Fantasy Mysterious Land- Tale of Dragon Pheonix

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chapter 1 posted
Hello Everyone
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Toh ye hai meri new story. ye story cultivation basesd hai.. toh properly ye story ek aisa ladka par rhegi jo
dragon phoenix clan se belong karta hai but shuru main uski bloodline awake na hone ki wajah se usko clan se bahar kar diya jayga, aur fir kaise Vihaan ki bloodline awake hui aur kya karega aur kaise uski journey rhegi aur kaise cultivation karega aur kaise wo god banega ye story pata chalega toh chalo.



but kuch important points~

1)- Story harem based rhegi.
2)- Story arc vise chalgi aur rank par rhegi other cultivation stories ki tarah.
3)- story ka kisi bhi person se koi lena dena nhi hai aur kisi ke sentiments ko hurt karna ni hai..

Congratulations Ghost Rider ❣️ bhai for another manga type story....

Ek honest baat kehna chahta hun....

Fu~fu... I like your story that Veer boy waali naagin fantasy... Woh story abhi saved hai iD mai... I read it two aur three times may be... Don't know.... that was class story from your side jayada badi bhi nahi aur kaafi aachi thi... kam se kam smile laane ke kiye...

Kaafi rawness tha aapki uss story mai likes some of his dailog... Jo dil se likha gaye the but from then... You suddenly turn into fantasy type of story I don't know why... ?? May be the reason coz you read lots of Manga like me...

But aapki writting kaafi diffrent feel ho rahi h usme aur isme... I wish ki aap uss story jaise future me aur likhoge... I am not a fan of fantasy stories coz I read a lot of manga I think...

Still best of luck for your new story... Let's see how it goes... Till then...

Signing off

 

[Ghost Rider ❣️]

Congratulations Ghost Rider ❣️ bhai for another manga type story....

Ek honest baat kehna chahta hun....

Fu~fu... I like your story that Veer boy waali naagin fantasy... Woh story abhi saved hai iD mai... I read it two aur three times may be... Don't know.... that was class story from your side jayada badi bhi nahi aur kaafi aachi thi... kam se kam smile laane ke kiye...

Kaafi rawness tha aapki uss story mai likes some of his dailog... Jo dil se likha gaye the but from then... You suddenly turn into fantasy type of story I don't know why... ?? May be the reason coz you read lots of Manga like me...

But aapki writting kaafi diffrent feel ho rahi h usme aur isme... I wish ki aap uss story jaise future me aur likhoge... I am not a fan of fantasy stories coz I read a lot of manga I think...

Still best of luck for your new story... Let's see how it goes... Till then...

Signing off

bhai bhaiii!!! writting whi hai bs character change karna pdta hai well wo story naagin fir se aana hai waali hai... yess not fantasy real world par base rhegiii bs thoda fight aur suspense aur veer ki backchodi... but usko laana se pahla thoda storyline prepare kar lun character same rhnga ..... bs thoda time do jaldi hi wo story aaygi.. waise ek baat hai real world story ka apna mja hai us story par apan bahut time se lga hai... usi Tarah ek aur story prepare hai mera paas Same wo bhi tumhe psnd aaygi... us tarah ki story public ko psnd aati h.. 2 dono story main tag kr dunga soon ...​

 

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[Ghost Rider ❣️]

Chapter - 2 dragon pheonix

Hansraaj dheere se kahta hai," Vansh ye tumne kya kiya"

tabhi usse kuch ancestor kahti hai aur wo chup ho kar whi baith jata hai.

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"Aww mammy main kider huh"


Ab Aage --

"Arre yaar kitna dard kar rha Mera sir"-

"Us kamina chief ne mujhe teleport kar ke fek diya kyuki meri bloodline awake nhi thi"-

"Ahh maina ye kaise soch liya ki wo mujhe accept karnga, haha!", ye kahte hua Wo thoda aage badh aata hai aur wo dhyaan ni de paya ko paani main tha.

uska pair slip ho jata hai aur wo paani ke bahaav main bah jata hai aur fir jb wo apne aap ko bachane ke liya idhar udhar hath maarta hai.

