho gya tabhi usne palat kar dekha toh hamla karna waala deep tha..

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100 years later~

Northern Region~
East plane~

Dragon Pheonix clan.


keyaaaa! keyaaaa!

"Sect Elder Vansh, apko beta hua hai".

"Arre waaah! ye toh bahut hi khubsurat pal hai, pura clan main mithai batho, gud chini aur chut dilwao sabko"

"Meri patni vidhi kaisi hai abhi?"-

"hehehe, thik hai sect Elder abhi wo behosh hai, lekin bacha ko pakad kar so rhi hai bacha pura un par gya, puri unka chahra mila hai usko"-

vansh ne khusi se thahaka lagate hua bola,"Arre beta kiska hai, vidhi ka toh jayga bhi us par naah".

"ab tum ye bataoo, ladka kis par gya hai pheonix nature yaa dragon nature, usko kis cheez ki virasat mili hai"


"Sect Elder , wo wo ladka abhi bahut kamjor hai, uske paas dragon bloodline ke toh koi sabut ni mil rha, lekin pheonix jaisi sundarta mili hai, sabhi lakshan uske maa ke jaise hai uske pura un par gya hai, lekin usmain abhi pheonix bloodline ke bhi koi sabut ni mil rha, aur abhi vidhi so rhi hai?"- naukrani ne batana band kiya aur chali gai.

Aur abhi tak jo khusi ka mohal tha wo ab shaanti main chaa gya.

"Suraj!", vansh ne jor se bola.

"ha, bhai bol naah", suraj vansh ki baat sunta hai aur dhere se bolta hai.

"ye baat kisi ke kaan tk ni jaani chahiye ki mera beta abhi tak bina bloodline ke hai aur khaas tor par us Ansh tak", vansh ne thoda presaan hote hua bola.

"thik hai, main sab dekh lunga lekin tu presaan mt ho, jarurai nhi ki tera beta bloodline ke bina hi paida hua, ho sakta hai bs uski bloodline der se awake ho", Suraj ye bolte hua nikal gya.

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"Ha Ha Ha ha"-


"tu shi kah rha hai, vampire aur werewolf ko beech samjautha ho gya hai , lekin jab bhi unke beech ladai hogi , toh iska khamiyaza pura Mysterious land ko bhugatna pdega", Ansh ne pareshani se bola.

"Ha tb tk hme powerfull bnana pdega! ansh hm dono ke apni clan ko ek jut kar ke bahut acha kaam kiya, dragon clan aur pheonix Clan ab ek hai bahut saalo se lekin hme jarurat hai ab ek dragon pheonix ke verna hm baaki badi clan ka
shikaar ho sakta hai"-

"haa! hm dono ko ye rule lagu kar ke bahut acha kaam kiya kyo pheonix elder Satyam", ansh ne smile karta hua bola.

"Haa! iss hmare clan main phoenix aur dragons ki numbers badte jaynga, kyuki ni pta kab kya ho jaya hme taiyaar rhne hoga, soul clan ka kuch pta ni, aur Northern region ke baaki territory beshak hmse darti hai lekin ek jut kar picha se hamla kar sakti hai".

"Haa isiliye bloodline enhance karna ke liya ek dragon pheonix bloodline dusre dragon pheonix bloodline se shaadi krega, isse hmari aage ki generation powerfull bnegii, aur visvas bhi badega aur ye hmari majburi hai verna hmari bloodline bhi Snake bloodline ki tarah khatam ho jaygii fir wo apne dragon aur phoenix Abilty aur techniques ka istemaal nhi kar sakta"-

"Vansh ki beti, vedika itni si umar main martial realm ke 3 star par hai, 9 star ho jaye fir eco realm main jaa sakti haii"

"Sect Elder, Ansh! ek khuskhabri".

"Bolo~" ansh ke gussai awaz main bolta hai.

"Elder, wo wo apni Ghar khushiyan ki jholi bharne ek nanhi si gudiya aayi haiii".

Ansh jladi se khada ho jata hai aur apni nanhi si gudiya se milna chala jata haii..

pheonix aur dragon clan hmsa aapas main ladte rhta tha, jiska fayada baaki Northern region ke clans utate tha.

Lekin fir Dragon aur pheonix ne milkar hath mila liya aur fir bani "Dragon Pheonix clan".

Time beetata gya aur jaise jaise time beeta ansh ki beti ki bloodline awake ho gai.

lekin iske ulta hua aur vansh ke beta ki bloodline awake ni hui, aur isliye vansh ab presaan rahna lga..


"Suraj! hm ab kya kare", vansh presaan ho kar suraj se bolta hai jiske chahre par saaf pareshani dikhai padh rhi thi.

