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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery
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Rihanna
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Yes. So let's start with the reviews. 
Update 124 was mediocre. However it had some sweet moments in it. The one where Suman teaches Kavya about Rajasthan. It was worth reading. And then the main update starts. The bomb update for which we have been waiting for. Bhavna's past which holds so many secrets. Now everything will come forward.
The introduction part. What a marvelous way to show us history. Pehle laga jaise main koi alag story padh rhi hu... Kahi dusri story open to nhi ho gyi? But I was wrong. The way you showed that history part made me feel as if I was listening to one of my favourites, history teacher back in the school. Completely immersing experience....
Back to the story. To ye new element birth le chuka h... Aur wo h neel mani. Ab isme koi bhi doubt mujhe nhi h ki ye neel mani wahi Veer k pendant me laga stone h. Because aap hi ne bataya tha ki veer k pendant me blue coloured stone h. neel ka matlab bhi blue hota h. Iska matlab wahi stone Veer k gale me h. First case to solve ho gya.
But but but.... Main question ye nhi tha. Asli question ye h ki kya wo cursed h?????
Dekho agar mujh se puchoge to main kahungi ki cursed h. Because Raja k advisor ne ye baat boli thi ise remove mat karna. warna bura ho jayega. Ab raja k saath unfortunately accident ho gya aur wo mani nikal gya. Result kya hua???? Raja ki poori generation khatam ho gyi.
Iss se ye baat pata chalti h ki neel mani cursed object h
Tabhi bhavna ki family khatam hui hogi. Ye lo dusra case bhi solve.
But but but... Ab bada question h. Agar wo cursed tha. To Raja ne usse pehna kyu??? Iska explanation bhi h mere paas...
Main bataungi....
Zaroor Raja ko ye baat nhi pata hogi. Ye baat sirf advisor hi jaanta hoga. Tabhi wo uss moment me aake warn kia. Ya fir Raja ko ye pata hoga lekin usne socha hoga ki neel mani ko wo safe rakh lega. Overconfidence?
Finally sabse bada question kya bhavna neel mani ka raaz janti h? jaanti hi hogi... to fir usne ye cursed object apne bete Veer ko kyu diya???
Bas yahi clear nhi ho rha h. baaki dekho mne saare case solve kar diye h.... Dekha aapne?
Overall bohot entertaining update tha. Ye next 1-2 updates me shayad sab kuch clear ho jayega. Right???? So i'm waiting for the new updates. Dekhti hu main kitni sahi hu.
Keep writing... 
Update 124 was mediocre. However it had some sweet moments in it. The one where Suman teaches Kavya about Rajasthan. It was worth reading. And then the main update starts. The bomb update for which we have been waiting for. Bhavna's past which holds so many secrets. Now everything will come forward.
The introduction part. What a marvelous way to show us history. Pehle laga jaise main koi alag story padh rhi hu... Kahi dusri story open to nhi ho gyi? But I was wrong. The way you showed that history part made me feel as if I was listening to one of my favourites, history teacher back in the school. Completely immersing experience....
Back to the story. To ye new element birth le chuka h... Aur wo h neel mani. Ab isme koi bhi doubt mujhe nhi h ki ye neel mani wahi Veer k pendant me laga stone h. Because aap hi ne bataya tha ki veer k pendant me blue coloured stone h. neel ka matlab bhi blue hota h. Iska matlab wahi stone Veer k gale me h. First case to solve ho gya.
But but but.... Main question ye nhi tha. Asli question ye h ki kya wo cursed h?????
Dekho agar mujh se puchoge to main kahungi ki cursed h. Because Raja k advisor ne ye baat boli thi ise remove mat karna. warna bura ho jayega. Ab raja k saath unfortunately accident ho gya aur wo mani nikal gya. Result kya hua???? Raja ki poori generation khatam ho gyi.
Iss se ye baat pata chalti h ki neel mani cursed object h
Tabhi bhavna ki family khatam hui hogi. Ye lo dusra case bhi solve.But but but... Ab bada question h. Agar wo cursed tha. To Raja ne usse pehna kyu??? Iska explanation bhi h mere paas...
Main bataungi....Zaroor Raja ko ye baat nhi pata hogi. Ye baat sirf advisor hi jaanta hoga. Tabhi wo uss moment me aake warn kia. Ya fir Raja ko ye pata hoga lekin usne socha hoga ki neel mani ko wo safe rakh lega. Overconfidence?
Finally sabse bada question kya bhavna neel mani ka raaz janti h? jaanti hi hogi... to fir usne ye cursed object apne bete Veer ko kyu diya???
Bas yahi clear nhi ho rha h. baaki dekho mne saare case solve kar diye h.... Dekha aapne?
Overall bohot entertaining update tha. Ye next 1-2 updates me shayad sab kuch clear ho jayega. Right???? So i'm waiting for the new updates. Dekhti hu main kitni sahi hu.
Keep writing... Good review, Lekin Mera khyal hy k Nil Mani protection k lye hy kyun k Raja Veer k galy sy Nil Mani girny k bad wo qatal hoa or Salahkaar NY bhi Nil Mani ki hifazat k lye kha tha.Yes. So let's start with the reviews.
Update 124 was mediocre. However it had some sweet moments in it. The one where Suman teaches Kavya about Rajasthan. It was worth reading. And then the main update starts. The bomb update for which we have been waiting for. Bhavna's past which holds so many secrets. Now everything will come forward.
The introduction part. What a marvelous way to show us history. Pehle laga jaise main koi alag story padh rhi hu... Kahi dusri story open to nhi ho gyi? But I was wrong. The way you showed that history part made me feel as if I was listening to one of my favourites, history teacher back in the school. Completely immersing experience....
Back to the story. To ye new element birth le chuka h... Aur wo h neel mani. Ab isme koi bhi doubt mujhe nhi h ki ye neel mani wahi Veer k pendant me laga stone h. Because aap hi ne bataya tha ki veer k pendant me blue coloured stone h. neel ka matlab bhi blue hota h. Iska matlab wahi stone Veer k gale me h. First case to solve ho gya.
But but but.... Main question ye nhi tha. Asli question ye h ki kya wo cursed h?????
Dekho agar mujh se puchoge to main kahungi ki cursed h. Because Raja k advisor ne ye baat boli thi ise remove mat karna. warna bura ho jayega. Ab raja k saath unfortunately accident ho gya aur wo mani nikal gya. Result kya hua???? Raja ki poori generation khatam ho gyi.
Iss se ye baat pata chalti h ki neel mani cursed object h
But but but... Ab bada question h. Agar wo cursed tha. To Raja ne usse pehna kyu??? Iska explanation bhi h mere paas...
Zaroor Raja ko ye baat nhi pata hogi. Ye baat sirf advisor hi jaanta hoga. Tabhi wo uss moment me aake warn kia. Ya fir Raja ko ye pata hoga lekin usne socha hoga ki neel mani ko wo safe rakh lega. Overconfidence?
Finally sabse bada question kya bhavna neel mani ka raaz janti h? jaanti hi hogi... to fir usne ye cursed object apne bete Veer ko kyu diya???
Bas yahi clear nhi ho rha h. baaki dekho mne saare case solve kar diye h.... Dekha aapne?
Overall bohot entertaining update tha. Ye next 1-2 updates me shayad sab kuch clear ho jayega. Right???? So i'm waiting for the new updates. Dekhti hu main kitni sahi hu.
Rihanna
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Oh haa ye kaise bhool gyi main? Lekin agar wo protection k liye h to raja ki maut, bhavna ki family gayab hona... Neel mani cursed to h... I'm sure! Shayad ye curse ke kuch advantages bhi honge isliye Raja wo pehanta tha? Risk leke? Aisa kuch?
Mera khyal hy k Nil Mani koi curse Nahi hy. Baqi Abb writer kesy Nil Mani ka role describe kerta hy ye dekhna hay it's all upto werewolf.Oh haa ye kaise bhool gyi main? Lekin agar wo protection k liye h to raja ki maut, bhavna ki family gayab hona... Neel mani cursed to h... I'm sure! Shayad ye curse ke kuch advantages bhi honge isliye Raja wo pehanta tha? Risk leke? Aisa kuch?
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Update - 123 ~ Untying the knots (2)
Ab tak...
Ladki : And what about your prey?
Aadmi : Ohhh!!!
Usne agle hi pal woh cigarette nikaal ke seedhe pheki,
Aur muskuraate hue apne coat me haath daal waha se palat gaya,
"Festival is approaching sweetie! Festival is approaching...!"
Ab aage...
*Knock* *Knock*
"Kavya!!! Kavya jaldi baahar nikal!!!"
Veer ne zorr se washroom ke baahar se Kavya ko awaaz lagaate hue bulaaya. Pichle ek ghante se woh washroom me ghusi hui thi. Pata nahi naha rahi thi ya andar hi so gayi thi.
"Aa rahi hu na! Bilkul chenn nahi hai aapko. Hmph! Gande bhaiya!" Andar se uski pyaari sii ruthi hui awaaz aayi.
Sab log naha dho ke fursat ho chuke the. Aur yaha bache the toh sirf Veer aur Kavya. Dono ke beech pehle washroom jaane ki behas shuru hui toh Arohi ne unn dono ko rock, paper, scissor khelne ka sujhaav diya. Jo jeetega, wahi pehle washroom me jayega.
Nateeja? Veer washroom ke baahar ek ghante se khada hua tha.
"Hmmm~ Laalalalalalala~ Hmmm~" Kavya gaana gungunaate hue nahaane ka poora lutf utha rahi thi. Aur jese woh jaan boojh ke Veer ko sataa rahi thi. Train me mili hui spanking ka badla le rahi thi woh.
Veer : Kavyaaa??? Kavya! Jaldi baahar aa. Mujhe bhi nahaana hai.
Kavya : Haan toh ruko thodi derr. Hmph~ Pehle mein acche se nahaungi uske baad hi baahar aaungi.
Veer : Kaavyaaa!!!! Ek ghanta se ghusi hui ho andar tum. Baahar aao!
Veer behes ke mood me nahi tha. Shaam hone ko aa rahi thi aur abhi tak khana bhi nahi hua tha. Sabhi uske naha ke aa jaane ki raah dekh rahe the. Par idhar ye madam apne alag mazze me lagi hui thi.
Tabhi Veer ke mann me ek idea aaya. Aur uske hontho par ek kutil muskaan sajj gayi.
'Hehehehe!'
Veer : Toh theek hai. Nahaati reh tu araam se. Mein chala!
Veer thodi dur tak zorr se apne perr patakte hue chal ke gaya aur dheere se rukk gaya. Fir woh dabe paav waapas darwaaze ke bagal se aake chhup gaya.
Idhar andar bathing stool par baithi Kavya ko jese hi Veer ke jaane ki aahat hui woh soch me pad gayi.
'Hmm? Arre! Ye sach me chale gaye kya? Ye bhaiya bhi na~ Hmph~ Saara prank mera kharaab kar dete hai.'
Nahaana toh uska pehle hi samaapt ho chuka tha woh toh befaaltu me hi aise time-pass kar rahi thi. Apne komal gore gore bheege badan par safed towel baandhe hue woh apne kapde utha ke fauran hi darwaaze ke paas aayi.
*Click*
Dheere se usne chatakni kholi aur chupke se jhaakte hue woh baahar ka jayza lene lagi par tabhi achanak,
"Buhuhahahahaha~"
Veer jo iss pal ka intezaar hi kar raha tha woh bagal me se baahar aate hi Kavya par kisi bhooke bhediye ki tarah lapak pada.
"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!"
Kavya itni zorr se darri ki woh cheenkh uthi. Bechaari ki haalat hi tight ho gayi. Aisa laga jese praan hi nikal gaye ho.
Parantu Veer ne usse jese hi dabocha, uss beech ek gadbadi ho gayi.
Harr aurat jo ab tak naha ke baahar aayi thi, woh andar se kapde pehen ke hi baahar nikli thi. Siwae Kavya ke...!
Veer : Huh?
Kavya : !!!!!!??
Aur iss jhapta jhapti me jo bilkul bhi nahi hona chahiye tha. Wahi ho gaya!
Towel sarak gayi.
Maajra kuch aisa tha ki Kavya ke badan se towel khulne se, woh poori nagn thi. Upar se uska bheega badan. Veer uske theek upar laita hua tha. Dono ki aankhein ek dusre se takraayi hui thi.
Kavya ke geele baalo aur chehre par saji paani ki boonde aisi lag rahi thi jese subah subah kisi sundar se phool ki pattiyo par oas ki boonde saji ho.
Veer jo apni choti behan ke nange bheege jism ke upar laita hua tha, woh sab kuch mehsoos kar paa raha tha. Khaaskar uski chaathi se dabta hua woh ubhaar. Kuch shan tak bas dono ek dusre ko khamoshi me dekhte rahe jese maano kuch hua hi na ho.
Aur fir theek uske baad,
"Eeeeeeiiiiiyyyyaaaaaaaa~"
Kavya zorr se chhillaayi aur uska haath seedha aake uske Veer bhaiya ke gaal pe tapaak se pada.
*Chataaaaaakkkkkkkk*
"...."
Veer ka muh baaye se daaye ho gaya. Woh Kavya ke upar se bhi hatt gaya. Bechari Kavya idhar hadbadate hue apni towel uthaayi aur khud ko dhak ke sehmi hui chuhhiya ki tarah wahi dubak ke baith gayi.
Woh namm aankhein liye apna muh fula ke Veer ko ghoor rahi thi.
'Fuuuckkk! Ye kya ho gaya!?'
Usse laga tha Kavya bhi andar se kapde pehen ke hi baahar aayegi par yaha toh...!
Woh palat ke maafi maangne ke liye jese hi hua toh fir wahi jamm ke reh gaya. Aur fir sharmaate hue usne apna sarr mod liya.
Veer (blushes) : P-Pagli! Sab kuch dikh raha hai.
Usne jese hi ye kaha. Kavya confused ho gayi. Fir jese usse kuch dhyaan aaya. Usne turant hi sarr neeche kar apni taango ke beech dekha toh...!
Uske gaalo ka rang apne aap laal ho chala. Woh baith toh gayi thi towel odh ke. Par neeche se uski pyaari pyaari clean shaved phuddi, saaf saaf nazar aa rahi thi.
"Eeeeiiiyyyaaaaaa~" Woh fir cheenkhi aur usne wahi dressing table par rakhi oil ki sheeshi, powder ka dibba sab kuch utha utha ke Veer ki orr fekna shuru kar diya.
Kavya : G-Gande bhaiyaaaa! *sniff* I hate you!!!! *sniff* Unnnhhhh~
*Thud* *Thud*
Veer : O-Oyyyeee! Paagal!
Veer idhar se udhar dodge kar seedha andar washroom me ghus gaya. Ye sab kya ho gaya tha?
Idhar Kavya gusse me washroom ke darwaaze ke paas aayi aur baahar se chatakni ko laga ke waha se nikal gayi.
Tabhi Tej jo pehle se hi ready hoke baahar baithi thi woh Kavya ki baar baar cheenkh sunn ke andar aa gayi.
Tej : Aree kya hua? Kyu chillaa rahi ho? Aur huhhh!!!? Y-Ye? Tum aise kyu ghoom rahi ho?
Kavya (blushes) : Ahhn! D-Didi! M-Mein baahar hi kapde pehenti hu. Washroom me mujhe nahi banta. Geele ho jaate hai.
Tej : Ohhh! Par woh awaaz-
Kavya : M-Mein chalti hu. Mujhe change karna hai.
Woh fatafat apna laal muh chhipa ke waha se bhaag gayi. Uske dil ki dhadkane behad tezz thi. Hey bhagwaan! Ye kya ho gaya? Uske bade bhai ne usse aaj nanga dekha. Uski nangi yoni ko dekha. Aur toh aur uske nange badan ke upar laita hua tha. Ye sab soch soch ke hi bechaari Kavya ka tapmaan badhta jaa raha tha.
Idhar Tej hairat me baahar aa gayi. Par abhi kuch derr hi hui thi ki,
*Knock* *Knock*
"Kaaavyaaaa!! Kaavya gate khol!!! Kaaavyaaaa!!!"
Tejal ko washroom ke andar se Veer ki awaaz sunaayi dii. Woh turant waha pohuch jese hi darwaaza kholi, uski aankhein aashcharya me fel gayi.
Veer apni kamar par towel baandhe poora bheega hua tha. Aur uska poora gatheela badan, uske ripped abs aur body dekh Tejal ke hosh hi udd gaye.
Haan dekhe the usne kayi ladke. Ladko ko bina shirt ke bhi dekha hua tha usne excavation sites ke dauran. Kayi logo ki well built bodies dekhi thi usne. Par abhi jo woh apni aankho ke saamne dekh rahi thi. Woh jese alaukik tha uske liye. Usne apne poore jeevan kaal me aisa jism nahi dekha tha.
Woh bhi itne nazdeek se. Veer ke badan se saabun ki woh khusbhu Tejal ko jese paagal kar rahi thi. Uski geeli zulfo ki woh latte jo uski aankho ke saamne aake latak rahi thi. Geeli bauho par saji hui paani ki boonde aur woh bheega badan. Tejal ke dil ne iss drishya ko dekh ek dhadkan phaand lii,
*Badump*
Woh ladkhada ke do qadam peeche ho gayi.