Toh uske hath mai kuch aata hai toh wo usko pakad kar ke khich leta hai aur uske sath bah jata hai.

fir jab uski aankhein khulti hai toh wo ap ko jameen par gira pata hai..

uske pairo ko paani ki kuch aati hui lahare chu kar jaa rhi thi.

Jaise hi wo utane ki kosis karta hai wo waapis gir padta hai.

"arre mujhe Itni chot toh ni aayi, fir main kaise gir padh rha hun", tabhi vihaan ko apne upar kisi ke hone ka ahsaas hua toh usne palat kar dekha toh ek ladki uske upar leti hui thi wo bhi uski tarah 5 saal ki thi.

"hahaha", vihaan usko dekh kar has pada.

tabhi us ladki ki nind khulti hai aur wo dekhti hai wo vihaan ke upar hai toh wo vihaan ko hasta hua dekh kar gussa mai kahti hai.

"has kyu rha ho"-

"Tum badi gol motal ho , hehehe! motuu, chalo hato mera upar se sharam ni aati, aise kisi ke upar sote hua", vihaan ek saas main sab bol jata hai.

"Acha! Acha!, mujhe sharm aani chahiye, zara ek mint mera hath choro zara"-

Vihaan uski baat sun kar kahta hai,"oops chor diya".

"aur Zara mera pallu choro toh", usne apne hath se angdai leta hua kaha.

jaise hi vihaan ne uska pallu chora toh usne vihaan ko dekha aur boli," haa toh tum kya kah tha, Mujhe sharam ni aati, tumhe pakad kar so rhi thi".

"Haa!, sunder samaj kar line maar rhi ho"-

tabhi wo ladki vihaan ko ek thappad maarti hai aur ek danda utha kar uske picha bhagne lagti hai.

"tum ruko, tumhe batati hun"-

"pahle toh mujhe pakad kar khud is nadi main apne sath baha le aaya aur fir kahte ho shram ni aaya, jok jaise mujhe pakad kar chorna ka naam ni le rha tha aur mujhe sharam aani chahiye, ruko tum batati hun ruko".

Vihaan bhagte hua jor se kahta hai,"Arre sorry sorry maaf kar do , mujhe maaf kar do".

Fir vihaan ka pair slip ho jata hai aur wo ek gadde main gir padta hai.

gadhe main girne ki wajah se uske hath mai chot lag jati hai, aur pura jameen par green blood aane lagta hai.

tabhi wo ladki uske paas aa jati hai aur vihaan ko ghurti hai.

aur kahti hai ,"tum kaun ho aur kaha se aya ho tumhara kya naam hai".

"Hehe mera naam, Mera kuch naam hai mera koi nhi hai main anath hun, jinhone mujhe paida kiya unhone mujhe chor diya, aur maina apna naam vihaan rakh liya", vihaan ne apne hath mai chot ko dekhta hua kahta hai ,"waise tumhara naam kya hai".

"Mera naam hai, Queen Jivika"-

"hehe queen jivika, acha naam hai",vihaan uski taraf dekhta hua bolta hai.

"chalo ab verna, beast ka khana ban jaynga", ye kahte hua jivika khadi ho jati hai aur fir vihaan ko dekhti hai.

dono chalte chalte jungle main aa jata hai aur tabhi jivika ko ek pedh dikhai deti hai.

"ye pedh dekh rha ho, ye pedh ka naam hai Heeling tree, ye pedh kewal north region ke isi taraf pai jaati hai divine place ke paas", ye kah kar jivika us tree ki kuch patti le kar uska dwa banane lagti hai.

jaise hi wo vihaan ke paas aati hai vihaan kahta hai," nhi isko mujhe ni lagana ye acha ni dikh rha mujhe , chiii yaak".

*chataaaakkkk*

vihaan ko ek daar tamacha padta hai.

"ouch, yha bhi lga do jivuu!", vihaan jivika ko apni chot dikhata hai.

"jivu tumhe bhi chot lagi hai ruko main tumhe dwa lagta hun", dwa lagate time Vihaan ne ye dhyaan ni diya ki usne jivika ka hath pakad rakha hai aur unke khoon aapas main mil rha hai.