"kya hua agar bloodline awake ni hui wo ap dono ke pyar ki nisani hai, aisa toh ho hi nhi sakta naah!, thoda wait karo bachon ko pyar se badha kiya jata hai aisa najar andaaz kar ke nhi , tumne toh usko sabse dur kr diya hai".

vansh suraj ki baat sun kar khada ho jata hai aur dhere se kahta hai," wo is clan ka pahla vaarish hai, pahla ladka agar uski bloodline awake ni hui toh mera dad ke saamne meri kya ijjat rhegii!, aur usse bhi badhkar main usko duniya ke taane ni de sakta, ab waqt aa gya hai usko check karo aur uski bloodline awake naa ho toh usko chor dena jungle ke paas wo is duniya ke layak nhi, usko mubarak ho uski nayi duniya, aur jungle ki shuruwaat karo soul clan lagataar kuch bada karna ki kosis kar rha hai".

"Aur Vidhi bhabhi se kya bologe", Suraj khada hota hua bola.

"Meri patni ko main sabhal lunga, lekin us bacha ko bachana jyada jaruri hai, hme ni pta kaun kb se aaya, aur jab tak soul clan ke sath sab saant ni ho jata uska yha se chala Jana Better hai, wo hmari kamjori hai ye baat kisi ko pta ni chalna chahiye" vansh khada ho kar jaane lagta hai.

"Aur mera dad bula rha hai, tum ye kaam suljha kar ke sab kuch saant kar ke meeting main aa jana, aur ansh ko kuch na pate chale", ye kah kar vansh chala jata hai.

"Hehehehe! mujhe pakad kar dikho"-

"Arre ruko tb toh pakdu naah, verna pakdhunga kaise ruko".

"rukne par toh sab pakad leta hai, main toh bhagungi pakad sako toh pakad lo", ek choti si bachi bhagte hua bolti hai.

tabhi waha dono bachon ke beech suraj aa jata hai vansh ko dekhta hai.

"chalo hme kahi jaana hai aur tumhara naam karana program bhi hai chalo kuch kapde lena chale"-

"Mujhe ni chalna, tum sab ke sab gande ho tum sab kewal"-

"Tabhi suraj us ladke ko ek thappad marta hai, aur usko behosh kar ke utha leta hai".

"Arre tum mera shugga(bird) ko kaha le kar jaa rha ho", ye kah kar wo duad kar aati hai aur chillati hai.

"rabbit stuck seed"

tabhi suraj dekhta hai ki jameen se pink pink pedh ke tane bahar aa kar uske pair jakad leta hai.

suraj pair chodaata hai tabhi uske bagal se ek rabbit spirit gujar jati hai aur wo attack chuk jata hai.

"4 saal ki umar main rabbit bloodline par itna acha control"-

"Tum kaun ho bachiii"-

"chor do usse"-

tabhi wo kuch aur kahti uske pahle hi suraj waha se nikal jata hai.

aur wo ladki whi khadi ho kar usko jaata hua dekhna lagti hai aur dheere se kahti hai.

"I will always waiting for uhhh, shugga(bird)"



yande-re-1019313-sample-animal-ears-bunny-ears-douluo-continent-tagme-xiao-wu


tabhi wo waha se bhaag jati hai aur apne papa ko batana ke liya jaane lagti hai.

Next Seen~

Suraj us bacha ko lekar ek jungle main aa jata hai, aur dhere se usko whi rakh deta hai..

"Alvida! Bachaaa, tabhi uski najer ladke ke hathon par padti hai wo dekhta hai toh uski aankhein hi fati ki fati rah jati hai, uski nashe halki green ho gai thi.

"Alvida ~ jaoo aur roshan kar do duniya ko"- suraj wha se jaane lagta hai kisi ko kuch ishaare karta hai.

aur dekta hi dekta wo ladka ke nicha ek teleport Formation activate ho jati hai aur wo ladka gayab ho jata hai.

"kya yhi badi clan ki niyam hai, kya unke apne beta ka kismat isi se likhi jati hai", Suraj ki Taraf dekta hua uske ek junior amit ne usse bola.

"Amit zindagi usse bhi kai guna kharab hai, jitna tum sochte ho aur jb aap ek sect Elder ho toh apko bahut si cheeza sochni padti hai, kahir is ladka ki kismat main kya hai ye toh waqt batyga", ye kahte hua suraj aur amit waha se nikal jate hai.

Drogon phoenix Clan ~
spritual hall~

"papa, sab aa gya hai", Ansh ne apne pita ke saamne ghutne modte hua jawab diya.

"Aao beta baitho!, Ansh aur vansh"-

*Cough Cough*

usne khaaste hua aur dheere se bola.