Veer ne socha tha woh Kavya se maafi maangega apni harqat ke liye. Par ab uska iraada badal chuka tha. Uski galti hi kya thi akhir? Woh Kavya pe isliye jhapta kyuki Kavya ek ghante se washroom ke andar time waste kar rahi thi. Aur galti Kavya ki thi jo woh bin kapdo ke baahar aayi. Ye uska ghar thodi tha.
Upar se thappad bhi khaaya usne aur toh aur woh darwaaza band karke bhi bhaag gayi!?
It was too much!
Veer jo pehle maafi maangne ki soch raha tha woh ulta ab khud gusse me aa gaya. Ab toh Kavya khud uss se maafi maange. Yahi uski demand thi. Agar woh adiyal thi toh Veer ye batlaana chaah raha tha ki woh bhi apni akad dikhaana jaanta hai.
Idhar na chaahte hue bhi, Tejal ki aankhein baar baar Veer ke abs par jaa ke tik rahi thi. Woh bhi ek karate practitioner thi. Uske khud ke thode bohut abs the. Isliye woh bhali bhaati ye baat jaanti thi ki aisi body banaane me kitni mehnat lagti thi.
Aaj usse sahi se bodh ho raha tha ki kese uske bhai ne chutkiyo me Pranjal ko sabak sikha diya tha.
Because he was damn strong!!!
Veer ne jab dekha ki uski badi behan tass se mass bhi nahi ho rahi toh woh kharaash lete hue bola,
Veer : Ahem! Thanks! Can you leave now? I have to change!
Tej (hosh me aate hue) : H-Huhh!? Ohh! Y-Yeah! Sure!
Woh jhatpat waha se baahar nikal gayi. Uske jaate hi Veer ne ek aah chorr kapde pehan'na shuru kiye. Lekin Tej jo baahar gayi thi woh ab bhi darwaaze ki entrance se sab kuch dekh paa rahi thi.
Kese Veer ki full sleaved t shirt uske badan se kass ke chipki, kese woh jeans uske perro par bandhi hui thi, kese woh apne baal sawaar raha tha. Kya kya cheezein woh upyog kar raha tha Tej har ek harqat apne bhai ki jese mann me note kar rahi thi.
Veer uske baad baahar aaya aur Tej se chalne ko keh kar nikal gaya. Idhar Tej uske jaate hi seedhe washroom me ghusi aur uski nazar sabse pehle Veer ke uss sabun par gayi.
Woh paas gayi. Usne aage badh uss safed rectangular se dikhne waale saabun ko soongha aur uski khushboo firse paate hi uski aankhein apne aap band ho gayi.
Ye kis tarah ka saabun tha? Woh jaanti thi harr ek saabun ke naam. Par iss tarah ki sugandh toh aaj tak usne kabhi nahi lii thi.
Upar se saabun par kii gayi branding hatt chuki thi. Kyuki saabun Veer ke badan se ragad lene ke baad kaafi ghis chuka tha. Tej apne nichle honth ko daato tale dabaaye waha se baahar aa gayi. Woh jaan'na chaahti thi ki uska bhai kaun sa saabun lagaata tha. Jese woh harr choti choti cheez apne bhai ki jaan'na chaahti thi. Fir chaahe woh saabun hi kyu na ho. Uske liye ye jese pehla qadam tha nazdeek aane ka. Apne bhai ki pasand napasand ke baare me jaan'na.
Haar maante hue woh baahar aayi. Woh ek baat nahi jaanti thi. Woh ye ki wo saabun yaha ka saabun nahi tha. Ek international brand ka tha. Jo Veer ko Suhana ne Las Vegas me dilwaaya tha. Zaahir hai ki Tej usse pehchaan na saki.
Kherr! Yaha baahar sabhi log dining table par viraajmaan the.
Veer bhi baitha hua tha, Kavya uske theek saamne thi. Dono ne jese hi ek dusre ko dekha,
"Hmph~" Woh dono hi akad dikhaate hue ek dusre se muh ferr liye. Par idhar Kavya ke gaalo me thodi laali bhi thi. Aaj pehli baar usne apne bhaiya ke upar haath uthaaya tha. Jiske liye woh sharminda bhi thi.
Kintu galti uske bhaiya ki hi thi. Fir se apne nirnay ko sahi maan woh muh fula ke khaana khaane jutt gayi.
Aankho hi aankho ki iss adla badli ko dekhte hi Arohi ne ek baar me hi anumaan laga liya.
Arohi : Tum dono! Jhagda hua hai na?
Aur uska anumaan ek dum sateek nikla.
Kavya : Hmph~
Veer : Kya farq padta hai?
Arohi : Hmm! Toh jhagda hua hai. I was right!
Arohi ne uske baad aage kuch nahi kaha. Aur na hi Tejal ne. Arohi jaanti thi ki ye dono bhai behan jald hi firse ek dusre ke saath sulaah kar lenge. Isliye usne dono ko samay dene ka socha.
Table par khaana lagte hi sabhi khaane me vyast ho gaye aur saath hi baato ka silsila bhi jaari hua.
Bhavna (smiles) : Khana bohut accha bana hai Shyaam! Gauri ke haatho me sach me jaadoo hai.
Shyaam : Bas! Bana leti hai. Haha! Aapse behtar thodi hai didi.
Bhavna : Nahi! Sach me bohut accha bana hai. Gauri ek behad sahi jeevan saathi hai tumhaare liye.
Gauri peeche khadi tukur tukur apne pati ko dekh aur apni tareef sunn khush ho gayi.
Uski samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki ye log kaun the aur uska pati itni izzat se kyu pesh aa raha tha unse. Par ek baat woh jaan gayi thi woh ye ki, zaroor koi bade log hi the ye sab. Warna uska pati iss qadar pesh nahi aata. Aur isliye usne chup rehna hi behtar samjha.
Shyaam : Fir? Ab aapka kya karyakram hai didi?
Bhavna : Bas! Hum khaa ke seedha yaha se nikal jayenge.
Shyaam : Ye aap kya keh rahi ho didi?
Purvi jo wahi baithi hui thi woh bhi iss charcha me jud gayi,
Purvi : Ye toh Bhavna hi jaane. Mujhe bhi kuch bataya nahi hai.
Shyaam : Nahi didi! Abhi toh aap log aaye ho. Lambe safar se thak gaye honge sab. Aur wese bhi shaam ho chuki hai. Kuch derr me raat ho jayegi. Aaj aap kahi nahi jayengi. Aap sab hamaare mehmaan hai. Iss gareeb par meharbaani kijiye aur chand din hamare ghar me guzaariye.
Bhavna : Chand din? Nahi nahi! Shyaam! Mein kisi uddeshya se nikli hu. Inn dono ko dekh rahe ho?
Bhavna ne apni dono santaano ki orr ishaara karte hue kaha. Uske itna kehte hi sabki nazre Veer aur Tej par tik gayi.
Shyaam : ???
Bhavna (smiles) : Inn dono ko kuch bhi nahi pata hai ateet ke baare me. Ussi lakshya ko lekar nikli hu mein. Inhe inke aur mere ateet se parichit karaane.
Shyaam : Samjha didi! Lekin fir bhi. Aaj jaana jaldbaazi hogi. Kam se kam aaj ki raat toh aapko yaha guzaarni hi hogi.
Bhavna : P-Par...!
Purvi (smiles) : Theek hai na Bhavna. Wese bhi woh sahi hi keh raha hai. Train ke safar se sabhi thake hue hai. Aur fir train me neend bhi kaha hi lagti hai. Aaj ki raat sab theek se soyenge toh kal subah hum aage ka safar achhe se kar payenge. Rukk bhi jao.
Suman (smiles) : Mera bhi yahi maan'na hai. Didi!
Bhavna : Ab...!
Bhavna apne bete ko dekhi. Veer bhi chup chaap usse hi dekh raha tha. Aur fir ek thakaan bhari aah chorr woh boli,
Bhavna : Theek hai! Aaj raat hum yahi thehrenge. Lekin sirf aaj ki raat.
Shyaam (khush hote hue) : Ye hui na ab baat!!! Gauri!! Seva me koi kami nahi rehni chaahiye. Didi aur baaki sabhi hamaare mehmaan hai.
Gauri (smiles) : J-Jii!
Idhar Veer kisi chintan me doobe cheezo ka aaklan kar raha tha. Uski nazre shyaam par thi.
'Shyaam ki favourability badh gayi hai mere prati Pari!!!'
[Yes!]
'Relationship me Master aur Servant likha hua tha uske status me. I'm assuming ki woh Mom ke gharaane ki seva karta raha hoga? Ya uske pita jii? Jis vajah se woh bhi iss ka hissa raha ho?'
[Yes! Aap sahi ho jaha tak mujhe lagta hai.]
'Wahi Suman ke status me Master aur Slave ka relationship hai. Iska matlab...!'
[Shyaam ka role alag hai.]
'Exactly!'
[Maybe a home servant? Or a care taker?]
'Thoda samay aur. Jald hi inn raazo se parda hatt jayega Pari.'
[Hmm! Make sure ki aap missions par bhi dhyaan dete chale. Kaera ka mission bacha hua hai. Remember? One month ki limit hai usme. Aur abhi sirf 22 days bache hai. Yaha pata nahi kitna samay hume lag sakta hai.]
'I know Pari! Jald se jald yaha se nikalna hoga. Mein Miss Kaera ko nahi kho sakta. Agar mene kuch na kiya toh woh hamesha hamesha ke liye apne emotions...!'
[Yes! Then stay focused.]
'Right!'
Samay guzra aur Shyaam aur Gauri ke do bacche jo school me padhne gaye hue the woh bhi ghar me pravesh kiye. Baato hi baato me aur ek dusre se parichay hone me ye samay guzar gaya.
Sooraj dhala, andhera hua aur raatri ka aagman bhi ho gaya.
Ab sab ke sone ki vyavastha tay honi thi.
Shyaam : Didi! Andar kamre me jo double bed hai uss par aap dono so jaiye.
Shyaam ne Purvi aur Bhavna se kaha.
Bhavna : Nahi! Woh double bed bedroom ka hai. Tum dono miya biwi ka. Uss par tum dono hi laitoge.
Bhavna ki baat sunn, peeche khade Gauri sharma gayi.
Shyaam : Maaf kijiye didi! Kaash mera ghar thoda aur bada hota. Kam se kam aap logo ke sone ka bandobast acche se toh kar paata. Filhaal ye ek hi double bed hai hamaare yaha. Ab aur sharminda mat kijiye. Aap dono uss par so jaiye. Tab tak mein baaki sabhi ka prabandh karta hu.
Bhavna (smiles) : Hargiz nahi! Purvi! Shyaam se keh do ki uss bed par sirf ye aur Gauri hi soyenge. Aur dono bacche bhi.
Purvi (smiles) : Bilkul!
Shyaam : D-Didi!!! Aap dono mere liye kaam aur mushkil kar rahi hai.
Purvi : Sahi keh rahi hai woh Shyaam. Pati patni ko toh saath me hi sona chahiye. Apne baccho ke saath tum dono andar bedroom me jao. Hum apna dekh lete hai.
Shyaam : Par-
Bhavna : Par var kuch nahi. Veer?
Veer : Hmm?
Bhavna : Baahar do deewaan dale hai na? Dekho! Uss par laitne ka prabandh karo.
Veer : Hmm!
Veer baahar gaya toh do deewaan aur ek sofa rakha hua tha waha. Jo teen se chaar logo ke liye paryaapt tha.
Par ab waha kaun soyega? Iska faisla hona tha.
Suman : Mein sofe par so jaungi!
Bhavna : Pakka?
Suman : Jii! Didi!
Bhavna : Chota toh nahi padega?
Suman (smiles) : Mein itni bhi moti nahi didi!
Bhavna (smiles) : Theek hai! Aur beta Arohi?
Arohi : J-Jii!?
Bhavna : Kya tum aur Kavya uss bade waale deewaan par lait jaogi?
Arohi : Jii! Tai jii!
Bhavna : Koi dikkat toh nahi hogi na? Do ban jaogi?
Arohi : Nahi Tai jii! Hume aadat hai.
Bhavna (smiles) : Badhiya! Aur akhiri waale deewaan pe...!
Bhavna ne kehte hue Shweta ko dekha. Toh Veer ne bhi usse dekha. Shweta ki samajh me na aaya ki woh kya kahe ab. Woh bas Veer ko dekhti rahi. Fir Veer ne hi uski jagah uttar de diya,
Veer : Woh lait jayengi!
Bhavna : Hmm? Pakka?
Veer : Hmm!
Shweta ne Veer ke uttar sunn ek haami bhari. Agar uska beta keh raha tha toh woh kese mana karti? Woh raazi ho gayi.
Bhavna : Theek hai! Toh Purvi!?
Purvi : Hmm?
Bhavna : Chalo! Yaha neeche bistar lagaate hai. Tum aur mein neeche so jayenge.
Shyaam : Didi??? Aap neeche...!?
Bhavna : Toh? Neeche sone me kya buraayi hai? Ghar me gadde toh zaroor honge na?
Shyaam : Gaddo ki koi kami nahi hai didi par-
Bhavna : Bas fir! Ye tay raha. Purvi chalo!
Shyaam : Aap mujh par paap chadhwaogi Didi!
Purvi : Aisa kuch nahi hai. Tum jaldi se gadde lagwa do Shyaam!
Shyaam bhi jese haar maan gaya. Aur usne fatafat gadde nikaalte hue neeche bicchha diye.
Chaadar ko uss par daalte hue Purvi aur Bhavna neeche baith gayi.
Bhavna : Neeche sone me apna alag maza hai.
Purvi (smiles) : Bilkul!
Ab bache the toh sirf Tejal aur Veer.
Veer : Mein bhi neeche gadda biccha ke so jaunga. Koi dikkat nahi hai.
Tejal : Mein nahi Veer. Hum!!!
Woh pyaar se boli!
Ek ajeeb sii anubhooti unn dono ke andar jaagi. Jab unhe bodh hua ki woh dono saath me hi sone waale the.
Shyaam ne bagal waale kamre me jaha dining table thi, ussi ke paas se gadde bichhaaye aur chaadar daal takiye rakh ke woh unka intezaam kar waha se chala gaya. Ant tak woh bechaara unhe manaata raha ki woh double bed par so jaaye. Parantu Bhavna ne uski ek na suni.
Raat ke 11:30 baj rahe the aur sabhi apni apni jagah par lait chuke the.
Veer aur Tejal ek dusre ke agal bagal sabhi logo se alag laite hue the.
Dono ke beech ek takiye barabar gap tha. Aur dono hi jaag rahe the. Lekin keh kuch bhi nahi rahe the.
Himmat karke Tejal ne hi iss khamoshi ko toda,
Tej : V-Veer!?
Veer : Hmmm!
Jese hi Veer ki awaaz usse sunaayi padi, woh khush ho gayi. Veer bhi jaag raha tha. Andhera tha toh usse Veer ka chehra theek se nazar nahi aaya. Isliye ye bataana mushqil tha ki woh jaag raha hai ya nahi!?
Tej : So gaye kya?
Veer : Nope!
Tej : Kal raat bhi train me neend nahi lagi thi. Hai na?
Veer : Yeah!
Tej : Meri bhi...! U-Uss bacche ne... Sone nahi diya.
Woh halka sa muskura ke boli.
Veer : Right!
Tej Veer ki orr karvat leke mudi,
Tej : Tumhe kya lagta hai? M-Mom akhir aisa kya raaz humse chhipaaye hue hai?
Uski iss baat ne Veer ka dhyaan kheecha aur Veer bhi uski orr karvat leke mud gaya.
Veer : Honestly, mujhe nahi pata. Koi idea nahi hai. Aur mein abhi koi guessing lagana bhi nahi chaahta.
Tej : Still...! Kya tumhe ghabrahat nahi ho rahi? Ki aisa kya hua tha? Jo woh tumhe chorr ke chali gayi. Kya ye sab sahi ho raha hai? Mom ke woh bol...! Ki bhale hi mein kyu na mit jau. Mujhe bohut bechaini ho rahi hai bhai!
Tej ke bhai pukaarte hi Veer ne usse dekha. Aaj pehli baar uski iss behan ne usse bhai kehke pukaara tha. Uska haath apne aap uth ke Tejal ke gaal par chala gaya. Tej bhi chaunki par boli kuch nahi. Usne Veer ke uss haath ko thaama. Sparsh hote hi dono ke dil ki dhadkane tezz ho gayi.
Veer : Ye baat toh mein bhi nahi jaanta. Par ek baat sach hai.
Tej : Kya?
Veer : Ki raaz bohut bada hai. Aur chhupaane laayak bhi. Shayad isliye unhone...!
Tej : Hmm! Aur isliye ek bechaini hai. Mom ko kuch hoega toh nahi na?
Veer : Unhe kuch nahi hoega. Mein unhe kuch hone hi nahi dunga.
*Silence*
Tej Veer ki aankho me dekhi. Woh bata nahi sakti thi ki woh iss waqt kitni khush thi.
Tej : Veer!
Veer : ??
Tej : Thank you!