"Queen jivika ki baat koi naa mane ye usko ni psnd samjhi, aur lag jati toh", jivika usko dwa lagta hua boli.

"abhi hi toh maari mujhe ab aur kaise lagegi", Vihaan usko dekhte hua bola.

"wo wo toh bs yu hi".

"jivuuu bhuk lagi hai", vihaan jivika ko dekta hua bolta hai.

"bhuk toh is queen ko bhi lagi hai", jivika uski taraf dekhta hua bolti hai..

Some time later-

"ye lo Queen jivuuu fish, hehe"-

"main kisi ka jhuta nhi khaati", jivika ne bolne shuru kiya tabhi usko ahsaas hua ki koi uske upar soya hua.

tabhi jivika ne nicha dekha toh paya vihaan uski goad main leta hai.

Jivika fish khane lagti hai aur dhere se kahti hai," man toh kar rha isko maar dun, axha khasa naha rhi thi isne pta ni kaha baha le aya aur jok jaise chipk gya jitna iski kutai karti hun utna aur jivuu jivuu karta rhta hai".

"kya mera deadly aura nhi kaam kar rha shi se", ye kah kar jivika khadi ho jati hai aur dhere se kahti hai jungle ki taraf chali jati hai..

aur jab wo waapis aati hai toh gussa main lag rhi thi , " jab jarurat padti hai toh ek bhi beast nhi milta , aakhir mera aura kyu kaam ni kar rha aur ye vihaan kyu ni dar rha".

tabhi uski nazer padti hai vihaan par jiske upar ek beast hamla karne jaa rha tha.

tabhi jivika apna aura relise karti hai aur wo beast dar kar bhaag jata hai.

tabhi jivika vihaan ke paas aati hai aur usko ek laat marti hai aur vihaan jaldi se uth jata hai.

"bhukamp aa gya"
"bhukamp aa gya"
"jivu jaldi se bhaago chalo, chalo bhago bhukamp aa gya".

*chataaak*

"ahhhh! kitna marti ho", vihaan jivika ko dekhta hua bolta hai.

tabhi vihaan ko ek beast nazer aata hai jo bahut jakhmi ho gya tha.

tabhi vihaan uske paas aata hai aur pyar se usko sahlata hai.

"ek crow! tum jakhmi ho gya naah".

tabhi vihaan ki aankhein Green hone lagti hai aur dheere dheere uska hath main green flame aa jati hai aur crow ki aankhein bhi green ho jati hai aur wo ek jagah ruk jata hai aur dheere dheere uski chot par flame padti hai aur thodi der main crow ekdm thik ho jata hai.

"ye lo tum ekdm thik ho gya, jaao ab tum ajaad ho".

Tabhi jivika ek flame dekh kar hairan ho jati hai aur uski aankhon main chamak aa jati hai.

"wow kitni sunder hai flame", jivika khus ho kar bolti hai.

"mujhe bhi ye flame chahiye", jivika vihaan ko dekh kar bolti hai.

"thik hai tum apne wo snake form main aao fir hm dono kuch kosis karta hai shyad koi Tarika mil jaye flame share karna ka", vihaan jivika ko dekhta hua bolta hai.

"besharm!", jivika vihaan ko utha kar fek deti hai.

*Cough Cough*

*Cough Cough*

"Bachon tum dono , haha kitna ladte ho , kab se tum dono ki bak bak sun rha".

*Cough Cough*

"Jivika aur Vihaan yhi naam hai naah tumhara.

jivika us aadmi ko dekhti hai jo bahut kamjor lag rha tha.

"arre jivu is aadmi ko dekho, dekho kitna kamjor hai, iski leg peace toh murgi se bhi patli hai hehehe", vihaan haste hua bolta hai.

jivika jaldi se vihaan ka muh dba deti hai aur dhere se kahti hai," maaf krna elder stone village chief , ye thoda pagal hai".

"hahaha ye dekhna thoda ajeeb hai ki snake clan kisi ladka ko chup kra rhi hai.

"snake princess aap yha hai hmne apko kaha kaha nhi dhuda?", ek elder bolte hua jukta hai.