"Har drogon aur pheonix clan ko milane ka ek sbse main reason tha , majbut hona aur dragon aur phoenix ki power badhana aur ek flame ka paida hona, mera paas janam se blue flame tha"-

"Blue flame~ ek bahut hi Powerfull flame hai, top 10 main iska naam hai~ aur har cultivater is flame ke picha padna chahta hai, aur har flame user jiske paas paida hote hi flame hoga wo, wo flame dusre ko de sakta hai ek limited matra main, saamne wala ki power ko 100 times badha deta hai"-

"flame ki madad se hmari cultivation speed badti hai, flame se hi hm formation bna sakta hai, flame se hi ladai karna ek bahut hi bada khatra hota hai , isiliye ek flame user ka hona badi baat hai, flame user ek badi matra main khatra hota hai, hmari clan ke jo royal members blue flame aur thander use karta hai wo meri wajah se, ye toh tum sab ko pta hi hoga", ansh aur vansh ke dad ne ek cruel smile ke sath bola jisse un dono ki saas atak gai.


"ji dad"-

"ha papa"-

"mera grandson aur grandfather ko bhi ye Virasat main milega, duniya ko ye janana hoga ki dragon pheonix clan ke royal members kitna khatarnaak hai, Aaj unke janam ke sath unhe blue flame diya jayga jisse unki cultivation badhegi aur fighting spirit bhi badhegi, jaise jaise wo bade honge unke ander blue flame badti jaygi bas unhe ye yaad rakhna hai ki blue flame puri ni use karni"-

"ji dad dono unhe sb samjha denga"-

"thik hai, mera saare pote aur poti ko bulaoo, mujhe unke sath khelna hai aaj unka naam bhi rakha hai", kya koi aisa hai jiski bloodline awake naa ho.

"papa , papa bachaoo", iske pahle ki ansh ke papa kuch kahte Anshika ki aawaz unke kaan main chali gai..

"shhh! dekho dadu hai naah", ansh ne usko chup kra diya.

"hahaha, Tumhari beti pura tum par gai hai, idhar aao betii", ye kahte hua wo khada ho kar uske saamne aa jata hai.

"Aao main tumhars dada hun beti, Hansraaj".

"hello dadu"-

tabhi baaki bacha bhi aa jata hai aur hansraaj khada ho kar sab ko dekta hai dhere se kahta hai.

"mera bacha , mera pote main tum sab ke liya duniya ki har khusi lga dunga, maina jitni bhi techniques sikhi , wo sab tum sab ko sikhai jaygi".

"Ancestor ko bulao aur unhe greet karo, aur naam rakhna ka program shuru karo , satyam apni betiyon ka hath pakd lo wo dari hui hai"-

ye kahte hua hansraaj ki blue flame jameen par ek formation banane lagti hai aur dhere dhere waha ek dragon summon ho jata hai aur fir wo human form aa jati hai-

"Ancestor kavya"-

ye kahte hua ansh, vansh satyam aur sabhi bacha jhuk jata hai.

"Awww mera chote chote bachon, tum sab itne cute cute ho golu molu",kaavya haste hua boti hai aur dheere se sabko dekhti hai

"aap bhi badi cute ho golu molu", jaise hi kavya aage kuch kahti uske pahla uske kaan main ek bachi ki aawaz aati hai.

"Arre bilkul apne papa par gai ho tum, kyu vansh", kavya hasti hai aur bachi ka gaal nochti hai..

"tumhari ek bahen! jiska naam Vedika hai, tum bhi usi ki bahen ho , tumhara paas fire pheonix hai , tum pure mysterious land main vanshika ke naam se jaane jaogi", kaavya ne uska naam rakha aur ansh ke paas aayi.

aur uski goad main baithi ladki ko dekha aur dheere se uske gaal nochi aur bolti hai," tumhare paas do bloodline hai, Soft rabbit aur purple pheonix with thunder element, kaavya ki aawaz sunkar pura hall ka mohal khus ho gya.

"Tumhara naam anshika rhega, bilkul tumhare dad ki tarah"-

ye kah kar kaavya satyam ke paas aa kar uski dono masum betiyon ko dekti hai,"-

"Shivi aur shikha, ek twin phoenix wow kya merical hai".

"Anshika , vanshika , shivi aur Shikha", hansraaj un sb ko dekh rha tha jaise usko koi khusi ki cheez mil gai ho ek dragon pheonix clan main pahli baar itni khushiyan aayi hai.

"ab ladko ki baari , wo vansh ke chote beta ke paas jati hai aur dhere se kahti hai, tum bhi baap par gya ho, ek blue dragon tum, 'viraaj'".

fir wo ansh ke beta ko dekhti hai aur dhere se "kahti hai tumhara beta ek aur dragon Shubh".