Veer : Kis liye?
Tej : For being here!
Aur ek baar fir khamoshi chhaa gayi.
Tej : Kya mein? Tumhare qareeb aa sakti hu?
Usne bilkul maddham awaaz me pucha.
Veer : Mmm!
Aur Veer ki haami paate hi Tej uske qareeb sarak ke bilkul uske nazdeek aa gayi. Dono hi sharma bhi rahe the par jese aur paas bhi aana chaahte the. Dono uss chumbak ki tarah the jo bas kuch hi duri pe the zorr se aapas me chipakne ke liye.
Veer : Ek sawaal puchu?
Tej : Hmm!
Veer : Aapne woh sab kyu kiya?
Tej : Kya?
Veer : Bina kisi ko bataaye, yu Pranjal ke ghar jaana, uss se maar peet karna. Ye sab kya tha?
Tej : Sach kahu ya jhooth?
Veer : Ye bhi koi puchne waali baat hai? Sach kahiye! Jhooth kyu sununga mein? Aapne aisa sawaal hi kyu pucha?
Tej : Taaki ye baato ka silsila lamba chal sake.
Uske itna kehte hi Veer sharm ke maare apni nazre ferr liya. Aur woh akela nahi tha. Tej khud ye bolne ke baad sharma uthi.
Veer: Kahiye! Sach bataiye!
Tej : Uske peeche 2 reasons the.
Veer : Kaun kaun se?
Tej : Pehla ye ki...! Jab mujhe pata chala uss haram khor ne tumhare saath aisi aisi harqate kii hai. Woh bhi ek bhai hote hue. Toh mujhse raha na gaya. Mera khoon khaul utha.
Veer : Aur dusra?
Tej (blushes) : Mein dikhaana chaahti thi! Ki mein tumhari badi behan hu. Tumhara khayaal rakhungi. Tumhe impress karna chaahti thi. Dikhana chaahti thi ki tum akele nahi ho. Tumhari parvaah ke liye hum bhi hai. Par ulta...! Tumne mujhe bachaaya. Socha tha wesa kar ke tumhare dil me ek chhaap chorr dungi. But I failed.
Veer : You didn't!
Veer ke kehte hi Tej jhatt se usse dekhi. Uske gaal gulaabi ho pade.
Tej : That means...!?
Veer (smiles) : Aap ne toh pehle din se hi mere dil me ek chhaap chorr dii thi.
Veer ne usse Egypt ka tour yaad dilaate hue kaha.
Tej (blushes) : Ohh god! That was so embarrassing...! Tab mujhe pata bhi nahi tha. Ki tum mere wahi bhai ho jiski mujhe talaash thi. Ohhh! Right!!! Tum waha kya kar rahe the?
Veer (smiles) : Mom ko dhundhne hi toh aaya tha.
Tej (surprised) : Wait! Toh tumhe pata tha hum waha hai? Tumhe kese sab kuch pata chala? Kavya toh keh rahi thi ki ghar me mom ki koi details nahi thi. Fir tumhe kese-
Veer : Lambi kahani hai. Aapke answers dheere dheere milte jayenge.
Tej (sighs) : Fine!
Veer : Ab hume so jaana chahiye. Subah jaldi-
Tej : Hey!
Veer : Hmm?
Tej : C-Can I kiss you?
Veer bhaunchakka sa Tej ko dekhta reh gaya. Uske muh se kuch na nikla. Aur uski khamoshi ko haan ka ishaara samajh Tej aage badhi, Veer ke gale se lagi aur,
*Puch*
Veer ke baaye gaal ko usne pyaar se choom liya. Itna sharma rahi thi woh, fir bhi himmat kar ke usne ye kar hi diya.
Tej ke hontho ka sparsh mehsoos karte hi Veer ke andar jese kuch hua. Laga ki zorr se usse baaho me bhar le. Par khud ko niyantran me rakh usne apne haath aage nahi badhaaye.
Veer ki chuppi dekh Tej niraasha me boli,
Tej : I'm sorry if it bothered you!
Veer : N-Nahi! Aisi koi baat nahi.
Tej (blushes) : W-Woh- Tumne kuch kaha nahi isliye mujhe laga-
Veer : Ab mein ek baat puchu?
Tej : Huh!!?
Veer : Kya mein aapko...! Teju dii kehke pukaar sakta hu?
*Badump*
Ek baar fir! Aaj din me ye dusri baar tha jab Tej ke dil ne dhadkan phaandi ho. Woh stabdh sii wahi jam ke reh gayi.
Teju dii! Shabd shehed ke bhaati itna meetha prateet hoke jese uske kaano me ghul gaya.
Lekin uski chuppi Veer ko bechain kar gayi.
Veer : I'm sorry if it bothered you!
Tej : Nooooooooo!!
Woh achanak hi khushi ke maare chillaayi aur kass ke Veer ke gale se lag gayi. Aankhein namm bhi thi.
Tej : Kabhi kisi ne...! Kisi ne bhi aaj tak mujhe iss naam se nahi pukaara. Teju dii! *smiles* It sounds so lovely.
Aur iss baar bina jhijak ke usne Veer ke gaal ko punaah choom liya. Uske andar ka aatm-vishvaas jaag gaya. Cheez uski hi thi, 20 saal se paraayi thi. Haq jataane me sankoch mehsoos kar rahi thi Tej. Lekin Veer ke bolo ne jese uske andar sankoch ki deewaar ko tod ke rakh diya.
Woh apne chote bhai se zorr se lag ke uske saath chipak ke hi laiti rahi.
Aur issi tarah dono kab neend ki waadiyo me chale gaye dono ko hi nahi pata chala.
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Next day...
Mumbai
Morning ~ 9:20 AM
*Screeeccchhhhhh*
Ragini ke ghar ke baahar ek car aake ruki. Aur usme se log nikal ke uske darwaaze ke paas pohuche.
*Ding Dong*
Ghanti baji aur Ragini darwaaza kholne ko hui. Usne jese hi darwaaza khola, baahar khade logo ko dekh woh dang reh gayi.
Ragini : A-Aap sab?
Uske saamne Manorath, Brijesh, aur Vivek khade hue the. Vivek ko dekhte hi Ragini ki bauhe sikud gayi. Subah subah ye usne kis ka muh dekh liya tha?
Manorath : Bitiya! Hamare paas samay nahi hai. Jaldi se kaho Veer kaha hai?
Ragini : Veer toh- ghar par nahi hai. Kyu?
Brijesh : Kaha hai woh? Woh ladki kaha hai?
Ragini : H-Huhh??
Manorath : Beta! Veer kaha gaya hai?
Ragini : Woh toh- Woh toh sabke saath gaya hua hai. Aap ko nahi pata?
Manorath : Kavya aur Arohi bitiya ne sirf itna bataya tha ki woh dono tumhare ghar rehne aa rahi hai.
Ragini (chaunkte hue) : Kyaaaa?
Manorath : Haan beta! Upar se phone bhi nahi uthaayi hai ek bhi. Aur Veer ko phone kiya toh usne bhi phone nahi uthaya hai. Isliye yaha aaye hai. Kaha hai woh sab?
Ragini : Woh toh...! Veer toh apni maa ki janmbhumi gaya hai.
Brijesh : Iska matlab...! Papa jii! Woh yahi thi!
Manorath : Bhavna yahi thi!!!
Brijesh : Papa jii!
Manorath : Haan! Haan! Janmbhumi gayi hai na sabhi?
Ragini : H-Haan!
Manorath : Hmm! Brijesh!!!!!
Brijesh : Jii papa jii!
Manorath : Gaadi nikaalo fauran!!! Hum abhi ke abhi Jaipur nikal rahe hai.
Woh kehte hue waha se palat ke jaane lage. Aur peeche peeche Brijesh bhi chal diya.
Manorath : Mera anumaan sahi tha matlab. Kavya aur Arohi ne jhooth kaha tha.
Woh dono waha se nikal gaye. Par Vivek ab bhi Ragini ke saamne khada hua tha. Ragini usse dekhi aur bina kuch kahe usne darwaaza seedha Vivek ke muh pe hi band kar diya.
Vivek bas waha khada khada apni mutthi baandhta reh gaya.
Brijesh : Vivek??? Chalo jaldi!
Vivek (gusse ko chhipaate hue) : Aaya tau jii!
Aur unki gaadi kuch hi palo me waha se ravaana ho gayi.
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Dhanyavaad!
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SUPERB AWESOME FANTASTIC EXCELLENT MARVELOUS AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAIUpdate - 124 ~ Bearing the same pain
Ab tak...
Vivek bas waha khada khada apni mutthi baandhta reh gaya.
Brijesh : Vivek??? Chalo jaldi!
Vivek (gusse ko chhipaate hue) : Aaya tau jii!
Aur unki gaadi kuch hi palo me waha se ravaana ho gayi.
Ab aage...
Surya-uday hua aur subah subah iss taazgi bhare mausam me Shyaam ke ghar afra tafri ka mahaul mach gaya. Sabhi apni apni packing karne me jutt gaye.
Purvi : Veer? Saara samaan rakh liya?
Veer : Jii! Aur aap logo ne?
Purvi : Sab ready hai.
Veer : Okay!
Shyaam khud unki madad karwaane me laga hua tha. Aur Gauri ne sabse pehle subah uth ke unn sab ke liye khaana bana ke pack kar diya raha.
Ab jaake Veer ko samajh aa raha tha ki kyu uski maa yaha par pehle leke aayi thi. Shyaam ka travels ka business tha. Uski gaadiya chalti thi kiraaye par. Aur Veer samet baaki sabhi ko gaadiya toh lagni hi thi iss safar me. Bhavna ne pehle se hi sab kuch plan kar ke rakha tha.
Bhavna : Shyaam! Do gaadi ho jayengi na?
Shyaam : Ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai didi? Ye aapka hi ghar hai. Gaadiya bhi aapki hi hai. Aapko jitni lage, le jaiye. Aapko toh sirf hukm dena hai didi!
Bhavna : Nahi Shyaam! Hume sirf 2 gaadiya hi chahiye. Kya unka intezaam ho jayega?
Shyaam : Kyu nahi didi? Bilkul!
Veer (paas aate hue) : Toh isliye aap yaha pehle hume leke aayi?
Bhavna : Hmm! Sirf yahi kaaran nahi hai beta. Shyaam se mile hue bhi bohut samay ho gaya tha. Aur...!
Veer : Aur?
Bhavna (smiles) : Kuch nahi!
Veer : ...!?
Shyaam ne phone kar apni dukaan par baithe aadmi se fatafat 2 car bulwaayi. Aur dono hi car kuch hi derr me waha aa gayi.
Shyaam : Mein driver bhi karwa du didi? Arre mein hi chala lunga ek toh.
Bhavna : Nahi shyaam! Tumhara ghar par rehna zaroori hai. Dhandha kaun dekhega? Tumhari biwi bhi hai aur bacche bhi. Kisi ek purush ka hona yaha zaroori hai. Kyuki tumhare mata pita bhi baahar hai.
Shyaam : Didi!!!
Bhavna (mudte hue) : Veer?
Veer : Hmm?
Bhavna : Tumse car chalaate-
Veer : Hmm! Mein drive kar lunga.
Bhavna (smiles) : Good! Ek tum kar loge aur ek Tej kar legi.
Tej : Okay!
Veer : Ek minute! Aapke haath me lagi hai. Aap kese drive kar sakti ho?
Apne bhai ki apne prati chinta dekh Tej ka dil khush ho gaya.
Tej : It's okay bhai! Mein chala lungi. Wese bhi kaafi heal ho gaya hai wound.
Veer : Fir bhi-
Tej : Don't worry baba!
Veer : Fine! Lekin agar aapko zara sa bhi dard uthe toh aap wahi ruk jaana. Okay?
Tej (smiles) : Okay!
Veer : Aapko bolta nahi. Par inn dono mohatarma logo se drive karte aata nahi hai.
Usne palat'te hue Arohi aur Kavya ki orr ishaara kiya toh dono ne sharma ke nazre ferr lii.
Kavya (bhun-bhunaate hue) : Hmph~ Mujhko koi sikhata nahi hai toh mein kese chala paungi.
Arohi (blushes) : M-Mein jald hi seekhungi.
Tej (smiles) : Koi baat nahi. Ab mein hu na? Inn dono ki badi behan! Mein sikha dungi!
Kavya : Kyaaaa?? Sacchi didiiii???
Tej (smiles) : Muchhi!!
Kavya : Ohhh wooowwww!!! Hahaha~
Veer : Aap bhi na dii!
Tej : Haha! It's okay! It's okay!
Apne dono baccho ki aapas me bante dekh, Bhavna dur khadi mand mand muskura uthi. Dekh ke khush thi ki uski dono santaano ke beech aapas me acchi bann rahi thi. Bhalayi, ek maa aur bete ka rishta abhi theek nahi tha. Par kam se kam ek bhai aur behan ka rishta toh panapna shuru ho gaya tha. Uske liye filhaal yahi kaafi tha.
Jab samaan rakhne ki baari aayi toh Veer ne Tej ko baitha ke saara samaan dono cars me load karna shuru kar diya.
Shyaam chalte hue Bhavna ke bagal se aa ke khada hua aur bola,
Shyaam : Veer babu kitne bade ho gaye hai. Bohut hi adhbhut anubhooti mehsoos ho rahi hogi didi aapko. Hai na? Itne saalo baad aap dono ka milan hua hai.
Bhavna : Pucho mat Shyaam! Sach me!Aisa lag raha hai ki abhi bhi kisi sapne me hu. Lagta hai jese...! Jese woh din aa gaya hai.
Usne Veer ko dekhte hue ahista se kaha.
Shyaam : Iska matlab aap-!?
Bhavna : Haan! Ab wahi hoga. Fir jaha bhi ye taqdeer le jaaye.
Shyaam : Mujhe saath le chaliye didi, agar koi anhoni ho gayi toh-
Bhavna : Nahi Shyaam! Tumhara yaha rehna zyada zaroori hai.
Shyaam : P-Par-
Bhavna : Mein tumhari ek nahi sunungi. Samay ho raha hai. Ab mein chalti hu. Agar bhagwaan ne chaaha, toh hum firse milenge. Aur agar nahi-
Shyaam : Didiiii!!!!
Bhavna (smiles) : Aur agar nahi, toh Veer aur Tej ki dekh bhaal karna. Unka khayaal rakhna. Theek hai?
Shyaam : Didi aap-
Bhavna : Rakhoge na?
Shyaam bechaara maun reh gaya. Bhavna ki aankho me ek ajeeb sii shaanti thi. Woh bas haami hi bhar saka. Badle me Bhavna muskuraayi, aur palat ke jaate hue ek baar theher kar boli,
Bhavna : Hamari itni khatirdaari karne ke liye shukriya Shyaam. Chalti hu!
Shyaam : Didi!!! Ab aap shukriya kahengi? Khatirdari? Kis kaam ki woh khatirdari jaha mein aapko ek bistar tak nahi uplabdh kara saka?
Bhavna : Shyaam!
Shyaam : !!!?
Bhavna (smiles) : Iss se pehle mujhe kabhi kisi ghar me itna apnapann mehsoos nahi hua, jitna kal yaha mehsoos hua.
Uske ek vaakya ne Shyaam ki bolti hi band kar dii. Aur bechaare ka gala roondh gaya. Aisa laga jese woh abhi yahi ro dega.
Parantu, samay ho chuka tha. Bhavna fir na ruki. Woh aage badh seedhe car ki aage waali seat me baith gayi.
Driver seat par Veer baitha hua tha. Aur peeche waali me Purvi aur Arohi. Toh wahi dusri car me Tej samet Suman. Aur peeche Kavya aur Shweta.
Purvi : Ab hum niklenge Shyaam! Itni seva kii tumne hamari. Uske liye dhanyavaad!
Shyaam : Ab toh paraaya ho gaya hu na. Tabhi toh aap sab baar baar shukriya ada kar rahi hai.
Purvi (muskuraate hue) : Arre! Ahaha! Theek hai. Nahi kahungi! Aur Gauri!
Gauri : J-Jii?
Purvi (smiles) : Khaana bohut accha tha kal. Aur aaj subah subah hamare liye itna sab karne ke liye-
Kehte hue woh beech me hi rukk gayi jab usne Shyaam ko punaah dekha,
Purvi (muskura kar) : Nahi keh rahi hu shukriya. Gauri! Dhyaan rakhna! Theek hai?
Gauri : J-Jii! Aap sab aate rahiyega! Mujhe bhi bohut accha laga aap sab se mil kar.
Veer jo ab tak shaant baitha tha, usne zorr se bola ki sabhi ko sunayi de sake.
Veer : Aap log aise behave kar rahe ho jese hum ye gaadiya lautaane aayenge hi nahi.
Purvi : Arre re!! Hahaha~ Ye bhi sahi hai. Chalo accha! Ab hum nikalte hai theek?
Shyaam : J-Jii!
Aur ek dusre ko namaskar kar Veer sang sabhi waha se vida le liye.
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Jaipur se chale abhi aadhe ghante se upar ho chuka tha. Aur gaav ka ilaaka lagna bhi ab shuru ho gaya tha. Jagah jagah khet aur chaara chabaati gaay dikhaayi pad rahi thi. Hawa me woh gaav ki sugandh bhi ab aane lagi thi.