"Stone village chief , Alex aap bhi yha hai aapko yha dekhna kya baat hai", ek snake elder stone village chief ko dekta hua bolta hai.

"Haa ye jagah mujhe shaanti deti hai aksar yha aa jaya karta hun, aaj in dono ki nok jhok dekh acha laga", alex khaste hua bolta hai aur dhere se bolta hai.

snake elder vihaan ko dekta hai aur kahta hai," ye ladka aap ishe jante hai kya".

"hahaha kya pta kaun h, lekin aap yha kya kar rha hai", alex snake elder se puchta hai.

"hum yha snake princess ko lena aaya tha, inki cultivation ke liya hm inhe snake temple chor rha hai ab yhi hmare clan ki aakhir hope hai", elder ne apni baat puri ki.

"Haha! kya pta jis snake bloodline ko aap bachana chahte hai usne pahle hi apni destiny chun li ho , kya pta uski snake bloodline awake ho chuki ho, haha" , alex ne khaaste hua bola.

tabhi vihaan kas kar jivika ka hath pakad leta hai aur bahut kas kar.

"Cultivation karo, aur powerfull bano itna ki mujhse mil aa sako, agli baar mujhse milna aana toh powerfull ban kar aana tb dekha jayga kaun kitna powerfull hai", ye kah kar jivika vihaan ko bye bol kar chali jati hai.

aur snake elder aur jivika chali jati hai aur vihaan whi baith jata hai..

vihaan ko baitha hua dekh kar alex hasta hai aur dheere se kahta hai.

"Bacha kamjoro ka is duniya main koi nhi hota, duniya kewal kamjoro ko dabati hai aur tumhe agar ye badalna hai toh powerfull banana hoga".

"jante ho is duniya ki sabse powerfull technique kaunsi hai, wo technique jisko 15 saalo tak master kiya gya ho aur tumhara paas toh dragonpheonix spirit hai naah toh karo cultivation".

"apne sharir ke baare mai jaano apne sharir ke ander kya kya hai sab jaano tumhare paas toh essence fire hai naah uske baare mai jaano aur cultivation karo. breakthrough tab tak mat karna jab tak pura sharir ke baare main nhi jaan jaate, beshak log 15 saal ki umar main pahli rank archive kar leta hai".

lekin yaad rakhna agar tum 18 saal tk apne sharir ke baare main sab jaan gya toh tum kisi bhi rank par jaa sakta ho, agar base majbut hoga toh sab tumhara hoga".

"green flame sabhi flame main top 2 mai hoti hai , yaad rakhna ye baat agar bahar aayi toh duniya tumhare picha aaygi isliye ye raaj raaj rakho aur apne sharir par kaam karo fir dheere dheere tum sab samaj jaoge".

vihaan ," lekin Kyu".

"Agar tum 18 saal tak apne sharir ke baare main jaan gya toh tum mere direct diciple hoga mera beta aur main tumhe duniya ke har techniques ke khilaaf jina sikhunga ab jaao us cave main aur milte hai 15 saalo baad aur karo sabit, fir tumhare har sawaal ka jawab bina mange milega".

Ye sunte hi vihaan chala gya yha se aur uske jaate hi alex dhere se kahta hai," tum mujhe meri purani galtiyon ki yaad dilate ho , Vihaan tumhe pta bhi ni hai ki ye flame aur thunder kya kya kar sakti hai".

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15 year later -

Ek cave main vihaan chup chaap cultivation kar rha tha aur uske aas paas kewal green flame thi jo vihaan ki body se bahar aa kar puri cave ko green kar de rhi thi.

whi dusri taraf vihaan ke kandhe par ek crow baitha hua tha aur us Crow se ek white energy bahar aa rhi thi.

idhar vihaan ke sharir ke ander uske spiritual world 3 cheez najer aa rhi thi.

Ek taraf vihaan ko green pheonix najer aata hai aur uske dusre side ek green dragon baitha hua tha... jaise hi vihaan ki najer saamne teesri cheez par padti hai uski aankhein jam jati hai..

Har taraf Bas green flame faili hui thi, aur green flame se pura sharir chupa hua tha bs uski 2 badi badi green eyes dikhai padh rhi thi, jo kisi ko bhi darana ke liya kaafi thi.