"viraaj aur Shubh"

sabhi ancestor ke saamne jhuk jate hai aur dheere se unhe greet karta hai aur ancestor hansraaj ki jagah par ja kar baith jati hai.

"haha! hansraaj tum khus toh bahut hoge tumhare 8 grandson aur granddaughter sabke sab bahut powerfull honge", kaavya apni aankhein band kr leti hai.

"maaf kare ancestor lekin aapse galti hui hai,ye 8 nhi balki 7 hai", Satyam unhe samjhane shuru kar deta hai aur saaton ke naam batata hai,"anshika, Vanshika, vedika, Shubh, Viraaj, shivi, shikha".

ancestor satyam ki baat sunti hai aur dhere se hasti hai aur smile ke sath kahti hai aur dhere se kahti hai man main,"Vihaan".

Ansh bhi satyam ki baat par haami bharta hai aur ancestor ki taraf dekhta hai.

"anshika ye 7 yaa 8", kavya anshika ki taraf dekhti hai aur dhere se puchti hai.

"8", un gande uncle ne mera shugga ko le kar bhaag gya.

"aww meri bachiii".

tabhi anshika bhaag kar dhere se kahti hai "ancestor kaabu mera shugga ka naam rakhna aap bhul gai".

"aww sorry sorry , tumhara shugga ka naam hai vihaan, lekin wo baat tum kisi ko batana mat ki tumne uske sath kya kiya".

Anshika apni tuti hui awaaz main kahti hai "Pinky promise".

ancestor wah

a se disappear ho jati hai aur sabhi bacha chale jate hai.

hansraaj dheere se kahta hai," Vansh ye tumne kya kiya"

tabhi uske kaano mai ancestor kuch kahti hai aur wo chup ho kar whi baith jata hai.

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"Aww mammy main kider huh"

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...to be continued update posted guysss .... and yes update 3.4k words ke aas paas ka hai... ... see uhh in next update saioyonara..
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Nice and superb update....
 

Ak47203

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Chapter - 1 Past and Clan matter

"Maa! Maa! Dekho naah, maina new rank par breakthrough kar liya"-

Ek ladka jiske aas paas Red aura faila hua tha, jo uska Domain tha, aur uska domain uske sharir se bahar aa rha tha!, jo is baat ka sabut tha ki usne abhi abhi breakthrough kiya hai isiliye uska domain stable nhi tha.

lekin jaldi hi us ladke ko is baat ka realise ho gya ki uski aawaz uski maa ke kano tak ni jaa rhi toh wo aur jor se
purana laga.

"Arre ohhh , meri mata shriii, kider ho"-
"Mammaa! please yaar kyu pareshan kar rhi ho yarr?".


"Ajay! kya hua be jhaatu laal, chilla rha hai, saala ander jaa kar mammy ko bta naah, waise bhi Mera breakthrough nhi hua", Ajay ka dost usko ye bolta hai.

"haa! tu shi kah rha hai main ander jaa kar dekta hun, mammy aksar toh aisa nhi karti thi , fir aaj kya hua ?", ajay apna main hi uljha hua sochta hua ander jaata hai.

*Maaaaaaaaaa!!!*

*Maaaaaaaaa!!!*

Apna dost ki chilaane ki aawaz sun kar Deep turant ander jata hai bhaag kar aur saamne ka nazara dekh kar uski aankhein hi bahar aa jati hai.

Deep: yyy yee kaise, kisne kiya ye? kiski itni himmat hui?

tabhi deep ki najar uska dost par jaati hai jiski aankhein dhere dhere laal ho rhi thi, uske sharir ke baal accnak se bade hone laga tha.

"Ajay nhi nhi mera bhai nhi abhi hm werewolf mai transform nhi ho sakta, thoda dimag se kaam le, hme ni pta ye kiska kaam hai, hosh mai aa ajay", Deep ajay ko uske werewolf form mai aane se rok rha tha.

"Tu janta hai, ajay ye kisika bhi kaam ho sakta hai, hme ni pta ye kis badi clan ka kaam hai, Misty cloud sect , yaa Dragon Pheonix sect , Demon hunter clan , yaa blood clan, yaa sword clan?", deep abhi bhi confused tha wo sab sochne ki kosis kar rha tha ki ye kiska kaam ho sakta hai.

"Vampire kaa kaam hai ye"- Ajay ne tuti hui awaaz mai bola , aur uski aankhein thodi der ke liya blue ho gai thi.

"tu ye kaise kah sakta hai?", deep ne ajay se pucha.

"Tu janta hai naah meri undead technique kaisa kaam karti hai, Aur sabse badhkar inke sharir main abhi ek bhi blood nhi hai, aur inhone marte time jiska chahra dekha tha wo", ajay ne ghussa main diwal par ek mukka maara bolte time jisse dhere dhere jameen red hone lagi thi.

