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Badhiya hu bhai!Hy Werewolf bro kaise ho
Koi baat nahi.Kuch din busy hone ke karan aani ska mai
Wahi raaz toh crimson arc me khulega bhai. Bohot bada raaz hai. Jab saamne aaega toh hil jaoge.Or update to jabardast rha hai bhai mja aagya
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Bs ek baat aaj mere mind me aay hai jb tumne SLOGAN ka end dikhaya tha update us time last movement me EK LADKI ka jikr kia tha jo door se ye sb dekh rhe thi wo kn thi or uska abi tk tumne jikr kia ni hai kisi update me agar mai glt ni ho to or agar kia hai to mujhe jroor btana kn sa update me hai wo
Dhanyavaad! Jii! Mujhe research kar ke sab likhna hota hai. Fun fact bhi sunn lo ekUpdate bhot he mast rha but ek conversation mujhe acha lga jisme BHAVNA or VEER ka jb raste me Jaipur ki investigation ki pocha intresting tha wo VERY WELL BRO
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Bilkul nahi! Kya ju ko Bhavna chutiya maalum padti hai?Baki ke raaj to aage open hoge lekin mujhe hasii aarhe ek bat pe ki BHAVNA ne last me bat batane jaa rhe hai (MAIN REASONS)
Ky bs yhe bat batane ke lye itna door aay hai![]()
Aa sakta hai. Mein raat 8-9 baje tak aur clear kar dunga ki aa raha hai ya nahi. 50-50 chances hai.Aaj Update ki koi Sambhavna hai ?
फाइनली , भावना के गांव आ गए सब लोग...!!
क्या हुआ होगा भावना के साथ जो उसका कोई भी नहीं बचा इस गांव में,
इसका कनेक्शन वीर के परिवार से भी हो सकता है
सब कुछ बड़िया चल रहा है,
अब बस शुरुआत देखना है पास्ट की, आखिर क्या राज छुपे हैं...!!!
Aur ab Shweta ko Purvi ki hamdardi bhi mil gayi hai. Ek hum-saathi. Bhavna ke liye ab kathin hone waala hai!?तेजल और स्वेता के आपसी मतभेद के बाद पता लगा,
स्वेता और वीर की मौसी पूर्वी ने अपने अपने बच्चे को खोया है,
पूर्वी की सहानुभूति भी अब स्वेता के साथ है,
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अगले भाग की प्रतीक्षा...!!!
Sirf Bhavna ki hi nahi. Uss se hi Tejal aur Purvi, Suman ki bhi kahaniya judi hai. Toh ek prakaar se aapko sab kuch pata chal raha hai. Shukriya bhaaya! Aise hi saath bane rahiyega.Werewolf तो आज का अध्याय की महफिलें तो श्वेता ने लूट ली..दिल खोल कर रख दिया है
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आग लगा दी है
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.. पूर्वी भी सन्तान के गम की मारी है...
तेज की तेजी की चुभन श्वेता सहन नहीं कर पायी तो सारा रुका हुआ उसका सच बाहर आ ही गया..
पूरी तरह से भावनात्मक अंक है ये..
भावना भी अपना झोला खोल जिंदगी का जादू सुनाने के लिए तैयार है..
अब पता चलेगा वीर की माँ की कहानी का..![]()
Dhanyavaad!Shandar StoryLazawab
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Superb
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Please keep it up Bro![]()
Waiting for next update
Haath choomne ki anumati sirf laundiyo ko hai.I want to kiss the hands of writer, who are source of such nice and mind blowing content....
Bilkul! Sab soch vichaar kar ke likha jaata hai. Trust me! Crimson arc itna khatarnaak hoega na ki maza hi aa jaega. Kaafi mehnat hoegi uss par. Kuch cheeze pehle se prepare kar ke rakhi hui hai. Saath bane rahiyega!*Lajawab update sir ji ab achha likhane ke liye time tu banta h...
bro best of luck next mega update ke liye*.....
Iska uttar naye update me pata lag hi gaya hoga. Aur vistaar me aane waale updates samjha denge.Bahut hi sandaar Update tha Werewolf bhai maja hi aa gaya. Bhawna ne kehne ko to kah diya ki ab is duniya me uska aur koi nahi hai lakin ye kisi karan se kaha aisa hi lagta hai. Warna wo u sbse chiip kar nahi rah rahi hoti. Aur wo yaha mostly jagah aayi hai to kya koi use family se related Pehchanta nahi tha kya ? Aakhir abhi tak ke build up ke hisab se to wo jani mani hasti hi lag rahi hai. Khair iska ans to aage hi milega. Ya ye ho skta hai ki sub jante hue bhi kuch na kahte ho quki unhe ab bhawna se koi matlab hi na ho ? Dekhte hai asli baat aakhir kya hai ?