"EK Ek dragonpheonix"...

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To be continued Stay tunned.. Yess Vihaan ke paas dragon aur pheonix ke sath dono ka merge ka form bhi hai dragon pheonix..
Word 2k ke aas paas hai... see uhh in next update... ab story aage badhegi aur apko mja ayga... bs sath bnaye rakho aur Target - 10

 

[Ghost Rider ❣️]

For starting new story thread.....

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Ghost Rider ❣️ bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....

Brother a story bhi Soch Samajh Kar likh rahe ho jahan tak ummid hai Hai Pichhle do kahaniyon ke mukabale....
Shandar shuruaat bus bhai isko continue Rakhna

Sorry to correct you Bhai lekin veer nahi sid veer to villain hai na

Nice and superb update....

Awesome update ghosty bhai

Waiting for next update

update posted guyss

 

[parkas]

Chapter - 2 dragon pheonix

Hansraaj dheere se kahta hai," Vansh ye tumne kya kiya"

tabhi usse kuch ancestor kahti hai aur wo chup ho kar whi baith jata hai.

------

"Aww mammy main kider huh"


Ab Aage --

"Arre yaar kitna dard kar rha Mera sir"-

"Us kamina chief ne mujhe teleport kar ke fek diya kyuki meri bloodline awake nhi thi"-

"Ahh maina ye kaise soch liya ki wo mujhe accept karnga, haha!", ye kahte hua Wo thoda aage badh aata hai aur wo dhyaan ni de paya ko paani main tha.

uska pair slip ho jata hai aur wo paani ke bahaav main bah jata hai aur fir jb wo apne aap ko bachane ke liya idhar udhar hath maarta hai.

Toh uske hath mai kuch aata hai toh wo usko pakad kar ke khich leta hai aur uske sath bah jata hai.

fir jab uski aankhein khulti hai toh wo ap ko jameen par gira pata hai..

uske pairo ko paani ki kuch aati hui lahare chu kar jaa rhi thi.

Jaise hi wo utane ki kosis karta hai wo waapis gir padta hai.

"arre mujhe Itni chot toh ni aayi, fir main kaise gir padh rha hun", tabhi vihaan ko apne upar kisi ke hone ka ahsaas hua toh usne palat kar dekha toh ek ladki uske upar leti hui thi wo bhi uski tarah 5 saal ki thi.

"hahaha", vihaan usko dekh kar has pada.

tabhi us ladki ki nind khulti hai aur wo dekhti hai wo vihaan ke upar hai toh wo vihaan ko hasta hua dekh kar gussa mai kahti hai.

"has kyu rha ho"-

"Tum badi gol motal ho , hehehe! motuu, chalo hato mera upar se sharam ni aati, aise kisi ke upar sote hua", vihaan ek saas main sab bol jata hai.

"Acha! Acha!, mujhe sharm aani chahiye, zara ek mint mera hath choro zara"-

Vihaan uski baat sun kar kahta hai,"oops chor diya".

"aur Zara mera pallu choro toh", usne apne hath se angdai leta hua kaha.

jaise hi vihaan ne uska pallu chora toh usne vihaan ko dekha aur boli," haa toh tum kya kah tha, Mujhe sharam ni aati, tumhe pakad kar so rhi thi".

"Haa!, sunder samaj kar line maar rhi ho"-

tabhi wo ladki vihaan ko ek thappad maarti hai aur ek danda utha kar uske picha bhagne lagti hai.

"tum ruko, tumhe batati hun"-

"pahle toh mujhe pakad kar khud is nadi main apne sath baha le aaya aur fir kahte ho shram ni aaya, jok jaise mujhe pakad kar chorna ka naam ni le rha tha aur mujhe sharam aani chahiye, ruko tum batati hun ruko".

Vihaan bhagte hua jor se kahta hai,"Arre sorry sorry maaf kar do , mujhe maaf kar do".