"Kaun tha wo bol nah"-

"Mera baap Sarthak", ajay ne ye bola aur bahar nikal gya.

"saale vampires ne apni aukaat dikha di, hm kya kare ajay wo tera baap hai, aur tera vijay abhi cultivation karna ke liya ander gya, tu janta hai, hm cultivation karta time kisiko bhi maar sakta hai, is time wo sbse weakest form main hoga?".

"Khoon ke badle khoon, jaan ke badle jaan, us insaan se mera rishta meri maa ke Marne ke baad hi khatam ho gya", Ye kahta hua ajay bhahar nikal jata hai aur vampire clan ki taraf nikal jata hai.

Uske picha deep bhi apne werewolf form main aa jata hai aur pura vampire clan un dono ki owl se dahal utha.

*Awoooo*
*Awoooo*


"Meri maa ke aasu barbaad ni jaynge, uske aakhiri sabd jab tak main zinda hun tab tak pura honge, Ye vampire clan se juda jitna bhi log meri maa ke maut se juda hai unhe marna hoga", ajay ne ghussa main 2 feet uchi diwar se kudte hua jor se chillaya.

"Red Death sword"-

isse pahle ki vampire clan kuch samaj paati Ek laal tornado jo red sword se bna tha har taraf usse sabki cheekhe sunai padne lagi.

"Elder Sarthak! Elder Sarthak, hum par hamla hua hai", ek normal sainik jaldi se bhaagte hua Sarthak ke paas aata hai usko batata hai.

"kya, kisne kiya! kya ye demons hai", Sarthak jo hairan tha aur teji se bhaagte hua sainik ki taraf bina dekta hua pucha.

"nhi! sir ye hamla werewolf ke proud, aur apke beta, Alpha Ajay ki taraf hua hai"-

sainik ki aawaz sunkar sarthak apne
ghutno par aa gya aur jor se chillaya,"Mera beta mera apna khoon! Divya".

isse pahle kuch aur sarthak kahta wo khud ajay ke saamne aa gya, aur dusri taraf Werewolf aur vampire ki aapas main ladai shuru ho gai.

"Ye tum kya kar rha ho ajay, aur yha aa kar attack karna ke picha ki kya wajah hai", sarthak abhi bhi sab samajne ki kosis kar rha tha.

tabhi ek jordaar howl ki aawaz sab ko sunai padne lagi.

*Awooo*
*Awooo*


Gharaaahhhh!

"Vintage dark poison punch", ek jordaar poison hamla sarthak ki taraf aaya aur uske sharir bhaye hath ko todta hua chala gya.

aur sarthak is Accnak hamla se hairan ho gya tabhi usne palat kar dekha toh hamla karna waala deep tha..

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100 years later~

Northern Region~
East plane~

Dragon Pheonix clan.



keyaaaa! keyaaaa!

"Sect Elder Vansh, apko beta hua hai".

"Arre waaah! ye toh bahut hi khubsurat pal hai, pura clan main mithai batho, gud chini aur chut dilwao sabko"

"Meri patni vidhi kaisi hai abhi?"-

"hehehe, thik hai sect Elder abhi wo behosh hai, lekin bacha ko pakad kar so rhi hai bacha pura un par gya, puri unka chahra mila hai usko"-

vansh ne khusi se thahaka lagate hua bola,"Arre beta kiska hai, vidhi ka toh jayga bhi us par naah".

"ab tum ye bataoo, ladka kis par gya hai pheonix nature yaa dragon nature, usko kis cheez ki virasat mili hai"

"Sect Elder , wo wo ladka abhi bahut kamjor hai, uske paas dragon bloodline ke toh koi sabut ni mil rha, lekin pheonix jaisi
sundarta mili hai, sabhi lakshan uske maa ke jaise hai uske pura un par gya hai, lekin usmain abhi pheonix bloodline ke bhi koi sabut ni mil rha, aur abhi vidhi so rhi hai?"- naukrani ne batana band kiya aur chali gai.

Aur abhi tak jo khusi ka mohal tha wo ab shaanti main chaa gya.

"Suraj!", vansh ne jor se bola.

"ha, bhai bol naah", suraj vansh ki baat sunta hai aur dhere se bolta hai.

"ye baat kisi ke kaan tk ni jaani chahiye ki mera beta abhi tak bina bloodline ke hai aur khaas tor par us Ansh tak", vansh ne thoda presaan hote hua bola.

"thik hai, main sab dekh lunga lekin tu presaan mt ho, jarurai nhi ki tera beta bloodline ke bina hi paida hua, ho sakta hai bs uski bloodline der se awake ho", Suraj ye bolte hua nikal gya.