Pata hai ek khaas baat kya hai Shweta ki? Suraj13796 Ye point padhiyega!Veer aur tej ki bonding bahut tej speed se aage badh rahi hai. Aur ye kya diwali wale din to veer ka b'day hai dekhte hai kya aur kon kon se bade dhamake hote hai veer ke sath us din ? Khair sweta ne bhi apni baat aakhir kah di jise sun kar kafi had tak sbke dimak me saanti chaa gayi hogi. Aakhir usne sahi bhi to kaha. Aur veer janta hai ki ab wo sudhar gayi hai tabhi wo use support karne laga hai.
Ek se do update me sab saamne aa jayega! Shayad ek me hi poora dikha diya jaaye. Bane rahiyega bhai! Dhanyavaad!Aur sbse main baat veer nd tej ko ab pata chalne wala hai ki aakhir kya karan tha in sub ka ? Next update me bahut se sawalo ke jawab milenge. Ab to besabri se intezar hai us Upadte ka bas jaldi se aa jaye.
Thanks man! Will try to keep the updates on schedule. Wese last week se saare updates on schedule hi chal rahe hai.O god ! wt a story telling man...now I just can't wait to know about bhavna's side of truth.. Bro u just take ur time but plzzz keep next update long than this.. In proper detail.. although ur every updates are mega update but I think we waited much for this update.. Oh wtfwhy am I bluffing all this shit
although we knw u always give justice to every update...hey I'm going insane n I can't wait wait anymore... Big love
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Padhte raho beyDekho bro bhawna ko aise tapka k tum readers k gand mar doge yar ye question mark mat lagya kro Bhai abhi k update se hi mujhe lag raha tha ki bhawna ka sach me antim din aa jayega uska atit use le dubega isliye sayad usne USS Ghar me gauri ka pati Jo bhi nam tha uska bola tha apne veer or tez ka dhayan rakhne k liye
Bro hum readers ki vinti hai ki aisa na kro bro
Bahut judav hai bro unse![]()
Aapko review chahiye na to suno
Aaj ke liye itna hi guys wait for the next update.
Kaisa laga
Bas Aisa hi mujhe bhi feel hua.
Lol
Awesome. Shweta getting more confident which is good.
Majestic Rajasthan is amazing as always.
Dushman saamne aa gaya hai.finally bhavna ke gaon pahoch gaye
bhawna ke family me koi hai nahi to servant kaki ke ghar rukk gaye..
lagta hai kuch bada hua tha idhar bhavna ki jann ko khatra to nahi hai kahi?.. Koi purana dushman ho bhavna ki family ko barbad karne wala?
Bilkul!shweta or tej ke bich tutu meme jyada ho gaya or shweta emotional or gussa dono hoke tej ko chuna diya.. vaisa shweta ki galti utni jyada dhikti nahi hai .. Phir bhi usne jo galti ki hai uski saza to woh bhog hi rahi hai.
Dhanyavaad bhai! Keep supporting!chalo dekhte hai bhavna kya kya raaz kholti hai past ke..
Superb Update Bhai.
OHHH!! A Wild guess huh!? Let's see! Thanks!The build-up for the flashbacks have been great. The way sweta finally fought back was little overwhelming, i guess manorath will have a shady character in the past. Lets see. Great update![]()
Ju bhi Sanju bhaaya ki team member?Shewta b koi buri aurot nahi hai wo to un logo ke jhase Mai aa gya or veer ko bura samjha uske Jeevan me v bahut kuch bura Hua hai....
Tez ko samjhna padega Shewta ke halat ka....
Ab flashback me raj khulega or veer ko v bahut kuch Jan ne ko milega....... .......
Veer to situation ko tackle kar lega par baakiyo ka kya?bhai bada mast likhte ho yar ap khaskar jab veer ko phasa dete ho saree ladies k bich m padke bada maza aata hai
ab dekhna hai k bhavana kya reason batati hai sabko aur veer ka kya reaction hota hai uske baad .
but ek bat samaj nahi aai bhavana ne shyam se jate jate aise kyu bat ki jaise wo fir kabhi mil nahi payegi i hope k kuh bura n ho aage chal k uske sath , i just hope k aisa kuh n ho aur veer sare situation ko acche se tackle karle.
eagerly waiting for next update bhai.