Ye sanket tha, ki ab Veer aur baaki sabhi asli gaavo ke shetr me qadam rakh chuke the.
Kahi bakriya apne jhund me nikalti hui dikhaayi padti toh kahi kheto me tractor chalte hue, toh kahi fasal par sprinkler paani phekte hue. Samay samay par kacche gharo ke makaan bhi dikhaayi padte.
Veer ki car aage chal rahi thi aur Tejal ki theek uske peeche. Ab Veer ko toh koi taqleef nahi hui driving me lekin Tej ke liye yahi baat kehna thoda mushqil tha.
Tej : Ohhh God! Y-Ye raasta! Aur ye jaanvar beech sadak me aise hi aate rahenge kya?
Suman (smiles) : Ye gaav hai Tejal jii! Ye toh hona hi hai. Lekin fir bhi, sheher me road ki bheed se toh samajhdar hi hai ye jaanvar! Fufu~ Aapki kya raay hai?
Tej : Ugghhh!! Meri koi raay nahi hai. M-Mujhe toh ye badi car chalaane ki aadat nahi.
Suman : Agar aapko kahi bhi dikkat lage toh mujhe bejhijak bata dijiyega. Maal-!!! Ahem! Mera matlab hai Veer ji! Veer jii ne mujhe spasht kaha hua hai ki aapke swaasth aur haalat par vishesh dhyaan du.
Tej : Huh!!? O-Ohhh!
Ek baar fir Tej ke dil me jese khushi ki ek patang uchaayi me udd gote maarne lagi. Uska bhai sach me kitni parvaah kar raha tha. Kya yahi hota hai? Ek bhai ka hona? Ye feeling kitni nayi thi. Woh muskura uthi. Fir jese usse kuch yaad aaya,
Tej : Arre! Woh aap kya keh rahi thi abhi?
Suman : J-Jii?
Tej : Woh...! Maal?? Maal kuch keh rahi thi na aap abhi?
Suman (jhepte hue) : Huh? N-Nahi toh! M-Mein toh bas...! Haan! Mein keh rahi thi ki ka-Maal ke jaanvar hai ye. Toh zara sambhal ke chaliyega.
Tej : Ohhh! Haan! But ye- Urggh! Car ko sahi angle se kaatna hi toh mushqil hai. God! I hate SUVs.
Kavya : Ohh! Wowww! Woh dekho peacock!
Itne me Kavya ek mor dekh chehek padi.
Suman : Hmm? Haan! Behad sundar hai.
Kavya : Arre ye pankh kyu nahi khola hai?
Suman : Fufu~ Uska mann nahi hai abhi.
Kavya : Kya Suman aunty aap bhi...! Arre? Ek minute! Ye toh kitna alag hai!
Suman : Hmm? Par saare mor toh ek jaise hi hote hai!? Isme alag kya hai?
Kavya : Arre mor nahi!
Suman : Toh?
Kavya : Ye! Ye gaav. Mujhe toh laga tha ki rajasthan me pani nahi hota. Harr jagah desert hoga. Par yaha toh-
Suman : Pffftttt~ Hahahahaha~
Uski iss chanchal sii baat par Suman khil khila ke hass padi. Fir hassi rokte hue boli,
Suman (smiles) : Rajasthan ka matlab sirf registaan nahi hota Kavya. Abhi abhi hum Shyaam jii ke yaha se hoke aaye na?
Kavya (nods) : Haan!
Suman : Toh batao waha kesa tha?
Kavya : Ohh haaan!!! Woh toh ek city thi poori. Jaipur! Pink city! Iska matlab har jagah desert nahi hai. Right?
Suman : Bilkul sahi! Jaha registaan hai. Sirf unse lage hue chhetro me kabhi kabhi paani ki dikkatein hoti hai. Aur garmiyo me aksar. Par aisa bhi nahi hai ki insaan jee hi na paaye. Desh bohut tezzi se aage badh raha hai Kavya. Gaav bhi ab aadhunik ho rahe hai. Bas prakrati ke aage hume kabhi kabhi jhukna padta hai.
Kavya : Ooooooooo~ Aapko toh bohut knowledge hai Suman aunty!
Suman muskuraayi. Woh ek acchi adhyapika ki tarah Kavya ko paath padha rahi thi aur Kavya bhi ek acche vidyaarthi ki tarah paath padh rahi thi.
Kavya : Ohhh nooooo! Arrreeee! Ye mein kese bhul gayi???
Suman : Ab kya hua?
Kavya : Arreee! Veer bhaiya ka b'day aa raha hai.
Iss baat ko sunn na sirf Suman balki Shweta aur Tej dono ke hi kaan khade ho gaye.
Tej : Kya kaha? Veer ka b'day?
Kavya : Haa dii!!! Veer bhaiya ka!
Tej (blushes) : K-Kab hai Kavya?
Kavya : Ehhh? Aapko nahi-!? Arre haan! Aap sab toh abhi abhi mile ho. Kese pata hoga. Wese aapki mummy ko yaad hoga. Par fir bhi mein bata deti hu. Bhaiya ka b'day...! Huh!!? Arre baap re!!!!
Tej : Ab kya hua?
Kavya : Arre!!! Veer bhaiya ka b'day toh iss baar diwali waale din hi pad raha hai.
Suman (exclaims) : Arre haan!!!
Kavya : Matlab iss baar ki diwali yahi manaenge hum Suman aunty?
Suman : Lagta toh kuch aisa hi hai.
Tej : Diwali wali date ko huh...! I see!
Veer ke janmdin ka zikr aate hi, Shweta apne khayalaato me doob gayi. Na jaane kya soch rahi thi. Par shaayad vishay Veer hi tha.
Tej (smiles) : Iss baar uska janmdin yadgaar hoga uske liye.
Kavya (nods) : Hmm! Hmm!
Suman : Wese! Inn baato ko alag rakhte hue. Agar aapko taqleef ho rahi ho, toh ek baat bata dena chaahti hu ki idhar Shweta jii se bhi gaadi chalana aata hai. Kyu hai na? Shweta jii?
Suman peeche mudte hue boli. Toh yaha Shweta jo apni soch me ghum thi woh hadbada ke uth gayi,
Shweta : Hhhuuhhh? K-Kyaa??
Suman : Mene kaha ki aapko bhi gaadi chalana aata hai. Hai na? Mein sahi hu na?
Shweta : Ah! H-Haan! Haan!
Tej : Arre waah! Ye toh sukhad samachaar hai. Toh inse kahiye ki apni gaadi uthaaye, aur mere bhai ki zindagi se U-turn maarte hue nikal jaaye!!
Ek teekha aur apne naam ke bhaati tej tarraar vaar kiya usne apne shabdo se.
Shweta : K-Kya?
Tej : Hmph! Sunaayi nahi diya? Mene kaha apna bora bistar baandhiye aur nikal jaiye mere bhai ki zindagi se. Mein aur uski asli maa hai yaha uska khayaal rakhne ke liye.
Suman (frowns) : Tejal jii-! Inn baato ki kya aavashyakta thi?
Shweta jo ab tak khamosh thi, usse bhi ab ye baat pachi nahi. Pichli baar woh train me akeli pad gayi thi jis wajah se Tej uss par haawi ho gayi thi. Par aaj toh Tej akeli thi car me. Iss baat ko dhyaan me rakhte hue, Shweta ne dubak kar chhipne ki bajaaye hamla kar diya.
Shweta : O-Oh accha? Dekho toh bol kaun raha hai? Woh behan jisss apne bhai ka janmdin tak yaad nahi.
Tej ka maath thanka.
Tej : Y-You-!!!
Shweta : Hmph!!
Suman : Aap dono??!! Sshhhh! Kya baccho ki tarah. Ab sab shaant rahenge thodi derr.
Uski baat sunn, kam se kam abhi ke liye thodi shaanti chhaayi waha.
Toh wahi idhar Veer ki car me alag charcha ka vishay bhida hua tha.
Veer : Toh ye gaav jaha hum jaa rahe hai. Yahi aapki janmbhumi hai?
Usne apne bagal me baithi apni maa ki orr dekhte hue kaha. Bhavna usse dekhi aur boli,
Bhavna : Hmm!
Veer ne mann me fir Pari se Jaipur aur saath hi uski maa ki janmbhumi ki jankaari li.
Chuki ab system google ki tarah bhi kaam karta tha toh Veer ko alag se phone me search karne ki zaroorat nahi thi.
Veer : Toh! Ek archeologist hote hue, aapne yaha ke aas paas ke areas me bhi sites explore kii hui hongi?
Bhavna (smiles) : Bilkul!
Veer : Toh? Kaha kaha aapni investigation kii hai? I mean research.
Bhavna : Mene toh Rajasthan ki harr prasiddh jagah ko explore kiya hai bete. Even haunting sites.
Veer : Haunting sites?
Bhavna (smiles) : Hmm! Fir chaahe woh bhangarh ka bhootiya kila ho, kuldhara ka shraapit gaav, Nahargarh kile me Raja ka bhoot, ya Rana khumbha ke chhipe raaz ho, ya fir jagatpura me chudailo ka vaas. Mene harr ek site par samay guzaara hai.
Veer : Aur aisi jagaaho ke naam aap muskura ke bata rahi ho?
Bhavna (laughs) : Hahahahahaha!
Veer : Toh...! Aap ka kya take hai isme?
Bhavna : Kisme?
Veer : I mean...! Aap inn bhoot preto par yakeen karti ho?
Bhavna (smiles) : Abhi tak aankho ke saamne nahi dekha hai.
Veer : Toh yakeen nahi karti?
Bhavna (smiles) : Mene aisa toh nahi kaha!?
Veer : Huh?
Bhavna (sighs) : Karti bhi hu aur nahi bhi.
Veer : Mein kuch samjha nahi?
Bhavna : Beta! Bina aankho ke saamne kuch dekhe aur kaano se sune, cheezo par vishvaas karna murkhta hai. Isliye abhi inn ko spasht roop se maana nahi hai mene. Par na jaane kitne varsho se ye baatein chali aa rahi hai. Kuch toh sacchaayi hogi inke peeche? Isliye poori tarah isse ignore bhi nahi karti hu.
Veer : I see! Toh aapne aisi jagaho par bhi investigation kii hai.
Bhavna (smiles) : Raatein bhi ruki hai.
Veer : Aapko...! Darr nahi laga?
Bhavna : Mein akeli nahi hoti thi. Team hoti thi.
Veer : Aur Teju dii?
Bhavna (smiles) : Usse mein kabhi bhi haunting sites par leke nahi gayi.
Veer : Ohhh!
Bhavna mand mand muskura ke apne bete ko bagal se dekh rahi thi. Soch ke khush ho rahi thi ki uska beta itna interested tha inn sab cheezo ko lekar. Aur ek maa hone ke naate apne bete ke sang woh khoob acche se apna gyaan baant rahi thi.
Veer : Toh ye jo jagah jaha hum chal rahe hai. Y-Yaha kya hua tha? Aur kya hai yaha par?
Bhavna ne apne bete par se nazre ferri aur baahar dekhte hue chup ho gayi.
Veer ne uski khamoshi ko ek naa ka ishaara samjha aur fir aage kuch nahi kaha. Par agle hi shan usse Bhavna ki awaaz sunaayi padi,
Bhavna : Jo kuch bhi hai. Waha jaa ke sab pata lag jayega tumhe aur Tej ko.
Veer : ...
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Kuch duri tay kar lene ke baad woh sabhi ruke, Gauri ke haath ka bana swaadisht khaana unn sabhi ne ke khaaya. Toh wahi thodi thodi chai ki chuski bhi lii.
Kavya aur Veer ke beech abhi bhi woh ladaayi jaari thi. Dono ek dusre ko dekhte aur muh ferr lete.
Veer jaan boojh ke Tejal aur Arohi se hassi khushi baat kar raha tha jis se bechaari Kavya aur jal bhun gayi. Woh dekh paa rahi thi ki kese Tejal aur Arohi ghul milke Veer ke aur qareeb aa rahi thi. Par idhar uski ladaayi chal rahi thi apne bhai se. Muh fula ke woh aurto ke beech jaa baithi.
Jab dobaara se safar aage badha toh Veer aur baaki sabhi fir na ruke. Aur lagataar aage badhte rahe. Tejal bhi ab thak chuki thi. Uske baath ko araam dena zaroori tha. Isliye bachi kuchi duri ke liye Shweta ne waha se car chalaana continue kiya.
Aur dekhte hi dekhte kese ye lamba samay kat gaya, iska pata hi nahi chala. Woh sabhi apni manzil par pohuch chuke the.
Jese hi gaav ke andar mudne ka rasta unhe nazar aaya toh Bhavna ne unhe tok diya,
Bhavna : Andar nahi! Bagal wali road lo.
Veer : Par! Gaav ke andar jaane ki road toh yahi hai na?
Bhavna : Jesa keh rahi hu wesa karo.
Veer : Hum kahi aur chal rahe hai?
Bhavna : Kuch aisa hi samajh lo beta.
Purvi : Beta! Tum toh mod lo. Ye tumhari maa bhi pata nahi kya kya soch ke chal rahi hai. Bas jesa ye kehti jaaye tum karte jao.
Veer : Well! Okay!
Veer ne fir bina koi sawaal kiye car dusre raaste me mod dii.
Ye gaav se alag raasta tha. Ek saath do badi badi car aate dekh sadak par chalne waale vyakti sabhi unhe taktaki laga ke dekhne lage.
Bhavna ki aankhein window se baahar hi idhar udhar hoke kisi cheez ko dhundh rahi thi. Aur jese hi usse woh nazar aaya,
Bhavna : Woh!!! Woh uss makaan ke saamne rok lena gaadi.
Veer ne theek wesa hi kiya. Sabhi utar ke jab baahar aaye toh Bhavna hi aage thi. Uss makaan ke darwaaze ke paas woh pohuchi. Darwaaza khula hi hua tha.
Kavya : Ye hum kaha aaye hai?
Arohi : Mujhe thodi pata hai. Aur ghar se lagataar call aa raha hai. Mene phone nahi uthaaya hai. Tumne?
Kavya : Nahi mene bhi nahi. Par mummy chinta kar rahi hongi na?
Arohi : Hmm! Par ab tak bhabhi ko call kar unhe sab pata lag gaya hoga.
Kavya : Ohh! Toh ab hum baat kar sakte hai?
Arohi : Baat nahi karni hai. Sirf apna haal chaal bata ke phone cut kar dena. Okay?
Kavya : Okay!
Yaha Bhavna be-jhijak seedhe uss makaan ke andar chali gayi. Usse tabhi dikhaayi diya. Ki neeche zameen par baithi ek budhi aurat chulhe me khaana banaane me lagi hai.
Usse dekhte hi Bhavna ki palke bheeg gayi, aankhein namm ho chali.
Bhavna : Kaaki...!!
Woh budhi aurat palat ke Bhavna ko dekhi toh peeche khade itne logo ko dekh dang reh gayi. Woh bechaari Bhavna ko pehchaan na paayi. Tabhi nazdeek aate hue Bhavna ne uske haath ko apne dono haatho me thaam liya.
Bhavna : Kaaki!! Mein...! Bhavna!! Aapki laado!
Aur bas uska itna hi kehna tha ki woh budhi aurat hairat me usse dekhne lagi, fir usse ehsaas hua. Aur fir woh bhaavuk ho gayi.
Rote hue usne Bhavna ko apne gale se laga liya. Kuch bol nahi rahi thi woh. Purvi jo peeche khadi thi uska ravaiyya bhi kuch aisa hi tha. Budhi aurat ko dekhte hi woh daud ke uske sameep aake saath me baitn gayi.
Veer ne ek pal me hi uss aurat ko check kiya. Aur jesa ki woh anumaan laga hi chuka tha. Ye budhi aurat bhi uski servant hi nikli.
Sab baari baari andar aaye aur fir sabhi ke liye uss aurat ne neeche kapda bichhaaya. Sab wahi baith ke bas intezaar karne lage.
Bhavna : Tum sab! Ye abhilaasha kaaki hai.
Purvi : Haan baccho! Aisa samajh lo ki ye tumhari nani jesi hai.
Bhavna : Hmm!
Veer : Toh abhi?
Bhavna : Hum yahi thehrenge.
Veer : Par yaha-
Veer ne agal bagal choti sii jagah ko dekh apni chinta vyakt kii.
Bhavna : Kya tum yaha nahi ruk paoge?
Veer : Aisi baat nahi hai. Mein beech jungle me bhi so sakta hu. Par baakiyo ko dhyaan me rakh kar ye kaha.
Bhavna : Maanti hu ki jagah choti hai aur kuch khaas suvidhaaye nahi hai. Par yaha aaj rukna behad zaroori hai.
Veer : Yaha par hi kyu?
Bhavna (smiles) : Kyuki kaaki ke alaawa ab mera aur koi nahi.
Usne jesa hi ye kaha, Veer samet Tejal dono ko hi ek bada jhatka laga.
Tej : Kya matlab?
Bhavna : Wahi jo tumne suna beta. Shyaam ka parivaar aur kaki hi hai bas ab. Aur tum bhi Suman!