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"Ha Ha Ha ha"-

"tu shi kah rha hai, vampire aur werewolf ko beech samjautha ho gya hai , lekin jab bhi unke beech ladai hogi , toh iska khamiyaza pura
Mysterious land ko bhugatna pdega", Ansh ne pareshani se bola.

"Ha tb tk hme powerfull bnana pdega! ansh hm dono ke apni clan ko ek jut kar ke bahut acha kaam kiya, dragon clan aur pheonix Clan ab ek hai bahut saalo se lekin hme jarurat hai ab ek dragon pheonix ke verna hm baaki badi clan ka
shikaar ho sakta hai"-

"haa! hm dono ko ye rule lagu kar ke bahut acha kaam kiya kyo pheonix elder Satyam", ansh ne smile karta hua bola.

"Haa! iss hmare clan main phoenix aur dragons ki numbers badte jaynga, kyuki ni pta kab kya ho jaya hme taiyaar rhne hoga, soul clan ka kuch pta ni, aur Northern region ke baaki territory beshak hmse darti hai lekin ek jut kar picha se hamla kar sakti hai".

"Haa isiliye bloodline enhance karna ke liya ek dragon pheonix bloodline dusre dragon pheonix bloodline se shaadi krega, isse hmari aage ki generation powerfull bnegii, aur visvas bhi badega aur ye hmari majburi hai verna hmari bloodline bhi Snake bloodline ki tarah khatam ho jaygii fir wo apne dragon aur phoenix Abilty aur techniques ka istemaal nhi kar sakta"-

"Vansh ki beti, vedika itni si umar main martial realm ke 3 star par hai, 9 star ho jaye fir eco realm main jaa sakti haii"

"Sect Elder, Ansh! ek khuskhabri".

"Bolo~" ansh ke gussai awaz main bolta hai.

"Elder, wo wo apni Ghar khushiyan ki jholi bharne ek nanhi si gudiya aayi haiii".

Ansh jladi se khada ho jata hai aur apni nanhi si gudiya se milna chala jata haii..

pheonix aur dragon clan hmsa aapas main ladte rhta tha, jiska fayada baaki Northern region ke clans utate tha.

Lekin fir Dragon aur pheonix ne milkar hath mila liya aur fir bani "Dragon Pheonix clan".

Time beetata gya aur jaise jaise time beeta ansh ki beti ki bloodline awake ho gai.

lekin iske ulta hua aur vansh ke beta ki bloodline awake ni hui, aur isliye vansh ab presaan rahna lga..

"Suraj! hm ab kya kare", vansh presaan ho kar suraj se bolta hai jiske chahre par saaf
pareshani dikhai padh rhi thi.

"kya hua agar bloodline awake ni hui wo ap dono ke pyar ki nisani hai, aisa toh ho hi nhi sakta naah!, thoda wait karo bachon ko pyar se badha kiya jata hai aisa najar andaaz kar ke nhi , tumne toh usko sabse dur kr diya hai".

vansh suraj ki baat sun kar khada ho jata hai aur dhere se kahta hai," wo is clan ka pahla vaarish hai, pahla ladka agar uski bloodline awake ni hui toh mera dad ke saamne meri kya ijjat rhegii!, aur usse bhi badhkar main usko duniya ke taane ni de sakta, ab waqt aa gya hai usko check karo aur uski bloodline awake naa ho toh usko chor dena jungle ke paas wo is duniya ke layak nhi, usko mubarak ho uski nayi duniya, aur jungle ki shuruwaat karo soul clan lagataar kuch bada karna ki kosis kar rha hai".

"Aur Vidhi bhabhi se kya bologe", Suraj khada hota hua bola.

"Meri patni ko main sabhal lunga, lekin us bacha ko bachana jyada jaruri hai, hme ni pta kaun kb se aaya, aur jab tak soul clan ke sath sab saant ni ho jata uska yha se chala Jana Better hai, wo hmari kamjori hai ye baat kisi ko pta ni chalna chahiye" vansh khada ho kar jaane lagta hai.

"Aur mera dad bula rha hai, tum ye kaam suljha kar ke sab kuch saant kar ke meeting main aa jana, aur ansh ko kuch na pate chale", ye kah kar vansh chala jata hai.

"Hehehehe! mujhe pakad kar dikho"-

"Arre ruko tb toh pakdu naah, verna pakdhunga kaise ruko".

"rukne par toh sab pakad leta hai, main toh bhagungi pakad sako toh pakad lo", ek choti si bachi bhagte hua bolti hai.

tabhi waha dono bachon ke beech suraj aa jata hai vansh ko dekhta hai.