Spoiler dene ki badi talab ho rahi hai yahaJis hisabse stories chal rahi abi tak main villains ke bareme abi tak kuch pata nahi chala muje lagata he villains jo hoga ho jarur bavana ke past se juda hoga par lekhak behatar jante he jo bhi hoga uske bare me kohi soch nahi Sakta...
Aisa kya?Main villain wo ladki hogi jo tabhi samne aayegi jab crimson arc complete hone ko hoga...sabse badi baat suru kar ab hogi jab 3 saheli milegi...kaera,sonali aur ava
Gussa hai warna ab tak baaho me hota.Badhiy update tha..
Lekin abhi kuch updates se mai ek cheej notice kr rha hu ke Veer abhi kuch jyada hi soft hogya hai....
Jaisa wo apne maa se kuch updates pehle gussa tha mujhe laga tha jyada baat nahi hoga dono ke bich specially mujhe laga tha Veer kabhi khud se conversation start nai krega bhawna se. Lekin yaha story me aisa lag hi nai rha jaise Veer apne maa se gussa hai.
Mai kuch miss kr rha hu kya ??
Aur kiska hoga?Anyways story pe aate hai...
Pehle toh ye batao ye kiska idea tha Tejal aur Shweta ko ek hi gadi me baithane ka lol.
Bilkul! Aur ab wo attacking gear laga chuki hai. Uske paas bhi point out karne ke liye kaafi kuch hai.Jab aag aur barood ko ek hi box me daloge toh visphot toh hona hi tha. Last time toh Shweta ko Tejal ne ambush kr diya tha magar lagta hai Shweta bhi jawabi hamle le liye khud ko taiyar kr chuki hai. Ab wo apna mann bana chuki hai ke agar usko Veer ke liye jisse bhi ladna pade wo piche nahi hategi. Dekha jaye toh uske paas aur koi rasta bhi nahi hai. Waise wo apne iss ladai me thodi bahut kamiyab bhi ho rhi hai...
Sahi kaha. Ab dekho, Shweta ke saath Purvi ki sahanubhuti bhi hai. Matlab dusri team se bhi ek member jud gaya hai uski team me. Toh kya karegi ab Bhavna? Sach bata ke Veer ko apni orr aane ka wait ya Shweta ke prati aur zorr shor se hamla bolegi?Aur lagta hai Tejal ne shweta ke sabra ka ghada bhar diya isliye bechari ke emotion chhalak pade aur sabko baha ke le gye. Aur sath hi Purvi aur Shweta ke character ka ek khas raaz samne aaya jo lagta hai dono ko ek dusre ke judne me bahut madad krega. Chuki Purvi, Shweta ka dard samajh sakti hai toh aage lagta hai wo Shweta ki madad hi kregi iss hisab se Purvi jo ki Bhawna ki saheli hone le sath sath behen bhi hai uska support ab kahi na kahi Shweta ke pass hai jo aage uske bahut kam aane wala hai...
Bada majedar turn of event huva hai..
Sabhi ki life me changes hue hai uss ghatnakram se. Kisi ke me zyada toh kisi ke me kam. Par badlaav hue zaroor hai.Last 2 update ne kahani ko bahut pechida kar diya hai.. bahut sare cheej ab ek sath ho rhe hai jaise Manorath aur Brijesh jo jaipur aane ke liye nikal pade hai aur Shayad Ragini bhi unke piche piche aa rhi hogi. Aur jaisa writer ne Bhawna ke raaz ka buildup kiya hai lagta hai isse bahuto ki zindagi judi hui hai.
Bas padhte jaiye. Prayaas karunga agle bhaag me poora hi dikha du. Bas ek part reh jayega jo fir ek do updates ke baad aayega. Aur fir arc ki samaapti. Dhanyavaad bohut bohut. Aise hi jude rahiyega bhai!Lekin jaisa Bhawna ne bola ki ab uske mane ke Veer ke pariwar me ab koi nahi bacha toh aise me dekhna hoga iss raaz ka kya matlab nikalta hai... Ye baad mujhe kuch ajeeb lagi. Ab iss raaz ke samne aane ka mujhe besabri se intejar hai aakhir dekhe toh bc aisa kya hogya tha ke pura pariwar nipat gya.
Waiting for next update.