Fir vihaan ka pair slip ho jata hai aur wo ek gadde main gir padta hai.

gadhe main girne ki wajah se uske hath mai chot lag jati hai, aur pura jameen par green blood aane lagta hai.

tabhi wo ladki uske paas aa jati hai aur vihaan ko ghurti hai.

aur kahti hai ,"tum kaun ho aur kaha se aya ho tumhara kya naam hai".

"Hehe mera naam, Mera kuch naam hai mera koi nhi hai main anath hun, jinhone mujhe paida kiya unhone mujhe chor diya, aur maina apna naam vihaan rakh liya", vihaan ne apne hath mai chot ko dekhta hua kahta hai ,"waise tumhara naam kya hai".

"Mera naam hai, Queen Jivika"-

"hehe queen jivika, acha naam hai",vihaan uski taraf dekhta hua bolta hai.

"chalo ab verna, beast ka khana ban jaynga", ye kahte hua jivika khadi ho jati hai aur fir vihaan ko dekhti hai.

dono chalte chalte jungle main aa jata hai aur tabhi jivika ko ek pedh dikhai deti hai.

"ye pedh dekh rha ho, ye pedh ka naam hai Heeling tree, ye pedh kewal north region ke isi taraf pai jaati hai divine place ke paas", ye kah kar jivika us tree ki kuch patti le kar uska dwa banane lagti hai.

jaise hi wo vihaan ke paas aati hai vihaan kahta hai," nhi isko mujhe ni lagana ye acha ni dikh rha mujhe , chiii yaak".

*chataaaakkkk*

vihaan ko ek daar tamacha padta hai.

"ouch, yha bhi lga do jivuu!", vihaan jivika ko apni chot dikhata hai.

"jivu tumhe bhi chot lagi hai ruko main tumhe dwa lagta hun", dwa lagate time Vihaan ne ye dhyaan ni diya ki usne jivika ka hath pakad rakha hai aur unke khoon aapas main mil rha hai.

"Queen jivika ki baat koi naa mane ye usko ni psnd samjhi, aur lag jati toh", jivika usko dwa lagta hua boli.

"abhi hi toh maari mujhe ab aur kaise lagegi", Vihaan usko dekhte hua bola.

"wo wo toh bs yu hi".

"jivuuu bhuk lagi hai", vihaan jivika ko dekta hua bolta hai.

"bhuk toh is queen ko bhi lagi hai", jivika uski taraf dekhta hua bolti hai..

Some time later-

"ye lo Queen jivuuu fish, hehe"-

"main kisi ka jhuta nhi khaati", jivika ne bolne shuru kiya tabhi usko ahsaas hua ki koi uske upar soya hua.

tabhi jivika ne nicha dekha toh paya vihaan uski goad main leta hai.

Jivika fish khane lagti hai aur dhere se kahti hai," man toh kar rha isko maar dun, axha khasa naha rhi thi isne pta ni kaha baha le aya aur jok jaise chipk gya jitna iski kutai karti hun utna aur jivuu jivuu karta rhta hai".

"kya mera deadly aura nhi kaam kar rha shi se", ye kah kar jivika khadi ho jati hai aur dhere se kahti hai jungle ki taraf chali jati hai..

aur jab wo waapis aati hai toh gussa main lag rhi thi , " jab jarurat padti hai toh ek bhi beast nhi milta , aakhir mera aura kyu kaam ni kar rha aur ye vihaan kyu ni dar rha".

tabhi uski nazer padti hai vihaan par jiske upar ek beast hamla karne jaa rha tha.

tabhi jivika apna aura relise karti hai aur wo beast dar kar bhaag jata hai.

tabhi jivika vihaan ke paas aati hai aur usko ek laat marti hai aur vihaan jaldi se uth jata hai.

"bhukamp aa gya"
"bhukamp aa gya"
"jivu jaldi se bhaago chalo, chalo bhago bhukamp aa gya".

*chataaak*

"ahhhh! kitna marti ho", vihaan jivika ko dekhta hua bolta hai.

tabhi vihaan ko ek beast nazer aata hai jo bahut jakhmi ho gya tha.

tabhi vihaan uske paas aata hai aur pyar se usko sahlata hai.