"chalo hme kahi jaana hai aur tumhara naam karana program bhi hai chalo kuch kapde lena chale"-

"Mujhe ni chalna, tum sab ke sab gande ho tum sab kewal"-

"Tabhi suraj us ladke ko ek thappad marta hai, aur usko behosh kar ke utha leta hai".

"Arre tum mera shugga(bird) ko kaha le kar jaa rha ho", ye kah kar wo duad kar aati hai aur chillati hai.

"rabbit stuck seed"

tabhi suraj dekhta hai ki jameen se pink pink pedh ke tane bahar aa kar uske pair jakad leta hai.

suraj pair chodaata hai tabhi uske bagal se ek rabbit spirit gujar jati hai aur wo attack chuk jata hai.

"4 saal ki umar main rabbit bloodline par itna acha control"-

"Tum kaun ho bachiii"-

"chor do usse"-

tabhi wo kuch aur kahti uske pahle hi suraj waha se nikal jata hai.

aur wo ladki whi khadi ho kar usko jaata hua dekhna lagti hai aur dheere se kahti hai.

"I will always waiting for uhhh, shugga(bird)"


yande-re-1019313-sample-animal-ears-bunny-ears-douluo-continent-tagme-xiao-wu


tabhi wo waha se bhaag jati hai aur apne papa ko batana ke liya jaane lagti hai.

Next Seen~

Suraj us bacha ko lekar ek jungle main aa jata hai, aur dhere se usko whi rakh deta hai..

"Alvida! Bachaaa, tabhi uski najer ladke ke hathon par padti hai wo dekhta hai toh uski aankhein hi fati ki fati rah jati hai, uski nashe halki green ho gai thi.

"Alvida ~ jaoo aur roshan kar do duniya ko"- suraj wha se jaane lagta hai kisi ko kuch ishaare karta hai.

aur dekta hi dekta wo ladka ke nicha ek teleport Formation activate ho jati hai aur wo ladka gayab ho jata hai.

"kya yhi badi clan ki niyam hai, kya unke apne beta ka kismat isi se likhi jati hai", Suraj ki Taraf dekta hua uske ek junior amit ne usse bola.

"Amit zindagi usse bhi kai guna kharab hai, jitna tum sochte ho aur jb aap ek sect Elder ho toh apko bahut si cheeza sochni padti hai, kahir is ladka ki kismat main kya hai ye toh waqt batyga", ye kahte hua suraj aur amit waha se nikal jate hai.

Drogon phoenix Clan ~
spritual hall~


"papa, sab aa gya hai", Ansh ne apne pita ke saamne ghutne modte hua jawab diya.

"Aao beta baitho!, Ansh aur vansh"-

*Cough Cough*

usne khaaste hua aur dheere se bola.

"Har drogon aur pheonix clan ko milane ka ek sbse main reason tha , majbut hona aur dragon aur phoenix ki power badhana aur ek flame ka paida hona, mera paas janam se blue flame tha"-

"Blue flame~ ek bahut hi Powerfull flame hai, top 10 main iska naam hai~ aur har cultivater is flame ke picha padna chahta hai, aur har flame user jiske paas paida hote hi flame hoga wo, wo flame dusre ko de sakta hai ek limited matra main, saamne wala ki power ko 100 times badha deta hai"-

"flame ki madad se hmari cultivation speed badti hai, flame se hi hm formation bna sakta hai, flame se hi ladai karna ek bahut hi bada khatra hota hai , isiliye ek flame user ka hona badi baat hai, flame user ek badi matra main khatra hota hai, hmari clan ke jo royal members blue flame aur thander use karta hai wo meri wajah se, ye toh tum sab ko pta hi hoga", ansh aur vansh ke dad ne ek cruel smile ke sath bola jisse un dono ki saas atak gai.


"ji dad"-

"ha papa"-

"mera grandson aur grandfather ko bhi ye Virasat main milega, duniya ko ye janana hoga ki dragon pheonix clan ke royal members kitna khatarnaak hai, Aaj unke janam ke sath unhe blue flame diya jayga jisse unki cultivation badhegi aur fighting spirit bhi badhegi, jaise jaise wo bade honge unke ander blue flame badti jaygi bas unhe ye yaad rakhna hai ki blue flame puri ni use karni"-

"ji dad dono unhe sb samjha denga"-

"thik hai, mera saare pote aur poti ko bulaoo, mujhe unke sath khelna hai aaj unka naam bhi rakha hai", kya koi aisa hai jiski bloodline awake naa ho.

"papa , papa bachaoo", iske pahle ki ansh ke papa kuch kahte Anshika ki aawaz unke kaan main chali gai..

"shhh! dekho dadu hai naah", ansh ne usko chup kra diya.