Suman : *smiles*
Bhavna : Isliye hum kahi aur nahi jaa sakte. Ab ye gaav mere liye anjaan hai. Kaaki hi ekmaatr hai.
Veer : Theek hai. Toh mein samaan andar rakh deta hu.
Veer ne baari baari saara samaan andar rakha aur kivaad ko band kar woh sabhi neeche hi ikhatta ho gaye.
Aur ab jaa ke Abhilaasha thiturti hui awaaz me boli,
Abhilaasha : Laado!!! Tum yaha!?
Bhavna : Haan kaaki! Inn dono dekh rahi ho? Ye mere bacche hai.
Mahaul bhaavuk ho utha. Abhilaasha ne dono Veer aur Tejal ke mukh ko choom unhe pyaar kiya.
Aur uske baad woh sab ko baitha ke chai banane me lag gayi. Ziddi bhi bohut thi. Kaam khud hi karna hai matlab khud hi karna hai. Koi aur uska kaam nahi karega.
Hamesha ki tarah apni kaaki ki zidd ke aage haarte hue Bhavna muskura ke bas wahi baith gayi.
Veer : Toh...! Aaj raat yahi?
Bhavna : Hmm!
Shweta : Hum sab soyenge kese Veer?
Veer : Mein wahi soch-
Tej : Ohh c'mon for god's sake!!!!
Tej jo ab tak shaant thi woh bhadak uthi. Poore safar me woh car chalaane me naqamyaab rahi thi. Aur bachi kuchi duri Shweta ne tay kii thi. Shweta jese jaan boojh ke drive kar ke ye bata rahi thi ki driving me woh uss se behtar thi. Jis kaaran se Tej ka dimaag aur garam ho gaya tha.
Uski baat subte hi woh uss par chadh gayi.
Shweta (frowns) : Ye tum baar baar kyu-
Tej : Can you please shut up? Meharbaani kar ke chali kyu nahi jaati yaha se? Haan? Ye drama band kyu nahi kar deti. It's embarrassing!!
Shweta : Mein koi drama nahi kar rahi.
Tej : Ohh! Toh kya kar rahi ho aap???
Shweta : Sirf apne Veer ke liye aayi hu yaha.
Tej : Apne veer? Haan? Toh theek hai. Ussi Veer ke liye aap yaha se chale jaiye! Okay?
Shweta : T-Tumhari baat kyu maanu mein? Agar Veer chaahega toh chali jaungi mein.
Tej : Veer! Keh do ki abhi ke abhi ye yaha se chali jaaye.
Veer : Teju dii! Shaant rahiye!
Tej : What? Par Veer ye aurat..! Ye aurat tunhe bewakoof bana rahi hai Veer. Ye tumhe barbaad karne aayi hai yaha.
"BAS KAROOOO!!!!!" Iss baar Shweta zorr se chillaa uthi.
Uski saasein tezz thi. Woh ghabrayi, sehmi hui bhi thi par saath hi gusse me bhi thi. Baar baar uss par aarop lagaaya jaa raha tha. Ab bas aur nahi.
Shweta : Mein kehti hu band karo!!!
Tej : Ohh! Ye dekho! Ye naya drama shuru!
Shweta : Koi drama nahi hai ye!!! Samjhi?
Tej : Hmph~ Aap chup raho toh hi behtar hai. Jhooth toh aise nikalta hai aapke muh se ki mujhe ghin aati hai aapki harr ek baat se.
Shweta : SHUT UPPP!!! SHUT UPPP!!
Tej : Y-You...!
Shweta : Itna hi behan bataati firti ho toh kaha thi ab tak? Haan? Kaha thi? Kaha thi ye maa behne?? Kyu chorr ke chali gayi Veer ko? Haan!? Jawaab do!!!
Tej : Don't you dare-
Shweta : Koi jawaab hai hi nahi!!! *sniff* Pucho zara apni maa se. Tum mujhe dosh deti ho...! Kam se kam mein Veer ke paas toh thi. Tumhari maa ki tarah nahi jo bachpan me apne bete ko chorr ke chali aayi.
Tej : HOW DARE YOU-!??
Shweta : Haan! *sniff* Ab mujh par gussa dikha lo. Kyuki ye karna asaan hai na? *sniff* Dusre par aarop lagana asaan hi hota hai. *sniff*
Tej : Tum jaanti hi kya ho meri maa ke baare me? Shut up!!!
Shweta : YOU SHUT UP!! TUM KYA JANTI HO MERE BAARE ME?
Tej : ...
Shweta : Apni kokh se baccha khoya hai mene...! *sniff* Apne hi ghar se nikaal dii gayi. Dar-dar bhatakti rahi. *sniff* Apne hi pati se dhoka mila...! Dobaara maa na bann saku aisa abhishaap mila...! Akele hi ek bacchi ko paala posa!! Samaaj ki gaaliya khaayi. *sniff* Uske baad bhi jab Veer jesa heera mila toh usse nakaar diya mene. Kyuki andhi thi!!! Andhi ho gayi thi sirf apni beti ke bhavishya aur uss darr ko lekar...!
Sabhi chup chaap uski baatein sunte rahe.
Shweta : Kya bura kiya mene agar mein apni beti ke baare me soch rahi thi toh? Haan?? Kya tumhari maa ne tumhe paalte waqt tumhaare liye ye sab nahi kiya tha? Bolo!!! *sniff* Kya galat kiya mene agar paiso ki bhook thi mujhe. Kya insaan ko aaj paise ki bhook nahi? Maanti hu ki mei galat thi Veer ke sang. Par uski saza mein bhugat rahi hu. *sniff* Aur kabhi uss se maaf karne ke liye bhi nahi kahungi. Itni khudgarz nahi mein!! *sniff*
Iss baar na sirf kisi ne usse taane maare balki sabhi waha baithe dang reh gaye. Aur thode bhaavuk bhi. Tej ne bas muh ferr liya gusse me. Toh wahi Purvi khadi hui aur bheegi aankhein liye uske nazdeek aayi.
Purvi : Aapne bhi apni santaan khoyi hai?
'bhi' shabd sunte hi Veer aur baaki sabhi ke kaan khade ho gaye. Siwae Bhavna ke. Sab stabdh nigaaho se usse ghoorne lage.
Maayus aankhein liye Purvi ne Shweta ko thaama. Aisa laga jese do insaan jo ek dard se peedit the woh ek dusre ko sahaara de rahe ho.
Purvi (aasu bahate hue) : Toh aapne bhi ye dard saha hai. Haan?
Shweta : !!??
Purvi (namm ankho se) : Farq sirf itna hai. Ki mein itni badqismat nahi thi. Mujhe dobaara maa bann'ne ka avsar mila. Aur jab mene apni santaan khoyi thi. Toh uss gham ko dur karne ke liye Veer mere aalingan me hua karta tha. Aapka dard mein samajh sakti hu.
Woh palat'te hue maayus aankhein liye Bhavna ko dekhi.
Bhavna ne gardan hilaayi. Veer uth ke Shweta ke nazdeek aaya aur usne apna rumaal nikaal ke aage kiya. Na sirf Tej balki uski iss harqat pe Bhavna bhi apni aankhein faade usse dekh rahi thi.
Par rumaal ko chorr, Shweta seedhe zorr se Veer ki baaho me gir gayi. Uski t shirt ko kass ke pakde woh apne aasu uske seene me hi pochhne lagi.
Ye dekh Bhavna uthi aur wahi rakhi ek khaat par jaake baith gayi. Fir uski awaaz sunaayi dii,
Bhavna : Toh tum jaan'na chaahte ho na? Sab kuch!!!?
Veer ko dekh woh boli. Ek sannaata sa chhaa gaya udhar.
Veer ne Shweta ko bithaaya aur khud bhi baith gaya.
Ek gehri saans Bhavna ne lii aur apne dono baccho ko usne dekha. Fir boli,
"Toh suno!!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
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Dhanyavaad!
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Ab tak...
Bhavna : Toh tum jaan'na chaahte ho na? Sab kuch!!!?
Veer ko dekh woh boli. Ek sannaata sa chhaa gaya udhar.
Veer ne Shweta ko bithaaya aur khud bhi baith gaya.
Ek gehri saans Bhavna ne lii aur apne dono baccho ko usne dekha. Fir boli,
"Toh suno!!!"
Ab aage...
Rajasthan!
Rajao ka sthaan!
Ek aisi bhoomi, jaha kisi daur me ek se ek sarvashreshta Maharaja shaasan kiya karte the.
Tab ki duniya aaj ki aadhunik duniya se behad alag thi. Tab ka insaan itna vidvaan tha, fir chaahe woh kaarigiri ho, ya ganit. Arthshastra ho ya kala. Yuddh ke liye ran-neetiya rachna ho ya koot-neetiya. Unn sabhi me aage tha.
Yeh woh daur tha, jaha kisi bhi din jung chidh jaaya karti thi. Yuddh ho jaaya karte the. Ye Yuddh, ek shatranj ke khel ke samaan hua karte the. Jaha ek ek paida apni alag bhumika nibhaata tha.
Seedhe Raja par hamla na kar ke, pehle senapati ko maut ke ghaat utaara jaata tha. Salahkaar ko qabze me liya jaata tha. Theek wese hi jese ek shatranj me ek ek karke arohi kram me badha jaata hai.
Kuch aisa hi haal tha tab ke daur ka. Maharana Prataap, Rana Sanga, Udai Singh, Amar Singh aadi. Ye wo vyakti the jinka naam hi aaj aadar ke saath liya jaata hai. Wo Rajput jo apni veerta, bahaduri, dhridhta aur apne tap ke liye jaane jaate the.
Ye toh the woh maharaj jo ucchatam shreni me aate the. Par iska matlab ye nahi tha ki keval yahi ekmaatr the.
Kayi anya raja maharaja bhi apne apne sthaan ke sanrakshak the. Aur inhi me se ek the Param Veer Singh.
Jo aaj apne saamne khadi bhaari vipakshi sena ko dekh rahe the. Bhale hi unka raajya naya tha aur itna pracheen nahi tha. Toh kya hua? Kahi bhi unki aankho me bhay nahi tha.
"Maharaaj! Dushmano ki sena ki maatra hamari sena se adhik hai. Ye hamari kalpana se bhi zyada nikli."
Param Veer Singh ke sameep khade jab unke senapati ne ye baat kahi, toh Maharaj ki bauhe ek chintan me sikud gayi.
"Hum apni rann-neeti ke anusaar hi aage badhenge." Unhone bina darre kaha.
"Jii maharaj!" Senapati itna bol shaant ho gaya.
Abhi Maharaj hamle ke liye saari sena ke saath badhne hi jaa rahe the ki itne me peeche se unke ek budhe salahkaar ne aake unhe rok liya,
"Rukiye Maharaj!!"
"???" Jab Maharaj ne prashnbhari nigaaho se apne salahkaar ko dekha toh usne bataaya.
"Maharaj! Chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye, kintu aap neel mani ko apne tan se juda hone mat dena. Warna anarth ho jayega."
Maharaj jese iss vishay par pehle bhi charcha kar chuke the. Isliye apna sarr unhone haan me hilaaya aur aage badh gaye.
Fir agle hi shan, yuddh bhumi me dono hi taraf se senaaye aapas me jaa bhidi.
Parantu kismat ko jese kuch aur hi manzoor tha. Bhidant ke dauran, jab maharaja Param Veer Singh apne vipaksh ke Raja ke sang yuddh kar rahe the toh unka ghoda ghaayal ho gaya aur woh zameen par gir pade.
*Whoosh*
Tez dhaar waali talwaar unke seene ko cheerne aayi par unhone samay par peeche hoke khud ko bacha liya. Bas ek galti ho gayi.
Jab woh peeche hue, toh unke seene me latka neel mani hawa me dorr se bandhe lehraaya aur talwaar ki tezz dhaar se lagte hi, unke gale me latki woh dorr beech me se katt gayi. Unka neel mani, zameen par jaa gira.
Woh apna neel mani uthaate ki iss se pehle hi unke dushmano ne unhe gher liya. Fir kya tha? Unhe samarpan karna pada. Aur samay ke saath, unki mrityu bhi ho gayi.
Aur woh neel mani? Woh wahi uss yuddh bhumi me ret me kahi dafn hoke reh gaya. Raja Param Veer Singh ke vanshaj bhi dheere dheere khatam ho gaye. Ek itni behatreen peedhi ka dukhad ant.
Neel mani guzarte samay ke saath gaayab ho gaya. Theek wese hi, jese Raja Param Veer Singh itihaas ke panno me kahi gaayab ho gaye.
Samay nikalta gaya, aur uss ret ke saath saath itihaas par bhi naye samay ki parte aur chaadre chadhti chali gayi.
Itihaas ne dono hi Raja Param Veer Singh aur neel mani ko bhula diya.
Aur yahi bhoomi aaj, Bijaipur ke naam se jaani jaati hai.
Kehte hai ki samay ka pahiya koi rok nahi sakta. Baat satya thi. Yaha pravesh hote hai fir angrez. Jo karne toh vyapaar aaye the bhaarat me. Par jab unhone dekha ki yaha toh raaj-tantrakal shaasan hai. Na hi sarkaar hai aur na hi koi vyavastha.
Toh unhone bhole bhaale rajao ko bhidwana shuru kiya. Woh kamzor ka paksh lete aur unhe jitwa ke unn rajao ko apne anusaar chalaate. Shaasan karne waale toh raja hi hote the par niyam unn angrezo ke chalte.
Aise hi chhal ka sahaara aur aapas me logo ko bhidwa bhidwa kar unhone thaan liya. Ki nahi, ab hum sirf vyapaar hi nahi, balki shaasan bhi karenge.
Aur issi dauraan, shuru hota hai woh samay kaal, jisne Bijaipur ko firse azaadi dilwaayi.
Jab jab angrez yaha aate toh woh bade bade setho aur gaav ke pradhaan se hi aksar mila karte the. Majbooran har ek ko unke ishaaro par naachna padta.
Apne hi apno ke dushman bann rahe the. Lekin inhi dushmano ke beech ek parivaar aisa tha, jo dikhne me bhalaayi dushman tha. Par asal me tha logo ka rakshak, unka karta dharta. Unka bhagwaan!!!
Woh haveli jo angrezo ki nazro me apne hi logo ki shatru thi. Par asal me peeth peeche woh angrezo ke saath na reh ke apne gaav ke logo ki madad kar rahi thi.
Uss haveli ke logo ko sabhi poojte the. Ye woh the jo angrezo ke samne ek aadh bann ke unn sabhi ko bachaaye hue the. Ek prakaar se woh the...
Double agents!!!
Angrez samajhte the ki iss haveli ke bade seth unke anusaar chal rahe hai. Par asal baat toh ye thi ki woh angrezo ki intel apne logo me baant rahe the. Aur aisi hi kar kar ke, na sirf angrez bhaarat chorr bhaag nikle balki Bijaipur ki iss bhoomi ko kam se kam khoon bahaana pada.
Sirf aur sirf, uss ek haveli ke logo ke kaaran.
Year 1997~
Aaj ussi badi haveli me jhoole par jhoolte hue ek 56-57 saal ke buzurg apna chashma kapde se pochne me lage hue the.
Bada sa aangan tha aur wahi par unki pasandeeda baithak thi.
Naam tha Dharam Singh. Jesa naam wesa kaam. Apne dharm ka paalan hi karte the.
"Prabha? Re Prabha???" Unhone andar awaaz lagaayi.
Toh ek aurat gatheele badan ki takreeban 38-40 saal ki andar ki rasoyi se haath me chai ka cup lete hue baahar aayi.
"Ye lijiye bade saahab." Usne chai dete hue kaha.
Dharam Singh abhi apni chai ki chuski ka aanand le hi rahe the ki itne me,
*Dhoom* *Dhadaam*
*Thud*
Baahar se zorr se thokne peetne ya kuch girne ki awaaz aayi.
*Cough* *Cough*
Aur chaukne ke chalte unhe phanda lag gaya. Prabha ne unki peeth thap-thapayi toh woh thoda shaant hue.
Dharam Singh : Ye zaroor meri beti hi hogi!
Unka anumaan ek dum sahi tha. Baahar se tezz qadmo ke saath ek khubsoorat ladki andar pravesh kii. Haatho me bada sa bag tha.
Dharam Singh : Ab kya ho gaya? Kya gira diya?
Ladki : Kya gira diya? Wahi aapka ghatiya toota foota tractor ka hissa. Jab jab aati hu, uss se ek na ek baar bhidti hi hu. Mein kahe deti hu pita jii. Kal agar ye khataara tractor mujhe firse dikha na toh mein isse khud nikaal ke fek dungi.
Dharam Singh (sighs) : Theek hai bhai theek hai! Shaam ko Jaydev se kehke hatwa dunga. Ab khush?
Ladki : Hmph! Aaj maa hoti toh aapko itne din woh khataara ghar me rakhne nahi deti.
Dharam Singh : Woh toh nahi hai ab par tu toh maaf karde meri maa! Kaha toh! Jaydev se hatwa dunga.
Ladki : Hmm!
Dharam Singh : Aur tumhare uska kya hua?
Ladki : Kiska?
Dharam Singh : Arre bhai uska...! Kya kehti ho tum usse?