"ek crow! tum jakhmi ho gya naah".

tabhi vihaan ki aankhein Green hone lagti hai aur dheere dheere uska hath main green flame aa jati hai aur crow ki aankhein bhi green ho jati hai aur wo ek jagah ruk jata hai aur dheere dheere uski chot par flame padti hai aur thodi der main crow ekdm thik ho jata hai.

"ye lo tum ekdm thik ho gya, jaao ab tum ajaad ho".

Tabhi jivika ek flame dekh kar hairan ho jati hai aur uski aankhon main chamak aa jati hai.

"wow kitni sunder hai flame", jivika khus ho kar bolti hai.

"mujhe bhi ye flame chahiye", jivika vihaan ko dekh kar bolti hai.

"thik hai tum apne wo snake form main aao fir hm dono kuch kosis karta hai shyad koi Tarika mil jaye flame share karna ka", vihaan jivika ko dekhta hua bolta hai.

"besharm!", jivika vihaan ko utha kar fek deti hai.

*Cough Cough*

*Cough Cough*

"Bachon tum dono , haha kitna ladte ho , kab se tum dono ki bak bak sun rha".

*Cough Cough*

"Jivika aur Vihaan yhi naam hai naah tumhara.

jivika us aadmi ko dekhti hai jo bahut kamjor lag rha tha.

"arre jivu is aadmi ko dekho, dekho kitna kamjor hai, iski leg peace toh murgi se bhi patli hai hehehe", vihaan haste hua bolta hai.

jivika jaldi se vihaan ka muh dba deti hai aur dhere se kahti hai," maaf krna elder stone village chief , ye thoda pagal hai".

"hahaha ye dekhna thoda ajeeb hai ki snake clan kisi ladka ko chup kra rhi hai.

"snake princess aap yha hai hmne apko kaha kaha nhi dhuda?", ek elder bolte hua jukta hai.

"Stone village chief , Alex aap bhi yha hai aapko yha dekhna kya baat hai", ek snake elder stone village chief ko dekta hua bolta hai.

"Haa ye jagah mujhe shaanti deti hai aksar yha aa jaya karta hun, aaj in dono ki nok jhok dekh acha laga", alex khaste hua bolta hai aur dhere se bolta hai.

snake elder vihaan ko dekta hai aur kahta hai," ye ladka aap ishe jante hai kya".

"hahaha kya pta kaun h, lekin aap yha kya kar rha hai", alex snake elder se puchta hai.

"hum yha snake princess ko lena aaya tha, inki cultivation ke liya hm inhe snake temple chor rha hai ab yhi hmare clan ki aakhir hope hai", elder ne apni baat puri ki.

"Haha! kya pta jis snake bloodline ko aap bachana chahte hai usne pahle hi apni destiny chun li ho , kya pta uski snake bloodline awake ho chuki ho, haha" , alex ne khaaste hua bola.

tabhi vihaan kas kar jivika ka hath pakad leta hai aur bahut kas kar.

"Cultivation karo, aur powerfull bano itna ki mujhse mil aa sako, agli baar mujhse milna aana toh powerfull ban kar aana tb dekha jayga kaun kitna powerfull hai", ye kah kar jivika vihaan ko bye bol kar chali jati hai.

aur snake elder aur jivika chali jati hai aur vihaan whi baith jata hai..

vihaan ko baitha hua dekh kar alex hasta hai aur dheere se kahta hai.

"Bacha kamjoro ka is duniya main koi nhi hota, duniya kewal kamjoro ko dabati hai aur tumhe agar ye badalna hai toh powerfull banana hoga".

"jante ho is duniya ki sabse powerfull technique kaunsi hai, wo technique jisko 15 saalo tak master kiya gya ho aur tumhara paas toh dragonpheonix spirit hai naah toh karo cultivation".

"apne sharir ke baare mai jaano apne sharir ke ander kya kya hai sab jaano tumhare paas toh essence fire hai naah uske baare mai jaano aur cultivation karo. breakthrough tab tak mat karna jab tak pura sharir ke baare main nhi jaan jaate, beshak log 15 saal ki umar main pahli rank archive kar leta hai".

lekin yaad rakhna agar tum 18 saal tk apne sharir ke baare main sab jaan gya toh tum kisi bhi rank par jaa sakta ho, agar base majbut hoga toh sab tumhara hoga".