"hahaha, Tumhari beti pura tum par gai hai, idhar aao betii", ye kahte hua wo khada ho kar uske saamne aa jata hai.

"Aao main tumhars dada hun beti, Hansraaj".

"hello dadu"-

tabhi baaki bacha bhi aa jata hai aur hansraaj khada ho kar sab ko dekta hai dhere se kahta hai.

"mera bacha , mera pote main tum sab ke liya duniya ki har khusi lga dunga, maina jitni bhi techniques sikhi , wo sab tum sab ko sikhai jaygi".

"Ancestor ko bulao aur unhe greet karo, aur naam rakhna ka program shuru karo , satyam apni betiyon ka hath pakd lo wo dari hui hai"-

ye kahte hua hansraaj ki blue flame jameen par ek formation banane lagti hai aur dhere dhere waha ek dragon summon ho jata hai aur fir wo human form aa jati hai-

"Ancestor kavya"-

ye kahte hua ansh, vansh satyam aur sabhi bacha jhuk jata hai.

"Awww mera chote chote bachon, tum sab itne cute cute ho golu molu",kaavya haste hua boti hai aur dheere se sabko dekhti hai

"aap bhi badi cute ho golu molu", jaise hi kavya aage kuch kahti uske pahla uske kaan main ek bachi ki aawaz aati hai.

"Arre bilkul apne papa par gai ho tum, kyu vansh", kavya hasti hai aur bachi ka gaal nochti hai..

"tumhari ek bahen! jiska naam Vedika hai, tum bhi usi ki bahen ho , tumhara paas fire pheonix hai , tum pure mysterious land main vanshika ke naam se jaane jaogi", kaavya ne uska naam rakha aur ansh ke paas aayi.

aur uski goad main baithi ladki ko dekha aur dheere se uske gaal nochi aur bolti hai," tumhare paas do bloodline hai, Soft rabbit aur purple pheonix with thunder element, kaavya ki aawaz sunkar pura hall ka mohal khus ho gya.

"Tumhara naam anshika rhega, bilkul tumhare dad ki tarah"-

ye kah kar kaavya satyam ke paas aa kar uski dono masum betiyon ko dekti hai,"-

"Shivi aur shikha, ek twin phoenix wow kya merical hai".

"Anshika , vanshika , shivi aur Shikha", hansraaj un sb ko dekh rha tha jaise usko koi khusi ki cheez mil gai ho ek dragon pheonix clan main pahli baar itni khushiyan aayi hai.

"ab ladko ki baari , wo vansh ke chote beta ke paas jati hai aur dhere se kahti hai, tum bhi baap par gya ho, ek blue dragon tum, 'viraaj'".

fir wo ansh ke beta ko dekhti hai aur dhere se "kahti hai tumhara beta ek aur dragon Shubh".

"viraaj aur Shubh"

sabhi ancestor ke saamne jhuk jate hai aur dheere se unhe greet karta hai aur ancestor hansraaj ki jagah par ja kar baith jati hai.

"haha! hansraaj tum khus toh bahut hoge tumhare 8 grandson aur granddaughter sabke sab bahut powerfull honge", kaavya apni aankhein band kr leti hai.

"maaf kare ancestor lekin aapse galti hui hai,ye 8 nhi balki 7 hai", Satyam unhe samjhane shuru kar deta hai aur saaton ke naam batata hai,"anshika, Vanshika, vedika, Shubh, Viraaj, shivi, shikha".

ancestor satyam ki baat sunti hai aur dhere se hasti hai aur smile ke sath kahti hai aur dhere se kahti hai man main,"Vihaan".

Ansh bhi satyam ki baat par haami bharta hai aur ancestor ki taraf dekhta hai.

"anshika ye 7 yaa 8", kavya anshika ki taraf dekhti hai aur dhere se puchti hai.

"8", un gande uncle ne mera shugga ko le kar bhaag gya.

"aww meri bachiii".

tabhi anshika bhaag kar dhere se kahti hai "ancestor kaabu mera shugga ka naam rakhna aap bhul gai".

"aww sorry sorry , tumhara shugga ka naam hai vihaan, lekin wo baat tum kisi ko batana mat ki tumne uske sath kya kiya".

Anshika apni tuti hui awaaz main kahti hai "Pinky promise".

ancestor wah
a se disappear ho jati hai aur sabhi bacha chale jate hai.

hansraaj dheere se kahta hai," Vansh ye tumne kya kiya"

tabhi uske kaano mai ancestor kuch kahti hai aur wo chup ho kar whi baith jata hai.

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"Aww mammy main kider huh"

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...to be continued update posted guysss .... and yes update 3.4k words ke aas paas ka hai... ... see uhh in next update saioyonara..
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Awesome update ghosty bhai
 
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