Ladki : Research?
Dharam Singh : Haan wahi! Re... Resach!
Ladki : Resach nahi pita jii! Ree-seaarchhh!!!
Dharam Singh : Ye sab hatao. Angrezi mere palle na padti. Hmm! Ye kesa hai? Sanshodhan? Kyu? Sahi hai na?
Ladki (smiles) : Sahi hai!
Dharam Singh : Toh kya hua fir?
Ladki : Hona kya tha? Khudaayi jaari hai.
Dharam Singh : Arre jaldi se kyu nahi karti. Tumhe pata hai na, bina anumati ke ye sab ho raha hai. Abhi gaav ke logo ko pata chalega toh pradhaan samet poori panchayat yahi baithak baitha legi. Aur fir mujhe bolenge sab ki bade saahab aap apni beti ko sambhaalna nahi jaante.
Ladki (smiles) : Kisi ki itni majaal nahi ki woh aapke khilaaf kuch bol sake. Samast gaav jaanta hai ki hamaari peedhi kya karti aayi hai. Agar hum na hote toh angrezo ke shaasan ke chalte ye aadhe parivaar pehle hi gaayab ho gaye hote.
Dharam Singh : Hmm! par ab harr baar hum iska gungaan toh nahi kar sakte na? Tum jald se jald waha apna kaam khatam kar lo.
Ladki : Theek hai!
Dharam Singh : Warna koi na koi aake rai ka pahaad bana daalega iska.
Ladki : Sirf zameen hi toh khodi hai thodi sii, kaun sa koi khoon kar rahe hai kisi ka.
Dharam Singh : Zameen khodi hai par bina anumati ke.
Ladki : Arre par-!?
Dharam : Mmmm!!! Bas! Ab iss baare me aur charcha nahi.
Ladki : Hmph! Dekh lena! Jab kuch bada mere haath lagega na tab aap kahoge ki 'jug jug jiyo meri beti. Jug jug jiyo!'
Dharam Singh (smiles) : Bitiya rani ye tum apne pichle 7 sanshodhano me bhi keh chuki ho. Par phooti kaudi haath nahi lagi hai.
Ladki (blushes) : W-Woh! Tab mein seekh rahi thi pita jii! Aur wese bhi, shuruaat toh apni hi zameen, yaani ki apne hi gaav se karni chahiye na? Baad me desh videsh ghoomungi mein. Dekhna aap.
Dharam Singh : Dekhte hai bhai! Dekhte hai. Filhaal toh aisa lag raha hai mein kahi galat jagah kharcha toh nahi kar raha?
Ladki : Pitaaaaa jiiiiii!!! Kya aap bhi!!! Kya aapko kabhi ye jaan'ne ki iccha nahi hoti, ki ye kila wagarah, ye mandir masjid, ye puraani imaarato ke avshesh, kesi bani hongi? Unki deewaaro ne apne kaal me kya kya nahi dekha hoga? Keval bol nahi sakti hai ye. Par na jaane kya kya inhone tab dekha hoga. Hai na? Hai na? Kya aapko jaan'ne ka mann nahi karta? Ki ye sab kese bane honge? Kaarigiri inki kese hui hogi? Log tab kese jeete honge? Haan? Kahiye! Kahiye!
Dharam Singh : Hmm? Filhaal jo mein sabse zyaada jaan'ne ke liye icchuk hu woh ye hai ki pichle maah me aa jaane waala paisa, abhi tak Tilakram vyapaari ke yaha se aaya nahi hai. Hmm! Yaad dilaana hoga usse.
Ladki (chillaate hue) : Pitaaaaa jiiii!!! Aap bhi na!!
Dharam Singh : Hahahahahaha!
Aur inki hassi mazaak ki charcha jab khatam hui toh kuch derr baad woh ladki firse boli,
Ladki : Prabha Kaaki? Suman kaha hai?
Prabha (smiles) : Ghar par hai choti maalkin. Khaana bana rahi hogi apna aur apni iss maa ka.
Ladki : Kya aap bhi! Abhi woh choti hai. Sirf 14 ki hi hai. Usse inn sab kaamo me kyu lagaayi ho. Mere saath bhej diya karo. Kuch seekh liya karegi.
Prabha (smiles) : Ab kisi na kisi ko toh banana hi padega na choti maalkin.
Abhi ye sab baat kar hi rahe the ki itne me baahar se ek cheh-chahaati awaaz sunaayi padi.
Ek aur sundar aur pyaari sii ladki haveli ke andar bhaagte hue aayi,
"Bhhhaaaavvvnnnnaaaaa!!!!"
Woh bhaagte hue aayi aur apne saamne khadi ladki ko pakad gol gol ghoom firki lene lagi.
Aur ye ladki koi aur nahi, Bhavna ki ekmaatr saheli, Purvi thi.
Aur woh ladki jo Dharam Singh ki beti thi woh koi aur nahi Bhavna hi thi.
Bhavna : Arre!!? Arre chorr toh sahi. Aa gayi tum?
Purvi : Haan! Woh kaksha ka chorra aaj fir muh lada raha tha. Collar pakad ke jo do mene raseede hai na? Poore sehpaathi dekhte reh gaye. Hehehehe!!
Tabhi uske peeche se ek aur vyakti shirt pant pehne haveli me pravesh kiya,
"Ye kya tareeqa hai Purvi? Mene kaha hai na tumse ki Bhavna tumse 6 saal badi hai. Usse didi kehke bulaaya karo. Kya yahi sanskaar diye hai mene tumhe?"
Bhavna (smiles) : Mahesh chacha rehne dijiye! Iski toh aadat hai ab. Aise nahi jayegi.
Mahesh (sighs) : Tumne hi bigaad diya hai beta isse. Dheel de rakhi hai.
Bhavna (smiles) : Hum dono ki maa nahi hai. Toh aapas me judaav toh rahega hi na kaaka?
Mahesh : Ye...! *sighs* Sahi kaha beta!
Purvi : Hum dono ek dusre ki pakki saheli hai. Aur haan, mein Bhavna ko hamesha bhavna keh ke hi bulaungi. Koi maayi ka laal mujhe zabardasti didi nahi kehlwa sakta bhavna ke liye. Hmph!!!
Apni beti ki baato ko sunn, Mahesh bas muskura diya.
Dharam Singh : Mauhar lag gayi Mahesh?
Mahesh : Hmm? Jii bade saab! Ye dekhiye!
Aur woh aage badh kuch zaroori kaagzaat
Dharam Singh ko dikhaane laga.
Par abhi bhi jese yaha log kam the jo baahar se ek pandit jii bhi aa gaye. Jinhe befaaltu hassne ki ek beemaari thi.
Pandit jii : Mene kaha ram ram sa Bade saab!!! Hahahahahaha!
Dharam Singh : Arre aaiye aaiye! Pandit jii! Viraajiye!
Pandit jii : Hahahaha! Haan zaroor zaroor!
Dharam Singh : Bhavna ki kundli toh dekh hi lii hogi aapne fir. Jaydev ke haatho bhijwaayi thi mene.
Pandit jii : Arre ussi silsile me toh aaye hai bade saab! Hahahahahaha! Aur bhavishyavani bhi shuru kar dii hai mene.
Dharam Singh : Pehle Bhavna ke baare me toh bataiye kuch.
Pandit jii : Bhai kundli toh bohut badhiya hai Bade saab. Thodi dikkatein aa sakti hai aane waale varsho me. Sambhal kar rehna hoga. Lekin baad ka kaal accha maalum padta hai.
Dharam Singh : Hmm!
Aur aaj jese sabhi ne ek hi samay par ek saath milne ka tay kar rakha tha. Haveli ke ek hisse ka bada sa darwaaza khula aur andar se do vyakti baahar nikle.
Ek naujavaan aur ek aurat.
Bhavna ne jese hi uss naujavaan ko dekha toh muh fula lii aur khuspusaate hue apne aap me boli, "Ho gayi inki suprabhaat! Aurat ke saath!"
Bhale hi uss naujavaan ne Bhavna ki poori baatein na suni. Par usse andaaza zaroor lag gaya tha ki uski ye choti behan zaroor usse gaaliya hi bak rahi thi.
Woh muskura ke saamne bistar par baitha aur rakhi hui chai ko utha ke usse peene laga.
Dharam Singh : Aa gaye tum?
Bhavna ne dekha ki uske bade bhai ke sang baahar aayi woh aurat kese apne kapde theek karte hue baahar jaa rahi thi.
Aur ye dekh uska poora mood bekaar ho gaya.
Ladka : Jii pita jii!
Dharam Singh : Dekho pandit jii aaye hue hai. Bhavna ki kundli dikhaayi hai mene inhe. Tumhari bachi hai. Zara laa ke dikha do pandit jii ko. Aur pandit jii! Ye hai mera eklauta beta! Vijay! Zara iska bhi shaadi ka yog dekh ke bata dijiye!
Pandit ji : Arre laiye! Abhi bata deta hu haha! Wese toh jis varsh shani aur guru dono saptam bhaav ya lagn ko dekhte ho, tab hi vivaah ke yog bante hai. Par kundli laa dijiye. Usme sab samajh aa jayega. Aur bhavna bitiya ka toh bata hi raha hu Hahaha! Bitiya ki shaadi issi saal ho sakti hai. Aur agar nahi hui toh agle saal toh pakka hi hogi.
Dharam Singh : Accha! Pandit jii! Aap woh kuch bhavishyavani ka bhi bata rahe the?
Pandit jii : Arre haan! Mein kya kehta hu bade saahab. Meri bhavishyavani galat nahi ho sakti. Haha!
Bhavna : Aur sahi bhi nahi ho sakti.
Pandit jii : *cough* *cough* B-Beta zara paani laana toh!
Bhavna : Prabha kaaki!
Prabha : Jii! Choti maalkin! Abhi laati hu.
Dharam Singh : Toh pandit jii! Aap bataate kyu nahi ki Bhavna ki shaadi kis se hoegi?
Bhavna : Kya aap bhi pita ji?? Bhavishyavani karna pandit jii ka kaam nahi hai. Aap khamakha unko-
Pandit jii : Arre beta mene ye bhi shuru kar diya hai taaza taaza. Abhi bata deta hu. Hahaha!
Bhavna toh jese jaanti thi ki ye waale pandit jii se bhavishyavani nahi aati thi. Harr koi aise thodi bhavishya dekh sakta tha bhala.
Pandit jii : Bade saahab! Bhavna bitiya ki shaadi kis se hogi ye toh nahi bata sakta. Haan lekin 'ब' (ba) shabd se naam shuru hone waale vyakti se hi bitiya ki shaadi hoegi.
Bhavna : Mein nahi maanti! Hmph! Chal Purvi!!!
Aur Purvi ka haath thaame Bhavna waha se rafu chakkar ho gayi.
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Par kehte hai na, jab kisi jagah par ek samay par kuch ghatit ho raha hota hai toh ussi samay par kisi aur jagah kuch aur chal raha hota hai.
Aisa hi kuch haal tha Bijaipur ke bagal se lage hue gaav ka. Harr sikke ke do pehlu hote hai. Agar Dharam Singh ki haveli jaani jaati thi apne nek kaamo, imaandaari, gaurav aur gaav waalo ki raksha ke liye.
Toh wahi iss gaav ki badi haveli jaani jaati thi apni beimaani, namak-harami aur apne bhrashtachaar ke liye.
Par vidambna dekhiye. Dono hi parivaar panpe, aur dono hi parivaar ka aadar satkaar hota tha.
Farq itna tha, ki ek ke liye tareef dil se nikalti thi aur dusre ke liye darr se.
Inn haveliyo ke dono hi mukhiya ke haatho me chaaku thi. Antar sirf itna tha ki,
Dharam Singh ki peedhi ek doctor ke bhaati chaaku ko chalaate hue apne logo ka ilaaj kar rahi thi. Toh wahi dusri haveli ki peedhi ek daaku ke samaan chaaku chalaate hue apne logo ko thikaane par laga rahi thi.
Aur iss badi haveli ke vartmaan ke mukhiya the ~ Harikiran Singh!!!
Ghumaavdaar muuche, sarr par rajasthani pagdi aur rajasthani bol chaal.
Haveli ke andar ke ek kamre se ek naujavaan nikla. Ye Harikiran ka suputr hi tha ~ Bhanu Prataap Singh!!!
Apne bete ko baahar jaate dekh woh usse tok diye,
Harikiran Singh : Kathe jaa rhya ho? (Kaha jaa rahe ho?)
Bhanu pratap : Mitra mandal ke saath yahi gaav ka chakkar maarne. Abhi aa jaunga.
Itna bol woh nikal gaya ghar se.
Mitro ki toli ko ikhatta kar woh sabhi gaav ki chhoriyo ko ghoorte, unhe alag alag naamo se pukaarte. Ye uss zamaane ki flirting hua karti thi.
Ladka 1 : Arre bhai! Chhorri ho toh saala bagal ke gaav ki Bhavna jesi!! Kya mast roop, mast chaal, mast adaa aur kya mast banawat hai.
Ladka 2 : Oye! Woh waha ki badi haveli ki iklauti beti hai. Agar bade saab ko pata chala na toh tere ko udaa denge.
Ladka 3 : Bade saab ke pehle toh hamara Bhanu hi uda dega isse. Hahahaha!
Ladka 2 : hahaha! Haan bhai! Ye toh puri duniya jaanti hai ki Bijaipur ki haveli aur hamare yaha ki badi haveli ke beech kitni badi takraar hai.
Ladki 1 : Sahi kaha! Par bhanu bhai bhi meri baat se sehmat honge. Kyu hai na? Kya Bhavna jesi chhorri ki baat alag nahi bhai?
Bhanu Pratap : Hmm! Baat alag toh hai. Usse bistar par litaane me ek alag maza aayega.
Ladke : Hahahahahaha!!!
Ladka 1 : Toh fir hum rishta pakka samjhe kya bhai?? Kab aana hai byaah me? Hahahaha!
Ladka 2 : Arre woh sab chorro!! Mene suna hai woh Bhavna gaav ke baahar khaali ilaako me khudaayi karwa rahi hai. Uski woh...! Kya kehte hai usse...! Re.. research ke liye.
Ladka 3 : Research? Ab ye kis bala ka naam hai?
Bhanu Prataap : Research maane sanshodhan! Jaach padtaal!
Ladka 1 : Bhanu bhaiya ko sab gyaan hai! Hahaha!
Bhanu Prataap (garv se collar chadhaate hue) : Hmm!!!
Ladka 3 : Toh usme kya?
Bhanu Prataap : Agar aisa hai! Toh hum kal hi Bijaipur me uss se waha mil ke aayenge.
Ladke : Hahahaha! Kya khoob soch rahe ho bhai. Bilkul! Bilkul!
Aur wo sabhi waha se fir ravaana ho gaye.
Par ye akele nahi the. Koi aur bhi tha jo iss waqt Mumbai ke station se ravaana ho raha tha.
"Sab rakh liya na theek se Birjesh??"
Manorath khade hue apne bete se puche. Unke saamne khada naujavaan, Brijesh unka bada ladka unke charan sparsh kiya aur bola,
Brijesh : Jii papa jii!
Uske saath hi uska chota bhai uska samaan rakhwa raha tha.
Karunesh : Bhaiya ho gaya hai sab! Aao baith jao!
Brijesh : Arre mein chala jaunga! Aap log nikal jaiye ab!
Tabhi ek aurat dheere dheere chal uske paas aayi,
"Sambhal ke jaana theek? Theek beta?"
Brijesh : Maa! Mene tumko kaha hai na ki itni chinta mat kiya karo! Aur khamakha aap sab yaha aaye. Mein akele aa sakta tha.
Manorath : Brinda!!! Baith jao! Dekho saans foolne lagi hai tumhari.
Brinda : Kya karu ab...! Dama ki beemaari jo hai mujhe. Bhaag nahi sakti iss se mein.
Karunesh : Maa tum idhar kinaare aa jao!
Brinda : H-Haan!
Train ki seeti baji toh Manorath Karunesh aur apni patni Brinda ko leke train se baahar aa gaye.
Aur dekhte hi dekhte, train chal dii!! Brijesh pehli baar akele aise itni door jaa raha tha. Wese toh woh kayi baar safar kar chuka tha. Par ye safar uske liye kuch anokha sa tha. Usse andar se ye mehsoos ho raha tha.
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Jab agla din hua toh idhar Bijaipur me Bhavna ki subah hi umang ke saath hui. Aaj usse andar se kuch anubhooti ho rahi thi. Jese aaj jo usse chaahiye tha woh milne waala tha. Aaj behad sakaraatmak mehsoos kar rahi thi woh.
Fatafat apna samaan baandhe, kuch pustake apne jhole me rakhte hue woh Jaydev ke saath subah subah hi gaav ke uss khudaayi waale hisse me pohuch gayi.
Jaydev (smiles) : Mein toh kehta hu aap bekaar me mehnat kar rahi ho choti maalkin!
Bhavna : Woh kaise bhala?
Jaydev : Iske pehle aapke saath mein 7 baar aur jagah khudaayi karwa chuka hu. Par hamaare hath kuch bhi nahi laga hai.