"green flame sabhi flame main top 2 mai hoti hai , yaad rakhna ye baat agar bahar aayi toh duniya tumhare picha aaygi isliye ye raaj raaj rakho aur apne sharir par kaam karo fir dheere dheere tum sab samaj jaoge".

vihaan ," lekin Kyu".

"Agar tum 18 saal tak apne sharir ke baare main jaan gya toh tum mere direct diciple hoga mera beta aur main tumhe duniya ke har techniques ke khilaaf jina sikhunga ab jaao us cave main aur milte hai 15 saalo baad aur karo sabit, fir tumhare har sawaal ka jawab bina mange milega".

Ye sunte hi vihaan chala gya yha se aur uske jaate hi alex dhere se kahta hai," tum mujhe meri purani galtiyon ki yaad dilate ho , Vihaan tumhe pta bhi ni hai ki ye flame aur thunder kya kya kar sakti hai".

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15 year later -

Ek cave main vihaan chup chaap cultivation kar rha tha aur uske aas paas kewal green flame thi jo vihaan ki body se bahar aa kar puri cave ko green kar de rhi thi.

whi dusri taraf vihaan ke kandhe par ek crow baitha hua tha aur us Crow se ek white energy bahar aa rhi thi.

idhar vihaan ke sharir ke ander uske spiritual world 3 cheez najer aa rhi thi.

Ek taraf vihaan ko green pheonix najer aata hai aur uske dusre side ek green dragon baitha hua tha... jaise hi vihaan ki najer saamne teesri cheez par padti hai uski aankhein jam jati hai..

Har taraf Bas green flame faili hui thi, aur green flame se pura sharir chupa hua tha bs uski 2 badi badi green eyes dikhai padh rhi thi, jo kisi ko bhi darana ke liya kaafi thi.

"EK Ek dragonpheonix"...

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To be continued Stay tunned.. Yess Vihaan ke paas dragon aur pheonix ke sath dono ka merge ka form bhi hai dragon pheonix..
Word 2k ke aas paas hai... see uhh in next update... ab story aage badhegi aur apko mja ayga... bs sath bnaye rakho aur Target - 10

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Ghost Rider ❣️ bhai....
Nice and lovely update....

 

[Raju0053]

Bhai ye story khin aur bhi hai ?

 

[Ghost Rider ❣️]

Bhai ye story khin aur bhi hai ?

nope mera bhai ye story 1% bhi khi ni milegi ye puri story meri hai.... self made ... bs sath bnaye rakho...

 

[DEVIL MAXIMUM]

chapter 2 posted
Hello Everyone
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Toh ye hai meri new story. ye story cultivation basesd hai.. toh properly ye story ek aisa ladka par rhegi jo
dragon phoenix clan se belong karta hai but shuru main uski bloodline awake na hone ki wajah se usko clan se bahar kar diya jayga, aur fir kaise Vihaan ki bloodline awake hui aur kya karega aur kaise uski journey rhegi aur kaise cultivation karega aur kaise wo god banega ye story pata chalega toh chalo.



but kuch important points~

1)- Story harem based rhegi.
2)- Story arc vise chalgi aur rank par rhegi other cultivation stories ki tarah.
3)- story ka kisi bhi person se koi lena dena nhi hai aur kisi ke sentiments ko hurt karna ni hai..

Are wah bhai ky bat hai New Story
MANY MANY CONGRATULATIONS BHAI KO

 

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Rank~ ​

Har Realm par 9 star hota hai... jismain aap ek realm se dusre realm par jaane ke liya us rank ke 9 star ko archive karnga uske baad hi aap dusra rank par jaa sakta hai...


•Martial Realm (9 star)
• Eco Realm (9 star)
• Deity (9 star)
•Primorial (9 star)
• profound Life Realm (9 star)
• Profound Death Realm (9 star)
• Reincarnation Realm (9 star)
• Half Saint (9 star)
• Saint (limit for all being)
• Demi God ( rank for god successor)

• God

Ohhhoo to Rank wala fanda hai isme
Kafi INTRESTING lagta hai bhai
Keep it up