Bhavna : Arre toh! Toh mehnat lagti hai! Dekhna! Iss baar zaroor kuch na kuch milega.
Jaydev : Pichli 7 baar se dekh raha hu choti maalkin!!
Bhavna : Ufffff ooo!! Aap sawaal jawaab bohut karte hai kaaka! Aur Shyaam kya kar raha hai?
Jaydev (smiles) : Shyaam ghar pe hai. Pareeksha ki taiyaari kar raha hai.
Bhavna : Oooo!!! Kherr! Aaiye! Arre waah! Aapke log toh itni jaldi pohuch gaye sawere! Haha! Sab acche rang me hai aaj haan!?
Jaydev ne order dete hue jab aadmiyo ko aur gehra khodne kaha toh khudaayi firse jaari ho gayi.
Pehle hi woh log itna gehra alag alag jagao par khod chuke the. Par mila kuch nahi tha.
Woh aadmi toh apni umeed pehle hi chorr ke aaye the. Lekin aaj jese unki kismat rang laane waali thi.
Khudaayi ke dauran achanak hi aisa ek pal aaya jab aadmiyo me chillaa ke Bhavna aur Jaydev ko bulaaya.
Jese hi Bhavna waha pohuchi usne fauran hi unhe auzaar chaalaane se rok diya.
Bhavna : Rukooo! Rukooo! Auzaar mat chalaana! Mujhe dekhne do!
Apne jhole me se kuch keemti chote chote auzaar nikaal Bhavna iss avshesh ke paas pohuchi. Ek akaarheen patthar the ye. Jiske baahar se kuch lohe ki dorri sii latak rahi thi.
Dheere dheere thok peet ke Bhavna ne uss patthar ki halki halki parat hataana shuru kii!
Usse ye karne me na jaane kitna waqt beet gaya. Par jese hi parat hati, aur woh chhipi hui cheeez uske saamne aayi.
Uski aankhein hairat aur khushi ke maare felti chali gayi.
Woh zorr se cheenkhi,
"Kaaaaaakaaaaaaa!!!!" Jaydev bhaagte hue uske sameep aaya. Aur aate hi waha jamm sa gaya. Uska bhi haal wahi tha jo abhi Bhavna ka ho rakah tha.
Bhavna ke kaanpte hue haatho ne uss cheez ko badi hi savdhaani se uthaaya. Uski aankho me ek chamak thi.
Aur haatho me...!
Neel mani!!!!!
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"Fir kya hua? Fir kya hua????"
Kavya ki chanchal awaaz ne unn sabhi ko hosh me laaya. Bhavna ki baat sunte sunte woh kab iss ateet me kho gaye the, unhe iss baat ka pata hi na chala.
Woh Suman ki goad par sarr rakh ke laiti hui thi. Bhavna abhi bhi ussi khaat par maujood thi.
Toh wahi Veer deewaar se tik ke zameen par baitha hua tha. Aur uske kandhe par sarr rakh ke Tejal sab kuch sunn rahi thi.
Arohi aur Shweta bhi ek kone me baithe hue the. Aur Purvi Abhilasha kaaki ke saath chai ko chhaan rahi thi jo bann ke taiyaar thi.
Kavya : Bataiye na! Fir kya huaaa????
Bhavna Kavya ki utsukta dekh bas neeche dekh muskuraayi.
Veer ke maathe par ye dekh kuch lakeere bann gayi. Aisa laga jese uski maa niraasha me muskuraayi ho. Kuch chhipa the jese uss muskaan ke peeche.
Aur antatah Bhavna ke muh se kuch derr baad nikla,
"Fir kya hua? Fir...! Uss traasdi ki shuruaat hui beta!"
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Bahut hi umda Update tha Werewolf bhai maja aa gaya. Aakhirkar Bhavna ne past ke bare me batana suru kar diya. Aur ab tak ke past se hme bahut kuch janane ko mila hai. Aur aane wale dusamono ke bare me kuch kuch pata chala hai. Ab dekhte hai aur kitne dusamn samne aate hai aur kaise future me wo veer ke samne aate hai aur veer unko khtam karta hai. Yaha se hi hme bahut kuch janane ko bhi mil gaya hai Purvi, suman aur shyam ke bare me. Wo neelmani veer ke gale me latak rahi hai wahi hogi. Aur aisa kya hai is mani me ye bhi dekhne wali baat hai. Aakhir iska kya raj hai ?Update - 125 ~ History unfolds (1)
Ab tak...
Bhavna : Toh tum jaan'na chaahte ho na? Sab kuch!!!?
Veer ko dekh woh boli. Ek sannaata sa chhaa gaya udhar.
Veer ne Shweta ko bithaaya aur khud bhi baith gaya.
Ek gehri saans Bhavna ne lii aur apne dono baccho ko usne dekha. Fir boli,
"Toh suno!!!"
Ab aage...
Rajasthan!
Rajao ka sthaan!
Ek aisi bhoomi, jaha kisi daur me ek se ek sarvashreshta Maharaja shaasan kiya karte the.
Tab ki duniya aaj ki aadhunik duniya se behad alag thi. Tab ka insaan itna vidvaan tha, fir chaahe woh kaarigiri ho, ya ganit. Arthshastra ho ya kala. Yuddh ke liye ran-neetiya rachna ho ya koot-neetiya. Unn sabhi me aage tha.
Yeh woh daur tha, jaha kisi bhi din jung chidh jaaya karti thi. Yuddh ho jaaya karte the. Ye Yuddh, ek shatranj ke khel ke samaan hua karte the. Jaha ek ek paida apni alag bhumika nibhaata tha.
Seedhe Raja par hamla na kar ke, pehle senapati ko maut ke ghaat utaara jaata tha. Salahkaar ko qabze me liya jaata tha. Theek wese hi jese ek shatranj me ek ek karke arohi kram me badha jaata hai.
Kuch aisa hi haal tha tab ke daur ka. Maharana Prataap, Rana Sanga, Udai Singh, Amar Singh aadi. Ye wo vyakti the jinka naam hi aaj aadar ke saath liya jaata hai. Wo Rajput jo apni veerta, bahaduri, dhridhta aur apne tap ke liye jaane jaate the.
Ye toh the woh maharaj jo ucchatam shreni me aate the. Par iska matlab ye nahi tha ki keval yahi ekmaatr the.
Kayi anya raja maharaja bhi apne apne sthaan ke sanrakshak the. Aur inhi me se ek the Param Veer Singh.
Jo aaj apne saamne khadi bhaari vipakshi sena ko dekh rahe the. Bhale hi unka raajya naya tha aur itna pracheen nahi tha. Toh kya hua? Kahi bhi unki aankho me bhay nahi tha.
"Maharaaj! Dushmano ki sena ki maatra hamari sena se adhik hai. Ye hamari kalpana se bhi zyada nikli."
Param Veer Singh ke sameep khade jab unke senapati ne ye baat kahi, toh Maharaj ki bauhe ek chintan me sikud gayi.
"Hum apni rann-neeti ke anusaar hi aage badhenge." Unhone bina darre kaha.
"Jii maharaj!" Senapati itna bol shaant ho gaya.
Abhi Maharaj hamle ke liye saari sena ke saath badhne hi jaa rahe the ki itne me peeche se unke ek budhe salahkaar ne aake unhe rok liya,
"Rukiye Maharaj!!"
"???" Jab Maharaj ne prashnbhari nigaaho se apne salahkaar ko dekha toh usne bataaya.
"Maharaj! Chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye, kintu aap neel mani ko apne tan se juda hone mat dena. Warna anarth ho jayega."
Maharaj jese iss vishay par pehle bhi charcha kar chuke the. Isliye apna sarr unhone haan me hilaaya aur aage badh gaye.
Fir agle hi shan, yuddh bhumi me dono hi taraf se senaaye aapas me jaa bhidi.
Parantu kismat ko jese kuch aur hi manzoor tha. Bhidant ke dauran, jab maharaja Param Veer Singh apne vipaksh ke Raja ke sang yuddh kar rahe the toh unka ghoda ghaayal ho gaya aur woh zameen par gir pade.
*Whoosh*
Tez dhaar waali talwaar unke seene ko cheerne aayi par unhone samay par peeche hoke khud ko bacha liya. Bas ek galti ho gayi.
Jab woh peeche hue, toh unke seene me latka neel mani hawa me dorr se bandhe lehraaya aur talwaar ki tezz dhaar se lagte hi, unke gale me latki woh dorr beech me se katt gayi. Unka neel mani, zameen par jaa gira.
Woh apna neel mani uthaate ki iss se pehle hi unke dushmano ne unhe gher liya. Fir kya tha? Unhe samarpan karna pada. Aur samay ke saath, unki mrityu bhi ho gayi.
Aur woh neel mani? Woh wahi uss yuddh bhumi me ret me kahi dafn hoke reh gaya. Raja Param Veer Singh ke vanshaj bhi dheere dheere khatam ho gaye. Ek itni behatreen peedhi ka dukhad ant.
Neel mani guzarte samay ke saath gaayab ho gaya. Theek wese hi, jese Raja Param Veer Singh itihaas ke panno me kahi gaayab ho gaye.
Samay nikalta gaya, aur uss ret ke saath saath itihaas par bhi naye samay ki parte aur chaadre chadhti chali gayi.
Itihaas ne dono hi Raja Param Veer Singh aur neel mani ko bhula diya.
Aur yahi bhoomi aaj, Bijaipur ke naam se jaani jaati hai.
Kehte hai ki samay ka pahiya koi rok nahi sakta. Baat satya thi. Yaha pravesh hote hai fir angrez. Jo karne toh vyapaar aaye the bhaarat me. Par jab unhone dekha ki yaha toh raaj-tantrakal shaasan hai. Na hi sarkaar hai aur na hi koi vyavastha.
Toh unhone bhole bhaale rajao ko bhidwana shuru kiya. Woh kamzor ka paksh lete aur unhe jitwa ke unn rajao ko apne anusaar chalaate. Shaasan karne waale toh raja hi hote the par niyam unn angrezo ke chalte.
Aise hi chhal ka sahaara aur aapas me logo ko bhidwa bhidwa kar unhone thaan liya. Ki nahi, ab hum sirf vyapaar hi nahi, balki shaasan bhi karenge.
Aur issi dauraan, shuru hota hai woh samay kaal, jisne Bijaipur ko firse azaadi dilwaayi.
Jab jab angrez yaha aate toh woh bade bade setho aur gaav ke pradhaan se hi aksar mila karte the. Majbooran har ek ko unke ishaaro par naachna padta.
Apne hi apno ke dushman bann rahe the. Lekin inhi dushmano ke beech ek parivaar aisa tha, jo dikhne me bhalaayi dushman tha. Par asal me tha logo ka rakshak, unka karta dharta. Unka bhagwaan!!!
Woh haveli jo angrezo ki nazro me apne hi logo ki shatru thi. Par asal me peeth peeche woh angrezo ke saath na reh ke apne gaav ke logo ki madad kar rahi thi.
Uss haveli ke logo ko sabhi poojte the. Ye woh the jo angrezo ke samne ek aadh bann ke unn sabhi ko bachaaye hue the. Ek prakaar se woh the...
Double agents!!!
Angrez samajhte the ki iss haveli ke bade seth unke anusaar chal rahe hai. Par asal baat toh ye thi ki woh angrezo ki intel apne logo me baant rahe the. Aur aisi hi kar kar ke, na sirf angrez bhaarat chorr bhaag nikle balki Bijaipur ki iss bhoomi ko kam se kam khoon bahaana pada.
Sirf aur sirf, uss ek haveli ke logo ke kaaran.
Year 1997~
Aaj ussi badi haveli me jhoole par jhoolte hue ek 56-57 saal ke buzurg apna chashma kapde se pochne me lage hue the.
Bada sa aangan tha aur wahi par unki pasandeeda baithak thi.
Naam tha Dharam Singh. Jesa naam wesa kaam. Apne dharm ka paalan hi karte the.
"Prabha? Re Prabha???" Unhone andar awaaz lagaayi.
Toh ek aurat gatheele badan ki takreeban 38-40 saal ki andar ki rasoyi se haath me chai ka cup lete hue baahar aayi.
"Ye lijiye bade saahab." Usne chai dete hue kaha.
Dharam Singh abhi apni chai ki chuski ka aanand le hi rahe the ki itne me,
*Dhoom* *Dhadaam*
*Thud*
Baahar se zorr se thokne peetne ya kuch girne ki awaaz aayi.
*Cough* *Cough*
Aur chaukne ke chalte unhe phanda lag gaya. Prabha ne unki peeth thap-thapayi toh woh thoda shaant hue.
Dharam Singh : Ye zaroor meri beti hi hogi!
Unka anumaan ek dum sahi tha. Baahar se tezz qadmo ke saath ek khubsoorat ladki andar pravesh kii. Haatho me bada sa bag tha.
Dharam Singh : Ab kya ho gaya? Kya gira diya?
Ladki : Kya gira diya? Wahi aapka ghatiya toota foota tractor ka hissa. Jab jab aati hu, uss se ek na ek baar bhidti hi hu. Mein kahe deti hu pita jii. Kal agar ye khataara tractor mujhe firse dikha na toh mein isse khud nikaal ke fek dungi.
Dharam Singh (sighs) : Theek hai bhai theek hai! Shaam ko Jaydev se kehke hatwa dunga. Ab khush?
Ladki : Hmph! Aaj maa hoti toh aapko itne din woh khataara ghar me rakhne nahi deti.
Dharam Singh : Woh toh nahi hai ab par tu toh maaf karde meri maa! Kaha toh! Jaydev se hatwa dunga.
Ladki : Hmm!
Dharam Singh : Aur tumhare uska kya hua?
Ladki : Kiska?
Dharam Singh : Arre bhai uska...! Kya kehti ho tum usse?
Ladki : Research?
Dharam Singh : Haan wahi! Re... Resach!
Ladki : Resach nahi pita jii! Ree-seaarchhh!!!
Dharam Singh : Ye sab hatao. Angrezi mere palle na padti. Hmm! Ye kesa hai? Sanshodhan? Kyu? Sahi hai na?
Ladki (smiles) : Sahi hai!
Dharam Singh : Toh kya hua fir?
Ladki : Hona kya tha? Khudaayi jaari hai.
Dharam Singh : Arre jaldi se kyu nahi karti. Tumhe pata hai na, bina anumati ke ye sab ho raha hai. Abhi gaav ke logo ko pata chalega toh pradhaan samet poori panchayat yahi baithak baitha legi. Aur fir mujhe bolenge sab ki bade saahab aap apni beti ko sambhaalna nahi jaante.
Ladki (smiles) : Kisi ki itni majaal nahi ki woh aapke khilaaf kuch bol sake. Samast gaav jaanta hai ki hamaari peedhi kya karti aayi hai. Agar hum na hote toh angrezo ke shaasan ke chalte ye aadhe parivaar pehle hi gaayab ho gaye hote.
Dharam Singh : Hmm! par ab harr baar hum iska gungaan toh nahi kar sakte na? Tum jald se jald waha apna kaam khatam kar lo.
Ladki : Theek hai!
Dharam Singh : Warna koi na koi aake rai ka pahaad bana daalega iska.
Ladki : Sirf zameen hi toh khodi hai thodi sii, kaun sa koi khoon kar rahe hai kisi ka.
Dharam Singh : Zameen khodi hai par bina anumati ke.
Ladki : Arre par-!?
Dharam : Mmmm!!! Bas! Ab iss baare me aur charcha nahi.
Ladki : Hmph! Dekh lena! Jab kuch bada mere haath lagega na tab aap kahoge ki 'jug jug jiyo meri beti. Jug jug jiyo!'
Dharam Singh (smiles) : Bitiya rani ye tum apne pichle 7 sanshodhano me bhi keh chuki ho. Par phooti kaudi haath nahi lagi hai.
Ladki (blushes) : W-Woh! Tab mein seekh rahi thi pita jii! Aur wese bhi, shuruaat toh apni hi zameen, yaani ki apne hi gaav se karni chahiye na? Baad me desh videsh ghoomungi mein. Dekhna aap.
Dharam Singh : Dekhte hai bhai! Dekhte hai. Filhaal toh aisa lag raha hai mein kahi galat jagah kharcha toh nahi kar raha?
Ladki : Pitaaaaa jiiiiii!!! Kya aap bhi!!! Kya aapko kabhi ye jaan'ne ki iccha nahi hoti, ki ye kila wagarah, ye mandir masjid, ye puraani imaarato ke avshesh, kesi bani hongi? Unki deewaaro ne apne kaal me kya kya nahi dekha hoga? Keval bol nahi sakti hai ye. Par na jaane kya kya inhone tab dekha hoga. Hai na? Hai na? Kya aapko jaan'ne ka mann nahi karta? Ki ye sab kese bane honge? Kaarigiri inki kese hui hogi? Log tab kese jeete honge? Haan? Kahiye! Kahiye!
Dharam Singh : Hmm? Filhaal jo mein sabse zyaada jaan'ne ke liye icchuk hu woh ye hai ki pichle maah me aa jaane waala paisa, abhi tak Tilakram vyapaari ke yaha se aaya nahi hai. Hmm! Yaad dilaana hoga usse.
Ladki (chillaate hue) : Pitaaaaa jiiii!!! Aap bhi na!!
Dharam Singh : Hahahahahaha!
Aur inki hassi mazaak ki charcha jab khatam hui toh kuch derr baad woh ladki firse boli,
Ladki : Prabha Kaaki? Suman kaha hai?
Prabha (smiles) : Ghar par hai choti maalkin. Khaana bana rahi hogi apna aur apni iss maa ka.
Ladki : Kya aap bhi! Abhi woh choti hai. Sirf 14 ki hi hai. Usse inn sab kaamo me kyu lagaayi ho. Mere saath bhej diya karo. Kuch seekh liya karegi.
Prabha (smiles) : Ab kisi na kisi ko toh banana hi padega na choti maalkin.
Abhi ye sab baat kar hi rahe the ki itne me baahar se ek cheh-chahaati awaaz sunaayi padi.
Ek aur sundar aur pyaari sii ladki haveli ke andar bhaagte hue aayi,
"Bhhhaaaavvvnnnnaaaaa!!!!"
Woh bhaagte hue aayi aur apne saamne khadi ladki ko pakad gol gol ghoom firki lene lagi.
Aur ye ladki koi aur nahi, Bhavna ki ekmaatr saheli, Purvi thi.
Aur woh ladki jo Dharam Singh ki beti thi woh koi aur nahi Bhavna hi thi.
Bhavna : Arre!!? Arre chorr toh sahi. Aa gayi tum?
Purvi : Haan! Woh kaksha ka chorra aaj fir muh lada raha tha. Collar pakad ke jo do mene raseede hai na? Poore sehpaathi dekhte reh gaye. Hehehehe!!
Tabhi uske peeche se ek aur vyakti shirt pant pehne haveli me pravesh kiya,
"Ye kya tareeqa hai Purvi? Mene kaha hai na tumse ki Bhavna tumse 6 saal badi hai. Usse didi kehke bulaaya karo. Kya yahi sanskaar diye hai mene tumhe?"
Bhavna (smiles) : Mahesh chacha rehne dijiye! Iski toh aadat hai ab. Aise nahi jayegi.
Mahesh (sighs) : Tumne hi bigaad diya hai beta isse. Dheel de rakhi hai.
Bhavna (smiles) : Hum dono ki maa nahi hai. Toh aapas me judaav toh rahega hi na kaaka?
Mahesh : Ye...! *sighs* Sahi kaha beta!
Purvi : Hum dono ek dusre ki pakki saheli hai. Aur haan, mein Bhavna ko hamesha bhavna keh ke hi bulaungi. Koi maayi ka laal mujhe zabardasti didi nahi kehlwa sakta bhavna ke liye. Hmph!!!
Apni beti ki baato ko sunn, Mahesh bas muskura diya.
Dharam Singh : Mauhar lag gayi Mahesh?
Mahesh : Hmm? Jii bade saab! Ye dekhiye!
Aur woh aage badh kuch zaroori kaagzaat
Dharam Singh ko dikhaane laga.
Par abhi bhi jese yaha log kam the jo baahar se ek pandit jii bhi aa gaye. Jinhe befaaltu hassne ki ek beemaari thi.
Pandit jii : Mene kaha ram ram sa Bade saab!!! Hahahahahaha!
Dharam Singh : Arre aaiye aaiye! Pandit jii! Viraajiye!
Pandit jii : Hahahaha! Haan zaroor zaroor!
Dharam Singh : Bhavna ki kundli toh dekh hi lii hogi aapne fir. Jaydev ke haatho bhijwaayi thi mene.
Pandit jii : Arre ussi silsile me toh aaye hai bade saab! Hahahahahaha! Aur bhavishyavani bhi shuru kar dii hai mene.
Dharam Singh : Pehle Bhavna ke baare me toh bataiye kuch.
Pandit jii : Bhai kundli toh bohut badhiya hai Bade saab. Thodi dikkatein aa sakti hai aane waale varsho me. Sambhal kar rehna hoga. Lekin baad ka kaal accha maalum padta hai.
Dharam Singh : Hmm!
Aur aaj jese sabhi ne ek hi samay par ek saath milne ka tay kar rakha tha. Haveli ke ek hisse ka bada sa darwaaza khula aur andar se do vyakti baahar nikle.
Ek naujavaan aur ek aurat.
Bhavna ne jese hi uss naujavaan ko dekha toh muh fula lii aur khuspusaate hue apne aap me boli, "Ho gayi inki suprabhaat! Aurat ke saath!"
Bhale hi uss naujavaan ne Bhavna ki poori baatein na suni. Par usse andaaza zaroor lag gaya tha ki uski ye choti behan zaroor usse gaaliya hi bak rahi thi.
Woh muskura ke saamne bistar par baitha aur rakhi hui chai ko utha ke usse peene laga.
Dharam Singh : Aa gaye tum?
Bhavna ne dekha ki uske bade bhai ke sang baahar aayi woh aurat kese apne kapde theek karte hue baahar jaa rahi thi.
Aur ye dekh uska poora mood bekaar ho gaya.
Ladka : Jii pita jii!
Dharam Singh : Dekho pandit jii aaye hue hai. Bhavna ki kundli dikhaayi hai mene inhe. Tumhari bachi hai. Zara laa ke dikha do pandit jii ko. Aur pandit jii! Ye hai mera eklauta beta! Vijay! Zara iska bhi shaadi ka yog dekh ke bata dijiye!
Pandit ji : Arre laiye! Abhi bata deta hu haha! Wese toh jis varsh shani aur guru dono saptam bhaav ya lagn ko dekhte ho, tab hi vivaah ke yog bante hai. Par kundli laa dijiye. Usme sab samajh aa jayega. Aur bhavna bitiya ka toh bata hi raha hu Hahaha! Bitiya ki shaadi issi saal ho sakti hai. Aur agar nahi hui toh agle saal toh pakka hi hogi.
Dharam Singh : Accha! Pandit jii! Aap woh kuch bhavishyavani ka bhi bata rahe the?
Pandit jii : Arre haan! Mein kya kehta hu bade saahab. Meri bhavishyavani galat nahi ho sakti. Haha!
Bhavna : Aur sahi bhi nahi ho sakti.
Pandit jii : *cough* *cough* B-Beta zara paani laana toh!
Bhavna : Prabha kaaki!
Prabha : Jii! Choti maalkin! Abhi laati hu.
Dharam Singh : Toh pandit jii! Aap bataate kyu nahi ki Bhavna ki shaadi kis se hoegi?
Bhavna : Kya aap bhi pita ji?? Bhavishyavani karna pandit jii ka kaam nahi hai. Aap khamakha unko-
Pandit jii : Arre beta mene ye bhi shuru kar diya hai taaza taaza. Abhi bata deta hu. Hahaha!
Bhavna toh jese jaanti thi ki ye waale pandit jii se bhavishyavani nahi aati thi. Harr koi aise thodi bhavishya dekh sakta tha bhala.
Pandit jii : Bade saahab! Bhavna bitiya ki shaadi kis se hogi ye toh nahi bata sakta. Haan lekin 'ब' (ba) shabd se naam shuru hone waale vyakti se hi bitiya ki shaadi hoegi.
Bhavna : Mein nahi maanti! Hmph! Chal Purvi!!!
Aur Purvi ka haath thaame Bhavna waha se rafu chakkar ho gayi.
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Par kehte hai na, jab kisi jagah par ek samay par kuch ghatit ho raha hota hai toh ussi samay par kisi aur jagah kuch aur chal raha hota hai.
Aisa hi kuch haal tha Bijaipur ke bagal se lage hue gaav ka. Harr sikke ke do pehlu hote hai. Agar Dharam Singh ki haveli jaani jaati thi apne nek kaamo, imaandaari, gaurav aur gaav waalo ki raksha ke liye.
Toh wahi iss gaav ki badi haveli jaani jaati thi apni beimaani, namak-harami aur apne bhrashtachaar ke liye.
Par vidambna dekhiye. Dono hi parivaar panpe, aur dono hi parivaar ka aadar satkaar hota tha.
Farq itna tha, ki ek ke liye tareef dil se nikalti thi aur dusre ke liye darr se.
Inn haveliyo ke dono hi mukhiya ke haatho me chaaku thi. Antar sirf itna tha ki,
Dharam Singh ki peedhi ek doctor ke bhaati chaaku ko chalaate hue apne logo ka ilaaj kar rahi thi. Toh wahi dusri haveli ki peedhi ek daaku ke samaan chaaku chalaate hue apne logo ko thikaane par laga rahi thi.
Aur iss badi haveli ke vartmaan ke mukhiya the ~ Harikiran Singh!!!
Ghumaavdaar muuche, sarr par rajasthani pagdi aur rajasthani bol chaal.
Haveli ke andar ke ek kamre se ek naujavaan nikla. Ye Harikiran ka suputr hi tha ~ Bhanu Prataap Singh!!!
Apne bete ko baahar jaate dekh woh usse tok diye,
Harikiran Singh : Kathe jaa rhya ho? (Kaha jaa rahe ho?)
Bhanu pratap : Mitra mandal ke saath yahi gaav ka chakkar maarne. Abhi aa jaunga.
Itna bol woh nikal gaya ghar se.
Mitro ki toli ko ikhatta kar woh sabhi gaav ki chhoriyo ko ghoorte, unhe alag alag naamo se pukaarte. Ye uss zamaane ki flirting hua karti thi.
Ladka 1 : Arre bhai! Chhorri ho toh saala bagal ke gaav ki Bhavna jesi!! Kya mast roop, mast chaal, mast adaa aur kya mast banawat hai.
Ladka 2 : Oye! Woh waha ki badi haveli ki iklauti beti hai. Agar bade saab ko pata chala na toh tere ko udaa denge.
Ladka 3 : Bade saab ke pehle toh hamara Bhanu hi uda dega isse. Hahahaha!
Ladka 2 : hahaha! Haan bhai! Ye toh puri duniya jaanti hai ki Bijaipur ki haveli aur hamare yaha ki badi haveli ke beech kitni badi takraar hai.
Ladki 1 : Sahi kaha! Par bhanu bhai bhi meri baat se sehmat honge. Kyu hai na? Kya Bhavna jesi chhorri ki baat alag nahi bhai?
Bhanu Pratap : Hmm! Baat alag toh hai. Usse bistar par litaane me ek alag maza aayega.
Ladke : Hahahahahaha!!!
Ladka 1 : Toh fir hum rishta pakka samjhe kya bhai?? Kab aana hai byaah me? Hahahaha!
Ladka 2 : Arre woh sab chorro!! Mene suna hai woh Bhavna gaav ke baahar khaali ilaako me khudaayi karwa rahi hai. Uski woh...! Kya kehte hai usse...! Re.. research ke liye.
Ladka 3 : Research? Ab ye kis bala ka naam hai?
Bhanu Prataap : Research maane sanshodhan! Jaach padtaal!
Ladka 1 : Bhanu bhaiya ko sab gyaan hai! Hahaha!
Bhanu Prataap (garv se collar chadhaate hue) : Hmm!!!
Ladka 3 : Toh usme kya?
Bhanu Prataap : Agar aisa hai! Toh hum kal hi Bijaipur me uss se waha mil ke aayenge.
Ladke : Hahahaha! Kya khoob soch rahe ho bhai. Bilkul! Bilkul!
Aur wo sabhi waha se fir ravaana ho gaye.
Par ye akele nahi the. Koi aur bhi tha jo iss waqt Mumbai ke station se ravaana ho raha tha.
"Sab rakh liya na theek se Birjesh??"
Manorath khade hue apne bete se puche. Unke saamne khada naujavaan, Brijesh unka bada ladka unke charan sparsh kiya aur bola,
Brijesh : Jii papa jii!
Uske saath hi uska chota bhai uska samaan rakhwa raha tha.
Karunesh : Bhaiya ho gaya hai sab! Aao baith jao!
Brijesh : Arre mein chala jaunga! Aap log nikal jaiye ab!
Tabhi ek aurat dheere dheere chal uske paas aayi,
"Sambhal ke jaana theek? Theek beta?"
Brijesh : Maa! Mene tumko kaha hai na ki itni chinta mat kiya karo! Aur khamakha aap sab yaha aaye. Mein akele aa sakta tha.
Manorath : Brinda!!! Baith jao! Dekho saans foolne lagi hai tumhari.
Brinda : Kya karu ab...! Dama ki beemaari jo hai mujhe. Bhaag nahi sakti iss se mein.
Karunesh : Maa tum idhar kinaare aa jao!
Brinda : H-Haan!
Train ki seeti baji toh Manorath Karunesh aur apni patni Brinda ko leke train se baahar aa gaye.
Aur dekhte hi dekhte, train chal dii!! Brijesh pehli baar akele aise itni door jaa raha tha. Wese toh woh kayi baar safar kar chuka tha. Par ye safar uske liye kuch anokha sa tha. Usse andar se ye mehsoos ho raha tha.
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Jab agla din hua toh idhar Bijaipur me Bhavna ki subah hi umang ke saath hui. Aaj usse andar se kuch anubhooti ho rahi thi. Jese aaj jo usse chaahiye tha woh milne waala tha. Aaj behad sakaraatmak mehsoos kar rahi thi woh.
Fatafat apna samaan baandhe, kuch pustake apne jhole me rakhte hue woh Jaydev ke saath subah subah hi gaav ke uss khudaayi waale hisse me pohuch gayi.
Jaydev (smiles) : Mein toh kehta hu aap bekaar me mehnat kar rahi ho choti maalkin!
Bhavna : Woh kaise bhala?
Jaydev : Iske pehle aapke saath mein 7 baar aur jagah khudaayi karwa chuka hu. Par hamaare hath kuch bhi nahi laga hai.
Bhavna : Arre toh! Toh mehnat lagti hai! Dekhna! Iss baar zaroor kuch na kuch milega.
Jaydev : Pichli 7 baar se dekh raha hu choti maalkin!!
Bhavna : Ufffff ooo!! Aap sawaal jawaab bohut karte hai kaaka! Aur Shyaam kya kar raha hai?
Jaydev (smiles) : Shyaam ghar pe hai. Pareeksha ki taiyaari kar raha hai.
Bhavna : Oooo!!! Kherr! Aaiye! Arre waah! Aapke log toh itni jaldi pohuch gaye sawere! Haha! Sab acche rang me hai aaj haan!?
Jaydev ne order dete hue jab aadmiyo ko aur gehra khodne kaha toh khudaayi firse jaari ho gayi.
Pehle hi woh log itna gehra alag alag jagao par khod chuke the. Par mila kuch nahi tha.
Woh aadmi toh apni umeed pehle hi chorr ke aaye the. Lekin aaj jese unki kismat rang laane waali thi.
Khudaayi ke dauran achanak hi aisa ek pal aaya jab aadmiyo me chillaa ke Bhavna aur Jaydev ko bulaaya.
Jese hi Bhavna waha pohuchi usne fauran hi unhe auzaar chaalaane se rok diya.
Bhavna : Rukooo! Rukooo! Auzaar mat chalaana! Mujhe dekhne do!
Apne jhole me se kuch keemti chote chote auzaar nikaal Bhavna iss avshesh ke paas pohuchi. Ek akaarheen patthar the ye. Jiske baahar se kuch lohe ki dorri sii latak rahi thi.
Dheere dheere thok peet ke Bhavna ne uss patthar ki halki halki parat hataana shuru kii!
Usse ye karne me na jaane kitna waqt beet gaya. Par jese hi parat hati, aur woh chhipi hui cheeez uske saamne aayi.
Uski aankhein hairat aur khushi ke maare felti chali gayi.
Woh zorr se cheenkhi,
"Kaaaaaakaaaaaaa!!!!" Jaydev bhaagte hue uske sameep aaya. Aur aate hi waha jamm sa gaya. Uska bhi haal wahi tha jo abhi Bhavna ka ho rakah tha.
Bhavna ke kaanpte hue haatho ne uss cheez ko badi hi savdhaani se uthaaya. Uski aankho me ek chamak thi.
Aur haatho me...!
Neel mani!!!!!
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"Fir kya hua? Fir kya hua????"
Kavya ki chanchal awaaz ne unn sabhi ko hosh me laaya. Bhavna ki baat sunte sunte woh kab iss ateet me kho gaye the, unhe iss baat ka pata hi na chala.
Woh Suman ki goad par sarr rakh ke laiti hui thi. Bhavna abhi bhi ussi khaat par maujood thi.
Toh wahi Veer deewaar se tik ke zameen par baitha hua tha. Aur uske kandhe par sarr rakh ke Tejal sab kuch sunn rahi thi.
Arohi aur Shweta bhi ek kone me baithe hue the. Aur Purvi Abhilasha kaaki ke saath chai ko chhaan rahi thi jo bann ke taiyaar thi.
Kavya : Bataiye na! Fir kya huaaa????
Bhavna Kavya ki utsukta dekh bas neeche dekh muskuraayi.
Veer ke maathe par ye dekh kuch lakeere bann gayi. Aisa laga jese uski maa niraasha me muskuraayi ho. Kuch chhipa the jese uss muskaan ke peeche.
Aur antatah Bhavna ke muh se kuch derr baad nikla,
"Fir kya hua? Fir...! Uss traasdi ki shuruaat hui beta!"
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